Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- CLIMBING. (Fay Slimm.)
Super write Fay
March 20th, 2019 15:07 - Peace in My Life. (Goldfinch60)
We have a small river flowing past our village - like you I find peace...
March 20th, 2019 15:06 - FALLING ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A REPISTART* SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Repistarts and unistarts - you\'re certainly bringing some new words and...
March 20th, 2019 07:11 - Body m.o.t (Poetic Dan)
Hoping you have a full recovery - my thoughts are with you. And a great...
March 19th, 2019 17:38 - A human need? (Sylviasearcher)
Put your brain into gear - so much to think about - great write that...
March 19th, 2019 16:11 - Worship Wonders (Orchidee)
Great work O
March 19th, 2019 16:08 - WAVERING. (Fay Slimm.)
Insightful write - great write Fay
March 19th, 2019 16:07 - 20 SHADES OF PURPLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
When I am old I shall wear ...!
Great coverage of all shades and well...
March 19th, 2019 03:09 - Intimidating Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Me too - I love this form and this is a great example - so more please.
March 19th, 2019 03:06 - How Else Would We Know? (Nicholas Browning)
Poetry and art are different branches of the same tree.
A painting...
March 19th, 2019 02:11 - BEGINNINGS. (Fay Slimm.)
Great joyloads dear Fay - a beautiful morning so full of promise.r
March 18th, 2019 07:22 - GRANDDAD WE LOVE YOU ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ DODECAHEXA (26) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Now this really is a big problem and it hits you hard the older you get....
March 18th, 2019 03:59 - Escape (Jeffrey Roy)
I worked in cities all my life but retired now I live in a sleepy English...
March 18th, 2019 03:51 - Story of Our Lives (Nicholas Browning)
You say it\'s a simple tale but it\'s very enigmatic nevertheless. I can...
March 18th, 2019 01:38 - Communion Companying (Orchidee)
Nice one Sue - err I mean Orchi.
March 17th, 2019 05:12 - mine (Frank Prem)
Oh to climb the rainbow - super ode Frank .
March 17th, 2019 05:11 - OUR SELF RESPECT ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oh if only though this way but many in society are so self centred that...
March 17th, 2019 05:09 - In Our Lives (Goldfinch60)
Oh how I hope she overcomes it - so hard in one so young and a great write...
March 17th, 2019 03:24 - Drum Beat (Suresh)
Love the way you have built this up to a crescendo - a darn good read...
March 17th, 2019 00:52 - Dome of Solitude (Suresh)
Protected sins.
March 16th, 2019 12:58 - No more shelter (Sylviasearcher)
Feeling decidedly damp after this precipitous read - great poem - great...
March 16th, 2019 10:44 - CHRISTCHURCH NZ ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC LAMENT (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I am quite bewildered what it is that drives these sick people. This was a...
March 16th, 2019 08:46 - Way With Words (Orchidee)
you sure do have a way with words Orchi.
March 16th, 2019 03:22 - Lucky dip (Poetic Dan)
Really touched by this - good on yer Dan.
March 16th, 2019 03:21 - The Call of The Gold Cup. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s been a week where a real conundrum exists - to watch Cheltenham or...
March 16th, 2019 03:19 - That Which Aches (Nicholas Browning)
A great weave of the language - i won\'t pick out a favourite line - they...
March 16th, 2019 03:16 - Seamless Dreams (Sylviasearcher)
Super read - dreams are like a Dali painting just wish i had his skills.
March 15th, 2019 16:38 - No umbrella (Poetic Dan)
Oooh - fester not - the worlds your oyster (actually there\'s not much...
March 15th, 2019 15:32 - AIR. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful words Fay.
March 15th, 2019 08:50 - 24 SHADES OF GREEN ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ COLLABORATION POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A round of applause for the poetry scholar
Tis true by gorrah - greens...
March 15th, 2019 06:12 - Beware! (Goldfinch60)
Indeed a great clip and fine words too.
March 15th, 2019 06:08 - LITTLE BOY BLUE ~ BRIAN ~ AN ALPHABET POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Well done Brian - great response. It\'s encouraged me to write my own...
March 14th, 2019 09:53 - Majestic Mount (Orchidee)
If it\'s not Mount Zion is it Mount Horse? Fine work my good friend.
March 14th, 2019 09:51 - Numbers in Life. (Goldfinch60)
A simple message simply put with honesty - i do hope she embraces all that...
March 14th, 2019 02:46 - As Hollows Whisper (Nicholas Browning)
Well I\'ve read it now and it flows so well and what great use of...
March 14th, 2019 02:18 - As Hollows Whisper (Nicholas Browning)
Not sure what font you have used Nicholas but it looks a bit like cyrillic...
March 14th, 2019 01:16 - ATHENA\'S FLUTE (Michael Edwards)
Somehow a cartoon doesn\'t really sit comfortably with today\'s poem so...
March 14th, 2019 01:13 - MEANT. (Fay Slimm.)
Love the way the words are woven and especially the line: Time severs...
March 13th, 2019 05:14 - Ruins of the Phantasm (Nicholas Browning)
I\'ve dipped into it and from what I\'ve read thus far it\'s an engaging...
March 13th, 2019 03:41 - Perhaps (Sylviasearcher)
Go on why not - I have no need for frames or crutches (as yet) but I find...
March 13th, 2019 03:37 - Mourning Song (Neville)
A real lovely write - enjoy your trip Neville.
March 13th, 2019 03:33 - Balaam\'s Oracles - Series(1) (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchi - be proud of your oracles.
March 13th, 2019 03:32 - Joey played the saxophone (Dusk arising)
Your comments above do help but it stands in its own right - an amazing...
March 13th, 2019 03:31 - Watching Snooker. (Goldfinch60)
Gave me a smile Andy and that video - well..........!
March 13th, 2019 03:27 - LADY IN RED ~ ANGELA ~ AN ALPHABET POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Nice one Angela. As an artist I work to a limited palate and I find it...
March 13th, 2019 03:26 - When I Was Dead (Neville)
Well I\'m a realist so I read it as it is written - a life lost at sea...
March 12th, 2019 14:46 - Escape (Sylviasearcher)
A dark write but I detect the seedlings of hope sending roots in the...
March 12th, 2019 14:33 - LET\'S GO. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'ve got the tickets - let\'s go - fine write.
March 12th, 2019 12:14 - SPRING IS SPRUNG ~ A FLOW SONNET ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Spring is sprung, the sap is riz - great one Brian
March 12th, 2019 12:12 - Dark To Light (Orchidee)
Day then night
dark then light
or is it vice versa?
Nice one Orchi
March 12th, 2019 03:13 - Such a Sadness. (Goldfinch60)
The saddest of reads - my heart goes out to you both.
March 12th, 2019 02:10 - Je Riviens by Worth (Neville)
I think I\'ll go and buy a bottle - err not for me of course. Another...
March 11th, 2019 05:55 - My little pocket watch (JaydeVictoria)
Joe says it just right - a real original write which sustains full...
March 11th, 2019 05:52 - AHEAD. (Fay Slimm.)
Super form and some great phrases - another worthy write dear Fay,
March 11th, 2019 05:49 - Clickety Click. (Goldfinch60)
Nice one Andy. I remember my clickety click - that was Theresa\'s Den...
March 11th, 2019 02:50 - WHY DONT PLASTICS DECOMPOSE? BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Fine write and by coincidence puts me in mind of a shorty I have just...
March 11th, 2019 02:06 - The Wind (FineB)
A poignant write indeed.
March 10th, 2019 15:27 - I was born wrong (Dominique ruth)
It\'s those who fail you who were born wrong - not you. My guess is...
March 10th, 2019 10:55 - Dream (Dominique ruth)
A super read Dominique and I\'ve just read your fusion. Not yet a friend...
March 10th, 2019 08:49 - PASSION. (Fay Slimm.)
VG captured in one brilliant stanza - great tribute Fay.
March 10th, 2019 08:44 - Misrepresentation (Neville)
Very poignant read and then I came to the last line - I just loved it.
March 10th, 2019 08:37 - Breath of life (JaydeVictoria)
A beautiful poem and having such great metre it rolls off the tongue and...
March 10th, 2019 07:43 - YOU\'RE MY BEST FRIEND : ANGELA : SONNET FOR BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So touching - have a great day both of you.
March 10th, 2019 07:18 - Dressing for Seasons. (Goldfinch60)
Not sure about being mad - each of us are individual. As for short sleeved...
March 10th, 2019 02:30 - Haiku - I see you (JaydeVictoria)
What a super piece - may the stars ever shine - what more can I say?
March 9th, 2019 13:19 - Not Just Any Words (Neville)
I feel a storming of Parliament coming on - I\'ll be there with you with...
March 9th, 2019 05:39 - I AM . ( Part One of a Series) (Fay Slimm.)
I don\'t know how you consistently write to this quality and to this...
March 9th, 2019 05:34 - I BELIEVE IN YOU ! ~ SONNET FOR ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Couldn\'t read it without singing it in my mind - super work Brian
March 9th, 2019 02:23 - Living the Day. (Goldfinch60)
Every day is an opportunity - great write Andy.
March 9th, 2019 02:22 - Boudoir (Neville)
Never seen lacquered walls and can only guess at the type of women - super...
March 8th, 2019 08:32 - Don\'t be forgotten (Poetic Dan)
Words are the staff of all intellectual endeavour no matter what levels we...
March 8th, 2019 08:30 - Justice Judgement - Chronicles Series (4) (Orchidee)
I lost a lot of blood myself quite recently but I pulled through - mind...
March 8th, 2019 08:28 - BIRD-TALK.. (Fay Slimm.)
Brilliantly described. I have just returned from my studio and I saw a...
March 8th, 2019 07:08 - Church Swansong. (Goldfinch60)
You mentioned this yesterday and I\'m glad you posted it - great piece...
March 8th, 2019 02:32 - FRIENDS ~ SEVEN SYNONYMS ~ A SONNET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great sentiments but the answer to friendship and an end to loneliness...
March 8th, 2019 02:28 - Prolet (Neville)
Really lifts you - fine read Neville.
March 7th, 2019 06:24 - Salvation Sight - Chronicles Series (3) (Orchidee)
Fine work Orchi
March 7th, 2019 04:52 - NEW ZEALAND LAMB & CLARET ~ ANGELA ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
We baked a lovely large joint which we wrapped (using string) with small...
March 7th, 2019 04:45 - ARDOUR. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m dong an Orchi - I\'m swooning. fine seductive write dear Fay
March 7th, 2019 04:38 - Jacques Loussier. (Goldfinch60)
Great artist, great write. I must listen to more of his work.
March 7th, 2019 02:46 - Precious Scars (Neville)
My wife had kidney cancer 7 years ago and had a kidney removed - it saved...
March 6th, 2019 09:18 - Know Your Worth. (Goldfinch60)
Fully agree about JDP and your comments about respect. Sadly my respect...
March 6th, 2019 04:21 - RISING. (Fay Slimm.)
A great tribute to the most exciting season.
March 6th, 2019 02:54 - A Laugh Or Two...... (Orchidee)
I do enjoy your work when you write in a serious mode - this is such an...
March 5th, 2019 14:44 - Peace (Sylviasearcher)
Ouch - but a great senryu nonetheless.
March 5th, 2019 14:41 - What We Have Here (Neville)
I\'ll keep a low profile - now where\'s that pen and paper.
March 5th, 2019 14:33 - WINSOMENESS OF WINTER ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A great conclusion to the series - well done A&B
March 5th, 2019 14:30 - Flower. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely write - and so the flower produces seed and life\'s cycle...
March 5th, 2019 14:26 - If I Could Reach Out and Touch (Suresh)
A sad but great write
March 4th, 2019 11:02 - TO THE SANDMAN (Fay Slimm.)
My daytime naps tend to join up - I\'m worried in case I don\'t wake at...
March 4th, 2019 08:41 - AWESOMENESS OF AUTUMN ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I\'m doing a collage in a workshop tomorrow - autumn colours appeal - fine...
March 4th, 2019 04:38 - Lordly Laudings (Orchidee)
Not that I am at one with the message I still recognise your talent at...
March 4th, 2019 03:50 - Evil in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Are some actually born evil or is it society and circumstances that make...
March 4th, 2019 03:48 - I Am That Guy (Neville)
This is what I mean by a \'good poet\' - one who can write from...
March 4th, 2019 02:18 - Prosecco (FineB)
Please pass me a glass
It has to be said I do prefer red
but I\'ll never...
March 4th, 2019 01:30 - In a Room (Sylviasearcher)
Enigmatic (at least in my book) and as such an intriguing read - Love your...
March 3rd, 2019 14:19 - Editits (Dusk arising)
Made my evening to see these - i was going to pick out a favourite but...
March 3rd, 2019 14:12 - Paper Cuts (Neville)
Can\'t they just - makes me think of Russian dolls - so full of themselves...
March 3rd, 2019 12:19 - COLOURS OF THE RAINBOW ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 3 3 3 NONET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A colourful write - nothing as magical as a rainbow.
March 3rd, 2019 04:33 - Talk to me (Sylviasearcher)
Rubbish it aint - glad it was captured I enjoyed the read.
March 3rd, 2019 01:59
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