Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Ooh Ironing! (Goldfinch60)
I have found the secret. Dont buy clothes which need ironing,
Anyway...
January 23rd, 2020 05:11 - HE (Michael Edwards)
Seeing that title HE took me straight back to childhood vision of the top...
January 23rd, 2020 05:09 - A memory (Nemo)
A tale of haunting and regret i sense. More here than meets the eye and...
January 22nd, 2020 13:56 - A Given Day. (Fay Slimm.)
Your old friend sounds a real treasure. Your words today brought some of...
January 22nd, 2020 11:32 - Forest of Dean. (Goldfinch60)
The forest, as locals call it, is a vast wonderland of variety. Lots to...
January 22nd, 2020 02:44 - Welcome to Far Town (Aa Harvey)
Striking out at christianity\'s deaf ears eh? A doomsday warning for any...
January 21st, 2020 15:06 - Where Humility Is Needed (PotbellyPleb)
This dude was definitely \'fly\'.
January 21st, 2020 13:11 - Twisted Ears (PotbellyPleb)
OK \'big ears\' I really enjoyed this. It\'s the third piece of yours i...
January 21st, 2020 13:09 - A Mother\'s View (PotbellyPleb)
Love the way you\'ve chosen to present this \'conversational...
January 21st, 2020 13:06 - The Shore (PotbellyPleb)
To read you is delightful!
Firstly i read your accompanying words which...
January 21st, 2020 13:03 - Stars (Nemo)
That is a pearl of a poem. Well written sir!
January 21st, 2020 12:55 - WINTER WONDERLAND ๐งก ANGELA & BRIAN ๐ FIVE FROSTY HAIKU ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love the picture of ice sculpture.
Had to highlight your words to read...
January 21st, 2020 12:50 - The Day Started Well. (Goldfinch60)
Not since i was a youngster have i been able to turn the radio on and...
January 21st, 2020 06:13 - For you & me (Poetic Dan)
LOL at \'choose to exist\'. Does someone give us a choice.
The real...
January 21st, 2020 06:08 - I Remember (Blstrickla42)
Nicely woven piece about how some of life\'s misfortunes resolve...
January 20th, 2020 09:12 - We There. (Fay Slimm.)
The wonderful thing which love is creates a treasure within us which,...
January 20th, 2020 07:57 - Not all things have to be faced, some is here to teach a different race (Poetic Dan)
Demons will never leave you Dan so the thing is to come to terms with...
January 20th, 2020 04:01 - You Stopped By (SheWasTheSun)
May she come again into those dreams.
A delight to read.
January 20th, 2020 01:50 - The crippling act of conformity (ThomasMikaelson 15)
Be what you are and say shit to conformity. Yes, be brave enough to ask...
January 19th, 2020 18:58 - Living (Blstrickla42)
A lesson in self healing of a poet. Should life ever strike you another...
January 19th, 2020 18:54 - Rivering. (Fay Slimm.)
The magic of naturally flowing water.
Taken to the bank upon your words...
January 19th, 2020 18:45 - Bright side (Poetic Dan)
Your youngest is absolutely adorable Dan.
We are all part-timers i think...
January 19th, 2020 07:14 - Sunny, Frosty Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Did it take you back to the days when mum used to send you off to school...
January 19th, 2020 07:09 - You Never Know (UnknownSV)
Beautifully written gentle piece about an awful ordeal.
You are truly...
January 18th, 2020 09:23 - Unanswered. (Goldfinch60)
Some questions we ask cannot be answered, but a faith in something more...
January 18th, 2020 09:20 - THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (7) (Michael Edwards)
Draw blood. It puts a passion into your work.
January 18th, 2020 09:16 - Challenge. (Fay Slimm.)
Let us not judge him/her by the goals he/she achieved but rather by the...
January 16th, 2020 14:02 - Grave Walking. (Goldfinch60)
I cant help but see the funny side of this.... what on earth are they...
January 16th, 2020 13:57 - THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (6) (Michael Edwards)
Made me think of the contrast between jazz musicians and classically...
January 16th, 2020 13:50 - Paths in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Full marks to you on this as I know how earnest you are in this.
Good to...
January 14th, 2020 07:22 - Mushrooms Again. (Goldfinch60)
Thats an old favourite and even though i knew the punch line it brought a...
January 13th, 2020 04:13 - THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (3&4) (Michael Edwards)
Oh so true are your words of learned wisdom today. I wish more of our mps...
January 13th, 2020 04:11 - Wholesome Waiting (Orchidee)
She stood on the bridge at midnite
the sea was all a quivver
she gave a...
January 12th, 2020 07:03 - Wholesome Waiting (Orchidee)
She stood on the bridge at midnite
the sea was all a quivver
she gave a...
January 12th, 2020 06:53 - I\'m In Love At Last. (Kevin browne)
Bright cheerful and positive romantic piece from you today. A virtual...
January 12th, 2020 05:12 - The Innocence of Childhood. (Goldfinch60)
The child within just needs waking up sometimes but i think its always...
January 12th, 2020 05:09 - Maybe (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Nice one. The elusive Miss Right of our dreams ... where is she?
Superb...
January 11th, 2020 14:18 - Maybe (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Nice one. The elusive Miss Right of our dreams ... where is she?
Superb...
January 11th, 2020 13:17 - absent (Brittany Jo)
Sad but very well composed. Short and punchy! just how i like them.
January 11th, 2020 04:10 - An Unhappy New Year to All! (Orchidee)
Is it \'waggly tail\' or \'waggedy tail\' in the song?
January 11th, 2020 04:08 - Shining on My Life. Senryu (Goldfinch60)
Long may you feel the glow Goldfinch.
January 11th, 2020 04:04 - THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (1) (Michael Edwards)
Those hints are intriguing. Letting the viewer/reader complete the...
January 11th, 2020 04:02 - BREXIT HAS BEEN DONE ๐งก ANGELA & BRIAN ๐ A DENOUMENT ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Did you forget that we brits were Europeans long before the EEC or common...
January 10th, 2020 12:02 - True Love Never to be (Salem_B911)
Good stuff but.... This deserves to be more than one poem because it...
January 10th, 2020 11:56 - Drifting curse (812Uknow)
The first four lines of this are brilliant. From there onward i got lost....
January 10th, 2020 11:50 - Burned bridges (Nemo)
You may let them go consciously but there will be subconscious memory...
January 10th, 2020 05:58 - Folly (Fay Slimm.)
A fine message today.
If only mans macho, vengeful nature would not...
January 10th, 2020 05:55 - Stitched (Poetic Dan)
That rhythm is in you m8 and it\'ll stay there.
January 10th, 2020 05:48 - Another New Day. (Goldfinch60)
Its a lovely day indeed. It\'s today and i\'m living it! Although i have...
January 10th, 2020 05:46 - Missing teen (Poetic Dan)
So sad Dan.... One wonders all sorts of things when this happens. Too...
January 9th, 2020 12:52 - IF. (Fay Slimm.)
This is quite beautiful Fay. You have found words to describe the...
January 9th, 2020 12:48 - Time? (Goldfinch60)
Indeed where does the time go. Seems to me that the older you get the...
January 9th, 2020 12:41 - TOLD ONCE (Michael Edwards)
That\'s clever stuff without doubt.
January 9th, 2020 12:39 - No faith in love (Aa Harvey)
A sorrowful read. Love can be a lot more than the romantic kind of love...
January 8th, 2020 13:28 - Battle. (Fay Slimm.)
And now you bring us the goddess of the sun as she slips into her night...
January 8th, 2020 06:03 - #poetrycommunityofig (Poetic Dan)
Great analogy you make there Dan. All our moods and efforts and...
January 8th, 2020 04:58 - Buzzard. (Goldfinch60)
LOL are u sure you\'d like to be a buzzard? Shall i bang a nail into the...
January 8th, 2020 04:11 - Thoughts... (Broken_kingdom)
Distressing to read this. Keep writing, letting all out. For me becoming a...
January 8th, 2020 00:09 - Alone Am I Amongst The Twilight Trees (UnderTheGreenLeaves)
Wow! This was really enjoyable to read. Very entertaining and you quite...
January 7th, 2020 18:28 - Life and Love (Kingdaniel)
Often we start out following a well trodden road only to become...
January 7th, 2020 18:23 - Wait! (Poetic Dan)
Once again a superb video and great Acid Jazz sounds.
Your short piece...
January 7th, 2020 18:18 - Chance. (Fay Slimm.)
The thing we oldie singles pretend to fear yet it is inside us crying out...
January 7th, 2020 18:11 - Life Changes. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful positive spiritual feel in your writing today.
Armed with...
January 7th, 2020 18:06 - Perfume and Smoke (DannyBoi)
Fun to read. Your words describe what us men go through thousands and...
January 6th, 2020 13:35 - Restless Feet (Sarahlynne)
Fascinating read about contemporary politics. A certain president comes to...
January 6th, 2020 13:15 - The evil Within (Nemo)
The sooner you can shrug of this religious manifestation of god then the...
January 6th, 2020 13:10 - Alright new year (Poetic Dan)
Firstly, that video is wikkid man and the hip-hop/acid jazz soundtrack...
January 6th, 2020 11:28 - Alright new year (Poetic Dan)
Firstly, that video is wikkid man and the hip-hop/acid jazz soundtrack...
January 6th, 2020 09:00 - Q & A (Aa Harvey)
This is a real thought jerker. Until somebody put the idea of there being...
January 6th, 2020 07:16 - Rose of Paper (A Sonnet) (Alan .S. Jeeves)
You old romantic you. This splendid write is reminiscent of yesteryears...
January 6th, 2020 03:56 - THREE 575s (Michael Edwards)
Three beauties today ME.
I\'m intrigued, how do you get \'other\' colours...
January 6th, 2020 02:56 - Creation Care-Takers (Orchidee)
Who is this lord fellah? Wouldnt u be better off praising the king? Surely...
January 5th, 2020 06:30 - One among many (Poetic Dan)
Learning about yourself is vital information needed to confront inner...
January 5th, 2020 04:33 - One among many (Poetic Dan)
Learning about yourself is vital information needed to confront inner...
January 5th, 2020 04:06 - The Universe Waits. (Goldfinch60)
She is loving you and loving your joy in the life you live.
Love is...
January 5th, 2020 03:02 - -A Stranger Did Come Along- A Bard Song by Under The Green Leaves (UnderTheGreenLeaves)
Fun to read and encouragement to all us writers. There is always someone...
January 4th, 2020 16:59 - Farther From Martyr (Asrealastheycome)
This reads like the tale of one who has been converted by ones own life...
January 4th, 2020 16:57 - Thorns (Aa Harvey)
As one who walked through that door i completely agree.
Life is more...
January 4th, 2020 16:53 - A Day With The Flowers (Vanessa201518)
As we enter our senior years we begin to perceive the world and it\'s...
January 4th, 2020 16:50 - Alone (Nemo)
Thank goodness for the positive human spirit within us all which enables...
January 4th, 2020 10:29 - Early Summer? (Goldfinch60)
Your first three lines made me think I was about to read something bawdy...
January 4th, 2020 10:24 - 575s - ANOTHER BATCH (1) (Michael Edwards)
Moonlight in churchyards brings back many memories. Including the one in...
January 4th, 2020 10:20 - HELD BY ALL (Michael Edwards)
Who is this bright spark?
January 2nd, 2020 12:33 - Words To Music To Words. (Goldfinch60)
For music lubricates our lives.
January 2nd, 2020 02:58 - Devastation (Last Shadow)
With all that behind you its a good job you have a whole new year to look...
January 2nd, 2020 01:12 - Yet an other fling (Nemo)
Yes, you express this well. For me the period was a prequel to abstinence.
January 1st, 2020 14:14 - New Leaves. (Fay Slimm.)
From one fallen leaf to another... this was a pleasure to read and...
January 1st, 2020 14:13 - Into the New Year 2. (Goldfinch60)
I envy you in your spirit of a man who is determined to get as much out of...
January 1st, 2020 14:09 - Happy New Year (Alta H Mabin)
Hopes and dreams, grown and nurtured for years within us, brought to the...
December 31st, 2019 15:47 - Sparkle. (Fay Slimm.)
Could any night be darker when the chilled air is charged with expectation...
December 31st, 2019 09:40 - Known stranger (Nemo)
I had a similar experience divided by thirty years.
Yes you capture the...
December 31st, 2019 04:11 - Last Breath. (Goldfinch60)
You have shown us such beauty in your words leading to this time. I know...
December 31st, 2019 04:08 - Waiting Together. (Goldfinch60)
This is so sad my friend. Revealing of how this beautiful life, this...
December 30th, 2019 08:46 - The New Watch. (Goldfinch60)
Life goes on and the things our generation took for granted are out of...
December 29th, 2019 06:39 - Once I declared, now I dedicate (Poetic Dan)
Some flowers begin life buried in a very dark place and struggle but find...
December 28th, 2019 12:32 - Back to My River. (Goldfinch60)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m8jDXfybjco
December 27th, 2019 11:48 - The Pain Love Had To Take. (Kevin browne)
A wonderful celebration of the love of life itself and love of the life...
December 22nd, 2019 04:26 - I TOOK HER OUT (Michael Edwards)
A silver bullet saved your life for behind that pout was a set of vampyre...
December 11th, 2019 11:11 - Wonder and Love. (Goldfinch60)
Such times are magic. I\'m sure you\'ve had many of them. They stay with...
December 11th, 2019 11:09 - Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60)
Well said sir! I\'m pretty much of the same opinion.
Some might call us...
December 9th, 2019 18:37
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