Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- HOMESICK ON HOLIDAY ? ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A BALLAD (ANGELA & BRIAN)
TBH i never ever had that desire to travel abroad. I went to cyprus once...
August 23rd, 2019 12:58 - DROLL COUPLETS (8) (Michael Edwards)
Reminded me of that farsical search for saddam\'s weapons of mass...
August 23rd, 2019 04:19 - My Chest it Flutters (Neville)
I can\'t hold a candle to this kind of verse sir!
Though i did have...
August 23rd, 2019 03:25 - Outing. (Fay Slimm.)
Gone! those youthful days of stay in bed and grow.
Nowadays it\'s up at...
August 23rd, 2019 03:18 - Prom of Peace. (Goldfinch60)
If only music could be the weapon of mass peace and goodwill.
History...
August 23rd, 2019 02:48 - POLLUTION SOLUTION ? UR ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN INTERNAL RHYMING POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great theme! Hopefully the more of us to post about environmental issues,...
August 22nd, 2019 04:41 - Chafing. (Fay Slimm.)
i\'m embarrassed to reveal i am still a virgin (sssshhh I haven\'t told...
August 22nd, 2019 03:20 - Car Trouble? (Goldfinch60)
Your car was merely rewarding you for the love, care and attention you...
August 22nd, 2019 02:29 - Over The Hill (Neville)
Indeed we should all acknowledge our allotted acre of desire and tend it...
August 22nd, 2019 02:25 - TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thats a clever piece today.
May the sands of time run true for you two...
August 21st, 2019 04:47 - Ours. (Fay Slimm.)
Love in a none demanding, acceptance of mutual appreciation, comfort and...
August 21st, 2019 04:43 - Gateway to Where? (Goldfinch60)
There are some things which are closed to us in this earthly...
August 21st, 2019 04:32 - The Appetite of Voyeurs (Neville)
My dark sedan windows and mirrored lenses protect my innocence. I don\'t...
August 21st, 2019 04:25 - DROLL COUPLETS (7) (Michael Edwards)
A well stubbed toe serves the memory well.
A momentary \'oh no\' before...
August 21st, 2019 04:19 - 4 weeks today! (Poetic Dan)
Hello Mrs Dan. What a wonderful bump you are carrying and you carry it so...
August 20th, 2019 18:01 - My two best companion - Heart and Mind (Aman1586)
One day both will relax alongside the heart and mind of another.
August 20th, 2019 13:22 - Tribute to Skelly - Skeleton Clown (Nafis Light)
You have played some weird looking games in your time LOL. Better than...
August 20th, 2019 09:34 - Little John (Woodkatie28)
I like the way you have romanced with this character bringing to him a...
August 20th, 2019 09:07 - Tear drops 💦 (Chris Yellow)
What a refreshing read. So few seem to realise how envigorating and...
August 20th, 2019 09:02 - The World Around (Sindhuja)
And some have no coin to contemplate.
Your profile page shows you...
August 20th, 2019 08:59 - SOCIALIST STATE ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Nice to see U.K. described as a socialist state for once. It really pee\'s...
August 20th, 2019 05:09 - Trouble. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh I get letters like these every other week!
Away wench of loose ways...
August 20th, 2019 05:02 - TKR (Michael Edwards)
Welcome back hop-along-Edwards and thank you for this wonderful record of...
August 20th, 2019 04:40 - I Told You So. (Goldfinch60)
Excellent poem for today. Thought provoking - what has to happen before...
August 20th, 2019 04:30 - Fly Me in Circles (Neville)
An intimate moment between lovers beautifully portrayed.
August 20th, 2019 04:27 - Robin Hood (Woodkatie28)
Shoiulda written home i guess.
August 19th, 2019 14:53 - Thinking Of You (Christina8)
That is passion. Everyone who has felt passion so strong within a love...
August 19th, 2019 12:29 - I don\'t know (Aa Harvey)
Well described \'high\' of love together with it\'s nagging fears of...
August 19th, 2019 09:38 - WOODMAN SPARE THAT TREE ~ FOR ME ~ A BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
They used to fell oak trees to build warships... I even heard a story...
August 19th, 2019 09:32 - Story of my life (Aman1586)
Oh, and welcome to MPS by the way (I nearly forgot to say...
August 19th, 2019 08:24 - Story of my life (Aman1586)
Later i learned to thank them. Closing my mind to the bullying insults,...
August 19th, 2019 08:19 - Tenderness Ticks. (Kevin browne)
Your first verse is so strong it deserves a page alone. It contains so...
August 19th, 2019 08:14 - I\'d Rather Be A Clown! (Nafis Light)
The trouble with being a clown - and believe me i am writing this from...
August 19th, 2019 07:59 - Such and When. (Fay Slimm.)
I hear the strains of Cornishmen\'s voices raised in \'no hopers, jokers...
August 19th, 2019 07:09 - How Did We Get This Far (Part 6) (ForeverJesus7)
Well written and excellent question raised. Have you considered that the...
August 19th, 2019 06:46 - Wordiku Three. (Goldfinch60)
Clever.
August 19th, 2019 06:40 - From a Certain Distance (Neville)
Ho ho ho, \"more tea vicar?\"
Sometimes it\'s best to appreciate the...
August 19th, 2019 06:37 - Just Do What You Do...Regularly (Nafis Light)
Be yourself, no matter what they say.
To thine own self be...
August 18th, 2019 13:15 - Dancing Through the Moors (Woodkatie28)
Fog clears and there is sunshine again warming one\'s enthusiasm..... ...
August 18th, 2019 12:04 - Miracles (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Well we sure need miracles don\'t we. I\'m thinking about what we are...
August 18th, 2019 11:47 - THE GOODNESS OF OUR GOD ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ouch! at using the possessive term \'our\' god. God is god period and...
August 18th, 2019 09:14 - Tanka - Tanka (Neville)
Semi civilised people being judged by western standards?
Does making...
August 18th, 2019 09:04 - Towards the Top. (Goldfinch60)
And a prize awarded before the climb to the summit is worn well by you sir...
August 18th, 2019 08:55 - Fire Fly (PoeticBiscuit)
That night will live on for you Biscuit. One of the added bonus\' of being...
August 18th, 2019 08:51 - It\'s be fun but she had to go (Poetic Dan)
Ahh yes that first car and learning how to repair it. All those...
August 17th, 2019 14:00 - It\'s be fun but she had to go (Poetic Dan)
Ahh yes that first car and learning how to repair it. All those...
August 17th, 2019 12:36 - Dirty Margarita (Neville)
For she is a beguiling seducer adorned in her finery. No visible promise...
August 17th, 2019 12:33 - Free At Last (PoeticBiscuit)
That\'s it mate, cast her out of your system.
August 17th, 2019 00:05 - Nocturnal Love (Christina8)
Steamy stuff Christina. Love is love and the moon sees all.
August 16th, 2019 23:58 - Those Who Live With No Light (ForeverJesus7)
The gospel of Thomas, The gospel of Philip, The gospel of Truth, all...
August 16th, 2019 23:56 - Love Fulfill (Sylviasearcher)
A beautiful prayer for love\'s passion. Complete and fulfilling ecstacy.
August 16th, 2019 19:46 - SERENITY (Laura🌻)
Serenity.... life\'s morphine.
August 16th, 2019 19:33 - Untitled - XXIII (Suresh)
My mother (born 1909) used to say \"If wishes were horses, then beggars...
August 16th, 2019 19:31 - Perfectly imperfect (Poetic Dan)
Oh i\'m far to old to remember anything like that Dan.
My childhood...
August 16th, 2019 13:29 - Flight. (Fay Slimm.)
So it ever was. To mind came the wonderful BBC Serengeti program where...
August 16th, 2019 13:25 - Each Day. (Goldfinch60)
So much empathy for you my friend. Some wonderful words are written and...
August 16th, 2019 13:13 - Through a Tangle of Shadows (Neville)
So today i learn a new put-down...
\"kiss my bruise punk\"
August 16th, 2019 12:38 - Trapped Dove (PoeticBiscuit)
So very true. Caging a beautiful thing/lover stops it being what it was....
August 16th, 2019 12:33 - Sensuality. (Fay Slimm.)
and I thought I was going to get to watch a video of her..... ...
August 16th, 2019 12:29 - Not My Day. (Goldfinch60)
Couple of weeks back i set off early to ensure i would find good parking...
August 16th, 2019 12:23 - War a Senryu (Neville)
Both of which are not dollar earners for the power crazed.
Sadly how...
August 16th, 2019 12:17 - A NEW KNEE (Michael Edwards)
I want one! (well two really).
Wishing you a speedy recovery from this...
August 16th, 2019 12:12 - Victim (PoeticBiscuit)
Amazing spunk in this! Really can relate to this stand.
Having read...
August 16th, 2019 12:10 - Perhaps, there\'s a reason (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Most definitely i have ancients in me. You can tell from how i drag my...
August 13th, 2019 04:51 - See beyond & travel on (Poetic Dan)
Just keep moving forwards mate. With those two sprouts along there will be...
August 13th, 2019 04:48 - Secret. (Fay Slimm.)
A rose? Or a lady blossoming mature?
I\'m preferring to romance the...
August 13th, 2019 04:41 - Time? What Time? (Goldfinch60)
Lucky you! You wouldn\'t have it any other way.
August 13th, 2019 04:36 - DROLL COUPLETS (5) (Michael Edwards)
But so useful for dislodging pieces of nut stuck between the molars.
August 13th, 2019 04:34 - Dear Cancer (Hidden)
I\'m suffering the effects of chemotherapy at the moment and being very...
August 12th, 2019 12:21 - DINER (Thomas J. Dooley)
Good entertaining write. Why don\'t you read other peoples work on here -...
August 12th, 2019 11:37 - DINER (Thomas J. Dooley)
Good entertaining write. Why don\'t you read other peoples work on here -...
August 12th, 2019 11:33 - Frustrated Love (V)
There is evil in so many places. Engendered by a lack of goodwill to...
August 12th, 2019 10:09 - Just Share Something Positive (Nafis Light)
Joker, If you read some of the many poems on here which tell of inner...
August 12th, 2019 08:26 - Gangster of love! (Poetic Dan)
So much joy i see and read in you and your sprouts. Just think of how it...
August 12th, 2019 05:41 - Only So Much (ForeverJesus7)
Goodness me. There you go again talking FEAR of christ. A man made fear by...
August 12th, 2019 02:12 - Singing to the Moon (Tom Wood)
Hold on, that big ole moon is still there patiently coming your way again.
August 12th, 2019 02:08 - Still lost (Aa Harvey)
Vividly sad lament to past love. Very well written i feel, revealing the...
August 12th, 2019 02:06 - Underprized.. (Fay Slimm.)
We begin to understand love as a romantic notion i think. But as we mature...
August 12th, 2019 01:00 - The Missing Name (Woodkatie28)
Beautiful. I wonder did you write this about yourself or a loved...
August 12th, 2019 00:41 - Lonely Days (PoeticBiscuit)
Depends upon how you view your life is my response to this. Some ppl are...
August 12th, 2019 00:38 - Fed With Music. (Goldfinch60)
Music is the human interpretation of the audible environment you might...
August 12th, 2019 00:33 - oh, father (or: what i would say at my father\'s funeral) (Queer-with-a-pen)
These feelings are out and good for you for saying it BLUNT cos its so...
August 12th, 2019 00:27 - Bated Breath (Christina8)
Love and lust aroused and those magical first moments of mutual...
August 12th, 2019 00:22 - DROLL COUPLETS (4) (Michael Edwards)
Wrap my body in a carpet roll
and bury me deep
in a 6ft hole
Dontcha...
August 12th, 2019 00:16 - Go With The Flow (Goddess of the Mist)
NIce but sounds like your falling for the wrong kinda guys.
August 11th, 2019 16:30 - cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1 (Jon Nakapalau)
Address please.
August 11th, 2019 15:03 - cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1 (Jon Nakapalau)
Address please.
August 11th, 2019 14:34 - there will be a great terror (Lucifer very very very 1st)
You are misleading yourself if you believe this is using middle ages...
August 11th, 2019 14:01 - The monster called anxiety (Brothervilheim)
The angst of this really comes through alarmingly.
When there is no...
August 11th, 2019 08:59 - GOOD vs. EVIL (Andrew Charles Forrest)
And christian tries to possess the word christ. But it is a corrupt...
August 11th, 2019 08:54 - #Rent Inspired (Woodkatie28)
Great writing. Immediately i thought the words should inspire the...
August 11th, 2019 05:46 - Songs From Back When (Everlong)
Had trouble sleeping last night and turned on the radio to hear an hour...
August 11th, 2019 05:31 - Thoughts (Tia Davis/テイア)
And somebody wakes up wondering about her beautiful poetic daughter and...
August 11th, 2019 05:27 - But Not Yet. (Goldfinch60)
The elements humble us into our deepest thoughts when we observe them...
August 11th, 2019 05:20 - Kunoichi no Geisha (Neville)
Love for sale can have many a price offered by many a seller at a bidding...
August 11th, 2019 05:14 - FULL CIRCLE (Michael Edwards)
Always ruunin ooutta bread me mam was..... an \'ovis dun\'t taste like...
August 11th, 2019 05:06 - Shedding (PoeticBiscuit)
I\'m thankful for you and myself too that you have shown us there is also...
August 11th, 2019 05:00 - King\'s, Queens and all in between (Poetic Dan)
You were born a beautiful human being. Through ignorance and their own...
August 11th, 2019 04:54 - Karol Quarrier (Gary Edward Geraci)
A man surrounded by peadophile scandal and at the head of the largest...
August 10th, 2019 12:59 - Spoken Thoughts (Dark_Shadow)
Beautifully written piece showing the honesty of being mistreated and...
August 10th, 2019 12:55
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