Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Ageing (Jeremy Leach) So very true and such a well crafted piece you have written.
  September 8th, 2019 15:07
• A million shattered pieces of my heart (Alta H Mabin) This, beautifully written, is how lost love should be remembered....
  September 8th, 2019 09:54
• I loved you once...... (Shiv) Loss of love and the heartbreak/heartache can be the beginning of learning...
  September 8th, 2019 09:51
• My Shadow Work ;) (Vvnrose) I am with Goldfinch on this. If you have begun to look within then keep...
  September 8th, 2019 09:48
• Home Is Where We Are (Nafis Light) Home is where your head is at peace.
  September 8th, 2019 09:23
• Tock (Andrew Charles Forrest) So many itching spots in the world today. But here we go again ignoring...
  September 8th, 2019 06:36
• A Silver Coin A Poets Flair. (Kevin browne) \"We\'ll catch a ride upon a summers love and breeze\" Phrases like this...
  September 8th, 2019 05:55
• Rainbows Over You. (Kevin browne) There\'s so much in this i dont know where to begin. Today individual...
  September 8th, 2019 05:48
• Elation to Desolation (Clara) Elation to desolation is proof that you are tasting ALL the fruits of the...
  September 8th, 2019 05:41
• The Book of Life. (Goldfinch60) Yes indeed the music is sublime. Online i found this quote, and it is...
  September 8th, 2019 05:38
• Double Jeopardy (Neville) Ha ha ha ha now this really made me laugh. So many people came to...
  September 8th, 2019 05:32
• IT\'S WHAT AN ARTIST DOES (Michael Edwards) Great new word for the english dictionary. Super picture. Difficult...
  September 8th, 2019 05:29
• Birdie Dan (Poetic Dan) Long time since i climbed a tree Dan, I\'m envious.... DON\'T JUMP!
  September 8th, 2019 05:24
• Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional) (Poetic Dan) There are some things which happen in our lives which turn us about - put...
  September 7th, 2019 06:40
• Two Face (Butterflyme1983) Don\'t hold ya breath.
  September 7th, 2019 01:57
• Victory Vindication (Orchidee) Let me know what reply you get to this prayer...... if any.
  September 7th, 2019 01:55
• God Paradox (Chris Yellow) You are right to question the man made traditions of god worship. When we...
  September 7th, 2019 01:52
• Strong is Quiet. (Goldfinch60) Strength and steadfastness needs no noise and bluster. In the face of...
  September 7th, 2019 01:38
• An Autumn Harvest (Neville) Reads like a traditional folk / workers song and has great rythmn. On...
  September 7th, 2019 01:34
• AS NIGHT DISPLACES (Michael Edwards) I scent the salted air and hear the pebbles rumble as they\'re clawed by...
  September 7th, 2019 01:27
• Shutter (Vanessa wallace) A picture tells a story, and your photograph is, and always will be, part...
  September 6th, 2019 06:42
• It\'s Not Always About Getting It \'All RIGHT\' (Nafis Light) Many an armed robber serving time in jail would agree with you,... it\'s...
  September 6th, 2019 06:37
• Just a man in natures plan (Poetic Dan) You\'re definitely a bloke Dan, I\'ve seen your picture. Don\'t knock it...
  September 6th, 2019 03:38
• Autumn Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Great choice of music to associate with the sun arising. Darker days...
  September 6th, 2019 02:06
• DROLL COUPLETS (14) (Michael Edwards) Made me larff! How wise you are not to stand in her way. Does she take...
  September 6th, 2019 02:02
• Affinity. (Fay Slimm.) You definitely are at one with nature \'old bean\'. You\'ve taken me on a...
  September 6th, 2019 01:59
• You (Clara) It is time to realise the spirit you seek is within you. Glory in it\'s...
  September 6th, 2019 01:55
• Infinity (Neville) Outstanding tribute to the fallen and the futility of warfare. I have...
  September 6th, 2019 01:51
• Suave. (Fay Slimm.) Clothed in a gold leaf of majestic royal foliage I would proudly parade...
  September 5th, 2019 02:57
• MEMORIES 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Sincerely I hope your love continues through so that it can be seen in the...
  September 5th, 2019 02:48
• My hero (Poetic Dan) Happy birthday young \'un. I repeat the words of Goldfinch for there are...
  September 5th, 2019 02:28
• State of Death. (Goldfinch60) Death brings forth a sadness in those who new the newly passed with...
  September 5th, 2019 02:25
• Somewhere Behind These Eyes (Neville) Reads like wishful thinking. The desire to forget that which haunts ones...
  September 5th, 2019 02:18
• What if LOVE was enough? (Bragee) What if love were the prime emotion in mankind... love for mankind would...
  September 4th, 2019 12:33
• The Sum of our parts/ Gestalt’s antidote (Sylviasearcher) In all we do, in all our vanity, every strain and effort to achieve, to...
  September 4th, 2019 11:33
• Euphoria (Vanessa wallace) Beautiful. Who could ask for more. Let it be and let it last.
  September 4th, 2019 11:28
• Epitaph (John McChord) Thoughts of living a noble and loving life surely should proceed any death...
  September 4th, 2019 11:24
• I Held Your Hand (G84) I am such an advocate of pieces recounting these times.... Forever...
  September 4th, 2019 11:11
• I don’t want to read between lines anymore (AJ) This is so similar to my thoughts of the afterlife. A place of...
  September 4th, 2019 11:06
• Just let me live (A passing lyric) People can be tiresome, too predictable and downright disappointing. I\'m...
  September 4th, 2019 11:02
• Imperfection (Vanessa wallace) I like this a lot. I understand completely but .... BIG but, ... ...
  September 4th, 2019 10:59
• Thoughts+Feelings=Never healing (812Uknow) A little song comes to mind \"Always look on the bright side of...
  September 4th, 2019 06:40
• Masks (Meg) Brought a smile to my face with the way you have phrased this very...
  September 4th, 2019 06:36
• Our Crescendo (Clara) Beautifully expressed \'the dance of love\'. Wonderfully crafted...
  September 4th, 2019 05:46
• Rain of Forgiveness (Nafis Light) I read the refreshing renewal rain can bring to our spirit. That dash from...
  September 4th, 2019 05:41
• Ink-Bitten. (Fay Slimm.) Yeay dear Charlotte whence i didst first sight ye \'pon that sweet day,...
  September 4th, 2019 05:35
• Morphing. (Fay Slimm.) She stood on the bridge at midnight Looking prim and somewhat dour She...
  September 4th, 2019 02:13
• Flipping Gods (Poetic Dan) The light of god is within you. Those who search will find it. Maybe...
  September 4th, 2019 01:59
• SUMMER TO AUTUMN ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Ouch! talking about cold days of year when i need what is left of the...
  September 4th, 2019 01:51
• I Can Listen. (Goldfinch60) As we should all listen to those close confidences and worries of our...
  September 4th, 2019 01:46
• A Ladies Man (Neville) Singleton lifestyle is freedom to do exactly as u like..... and retain...
  September 4th, 2019 01:37
• DROLL COUPLETS (12) (Michael Edwards) You\'re complaining??? somebody\'s nicked my RAM!
  September 4th, 2019 01:34
• ORCHIDEE*S DEPUTY DAWG FIDO ~ A 4 4 6 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) LOL When will somebody teach a dawg to close a door behind itself..... ...
  September 3rd, 2019 03:50
• DROLL COUPLETS (11) (Michael Edwards) I\'m regularly impressed by my own stupidity.... i don\'t really know...
  September 3rd, 2019 03:47
• To Church. (Goldfinch60) Aha! The same principles that keep me shopping at tescos. (Yes i often...
  September 3rd, 2019 02:36
• Goodbye fleeting river (Chris Yellow) Dismay haunts your poem but resolves within your strength to take...
  September 2nd, 2019 05:34
• The pretensions of a poet misunderstood (Sylviasearcher) I feel there is someone being undervalued and ignored crying out from your...
  September 2nd, 2019 05:28
• Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.) Yours is the dawn Fay. Time after time you give us another facet of its...
  September 2nd, 2019 05:24
• Two Friends. (Goldfinch60) Lovely piece Goldfinch. Reminded me how lucky i am to get along so well...
  September 2nd, 2019 05:13
• Your Tresses Of Night Shade (Satishverma) Beautiful words from you. We shall all meet with the truth one day and...
  September 2nd, 2019 00:39
• DROLL COUPLETS (10) (Michael Edwards) Been there, done that, got a black eye to prove it! The art of...
  September 2nd, 2019 00:36
• Scattered shiny stars (Alta H Mabin) Sadly we can grow weary of looking and being attracted to imperfect stars....
  September 2nd, 2019 00:02
• Forever (Christina8) I guess we go the extra mile because that love puts us on the biggest...
  September 1st, 2019 16:19
• Forever (Christina8) I guess we go the extra mile because that love puts us on the biggest...
  September 1st, 2019 14:47
• When (Poetboy123) Sincere and moving writing from you. I share your emotion here. shall...
  September 1st, 2019 11:34
• Septembers first tear (Poetic Dan) \"In the eyes of my family i am all i need to be\" .... ...
  September 1st, 2019 11:20
• God\'s Chosen (Kevin Michael Bloor) Have you tried escaping rhyme? Once you do i think you may find yourself a...
  September 1st, 2019 09:25
• Nature...Friend (Nafis Light) Just enter a woodland and quietly hug a tree. Put your arms around the...
  September 1st, 2019 05:44
• To Be in Love. (Kevin browne) This is really you at your best Kevin. The wonder of falling in love is...
  September 1st, 2019 05:41
• a poison paradise (Lucifer very very very 1st) Once again none of your words are from the \'middle ages\'
  September 1st, 2019 05:35
• The Walking Dead (Vvnrose) A nice poem about post brexit U.K.?
  September 1st, 2019 05:32
• I Reach For The Knife (Clara) Just a thought comes to mind. A drawer which only contains a picture of...
  September 1st, 2019 05:30
• The Girl Before (Clara) Because \"Life is what happens to you when you are busy doing something...
  September 1st, 2019 04:49
• PARLIAMENT\'S WORD (Michael Edwards) So everyone has become a politically outspoken know it all at a time when...
  September 1st, 2019 04:45
• She is....... (Goldfinch60) Life is beautiful, life is cruel. You know you are on a journey to...
  September 1st, 2019 04:43
• PRAYER CHANGES EVERYTHING ~ A & B ~ A HYMN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Prayer is the fix for those in the belief of prayer. Some religions which...
  September 1st, 2019 04:39
• Through These Eyes (MrNobody40) The seer in you reaching out to the future and maybe realising what you...
  September 1st, 2019 04:30
• Humour and Age (Nafis Light) Humour makes the world go around with the proviso that you can laugh at...
  September 1st, 2019 04:28
• I (Poetic Dan) This reads like you are in a state of flux Dan. The answers are there but...
  August 31st, 2019 07:48
• HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT I 🧡 YOU ? A 🧡 B 💙 A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Get a room!
  August 31st, 2019 07:43
• Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60) He was just drumming up a news story for clark kent to publish in the...
  August 31st, 2019 07:39
• UNDEMOCRATIC DEMOCRACY (Michael Edwards) I totally agree with each point you have made. I hope that boris gets the...
  August 31st, 2019 07:36
• This Is My Heart And This Is How It Reads. (Kevin browne) A day in the life of... a man of many days and emotions.... of love, lust...
  August 30th, 2019 15:11
• My man (Poetic Dan) Teen years can be difficult and trying for him and you. Stay close, teens...
  August 30th, 2019 04:42
• CHICKEN TONIGHT ! 🧡 BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 A CULLINARY SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Yes i agree, definitely improved by a sauce... im using korma at the...
  August 30th, 2019 04:39
• One moment at a time (Alta H Mabin) Day by day, inch by inch, self returns with colours after the blackout of...
  August 30th, 2019 03:15
• Journey Concluded. (Fay Slimm.) Aha, the ways and wiles of the growing lady. Heartbreak shrugged off and...
  August 30th, 2019 03:07
• Candle or Mirror. (Goldfinch60) When the light enters you, i believe it shines from you upon others. Many...
  August 30th, 2019 02:59
• In Front of The Whole World (Nafis Light) Sadly disunity also keeps the world rotating Joker. Along with murder,...
  August 29th, 2019 16:25
• Inside my soul (Alta H Mabin) Drenched in the melancholy of missing. Beautifully and skillfully...
  August 29th, 2019 16:20
• Imagine (Sylviasearcher) At 15 i left home. There was much imagining and scant success but the will...
  August 29th, 2019 16:14
• Bittersweet (Hidden) Bitter sweet like a gooseberry.
  August 29th, 2019 16:08
• I am found (Poetic Dan) A lyric from that old Beatles song comes to mind Dan. \"Nothing you can do...
  August 29th, 2019 12:04
• The Journey Continued. (Fay Slimm.) So glad you spelled \'wily\' correctly here. In the words of Joni...
  August 29th, 2019 11:57
• EXCELLENCE GOOD ? 🧡 BRIAN 🧡 AN ACROSTIC SONNET 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) I agree. Though in music most of use achieve enjoyment and satisfaction...
  August 29th, 2019 11:50
• I Knew I was Right! (Goldfinch60) I haven\'t had a glass of red (my fav is cabernet sauvignon) since my...
  August 29th, 2019 11:43
• Bedroom Walls & Borrowers (Neville) In my trade i have lifted many a floorboard Put my hand into dark unknown...
  August 29th, 2019 11:39
• Seasons Change (Christina8) I love springtime for it\'s verdant greens but autumn reigns in the golden...
  August 28th, 2019 13:37
• Nightmare Next Door (Meg) That\'s life! Most people seem to find it easier to \'cold shoulder\' than...
  August 28th, 2019 09:34
• The Journey. (Fay Slimm.) One of the best parts of being in this MPS group is the pleasure of seeing...
  August 28th, 2019 05:12