Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- Jun Kenshi (Neville)
Hey mate this aint no little scribble - lovely piece.
February 5th, 2019 11:39 - Bartimaeus\' Blessings - Mark\'s Gospel (13) (Orchidee)
Super stuff O
February 5th, 2019 11:36 - How Can It Be? (Goldfinch60)
I know you wrote this feeling poem from your own heart but it could also...
February 5th, 2019 11:35 - The End (Lorna)
Great to see you posting - missed your work and you are back with a great...
February 4th, 2019 10:25 - LOVE ME : LOVE MY CAT ! ANGELA : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine write but as you probably know I have a thing about irresponsible...
February 4th, 2019 07:04 - POLITICAL CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards)
By the way I\'ve got about another 4 of the penguin designs to go - if...
February 4th, 2019 03:55 - OUTGROWN (Fay Slimm.)
Super write and that painting is something else - do you know who it\'s
February 4th, 2019 03:54 - Riches Restrainings - Mark\'s Gospel (12) (Orchidee)
Great work O
February 4th, 2019 03:53 - New or Old. (Goldfinch60)
Couldn\'t agree more - great little \'un.
How about an old body in new...
February 4th, 2019 03:33 - Virus (Neville)
Love the way your mind works in putting together so many ideas so...
February 4th, 2019 03:31 - S U N D A Y ~ A Day for Peace & Praise ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Special for - been in the studio this morning and have returned indoors...
February 3rd, 2019 06:30 - Ink Blots (Neville)
Ah the good old clinical tests - we do ink blot art at some of our...
February 3rd, 2019 06:29 - Prosperous Praises (Orchidee)
Great write - now how about destitute praises?
February 3rd, 2019 04:26 - Different Pages (Sylviasearcher)
Fresh music to my ears - so true and so well expressed in this super poem.
February 3rd, 2019 04:25 - The Game of Rugby Union. (Goldfinch60)
Super write Andy and what a match - I was transfixed watching it - coupled...
February 3rd, 2019 02:48 - Gold Roses (Joanna Garrido)
Beautifully written - I much enjoyed the read.
February 2nd, 2019 17:11 - CITY LONELINESS ~ ANGELA ~ ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Those of us who have friends and families should be so grateful. Having...
February 2nd, 2019 11:02 - Wanting to be Wanted (Neville)
Think I\'ll stick with my dear wife bless her ---!
February 2nd, 2019 10:56 - No, There Will be no Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60)
Yes it was a really tough one - great write Andy.
February 2nd, 2019 10:54 - I AM COLORED (Heartbreak)
I understand where you are coming from. In my marriage I am the white one...
February 2nd, 2019 08:03 - Itch (Jabberwocky)
I suffer from cold-induced urticaria (you might wish to google it) and I...
February 1st, 2019 16:02 - TONIGHT. (Fay Slimm.)
I can forgive anything when it comes to your work - the words will always...
February 1st, 2019 15:23 - Searching (Sylviasearcher)
In empty spaces
Searching for the great unfound
nothing to declare.
A...
February 1st, 2019 09:03 - WINTER BLUES ~ HAIKU ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Not for me the snow
Urticaria hits me
my body on fire.
Just have to...
February 1st, 2019 08:58 - A seat beneath the apple tree (Caleb.A)
Great first post - look forward to more and your participation with
February 1st, 2019 06:27 - Chet Baker Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Great clip and poem Andy - hope you are okay and enjoying your break.
February 1st, 2019 06:22 - Servant Scenes - Mark\'s Gospel (11) (Orchidee)
Great work Orchi - sorry about the bus.
February 1st, 2019 03:34 - Blink (Neville)
Blinking good Neville.
February 1st, 2019 03:32 - Adoration (Sylviasearcher)
Your writing isn\'t off here Sylvia. An inspired write.
January 31st, 2019 13:03 - Many Things to Many Men (Neville)
A great write which just flows.
January 31st, 2019 13:01 - WISH LIST HOLIDAYS ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
About to enter Laura\'s good books - I would chose Italy - fabulous food,...
January 31st, 2019 12:52 - Cantate Cavalcade (Orchidee)
How many syllables? Does Miss Berles know?
January 31st, 2019 07:45 - Old Age Phonephobia? (Goldfinch60)
Another great observational piece Andy - sadly it\'s becoming more evident...
January 31st, 2019 06:42 - Cry All Them Tears. (Kevin browne)
Every line is power packed - fine write Kevin.
January 30th, 2019 11:56 - Countless Indiscretions (Neville)
And I\'m still making it up but that doesn\'t matter - its beauty lies in...
January 30th, 2019 11:54 - RELEASED. (Fay Slimm.)
Such an elegant plea for these magnificent birds .
January 30th, 2019 09:38 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ SIMON & GARFUNKEL ~ BRIAN ~ An 8 6 Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great take on a lovely song. May have relayed this here before but my son...
January 30th, 2019 03:33 - Gone Away. (Goldfinch60)
This is such a sad sad read - I do hope you have a restful week away from...
January 30th, 2019 03:28 - The Misery of Poor (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Superbly expressed - a great write.
January 29th, 2019 14:12 - LUNACY. (Fay Slimm.)
A sad state of play so eloquently expressed.
January 29th, 2019 13:56 - WELLINGTON (N Z) : ANGELA : A Barrel Acrostic (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great construction and write Angela.
January 29th, 2019 13:53 - Confessed To Be Christ - Mark\'s Gospel (9) (Orchidee)
I\'m always tempted - great write Orchi
January 29th, 2019 13:52 - WITCHDOCTORS! (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
I found it a little difficult to read with the dark background but that...
January 28th, 2019 09:39 - NIGHTNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
A comfort-food read - loved it.
January 28th, 2019 09:34 - Might She by Chance be a Witch (Neville)
A cracking write N
January 28th, 2019 09:32 - Barren Land (Sylviasearcher)
Super poem with great lines - enjoyed.
January 28th, 2019 09:30 - F E B R U A R Y ~ BRIAN ~ A Barrel Acrostic (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Rarely get snow here in MH - hoping it gets filtered by the Derbyshire...
January 28th, 2019 03:21 - Just A Second....! (Orchidee)
Dog in bath - pronounced barth - I\'m a southerner don\'t you know. What...
January 28th, 2019 03:19 - But is it Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
Open mind, closed mind, half empty, half full. The loss is for those that...
January 28th, 2019 03:13 - i`m just a man... (Ron parrish aka wordman)
We may be just men (or women come to that) but as long as we do our best...
January 27th, 2019 14:15 - Mixups #9 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Super gem of a write.
January 27th, 2019 12:18 - Dusk And Dawn (Orchidee)
A good \'un for Sunday Orchi.
January 27th, 2019 07:35 - A Good Man Never Lets You Forget How Much He Loves You (Mottakeenur Rehman)
great to see your pen at work again. A great read.
January 27th, 2019 07:33 - Mozart Acrostic 1. (Goldfinch60)
Not my favourite composer but way up there with them and a great acrostic...
January 27th, 2019 03:44 - What We Got (Neville)
I look at things from both sides now - great concept well expressed and...
January 27th, 2019 01:32 - ...and thirty years hence (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Beautiful write Andrew.
January 26th, 2019 12:22 - Praise Parading (Orchidee)
Well writ - is Miss Berles on the parade?
January 26th, 2019 08:46 - When They Took Away the Tumour (Neville)
Super sensitive write - I can empathise - My wife had kidney cancer 7...
January 26th, 2019 06:58 - WEEKEND PERFECT ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I didn\'t work weekends - well not officially. the truth is I was on call...
January 26th, 2019 04:20 - Goldie and Orchi Seven Hundred. (Goldfinch60)
A p[air together - thanks to you both with consistently good works and...
January 26th, 2019 02:58 - NURTURE. (Fay Slimm.)
Had lunch at the Waterfront listening to a live jazz band and looking out...
January 25th, 2019 11:54 - Mirislavka (Neville)
Great memoric discompilations Neville
January 25th, 2019 11:50 - Crumbs! - Mark\'s Gospel (8) (Orchidee)
Poetic slices dear Orchi.
January 25th, 2019 11:49 - Calliope Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Full justice given to a great form Andy.
January 25th, 2019 02:44 - Waiting for Cancer (Neville)
Love the conception of this - today I am a memory - tomorrow dust on the...
January 24th, 2019 10:09 - EVOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
The pen will win - much enjoyed dear Fay.
January 24th, 2019 10:05 - Feeding The Flock - Mark\'s Gospel (7) (Orchidee)
Fine work - your standards never drop Orchi.
January 24th, 2019 03:10 - Paid Retirement (Goldfinch60)
I am also grateful that I had a job defending against unmeritorious claims...
January 24th, 2019 03:08 - HOPING. (Fay Slimm.)
Or even: parva pulchrum est
January 23rd, 2019 13:22 - LOVESCAPE. (Fay Slimm.)
All your works are gems - this is a diamond.
January 22nd, 2019 14:50 - What Happened to the Painter (Neville)
Another original piece - super stuff
January 22nd, 2019 14:43 - Intelligent Conversation 2. (Goldfinch60)
Fine write Andy
January 22nd, 2019 14:38 - OH WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DAY ! BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great write Brian. Love the idea of no pounds to gain - no pounds to pay.
January 21st, 2019 11:52 - Enlightenment (Neville)
Brill write Neville
January 21st, 2019 08:12 - EARLYNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Excellent Fay
January 21st, 2019 08:11 - Faith For Forgiveness - Mark\'s Gospel (4) (Orchidee)
You have a real way with these Orchi - great work.
January 21st, 2019 03:59 - Love of Healing. (Goldfinch60)
Heart warming. My neice is wanting to be a teacher and spends much of her...
January 21st, 2019 03:11 - TO MANY JESUS IS STILL AN ENIGMA ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Clever - has outback been on Exlax - bless him.
January 20th, 2019 11:31 - Painfully Yours (Neville)
Not sure I could manage all women these days so I\'ll not bother with the...
January 20th, 2019 11:29 - Gift Of Grace (Orchidee)
I had a gift from Miss Berles - it was a box of lo*er case \'Ds\' - darn...
January 20th, 2019 11:25 - Coffee Time. (Goldfinch60)
Without flavours, without froth, without chocolate - just pure real...
January 20th, 2019 03:06 - Before Leaving (Neville)
A superb write - one of your best.
January 19th, 2019 05:08 - WINTER APPROACHES (Michael Edwards)
Could call it Winter departing - or Winter Has Arrived .
Miss Berles...
January 19th, 2019 04:48 - History. (Goldfinch60)
Reminds me of Cuba with the somewhat distorted interpretation of events...
January 19th, 2019 02:49 - 747 (Michael Edwards)
Bless you Claudelle
January 18th, 2019 12:25 - HUSBANDRY. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah the rusticity of yesteryear - great piece as always Fay.
January 18th, 2019 06:28 - My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville)
She would please me if it wasn\'t for the stale cigarette smell on her...
January 18th, 2019 06:26 - Moments in Words. (Goldfinch60)
Great write Andy. I have to admit that as much as I love Ella I do prefer...
January 18th, 2019 06:23 - Being (Sylviasearcher)
A beautiful write.
January 17th, 2019 10:41 - Turquoise (Neville)
Is orange red or is it yellow?
Is turquoise blue or is it green?
Well it...
January 17th, 2019 10:38 - WHY ? (Fay Slimm.)
This reads perfectly - just flows and tells such a poignant story. This is...
January 17th, 2019 04:04 - Kingdom of the King - Mark\'s Gospel (2) (Orchidee)
Fine write O
January 17th, 2019 03:48 - MORE HERBS & SPICES ~ BRIAN ~ An ABC Rhyming Acrostic ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Mmm rose hip and crab apple jelly - great on toast but haven\'t had it for...
January 17th, 2019 03:44 - forgotten field (Markashley1961)
This is an outstanding write both in terms of language and construction -...
January 17th, 2019 03:31 - Teddy Man. (Goldfinch60)
An eccentric - I love eccentrics - I\'m probably one myself - or at least...
January 17th, 2019 02:47 - Riding through the rainbow on my space unicorn (Sylviasearcher)
If this is self indulgence I love its menu - serve me more.
January 16th, 2019 11:18 - The Weavers Knot (Neville)
My type of poetry - it just flows - a great read.
January 16th, 2019 09:14 - TAKE WING. (Fay Slimm.)
Interesting construction - fine work and work it does.
January 16th, 2019 09:11 - Score for Words. (Goldfinch60)
A duet . with Orchi?
Mmmm
Fine write Andy.
January 16th, 2019 09:08 - The Opposite of Up (Sylviasearcher)
A super write dear Sylvia.
January 15th, 2019 11:46
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