Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60

• SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (Michael Edwards) Good fun writes Michael. I was put off Bill Waggadagga at school and a...
  November 21st, 2017 02:00
• THE BIRTH OF SALVATION. (Lasergraph) Good write with the true message of Christmas.
  November 21st, 2017 01:54
• Majestic Marriage (Orchidee) Good write Orchi about an amazing man and lady.
  November 21st, 2017 01:48
• A Christmas Poem (Christina8) Good write, the giving to others and being with family is so important and...
  November 21st, 2017 01:43
• MY POETIC SIDE ~ OK ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good and very true write Brian, we join together as a family of
  November 21st, 2017 01:42
• afraid (Dusk arising) Very good emotive write, words can do so much more damage than physical...
  November 20th, 2017 04:45
• Caught. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful write, may that bubble never burst.
  November 20th, 2017 04:03
• If I Ever Caught the Sun (Will Shootman) May the sunshine come back into your life sooner than expected. Good...
  November 20th, 2017 03:23
• ONLY GHOSTS AND ANGELS (Michael Edwards) Superb write, I was there with the ghosts and angels. Presumably the...
  November 20th, 2017 02:49
• A BEAUTIFUL FRIENDSHIP (Louis Gibbs) May that path go on forever.
  November 20th, 2017 01:30
• Cut three times and still too short (FredPeyer) Good write and very true Fred, we must learn from our mistakes.
  November 18th, 2017 02:18
• SHE PLAYED THE FLUTE (Michael Edwards) Very good Michael, those sounds can bring back lost memories. The...
  November 18th, 2017 02:17
• looking up (Frank Prem) Good write and I too have that dream, lets us go to the stars.
  November 18th, 2017 02:13
• More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit (Poetic Dan) Good emotive write, that war is at peace with those for whom you care.
  November 18th, 2017 02:12
• All by Myself (Mugsdaddy) This is such a sad write, I do hope that it is not true.
  November 18th, 2017 02:10
• Fighting back (Hoopie) Good write and very true, we need to get to know people, many just assume...
  November 18th, 2017 02:08
• You (Tony36) Wonderful loving life, may your life be always wonderful.
  November 18th, 2017 02:04
• Presence Protection - Thomas á Kempis Series - 5 (Orchidee) Good one Orchi.
  November 18th, 2017 01:29
• Cardinals (Christina8) I have only seen cardinals in captivity, they must be wonderful to see in...
  November 17th, 2017 08:57
• child sometimes (Frank Prem) Very good write, those memories of childhood are so precious.
  November 17th, 2017 08:55
• Making Believe. (Fay Slimm.) That sweetness can be wonderful Fay. Good write as usual.
  November 17th, 2017 03:32
• SNOWMEN ~ ELEGANT ! A 7 7 Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) It is not even December yet Brian and winter is yet to come. Good write...
  November 17th, 2017 02:40
• Eunoia (Klaire Drumm) People are scared that they may reveal their own inconsistencies with...
  November 17th, 2017 02:38
• Pistanthrophobic (Klaire Drumm) Good strong write. Poetry helps to get over any problems and to share it...
  November 17th, 2017 02:34
• MEASURED REASON (Michael Edwards) Super write Michael, the forces of light can always beat the power of...
  November 17th, 2017 01:51
• What\'s This All About Alfie. (Wallace) Good fun write, my first smile of the day.
  November 17th, 2017 01:49
• My Love Was Left For Dead. (Kevin browne) Very emotive write, the love and loss burns through your words Kevin.
  November 17th, 2017 01:14
• ANCIENT TRANSITIONS (Louis Gibbs) Good write, see you there Louis.
  November 17th, 2017 01:12
• Tired (FredPeyer) It is always worth taking \'the road less travelled\' to increase our...
  November 17th, 2017 01:11
• The Inventor (FredPeyer) It is the way of life that if things go wrong it needs to be changed, that...
  November 17th, 2017 01:04
• DEPRESSION (Drewp) Very good write on an horrendous problem, that last line is so meaningful.
  November 17th, 2017 00:58
• Sunday-Ways. (Fay Slimm.) Good fun write, those were the days of my youth, life is different now.
  November 16th, 2017 09:02
• CHRISTMAS TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I always thought the elves did all the work.
  November 16th, 2017 09:01
• Memory of a Driveway (Will Shootman) This is a glorious write, thank you for sharing a precious memory. ...
  November 16th, 2017 03:36
• IN PRAISE OF MILK (Michael Edwards) I do like the \'extract of udder\'. Good write Michael.
  November 16th, 2017 01:59
• Praying For Grandfather (Frank Prem) Very good write Frank.
  November 16th, 2017 01:58
• One Last Time (Christopher Elwell) Very good emotive write. Welcome to MPS.
  November 16th, 2017 01:55
• Carousel of Life (FredPeyer) Good write Fred, we have both been on that carousel for a long time but I...
  November 16th, 2017 01:54
• Keep Going (Dakota) Good positive write, we all need to climb that hill of life and once the...
  November 16th, 2017 01:50
• High Hopes (Orchidee) Good write, sounds like a good sermon where most stayed awake.
  November 16th, 2017 01:45
• A Gift (Christina8) Brilliant and very positive last line, that is the way to be Christina.
  November 16th, 2017 01:43
• Nine syallables from a failed poet (Drewp) Very good and very clever write, it is certainly not a failure.
  November 16th, 2017 01:41
• Just writing it out (Poetic Dan) Good write, the last line is so meaningful. Each moment of our lives is...
  November 16th, 2017 01:39
• who will leave you clean (Frank Prem) Very good write, the cleanliness of rain is inspiring.
  November 16th, 2017 01:37
• Back There (Fay Slimm.) Good write and great feelings within your words Fay, I do hope and pray...
  November 16th, 2017 01:26
• Unexpected Moments. (Goldfinch60) Thank you Laura, I am glad it brought back memories.
  November 15th, 2017 08:39
• ERRANT PROGRAMMING (Louis Gibbs) Yes we can but hope. Good write.
  November 15th, 2017 02:58
• ARTIST (Michael Edwards) Good work Over both mediums One look removes Doubts from the mind
  November 15th, 2017 02:58
• Tears of Thorns (WL Schuett) Wonderful write WL.
  November 15th, 2017 02:55
• CELL PHONE INTRUDER (Lasergraph) Great write and I just laughed out loud - thank you. I used to work in...
  November 15th, 2017 02:34
• Cloud (M.E.M.) Good write, you always look beautiful floating in the sky.
  November 15th, 2017 02:31
• Reigning Rhapsody (Orchidee) Only one word to say Orchi - Alleluia.
  November 15th, 2017 02:30
• My Purpose (Christina8) Good write and you will be back on top and then be able to take everything...
  November 15th, 2017 02:29
• Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful write with fabulous imagery Fay.
  November 15th, 2017 02:05
• 1 Year Anniversary on MPS (Poetboy123) Very good write and very true, it is OPS not MPS. Congratulations on your...
  November 15th, 2017 02:00
• The Other (Drewp) Very good write and so true. Our \'altered states\' are there every day. ...
  November 15th, 2017 01:56
• A N G E L A ~ Country Girl ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) So there are three of you, Brian, Angela and Al Fresco, eh? Good nature...
  November 14th, 2017 03:35
• I Got Me A Woman. (Wallace) Good write, may happiness reign in your life.
  November 14th, 2017 02:34
• ARRIVAL OF SPRING (Michael Edwards) Good write but we have the joy of winter to come first. I do hope that...
  November 14th, 2017 02:33
• For You (PoeticPsycho) Serenity can be found in many places, especially within the mind.
  November 14th, 2017 02:26
• Music (Owen Osborne) Good write. Music is part of my life as well, I have been listening to and...
  November 14th, 2017 02:14
• I will always love you! (FredPeyer) Very strong write, I too hope it will be forever.
  November 14th, 2017 02:06
• Dear oldest friend (Poetic Dan) Good strong write, yes love is the better way.
  November 14th, 2017 02:00
• CHRISTMAS And The Mysteries of Life. (Lasergraph) Good nostalgic write.
  November 14th, 2017 01:58
• Persisting Praises (Orchidee) Good hymn Orchi.
  November 14th, 2017 01:55
• I\'ve Never Told (Christina8) Very strong write, I hope al, is well in your life now,
  November 13th, 2017 09:15
• When Frankenstein Played God. (Kevin browne) Good write, the book is actually about a sad love story.
  November 13th, 2017 09:14
• C H R I S T M A S ! A Flow Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good fun write.
  November 13th, 2017 09:00
• Silent Music. (Fay Slimm.) That silent mood of flowers can awe inspiring, like this poem.
  November 13th, 2017 08:58
• THE RING (Michael Edwards) Clever write Michael. Like the painting as well, is its title \"Blocked...
  November 13th, 2017 02:15
• Favorite Word (M.E.M.) Good write and very true, we all need hope.
  November 13th, 2017 02:14
• Affliction Assistance (Orchidee) Yet another good write Orchi.
  November 13th, 2017 02:13
• Dave (Syd) Wonderful write and tribute for one of life\'s obviously beautiful human...
  November 13th, 2017 02:01
• Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful write, it is so wonderful when the fruits collected from the...
  November 13th, 2017 01:40
• Fall Guy. (Wallace) That happens in relationships sometimes but the one for us all is out...
  November 12th, 2017 02:03
• Writer\'s Block (Christina8) Well your block seems to have disappeared with this poem Christine.
  November 12th, 2017 01:59
• Nothing Is Forever Dead (StrayBray Jaramillo) Very true, the spirit of all lives on forever.
  November 12th, 2017 01:58
• WITHOUT EXCUSE (Michael Edwards) I like these Michael, especially the third one. Love the abstract,...
  November 12th, 2017 01:57
• TAPS~24 notes (Laura🌻) Good write and tribute.
  November 12th, 2017 01:13
• Victory (Poetboy123) Good positive write, those falls we have in life add to our experience for...
  November 12th, 2017 01:12
• Remembrance Reconcilings (Orchidee) Very good hymn Orchi.
  November 12th, 2017 01:10
• Melting (M.E.M.) Good write, that painting is iconic in the movement of time. His other...
  November 12th, 2017 01:08
• Russian Rulette (Syd) Very strong and powerful write, the dark web is so dangerous.
  November 12th, 2017 01:06
• SEASONS OF THANKSGIVING ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good write and message for a glorious celebration.
  November 12th, 2017 01:04
• Never Forget. (Fay Slimm.) Very good write, indeed let us remember.
  November 12th, 2017 01:02
• Cindy (FredPeyer) Very good write, the goodness of people is on the inside not the image...
  November 11th, 2017 01:28
• Balloons Filled With Heartbeats (Kevin browne) Wonderful love filled write Kevin.
  November 11th, 2017 01:26
• The Dream? (Vidal.mg) This could apply to the UK as well. Good write and welcome to MPS.
  November 11th, 2017 01:24
• Where Did you go...Daddy? (Magenta1) Very fine tribute.
  November 11th, 2017 01:23
• Why must your smile go? (Visirum) Good emotive write. Welcome to MPS.
  November 11th, 2017 01:20
• Our Country\'s Best: A Veterans Day Tribute (Rrodriguez) A good tribute to all who served. Today in the UK it is Remembrance Day...
  November 11th, 2017 01:18
• Friendship Fondness (Orchidee) Amen.
  November 11th, 2017 01:14
• The Peasants Must Pay (Syd) Very true write syd, the politicians are only in politics to see what they...
  November 10th, 2017 09:11
• In Flanders Field The Mothers Stand. (Flossy) Good write and tribute to all mothers who have lost their sons (and...
  November 10th, 2017 09:08
• Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.) Yet another wonderful write with great imagery.
  November 10th, 2017 09:04
• FUSION ON FLOWER ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good acrostic Brian.
  November 10th, 2017 02:52
• THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards) The mermaids draw you into a compelling way of life. Good write Michael.
  November 10th, 2017 02:50
• Star Walk (Wallace) Good positive write, may your walk never end.
  November 10th, 2017 02:35
• Life is a Mess (FredPeyer) Super write, your imagination seems to have given you a great party.
  November 10th, 2017 02:33
• my place in nothing (Frank Prem) Stars are the holes in heavens floor.
  November 10th, 2017 02:31