Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- SOME 575 SMILES (4) (Michael Edwards)
Second version of the elephant having reduced the linework to a minimum .
February 23rd, 2019 01:12 - Forces of Creation..... 4 (Suresh)
Love the ideas behind this well thought out.
February 22nd, 2019 12:15 - ONCE-SIPPED. (Fay Slimm.)
A wonderful write and that last 6 line stanza is something else - super...
February 22nd, 2019 06:28 - The Outcast (Sylviasearcher)
Having read this once I feel it deserves another read to fully appreciate...
February 22nd, 2019 06:26 - A Certain Point of Beauty (Neville)
Could be about my lovely Asian wife but I stayed and that was over half a...
February 22nd, 2019 06:21 - Ink spots and paper snowballs (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A lovely write which underlines the reasons why we write . There is one -...
February 22nd, 2019 04:05 - Contentment. (Goldfinch60)
Great write Andy.
My wife and I were only saying yesterday that if we...
February 22nd, 2019 03:04 - A WEEK OF HAIKU ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A week of 575s - well writ A&B
February 22nd, 2019 02:59 - MORE 575 SMILES (3) (Michael Edwards)
Apologies for not posting or commenting yesterday - a busy day - anyway...
February 22nd, 2019 01:25 - what makes a poet? (Dusk arising)
Just how it is and so well crafted.
February 20th, 2019 10:06 - ENDED. (Fay Slimm.)
A great tribute beautifully crafted.
February 20th, 2019 10:03 - What Do You Drive (Neville)
Enjoyed the read but haven\'t a clue how Lou Reed\'s (who is Lou Reed -...
February 20th, 2019 10:01 - FUSIONS WERE FUN ! AN ACROSTIC SONNET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes - why don\'t more participate? But even more so I would welcome a...
February 20th, 2019 06:31 - Some Sort Of Dipity (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Great write - and all\'s well with the world.
February 20th, 2019 06:27 - Passion Panorama - Mark\'s Gospel (20) (Orchidee)
Super write Orchi.
February 20th, 2019 04:21 - Honour Unfounded. (Goldfinch60)
With you all the way Andy. The trouble is not one single party represents...
February 20th, 2019 04:20 - DECISIVE. (Fay Slimm.)
A flowing read Fay
February 19th, 2019 12:13 - Shield Maiden (Neville)
A right shudder of a read that stays with you - fine work Neville.
February 19th, 2019 12:11 - TRANSFORMED BY SEASONS ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A DODECET FLOW POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is a super piece of work - and thanks for the honour of using my...
February 19th, 2019 12:07 - Spring Starts. (Goldfinch60)
Magic to hear - and in the garden we have crocuses, hellebores, iris,...
February 19th, 2019 02:44 - The MOUSETRAP (FineB)
And I\'ve never seen it either but it has received such acclaim over the...
February 19th, 2019 01:32 - Unfeeling (Sylviasearcher)
Superbly crafted - read it twice.
February 18th, 2019 08:38 - REMEMBERING. (Fay Slimm.)
Another fine write Fay.
February 18th, 2019 08:34 - WORKIN\' NINE TO FIVE ~ BRIAN ~ A RHYMING DODECET ~ Including DOLLY PARTON VIDEO ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Fine write Brian - I recognise her place in country music and the...
February 18th, 2019 05:15 - Not 21 Again?! (Orchidee)
Monday is wash day - you\'ve come clean Orchi - how old is Fido?
February 18th, 2019 05:07 - Away With Words (Neville)
Under water basket weaving?
Oh sorry that\'s four words - how about...
February 18th, 2019 04:13 - Smoke Filled Days. (Goldfinch60)
A rare sight these days and I wonder after all the publicity why it is...
February 18th, 2019 04:06 - 4 word poem #1 (Jon Nakapalau)
Chose your
own colours.
Love it Jon
February 17th, 2019 16:14 - Daydreaming (Suresh)
And it\'s a yes from me too - great work Suresh.
February 17th, 2019 15:29 - LOVE OF GOD ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A superb write - in fact one of your best - keep writing both.
February 17th, 2019 03:16 - Shadows to Light. (Goldfinch60)
And so it will always be so - sort of goes with my posting today - super...
February 17th, 2019 03:11 - My Mother My Friend (Ranita)
Nothing pretentious, simply stated, straight from the heart. This is all...
February 17th, 2019 03:09 - Newspaper Chatting. (Goldfinch60)
Bygone times. We collected our grandson from school yesterday and there...
February 16th, 2019 02:26 - RECOLLECTIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
Captures the innocence of childhood which also applies (in my case at...
February 15th, 2019 05:21 - every now and again (Dusk arising)
A little special - into faves.
February 15th, 2019 05:17 - When I am Far (Neville)
You\'ve done it again
with your magical pen.
February 15th, 2019 05:16 - VALENTINE ACROSTIC FOR ANGELA : ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a lovely surprise and gesture - great work by Brian
February 15th, 2019 03:42 - Dynamic Deacons (Orchidee)
great work Orchi. Dynamic deacons eh what - must be wearing those...
February 15th, 2019 03:41 - Birthday Valentine. (Goldfinch60)
What a little beauty - and what a great gesture.
February 15th, 2019 03:39 - The empty cage... (Jon Nakapalau)
I like this - a tad prophetic
February 15th, 2019 01:25 - RELIANCE. (Fay Slimm.)
A long walk this morning looking at the bare branches and twigs shining...
February 14th, 2019 06:55 - VALENTINE\'S DAY 14TH FEBRUARY (FineB)
Loneliness is a terrible position to be in - when I retired both my wife...
February 14th, 2019 06:52 - Sans Sustenance (Neville)
Great little \'un - no chocolate?
February 14th, 2019 06:49 - Love Limitless (Orchidee)
If we all loved each other would there be enough to go round? Should we...
February 14th, 2019 06:47 - Saint Valentines Day Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Spot on Andy
February 14th, 2019 06:46 - CLOSE ENCOUNTER WITH BRIAN : ANGELA : A DOBLE DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great write for Vals day
February 14th, 2019 06:45 - Analytical Ambivalence (JaydeVictoria)
And long may you stay and continue to write more great poetry. Great
February 13th, 2019 12:28 - Khuda Gawah (Mottakeenur Rehman)
Some read - love the way you weave the words together.
February 13th, 2019 12:26 - Cusp (Neville)
Every one a winner - --!
February 13th, 2019 12:01 - Supper Scenes - Mark\'s Gospel (18) (Orchidee)
You\'ve done it again . Good work Orchi.
February 13th, 2019 04:31 - A VALENTINE CARD ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A super tender poem - thanks both.
February 13th, 2019 04:25 - Word Search (FineB)
I\'m a soduko person - fill books of them - but I recall journeys to work...
February 13th, 2019 04:23 - JOINED. (Fay Slimm.)
And Jeanne and I have remained - fine work Fay.
February 13th, 2019 04:19 - The Moon of Love - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
As Neville says - a real gem.
February 13th, 2019 02:37 - Self Harm (Neville)
For those who have never experienced it either personally or within the...
February 12th, 2019 07:08 - Untitled (Suresh)
I do like this poignant little piece.
February 12th, 2019 03:25 - Aging Crime. (Goldfinch60)
A great write and thanks for the BH clip - Unintentionally I looked much...
February 12th, 2019 03:24 - More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\' (Dusk arising)
Just brill - keep them coming - set me up for the day.
February 12th, 2019 03:15 - New visions (LINNE)
Fully agree with your poem and enjoyed the poem.
February 12th, 2019 00:47 - Disillusioned (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Sad reflective write but so captivating - much enjoyed the read.
February 11th, 2019 13:01 - STATUS QUO ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Super work - I must write - so thanks for the inspiration.
February 11th, 2019 12:59 - Flock #44: feathers (Frank Prem)
Love it Frank - simple but so effective - everyday I am grateful for the...
February 11th, 2019 12:57 - A few \\\\\\\'Mary hads\\\\\\\' (Dusk arising)
Great stuff and good for you - round of applause and a hearty hey ho more...
February 11th, 2019 12:55 - The State of Things... (Orchidee)
I\'ll be there saving up for a new tunic - not sure about the colour...
February 11th, 2019 12:52 - VEILS. (Fay Slimm.)
Great work - deserves another read - I will return.
February 11th, 2019 12:49 - The Sixties, was I There? (Goldfinch60)
What makes it worse for me is I was there in the late 50s as well - no...
February 11th, 2019 12:46 - Last Words (Neville)
Some great lines Neville.
February 10th, 2019 09:22 - scars (Dusk arising)
lovely rounded construct and we carry our \'scars\' which we keep hidden -...
February 10th, 2019 06:21 - THE SOUND OF SILENCE ~ BRIAN ~ A DODECET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Certainly brings silence but here in middle England we haven\'t seen a...
February 10th, 2019 04:17 - Perfection in person (IsraaD)
You\'ve asked for comments but I cant think of any to offer other than to...
February 10th, 2019 02:46 - My Granddaughter. (Goldfinch60)
So pleased for you - our grandchildren bring us such pleasure. I have only...
February 10th, 2019 02:40 - Mary, Queen of Scots (FineB)
Yeah - a real saga - have you seen the film? And a fine write too.
February 10th, 2019 02:37 - Bethune Re-visited (Neville)
Interesting about Bethune and a good write to boot.
February 9th, 2019 13:19 - Delightful Dwelling (Orchidee)
Fine write - does Miss Berles live in a delightful dwelling?
February 9th, 2019 13:14 - Today Not Tomorrow. (Goldfinch60)
Each tomorrow is replaced by a new today. (Which I\'ll add to my latest...
February 9th, 2019 02:43 - SEASONAL NUMBERS ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A DECET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thanks for the lesson and the tree could have come from one of my painting...
February 9th, 2019 00:27 - Our Best (Lorna)
We can only do our best - well my children turned out okay but, sadly, not...
February 8th, 2019 10:44 - Love and Warm Toast (Neville)
I just love this - the progression so elegantly yet so simply expressed -...
February 8th, 2019 04:35 - Darkness into Light. (Goldfinch60)
So pleased to hear you are on the road to recovery and a great uplifting...
February 8th, 2019 04:32 - I Wait for You (Mottakeenur Rehman)
This is a superb poem. I would suggest that poems are written to their...
February 7th, 2019 14:26 - RECALL. (Fay Slimm.)
Great work Fay.
February 7th, 2019 14:06 - Vineyard Valuings - Mark\'s Gospel (15) (Orchidee)
Fine scribblings Orchi.
February 7th, 2019 14:04 - End (Sylviasearcher)
Love 575s - I never call them Haikus or senryus etc as the purists can be...
February 7th, 2019 03:10 - The Lady of Shallott Rises. (Goldfinch60)
A great subject for a poem (puzzles) and it has resulted in a ...
February 7th, 2019 02:53 - POEM WITHOUT WORDS ~ BRIAN ~ G U I T A R Acrostet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great acrostic and a superb instrument. Love the clip.
February 7th, 2019 02:50 - Your Hand (Rrodriguez)
Ah sad - so emotive - great work R.
February 6th, 2019 18:15 - UNLUCKY IN LOVE ? : ANGELA : RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great poem and great to hear good old PC again - I recall his TV shows -...
February 6th, 2019 09:19 - The Transom Window (Lorna)
Paints a great picture Hope the window\'s open.
February 6th, 2019 09:17 - RESILIENCE. (Fay Slimm.)
February 6th, 2019 04:39 - RESILIENCE. (Fay Slimm.)
You always manage to transport the reader - now where am I? lol 😜
February 6th, 2019 04:39 - Once Upon a Tablecloth (Neville)
Sounds idyllic but what about the wine?
February 6th, 2019 04:38 - Promise In Prayers - Mark\'s Gospel (14) (Orchidee)
Great work O - looks like Sylla in the clip.
February 6th, 2019 04:35 - Lake Walking. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ve got me shivering - nice one Andy.
February 6th, 2019 02:44 - Pebble (Joanna Garrido)
Great read - it transported me to the shore.
February 6th, 2019 02:43 - a year full of reasons (Psychofemale)
Well expressed.
February 6th, 2019 02:41 - Sickness (Sylviasearcher)
Brill Sylvia
February 5th, 2019 15:36 - WHERE ARE THE CLOWNS ? BRIAN ~ A RHYMING 4 4 4 2 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Brings back memories of a bygone era - thanks for the reminder.
February 5th, 2019 15:35 - HEARABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
Bound over by your use of the language dear Fay.
February 5th, 2019 15:29 - Words (Lorna)
You\'ve used the language to its best to express this gem of a write. Good...
February 5th, 2019 11:41 - Jun Kenshi (Neville)
Hey mate this aint no little scribble - lovely piece.
February 5th, 2019 11:39
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