Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Just Do What You Do...Regularly (Nafis Light)
Be yourself, no matter what they say.
To thine own self be...
August 18th, 2019 13:15 - Dancing Through the Moors (Woodkatie28)
Fog clears and there is sunshine again warming one\'s enthusiasm..... ...
August 18th, 2019 12:04 - Miracles (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Well we sure need miracles don\'t we. I\'m thinking about what we are...
August 18th, 2019 11:47 - THE GOODNESS OF OUR GOD ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ouch! at using the possessive term \'our\' god. God is god period and...
August 18th, 2019 09:14 - Tanka - Tanka (Neville)
Semi civilised people being judged by western standards?
Does making...
August 18th, 2019 09:04 - Towards the Top. (Goldfinch60)
And a prize awarded before the climb to the summit is worn well by you sir...
August 18th, 2019 08:55 - Fire Fly (PoeticBiscuit)
That night will live on for you Biscuit. One of the added bonus\' of being...
August 18th, 2019 08:51 - It\'s be fun but she had to go (Poetic Dan)
Ahh yes that first car and learning how to repair it. All those...
August 17th, 2019 14:00 - It\'s be fun but she had to go (Poetic Dan)
Ahh yes that first car and learning how to repair it. All those...
August 17th, 2019 12:36 - Dirty Margarita (Neville)
For she is a beguiling seducer adorned in her finery. No visible promise...
August 17th, 2019 12:33 - Free At Last (PoeticBiscuit)
That\'s it mate, cast her out of your system.
August 17th, 2019 00:05 - Nocturnal Love (Christina8)
Steamy stuff Christina. Love is love and the moon sees all.
August 16th, 2019 23:58 - Those Who Live With No Light (ForeverJesus7)
The gospel of Thomas, The gospel of Philip, The gospel of Truth, all...
August 16th, 2019 23:56 - Love Fulfill (Sylviasearcher)
A beautiful prayer for love\'s passion. Complete and fulfilling ecstacy.
August 16th, 2019 19:46 - SERENITY (Laura🌻)
Serenity.... life\'s morphine.
August 16th, 2019 19:33 - Untitled - XXIII (Suresh)
My mother (born 1909) used to say \"If wishes were horses, then beggars...
August 16th, 2019 19:31 - Perfectly imperfect (Poetic Dan)
Oh i\'m far to old to remember anything like that Dan.
My childhood...
August 16th, 2019 13:29 - Flight. (Fay Slimm.)
So it ever was. To mind came the wonderful BBC Serengeti program where...
August 16th, 2019 13:25 - Each Day. (Goldfinch60)
So much empathy for you my friend. Some wonderful words are written and...
August 16th, 2019 13:13 - Through a Tangle of Shadows (Neville)
So today i learn a new put-down...
\"kiss my bruise punk\"
August 16th, 2019 12:38 - Trapped Dove (PoeticBiscuit)
So very true. Caging a beautiful thing/lover stops it being what it was....
August 16th, 2019 12:33 - Sensuality. (Fay Slimm.)
and I thought I was going to get to watch a video of her..... ...
August 16th, 2019 12:29 - Not My Day. (Goldfinch60)
Couple of weeks back i set off early to ensure i would find good parking...
August 16th, 2019 12:23 - War a Senryu (Neville)
Both of which are not dollar earners for the power crazed.
Sadly how...
August 16th, 2019 12:17 - A NEW KNEE (Michael Edwards)
I want one! (well two really).
Wishing you a speedy recovery from this...
August 16th, 2019 12:12 - Victim (PoeticBiscuit)
Amazing spunk in this! Really can relate to this stand.
Having read...
August 16th, 2019 12:10 - Perhaps, there\'s a reason (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Most definitely i have ancients in me. You can tell from how i drag my...
August 13th, 2019 04:51 - See beyond & travel on (Poetic Dan)
Just keep moving forwards mate. With those two sprouts along there will be...
August 13th, 2019 04:48 - Secret. (Fay Slimm.)
A rose? Or a lady blossoming mature?
I\'m preferring to romance the...
August 13th, 2019 04:41 - Time? What Time? (Goldfinch60)
Lucky you! You wouldn\'t have it any other way.
August 13th, 2019 04:36 - DROLL COUPLETS (5) (Michael Edwards)
But so useful for dislodging pieces of nut stuck between the molars.
August 13th, 2019 04:34 - Dear Cancer (Hidden)
I\'m suffering the effects of chemotherapy at the moment and being very...
August 12th, 2019 12:21 - DINER (Thomas J. Dooley)
Good entertaining write. Why don\'t you read other peoples work on here -...
August 12th, 2019 11:37 - DINER (Thomas J. Dooley)
Good entertaining write. Why don\'t you read other peoples work on here -...
August 12th, 2019 11:33 - Frustrated Love (V)
There is evil in so many places. Engendered by a lack of goodwill to...
August 12th, 2019 10:09 - Just Share Something Positive (Nafis Light)
Joker, If you read some of the many poems on here which tell of inner...
August 12th, 2019 08:26 - Gangster of love! (Poetic Dan)
So much joy i see and read in you and your sprouts. Just think of how it...
August 12th, 2019 05:41 - Only So Much (ForeverJesus7)
Goodness me. There you go again talking FEAR of christ. A man made fear by...
August 12th, 2019 02:12 - Singing to the Moon (Tom Wood)
Hold on, that big ole moon is still there patiently coming your way again.
August 12th, 2019 02:08 - Still lost (Aa Harvey)
Vividly sad lament to past love. Very well written i feel, revealing the...
August 12th, 2019 02:06 - Underprized.. (Fay Slimm.)
We begin to understand love as a romantic notion i think. But as we mature...
August 12th, 2019 01:00 - The Missing Name (Woodkatie28)
Beautiful. I wonder did you write this about yourself or a loved...
August 12th, 2019 00:41 - Lonely Days (PoeticBiscuit)
Depends upon how you view your life is my response to this. Some ppl are...
August 12th, 2019 00:38 - Fed With Music. (Goldfinch60)
Music is the human interpretation of the audible environment you might...
August 12th, 2019 00:33 - oh, father (or: what i would say at my father\'s funeral) (Queer-with-a-pen)
These feelings are out and good for you for saying it BLUNT cos its so...
August 12th, 2019 00:27 - Bated Breath (Christina8)
Love and lust aroused and those magical first moments of mutual...
August 12th, 2019 00:22 - DROLL COUPLETS (4) (Michael Edwards)
Wrap my body in a carpet roll
and bury me deep
in a 6ft hole
Dontcha...
August 12th, 2019 00:16 - Go With The Flow (Goddess of the Mist)
NIce but sounds like your falling for the wrong kinda guys.
August 11th, 2019 16:30 - cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1 (Jon Nakapalau)
Address please.
August 11th, 2019 15:03 - cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1 (Jon Nakapalau)
Address please.
August 11th, 2019 14:34 - there will be a great terror (Lucifer very very very 1st)
You are misleading yourself if you believe this is using middle ages...
August 11th, 2019 14:01 - The monster called anxiety (Brothervilheim)
The angst of this really comes through alarmingly.
When there is no...
August 11th, 2019 08:59 - GOOD vs. EVIL (Andrew Charles Forrest)
And christian tries to possess the word christ. But it is a corrupt...
August 11th, 2019 08:54 - #Rent Inspired (Woodkatie28)
Great writing. Immediately i thought the words should inspire the...
August 11th, 2019 05:46 - Songs From Back When (Everlong)
Had trouble sleeping last night and turned on the radio to hear an hour...
August 11th, 2019 05:31 - Thoughts (Tia Davis/テイア)
And somebody wakes up wondering about her beautiful poetic daughter and...
August 11th, 2019 05:27 - But Not Yet. (Goldfinch60)
The elements humble us into our deepest thoughts when we observe them...
August 11th, 2019 05:20 - Kunoichi no Geisha (Neville)
Love for sale can have many a price offered by many a seller at a bidding...
August 11th, 2019 05:14 - FULL CIRCLE (Michael Edwards)
Always ruunin ooutta bread me mam was..... an \'ovis dun\'t taste like...
August 11th, 2019 05:06 - Shedding (PoeticBiscuit)
I\'m thankful for you and myself too that you have shown us there is also...
August 11th, 2019 05:00 - King\'s, Queens and all in between (Poetic Dan)
You were born a beautiful human being. Through ignorance and their own...
August 11th, 2019 04:54 - Karol Quarrier (Gary Edward Geraci)
A man surrounded by peadophile scandal and at the head of the largest...
August 10th, 2019 12:59 - Spoken Thoughts (Dark_Shadow)
Beautifully written piece showing the honesty of being mistreated and...
August 10th, 2019 12:55 - Spoken Thoughts (Dark_Shadow)
Beautifully written piece showing the honesty of being mistreated and...
August 10th, 2019 12:19 - Alive (Christina8)
Beautiful poem of love and passion.
August 10th, 2019 04:29 - Hufflepuff (Woodkatie28)
Love the way you phrased this as a tribute to our finest nocturnal...
August 10th, 2019 04:26 - Beautiful Ceremony (Gino)
I feel there is so much loss in your words. Yearning for the love,...
August 10th, 2019 04:21 - Try... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Ha ha ha, dogs.. i love them.... but i\'d be happy if they would learn to...
August 10th, 2019 04:15 - Copyright...Does It Matter? (Nafis Light)
Once you publish upon here it is recorded with a date, thereby giving you...
August 10th, 2019 04:14 - Rare (Poetic Dan)
More wisdom from the sage within you Dan.
August 10th, 2019 04:12 - Flawed (Neville)
Find me the woman who doesn\'t hide the desire to leave such questioning...
August 10th, 2019 04:10 - Teenage Dream (PoeticBiscuit)
We were all teenagers once and recall the spirit of early adult pleasure...
August 10th, 2019 02:57 - Modesty Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
You define goodwill to mankind (and animals) here and modesty rules it
August 10th, 2019 02:55 - THE DREAM - THE REALITY (Michael Edwards)
Age brings the humour of accepting fallibility though passion will still...
August 10th, 2019 02:52 - I only wanna read what you write (Evergreen)
When you read more, may your dreams be rewarded.
August 9th, 2019 09:12 - Entirely devoted (BoxMyHeart)
In genuine romantic love is there any other way. Or the love of a parent...
August 9th, 2019 09:10 - Different Here And There, But Here... (Nafis Light)
I agree, we give of ourselves, our real inner selves on MPS whereas often...
August 9th, 2019 09:06 - Remorse (DesertWords)
Your positive mind recalls to good of life\'s experiences rather than...
August 9th, 2019 09:02 - Let the voices in (Poetic Dan)
May that quote sink deep into your every fibre so that you live it without...
August 9th, 2019 08:30 - Why When Where and How (Neville)
A bit one sided when all she wanted was a coffee.
I like it. Alluringly...
August 9th, 2019 08:26 - Fulfilled. (Fay Slimm.)
Aaah yes, love\'s learning curve we know as life.
Thoughful mature...
August 9th, 2019 08:24 - Walking Home. (Goldfinch60)
He he he, reminds me of a story Vincent price told when he sat behind...
August 9th, 2019 08:20 - Fire & Ice (PoeticBiscuit)
She melted away at my mere glance. She told me i could never put a fire in...
August 9th, 2019 08:17 - DROLL COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
He really was a clever chap
Wearing mirrors on his toe caps.
August 9th, 2019 08:13 - What do you love? (Wjmdotnet)
Always faithful. You go where you are told to go involuntary and you kill...
August 9th, 2019 08:10 - A sip of reality (Dakota)
OK good message.
But too long.... \"less is more\" try to say it in...
August 8th, 2019 14:47 - Not a Poet (V)
VG welcome to MPS... here just be you, say what you feel and be read by...
August 8th, 2019 14:39 - The Fun of Marble Painting (Nafis Light)
Now you\'ve done it! PICTURES PLEASE!
August 8th, 2019 13:38 - Unreal. (Fay Slimm.)
moody Fay.. moody
that big ole moon\'s reflection plays a hide n seek...
August 8th, 2019 13:33 - That Secret Place (Neville)
Neville at his poetic sensual best again.
Gosh how many more discrete...
August 8th, 2019 13:25 - Abandoning christianity. (Goldfinch60)
I can\'t tell you how much your words resound within me. My watershed was...
August 8th, 2019 13:18 - Voices (PoeticBiscuit)
Maybe, just maybe the pain is your real nice self being horrified by/hurt...
August 8th, 2019 13:12 - An Acrostic- Walt Disney (Woodkatie28)
Hello... I\'m living proof of your last line.
I\'m not a fan of Formulae...
August 8th, 2019 00:39 - Night Time Symphony (Christina8)
What a different society we are compared to 50/60 years ago when TVs etc...
August 8th, 2019 00:36 - DROLL COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Wise crack about an unwise cracker. When did u last pull a cracker?
August 8th, 2019 00:29 - Oh, to be a woman (BoxMyHeart)
Great expose of the inner feelings of an individual who cannot conform...
August 8th, 2019 00:27 - One question (Chana)
Not true... I know, I am living proof. Without imagination and...
August 8th, 2019 00:14 - The Gift (SerenWise)
Happiness is out there u know. Push a firework up where the sun don\'t...
August 8th, 2019 00:11 - Bad Day To Be Alive (Baddaytobealive)
Bad days are what you make them i guess.
August 8th, 2019 00:08 - Untitled- XXI (Suresh)
A deep feeling of loss pervades this brief piece.
When feelings are so...
August 7th, 2019 12:53
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