Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- La Petit Mort (Neville)
I\'m just recovering from one - fine write N
April 12th, 2019 13:29 - SUNRISE ~ SUNSET : ANGELA : A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Both you and Brian have a shared and individualistic style of writing -...
April 12th, 2019 04:39 - DEPARTURE. (Fay Slimm.)
I can see them and hear them - fine write dear Fay
April 12th, 2019 04:36 - Motivated Movements (Orchidee)
Fine work O
April 12th, 2019 02:30 - Something Missing. (Goldfinch60)
I also enjoy a Full English and it\'s sure not the same without black...
April 12th, 2019 01:33 - And Satan responds...... (Suresh)
Consider it validated - great shortie.
April 11th, 2019 18:03 - SIGHTS OF THE SEASONS ~ ANGELA ~ QUATRO QUARANTAS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An evocative write of each season - makes it so hard to chose a favourite
April 11th, 2019 04:31 - Morning Coffee (Neville)
An impelling read - much enjoyed.
April 11th, 2019 04:29 - NEWNESS.. (Fay Slimm.)
The promise of a new beginning and the signs are now everywhere.
April 11th, 2019 04:27 - Repentance Rejoicings (Orchidee)
Re pent ants, re Joy sings
Grey Twerk Or Key.
April 11th, 2019 03:53 - Only a Dream. (Goldfinch60)
A dream in wakefulness is a dream to nurture. Fine write Andy
April 11th, 2019 03:51 - LIT. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh gosh - I\'m there - that night - what a superb write dear Fay - all I...
April 10th, 2019 11:08 - Shadow Envy (Neville)
It has a gentle punch in its simplicity - great write Neville.
April 10th, 2019 11:06 - Gospel Goings (Orchidee)
Another great write from
the pen of Orchidee - where are they going?
April 10th, 2019 02:17 - Sad Spike. (Goldfinch60)
I\'ve got an anthology of his but it\'s full of humour - truly...
April 10th, 2019 02:14 - Canvas (Neville)
Short, simple and quite inspirational.Great work.
April 9th, 2019 16:23 - Irein - A Queen of Laughter (Nafis Light)
She certainly looks like a happy fun-to-know person
- and a fun write...
April 9th, 2019 16:21 - GEMS. (Fay Slimm.)
Another gem Fay
April 9th, 2019 16:18 - Stopped. (Goldfinch60)
Great write and would love to see you dancing - now to listen to the clip.
April 9th, 2019 02:09 - The View from the Window. (Goldfinch60)
This is one of those I shall read again - in fact I\'ll pop it into...
April 8th, 2019 04:37 - Praise Professions 2 (Orchidee)
You can\'t beat a good metre - can you substitute \'Woof, Woof, Woof\' for...
April 8th, 2019 04:34 - Just Laugh and The World Laughs with You (Nafis Light)
It makes the world go round - thank goodness for laughter and a sense of...
April 8th, 2019 04:32 - ILL-SENT (Fay Slimm.)
Yes indeed another fine write about a terrible problem.
April 8th, 2019 02:30 - PORTRAITS OF AUTUMN : ANGELA : A QUARENTA* (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Much as I love Autumn it is still the precursor to winter - so for me...
April 8th, 2019 02:28 - a wish (Dusk arising)
Super tender write dusk - the depth of love and feeling
oodles...
April 8th, 2019 00:13 - Bin Man. (Goldfinch60)
Well he didn\'t come in to trash the place - nice write Andy
April 7th, 2019 13:39 - Untitled - IV (Suresh)
Keep them coming.
April 7th, 2019 13:35 - Untitled - III (Suresh)
And marks are the stain of life. Nice one Suresh
April 7th, 2019 13:34 - HITHER. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m currently reading \'Tess of The d\'Urbervilles - (think I\'ve spelt...
April 6th, 2019 05:20 - Ballerina (Neville)
Great aah factor - I love it.
April 6th, 2019 05:14 - COASTAL EROSION ~ BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 7 7 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It\'s terrible for those who live close to the sea as your fine write...
April 6th, 2019 03:30 - Reigning Realities (Orchidee)
Fine write - it\'s \'reigning\' in the Houses of Parliament at the moment...
April 6th, 2019 03:28 - brexit warning? (Goldfinch60)
Parliament nowadays surely is
the place where MPs take the piss
and now...
April 6th, 2019 01:18 - Our Lady of the Harbour (Neville)
Today\'s the day for original poems - love this one - top score Neville.
April 5th, 2019 10:26 - SOLO LIVING ~ YES ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thankfully both my wife and I are both minimalists and extremely tidy -...
April 5th, 2019 10:24 - Forgiveness Fullness (Orchidee)
You\'re still posting great works without any let up - how do you do it?
April 5th, 2019 06:15 - I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it! (Poetic Dan)
This so original and sits so well with Fay\'s posting today - a really...
April 5th, 2019 06:14 - SOUNDS. (Fay Slimm.)
An absolutely wonderful descriptive piece - a real top read.
April 5th, 2019 06:11 - Choices. (Goldfinch60)
I chose it too - hopefully for the whole day !! lol
An uplifting write...
April 5th, 2019 01:40 - Judgement Day (Suresh)
Elegant write that sums up the beliefs of many.
March 31st, 2019 01:35 - i will comfort you (Dusk arising)
Nice thought - do you have plenty of glue? And a nice write by the way.
March 31st, 2019 01:33 - How much does yours? (Poetic Dan)
Fine work PD
March 30th, 2019 14:19 - Great Art (MendedFences27)
I always protect the working surface with towels. They are covered in...
March 30th, 2019 14:16 - I LUV ME MUDDER ! BENJAMIN ZEPHANIAH ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great poet ans so engaging to watch his recitals
March 30th, 2019 14:12 - Before Breakfast (Neville)
I must be the only one who shudders at the idea of tasting ones facial...
March 30th, 2019 14:08 - TROUBLE. (Fay Slimm.)
Super descriptive write Fay.
March 30th, 2019 07:01 - To Cross A Bridge? (Orchidee)
Great fun - good job Colapsi Berles wasn\'t around.
March 30th, 2019 07:00 - At Peace Once More. (Goldfinch60)
I feel the same walking along the River Welland which passes through our...
March 30th, 2019 06:58 - Tenerife (FineB)
Great Island - great poem.
March 29th, 2019 16:34 - Cutlery Talking (Neville)
A spoonful of fun - and it\'s a yes from me too.
March 29th, 2019 16:31 - LEVELS. (Fay Slimm.)
Another special write Fay
March 29th, 2019 16:29 - I LOVE YOU MORE THAN YOU WILL EVER KNOW ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Treasure your love as we did and still do and the world is your
March 29th, 2019 11:45 - Humour in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Isn\'t it great when, in humour, you are both on the same wavelength. My...
March 29th, 2019 02:33 - Crumbs (Sylviasearcher)
Nice one Sylvia - great use of language - enigmatic and intriguing.
March 29th, 2019 02:13 - ANTICIPATION. (Fay Slimm.)
An elegant burgeoning of love expressed in your own unique way. Another...
March 28th, 2019 15:49 - Heart (Neville)
A special write that engages the reader.
March 28th, 2019 12:40 - Music in the Stars. (Goldfinch60)
A super write - I\'ve not listened to the video yet as I am short of time...
March 28th, 2019 03:54 - COULD YOU SURVIVE ? BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A DECET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Nice one A&B
March 28th, 2019 03:52 - Praise Professions (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchi - there are some \'professions\' you wouldn\'t really want...
March 28th, 2019 03:51 - HAVENS. (Fay Slimm.)
They really are gathering up a head of steam at the moment - circling...
March 27th, 2019 14:59 - The words you all help me find! (Poetic Dan)
Hey Dan take it easy - you\'re writing some great stuff and we\'re all...
March 27th, 2019 10:10 - Back Streets of Banjul (Neville)
I help a lot with a charity which supports a school in Ghana which...
March 27th, 2019 10:00 - Macabre masquerade (Dusk arising)
So apt - we will probably end up in some mid-way cesspool that is neither...
March 27th, 2019 09:50 - Promise (Sylviasearcher)
Dusk is right - so uplifting and brings hope and promise in contrast to...
March 27th, 2019 09:44 - By Step Or Stumble (Orchidee)
Nice write Orchi.
March 27th, 2019 03:43 - Shadow Across the Sky. (Goldfinch60)
A great reflective write Andy.
March 27th, 2019 03:41 - HEY MATE : LETS EMIGRATE ! ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Too late in life for me - but might emigrate to the living room and get...
March 25th, 2019 12:13 - CONNECTION. (Fay Slimm.)
Mum used to beat her carpets - she had an old fashioned carpet beater....
March 25th, 2019 07:03 - Hey Lazarus (Neville)
Intrigued to know who it is but with you all way in condemnation. Message...
March 25th, 2019 07:00 - Nature Notings (Orchidee)
You can\'t beat a good alleluia - where have they gone?
March 25th, 2019 03:50 - Her Beautiful Smile - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Nice one Andy
March 25th, 2019 03:48 - Set Sail! (Nicholas Browning)
Cripes - a real round of applause for this beguiling read. It paints such...
March 25th, 2019 02:06 - Nurse (Jeffrey Roy)
I met many student nurses in my career especially as a guest lecturer at...
March 25th, 2019 02:00 - NEW. (Fay Slimm.)
Stay as you are and keep writing stuff like this gem.
March 24th, 2019 16:21 - Teachable Trust (Orchidee)
Great and no chemistry.
March 24th, 2019 16:19 - Birds on the Wire (Neville)
A real uplifting write in more ways than one - somehow put me in mind of...
March 24th, 2019 16:13 - Victims of Truth (Neville)
And be my dolphin
in a sea of dreams.
- this drew me in and makes me...
March 23rd, 2019 13:56 - THE PERIODIC TABLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The PT was not something at the forefront of the school calendar back in...
March 23rd, 2019 13:50 - Sacrifice (Nicholas Browning)
Sylvia refers to faith\' truth, righteousness and evil - I too was minded...
March 23rd, 2019 13:47 - Led By The Light (Orchidee)
You never fail Orchi - how\'s Fido?
March 23rd, 2019 12:17 - Hellos and goodbyes (Poetic Dan)
Lovely positive write - pleased all appears well in your world
March 23rd, 2019 12:16 - FORTUNE. (Fay Slimm.)
Nature is sure beginning to expose its treasures - it\'s quite stunning...
March 23rd, 2019 02:20 - The Boy Sat on the Burning Deck. (Goldfinch60)
And a great bit of fun. It reminds me of Spike Milligans take on the...
March 23rd, 2019 02:16 - turned chill (changed) (Frank Prem)
Love the minimalist style of this - a great read Frank
March 23rd, 2019 01:11 - Toilet humour (Poetic Dan)
Good result - flushed with success.
March 22nd, 2019 16:37 - Odd Number (Sylviasearcher)
A certain sadness in this poem which reads so well.
March 22nd, 2019 16:36 - MOTHER KNOWS BEST ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A BIDECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I had a great Ma & Pa - but Mum ruled.
March 22nd, 2019 11:52 - MYSTERY. (Fay Slimm.)
Super salty stuff Fay - and there is so much to learn from exists beneath...
March 22nd, 2019 06:09 - in dark woodland (Dusk arising)
Super work dusk
March 22nd, 2019 06:07 - Recollections (Neville)
So you\'re back - and with a great write that carried me along with it.
March 22nd, 2019 06:06 - A Life in Grey (Nicholas Browning)
You have conveyed it so well in this engaging write.
March 22nd, 2019 06:04 - Set Her Free. (Goldfinch60)
Such a sad read and said with such emotion - my thoughts are ever with you...
March 22nd, 2019 06:02 - Skylight (Neville)
Super descriptive write Neville.
March 21st, 2019 15:18 - Your Face (Sylviasearcher)
It does indeed flow - fine work Sylvia.
March 21st, 2019 11:55 - MICKEY MOUSE RULES OK ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great homage to the little fella - super work.
March 21st, 2019 04:50 - Baalam\'s Oracles - Series (3) (Orchidee)
I got aloes in the conservatory and a couple of oracles just like Ballam.
March 21st, 2019 04:16 - VIBRATIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
This evokes such calming thoughts of peaceful rusticity - and mines a...
March 21st, 2019 04:14 - Aah Bach. (Goldfinch60)
In my top selection of composers - his music generates such emotion - fine...
March 21st, 2019 02:25 - Theatre (FineB)
Captures the atmosphere so well - enjoyed!
March 20th, 2019 16:12 - Holi - Festival of Color (Suresh)
And the compliments of the season to you Suresh
March 20th, 2019 15:12
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