Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- SPRING IS SPRUNG ~ A FLOW SONNET ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Spring is sprung, the sap is riz - great one Brian
March 12th, 2019 12:12 - Dark To Light (Orchidee)
Day then night
dark then light
or is it vice versa?
Nice one Orchi
March 12th, 2019 03:13 - Such a Sadness. (Goldfinch60)
The saddest of reads - my heart goes out to you both.
March 12th, 2019 02:10 - Je Riviens by Worth (Neville)
I think I\'ll go and buy a bottle - err not for me of course. Another...
March 11th, 2019 05:55 - My little pocket watch (JaydeVictoria)
Joe says it just right - a real original write which sustains full...
March 11th, 2019 05:52 - AHEAD. (Fay Slimm.)
Super form and some great phrases - another worthy write dear Fay,
March 11th, 2019 05:49 - Clickety Click. (Goldfinch60)
Nice one Andy. I remember my clickety click - that was Theresa\'s Den...
March 11th, 2019 02:50 - WHY DONT PLASTICS DECOMPOSE? BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Fine write and by coincidence puts me in mind of a shorty I have just...
March 11th, 2019 02:06 - The Wind (FineB)
A poignant write indeed.
March 10th, 2019 15:27 - I was born wrong (Dominique ruth)
It\'s those who fail you who were born wrong - not you. My guess is...
March 10th, 2019 10:55 - Dream (Dominique ruth)
A super read Dominique and I\'ve just read your fusion. Not yet a friend...
March 10th, 2019 08:49 - PASSION. (Fay Slimm.)
VG captured in one brilliant stanza - great tribute Fay.
March 10th, 2019 08:44 - Misrepresentation (Neville)
Very poignant read and then I came to the last line - I just loved it.
March 10th, 2019 08:37 - Breath of life (JaydeVictoria)
A beautiful poem and having such great metre it rolls off the tongue and...
March 10th, 2019 07:43 - YOU\'RE MY BEST FRIEND : ANGELA : SONNET FOR BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So touching - have a great day both of you.
March 10th, 2019 07:18 - Dressing for Seasons. (Goldfinch60)
Not sure about being mad - each of us are individual. As for short sleeved...
March 10th, 2019 02:30 - Haiku - I see you (JaydeVictoria)
What a super piece - may the stars ever shine - what more can I say?
March 9th, 2019 13:19 - Not Just Any Words (Neville)
I feel a storming of Parliament coming on - I\'ll be there with you with...
March 9th, 2019 05:39 - I AM . ( Part One of a Series) (Fay Slimm.)
I don\'t know how you consistently write to this quality and to this...
March 9th, 2019 05:34 - I BELIEVE IN YOU ! ~ SONNET FOR ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Couldn\'t read it without singing it in my mind - super work Brian
March 9th, 2019 02:23 - Living the Day. (Goldfinch60)
Every day is an opportunity - great write Andy.
March 9th, 2019 02:22 - Boudoir (Neville)
Never seen lacquered walls and can only guess at the type of women - super...
March 8th, 2019 08:32 - Don\'t be forgotten (Poetic Dan)
Words are the staff of all intellectual endeavour no matter what levels we...
March 8th, 2019 08:30 - Justice Judgement - Chronicles Series (4) (Orchidee)
I lost a lot of blood myself quite recently but I pulled through - mind...
March 8th, 2019 08:28 - BIRD-TALK.. (Fay Slimm.)
Brilliantly described. I have just returned from my studio and I saw a...
March 8th, 2019 07:08 - Church Swansong. (Goldfinch60)
You mentioned this yesterday and I\'m glad you posted it - great piece...
March 8th, 2019 02:32 - FRIENDS ~ SEVEN SYNONYMS ~ A SONNET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great sentiments but the answer to friendship and an end to loneliness...
March 8th, 2019 02:28 - Prolet (Neville)
Really lifts you - fine read Neville.
March 7th, 2019 06:24 - Salvation Sight - Chronicles Series (3) (Orchidee)
Fine work Orchi
March 7th, 2019 04:52 - NEW ZEALAND LAMB & CLARET ~ ANGELA ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
We baked a lovely large joint which we wrapped (using string) with small...
March 7th, 2019 04:45 - ARDOUR. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m dong an Orchi - I\'m swooning. fine seductive write dear Fay
March 7th, 2019 04:38 - Jacques Loussier. (Goldfinch60)
Great artist, great write. I must listen to more of his work.
March 7th, 2019 02:46 - Precious Scars (Neville)
My wife had kidney cancer 7 years ago and had a kidney removed - it saved...
March 6th, 2019 09:18 - Know Your Worth. (Goldfinch60)
Fully agree about JDP and your comments about respect. Sadly my respect...
March 6th, 2019 04:21 - RISING. (Fay Slimm.)
A great tribute to the most exciting season.
March 6th, 2019 02:54 - A Laugh Or Two...... (Orchidee)
I do enjoy your work when you write in a serious mode - this is such an...
March 5th, 2019 14:44 - Peace (Sylviasearcher)
Ouch - but a great senryu nonetheless.
March 5th, 2019 14:41 - What We Have Here (Neville)
I\'ll keep a low profile - now where\'s that pen and paper.
March 5th, 2019 14:33 - WINSOMENESS OF WINTER ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A great conclusion to the series - well done A&B
March 5th, 2019 14:30 - Flower. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely write - and so the flower produces seed and life\'s cycle...
March 5th, 2019 14:26 - If I Could Reach Out and Touch (Suresh)
A sad but great write
March 4th, 2019 11:02 - TO THE SANDMAN (Fay Slimm.)
My daytime naps tend to join up - I\'m worried in case I don\'t wake at...
March 4th, 2019 08:41 - AWESOMENESS OF AUTUMN ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I\'m doing a collage in a workshop tomorrow - autumn colours appeal - fine...
March 4th, 2019 04:38 - Lordly Laudings (Orchidee)
Not that I am at one with the message I still recognise your talent at...
March 4th, 2019 03:50 - Evil in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Are some actually born evil or is it society and circumstances that make...
March 4th, 2019 03:48 - I Am That Guy (Neville)
This is what I mean by a \'good poet\' - one who can write from...
March 4th, 2019 02:18 - Prosecco (FineB)
Please pass me a glass
It has to be said I do prefer red
but I\'ll never...
March 4th, 2019 01:30 - In a Room (Sylviasearcher)
Enigmatic (at least in my book) and as such an intriguing read - Love your...
March 3rd, 2019 14:19 - Editits (Dusk arising)
Made my evening to see these - i was going to pick out a favourite but...
March 3rd, 2019 14:12 - Paper Cuts (Neville)
Can\'t they just - makes me think of Russian dolls - so full of themselves...
March 3rd, 2019 12:19 - COLOURS OF THE RAINBOW ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 3 3 3 NONET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A colourful write - nothing as magical as a rainbow.
March 3rd, 2019 04:33 - Talk to me (Sylviasearcher)
Rubbish it aint - glad it was captured I enjoyed the read.
March 3rd, 2019 01:59 - OUR PLANET EARTH : ANGELA & BRIAN : AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
There is little hope if the current incompetent politicians are anything...
March 2nd, 2019 12:56 - The Last Hurt (Neville)
Great write and I just love the last line. M
March 2nd, 2019 06:53 - Liberated Land (Orchidee)
Fine write O
March 2nd, 2019 06:50 - The Vltava. (Goldfinch60)
I\'ve always loved the Smetana work and the river is magnificent - I...
March 2nd, 2019 04:09 - Me and you, on and on... (Sylviasearcher)
Your words are spot on - the work of a true poet.
March 1st, 2019 12:28 - Commitment And Courage (Orchidee)
Well writ Orchidee
March 1st, 2019 09:18 - Mix Ups #18 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Ah you know how I love short pithy pieces - super couplet Andrew.
March 1st, 2019 09:16 - ONCE (Fay Slimm.)
Wow Fay - I\'ll join Neville - off to the southbound platform - love it.
March 1st, 2019 09:15 - E.U. (Neville)
There is a place where you can vitamin B.
Love the write
and...
March 1st, 2019 09:08 - SONG OF SUMMER : ANGELA & BRIAN : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah summer and it\'s only the first day of spring - but i love the heat -...
March 1st, 2019 09:02 - Ministerial Anger. (Goldfinch60)
This is sad indeed - but thankfully not all are like that. I have a...
March 1st, 2019 06:31 - Journey outside in (Sylviasearcher)
It\'s been a day of some super writes here on MPS and this up there with...
February 28th, 2019 11:09 - INDELIBLE. (Fay Slimm.)
Just beautiful - Will our planet ever stop declining I wonder - let us...
February 28th, 2019 11:02 - of life and loss (Andrew Charles Forrest)
This is so so good - into faves and the first for a very long time. I...
February 28th, 2019 10:34 - Unfinished (Neville)
Great write.
Make my next moment
A moment on Monet’s palette.
Magical...
February 28th, 2019 10:32 - Peace Progress - Chronicles Series (1) (Orchidee)
Fine work.
Anything to do with pease Pudding?
February 28th, 2019 09:29 - Into Eternal Life. (Goldfinch60)
Sad reflective write. Acceptance of death is something that no longer...
February 28th, 2019 03:19 - THE WORDS THAT DANCE INSIDE OUR MINDS (Resa71)
Great insightful write Resa and welcome back.
February 28th, 2019 03:17 - The Knotting of Days (Jon Nakapalau)
I very much enjoyed the read - thanks for posting.
February 28th, 2019 03:15 - SCENTS OF SPRING ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It has certainly arrived - cut the grass for the first time yesterday and...
February 28th, 2019 02:25 - Incrementally Speaking (Neville)
Spot on Neville - among the great shorties - indeed life is just series of...
February 27th, 2019 10:06 - STRANGER ON THE SHORE ~ BRIAN ~ A 6 6 6 2 Docdecet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Some story and some write - bravo.
February 27th, 2019 10:04 - You opened my mind (Andrew Charles Forrest)
This could have been written for my art mentor - a lovely man who gave...
February 27th, 2019 10:03 - Daily Devotion - 1 Thessalonians Series (5) (Orchidee)
After reading this Miss B is mirthful.
February 27th, 2019 03:27 - SOLO. (Fay Slimm.)
This really held me and the last two lines, in view of what goes before,...
February 27th, 2019 03:26 - Strange World (Sylviasearcher)
Not really sure what to make of it - but do you know what? - I really love...
February 27th, 2019 03:24 - Mary Had a Little Lamb 7. (Goldfinch60)
I recall the song well - and I loved it. Ah memories. And thanks for the...
February 27th, 2019 02:58 - Colour my night (Sylviasearcher)
Great read - mine was powder blue.
February 26th, 2019 11:51 - Reconfigure it out (Neville)
Great fun but I\'ll skip the maths
February 26th, 2019 11:49 - SOUTH ISLAND ~ NEW ZEALAND ~ BRIAN ~ A Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Once again a super informative read dear A&B
February 26th, 2019 11:46 - AWESOME. (Fay Slimm.)
I was also lucky enough to experience this at a show put on for children...
February 26th, 2019 11:44 - Time Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60)
So true - I also get lost and lose all idea of time - when an idea comes I...
February 26th, 2019 02:47 - Bring Along a Lantern (Neville)
Another intriguing write from the writer of enigmatic poetry.
February 25th, 2019 08:26 - DEFIANCE. (Fay Slimm.)
I can smell the brine in these elegant words.
February 25th, 2019 08:23 - Faith, Hope, Love - 1 Thessalonians Series (3) (Orchidee)
Great work me old mucker.
February 25th, 2019 04:23 - PEACE IN THE VALLEY ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Super write which brings back many memories - a great read.
February 25th, 2019 04:22 - An ABstRacT (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Great observation in poetry - I love abstracts and must get back to them...
February 25th, 2019 04:21 - Dear Dad (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Made me feel sad and long for my own Dad who passed away a good few years...
February 25th, 2019 01:21 - Books (FineB)
And a great tribute it is - I too love books although I am also addicted...
February 25th, 2019 01:17 - Today! (Andrew Charles Forrest)
And make the most of it - tomorrow may not arrive (for some of us) - a...
February 24th, 2019 07:06 - Little White Lies (Neville)
Enjoyed the read but why are white which stands for purity shouldn\'t they...
February 24th, 2019 04:50 - MAKE ME A CHANNEL OF YOUR PEACE : ANGELA : A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
well thought out - nice to be human sometimes.
February 24th, 2019 04:47 - Hairstyles. (Goldfinch60)
Love the observation and I\'ve seen similar in the past - great write and...
February 24th, 2019 03:03 - THE CRAVENNESS OF THE BLUE FUNK (Andrew Charles Forrest)
I guess I\'m lucky in that I can close doors behind me - rarely if ever do...
February 23rd, 2019 08:11 - Giving The Gospel - 1 Thessalonians Series (2) (Orchidee)
You never let us down Orchi.
February 23rd, 2019 08:05 - Together Parted (Neville)
Ahhh - the way I read was naughty but subtly nice. A work to be proud of.
February 23rd, 2019 08:04 - LIFE & DEATH OF JESUS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Dali is probably my favourite artist of them all and I\'ve a special trip...
February 23rd, 2019 05:33 - Fear of Writing. (Goldfinch60)
An exceptional write - free flowing with a simple message elegantly...
February 23rd, 2019 02:18
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