Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Happiness (Emme) Your second line brought a smile and the smile grew as i read on and on...
  February 8th, 2020 15:10
• Happiness (Emme) Your second line brought a smile and the smile grew as i read on and on...
  February 8th, 2020 13:57
• From the Ether. (Goldfinch60) No other has that fluffy mellow haunting trumpet sound of Chet. And his...
  February 8th, 2020 04:06
• A Place To Hate (Fractured Dreams) Is hiis an ode to Mr Donald Trump?
  February 7th, 2020 13:14
• This Must be a Special Day. (Goldfinch60) Ah those days. But they\'re all there ready for us to make them as special...
  February 7th, 2020 09:48
• THE OXFORD COMMA (Michael Edwards) I hereby pledge to honour the Oxford comma.
  February 7th, 2020 09:47
• Stunning Art. (Goldfinch60) No matter where it comes from, we are all so inspired to express how...
  February 6th, 2020 07:54
• Tale of the Time (A Boy With Roses) Full of mystery and enchanting, bewildering nuance only to jet off onto...
  February 5th, 2020 20:11
• Random fun (Poetic Dan) Igloo eh?..... luxury that is. When i was a kid we lived in an ig ... ...
  February 5th, 2020 16:24
• I Cant Believe We Just Met (Julianna) For all of us out there/here hoping that we will one day meet a true soul...
  February 5th, 2020 08:50
• Sharp Edges (Xeina) Reality versus his perception. Nicely done.
  February 5th, 2020 07:55
• Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.) Blimey.... to think how language matured over the years... in the...
  February 5th, 2020 07:42
• Island of Dreams. (Goldfinch60) The island is there because you believe in it, i guess it;s a part of your...
  February 5th, 2020 07:35
• Greeting. (Fay Slimm.) This to usher in early spring. Let us hope frosts will not punish such...
  February 4th, 2020 16:08
• A Hundred Years Ago. (Goldfinch60) Theres always a pleasure when u can relax with people who grew up in the...
  February 4th, 2020 03:38
• Owl-Sound. (Fay Slimm.) \"An absolute hoot!\" Makes you feel grateful youre not a little rodent...
  February 3rd, 2020 13:51
• Owl-Sound. (Fay Slimm.) \"An absolute hoot!\" Makes you feel grateful youre not a little rodent...
  February 3rd, 2020 09:19
• Empty House. (Goldfinch60) It is still early days. Such a major change in your life will have it\'s...
  February 3rd, 2020 03:15
• NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND (Michael Edwards) \'everyone\'s gone to the moon \' \\remember that song by johnathin...
  February 3rd, 2020 03:06
• Thoughts & Dreams (Markziff) Your prowess shines from this piece. A beautifully crafted emotional cry...
  February 2nd, 2020 08:25
• Why Am I Not Good Enough For Any Of You? (RavenWolfbane24601) I used to feel this way in my younger years. At the end of a relationship...
  February 2nd, 2020 08:20
• This (Auxillary) I read your piece and all the comments and replies to date. My feelings...
  February 2nd, 2020 08:01
• I love you (Jauntypoet93) Beautifully written exploration of your feelings here. So seldom seen this...
  February 2nd, 2020 07:54
• Writing (Thewayiwrite) Oh i totally agree. Like a drug of self exploration.... vivid pictures...
  February 2nd, 2020 07:40
• BEYOND THE SUNSET 🧡 BREXIT 🤍 A MEDITATION 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN) Beyond every sunset is a sunrise - the beginning of a new day. Time not...
  February 1st, 2020 05:04
• Medicine of Laughter (Goldfinch60) A demonstrably positive outlook.
  February 1st, 2020 05:01
• New Meaning to My Life. (Goldfinch60) It reads to me as if the stress of the recent years is finally lifted and...
  January 31st, 2020 09:29
• Should I? (Markziff) I was confused by the line in which you \"long for our lips again to...
  January 30th, 2020 06:38
• A life lived. (Duckykingy) And i hope there are many more years of the same to come for you...
  January 30th, 2020 06:33
• Selfless Steps (Orchidee) Lord we beseech you, clear our minds of this man made brainwashing that we...
  January 30th, 2020 06:28
• BREXIT ~ 🧡🤍💙 ~ BRITANNIA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Tut at the last utterances of the minority who lost out to the majority....
  January 30th, 2020 06:20
• The dark side is always here (Poetic Dan) Hey Dan, why dont you take a few days off and write something about the...
  January 30th, 2020 05:38
• Another Drug? (Goldfinch60) What can i say? You know i wholeheartedly agree with your point of...
  January 30th, 2020 05:33
• What Shall I do? (Goldfinch60) Well here\'s hoping your TV doesn\'t fail you.
  January 29th, 2020 10:03
• STAGES OF LIFE (Michael Edwards) Very clever and thought provoking. Less is more.
  January 29th, 2020 10:01
• My River of Joy. (Goldfinch60) The future is beautiful too and your river will always be there to spur...
  January 28th, 2020 04:35
• EMPTY BOTTLE (Michael Edwards) Whatsum? Flotsum, got some! Nice play with words ME
  January 28th, 2020 04:33
• Background Noise (Joshua Harrison) I felt this deserved to be two or more separate poems/pieces.
  January 27th, 2020 10:06
• Tired of T.V. (Aa Harvey) LOL yes a good fun read. Exactly describes the way i felt last night as i...
  January 27th, 2020 08:51
• Summer Fire (MojoFreewrite) Back to days of yore so they say. I guess we all have a time in the past...
  January 27th, 2020 08:32
• Musing (Fay Slimm.) \"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies, coming my way\". No matter what...
  January 27th, 2020 05:59
• Stay Weird. (Goldfinch60) My world of music is/was filled with weird eccentric artists e.g. stanley...
  January 27th, 2020 05:53
• Distractions (Asrealastheycome) Good thought provoking piece. Echoing my thoughts when i see so many...
  January 26th, 2020 10:45
• Death is inevitable. (Aa Harvey) Yep, thats exactly how life is. There are only two certainties. We are...
  January 26th, 2020 10:39
• Holding on tightly (Misskay) Heartfelt loss pours from your words here and cant fail but touch your...
  January 26th, 2020 10:36
• Am i falling in love again?🥴❤️ (Raghav.k0) The wonderful feelings of falling in love can\'t really be bettered in our...
  January 26th, 2020 10:34
• Where Roses Grow. (Goldfinch60) Wheh i was a keen photographer my theme was to capture how nature reclaims...
  January 26th, 2020 04:25
• doomed love (Justbereal) The funny thing is that none of us are really able to love until we can...
  January 25th, 2020 11:37
• As In Life...#4 (Peelings) (Andrew Charles Forrest) Fun. This can be read to mean several things. But would you settle for...
  January 25th, 2020 10:38
• Feelings I Feel (Rjandtina) Happiness radiates from poem today! It\'s so uplifting to read these words...
  January 25th, 2020 07:38
• Autistic Struggles (Slnarnwl83) Great to read you on MPS site. Do what you do and do what you can is my...
  January 25th, 2020 06:39
• New Chapter. (Goldfinch60) Hey and theres no career path or nine to five toil..... go for it LOL
  January 25th, 2020 05:19
• The Ghost in the Shadows (Mirrorphen) The frustration and pain of this piece really call out. There is torture...
  January 25th, 2020 05:15
• Screams (Jackeggz) Silent screams are most perceived by those who have screamed so silently...
  January 25th, 2020 05:10
• THE EASE OF SLEAZE (Joe Marcello) And does the truth just become one more round of \'false news\'? Even...
  January 24th, 2020 15:27
• Unforgettable. (Fay Slimm.) I found this really really moving. You touch places where the concealed...
  January 24th, 2020 12:00
• Final Parting. (Goldfinch60) Truly wonderful is the way you understand love and life\'s cycle. You know...
  January 24th, 2020 11:54
• WHERE NO ROSES GROW (Michael Edwards) Well created air of gloom and doom persists until those final lines of...
  January 24th, 2020 11:48
• Teardrops (Reivax Camlost) Sometimes i wonder what my teardrops are for, what has motivated them to...
  January 23rd, 2020 11:54
• Tell me why (Wildmanwade) Left me wanting to know \'haunted by what?\' We exist in a world where...
  January 23rd, 2020 11:47
• Black Sea (Seeker123) Nice stuff. But go ahead and bite the bullet.
  January 23rd, 2020 11:43
• I\'m not fed up with me (Poetic Dan) Many moons ago an old boss of mine said \"I\'m old enough and ugly enough...
  January 23rd, 2020 11:31
• Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.) You are so right. This is something which cannot be taught but rather has...
  January 23rd, 2020 05:15
• Ooh Ironing! (Goldfinch60) I have found the secret. Dont buy clothes which need ironing, Anyway...
  January 23rd, 2020 05:11
• HE (Michael Edwards) Seeing that title HE took me straight back to childhood vision of the top...
  January 23rd, 2020 05:09
• A memory (Nemo) A tale of haunting and regret i sense. More here than meets the eye and...
  January 22nd, 2020 13:56
• A Given Day. (Fay Slimm.) Your old friend sounds a real treasure. Your words today brought some of...
  January 22nd, 2020 11:32
• Forest of Dean. (Goldfinch60) The forest, as locals call it, is a vast wonderland of variety. Lots to...
  January 22nd, 2020 02:44
• Welcome to Far Town (Aa Harvey) Striking out at christianity\'s deaf ears eh? A doomsday warning for any...
  January 21st, 2020 15:06
• Where Humility Is Needed (PotbellyPleb) This dude was definitely \'fly\'.
  January 21st, 2020 13:11
• Twisted Ears (PotbellyPleb) OK \'big ears\' I really enjoyed this. It\'s the third piece of yours i...
  January 21st, 2020 13:09
• A Mother\'s View (PotbellyPleb) Love the way you\'ve chosen to present this \'conversational...
  January 21st, 2020 13:06
• The Shore (PotbellyPleb) To read you is delightful! Firstly i read your accompanying words which...
  January 21st, 2020 13:03
• Stars (Nemo) That is a pearl of a poem. Well written sir!
  January 21st, 2020 12:55
• WINTER WONDERLAND 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 FIVE FROSTY HAIKU ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Love the picture of ice sculpture. Had to highlight your words to read...
  January 21st, 2020 12:50
• The Day Started Well. (Goldfinch60) Not since i was a youngster have i been able to turn the radio on and...
  January 21st, 2020 06:13
• For you & me (Poetic Dan) LOL at \'choose to exist\'. Does someone give us a choice. The real...
  January 21st, 2020 06:08
• I Remember (Blstrickla42) Nicely woven piece about how some of life\'s misfortunes resolve...
  January 20th, 2020 09:12
• We There. (Fay Slimm.) The wonderful thing which love is creates a treasure within us which,...
  January 20th, 2020 07:57
• Not all things have to be faced, some is here to teach a different race (Poetic Dan) Demons will never leave you Dan so the thing is to come to terms with...
  January 20th, 2020 04:01
• You Stopped By (SheWasTheSun) May she come again into those dreams. A delight to read.
  January 20th, 2020 01:50
• The crippling act of conformity (ThomasMikaelson 15) Be what you are and say shit to conformity. Yes, be brave enough to ask...
  January 19th, 2020 18:58
• Living (Blstrickla42) A lesson in self healing of a poet. Should life ever strike you another...
  January 19th, 2020 18:54
• Rivering. (Fay Slimm.) The magic of naturally flowing water. Taken to the bank upon your words...
  January 19th, 2020 18:45
• Bright side (Poetic Dan) Your youngest is absolutely adorable Dan. We are all part-timers i think...
  January 19th, 2020 07:14
• Sunny, Frosty Morning. (Goldfinch60) Did it take you back to the days when mum used to send you off to school...
  January 19th, 2020 07:09
• You Never Know (UnknownSV) Beautifully written gentle piece about an awful ordeal. You are truly...
  January 18th, 2020 09:23
• Unanswered. (Goldfinch60) Some questions we ask cannot be answered, but a faith in something more...
  January 18th, 2020 09:20
• THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (7) (Michael Edwards) Draw blood. It puts a passion into your work.
  January 18th, 2020 09:16
• Challenge. (Fay Slimm.) Let us not judge him/her by the goals he/she achieved but rather by the...
  January 16th, 2020 14:02
• Grave Walking. (Goldfinch60) I cant help but see the funny side of this.... what on earth are they...
  January 16th, 2020 13:57
• THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (6) (Michael Edwards) Made me think of the contrast between jazz musicians and classically...
  January 16th, 2020 13:50
• Paths in Life. (Goldfinch60) Full marks to you on this as I know how earnest you are in this. Good to...
  January 14th, 2020 07:22
• Mushrooms Again. (Goldfinch60) Thats an old favourite and even though i knew the punch line it brought a...
  January 13th, 2020 04:13
• THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (3&4) (Michael Edwards) Oh so true are your words of learned wisdom today. I wish more of our mps...
  January 13th, 2020 04:11
• Wholesome Waiting (Orchidee) She stood on the bridge at midnite the sea was all a quivver she gave a...
  January 12th, 2020 07:03
• Wholesome Waiting (Orchidee) She stood on the bridge at midnite the sea was all a quivver she gave a...
  January 12th, 2020 06:53
• I\'m In Love At Last. (Kevin browne) Bright cheerful and positive romantic piece from you today. A virtual...
  January 12th, 2020 05:12
• The Innocence of Childhood. (Goldfinch60) The child within just needs waking up sometimes but i think its always...
  January 12th, 2020 05:09
• Maybe (Ron parrish aka wordman) Nice one. The elusive Miss Right of our dreams ... where is she? Superb...
  January 11th, 2020 14:18