Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• A Day With The Flowers (Vanessa201518) As we enter our senior years we begin to perceive the world and it\'s...
  January 4th, 2020 16:50
• Alone (Nemo) Thank goodness for the positive human spirit within us all which enables...
  January 4th, 2020 10:29
• Early Summer? (Goldfinch60) Your first three lines made me think I was about to read something bawdy...
  January 4th, 2020 10:24
• 575s - ANOTHER BATCH (1) (Michael Edwards) Moonlight in churchyards brings back many memories. Including the one in...
  January 4th, 2020 10:20
• HELD BY ALL (Michael Edwards) Who is this bright spark?
  January 2nd, 2020 12:33
• Words To Music To Words. (Goldfinch60) For music lubricates our lives.
  January 2nd, 2020 02:58
• Devastation (Last Shadow) With all that behind you its a good job you have a whole new year to look...
  January 2nd, 2020 01:12
• Yet an other fling (Nemo) Yes, you express this well. For me the period was a prequel to abstinence.
  January 1st, 2020 14:14
• New Leaves. (Fay Slimm.) From one fallen leaf to another... this was a pleasure to read and...
  January 1st, 2020 14:13
• Into the New Year 2. (Goldfinch60) I envy you in your spirit of a man who is determined to get as much out of...
  January 1st, 2020 14:09
• Happy New Year (Alta H Mabin) Hopes and dreams, grown and nurtured for years within us, brought to the...
  December 31st, 2019 15:47
• Sparkle. (Fay Slimm.) Could any night be darker when the chilled air is charged with expectation...
  December 31st, 2019 09:40
• Known stranger (Nemo) I had a similar experience divided by thirty years. Yes you capture the...
  December 31st, 2019 04:11
• Last Breath. (Goldfinch60) You have shown us such beauty in your words leading to this time. I know...
  December 31st, 2019 04:08
• Waiting Together. (Goldfinch60) This is so sad my friend. Revealing of how this beautiful life, this...
  December 30th, 2019 08:46
• The New Watch. (Goldfinch60) Life goes on and the things our generation took for granted are out of...
  December 29th, 2019 06:39
• Once I declared, now I dedicate (Poetic Dan) Some flowers begin life buried in a very dark place and struggle but find...
  December 28th, 2019 12:32
• Back to My River. (Goldfinch60) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m8jDXfybjco
  December 27th, 2019 11:48
• The Pain Love Had To Take. (Kevin browne) A wonderful celebration of the love of life itself and love of the life...
  December 22nd, 2019 04:26
• I TOOK HER OUT (Michael Edwards) A silver bullet saved your life for behind that pout was a set of vampyre...
  December 11th, 2019 11:11
• Wonder and Love. (Goldfinch60) Such times are magic. I\'m sure you\'ve had many of them. They stay with...
  December 11th, 2019 11:09
• Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60) Well said sir! I\'m pretty much of the same opinion. Some might call us...
  December 9th, 2019 18:37
• Foremost. (Fay Slimm.) You have encapsulated many of love\'s wonders here but i feel there\'s one...
  December 9th, 2019 18:31
• Don\'t be long (Poetic Dan) My thoughts are with you and yours Dan. Wishing you all a positive...
  December 9th, 2019 18:27
• UNDIES (3) (Michael Edwards) Whether ironed or wrinkly let me state quite distinctly they should...
  December 6th, 2019 08:56
• Words on the Page. (Goldfinch60) It has been written many times that writing poetry is a kind of self...
  December 6th, 2019 08:53
• Catchtrap. (Fay Slimm.) The hairs on the back of my neck stood on end reading this. What is it...
  December 5th, 2019 04:43
• Doctor Respect. (Goldfinch60) You are a very strong, positive and outwardly brave man Goldfinch. Life...
  December 5th, 2019 04:11
• When life was really child\'s play (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Reads like happy memories of childhood. Sadly several poets on MPS were...
  December 4th, 2019 10:49
• Tortured Mind (Poetic Dan) There will always be scar tissue. Not every day will you see the sun...
  December 4th, 2019 04:17
• Stunning Unique Patterns. (Goldfinch60) Catch it\'s beauty while you can.
  December 4th, 2019 02:40
• UNDIES (2) (Michael Edwards) \'after their sex he felt a little uncertain, no tissues, so he wiped it...
  December 4th, 2019 02:30
• War is Not for Lovers (Neville) Brilliant evocative writing. Hard hitting reality. Each of the thousands...
  November 9th, 2019 15:45
• She is Not There. (Goldfinch60) This really reached deep into me and i feel for your loss. Only your...
  November 5th, 2019 05:06
• Four Letter Words (Neville) Having proved my fecundity i no longer have much use for the word unless...
  October 30th, 2019 16:09
• Adversity Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Cleverly pieced Acrostic Goldfinch.
  October 30th, 2019 04:00
• Soul-beauty. (Fay Slimm.) Where did you get that X-ray picture of my 2nd left top molar? I read...
  October 30th, 2019 03:49
• 3 for 1 because I\'ll never be done (Poetic Dan) I agree with Goldfinch.
  October 30th, 2019 03:44
• Thank God For Poetry (ForeverJesus7) How come i write poetry and publish on here more often than you do and...
  October 29th, 2019 19:52
• Tin Whistle Player. (Goldfinch60) Very relaxing peaceful music. I can picture you and the scenes you...
  October 29th, 2019 19:46
• Open up & flex (Poetic Dan) I guess that when you find yourself laughing at yourself and your...
  October 29th, 2019 19:40
• Making Richer. (Fay Slimm.) I doubt there is a view of anything, anywhere which seen through your...
  October 29th, 2019 19:32
• Good and Proper (Neville) Hmmm maybe she loved him more than he knew..... and saved him from...
  October 28th, 2019 10:18
• F*** you universe, I\'ll rhyme another day (Poetic Dan) Thats life innit. I just tell myself im big enough and ugly enought to...
  October 28th, 2019 10:14
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) Aaaaaah, even from the tiniest of natures gems she creates yet another...
  October 28th, 2019 10:12
• RANDOM THUNKS (4) (Michael Edwards) He spat out his words quite bitterly for each line he read he took...
  October 28th, 2019 10:10
• Pedantry - Limerick. (Goldfinch60) One you can\'t say about Goldie is that he\'s grown old and turned...
  October 28th, 2019 10:06
• Help for Friends. (Goldfinch60) Please keep on being that friend. Chemo/radiotherapy drags on inside you...
  October 26th, 2019 21:05
• Morecombe (Goldfinch60) Magic is there for us always Goldfinch, for those of us who see magic that...
  October 24th, 2019 18:36
• Autumn Into Winter. (Goldfinch60) This piece is great and straight from your sincerely held faith. Very...
  October 22nd, 2019 11:53
• BOLDNESS. (Fay Slimm.) These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much...
  October 22nd, 2019 11:18
• BOLDNESS. (Fay Slimm.) These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much...
  October 21st, 2019 19:42
• BOLDNESS. (Fay Slimm.) These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much...
  October 21st, 2019 19:18
• During This Month (ForeverJesus7) Interesting rant, but far too repetitive. Have you considered editing down...
  October 21st, 2019 19:14
• Nelson Went to Battle. (Goldfinch60) First laugh of the day to Mr G Finch. nice one!
  October 21st, 2019 01:52
• Imagining. (Goldfinch60) I don\'t know if life turns out the way you describe, but no complaints so...
  October 17th, 2019 04:47
• WINTER FOLLOWS (Michael Edwards) Wonderful skyline picture ME. Today brilliant sunshine wakes my autumn...
  October 17th, 2019 04:44
• GOODBYE FOR NOW ! 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) Fare well on your journey \'home\' and the rest of your lifes...
  October 17th, 2019 04:40
• Breaking Bread (Neville) A message of companionship offered to a traveller upon their own journey...
  October 17th, 2019 04:35
• Reverse it (Poetic Dan) This piece excells at what i like to call \"less is more\" poetry. Short...
  October 17th, 2019 04:30
• COMES AUTUMN. (Fay Slimm.) What a beauty, and yes thank you for posting this gem again. Goes into...
  October 17th, 2019 04:26
• A Woodland Encounter (Neville) Each woodland has a way Neville, but you must be open to letting a...
  October 16th, 2019 14:53
• I\'ll die a happy Dan (part 1&2) (Poetic Dan) Dan, don\'t ever worry about grammar or spelling.... cos fact is you are a...
  October 16th, 2019 11:09
• DESTINY ? 🧡 ANGELA FOR BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN) Great, now is the time when we can expect to see some REAL poetry from you...
  October 16th, 2019 03:46
• End Of The Ever Afters... (Kevin browne) Kevin i absolutely loved this one sir! It has so so many pearls within it...
  October 15th, 2019 03:51
• A poet inspired a message to pass on (Poetic Dan) Good to see you with ya tongue in cheek on MPS m8. I get te feeling...
  October 15th, 2019 03:45
• Her Love For Me. (Goldfinch60) What a lovely smiling face. I\'m lost for words and deeply moved by...
  October 15th, 2019 03:40
• ‘One Touch Or Two’ (Thoughts In Time) Hey.... who\'s counting..... tell me afterwards.
  October 15th, 2019 03:36
• ALL GOOD THINGS (Michael Edwards) Clever and surprisingly thought provoking piece today ME. New ones will...
  October 15th, 2019 03:35
• Sterilite Tubs and Reflections (Lonelyraccoon) I disagree with your final line. You\'ve got a life, and a good head....
  October 14th, 2019 16:26
• Morning brew and perfect moments with you (Alta H Mabin) Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it...
  October 14th, 2019 16:15
• Morning brew and perfect moments with you (Alta H Mabin) Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it...
  October 14th, 2019 12:49
• LOVE ME & BE MY WIFE 🧡 BRIAN 🧡 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Thinking of you two. Hoping that you arrive on time, it\'s 10.27 a.m. GMT...
  October 14th, 2019 04:30
• Captive. (Fay Slimm.) How cruel and unthinking we are to cage the wild animals. The epitome of...
  October 14th, 2019 04:28
• I forgot (Poetic Dan) Envy is according to christianity a sin. I envy you my friend for the love...
  October 14th, 2019 04:22
• The Hastings Wake. (Goldfinch60) Awww u make orchi sound like a killjoy.... i bet he\'s a real nice guy...
  October 14th, 2019 04:18
• Two 575s (Michael Edwards) We are all pissed off with Brit democracy at the mo..... wrote several...
  October 14th, 2019 04:16
• Post-Delirium (RiverJordan) Hmmm this is the 2nd piece of yours i have read and its much clearer than...
  October 13th, 2019 14:47
• Post-Delirium (RiverJordan) Hmmm this is the 2nd piece of yours i have read and its much clearer than...
  October 13th, 2019 14:29
• It hurts as a human (FineB) What an intriguing write about such negatives but somehow you maintain a...
  October 13th, 2019 14:25
• Home (Clara) What a lovely clear honest declaration of your feelings you give...
  October 13th, 2019 14:18
• The \" LIGHT \" at the end of the dark tunnel (RiverJordan) Your philosophy as outlined here in \'comment from author\' is commendable...
  October 13th, 2019 14:10
• My love for you will never die (Alta H Mabin) Firstly, an excuse, you\'ll never find me a fan of mixed arithmetic and...
  October 13th, 2019 13:15
• A LORDS PRAYER IN MAORI 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 TRANSLATION (ANGELA & BRIAN) One wonders whether Maori society has improved or benefitted from the...
  October 13th, 2019 09:34
• Everything seemed fine (MrB) Oh what it was to be young and learning about romantic love. Memories...
  October 13th, 2019 08:45
• The seaside in the winter (Andrew Charles Forrest) Much neglected and naturally beautiful. A time to appreciate its beauty in...
  October 13th, 2019 08:39
• THE LAST THING (575) (Michael Edwards) Finally - give me a big cardboard box, drop me into it, bury it deep and...
  October 13th, 2019 07:19
• ‘Smile A While’ (Thoughts In Time) It simply adds a grace yes, to any face if we smile if just for a...
  October 13th, 2019 07:16
• Croquet Prize. (Goldfinch60) Admiration and a tribute to the lady who it seems not only loved the game,...
  October 13th, 2019 06:39
• Hat, home & tea. (Poetic Dan) This is Dan at his absolute best so far! I love this piece, filled with...
  October 13th, 2019 06:33
• NO DIRECTION (Suebedoobedoo) What on earth is beauty school?
  October 11th, 2019 15:37
• Apologies (SheWasTheSun) Thoughts in time is absolutely right in her comment. We are not the...
  October 11th, 2019 15:35
• He and... C (Clara) The dreadful C is among us and thriving.... it\'s inside me right now and...
  October 11th, 2019 14:21
• A darker shade of grey (Alta H Mabin) Emotional writing from the moment. Fresh and vivid. Well captured and...
  October 11th, 2019 14:13
• Sightless. (Fay Slimm.) How disgusting is war really. Mankinds stupidity in murderous manufacture...
  October 11th, 2019 07:23
• Challenges to Experience. (Goldfinch60) So true you sage. And from experience hopefully wisdom. (tongue in...
  October 11th, 2019 06:53
• ‘Connections Through Time’ (Thoughts In Time) Definitely in tune with you here. Touched upon this in my piece today. A...
  October 11th, 2019 01:20
• ‘Connections Through Time’ (Thoughts In Time) Definitely in tune with you here. Touched upon this in my piece today. A...
  October 11th, 2019 01:06
• My Light Knight (Clara) The world is and will never be black and white. Give me those shades of...
  October 10th, 2019 19:22
• THE WAITINGS OVER ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Pure joy for the both of you. MPS needs to put out the bunting and...
  October 10th, 2019 11:39