Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- The Missing Name (Woodkatie28)
Beautiful. I wonder did you write this about yourself or a loved...
August 12th, 2019 00:41 - Lonely Days (PoeticBiscuit)
Depends upon how you view your life is my response to this. Some ppl are...
August 12th, 2019 00:38 - Fed With Music. (Goldfinch60)
Music is the human interpretation of the audible environment you might...
August 12th, 2019 00:33 - oh, father (or: what i would say at my father\'s funeral) (Queer-with-a-pen)
These feelings are out and good for you for saying it BLUNT cos its so...
August 12th, 2019 00:27 - Bated Breath (Christina8)
Love and lust aroused and those magical first moments of mutual...
August 12th, 2019 00:22 - DROLL COUPLETS (4) (Michael Edwards)
Wrap my body in a carpet roll
and bury me deep
in a 6ft hole
Dontcha...
August 12th, 2019 00:16 - Go With The Flow (Goddess of the Mist)
NIce but sounds like your falling for the wrong kinda guys.
August 11th, 2019 16:30 - cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1 (Jon Nakapalau)
Address please.
August 11th, 2019 15:03 - cafes along the road of life you must not enter #1 (Jon Nakapalau)
Address please.
August 11th, 2019 14:34 - there will be a great terror (Lucifer very very very 1st)
You are misleading yourself if you believe this is using middle ages...
August 11th, 2019 14:01 - The monster called anxiety (Brothervilheim)
The angst of this really comes through alarmingly.
When there is no...
August 11th, 2019 08:59 - GOOD vs. EVIL (Andrew Charles Forrest)
And christian tries to possess the word christ. But it is a corrupt...
August 11th, 2019 08:54 - #Rent Inspired (Woodkatie28)
Great writing. Immediately i thought the words should inspire the...
August 11th, 2019 05:46 - Songs From Back When (Everlong)
Had trouble sleeping last night and turned on the radio to hear an hour...
August 11th, 2019 05:31 - Thoughts (Tia Davis/テイア)
And somebody wakes up wondering about her beautiful poetic daughter and...
August 11th, 2019 05:27 - But Not Yet. (Goldfinch60)
The elements humble us into our deepest thoughts when we observe them...
August 11th, 2019 05:20 - Kunoichi no Geisha (Neville)
Love for sale can have many a price offered by many a seller at a bidding...
August 11th, 2019 05:14 - FULL CIRCLE (Michael Edwards)
Always ruunin ooutta bread me mam was..... an \'ovis dun\'t taste like...
August 11th, 2019 05:06 - Shedding (PoeticBiscuit)
I\'m thankful for you and myself too that you have shown us there is also...
August 11th, 2019 05:00 - King\'s, Queens and all in between (Poetic Dan)
You were born a beautiful human being. Through ignorance and their own...
August 11th, 2019 04:54 - Karol Quarrier (Gary Edward Geraci)
A man surrounded by peadophile scandal and at the head of the largest...
August 10th, 2019 12:59 - Spoken Thoughts (Dark_Shadow)
Beautifully written piece showing the honesty of being mistreated and...
August 10th, 2019 12:55 - Spoken Thoughts (Dark_Shadow)
Beautifully written piece showing the honesty of being mistreated and...
August 10th, 2019 12:19 - Alive (Christina8)
Beautiful poem of love and passion.
August 10th, 2019 04:29 - Hufflepuff (Woodkatie28)
Love the way you phrased this as a tribute to our finest nocturnal...
August 10th, 2019 04:26 - Beautiful Ceremony (Gino)
I feel there is so much loss in your words. Yearning for the love,...
August 10th, 2019 04:21 - Try... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Ha ha ha, dogs.. i love them.... but i\'d be happy if they would learn to...
August 10th, 2019 04:15 - Copyright...Does It Matter? (Nafis Light)
Once you publish upon here it is recorded with a date, thereby giving you...
August 10th, 2019 04:14 - Rare (Poetic Dan)
More wisdom from the sage within you Dan.
August 10th, 2019 04:12 - Flawed (Neville)
Find me the woman who doesn\'t hide the desire to leave such questioning...
August 10th, 2019 04:10 - Teenage Dream (PoeticBiscuit)
We were all teenagers once and recall the spirit of early adult pleasure...
August 10th, 2019 02:57 - Modesty Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
You define goodwill to mankind (and animals) here and modesty rules it
August 10th, 2019 02:55 - THE DREAM - THE REALITY (Michael Edwards)
Age brings the humour of accepting fallibility though passion will still...
August 10th, 2019 02:52 - I only wanna read what you write (Evergreen)
When you read more, may your dreams be rewarded.
August 9th, 2019 09:12 - Entirely devoted (BoxMyHeart)
In genuine romantic love is there any other way. Or the love of a parent...
August 9th, 2019 09:10 - Different Here And There, But Here... (Nafis Light)
I agree, we give of ourselves, our real inner selves on MPS whereas often...
August 9th, 2019 09:06 - Remorse (DesertWords)
Your positive mind recalls to good of life\'s experiences rather than...
August 9th, 2019 09:02 - Let the voices in (Poetic Dan)
May that quote sink deep into your every fibre so that you live it without...
August 9th, 2019 08:30 - Why When Where and How (Neville)
A bit one sided when all she wanted was a coffee.
I like it. Alluringly...
August 9th, 2019 08:26 - Fulfilled. (Fay Slimm.)
Aaah yes, love\'s learning curve we know as life.
Thoughful mature...
August 9th, 2019 08:24 - Walking Home. (Goldfinch60)
He he he, reminds me of a story Vincent price told when he sat behind...
August 9th, 2019 08:20 - Fire & Ice (PoeticBiscuit)
She melted away at my mere glance. She told me i could never put a fire in...
August 9th, 2019 08:17 - DROLL COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
He really was a clever chap
Wearing mirrors on his toe caps.
August 9th, 2019 08:13 - What do you love? (Wjmdotnet)
Always faithful. You go where you are told to go involuntary and you kill...
August 9th, 2019 08:10 - A sip of reality (Dakota)
OK good message.
But too long.... \"less is more\" try to say it in...
August 8th, 2019 14:47 - Not a Poet (V)
VG welcome to MPS... here just be you, say what you feel and be read by...
August 8th, 2019 14:39 - The Fun of Marble Painting (Nafis Light)
Now you\'ve done it! PICTURES PLEASE!
August 8th, 2019 13:38 - Unreal. (Fay Slimm.)
moody Fay.. moody
that big ole moon\'s reflection plays a hide n seek...
August 8th, 2019 13:33 - That Secret Place (Neville)
Neville at his poetic sensual best again.
Gosh how many more discrete...
August 8th, 2019 13:25 - Abandoning christianity. (Goldfinch60)
I can\'t tell you how much your words resound within me. My watershed was...
August 8th, 2019 13:18 - Voices (PoeticBiscuit)
Maybe, just maybe the pain is your real nice self being horrified by/hurt...
August 8th, 2019 13:12 - An Acrostic- Walt Disney (Woodkatie28)
Hello... I\'m living proof of your last line.
I\'m not a fan of Formulae...
August 8th, 2019 00:39 - Night Time Symphony (Christina8)
What a different society we are compared to 50/60 years ago when TVs etc...
August 8th, 2019 00:36 - DROLL COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Wise crack about an unwise cracker. When did u last pull a cracker?
August 8th, 2019 00:29 - Oh, to be a woman (BoxMyHeart)
Great expose of the inner feelings of an individual who cannot conform...
August 8th, 2019 00:27 - One question (Chana)
Not true... I know, I am living proof. Without imagination and...
August 8th, 2019 00:14 - The Gift (SerenWise)
Happiness is out there u know. Push a firework up where the sun don\'t...
August 8th, 2019 00:11 - Bad Day To Be Alive (Baddaytobealive)
Bad days are what you make them i guess.
August 8th, 2019 00:08 - Untitled- XXI (Suresh)
A deep feeling of loss pervades this brief piece.
When feelings are so...
August 7th, 2019 12:53 - Life is yours (Poetic Dan)
The way you have about you of humbly sharing makes you immediately...
August 7th, 2019 12:20 - My Wish (DesertWords)
There but for the grace..... go I.
August 7th, 2019 07:24 - My Wish (DesertWords)
There but for the grace..... go I.
August 7th, 2019 06:40 - She\'s Delighted. (Kevin browne)
Dreamy delight rides through your words today Kevin. Strawberry sandwiches...
August 7th, 2019 05:40 - Wishing For A Clown As A Friend (Nafis Light)
But inside you there would soon arise a need to see behind that...
August 7th, 2019 05:34 - Otherness. (Fay Slimm.)
Again i journeyed with your words. Today you took me to the path along the...
August 7th, 2019 05:24 - Blood Red Rim (Neville)
And who could knowingly disagree that the future may find your lost ones...
August 7th, 2019 05:17 - End of A Rainbow (PoeticBiscuit)
And brighten my day it did. What a delight from behind your clown mask...
August 7th, 2019 05:09 - To The Right Place. (Goldfinch60)
That sir is a very good read. Immediately i thought of the book \"The road...
August 7th, 2019 05:03 - DROLL COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
I don\'t like to be seen in public so often these days, i feel they need a...
August 7th, 2019 04:58 - Rule by Tweetcree (Seek)
Years of USA politics home and overseas condensed into poetic irony and...
August 6th, 2019 13:02 - Rule by Tweetcree (Seek)
Years of USA politics home and overseas condensed into poetic irony and...
August 6th, 2019 13:00 - Butterfly Strings (Baddaytobealive)
Why do we fall so fast, so deeply online?
Because it\'s not like dating....
August 6th, 2019 05:53 - Knowing. (Fay Slimm.)
You have me standing on a hilltop common (Burleigh, Glos) gazing to the...
August 6th, 2019 05:45 - Love is Giving (Nafis Light)
Joker... love can be all around you... if you put it there,
August 6th, 2019 05:34 - Thinking Backwards (Neville)
Blimey, how you brought to mind love in the woodlands over Elan valley and...
August 6th, 2019 05:33 - Play a role, listening to your soul (Poetic Dan)
I\'m sure i\'ve sung this before....
Spider Dan, Spider Dan,
does...
August 6th, 2019 05:13 - Reuben had a Brother. (Goldfinch60)
Lucky Reuben has a younger brother,
How they\'ll laugh and play with one...
August 6th, 2019 05:04 - Masked (PoeticBiscuit)
Yep, behind my painted smile live many miseries but i will not dwell...
August 6th, 2019 01:15 - Treasure Trove (Woodkatie28)
And we never cease learning unless we close our minds.
However, some of...
August 6th, 2019 00:39 - Holes (Evergreen)
I like that. It\'s very clever and brought a broad smile to my face.
August 5th, 2019 23:12 - Being Here Is A Hobby...No It\'s Not (Nafis Light)
Very good subject you raise today Joker. Some i guess are compelled to...
August 5th, 2019 14:47 - DO EVERYTHING TENDERLY ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A 5 5 4 Blank Verse Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I so agree that we would all benefit from more tenderness in our approach...
August 5th, 2019 14:38 - Enemy of being great (Aa Harvey)
I like the way you write. I too read that book and becoming truly adult...
August 5th, 2019 14:31 - lover boy (Queer-with-a-pen)
When a love is special poetry is in the air. When a poet finds that love,...
August 5th, 2019 12:57 - Need. (Fay Slimm.)
You are the champion of romantic recollection. Beautiful phrasing held me...
August 5th, 2019 12:51 - Herb Song (Neville)
Sense of smell reigns supreme for it takes the mind to where it was when...
August 5th, 2019 12:46 - Dreamworld Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ve lived through many changes and now, relaxed, reflective,...
August 5th, 2019 12:42 - Storm (PoeticBiscuit)
At last sir there is sunshine from your words on mps. Very welcome they...
August 5th, 2019 12:36 - Summer Daze (Christina8)
Oh jeez did i smile then laugh with pleasure reading you today.... that...
August 5th, 2019 12:33 - Fearless (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful vid Dan... your kids are great .... a pair of rising...
August 5th, 2019 12:31 - See Passed Your Own Yard (Teek)
Yep, i know what the words mean, I have been using the english language...
August 5th, 2019 02:05 - LOVE TO EVERYONE 🧡 ANGELA ~ A SONNET FROM MY 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
My wish is that this is a wonderful world in everybodies heart. The ill,...
August 4th, 2019 13:16 - See Passed Your Own Yard (Teek)
Should that be \'past\' not \'passed\' ??
August 4th, 2019 13:09 - Underwear (Neville)
Asks the man who knows exactly where and when..... teasing poem.
August 4th, 2019 08:20 - Nature said (Poetic Dan)
That is one wicked video - superb, great selection of soundtrack...
August 4th, 2019 08:17 - Health and Stupidity. (Goldfinch60)
And on the side of a bus it said \"may contain people\".
But the funniest...
August 4th, 2019 08:09 - Cause Of Life (Baddaytobealive)
You transfer feelings to words well which is going to make you a great...
August 3rd, 2019 19:22 - the hidden lies I dare not speak (Misskay)
Wow, a complex subject. If this is a part of your life right now then i...
August 3rd, 2019 12:05 - An Imperfect Delusion (Theotherjside)
I like it. It tells a tale oh so many lovers will easily relate to. But,...
August 3rd, 2019 11:58 - Memories Visiting (DesertWords)
Poetic excellence here! It has everything of the nights alone...
August 3rd, 2019 11:50
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