Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Maybe (Ron parrish aka wordman) Nice one. The elusive Miss Right of our dreams ... where is she? Superb...
  January 11th, 2020 13:17
• absent (Brittany Jo) Sad but very well composed. Short and punchy! just how i like them.
  January 11th, 2020 04:10
• An Unhappy New Year to All! (Orchidee) Is it \'waggly tail\' or \'waggedy tail\' in the song?
  January 11th, 2020 04:08
• Shining on My Life. Senryu (Goldfinch60) Long may you feel the glow Goldfinch.
  January 11th, 2020 04:04
• THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (1) (Michael Edwards) Those hints are intriguing. Letting the viewer/reader complete the...
  January 11th, 2020 04:02
• BREXIT HAS BEEN DONE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A DENOUMENT ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Did you forget that we brits were Europeans long before the EEC or common...
  January 10th, 2020 12:02
• True Love Never to be (Salem_B911) Good stuff but.... This deserves to be more than one poem because it...
  January 10th, 2020 11:56
• Drifting curse (812Uknow) The first four lines of this are brilliant. From there onward i got lost....
  January 10th, 2020 11:50
• Burned bridges (Nemo) You may let them go consciously but there will be subconscious memory...
  January 10th, 2020 05:58
• Folly (Fay Slimm.) A fine message today. If only mans macho, vengeful nature would not...
  January 10th, 2020 05:55
• Stitched (Poetic Dan) That rhythm is in you m8 and it\'ll stay there.
  January 10th, 2020 05:48
• Another New Day. (Goldfinch60) Its a lovely day indeed. It\'s today and i\'m living it! Although i have...
  January 10th, 2020 05:46
• Missing teen (Poetic Dan) So sad Dan.... One wonders all sorts of things when this happens. Too...
  January 9th, 2020 12:52
• IF. (Fay Slimm.) This is quite beautiful Fay. You have found words to describe the...
  January 9th, 2020 12:48
• Time? (Goldfinch60) Indeed where does the time go. Seems to me that the older you get the...
  January 9th, 2020 12:41
• TOLD ONCE (Michael Edwards) That\'s clever stuff without doubt.
  January 9th, 2020 12:39
• No faith in love (Aa Harvey) A sorrowful read. Love can be a lot more than the romantic kind of love...
  January 8th, 2020 13:28
• Battle. (Fay Slimm.) And now you bring us the goddess of the sun as she slips into her night...
  January 8th, 2020 06:03
• #poetrycommunityofig (Poetic Dan) Great analogy you make there Dan. All our moods and efforts and...
  January 8th, 2020 04:58
• Buzzard. (Goldfinch60) LOL are u sure you\'d like to be a buzzard? Shall i bang a nail into the...
  January 8th, 2020 04:11
• Thoughts... (Broken_kingdom) Distressing to read this. Keep writing, letting all out. For me becoming a...
  January 8th, 2020 00:09
• Alone Am I Amongst The Twilight Trees (UnderTheGreenLeaves) Wow! This was really enjoyable to read. Very entertaining and you quite...
  January 7th, 2020 18:28
• Life and Love (Kingdaniel) Often we start out following a well trodden road only to become...
  January 7th, 2020 18:23
• Wait! (Poetic Dan) Once again a superb video and great Acid Jazz sounds. Your short piece...
  January 7th, 2020 18:18
• Chance. (Fay Slimm.) The thing we oldie singles pretend to fear yet it is inside us crying out...
  January 7th, 2020 18:11
• Life Changes. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful positive spiritual feel in your writing today. Armed with...
  January 7th, 2020 18:06
• Perfume and Smoke (DannyBoi) Fun to read. Your words describe what us men go through thousands and...
  January 6th, 2020 13:35
• Restless Feet (Sarahlynne) Fascinating read about contemporary politics. A certain president comes to...
  January 6th, 2020 13:15
• The evil Within (Nemo) The sooner you can shrug of this religious manifestation of god then the...
  January 6th, 2020 13:10
• Alright new year (Poetic Dan) Firstly, that video is wikkid man and the hip-hop/acid jazz soundtrack...
  January 6th, 2020 11:28
• Alright new year (Poetic Dan) Firstly, that video is wikkid man and the hip-hop/acid jazz soundtrack...
  January 6th, 2020 09:00
• Q & A (Aa Harvey) This is a real thought jerker. Until somebody put the idea of there being...
  January 6th, 2020 07:16
• Rose of Paper (A Sonnet) (Alan .S. Jeeves) You old romantic you. This splendid write is reminiscent of yesteryears...
  January 6th, 2020 03:56
• THREE 575s (Michael Edwards) Three beauties today ME. I\'m intrigued, how do you get \'other\' colours...
  January 6th, 2020 02:56
• Creation Care-Takers (Orchidee) Who is this lord fellah? Wouldnt u be better off praising the king? Surely...
  January 5th, 2020 06:30
• One among many (Poetic Dan) Learning about yourself is vital information needed to confront inner...
  January 5th, 2020 04:33
• One among many (Poetic Dan) Learning about yourself is vital information needed to confront inner...
  January 5th, 2020 04:06
• The Universe Waits. (Goldfinch60) She is loving you and loving your joy in the life you live. Love is...
  January 5th, 2020 03:02
• -A Stranger Did Come Along- A Bard Song by Under The Green Leaves (UnderTheGreenLeaves) Fun to read and encouragement to all us writers. There is always someone...
  January 4th, 2020 16:59
• Farther From Martyr (Asrealastheycome) This reads like the tale of one who has been converted by ones own life...
  January 4th, 2020 16:57
• Thorns (Aa Harvey) As one who walked through that door i completely agree. Life is more...
  January 4th, 2020 16:53
• A Day With The Flowers (Vanessa201518) As we enter our senior years we begin to perceive the world and it\'s...
  January 4th, 2020 16:50
• Alone (Nemo) Thank goodness for the positive human spirit within us all which enables...
  January 4th, 2020 10:29
• Early Summer? (Goldfinch60) Your first three lines made me think I was about to read something bawdy...
  January 4th, 2020 10:24
• 575s - ANOTHER BATCH (1) (Michael Edwards) Moonlight in churchyards brings back many memories. Including the one in...
  January 4th, 2020 10:20
• HELD BY ALL (Michael Edwards) Who is this bright spark?
  January 2nd, 2020 12:33
• Words To Music To Words. (Goldfinch60) For music lubricates our lives.
  January 2nd, 2020 02:58
• Devastation (Last Shadow) With all that behind you its a good job you have a whole new year to look...
  January 2nd, 2020 01:12
• Yet an other fling (Nemo) Yes, you express this well. For me the period was a prequel to abstinence.
  January 1st, 2020 14:14
• New Leaves. (Fay Slimm.) From one fallen leaf to another... this was a pleasure to read and...
  January 1st, 2020 14:13
• Into the New Year 2. (Goldfinch60) I envy you in your spirit of a man who is determined to get as much out of...
  January 1st, 2020 14:09
• Happy New Year (Alta H Mabin) Hopes and dreams, grown and nurtured for years within us, brought to the...
  December 31st, 2019 15:47
• Sparkle. (Fay Slimm.) Could any night be darker when the chilled air is charged with expectation...
  December 31st, 2019 09:40
• Known stranger (Nemo) I had a similar experience divided by thirty years. Yes you capture the...
  December 31st, 2019 04:11
• Last Breath. (Goldfinch60) You have shown us such beauty in your words leading to this time. I know...
  December 31st, 2019 04:08
• Waiting Together. (Goldfinch60) This is so sad my friend. Revealing of how this beautiful life, this...
  December 30th, 2019 08:46
• The New Watch. (Goldfinch60) Life goes on and the things our generation took for granted are out of...
  December 29th, 2019 06:39
• Once I declared, now I dedicate (Poetic Dan) Some flowers begin life buried in a very dark place and struggle but find...
  December 28th, 2019 12:32
• Back to My River. (Goldfinch60) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m8jDXfybjco
  December 27th, 2019 11:48
• The Pain Love Had To Take. (Kevin browne) A wonderful celebration of the love of life itself and love of the life...
  December 22nd, 2019 04:26
• I TOOK HER OUT (Michael Edwards) A silver bullet saved your life for behind that pout was a set of vampyre...
  December 11th, 2019 11:11
• Wonder and Love. (Goldfinch60) Such times are magic. I\'m sure you\'ve had many of them. They stay with...
  December 11th, 2019 11:09
• Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60) Well said sir! I\'m pretty much of the same opinion. Some might call us...
  December 9th, 2019 18:37
• Foremost. (Fay Slimm.) You have encapsulated many of love\'s wonders here but i feel there\'s one...
  December 9th, 2019 18:31
• Don\'t be long (Poetic Dan) My thoughts are with you and yours Dan. Wishing you all a positive...
  December 9th, 2019 18:27
• UNDIES (3) (Michael Edwards) Whether ironed or wrinkly let me state quite distinctly they should...
  December 6th, 2019 08:56
• Words on the Page. (Goldfinch60) It has been written many times that writing poetry is a kind of self...
  December 6th, 2019 08:53
• Catchtrap. (Fay Slimm.) The hairs on the back of my neck stood on end reading this. What is it...
  December 5th, 2019 04:43
• Doctor Respect. (Goldfinch60) You are a very strong, positive and outwardly brave man Goldfinch. Life...
  December 5th, 2019 04:11
• When life was really child\'s play (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Reads like happy memories of childhood. Sadly several poets on MPS were...
  December 4th, 2019 10:49
• Tortured Mind (Poetic Dan) There will always be scar tissue. Not every day will you see the sun...
  December 4th, 2019 04:17
• Stunning Unique Patterns. (Goldfinch60) Catch it\'s beauty while you can.
  December 4th, 2019 02:40
• UNDIES (2) (Michael Edwards) \'after their sex he felt a little uncertain, no tissues, so he wiped it...
  December 4th, 2019 02:30
• War is Not for Lovers (Neville) Brilliant evocative writing. Hard hitting reality. Each of the thousands...
  November 9th, 2019 15:45
• She is Not There. (Goldfinch60) This really reached deep into me and i feel for your loss. Only your...
  November 5th, 2019 05:06
• Four Letter Words (Neville) Having proved my fecundity i no longer have much use for the word unless...
  October 30th, 2019 16:09
• Adversity Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Cleverly pieced Acrostic Goldfinch.
  October 30th, 2019 04:00
• Soul-beauty. (Fay Slimm.) Where did you get that X-ray picture of my 2nd left top molar? I read...
  October 30th, 2019 03:49
• 3 for 1 because I\'ll never be done (Poetic Dan) I agree with Goldfinch.
  October 30th, 2019 03:44
• Thank God For Poetry (ForeverJesus7) How come i write poetry and publish on here more often than you do and...
  October 29th, 2019 19:52
• Tin Whistle Player. (Goldfinch60) Very relaxing peaceful music. I can picture you and the scenes you...
  October 29th, 2019 19:46
• Open up & flex (Poetic Dan) I guess that when you find yourself laughing at yourself and your...
  October 29th, 2019 19:40
• Making Richer. (Fay Slimm.) I doubt there is a view of anything, anywhere which seen through your...
  October 29th, 2019 19:32
• Good and Proper (Neville) Hmmm maybe she loved him more than he knew..... and saved him from...
  October 28th, 2019 10:18
• F*** you universe, I\'ll rhyme another day (Poetic Dan) Thats life innit. I just tell myself im big enough and ugly enought to...
  October 28th, 2019 10:14
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) Aaaaaah, even from the tiniest of natures gems she creates yet another...
  October 28th, 2019 10:12
• RANDOM THUNKS (4) (Michael Edwards) He spat out his words quite bitterly for each line he read he took...
  October 28th, 2019 10:10
• Pedantry - Limerick. (Goldfinch60) One you can\'t say about Goldie is that he\'s grown old and turned...
  October 28th, 2019 10:06
• Help for Friends. (Goldfinch60) Please keep on being that friend. Chemo/radiotherapy drags on inside you...
  October 26th, 2019 21:05
• Morecombe (Goldfinch60) Magic is there for us always Goldfinch, for those of us who see magic that...
  October 24th, 2019 18:36
• Autumn Into Winter. (Goldfinch60) This piece is great and straight from your sincerely held faith. Very...
  October 22nd, 2019 11:53
• BOLDNESS. (Fay Slimm.) These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much...
  October 22nd, 2019 11:18
• BOLDNESS. (Fay Slimm.) These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much...
  October 21st, 2019 19:42
• BOLDNESS. (Fay Slimm.) These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much...
  October 21st, 2019 19:18
• During This Month (ForeverJesus7) Interesting rant, but far too repetitive. Have you considered editing down...
  October 21st, 2019 19:14
• Nelson Went to Battle. (Goldfinch60) First laugh of the day to Mr G Finch. nice one!
  October 21st, 2019 01:52
• Imagining. (Goldfinch60) I don\'t know if life turns out the way you describe, but no complaints so...
  October 17th, 2019 04:47
• WINTER FOLLOWS (Michael Edwards) Wonderful skyline picture ME. Today brilliant sunshine wakes my autumn...
  October 17th, 2019 04:44
• GOODBYE FOR NOW ! 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) Fare well on your journey \'home\' and the rest of your lifes...
  October 17th, 2019 04:40
• Breaking Bread (Neville) A message of companionship offered to a traveller upon their own journey...
  October 17th, 2019 04:35