Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Silent Side - Bye and Hi (Nafis Light)
Yes you\'re so right we do tend to live like that.... as Neville pointed...
February 14th, 2020 09:46 - Discarded (Neville)
Yes i had noticed this trend and don\'t care for it.... but the throw...
February 14th, 2020 09:42 - Vibrations (John Prophet)
I found this format/layout too difficult to read and absorb the content....
February 14th, 2020 07:57 - SAINT VALENTINE ๐ ANGELA ๐ BRIAN ๐ A 5 7 ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
PMSL well if you believe all that stuff you\'ve placed as a footnote you...
February 14th, 2020 05:09 - Penny Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
The light is surely there Goldfinch but I wish all could see it and bathe...
February 14th, 2020 02:49 - What Happened to my Dream? (Rrodriguez)
Is this in ernest or tongue in cheek? All around us is the beautiful...
February 14th, 2020 01:15 - reckless in love and other things (Queer-with-a-pen)
Love as an emotion, rther than a physical act, is a noble place to begin...
February 14th, 2020 01:12 - Waiting (Neville)
Took me straight to the woods where we used to trek and play when i was a...
February 13th, 2020 17:51 - I\'m you, I\'m me, I\'m rippling free (Poetic Dan)
Happy families is important Mr Family Man.
February 13th, 2020 17:46 - Valentine Moon. (Fay Slimm.)
Please, please send me a valentines Missy Moon for the crater good of...
February 13th, 2020 17:20 - There Are Good People. (Goldfinch60)
LOL send him round .. I have fences to mend but leaving them until this...
February 13th, 2020 17:12 - Ages Past? (Saxon Crow)
Ah, wisdom comes at a price, accompanied by aching limbs and failing...
February 12th, 2020 13:47 - Beginnings. (Fay Slimm.)
You\'ve so well encompassed the joy of life in advancing years here. I...
February 12th, 2020 13:38 - To Be Heard (Tiffany_Arnold)
This is so well written and held me gripped to the end. It\'s not only...
February 12th, 2020 13:01 - Until Spring (Neville)
Your words today make me mindful of the current state of our trees. In my...
February 12th, 2020 06:05 - LOVE & MARRIAGE ๐ ANGELA ๐ BRIAN ๐ FIVE 57577 SENRYU ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I enjoyed this full of mirth piece. Marriage hmm... been there failed at...
February 12th, 2020 03:55 - This Is Our Life Now (Clara)
Laughed out loud at your last line. The scurge of society today... erm...
February 12th, 2020 03:47 - SHALL WE ? (Fay Slimm.)
Oh for contentment! That knowing togetherness bred of love trust and...
February 12th, 2020 03:31 - Remarkably Unfinished (Neville)
Yep, you gotta let \'em go otherwise you\'re cage-ing them. \"If you love...
February 12th, 2020 03:26 - I met him on here & now I give more than a tear. R.i.p (poet passed) (Poetic Dan)
Dan, such sad news.
Kevin was a true \'one off\'. He had a unique style...
February 12th, 2020 03:13 - Stained Heart (FredPeyer)
Hello Fred, good to see you posting again. Well if the words you publish...
February 12th, 2020 03:00 - Porch Light (Goldfinch60)
Ya just cant get rid of the buggers can you? LOL
Joking apart, your...
February 12th, 2020 02:31 - Different (Sylviasearcher)
This is really powerful and so well composed. I\'m envious of the skill...
February 10th, 2020 10:34 - Forsaken (Fractured Dreams)
As you portray, sometimes it\'s easier to live in the night. Where one\'s...
February 10th, 2020 10:31 - noitcelfeR (Neville)
Pathos! I thought i\'d found myself long ago but only recently it dawned...
February 10th, 2020 10:28 - Resolutions. (Fay Slimm.)
Do you know, after reading this piece, i\'m getting all enthusiastic. If...
February 10th, 2020 10:22 - Hold on if you can (Poetic Dan)
What a wonderful treat for your beloved to see these words from your...
February 10th, 2020 10:18 - Departed Manners. (Goldfinch60)
Is it the way they were brought up (dragged?). Where did the parents get...
February 10th, 2020 02:43 - Together (Daydream Believer)
Brought to me the warmth of love shared, lives entwined. Happiness.
February 9th, 2020 19:40 - Cosmic Reflections (Seek)
The wisdom of years woven here into a very pleasing read.
Everything...
February 9th, 2020 19:37 - Silent Side - Stars (Nafis Light)
Offering us big questions of what it\'s all about, what\'s it all for. And...
February 9th, 2020 19:31 - Measure Up (DeviLove)
Reminded me of the Janis Ian song \'at 17\'. Well she may get all the...
February 9th, 2020 19:13 - The Beginning (Kenjii)
Have you considered that poetry with rhyming lines one after the other...
February 9th, 2020 19:07 - Calliope Acrostic (Goldfinch60)
Somewhere woven in your words today is the true meaning of unconditional...
February 9th, 2020 12:34 - How do you (Jaayx3)
You start by telling yourself what a fool you would be to let such a...
February 8th, 2020 19:59 - Hark thee Lover (Neville)
This is quite quite beautiful Neville. Sight of such wonderful things as...
February 8th, 2020 19:53 - Heidi and Snoop (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Where do they get all that zest from? I reckon a dogs life cant be all...
February 8th, 2020 17:26 - Happiness (Emme)
Your second line brought a smile and the smile grew as i read on and on...
February 8th, 2020 15:10 - Happiness (Emme)
Your second line brought a smile and the smile grew as i read on and on...
February 8th, 2020 13:57 - From the Ether. (Goldfinch60)
No other has that fluffy mellow haunting trumpet sound of Chet. And his...
February 8th, 2020 04:06 - A Place To Hate (Fractured Dreams)
Is hiis an ode to Mr Donald Trump?
February 7th, 2020 13:14 - This Must be a Special Day. (Goldfinch60)
Ah those days. But they\'re all there ready for us to make them as special...
February 7th, 2020 09:48 - THE OXFORD COMMA (Michael Edwards)
I hereby pledge to honour the Oxford comma.
February 7th, 2020 09:47 - Stunning Art. (Goldfinch60)
No matter where it comes from, we are all so inspired to express how...
February 6th, 2020 07:54 - Tale of the Time (A Boy With Roses)
Full of mystery and enchanting, bewildering nuance only to jet off onto...
February 5th, 2020 20:11 - Random fun (Poetic Dan)
Igloo eh?..... luxury that is. When i was a kid we lived in an ig ... ...
February 5th, 2020 16:24 - I Cant Believe We Just Met (Julianna)
For all of us out there/here hoping that we will one day meet a true soul...
February 5th, 2020 08:50 - Sharp Edges (Xeina)
Reality versus his perception. Nicely done.
February 5th, 2020 07:55 - Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.)
Blimey.... to think how language matured over the years... in the...
February 5th, 2020 07:42 - Island of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
The island is there because you believe in it, i guess it;s a part of your...
February 5th, 2020 07:35 - Greeting. (Fay Slimm.)
This to usher in early spring. Let us hope frosts will not punish such...
February 4th, 2020 16:08 - A Hundred Years Ago. (Goldfinch60)
Theres always a pleasure when u can relax with people who grew up in the...
February 4th, 2020 03:38 - Owl-Sound. (Fay Slimm.)
\"An absolute hoot!\"
Makes you feel grateful youre not a little rodent...
February 3rd, 2020 13:51 - Owl-Sound. (Fay Slimm.)
\"An absolute hoot!\"
Makes you feel grateful youre not a little rodent...
February 3rd, 2020 09:19 - Empty House. (Goldfinch60)
It is still early days. Such a major change in your life will have it\'s...
February 3rd, 2020 03:15 - NO LAUGHTER LINGERS IN THE WIND (Michael Edwards)
\'everyone\'s gone to the moon
\'
\\remember that song by johnathin...
February 3rd, 2020 03:06 - Thoughts & Dreams (Markziff)
Your prowess shines from this piece. A beautifully crafted emotional cry...
February 2nd, 2020 08:25 - Why Am I Not Good Enough For Any Of You? (RavenWolfbane24601)
I used to feel this way in my younger years. At the end of a relationship...
February 2nd, 2020 08:20 - This (Auxillary)
I read your piece and all the comments and replies to date.
My feelings...
February 2nd, 2020 08:01 - I love you (Jauntypoet93)
Beautifully written exploration of your feelings here. So seldom seen this...
February 2nd, 2020 07:54 - Writing (Thewayiwrite)
Oh i totally agree. Like a drug of self exploration.... vivid pictures...
February 2nd, 2020 07:40 - BEYOND THE SUNSET ๐งก BREXIT ๐ค A MEDITATION ๐ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Beyond every sunset is a sunrise - the beginning of a new day. Time not...
February 1st, 2020 05:04 - Medicine of Laughter (Goldfinch60)
A demonstrably positive outlook.
February 1st, 2020 05:01 - New Meaning to My Life. (Goldfinch60)
It reads to me as if the stress of the recent years is finally lifted and...
January 31st, 2020 09:29 - Should I? (Markziff)
I was confused by the line in which you \"long for our lips again to...
January 30th, 2020 06:38 - A life lived. (Duckykingy)
And i hope there are many more years of the same to come for you...
January 30th, 2020 06:33 - Selfless Steps (Orchidee)
Lord we beseech you, clear our minds of this man made brainwashing that we...
January 30th, 2020 06:28 - BREXIT ~ ๐งก๐ค๐ ~ BRITANNIA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Tut at the last utterances of the minority who lost out to the majority....
January 30th, 2020 06:20 - The dark side is always here (Poetic Dan)
Hey Dan, why dont you take a few days off and write something about the...
January 30th, 2020 05:38 - Another Drug? (Goldfinch60)
What can i say? You know i wholeheartedly agree with your point of...
January 30th, 2020 05:33 - What Shall I do? (Goldfinch60)
Well here\'s hoping your TV doesn\'t fail you.
January 29th, 2020 10:03 - STAGES OF LIFE (Michael Edwards)
Very clever and thought provoking.
Less is more.
January 29th, 2020 10:01 - My River of Joy. (Goldfinch60)
The future is beautiful too and your river will always be there to spur...
January 28th, 2020 04:35 - EMPTY BOTTLE (Michael Edwards)
Whatsum? Flotsum, got some!
Nice play with words ME
January 28th, 2020 04:33 - Background Noise (Joshua Harrison)
I felt this deserved to be two or more separate poems/pieces.
January 27th, 2020 10:06 - Tired of T.V. (Aa Harvey)
LOL yes a good fun read. Exactly describes the way i felt last night as i...
January 27th, 2020 08:51 - Summer Fire (MojoFreewrite)
Back to days of yore so they say.
I guess we all have a time in the past...
January 27th, 2020 08:32 - Musing (Fay Slimm.)
\"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies, coming my way\".
No matter what...
January 27th, 2020 05:59 - Stay Weird. (Goldfinch60)
My world of music is/was filled with weird eccentric artists e.g. stanley...
January 27th, 2020 05:53 - Distractions (Asrealastheycome)
Good thought provoking piece. Echoing my thoughts when i see so many...
January 26th, 2020 10:45 - Death is inevitable. (Aa Harvey)
Yep, thats exactly how life is. There are only two certainties. We are...
January 26th, 2020 10:39 - Holding on tightly (Misskay)
Heartfelt loss pours from your words here and cant fail but touch your...
January 26th, 2020 10:36 - Am i falling in love again?๐ฅดโค๏ธ (Raghav.k0)
The wonderful feelings of falling in love can\'t really be bettered in our...
January 26th, 2020 10:34 - Where Roses Grow. (Goldfinch60)
Wheh i was a keen photographer my theme was to capture how nature reclaims...
January 26th, 2020 04:25 - doomed love (Justbereal)
The funny thing is that none of us are really able to love until we can...
January 25th, 2020 11:37 - As In Life...#4 (Peelings) (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Fun. This can be read to mean several things.
But would you settle for...
January 25th, 2020 10:38 - Feelings I Feel (Rjandtina)
Happiness radiates from poem today! It\'s so uplifting to read these words...
January 25th, 2020 07:38 - Autistic Struggles (Slnarnwl83)
Great to read you on MPS site. Do what you do and do what you can is my...
January 25th, 2020 06:39 - New Chapter. (Goldfinch60)
Hey and theres no career path or nine to five toil..... go for it LOL
January 25th, 2020 05:19 - The Ghost in the Shadows (Mirrorphen)
The frustration and pain of this piece really call out. There is torture...
January 25th, 2020 05:15 - Screams (Jackeggz)
Silent screams are most perceived by those who have screamed so silently...
January 25th, 2020 05:10 - THE EASE OF SLEAZE (Joe Marcello)
And does the truth just become one more round of \'false news\'?
Even...
January 24th, 2020 15:27 - Unforgettable. (Fay Slimm.)
I found this really really moving. You touch places where the concealed...
January 24th, 2020 12:00 - Final Parting. (Goldfinch60)
Truly wonderful is the way you understand love and life\'s cycle. You know...
January 24th, 2020 11:54 - WHERE NO ROSES GROW (Michael Edwards)
Well created air of gloom and doom persists until those final lines of...
January 24th, 2020 11:48 - Teardrops (Reivax Camlost)
Sometimes i wonder what my teardrops are for, what has motivated them to...
January 23rd, 2020 11:54 - Tell me why (Wildmanwade)
Left me wanting to know \'haunted by what?\'
We exist in a world where...
January 23rd, 2020 11:47 - Black Sea (Seeker123)
Nice stuff. But go ahead and bite the bullet.
January 23rd, 2020 11:43 - I\'m not fed up with me (Poetic Dan)
Many moons ago an old boss of mine said \"I\'m old enough and ugly enough...
January 23rd, 2020 11:31 - Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.)
You are so right. This is something which cannot be taught but rather has...
January 23rd, 2020 05:15
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