Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Biscuit? (Saxon Crow)
Your words explain that we are creatures of our moods.
A biscuit brings...
March 13th, 2020 06:08 - Gratitude. (Goldfinch60)
Much wisdom in Cicero\'s words and i totally agree. There will always be...
March 13th, 2020 06:04 - Movement. (Fay Slimm.)
Splendid, our lady of the dawns mischief.
It\'s been a while since i saw...
March 13th, 2020 06:01 - Alas not (Markziff)
You\'re better off with the inflateable type. At least you can put them in...
March 12th, 2020 16:27 - Wedding Bells or Warning Signs? (PoeticBiscuit)
Ouch the cracks today in yesterdays bliss. The warning bells you hear but...
March 12th, 2020 16:24 - Lonely (Aa Harvey)
That\'s how it is and it\'s safe.
March 12th, 2020 16:20 - Shadows Within (Dominick beltran)
It does not matter what anyone else says, thinks or does about your past...
March 12th, 2020 16:11 - Fatality Trap (Saxon Crow)
she washed her hands in water quite hot
for she\'d heard on the news what...
March 12th, 2020 07:58 - Not so little Red Riding Hood (Tundrol)
My oh my what big eyes you have..... all the better for seeing you...
March 12th, 2020 07:51 - Reunited (Anonymousblue)
Ah the longing for the one-ness of two in love.
The clouds will be blown...
March 12th, 2020 07:48 - Some words bring tension (Poetic Dan)
I always enjoy your vids mate and this one was a pleasure.
Yep, religion...
March 12th, 2020 04:42 - PLENTY FOR ALL (Michael Edwards)
Mmm a bit of a worry, especially for you with customers entering your...
March 12th, 2020 04:32 - Wallpaper Row. (Goldfinch60)
Well done for playing what has been my favourite piece of music for many...
March 12th, 2020 04:27 - Pride (Rein Armstrong)
You have every right to be yourself and feel free of any oppression.
Fine...
March 11th, 2020 17:08 - It\'s When... (Saxon Crow)
Quite beautiful saxon. Gone out of my life are those times and i thank you...
March 11th, 2020 12:44 - It\'s When... (Saxon Crow)
Quite beautiful saxon. Gone out of my life are those times and i thank you...
March 11th, 2020 12:16 - Change. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh take me once again to the stage
before the crowd where i was...
March 11th, 2020 11:59 - Spring Arises. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely Video of Satchmo thank you. That man could do things on a trumpet...
March 11th, 2020 11:48 - Needles eye (Poetic Dan)
What a superb video, those dogs love being out with you and so...
March 11th, 2020 11:36 - WINTER NIGHTS (2) (Michael Edwards)
You mean i gotta lose weight if i\'m going to go out on the balcony this...
March 11th, 2020 11:28 - My Life in Music. (Goldfinch60)
Strangely now i listen to less music than i used to. I find i have become...
March 9th, 2020 06:32 - LONG LEGGED CELERY (Michael Edwards)
Did you Flaming-go and buy some. Outside our local Lidl was a bloke with a...
March 9th, 2020 06:22 - when the world was flat (Dusk arising)
I don\'t know why you think you have to regurgitate all this well known...
March 8th, 2020 10:47 - Hesitation (Neville)
Baaaaaaa! Is this a question of when you say \"jump\", I say.... ...
March 8th, 2020 07:29 - THE PLACE WHERE WE WORSHIP ! 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 A BALLAD (ANGELA & BRIAN)
LOL at the patronising preaching in this piece telling people what to do....
March 8th, 2020 05:26 - Annie\'s Poem. (Goldfinch60)
Words of encouragement from a good friend who knows love of mankind.
A...
March 8th, 2020 03:05 - “Love Me” (Chantallove2017)
Love yourself more and you will find better fruit which the maggots of...
March 8th, 2020 00:52 - Listen (Angmaria)
Yes, that\'s the way of it though these days the biscuit tin stays in the...
March 8th, 2020 00:50 - A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry In Vain (Aa Harvey)
Oh love cares very much what \'they\' say if \'they\' are the other one...
March 8th, 2020 00:45 - If I Knew Then (DesertWords)
Soothing to be touched by your words today. Life\'s injustices are rarely...
March 8th, 2020 00:43 - The old fool (Tundrol)
I like this, a very clever twist upon a cupid tale.
A credit to your...
March 8th, 2020 00:35 - Forsaken (Neville)
One senses the nobility of aging here. The jewel of memories set against...
March 8th, 2020 00:32 - Acceptance (Goldfinch60)
Yep, you nailed it. That\'s what life\'s all about. It takes most of us...
March 7th, 2020 02:33 - JUST A SNORE (Michael Edwards)
Now that really made me laugh - thank u for brightening up my morning with...
March 7th, 2020 02:31 - The Umbunkle (Saxon Crow)
Here follows the defining story of Goldfinches BUMbunkle:-
Whilst...
March 7th, 2020 02:27 - A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry Buggy (Aa Harvey)
I really like this, such truth in just four lines. Really good stuff.
March 6th, 2020 13:13 - I love your skinny legs (Tundrol)
Age brings appreciation of what really is beautiful.
March 6th, 2020 13:11 - A HOUSE AND A HOME 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lovely classic poetry, great flow LOL.
March 6th, 2020 13:10 - Broken (Neville)
Streuth Neville this is a dark picture but oh my so beautifully...
March 6th, 2020 10:50 - Only Love. (Fay Slimm.)
OK I get it, so you only see your lover when the lights are out. Least...
March 6th, 2020 10:32 - Story of my life (Renzi)
I know your old pals on here will join with me in saying our hearts go out...
March 6th, 2020 10:27 - Within Our Worlds. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful ain\'t they... usually theres a 2nd one too a bit feinter..... ...
March 6th, 2020 10:12 - ELEPHANTS ON THE RUN (Michael Edwards)
They paint the underside of their feet yellow so they cant be seen hiding...
March 6th, 2020 10:10 - An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather (Saxon Crow)
a - ring a - ring a - roses
poor Saxon\'s got wet toeziz
a-tishoo a-...
March 6th, 2020 10:05 - No Eulogy (FredPeyer)
Don\'t go running off anywhere soon Fred. We need ya here mate.
March 5th, 2020 13:19 - Chosen Memories (Clara)
Blissful. So often we read on MPS of love which didn\'t last recounted in...
March 5th, 2020 10:22 - Chosen Memories (Clara)
Blissful. So often we read on MPS of love which didn\'t last recounted in...
March 5th, 2020 10:00 - Mischief. (Fay Slimm.)
LOVE IT love it love it! I have just read Saxon Crow\'s windy piece and i...
March 5th, 2020 05:43 - The Wind and Me (Saxon Crow)
Reading your words today brought back a feeling of childhood freedom......
March 5th, 2020 05:37 - I SAW A WORM (Michael Edwards)
I saw a worm yesterday, at least i thought i did. What on earth it was...
March 5th, 2020 05:17 - Tom Bowling. (Goldfinch60)
As we age we learn that, what to me comes across as a rather harsh...
March 5th, 2020 05:11 - House Upon the Hill (Vanabba3)
Oh i want to go inside and experience whatever it is which gives the place...
March 5th, 2020 05:05 - Honest Faults (Railasunshine)
Nice one. Your piece today tells it from the woman\'s angle when the guy...
March 5th, 2020 05:01 - Love Is Not My Drug (Narcisa)
I like this a lot. Have you been looking at my dreams of those imperfect...
March 4th, 2020 17:30 - Money equals tears (Geige00)
LOL lotta truth in this but very funny too. Well written.
March 4th, 2020 17:24 - It Could Have Been Me (Saxon Crow)
This is a very very moving tribute to Jamie. Certainly brought tears to my...
March 4th, 2020 17:18 - TODAY (FredPeyer)
It\'s all in ones outlook and mood i guess because both of these opposing...
March 4th, 2020 13:55 - Demon Dog Envy (TWENTY3)
I\'m glad this was only two verses because i was terrified. I think i...
March 4th, 2020 13:49 - Sylvia\'s Mother Said (Neville)
Something for us all waits at the end of the earthly existence we call...
March 4th, 2020 08:42 - Yellowness. (Fay Slimm.)
Envious of your getting down to eye level these beauties.... at sea with...
March 4th, 2020 08:34 - First Rant of the Year! (Goldfinch60)
Oh thats sickening. Thank goodness you are the man you are and can deal...
March 4th, 2020 08:23 - FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Well you live and learn. I\'ve heard of new laid eggs but new laid grass?...
March 4th, 2020 08:18 - What Poetry is All About (FredPeyer)
Wow Fred, there\'s a lot in there of my spilled emotion whilst i...
March 3rd, 2020 16:53 - time flies (Crystal Hope)
Lovely tribute with much love and affection shining from your words.
March 3rd, 2020 16:36 - Richer. (Fay Slimm.)
I feel I should re-visit your poem today having ranted earlier for which i...
March 3rd, 2020 12:06 - Scars (John Prophet)
Scarface maybe LOL.
Your words today echo thoughts i have had many...
March 3rd, 2020 11:09 - Closed Side - Simple Gratitude (Nafis Light)
Short and sweet (more powerful in my eyes).
Your words today are of the...
March 3rd, 2020 11:03 - The Wood is Green (Saxon Crow)
Great welcoming of spring in your words today. Bring on warmer...
March 3rd, 2020 11:01 - Global Warning (Neville)
Meanwhile several million voices cried out as if in a silence of impotence...
March 3rd, 2020 08:45 - Richer. (Fay Slimm.)
Seeing so many around with the droop of sadness about their personna I...
March 3rd, 2020 06:31 - Losing The Loveliest Love (Adrianna Kjeld)
A heartfelt plea comes through very strong here.
March 3rd, 2020 06:14 - FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
These sexually active subjects of your couplets are obviously out to...
March 3rd, 2020 06:10 - Self Belief. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s about conditioning and a certain kind of narrow mindedness. Now...
March 3rd, 2020 06:05 - His Masterpiece (Clara)
Love what you\'ve done here. Truly artistic poetry. Frame it LOL.
March 2nd, 2020 13:22 - The Illusion of Now (Saxon Crow)
Playing devils advocate here.... how useful is the past? What do we...
March 2nd, 2020 10:52 - Some Words Are Too Heavy (Neville)
Ha! You\'re a poet and dontcha just know it. Words are our tools which we...
March 2nd, 2020 07:30 - All or nothing (Aa Harvey)
Written by a person who knows their mind and knows what they want.
March 2nd, 2020 07:26 - Love\'s Due. (Fay Slimm.)
An anatomy of reticence to allow ones heart to play again in three concise...
March 2nd, 2020 07:24 - Crossing Out/Thinking Again. (Goldfinch60)
As Kenneth Williams famously said \"Stop messin about\".
Just a bit of...
March 2nd, 2020 07:18 - Bound by the river (Poetic Dan)
Wisdom in your words today Dan. Something must be in the March air for I...
March 2nd, 2020 07:15 - i am,all that i am (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A masterpiece! Pure brilliance!
I love this piece, it\'s composition,...
March 1st, 2020 17:03 - Empty of Love (Shahla Latifi)
A very moving piece from you. Is this the sadness held deep within one in...
March 1st, 2020 13:17 - a poem about nothing (Ivanpetryshyn)
Don\'t bother with people who cant see writing beyond a formulae. Just...
March 1st, 2020 12:17 - Authenticity (Dakota)
Lack of and inappropriately placed punctuation has left me confuse about...
March 1st, 2020 08:38 - Awaking Each Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Positivity. You either have it or you don\'t (though i do try to encourage...
March 1st, 2020 07:39 - The Atheist (PotbellyPleb)
Potbelly rather than send me huge private messages attempting to tell me...
March 1st, 2020 07:26 - A Book By its Cover (JWKP98)
A very long winded way of saying what the title leads us to...
February 29th, 2020 11:01 - Nature\'s Orchestra. (Goldfinch60)
To be in harmony with nature in that environment is priceless. Wonderful...
February 29th, 2020 05:50 - thin skin (AJ)
Have you actually tried laying down on your own at night in a graveyard....
February 28th, 2020 16:53 - Time (Narcisa)
Like a mantra of truth in a time of suffering..... Should be read aloud...
February 28th, 2020 16:21 - The Other Side (Gino)
Here you show us the human belief in another existence without touching...
February 28th, 2020 13:19 - The Atheist (PotbellyPleb)
I\'m not sure who is the most confused here, you or your readers.
February 28th, 2020 13:10 - stuck with endless over\'s (Lauraoverxo)
I agree with Nemo but somehow this left me feeling like it ought to be two...
February 28th, 2020 10:09 - Mediocre Days of Living (Saxon Crow)
Reads like the current page of my life story SC.
Yet still my mind has...
February 28th, 2020 09:52 - Together (Neville)
Without a traditional gravestone or plaque it is fitting to have words...
February 28th, 2020 09:48 - Watch as I fall (Ethan Daniel)
Great personal words displaying the pain of watching your love being...
February 28th, 2020 09:40 - Spring Knows. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh what a superior final line. Sgt Major Nature commands his bulb forces...
February 28th, 2020 04:41 - The Croquet Myth. (Goldfinch60)
Aqua croquet, the underwater version.... not a game to be snorkelled at!...
February 28th, 2020 04:33 - Tone Deaf? (Saxon Crow)
Bring on surround sound...... such an eerie thought though. where would...
February 27th, 2020 17:24 - VALUE OF AN EGG ? 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 NUTRITION 1. (ANGELA & BRIAN)
LOL this reads like a lesson in junior school.
February 27th, 2020 12:41
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