Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- Skank (Jabberwocky)
Very sad but extremely emotive write.
October 18th, 2017 07:58 - somehow something (Dusk arising)
Wonderful write, sometimes that glue that holds you together just stays so...
October 18th, 2017 07:56 - One more Night (FredPeyer)
Good write with a very surprising last line.
October 18th, 2017 07:34 - in blue (Frank Prem)
Very good loving write.
October 18th, 2017 01:39 - False Origins (Maddy Daltrey)
All the time you write poems like this you will never be alone.
October 18th, 2017 01:37 - TOO BAD (Louis Gibbs)
You have created this poem, good write.
October 18th, 2017 01:34 - The Muse Unrehearsed (Kurt Philip Behm)
The Muse unrehearsed is so right, I sit down to write with an idea in my...
October 18th, 2017 01:27 - Towards the Sea (Maddy Daltrey)
Very good write Maddy.
October 18th, 2017 01:22 - Last Act (Mugsdaddy)
This is a great right with an unanswerable question.
Suicide is such a...
October 18th, 2017 01:00 - In The Still Of The Night (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Very loving write from a very loving man.
October 18th, 2017 00:54 - Never a doubt (WL Schuett)
Very loving write and knowing who will be with you forever is a great...
October 18th, 2017 00:52 - Confident Compendium (Orchidee)
Yes All Saints is the Oarish Church and I have said intercaesiions in...
October 17th, 2017 08:32 - My Heart Aches When You\'re Gone (Christina8)
Beautiful write showing how wonderful you and your family show each other...
October 17th, 2017 08:23 - Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful positive write Fay.
October 17th, 2017 08:19 - Listening deep down (Poetic Dan)
Good write and like Fred got confused by the lobster lesson.
October 17th, 2017 02:59 - Virgin White Sheet (FredPeyer)
May those hot kisses of letters be back with us soon Fred. Enjoy your time...
October 17th, 2017 02:05 - B I R D S ~ An Homacrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write, I have seen all those birds.
October 17th, 2017 02:03 - Ink, Pastel and Water (Frank Prem)
An art lesson in poetry, thank you Frank and thank you for the...
October 17th, 2017 01:27 - About Time. (Wallace)
Tick Tock time is always ahead of us.
October 17th, 2017 01:06 - Change (Kjholloway)
New life is always ahead of you and it may be found in an unexpected way. ...
October 17th, 2017 00:52 - Lies (Tristan Robert Lange)
Good write. The problem with lies is that you need to remember which one...
October 17th, 2017 00:50 - Moments (Bing)
Good positive write. Enjoy each moment, they are all special.
October 17th, 2017 00:48 - Time Stands Still (Poetboy123)
Strong write and could be so true. We were all worried that this may have...
October 17th, 2017 00:45 - Stand (Tia Davis/テイア)
Stand tall Tia your life ahead will be filled with wonder.
October 17th, 2017 00:36 - Your Worth (Christina8)
Wonderful love filled write, may your love go on forever.
October 17th, 2017 00:34 - Barriers (M.E.M.)
Good positive write. Welcome to MPS.
October 17th, 2017 00:28 - I love those random memories (Rrodriguez)
Good write and the succinct way of showing episodes in your life works so...
October 17th, 2017 00:25 - Breaking Free (WL Schuett)
Wonderful tale of breaking free and finding oneself within...
October 17th, 2017 00:21 - TIME TRIAL (Gayathri Priya)
Time is there for all of us.
I hope you weren\'t late!
Welcome to MPS.
October 17th, 2017 00:16 - Rest Resolvings (Orchidee)
Another good hymn Orchi.
October 16th, 2017 08:12 - YOU. (Fay Slimm.)
Once more a beautiful write Fay.
October 16th, 2017 08:08 - Bury The Hatchet (LukeCoomer)
Very strong write, that last line was full of passion.
October 16th, 2017 08:06 - THE LOVE OF GOD (BRIAN & ANGELA)
God\'s love is always with us.
October 16th, 2017 08:03 - Cold To Warm. (Wallace)
Good write, your soul can always be warmed.
October 16th, 2017 01:55 - Rose Petals (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Beautiful, your guide will be with you forever.
October 16th, 2017 01:23 - Zlata\'s Daughter (Frank Prem)
Wow! What a very moving write. What is wrong with this world where so many...
October 16th, 2017 01:21 - New Start (FredPeyer)
Beautiful love lorn write Fred.
October 16th, 2017 01:18 - THEY SAY (Louis Gibbs)
Now is so important, grab every moment, they are wonderful. Good write...
October 16th, 2017 01:10 - They Will Be Different (John Prophet)
Very true in many respects it is what learning and change is all about but...
October 16th, 2017 01:07 - Too Blue (Mugsdaddy)
Good fun write, all colours are to wonder at.
October 16th, 2017 01:02 - Brother in the Swimming Pool (Caleb)
Good write, we all need to be able to swim on our own in this life....
October 16th, 2017 01:00 - stronghold (Heather T)
Very good write. Welcome back Heather.
October 16th, 2017 00:59 - Carried (Louise Knight)
Good strong write, you have the will to drive yourself on forever.
October 16th, 2017 00:50 - Appointed Anointings (Orchidee)
Our Minister yesterday kept on about political themes in the world, it was...
October 16th, 2017 00:43 - Owl-Sound. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good write once more Fay. Owls are wonderful creatures.
October 16th, 2017 00:30 - Elephant In The Room (LukeCoomer)
Whether you believe or not is never an issue with me, we all go our own...
October 15th, 2017 03:05 - All of the Above (FredPeyer)
Superb Fred, my heart is there for all.
October 15th, 2017 02:39 - THE POETRY OF JESUS ~ A Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write, and yes I read the Bible and have read the NIV from beginning...
October 15th, 2017 02:38 - With You--Pt.2 (Christina8)
Very good loving write.
October 15th, 2017 01:12 - The Dark Abyss (Kurt Philip Behm)
Super write, may the light always be there to light the way.
October 15th, 2017 01:11 - Freedom Foundings (Orchidee)
Of course it can be.
October 15th, 2017 00:55 - Traumatic Childhood Memory (Prose Poem) (Rrodriguez)
Very brave write, but it is what writing can do, in may ways it can...
October 15th, 2017 00:55 - Your wee mate (Renzi)
Well your words are still there Renzi, i sincerely hope that we will be...
October 15th, 2017 00:49 - Raising the Bar (FredPeyer)
Good thought provoking write Fred.
October 15th, 2017 00:47 - OH MY ! POETIC SIDE ~ A 2 2 6 4 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write about a good site.
October 15th, 2017 00:43 - COASTAL EROSION ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Welcome back Brian. a very true write.
October 14th, 2017 01:27 - I don\'t believe what I believe (Poetic Dan)
Good write. I do agree with Fred though, in my mind I am still thirty...
October 14th, 2017 01:18 - The Tale of Franken-Beaver (Happy Halloween) (Mugsdaddy)
I did tell you that Franken-beaver was my favourite, you have now...
October 14th, 2017 01:00 - Restoring Reassurance (Orchidee)
Well written hymn Orchi.
October 14th, 2017 00:38 - Rise Above (Christina8)
Good strong write, go forward with confidence.
October 13th, 2017 08:08 - Lightning Won\'t Strike (Poetboy123)
Very good write.
October 13th, 2017 08:07 - In The Making. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful start to the symphony of craftmanship.
October 13th, 2017 08:06 - unravelling after (Frank Prem)
This happens to many of us.
October 13th, 2017 08:04 - Together Again (FredPeyer)
Wonderful loving write Fred, love \'the garden of memories\' it brings...
October 13th, 2017 01:00 - THE CURSE OF AWARENESS (Louis Gibbs)
That \'peace\' within oneself can be hard to reach but in life we just...
October 13th, 2017 00:55 - Thank you for the support (Poetic Dan)
Very good write and well done at the open mike night.
October 13th, 2017 00:28 - #34 (PACollin)
Good write, the streams of first love combine in your souls and you sail...
October 13th, 2017 00:25 - The Angry Cow (Tony36)
Good fun write.
October 13th, 2017 00:23 - Windowless House (WL Schuett)
Very good emotion laden write, I do hope that the windows can be...
October 13th, 2017 00:21 - Lord Of All (Orchidee)
Amen.
October 13th, 2017 00:16 - God\'s Sense of Humour. (Goldfinch60)
If I have put a smile on your face my day has been a good one. Thank you...
October 12th, 2017 08:39 - Dark Delight. (Fay Slimm.)
Another one of your beautiful writes Fay.
October 12th, 2017 08:05 - There Be Monsters (John Prophet)
The only monsters we need to be worried by are the politicians.
October 12th, 2017 08:03 - difficult departure (Frank Prem)
Superb write, so very emotive.
October 12th, 2017 08:00 - The End. (Wallace)
He may well have been sick but help is there, why kill innocent people.
October 12th, 2017 00:48 - Santi\'s Halloween Forest (Happy Halloween) (Mugsdaddy)
Good fun write and yes we asked for it.
October 12th, 2017 00:46 - Chess Board (SomethingStrange)
Very good write, it says a great deal about life. Welcome to MPS.
October 12th, 2017 00:41 - Where Have I Gone.. (P.H.Rose)
Very strong write, my wife has dementia and it is such a life changing...
October 12th, 2017 00:38 - FLUFFY BUNNIES (Mugsdaddy)
Good write with a great last line, we must all take time to play - even...
October 12th, 2017 00:36 - Live again (Hopey_xx)
Very good and very true. Feeling is life.
October 12th, 2017 00:23 - walk in the woods (Tony36)
A walk in the woods can be so uplifting as is this write.
October 12th, 2017 00:23 - Praise Plenitudes (Orchidee)
Good hymn Orchi.
October 12th, 2017 00:20 - Humanism And Spiritualism (John Prophet)
We each find our own way towards our God but some just disagree and will...
October 12th, 2017 00:18 - Halloween Will Soon Be Here (Christina8)
I keep falling off my broomstick!
October 11th, 2017 08:09 - This Too. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write. May your love go on towards eternity.
October 11th, 2017 08:08 - Who Needs Sleeping Pills. (Wallace)
Very good write, I normally sleep well until that elusive muse calls me at...
October 11th, 2017 01:11 - White Lie (FredPeyer)
Good write, the problem with lying is that you have to remember which lie...
October 11th, 2017 01:10 - THE MERRY-GO-ROUND (Louis Gibbs)
That Merry-go-round is our life and it doesn\'t necessarily go round in...
October 11th, 2017 01:07 - \"Untitled\" (Swavey)
That one person can bring you out from the depths in which you find...
October 11th, 2017 01:04 - A poet in an all nite cafe (WL Schuett)
Very good emotive write, those people who have never written a verse can...
October 11th, 2017 00:49 - Deliverance Days (Orchidee)
Another good one Orchi.
October 11th, 2017 00:45 - Perception. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you Malu, we must see ourselves first.
October 10th, 2017 08:17 - All seasons (Malubotelho)
Super write Malu.
October 10th, 2017 08:13 - With You (Christina8)
Good loving write, may your life together remain constant and happy.
October 10th, 2017 08:12 - Playing At Love. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write with very sound advice Fay.
October 10th, 2017 08:05 - Eavesdropping On Myself (Kurt Philip Behm)
Those memories can be so enduring, may they bring you happiness.
October 10th, 2017 00:52 - Still House (FredPeyer)
I do hope this is not true, it is a very powerful write Fred.
October 10th, 2017 00:49 - Disruption (John Prophet)
Good write and very true, the hatches will need to be firmly battened
October 10th, 2017 00:47 - Reading Glasses On. (Wallace)
Choice is always with us and I chose to read this delightful poem.
October 10th, 2017 00:43 - Recognition (FredPeyer)
Very good write. There are many wonderful experiences in our past lives...
October 10th, 2017 00:36
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