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Comments on community poems by dusk arising

Rock House of light you can call home (Poetic Dan) Give of your heart the love you held within. Give with your mind the...
September 22nd, 2019 22:59
Beginnings. (Goldfinch60) Chances of new beginnings arrive every day.... can i catch a good on by...
September 22nd, 2019 22:53
Inner child be free (Poetic Dan) Keep on doing what you\'re doing... it\'s just so RIGHT! Great pic of...
September 21st, 2019 14:57
Splitting Hairs (Neville) Here we go... Nev once again leads me into a pleasureable mystery tale.......
September 21st, 2019 12:52
IS OUR FUTURE ROBOTIC ? 🧡 A 2 10 2 SONNET 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN) Well I think politics will get in the way of your predictions. There will...
September 21st, 2019 02:58
The beauty in pain (Alta H Mabin) Emotional pain can be a great teacher for us. Well that has been my...
September 21st, 2019 02:48
Boundless Admiration. (Goldfinch60) I know exactly where this comes from Goldfinch. Those dear people...
September 21st, 2019 02:44
LATEST BATCH OF SHORTIES No2 (Michael Edwards) When in the city here\'s a thought you\'ll lose eighty quid if in a...
September 21st, 2019 02:37
A Perfectly Reasonable Question (Neville) Question Neville \"Will it need tending?\" Mine won\'t that\'s for...
September 20th, 2019 06:48
Caught. (Fay Slimm.) I used to see the ccommon land on fire when i lived across the valley from...
September 20th, 2019 04:03
BORROWING & LENDING 🧡 A SONNET 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN) Wise words. It took me a while to learn not to lend things, initially...
September 20th, 2019 03:51
May I Kindly (Hidden) This reads like the writer has fallen in love from afar. May not even have...
September 20th, 2019 03:40
River of love, that\'s now joined all of us! (Poetic Dan) So happy for you and yours Dan. Congratulations to you two clever people...
September 20th, 2019 03:23
Acceptance. (Goldfinch60) Nice piece. I do agree in general but some people and their opinions are...
September 20th, 2019 02:57
PEGGITY PEG (Michael Edwards) Ha ha \'pat\' on the head in the meadow. I can almost hear that...
September 20th, 2019 02:02
Days Of Reflection. (Kevin browne) This speaks to me of addressing a newish lover who like you has been...
September 20th, 2019 00:52
To the sounds of Debussy (Alta H Mabin) Et tu ma Claire de Lune? Lovely loving words to one of my fav classic...
September 20th, 2019 00:21
Interlude (FredPeyer) Good to see you writing again Fred. Heartfelt piece today which speaks...
September 20th, 2019 00:17
Help (Vanessa wallace) Today I read the words which are your falling tears and emotionally reach...
September 19th, 2019 13:20
Pillar in my world (Poetic Dan) So f...ing marvellous to read your words in this joyous piece from you...
September 19th, 2019 13:15
There Are Those (Neville) Nice one Neville! Perfectly formed and with a superb closure.
September 19th, 2019 13:09
Naked Heart. (Fay Slimm.) Yes, Unsub is spot-on about your first verse.... you show my inner...
September 19th, 2019 13:06
Fuck (Sylviasearcher) Saying what you feel. A great release.
September 19th, 2019 12:54
All Was Right. (Goldfinch60) i believe there is a angel or whatever you wish to name it overlooking us...
September 19th, 2019 12:50
CYPRUS (Michael Edwards) Hmmm I don\'t share your enthusiasm. Commercialised cities, desert...
September 19th, 2019 00:34
LIGHT (Colour) (Nafis Light) I guess that with sight being our prime sense and the ability to use our...
September 19th, 2019 00:21
Perky pyramids (Alta H Mabin) Love is beautiful in all it\'s forms yes. But those perky pyramids can be...
September 19th, 2019 00:07
Ice say... water we dew wing to planet Earth? (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Point well made but in too many words. The planet and life will survive...
September 18th, 2019 23:47
Waiting Game (FredPeyer) Sometimes it\'s the right time to just look out from a window. Another...
September 18th, 2019 23:43
She (Velvetveins) Loved this and it\'s warmth.
September 18th, 2019 23:41
Fall in Love with being Alive (SilverXball) 100% already there. Great sentiment in your writing today
September 18th, 2019 23:39
je t\'aime (Alta H Mabin) Thank you Alta, I was so worried you wouldn\'t love my bits inbetween.
September 18th, 2019 06:09
Outs. (Fay Slimm.) Do you stroll the beach predawn, catching the moments words in your hair...
September 18th, 2019 02:48
Good Time Girl (Neville) Those Lib Dems have a lot to answer for! Truly sad portrait of an...
September 18th, 2019 02:41
Light After The Darkness (Meg) Refreshingly positive writing from a person who has clearly emerged from...
September 18th, 2019 02:18
Three Parables. (Goldfinch60) You know how this resounds with me Goldfinch. We are both \'singing...
September 18th, 2019 02:16
I respect but don\'t trust (Poetic Dan) Wisely in your first words today you dispel a truth which most people...
September 18th, 2019 02:11
The hope of a sunflower (Alta H Mabin) I\'m not a fan of mixing arithmetic/forulae to poetry. However yours is...
September 17th, 2019 12:38
Fondly and Truly (Neville) Beautifully phrased the unspoken desire with us all to be remembered...
September 17th, 2019 07:46
Dizziness Pops (Nafis Light) Fun here, my thoughts are - \'take more water with it\'.
September 17th, 2019 03:02
The Vow (SerenWise) I read your piece several times and the picture which came into my mind...
September 17th, 2019 03:00
BAREFOOT IN ANDALUCIA 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 BLANK VERSE QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN) Wow what a lovely piece of writing. The love you hold for Brian shines out...
September 17th, 2019 02:55
Are you a believer? (Aa Harvey) Once past the mutual attraction and love making comes the time of soul...
September 17th, 2019 02:48
First Love. (Fay Slimm.) Oh Fay, how you romance my first love uncertain fumblings. Would that i...
September 17th, 2019 02:44
That Fine Evening. (Goldfinch60) I too had a magical experience with music in the night as per my poem...
September 17th, 2019 02:37
REINCARNATION (Michael Edwards) LOL, given the choice i\'m coming back as a lesbian. But your excellent...
September 17th, 2019 02:14
Walk your path well (Poetic Dan) Your fourth line contains a truth which i truly wish more could see. There...
September 17th, 2019 02:12
Flowing forward while going back (Poetic Dan) No, we don\'t all have to play the blagging game. Best advice is - when...
September 16th, 2019 14:37
Client (Neville) An accessory to the crime of..... mmmm.... nay she was the prize for...
September 16th, 2019 05:06
Blackrock. (Fay Slimm.) Thank goodness for sat nav the sailor\'s modern day saviour. But what on...
September 16th, 2019 05:00
WORDLESS (Michael Edwards) (ãﻞã)-ʥʬʢɷϞϡЖѭӄ֏ػظ
September 16th, 2019 04:52
Mind in Overtime. (Goldfinch60) I didn\'t want to get out of bed this morning. My first idea was \'be...
September 16th, 2019 04:43
IT IS NO SECRET - WHAT GOD CAN DO 💙 BRIAN ANGELA🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) i do find the christian attitude towards people when mentioning god to be...
September 15th, 2019 09:52
It\'s in the art (Poetic Dan) That\'s just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last night!
September 15th, 2019 06:20
Reminders. (Fay Slimm.) Those mines were nothing like we see portrayed in Poldark on TV. Many...
September 15th, 2019 06:16
Inside Her Pants (Neville) I\'ve taken your challenge and hoping theres a chance i can find a...
September 15th, 2019 06:07
Manners Abandoned. (Goldfinch60) As i walked to the only open, but unattended, checkout in Lidl the only...
September 15th, 2019 06:01
Reverie. (Fay Slimm.) Excellent. Oh so many times i meet my muse in the inbetween described...
September 14th, 2019 13:05
Food for Thought (Neville) Sounds absolutely edible mate. Get fat!
September 14th, 2019 13:03
She found me in the grass (Poetic Dan) Open heart poetry from you Dan. Let it all flow.
September 14th, 2019 13:01
Another Good Day to Come. (Goldfinch60) ECM recording label has a certain feel to all its productions, unique...
September 14th, 2019 12:57
MyLife (Purdy61) How hard can it be. Very hard to find the right one. The more of lifes...
September 13th, 2019 15:58
La Rêverie (SerenWise) Beautifully written. Never seen you write like this before.... it\'s...
September 13th, 2019 15:50
Teardrops From My Eyes. (Kevin browne) \"Sleep on it, it\'ll look different in the morning\". Such a glib saying...
September 13th, 2019 15:40
Welcome yourself in (Poetic Dan) My home is a mess but my heart is emotionally tidy. May your home and...
September 13th, 2019 06:30
Solo. (Fay Slimm.) All of the above! Except loneliness. Singleton is simple and so many...
September 13th, 2019 06:16
Starship Is Anybody Out There. (Goldfinch60) We, as humans, may think we rule the earth but let us remember we only...
September 13th, 2019 01:35
Right here (Alta H Mabin) Steamy words of bath time delight.
September 13th, 2019 01:05
Disinterested (Neville) OOOpppss you could well be the silhouette in my piece today. Your...
September 13th, 2019 00:57
Letting Go. (Kevin browne) It\'s a long learning journey isn\'t it. But wisdom doesn\'t crush desire,...
September 12th, 2019 16:08
A to Z and you and me (Alta H Mabin) I\'m reading the algebra of a love equation i think. A over Z = a story...
September 12th, 2019 11:55
Wanted and needed are not the same (Poetic Dan) That is the right attitude and determination with which to see thru this...
September 12th, 2019 10:24
Indelible. (Fay Slimm.) I was being driven through a part of Eden\'s remains today in the...
September 12th, 2019 10:23
Croquet. (Goldfinch60) I was bought a croquet set as a child but the mallets and balls were...
September 12th, 2019 06:25
THE BOUQUET (Michael Edwards) A thing of beauty cast aside for the elements to now own. A deep...
September 12th, 2019 06:21
Correction (Neville) Lots to be read into this little ditty. Creative poetic minds will run...
September 12th, 2019 04:05
The end of it all (Vanessa wallace) I wouldn\'t count on it being the end, there\'s so much evidence of more...
September 11th, 2019 18:48
Silent Killer (Bragee) And a surprising amount of people do get over it. But many more take a...
September 11th, 2019 09:58
IN LABORATORIES ~ A 2 12 Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Students/apprentices traininng in laboratories dont know how lucky they...
September 11th, 2019 06:43
Whisperings. (Fay Slimm.) LOL dried out withered libido indeed! Your writing would do a Heineken job...
September 11th, 2019 06:24
I was not ready for this (Poetic Dan) Sympathy Dan, I have no answers here but to agree with your words. Mt...
September 11th, 2019 05:31
Never Not Once (Neville) That\'s why the lady is a ...... So it looks like we met some of the...
September 11th, 2019 05:25
Letting Go. (Goldfinch60) I can feel the pain it took to write this piece for your neighbor when...
September 11th, 2019 05:20
To the heavens (Alta H Mabin) If there is love in one\'s soul, then there is love to give, love to...
September 11th, 2019 05:14
Finding Moments (Christina8) It\'s very moving to be shown a piece of work all about you, created in...
September 10th, 2019 16:37
Best Friends (Neville) I\'m such a recluse these days i hardly know what friendship is any more....
September 10th, 2019 11:30
Get out of my head (Vanessa wallace) Because you haven\'t replaced them with something more satisfying or more...
September 10th, 2019 11:21
Cease (Sylviasearcher) Courageous writing from the heart of your very soul. What fear of death...
September 10th, 2019 06:59
Constant. (Fay Slimm.) Singing \'hey-ho me laddie oh, away on the tide... we must go\'. Brings...
September 10th, 2019 06:47
No fear (Poetic Dan) There is truth in your words.
September 10th, 2019 06:33
Dandelion wishes (Alta H Mabin) And every windblown seed of a wish dances into a world of our dreamland...
September 10th, 2019 02:11
Sailing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60) I couldn\'t help but see an analogy with a sleeping child in your words...
September 10th, 2019 01:48
RECEIVED FROM MARKS AND SPENCER (Michael Edwards) Your secret\'s out now. To be honest I don\'t give a frock whether you are...
September 10th, 2019 01:45
Rain dance (Alta H Mabin) Dance away life\'s heartaches, dance away all pain, dance into tomorrow,...
September 9th, 2019 14:08
TREES in SEASON ~ QUARTETTE of QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN) I\'m a lover of trees so this piece is right up my street. Do you ever get...
September 9th, 2019 13:31
I’ll stay quiet (A passing lyric) Be your own person.
September 9th, 2019 03:48
End of her time (Poetic Dan) Beautiful tribute to a loved soul, now freed from earthly toil and pains...
September 9th, 2019 03:45
Exciting. (Fay Slimm.) Though Fay is a lovely feminine name, we really could rename you Dawn you...
September 9th, 2019 03:38
Don\'t You Dare Stop Now (Neville) Well at first i had a picture of you two riding a tandem up a hill, she at...
September 9th, 2019 03:29
Treasure Hunt. (Goldfinch60) Sounds like a fun day was had.... the best bit of course is meeting up at...
September 9th, 2019 03:19

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