Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Definitions in Music. (Goldfinch60)
Bugger reading dots dashes alphabet or squiggles i just play the darned...
October 6th, 2019 01:23 - Vibrational link (Poetic Dan)
It is so much pleasure to read you today having read you for a couple of...
October 5th, 2019 15:45 - Vibrational link (Poetic Dan)
It is so much pleasure to read you today having read you for a couple of...
October 5th, 2019 06:02 - HE EARNS HIS FEE (Michael Edwards)
Its beyond me tbh. I just can\'t get that low in spirit.
October 5th, 2019 05:53 - A Good Day on the Road. (Goldfinch60)
Having been a patient driven by a volunteer driver (bless their souls)...
October 5th, 2019 05:51 - Michele Marrulo. (Goldfinch60)
Do you mind??? I\'m still saving up to paint the stairs!
October 4th, 2019 06:30 - Struggle in happiness (Poetic Dan)
Yes Dan you most certainly are doing just what you say. I\'m proud to know...
October 4th, 2019 01:34 - Time\'s Needle. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah, Fay and the dawning, harmony.
Yes indeed the dawning for the ageing...
October 4th, 2019 01:29 - A KNOBBLY BONE (Michael Edwards)
Tell me about it! Everyday i have a battery powered 24/7 drug injector...
October 4th, 2019 01:17 - Perfect Imperfections (Neville)
Such imperfection as beauty finds lodged into our hearts..... unique...
October 3rd, 2019 10:49 - Joyful tear or two, I\'m ready are you? (Poetic Dan)
Your last line contains such an important message to all who are...
October 3rd, 2019 05:56 - Asking. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully written poem of \'love\'s story\' in mature years and the...
October 3rd, 2019 02:54 - DISCOVERING A NEW CAVE ! ๐ BRIAN ๐ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great and entertaining story Brian. I admire pot-holers with a healthy...
October 3rd, 2019 02:38 - Croquet and Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Good to read that now you have found your \'recreational drug of choice\'...
October 3rd, 2019 02:32 - UNDER THE WEATHER? (Michael Edwards)
Or they\'ll do just what it says on the tin!
Good laugh with my first...
October 3rd, 2019 02:27 - Staircase to oblivion (Thesunseeker)
But if you can see the direction is downward then you must be observing...
October 2nd, 2019 16:48 - Blood, water, and sadness (Vanessa wallace)
LOL @ your \"stay\" at MPS... that\'s gotta become your \"life\" in...
October 2nd, 2019 16:44 - Who is She? (Clara)
Life brings all sorts to our door including demons and disasters, which...
October 2nd, 2019 10:03 - My Poems 26 - 50 (Jose Radin Llorca Garduque)
Yep, just like you said yesterday. If quality goes out of the window then...
October 2nd, 2019 06:39 - THE LANGUAGE OF ROSES ? ๐งก ANGELA & BRIAN ๐ COLLABORATION POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes, our luscious roses are so full and rewarding. Hard not to be...
October 2nd, 2019 06:34 - Self Hate (JV)
Nothing wrong with a measure of self hate. To hate you must have made...
October 2nd, 2019 06:32 - Indecent Propositions (Neville)
UTTER FILTH!! More please.
Reminded me of the hooker who was pissed...
October 2nd, 2019 06:12 - Message to My River. (Goldfinch60)
Hard to find a meaningful way to say heartfelt thank you for this....
October 2nd, 2019 06:08 - Maybe. (Fay Slimm.)
Cor! Fay.
That is so so beautiful. Just so damn moving.
So beautiful...
October 2nd, 2019 05:59 - Rhyme for life (Poetic Dan)
Near misses can be terrifying but oh so much better to reflect upon and...
October 2nd, 2019 05:56 - Pick up the pieces (Alta H Mabin)
They are the making of us.
October 1st, 2019 18:58 - dreaming (Siranswerer)
Lovely romantic fairy tale poetry.
Lights up fantasy, would like to see...
October 1st, 2019 18:56 - Here lies She (Clara)
Sometimes that war just can\'t be resisted and oh boy do we pay the price....
October 1st, 2019 18:53 - My Poems 1 - 25 (Jose Radin Llorca Garduque)
I agree with Orchidee.... you will not get comprehension with a flood....
October 1st, 2019 18:40 - In A Dreamers Way. (Kevin browne)
Had to come back to this a few times. It\'s mesmerising.
Flakes and...
October 1st, 2019 15:33 - Day By Day With Chronic Pain (Michelle Syd)
There are times this life brings us the anguish of pain, be it mental or...
October 1st, 2019 15:23 - THERE SHE GOES (Jayb_garang)
It takes two, a lesson wisely learned but not easily learned.
October 1st, 2019 15:04 - Strange Curiosity (Shahla Latifi)
You are right to look to where you see freedom and beauty for those are...
October 1st, 2019 15:03 - Crying Earth (Christina8)
I hope i\'m reading this correctly as a metaphor for green issues.
Yep...
October 1st, 2019 14:52 - Tell me Iโm beautiful (Thewayiwrite)
Love the way you have written the tease which surrounds this.
October 1st, 2019 14:40 - No spoon! (Poetic Dan)
There\'s a lot of good going on in your life these days mister... ain\'t...
October 1st, 2019 14:36 - Midnight rendezvous (Alta H Mabin)
All ingredients of the evenings recipe for love....
October 1st, 2019 12:18 - RICHEST PEOPLE ~ RICHEST COUNTRIES ! ๐งก ANGELA ๐ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Be great if we could spread our wealth with sustainable worth to those at...
October 1st, 2019 10:09 - Assessing the Blues (Neville)
HaHa great play with words and brings a big grin to my face.
Not just a...
October 1st, 2019 10:02 - Difference. (Fay Slimm.)
Visual arts are a wonder and pleasure our moods.
Though easily...
October 1st, 2019 03:48 - Jessye Norman. (Goldfinch60)
Amazing voice moves along her spiritual journey. Wondering and questioning...
October 1st, 2019 03:44 - WHY? (Michael Edwards)
All eyes popped
what a an amazine scene
they began to shove and...
October 1st, 2019 03:41 - Wishes (Neville)
My old ma used to say quite often \"If wishes were horses, then beggars...
September 30th, 2019 14:09 - Now. (Fay Slimm.)
Whilst firmly planning the future perfect i find myself gripped by mother...
September 30th, 2019 14:06 - Riding the wave (Poetic Dan)
Look to the future with the love of passed joys and sorrows. For joy is...
September 30th, 2019 14:02 - Wordiku Four. (Goldfinch60)
Yuk! I hate formulae LOL
September 30th, 2019 14:00 - DEFINITIONS (Michael Edwards)
Invent a handy pocket tape measure encapsulating your points and you\'ll...
September 30th, 2019 14:00 - I Miss Her. (Goldfinch60)
Just got out of hospital and found your words tonite which sadden even the...
September 30th, 2019 13:35 - Write on your own wall, I will not fall (Poetic Dan)
None of us know where life will take us. I hope one day, when growing-up...
September 26th, 2019 04:19 - Deciduous (Neville)
Nice word play - good fun read. Root and branch stuff for the fine...
September 25th, 2019 10:44 - Coveted. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely the romance you have placed into this \'bringing home the...
September 25th, 2019 05:29 - OUT OF THE MOUTHS OF BABES ! ๐งก ANGELA ๐ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Have a look at \'guilty\' which i published today. Same subject BUT your...
September 25th, 2019 02:36 - Looking or Seeing? (Goldfinch60)
Long ago, as a child, whilst watching a cowboys and indians film i first...
September 25th, 2019 01:47 - Only you (Alta H Mabin)
What changed? Why don\'t you do what you used to do in verse one...
September 25th, 2019 01:40 - scrambled words of hurt (Leaaa)
Reads like the wool is being lifted from your eyes.
Self worth and...
September 25th, 2019 01:25 - True Love is Bliss Not Just a Kiss (Airatmaninravi)
You could say it all in four lines. Why don\'t you?
September 25th, 2019 01:05 - JC POLYTICIAN ~ TOO SOCIALIST ? ๐งก ANGELA & BRIAN ๐ FOUR SEXTETS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is a good fun piece today. You might be upsetting a few though but he...
September 25th, 2019 01:01 - Let it Go (Birddie Jane)
Did you look into yourself and find this experience moved you on? I hope...
September 25th, 2019 00:47 - OUR LEADERS IN CLERIHEWS (Michael Edwards)
And now the way forward
could become quite awkward
unless we get an...
September 25th, 2019 00:38 - Endless Circles (Smallest_stars)
Yes i agree. When inspired, it is as if another spirit, another force,...
September 25th, 2019 00:34 - Sound of silence (Vanessa wallace)
Say it loud, say it clear!
\"Get - up! Stand - up! Stand up for...
September 25th, 2019 00:21 - Gilded (SerenWise)
When all around the world thinks we are falling apart, in reality all we...
September 25th, 2019 00:18 - Colors of the Rainbow (FredPeyer)
Great sentiment in your word today and i am already there, cognizant of...
September 24th, 2019 12:46 - Crystal clear (Poetic Dan)
Creating from the darkness (or from nothing) a gift has to be the finest...
September 24th, 2019 12:36 - These Words (Neville)
I like it, the contrasting elite and whores at my level.
Reminds me i...
September 24th, 2019 12:31 - Understanding. (Fay Slimm.)
What beautiful thoughts.
Upon reflection you do help heal scars (just...
September 24th, 2019 02:51 - The Lightening in My Dark. (Goldfinch60)
The nights draw in as we head toward another season. But ahead there is...
September 24th, 2019 02:44 - Not so perfect, dinner for one (Alta H Mabin)
Firmly entrenched as a singleton now mealtimes are no occasion at all....
September 24th, 2019 02:40 - Clueless (FredPeyer)
I\'m sure your destiny is there Fred. It is something we all share in...
September 24th, 2019 02:33 - Stashed (Neville)
Sadly our memory can let us down though Neville. As I have said before, a...
September 23rd, 2019 12:31 - Healing (Meg)
That\'s a great place to begin the rest of your life from...
September 23rd, 2019 12:14 - Placed in your hand (Poetic Dan)
\"You\'ll never outlive the love in a tear\" What a classic line...
September 23rd, 2019 12:11 - HARVEST ~ JOHN BETTJEMAN ๐งก ANGELA & BRIAN ๐ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Very enjoyable fun write. All those festivals (and the mice) existed long...
September 23rd, 2019 03:06 - Fear From Your Cries... (Kevin browne)
Many thoughts of reflection. What was learned, what gems handed down, what...
September 23rd, 2019 03:00 - Vindication (B-LAH-que)
Hmmm it\'s definitely an inner fight not to hit the vengence trail...
September 23rd, 2019 02:55 - Waiting (Alta H Mabin)
Sad that many such human beauties appear to be awaiting stormy...
September 23rd, 2019 02:51 - Changing. (Fay Slimm.)
I thought that lot was just last night\'s supper the missus left int\'oven...
September 23rd, 2019 02:11 - Why Do You Write Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
Initially i think we are lucky if we are touched by the naive instinct to...
September 23rd, 2019 02:06 - Rock House of light you can call home (Poetic Dan)
Give of your heart the love you held within. Give with your mind the...
September 22nd, 2019 22:59 - Beginnings. (Goldfinch60)
Chances of new beginnings arrive every day.... can i catch a good on by...
September 22nd, 2019 22:53 - Inner child be free (Poetic Dan)
Keep on doing what you\'re doing... it\'s just so RIGHT!
Great pic of...
September 21st, 2019 14:57 - Splitting Hairs (Neville)
Here we go... Nev once again leads me into a pleasureable mystery tale.......
September 21st, 2019 12:52 - IS OUR FUTURE ROBOTIC ? ๐งก A 2 10 2 SONNET ๐ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Well I think politics will get in the way of your predictions. There will...
September 21st, 2019 02:58 - The beauty in pain (Alta H Mabin)
Emotional pain can be a great teacher for us. Well that has been my...
September 21st, 2019 02:48 - Boundless Admiration. (Goldfinch60)
I know exactly where this comes from Goldfinch. Those dear people...
September 21st, 2019 02:44 - LATEST BATCH OF SHORTIES No2 (Michael Edwards)
When in the city
here\'s a thought
you\'ll lose eighty quid
if in a...
September 21st, 2019 02:37 - A Perfectly Reasonable Question (Neville)
Question Neville \"Will it need tending?\" Mine won\'t that\'s for...
September 20th, 2019 06:48 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.)
I used to see the ccommon land on fire when i lived across the valley from...
September 20th, 2019 04:03 - BORROWING & LENDING ๐งก A SONNET ๐ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wise words. It took me a while to learn not to lend things, initially...
September 20th, 2019 03:51 - May I Kindly (Hidden)
This reads like the writer has fallen in love from afar. May not even have...
September 20th, 2019 03:40 - River of love, that\'s now joined all of us! (Poetic Dan)
So happy for you and yours Dan. Congratulations to you two clever people...
September 20th, 2019 03:23 - Acceptance. (Goldfinch60)
Nice piece. I do agree in general but some people and their opinions are...
September 20th, 2019 02:57 - PEGGITY PEG (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha \'pat\' on the head in the meadow. I can almost hear that...
September 20th, 2019 02:02 - Days Of Reflection. (Kevin browne)
This speaks to me of addressing a newish lover who like you has been...
September 20th, 2019 00:52 - To the sounds of Debussy (Alta H Mabin)
Et tu ma Claire de Lune?
Lovely loving words to one of my fav classic...
September 20th, 2019 00:21 - Interlude (FredPeyer)
Good to see you writing again Fred.
Heartfelt piece today which speaks...
September 20th, 2019 00:17 - Help (Vanessa wallace)
Today I read the words which are your falling tears and emotionally reach...
September 19th, 2019 13:20 - Pillar in my world (Poetic Dan)
So f...ing marvellous to read your words in this joyous piece from you...
September 19th, 2019 13:15 - There Are Those (Neville)
Nice one Neville! Perfectly formed and with a superb closure.
September 19th, 2019 13:09 - Naked Heart. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, Unsub is spot-on about your first verse.... you show my inner...
September 19th, 2019 13:06
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