Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• She found me in the grass (Poetic Dan) Open heart poetry from you Dan. Let it all flow.
  September 14th, 2019 13:01
• Another Good Day to Come. (Goldfinch60) ECM recording label has a certain feel to all its productions, unique...
  September 14th, 2019 12:57
• MyLife (Purdy61) How hard can it be. Very hard to find the right one. The more of lifes...
  September 13th, 2019 15:58
• La Rêverie (SerenWise) Beautifully written. Never seen you write like this before.... it\'s...
  September 13th, 2019 15:50
• Teardrops From My Eyes. (Kevin browne) \"Sleep on it, it\'ll look different in the morning\". Such a glib saying...
  September 13th, 2019 15:40
• Welcome yourself in (Poetic Dan) My home is a mess but my heart is emotionally tidy. May your home and...
  September 13th, 2019 06:30
• Solo. (Fay Slimm.) All of the above! Except loneliness. Singleton is simple and so many...
  September 13th, 2019 06:16
• Starship Is Anybody Out There. (Goldfinch60) We, as humans, may think we rule the earth but let us remember we only...
  September 13th, 2019 01:35
• Right here (Alta H Mabin) Steamy words of bath time delight.
  September 13th, 2019 01:05
• Disinterested (Neville) OOOpppss you could well be the silhouette in my piece today. Your...
  September 13th, 2019 00:57
• Letting Go. (Kevin browne) It\'s a long learning journey isn\'t it. But wisdom doesn\'t crush desire,...
  September 12th, 2019 16:08
• A to Z and you and me (Alta H Mabin) I\'m reading the algebra of a love equation i think. A over Z = a story...
  September 12th, 2019 11:55
• Wanted and needed are not the same (Poetic Dan) That is the right attitude and determination with which to see thru this...
  September 12th, 2019 10:24
• Indelible. (Fay Slimm.) I was being driven through a part of Eden\'s remains today in the...
  September 12th, 2019 10:23
• Croquet. (Goldfinch60) I was bought a croquet set as a child but the mallets and balls were...
  September 12th, 2019 06:25
• THE BOUQUET (Michael Edwards) A thing of beauty cast aside for the elements to now own. A deep...
  September 12th, 2019 06:21
• Correction (Neville) Lots to be read into this little ditty. Creative poetic minds will run...
  September 12th, 2019 04:05
• The end of it all (Vanessa wallace) I wouldn\'t count on it being the end, there\'s so much evidence of more...
  September 11th, 2019 18:48
• Silent Killer (Bragee) And a surprising amount of people do get over it. But many more take a...
  September 11th, 2019 09:58
• IN LABORATORIES ~ A 2 12 Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Students/apprentices traininng in laboratories dont know how lucky they...
  September 11th, 2019 06:43
• Whisperings. (Fay Slimm.) LOL dried out withered libido indeed! Your writing would do a Heineken job...
  September 11th, 2019 06:24
• I was not ready for this (Poetic Dan) Sympathy Dan, I have no answers here but to agree with your words. Mt...
  September 11th, 2019 05:31
• Never Not Once (Neville) That\'s why the lady is a ...... So it looks like we met some of the...
  September 11th, 2019 05:25
• Letting Go. (Goldfinch60) I can feel the pain it took to write this piece for your neighbor when...
  September 11th, 2019 05:20
• To the heavens (Alta H Mabin) If there is love in one\'s soul, then there is love to give, love to...
  September 11th, 2019 05:14
• Finding Moments (Christina8) It\'s very moving to be shown a piece of work all about you, created in...
  September 10th, 2019 16:37
• Best Friends (Neville) I\'m such a recluse these days i hardly know what friendship is any more....
  September 10th, 2019 11:30
• Get out of my head (Vanessa wallace) Because you haven\'t replaced them with something more satisfying or more...
  September 10th, 2019 11:21
• Cease (Sylviasearcher) Courageous writing from the heart of your very soul. What fear of death...
  September 10th, 2019 06:59
• Constant. (Fay Slimm.) Singing \'hey-ho me laddie oh, away on the tide... we must go\'. Brings...
  September 10th, 2019 06:47
• No fear (Poetic Dan) There is truth in your words.
  September 10th, 2019 06:33
• Dandelion wishes (Alta H Mabin) And every windblown seed of a wish dances into a world of our dreamland...
  September 10th, 2019 02:11
• Sailing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60) I couldn\'t help but see an analogy with a sleeping child in your words...
  September 10th, 2019 01:48
• RECEIVED FROM MARKS AND SPENCER (Michael Edwards) Your secret\'s out now. To be honest I don\'t give a frock whether you are...
  September 10th, 2019 01:45
• Rain dance (Alta H Mabin) Dance away life\'s heartaches, dance away all pain, dance into tomorrow,...
  September 9th, 2019 14:08
• TREES in SEASON ~ QUARTETTE of QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN) I\'m a lover of trees so this piece is right up my street. Do you ever get...
  September 9th, 2019 13:31
• I’ll stay quiet (A passing lyric) Be your own person.
  September 9th, 2019 03:48
• End of her time (Poetic Dan) Beautiful tribute to a loved soul, now freed from earthly toil and pains...
  September 9th, 2019 03:45
• Exciting. (Fay Slimm.) Though Fay is a lovely feminine name, we really could rename you Dawn you...
  September 9th, 2019 03:38
• Don\'t You Dare Stop Now (Neville) Well at first i had a picture of you two riding a tandem up a hill, she at...
  September 9th, 2019 03:29
• Treasure Hunt. (Goldfinch60) Sounds like a fun day was had.... the best bit of course is meeting up at...
  September 9th, 2019 03:19
• Ageing (Jeremy Leach) So very true and such a well crafted piece you have written.
  September 8th, 2019 15:07
• A million shattered pieces of my heart (Alta H Mabin) This, beautifully written, is how lost love should be remembered....
  September 8th, 2019 09:54
• I loved you once...... (Shiv) Loss of love and the heartbreak/heartache can be the beginning of learning...
  September 8th, 2019 09:51
• My Shadow Work ;) (Vvnrose) I am with Goldfinch on this. If you have begun to look within then keep...
  September 8th, 2019 09:48
• Home Is Where We Are (Nafis Light) Home is where your head is at peace.
  September 8th, 2019 09:23
• Tock (Andrew Charles Forrest) So many itching spots in the world today. But here we go again ignoring...
  September 8th, 2019 06:36
• A Silver Coin A Poets Flair. (Kevin browne) \"We\'ll catch a ride upon a summers love and breeze\" Phrases like this...
  September 8th, 2019 05:55
• Rainbows Over You. (Kevin browne) There\'s so much in this i dont know where to begin. Today individual...
  September 8th, 2019 05:48
• Elation to Desolation (Clara) Elation to desolation is proof that you are tasting ALL the fruits of the...
  September 8th, 2019 05:41
• The Book of Life. (Goldfinch60) Yes indeed the music is sublime. Online i found this quote, and it is...
  September 8th, 2019 05:38
• Double Jeopardy (Neville) Ha ha ha ha now this really made me laugh. So many people came to...
  September 8th, 2019 05:32
• IT\'S WHAT AN ARTIST DOES (Michael Edwards) Great new word for the english dictionary. Super picture. Difficult...
  September 8th, 2019 05:29
• Birdie Dan (Poetic Dan) Long time since i climbed a tree Dan, I\'m envious.... DON\'T JUMP!
  September 8th, 2019 05:24
• Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional) (Poetic Dan) There are some things which happen in our lives which turn us about - put...
  September 7th, 2019 06:40
• Two Face (Butterflyme1983) Don\'t hold ya breath.
  September 7th, 2019 01:57
• Victory Vindication (Orchidee) Let me know what reply you get to this prayer...... if any.
  September 7th, 2019 01:55
• God Paradox (Chris Yellow) You are right to question the man made traditions of god worship. When we...
  September 7th, 2019 01:52
• Strong is Quiet. (Goldfinch60) Strength and steadfastness needs no noise and bluster. In the face of...
  September 7th, 2019 01:38
• An Autumn Harvest (Neville) Reads like a traditional folk / workers song and has great rythmn. On...
  September 7th, 2019 01:34
• AS NIGHT DISPLACES (Michael Edwards) I scent the salted air and hear the pebbles rumble as they\'re clawed by...
  September 7th, 2019 01:27
• Shutter (Vanessa wallace) A picture tells a story, and your photograph is, and always will be, part...
  September 6th, 2019 06:42
• It\'s Not Always About Getting It \'All RIGHT\' (Nafis Light) Many an armed robber serving time in jail would agree with you,... it\'s...
  September 6th, 2019 06:37
• Just a man in natures plan (Poetic Dan) You\'re definitely a bloke Dan, I\'ve seen your picture. Don\'t knock it...
  September 6th, 2019 03:38
• Autumn Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Great choice of music to associate with the sun arising. Darker days...
  September 6th, 2019 02:06
• DROLL COUPLETS (14) (Michael Edwards) Made me larff! How wise you are not to stand in her way. Does she take...
  September 6th, 2019 02:02
• Affinity. (Fay Slimm.) You definitely are at one with nature \'old bean\'. You\'ve taken me on a...
  September 6th, 2019 01:59
• You (Clara) It is time to realise the spirit you seek is within you. Glory in it\'s...
  September 6th, 2019 01:55
• Infinity (Neville) Outstanding tribute to the fallen and the futility of warfare. I have...
  September 6th, 2019 01:51
• Suave. (Fay Slimm.) Clothed in a gold leaf of majestic royal foliage I would proudly parade...
  September 5th, 2019 02:57
• MEMORIES 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Sincerely I hope your love continues through so that it can be seen in the...
  September 5th, 2019 02:48
• My hero (Poetic Dan) Happy birthday young \'un. I repeat the words of Goldfinch for there are...
  September 5th, 2019 02:28
• State of Death. (Goldfinch60) Death brings forth a sadness in those who new the newly passed with...
  September 5th, 2019 02:25
• Somewhere Behind These Eyes (Neville) Reads like wishful thinking. The desire to forget that which haunts ones...
  September 5th, 2019 02:18
• What if LOVE was enough? (Bragee) What if love were the prime emotion in mankind... love for mankind would...
  September 4th, 2019 12:33
• The Sum of our parts/ Gestalt’s antidote (Sylviasearcher) In all we do, in all our vanity, every strain and effort to achieve, to...
  September 4th, 2019 11:33
• Euphoria (Vanessa wallace) Beautiful. Who could ask for more. Let it be and let it last.
  September 4th, 2019 11:28
• Epitaph (John McChord) Thoughts of living a noble and loving life surely should proceed any death...
  September 4th, 2019 11:24
• I Held Your Hand (G84) I am such an advocate of pieces recounting these times.... Forever...
  September 4th, 2019 11:11
• I don’t want to read between lines anymore (AJ) This is so similar to my thoughts of the afterlife. A place of...
  September 4th, 2019 11:06
• Just let me live (A passing lyric) People can be tiresome, too predictable and downright disappointing. I\'m...
  September 4th, 2019 11:02
• Imperfection (Vanessa wallace) I like this a lot. I understand completely but .... BIG but, ... ...
  September 4th, 2019 10:59
• Thoughts+Feelings=Never healing (812Uknow) A little song comes to mind \"Always look on the bright side of...
  September 4th, 2019 06:40
• Masks (Meg) Brought a smile to my face with the way you have phrased this very...
  September 4th, 2019 06:36
• Our Crescendo (Clara) Beautifully expressed \'the dance of love\'. Wonderfully crafted...
  September 4th, 2019 05:46
• Rain of Forgiveness (Nafis Light) I read the refreshing renewal rain can bring to our spirit. That dash from...
  September 4th, 2019 05:41
• Ink-Bitten. (Fay Slimm.) Yeay dear Charlotte whence i didst first sight ye \'pon that sweet day,...
  September 4th, 2019 05:35
• Morphing. (Fay Slimm.) She stood on the bridge at midnight Looking prim and somewhat dour She...
  September 4th, 2019 02:13
• Flipping Gods (Poetic Dan) The light of god is within you. Those who search will find it. Maybe...
  September 4th, 2019 01:59
• SUMMER TO AUTUMN ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Ouch! talking about cold days of year when i need what is left of the...
  September 4th, 2019 01:51
• I Can Listen. (Goldfinch60) As we should all listen to those close confidences and worries of our...
  September 4th, 2019 01:46
• A Ladies Man (Neville) Singleton lifestyle is freedom to do exactly as u like..... and retain...
  September 4th, 2019 01:37
• DROLL COUPLETS (12) (Michael Edwards) You\'re complaining??? somebody\'s nicked my RAM!
  September 4th, 2019 01:34
• ORCHIDEE*S DEPUTY DAWG FIDO ~ A 4 4 6 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) LOL When will somebody teach a dawg to close a door behind itself..... ...
  September 3rd, 2019 03:50
• DROLL COUPLETS (11) (Michael Edwards) I\'m regularly impressed by my own stupidity.... i don\'t really know...
  September 3rd, 2019 03:47
• To Church. (Goldfinch60) Aha! The same principles that keep me shopping at tescos. (Yes i often...
  September 3rd, 2019 02:36
• Goodbye fleeting river (Chris Yellow) Dismay haunts your poem but resolves within your strength to take...
  September 2nd, 2019 05:34
• The pretensions of a poet misunderstood (Sylviasearcher) I feel there is someone being undervalued and ignored crying out from your...
  September 2nd, 2019 05:28
• Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.) Yours is the dawn Fay. Time after time you give us another facet of its...
  September 2nd, 2019 05:24
• Two Friends. (Goldfinch60) Lovely piece Goldfinch. Reminded me how lucky i am to get along so well...
  September 2nd, 2019 05:13