Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60

• THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM (Louis Gibbs) Data exists. Good write, A-I is with us and will be teaching us before...
  October 2nd, 2017 01:27
• The Phone (FredPeyer) Very good loving write, glad it was in your mind though Fred.
  October 2nd, 2017 01:24
• The Pack (WL Schuett) Wonderful write, beautiful painting, both are so very meaningful.
  October 2nd, 2017 01:15
• Come Sleep, Oh Sleep (Rrodriguez) Good write very well formed.
  October 2nd, 2017 01:13
• In The Garden (DeviLove) Very good write, the beauty of your garden is shown the words written, the...
  October 2nd, 2017 01:12
• Definition Of Beauty - Jaylan E. Mitchell (Jaylan eneva) Good write, your beauty shines within your words. Welcome to MPS.
  October 2nd, 2017 01:09
• Travelling On Trusting (Orchidee) Another good write Orchi.
  October 2nd, 2017 01:00
• An Apology (Edward Charles McDevitt) It is good that you write on this site, I do try to comment on poems, I...
  October 2nd, 2017 00:59
• A Place For Animals (W c) Good write and I would wish it was so but homo sapiens is so greedy that...
  October 2nd, 2017 00:47
• Advancing. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful write as usual Fay, my favourite time of the year.
  October 2nd, 2017 00:46
• GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Amen Brian, Amen indeed.
  October 2nd, 2017 00:38
• THE TEMPTRESS (Michael Edwards) Good write, repetitions always work well in poetry.
  October 1st, 2017 01:11
• You Touched Me (Ron parrish aka wordman) Beautiful loving write Ron.
  October 1st, 2017 01:09
• Please tell me (Rrodriguez) Beautiful lovelorn write Roberto.
  October 1st, 2017 01:00
• National Parks (W c) Good write, the National Parks in the UK are very special places as well....
  October 1st, 2017 00:59
• Salvation Sensitivity (Orchidee) Amen.
  October 1st, 2017 00:57
• MULTITASKING (Michael Edwards) Oh dear Michael, you have really opened a can of worms here. As I have...
  September 30th, 2017 01:24
• Musings (FredPeyer) Good write, never thought of each day being my last day but I do treat...
  September 30th, 2017 01:20
• CHILLY WRITING DAY (Lasergraph) So very true, ideas in your mind change as the words go onto the page. ...
  September 30th, 2017 01:12
• The Creature (Tony36) Very good write. It is OK I will not be around your way tonight so you...
  September 30th, 2017 01:10
• Aubode (Rrodriguez) Super write, the mornings in the UK are not the same but to me that are...
  September 30th, 2017 01:08
• Love theatre 🎭 (Malubotelho) Good write, may that theatre of love continue to flourish.
  September 30th, 2017 01:05
• Wooden Music (WL Schuett) Super write, making music together is wonderful and must be all the better...
  September 30th, 2017 00:59
• Mississippi Kite (W c) Good write. Watching raptors is wonderful. I had the experience of a days...
  September 30th, 2017 00:54
• Sing-song Serenadings (Orchidee) Yes I was singing to his Praises last night as I will do on Sunday which...
  September 30th, 2017 00:51
• Clipped Wings (Christina8) Very good and powerful write but be assured your wings are free now and...
  September 30th, 2017 00:49
• Music Melody (GeraldineTaylor) Clever write about my favourite form of art.
  September 29th, 2017 02:53
• Extravagance. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful fruit filled write. I can remember gathering blackberries and...
  September 29th, 2017 02:26
• SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) This really took me back, I was an analytical chemist at the start of my...
  September 29th, 2017 02:24
• Forever Lost *Senryu* (Veil loreraven) Good write but strictly speaking this is a senryu. Haikus refer to...
  September 29th, 2017 02:18
• Prime Time. (Wallace) I too am up at 6 in the morning, the best time of the day.
  September 29th, 2017 01:40
• REFLECTED EDONE (Michael Edwards) Clever write Michael.
  September 29th, 2017 01:38
• PASSING THROUGH (Louis Gibbs) We all have our travels to continue and we all have pauses but some of...
  September 29th, 2017 01:36
• Don’t Postpone Joy (Rrodriguez) Wonferfully positive and joyful write.
  September 29th, 2017 01:25
• I Want to Love Him (Katy S.) Good but very sad write.
  September 28th, 2017 08:28
• A bird told me 🐦 (Malubotelho) Good write, I feed the birds and occasionally they eat from my hand, but...
  September 28th, 2017 08:28
• Faithful Favourings (Orchidee) Thank the Lord indeed, amen.
  September 28th, 2017 08:25
• Drama (Christina8) Love is the best cure all any of us can have, good write.
  September 28th, 2017 08:24
• Wild and Crazy World (Poetboy123) All you or any of us can do is move on fearlessly in humility.
  September 28th, 2017 08:22
• Horizon (Jabberwocky) Good positive write Jabberwocky.
  September 28th, 2017 08:16
• FUSIONS 3 (Michael Edwards) Good fun write. I often tell people not to thunk as it is dangerous.
  September 28th, 2017 01:46
• TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Some good writes but I would disagree with \'amicable divorce\' I am...
  September 28th, 2017 01:44
• Sand Crabs (FredPeyer) Very good write and good advice, without the risks we would not move...
  September 28th, 2017 01:39
• Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.) Good write, the souls fuse into one with all true lovers.
  September 28th, 2017 01:30
• PHOTOS OF LIFE (Lasergraph) Good write. Yes it is true that we photograph the happy times and when we...
  September 28th, 2017 00:59
• A Writers Life (FredPeyer) Super write, as we write our words that bike will take us on a journey of...
  September 28th, 2017 00:57
• Midnite Paddle (WL Schuett) What a wonderful write! \"where the river collides with the sky\" is a...
  September 28th, 2017 00:43
• Journeying Joys (Orchidee) Another good write Orchi.
  September 28th, 2017 00:40
• Make My Heart Sing (Christina8) Good write, we all go through pain but that pain can lead to new wonders...
  September 28th, 2017 00:37
• Just Because (Poetboy123) Good positive write, face those challenges with faith and they will become...
  September 28th, 2017 00:35
• A Handfull Of Harry (Deano) Good write. We should not judge children, or anyone, without knowing them...
  September 28th, 2017 00:30
• KING TUT (David Grubb) Good fun write David.
  September 28th, 2017 00:28
• 101 (Poetic Dan) Very good write and very true, we must all move forward in our lives.
  September 28th, 2017 00:27
• FUSIONS 2 (Michael Edwards) And what is wrong with another glass of red!
  September 27th, 2017 01:14
• A Something. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful poem about a beautiful bird which is the smallest bird in the
  September 27th, 2017 01:13
• Broken Pond (Poetboy123) Good write, may your walk with life never falter.
  September 27th, 2017 00:58
• Thirsty 💉 (Malubotelho) This is a very good write, your son is a poet, he may deny it but things...
  September 27th, 2017 00:57
• Joe (John Prophet) We will certainly meet, Joe. Good write.
  September 27th, 2017 00:53
• HERMAN AND BIG E (Lasergraph) Super tribute, his passion will be there for eternity.
  September 27th, 2017 00:51
• UGLY MIND, UGLY HEART (Chinaaliciarivera) Very good and very strong write. Being from the UK I do have my views...
  September 27th, 2017 00:49
• Time now? (Clock King) Time is measured in moments and each moment is special and should be...
  September 27th, 2017 00:38
• Dawns Piper (WL Schuett) Beautiful write may the pipers never stop playing.
  September 27th, 2017 00:33
• Righteous Renderings (Orchidee) Amen.
  September 26th, 2017 08:13
• Adrenaline--Part 2 (Christina8) Wonderful sequel and righting a wrong.
  September 26th, 2017 08:11
• Turbulence. (Fay Slimm.) I was by that sea Fay. Thank you for taking me there.
  September 26th, 2017 08:07
• FROM FUSIONS 1 (Michael Edwards) Good write with great visualisation.
  September 26th, 2017 01:25
• MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good write and tribute Brian, I have listened to all classical composers...
  September 26th, 2017 01:23
• Empathy (FredPeyer) Beautiful write Fred.
  September 26th, 2017 01:16
• Dancing with the Moon (Thoughtstream) Beautiful write. The moon is so inspiring. Welcome to MPS.
  September 26th, 2017 01:15
• Seeing (FredPeyer) Very good write and so true, we must not just look but see, we must not...
  September 26th, 2017 01:08
• NEVER (Lasergraph) Such an emotive write, losing a child is so painful.
  September 26th, 2017 01:05
• The Alley (WL Schuett) Good write. If we do go down that alley, which many of us do, and come...
  September 26th, 2017 00:53
• Life is rhythm (Malubotelho) Good write, yes we do need to keep going but time for ourselves is always...
  September 26th, 2017 00:50
• Simplicity Seekers (Orchidee) So it was KP in your mind back in 1066, I knew she was back in the camp...
  September 26th, 2017 00:48
• Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60) Thank you Fred, you are so kind.
  September 25th, 2017 12:47
• Dark Comfort. (Goldfinch60) Thank you Malu, it is not cold yet, mind you I do not feel the cold, I...
  September 25th, 2017 12:44
• What a wonderful time (Renzi) You obviously had a great time, you didn\'t bring back any sun for the...
  September 25th, 2017 08:10
• Adrenaline--Part 1 (Christina8) Another super write, great twist.
  September 25th, 2017 08:08
• TEN POLITICAL OXYMORONS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good ones Brian. Real truth = more lies.
  September 25th, 2017 08:02
• Not Yet.. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful emotive write Fay.
  September 25th, 2017 07:59
• Shining Light. (Wallace) Beautiful write Wallace.
  September 25th, 2017 00:52
• IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards) Clever write Michael with very good words.
  September 25th, 2017 00:51
• THE BETWEEN (Louis Gibbs) Those gaps are there for us to fill with a meaningful life. Good write.
  September 25th, 2017 00:49
• From the unknown (Poetic Dan) Good write, music has always been in my soul, it is so important to me...
  September 25th, 2017 00:42
• Communing Contemplations 2 (Orchidee) Another good one Orchi.
  September 25th, 2017 00:40
• Fall From Grace (Christina8) Metre is not required in a poem as good as this one.
  September 25th, 2017 00:33
• He played as a monster (Malubotelho) Out of this trauma has risen an extremely strong lady who can face the...
  September 25th, 2017 00:31
• Storm (Dusk arising) Such a wonderful write, I was with you all the way, even though I don\'t...
  September 25th, 2017 00:19
• Mind Games (FredPeyer) Very true, the house always wins. Good write.
  September 24th, 2017 02:32
• OUT OF THE IVORY PALACES (BRIAN & ANGELA) Amen.
  September 24th, 2017 02:31
• Addiction. (Fay Slimm.) Another beautiful write Fay.
  September 24th, 2017 01:34
• DORCAS (Michael Edwards) Was this one of those meetings where you take minutes and waste...
  September 24th, 2017 00:55
• Two Smiles (FredPeyer) Smiles are so important in our lives and makes people react in a positive...
  September 24th, 2017 00:51
• Seeds And Sowing (Orchidee) Good write. so many Pratt Green hymns in our hymnbook, we sing many of...
  September 24th, 2017 00:44
• About sex and orgasm (Malubotelho) Good write. I agree with what Fred has said, it is making love that is...
  September 24th, 2017 00:40
• She Saved Me (Mugsdaddy) Very good write, loved the ending.
  September 24th, 2017 00:33
• No More.. (Fay Slimm.) Very good write showing the sadness and horror that war can bring to all....
  September 24th, 2017 00:31
• SAY IT WITH FLOWERS ~ Collaboration ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good colourful write.
  September 24th, 2017 00:27
• FIRST LOVE (Michael Edwards) Super write. Innocence lost.
  September 23rd, 2017 00:41
• Too Many Cooks (W c) Yes, I can get salad right - sometimes.
  September 23rd, 2017 00:39