Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- JOINED. (Fay Slimm.)
And Jeanne and I have remained - fine work Fay.
February 13th, 2019 04:19 - The Moon of Love - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
As Neville says - a real gem.
February 13th, 2019 02:37 - Self Harm (Neville)
For those who have never experienced it either personally or within the...
February 12th, 2019 07:08 - Untitled (Suresh)
I do like this poignant little piece.
February 12th, 2019 03:25 - Aging Crime. (Goldfinch60)
A great write and thanks for the BH clip - Unintentionally I looked much...
February 12th, 2019 03:24 - More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\' (Dusk arising)
Just brill - keep them coming - set me up for the day.
February 12th, 2019 03:15 - New visions (LINNE)
Fully agree with your poem and enjoyed the poem.
February 12th, 2019 00:47 - Disillusioned (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Sad reflective write but so captivating - much enjoyed the read.
February 11th, 2019 13:01 - STATUS QUO ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Super work - I must write - so thanks for the inspiration.
February 11th, 2019 12:59 - Flock #44: feathers (Frank Prem)
Love it Frank - simple but so effective - everyday I am grateful for the...
February 11th, 2019 12:57 - A few \\\\\\\'Mary hads\\\\\\\' (Dusk arising)
Great stuff and good for you - round of applause and a hearty hey ho more...
February 11th, 2019 12:55 - The State of Things... (Orchidee)
I\'ll be there saving up for a new tunic - not sure about the colour...
February 11th, 2019 12:52 - VEILS. (Fay Slimm.)
Great work - deserves another read - I will return.
February 11th, 2019 12:49 - The Sixties, was I There? (Goldfinch60)
What makes it worse for me is I was there in the late 50s as well - no...
February 11th, 2019 12:46 - Last Words (Neville)
Some great lines Neville.
February 10th, 2019 09:22 - scars (Dusk arising)
lovely rounded construct and we carry our \'scars\' which we keep hidden -...
February 10th, 2019 06:21 - THE SOUND OF SILENCE ~ BRIAN ~ A DODECET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Certainly brings silence but here in middle England we haven\'t seen a...
February 10th, 2019 04:17 - Perfection in person (IsraaD)
You\'ve asked for comments but I cant think of any to offer other than to...
February 10th, 2019 02:46 - My Granddaughter. (Goldfinch60)
So pleased for you - our grandchildren bring us such pleasure. I have only...
February 10th, 2019 02:40 - Mary, Queen of Scots (FineB)
Yeah - a real saga - have you seen the film? And a fine write too.
February 10th, 2019 02:37 - Bethune Re-visited (Neville)
Interesting about Bethune and a good write to boot.
February 9th, 2019 13:19 - Delightful Dwelling (Orchidee)
Fine write - does Miss Berles live in a delightful dwelling?
February 9th, 2019 13:14 - Today Not Tomorrow. (Goldfinch60)
Each tomorrow is replaced by a new today. (Which I\'ll add to my latest...
February 9th, 2019 02:43 - SEASONAL NUMBERS ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A DECET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thanks for the lesson and the tree could have come from one of my painting...
February 9th, 2019 00:27 - Our Best (Lorna)
We can only do our best - well my children turned out okay but, sadly, not...
February 8th, 2019 10:44 - Love and Warm Toast (Neville)
I just love this - the progression so elegantly yet so simply expressed -...
February 8th, 2019 04:35 - Darkness into Light. (Goldfinch60)
So pleased to hear you are on the road to recovery and a great uplifting...
February 8th, 2019 04:32 - I Wait for You (Mottakeenur Rehman)
This is a superb poem. I would suggest that poems are written to their...
February 7th, 2019 14:26 - RECALL. (Fay Slimm.)
Great work Fay.
February 7th, 2019 14:06 - Vineyard Valuings - Mark\'s Gospel (15) (Orchidee)
Fine scribblings Orchi.
February 7th, 2019 14:04 - End (Sylviasearcher)
Love 575s - I never call them Haikus or senryus etc as the purists can be...
February 7th, 2019 03:10 - The Lady of Shallott Rises. (Goldfinch60)
A great subject for a poem (puzzles) and it has resulted in a ...
February 7th, 2019 02:53 - POEM WITHOUT WORDS ~ BRIAN ~ G U I T A R Acrostet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great acrostic and a superb instrument. Love the clip.
February 7th, 2019 02:50 - Your Hand (Rrodriguez)
Ah sad - so emotive - great work R.
February 6th, 2019 18:15 - UNLUCKY IN LOVE ? : ANGELA : RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great poem and great to hear good old PC again - I recall his TV shows -...
February 6th, 2019 09:19 - The Transom Window (Lorna)
Paints a great picture Hope the window\'s open.
February 6th, 2019 09:17 - RESILIENCE. (Fay Slimm.)
February 6th, 2019 04:39 - RESILIENCE. (Fay Slimm.)
You always manage to transport the reader - now where am I? lol 😜
February 6th, 2019 04:39 - Once Upon a Tablecloth (Neville)
Sounds idyllic but what about the wine?
February 6th, 2019 04:38 - Promise In Prayers - Mark\'s Gospel (14) (Orchidee)
Great work O - looks like Sylla in the clip.
February 6th, 2019 04:35 - Lake Walking. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ve got me shivering - nice one Andy.
February 6th, 2019 02:44 - Pebble (Joanna Garrido)
Great read - it transported me to the shore.
February 6th, 2019 02:43 - a year full of reasons (Psychofemale)
Well expressed.
February 6th, 2019 02:41 - Sickness (Sylviasearcher)
Brill Sylvia
February 5th, 2019 15:36 - WHERE ARE THE CLOWNS ? BRIAN ~ A RHYMING 4 4 4 2 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Brings back memories of a bygone era - thanks for the reminder.
February 5th, 2019 15:35 - HEARABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
Bound over by your use of the language dear Fay.
February 5th, 2019 15:29 - Words (Lorna)
You\'ve used the language to its best to express this gem of a write. Good...
February 5th, 2019 11:41 - Jun Kenshi (Neville)
Hey mate this aint no little scribble - lovely piece.
February 5th, 2019 11:39 - Bartimaeus\' Blessings - Mark\'s Gospel (13) (Orchidee)
Super stuff O
February 5th, 2019 11:36 - How Can It Be? (Goldfinch60)
I know you wrote this feeling poem from your own heart but it could also...
February 5th, 2019 11:35 - The End (Lorna)
Great to see you posting - missed your work and you are back with a great...
February 4th, 2019 10:25 - LOVE ME : LOVE MY CAT ! ANGELA : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write but as you probably know I have a thing about irresponsible...
February 4th, 2019 07:04 - POLITICAL CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards)
By the way I\'ve got about another 4 of the penguin designs to go - if...
February 4th, 2019 03:55 - OUTGROWN (Fay Slimm.)
Super write and that painting is something else - do you know who it\'s
February 4th, 2019 03:54 - Riches Restrainings - Mark\'s Gospel (12) (Orchidee)
Great work O
February 4th, 2019 03:53 - New or Old. (Goldfinch60)
Couldn\'t agree more - great little \'un.
How about an old body in new...
February 4th, 2019 03:33 - Virus (Neville)
Love the way your mind works in putting together so many ideas so...
February 4th, 2019 03:31 - S U N D A Y ~ A Day for Peace & Praise ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Special for - been in the studio this morning and have returned indoors...
February 3rd, 2019 06:30 - Ink Blots (Neville)
Ah the good old clinical tests - we do ink blot art at some of our...
February 3rd, 2019 06:29 - Prosperous Praises (Orchidee)
Great write - now how about destitute praises?
February 3rd, 2019 04:26 - Different Pages (Sylviasearcher)
Fresh music to my ears - so true and so well expressed in this super poem.
February 3rd, 2019 04:25 - The Game of Rugby Union. (Goldfinch60)
Super write Andy and what a match - I was transfixed watching it - coupled...
February 3rd, 2019 02:48 - Gold Roses (Joanna Garrido)
Beautifully written - I much enjoyed the read.
February 2nd, 2019 17:11 - CITY LONELINESS ~ ANGELA ~ ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Those of us who have friends and families should be so grateful. Having...
February 2nd, 2019 11:02 - Wanting to be Wanted (Neville)
Think I\'ll stick with my dear wife bless her ---!
February 2nd, 2019 10:56 - No, There Will be no Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60)
Yes it was a really tough one - great write Andy.
February 2nd, 2019 10:54 - I AM COLORED (Heartbreak)
I understand where you are coming from. In my marriage I am the white one...
February 2nd, 2019 08:03 - Itch (Jabberwocky)
I suffer from cold-induced urticaria (you might wish to google it) and I...
February 1st, 2019 16:02 - TONIGHT. (Fay Slimm.)
I can forgive anything when it comes to your work - the words will always...
February 1st, 2019 15:23 - Searching (Sylviasearcher)
In empty spaces
Searching for the great unfound
nothing to declare.
A...
February 1st, 2019 09:03 - WINTER BLUES ~ HAIKU ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Not for me the snow
Urticaria hits me
my body on fire.
Just have to...
February 1st, 2019 08:58 - A seat beneath the apple tree (Caleb.A)
Great first post - look forward to more and your participation with
February 1st, 2019 06:27 - Chet Baker Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Great clip and poem Andy - hope you are okay and enjoying your break.
February 1st, 2019 06:22 - Servant Scenes - Mark\'s Gospel (11) (Orchidee)
Great work Orchi - sorry about the bus.
February 1st, 2019 03:34 - Blink (Neville)
Blinking good Neville.
February 1st, 2019 03:32 - Adoration (Sylviasearcher)
Your writing isn\'t off here Sylvia. An inspired write.
January 31st, 2019 13:03 - Many Things to Many Men (Neville)
A great write which just flows.
January 31st, 2019 13:01 - WISH LIST HOLIDAYS ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
About to enter Laura\'s good books - I would chose Italy - fabulous food,...
January 31st, 2019 12:52 - Cantate Cavalcade (Orchidee)
How many syllables? Does Miss Berles know?
January 31st, 2019 07:45 - Old Age Phonephobia? (Goldfinch60)
Another great observational piece Andy - sadly it\'s becoming more evident...
January 31st, 2019 06:42 - Cry All Them Tears. (Kevin browne)
Every line is power packed - fine write Kevin.
January 30th, 2019 11:56 - Countless Indiscretions (Neville)
And I\'m still making it up but that doesn\'t matter - its beauty lies in...
January 30th, 2019 11:54 - RELEASED. (Fay Slimm.)
Such an elegant plea for these magnificent birds .
January 30th, 2019 09:38 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ SIMON & GARFUNKEL ~ BRIAN ~ An 8 6 Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great take on a lovely song. May have relayed this here before but my son...
January 30th, 2019 03:33 - Gone Away. (Goldfinch60)
This is such a sad sad read - I do hope you have a restful week away from...
January 30th, 2019 03:28 - The Misery of Poor (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Superbly expressed - a great write.
January 29th, 2019 14:12 - LUNACY. (Fay Slimm.)
A sad state of play so eloquently expressed.
January 29th, 2019 13:56 - WELLINGTON (N Z) : ANGELA : A Barrel Acrostic (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great construction and write Angela.
January 29th, 2019 13:53 - Confessed To Be Christ - Mark\'s Gospel (9) (Orchidee)
I\'m always tempted - great write Orchi
January 29th, 2019 13:52 - WITCHDOCTORS! (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
I found it a little difficult to read with the dark background but that...
January 28th, 2019 09:39 - NIGHTNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
A comfort-food read - loved it.
January 28th, 2019 09:34 - Might She by Chance be a Witch (Neville)
A cracking write N
January 28th, 2019 09:32 - Barren Land (Sylviasearcher)
Super poem with great lines - enjoyed.
January 28th, 2019 09:30 - F E B R U A R Y ~ BRIAN ~ A Barrel Acrostic (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Rarely get snow here in MH - hoping it gets filtered by the Derbyshire...
January 28th, 2019 03:21 - Just A Second....! (Orchidee)
Dog in bath - pronounced barth - I\'m a southerner don\'t you know. What...
January 28th, 2019 03:19 - But is it Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
Open mind, closed mind, half empty, half full. The loss is for those that...
January 28th, 2019 03:13 - i`m just a man... (Ron parrish aka wordman)
We may be just men (or women come to that) but as long as we do our best...
January 27th, 2019 14:15 - Mixups #9 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Super gem of a write.
January 27th, 2019 12:18 - Dusk And Dawn (Orchidee)
A good \'un for Sunday Orchi.
January 27th, 2019 07:35 - A Good Man Never Lets You Forget How Much He Loves You (Mottakeenur Rehman)
great to see your pen at work again. A great read.
January 27th, 2019 07:33
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