Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Fuck (Sylviasearcher)
Saying what you feel. A great release.
September 19th, 2019 12:54 - All Was Right. (Goldfinch60)
i believe there is a angel or whatever you wish to name it overlooking us...
September 19th, 2019 12:50 - CYPRUS (Michael Edwards)
Hmmm I don\'t share your enthusiasm. Commercialised cities, desert...
September 19th, 2019 00:34 - LIGHT (Colour) (Nafis Light)
I guess that with sight being our prime sense and the ability to use our...
September 19th, 2019 00:21 - Perky pyramids (Alta H Mabin)
Love is beautiful in all it\'s forms yes. But those perky pyramids can be...
September 19th, 2019 00:07 - Ice say... water we dew wing to planet Earth? (Rew4er2nail)
Point well made but in too many words.
The planet and life will survive...
September 18th, 2019 23:47 - Waiting Game (FredPeyer)
Sometimes it\'s the right time to just look out from a window. Another...
September 18th, 2019 23:43 - She (Velvetveins)
Loved this and it\'s warmth.
September 18th, 2019 23:41 - Fall in Love with being Alive (SilverXball)
100% already there. Great sentiment in your writing today
September 18th, 2019 23:39 - je t\'aime (Alta H Mabin)
Thank you Alta, I was so worried you wouldn\'t love my bits inbetween.
September 18th, 2019 06:09 - Outs. (Fay Slimm.)
Do you stroll the beach predawn, catching the moments words in your hair...
September 18th, 2019 02:48 - Good Time Girl (Neville)
Those Lib Dems have a lot to answer for!
Truly sad portrait of an...
September 18th, 2019 02:41 - Light After The Darkness (Meg)
Refreshingly positive writing from a person who has clearly emerged from...
September 18th, 2019 02:18 - Three Parables. (Goldfinch60)
You know how this resounds with me Goldfinch.
We are both \'singing...
September 18th, 2019 02:16 - I respect but don\'t trust (Poetic Dan)
Wisely in your first words today you dispel a truth which most people...
September 18th, 2019 02:11 - The hope of a sunflower (Alta H Mabin)
I\'m not a fan of mixing arithmetic/forulae to poetry. However yours is...
September 17th, 2019 12:38 - Fondly and Truly (Neville)
Beautifully phrased the unspoken desire with us all to be remembered...
September 17th, 2019 07:46 - Dizziness Pops (Nafis Light)
Fun here, my thoughts are - \'take more water with it\'.
September 17th, 2019 03:02 - The Vow (SerenWise)
I read your piece several times and the picture which came into my mind...
September 17th, 2019 03:00 - BAREFOOT IN ANDALUCIA 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 BLANK VERSE QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wow what a lovely piece of writing. The love you hold for Brian shines out...
September 17th, 2019 02:55 - Are you a believer? (Aa Harvey)
Once past the mutual attraction and love making comes the time of soul...
September 17th, 2019 02:48 - First Love. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh Fay, how you romance my first love uncertain fumblings. Would that i...
September 17th, 2019 02:44 - That Fine Evening. (Goldfinch60)
I too had a magical experience with music in the night as per my poem...
September 17th, 2019 02:37 - REINCARNATION (Michael Edwards)
LOL, given the choice i\'m coming back as a lesbian.
But your excellent...
September 17th, 2019 02:14 - Walk your path well (Poetic Dan)
Your fourth line contains a truth which i truly wish more could see. There...
September 17th, 2019 02:12 - Flowing forward while going back (Poetic Dan)
No, we don\'t all have to play the blagging game. Best advice is - when...
September 16th, 2019 14:37 - Client (Neville)
An accessory to the crime of..... mmmm.... nay she was the prize for...
September 16th, 2019 05:06 - Blackrock. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank goodness for sat nav the sailor\'s modern day saviour. But what on...
September 16th, 2019 05:00 - WORDLESS (Michael Edwards)
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September 16th, 2019 04:52 - Mind in Overtime. (Goldfinch60)
I didn\'t want to get out of bed this morning. My first idea was \'be...
September 16th, 2019 04:43 - IT IS NO SECRET - WHAT GOD CAN DO 💙 BRIAN ANGELA🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
i do find the christian attitude towards people when mentioning god to be...
September 15th, 2019 09:52 - It\'s in the art (Poetic Dan)
That\'s just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last night!
September 15th, 2019 06:20 - Reminders. (Fay Slimm.)
Those mines were nothing like we see portrayed in Poldark on TV. Many...
September 15th, 2019 06:16 - Inside Her Pants (Neville)
I\'ve taken your challenge
and hoping theres a chance
i can find a...
September 15th, 2019 06:07 - Manners Abandoned. (Goldfinch60)
As i walked to the only open, but unattended, checkout in Lidl the only...
September 15th, 2019 06:01 - Reverie. (Fay Slimm.)
Excellent. Oh so many times i meet my muse in the inbetween described...
September 14th, 2019 13:05 - Food for Thought (Neville)
Sounds absolutely edible mate. Get fat!
September 14th, 2019 13:03 - She found me in the grass (Poetic Dan)
Open heart poetry from you Dan. Let it all flow.
September 14th, 2019 13:01 - Another Good Day to Come. (Goldfinch60)
ECM recording label has a certain feel to all its productions, unique...
September 14th, 2019 12:57 - MyLife (Purdy61)
How hard can it be. Very hard to find the right one. The more of lifes...
September 13th, 2019 15:58 - La Rêverie (SerenWise)
Beautifully written. Never seen you write like this before.... it\'s...
September 13th, 2019 15:50 - Teardrops From My Eyes. (Kevin browne)
\"Sleep on it, it\'ll look different in the morning\". Such a glib saying...
September 13th, 2019 15:40 - Welcome yourself in (Poetic Dan)
My home is a mess but my heart is emotionally tidy.
May your home and...
September 13th, 2019 06:30 - Solo. (Fay Slimm.)
All of the above! Except loneliness.
Singleton is simple and so many...
September 13th, 2019 06:16 - Starship Is Anybody Out There. (Goldfinch60)
We, as humans, may think we rule the earth but let us remember we only...
September 13th, 2019 01:35 - Right here (Alta H Mabin)
Steamy words of bath time delight.
September 13th, 2019 01:05 - Disinterested (Neville)
OOOpppss you could well be the silhouette in my piece today.
Your...
September 13th, 2019 00:57 - Letting Go. (Kevin browne)
It\'s a long learning journey isn\'t it. But wisdom doesn\'t crush desire,...
September 12th, 2019 16:08 - A to Z and you and me (Alta H Mabin)
I\'m reading the algebra of a love equation i think. A over Z = a story...
September 12th, 2019 11:55 - Wanted and needed are not the same (Poetic Dan)
That is the right attitude and determination with which to see thru this...
September 12th, 2019 10:24 - Indelible. (Fay Slimm.)
I was being driven through a part of Eden\'s remains today in the...
September 12th, 2019 10:23 - Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
I was bought a croquet set as a child but the mallets and balls were...
September 12th, 2019 06:25 - THE BOUQUET (Michael Edwards)
A thing of beauty cast aside for the elements to now own.
A deep...
September 12th, 2019 06:21 - Correction (Neville)
Lots to be read into this little ditty. Creative poetic minds will run...
September 12th, 2019 04:05 - The end of it all (Vanessa wallace)
I wouldn\'t count on it being the end, there\'s so much evidence of more...
September 11th, 2019 18:48 - Silent Killer (Bragee)
And a surprising amount of people do get over it. But many more take a...
September 11th, 2019 09:58 - IN LABORATORIES ~ A 2 12 Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Students/apprentices traininng in laboratories dont know how lucky they...
September 11th, 2019 06:43 - Whisperings. (Fay Slimm.)
LOL dried out withered libido indeed! Your writing would do a Heineken job...
September 11th, 2019 06:24 - I was not ready for this (Poetic Dan)
Sympathy Dan, I have no answers here but to agree with your words.
Mt...
September 11th, 2019 05:31 - Never Not Once (Neville)
That\'s why the lady is a ......
So it looks like we met some of the...
September 11th, 2019 05:25 - Letting Go. (Goldfinch60)
I can feel the pain it took to write this piece for your neighbor when...
September 11th, 2019 05:20 - To the heavens (Alta H Mabin)
If there is love in one\'s soul, then there is love to give, love to...
September 11th, 2019 05:14 - Finding Moments (Christina8)
It\'s very moving to be shown a piece of work all about you, created in...
September 10th, 2019 16:37 - Best Friends (Neville)
I\'m such a recluse these days i hardly know what friendship is any more....
September 10th, 2019 11:30 - Get out of my head (Vanessa wallace)
Because you haven\'t replaced them with something more satisfying or more...
September 10th, 2019 11:21 - Cease (Sylviasearcher)
Courageous writing from the heart of your very soul.
What fear of death...
September 10th, 2019 06:59 - Constant. (Fay Slimm.)
Singing \'hey-ho me laddie oh, away on the tide... we must go\'.
Brings...
September 10th, 2019 06:47 - No fear (Poetic Dan)
There is truth in your words.
September 10th, 2019 06:33 - Dandelion wishes (Alta H Mabin)
And every windblown seed of a wish dances into a world of our dreamland...
September 10th, 2019 02:11 - Sailing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
I couldn\'t help but see an analogy with a sleeping child in your words...
September 10th, 2019 01:48 - RECEIVED FROM MARKS AND SPENCER (Michael Edwards)
Your secret\'s out now. To be honest I don\'t give a frock whether you are...
September 10th, 2019 01:45 - Rain dance (Alta H Mabin)
Dance away life\'s heartaches, dance away all pain, dance into tomorrow,...
September 9th, 2019 14:08 - TREES in SEASON ~ QUARTETTE of QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I\'m a lover of trees so this piece is right up my street. Do you ever get...
September 9th, 2019 13:31 - I’ll stay quiet (A passing lyric)
Be your own person.
September 9th, 2019 03:48 - End of her time (Poetic Dan)
Beautiful tribute to a loved soul, now freed from earthly toil and pains...
September 9th, 2019 03:45 - Exciting. (Fay Slimm.)
Though Fay is a lovely feminine name, we really could rename you Dawn you...
September 9th, 2019 03:38 - Don\'t You Dare Stop Now (Neville)
Well at first i had a picture of you two riding a tandem up a hill, she at...
September 9th, 2019 03:29 - Treasure Hunt. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like a fun day was had.... the best bit of course is meeting up at...
September 9th, 2019 03:19 - Ageing (Jeremy Leach)
So very true and such a well crafted piece you have written.
September 8th, 2019 15:07 - A million shattered pieces of my heart (Alta H Mabin)
This, beautifully written, is how lost love should be remembered....
September 8th, 2019 09:54 - I loved you once...... (Shiv)
Loss of love and the heartbreak/heartache can be the beginning of learning...
September 8th, 2019 09:51 - My Shadow Work ;) (Vvnrose)
I am with Goldfinch on this. If you have begun to look within then keep...
September 8th, 2019 09:48 - Home Is Where We Are (Nafis Light)
Home is where your head is at peace.
September 8th, 2019 09:23 - Tock (Andrew Charles Forrest)
So many itching spots in the world today. But here we go again ignoring...
September 8th, 2019 06:36 - A Silver Coin A Poets Flair. (Kevin browne)
\"We\'ll catch a ride upon a summers love and breeze\"
Phrases like this...
September 8th, 2019 05:55 - Rainbows Over You. (Kevin browne)
There\'s so much in this i dont know where to begin. Today individual...
September 8th, 2019 05:48 - Elation to Desolation (Clara)
Elation to desolation is proof that you are tasting ALL the fruits of the...
September 8th, 2019 05:41 - The Book of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Yes indeed the music is sublime.
Online i found this quote, and it is...
September 8th, 2019 05:38 - Double Jeopardy (Neville)
Ha ha ha ha now this really made me laugh. So many people came to...
September 8th, 2019 05:32 - IT\'S WHAT AN ARTIST DOES (Michael Edwards)
Great new word for the english dictionary. Super picture.
Difficult...
September 8th, 2019 05:29 - Birdie Dan (Poetic Dan)
Long time since i climbed a tree Dan, I\'m envious.... DON\'T JUMP!
September 8th, 2019 05:24 - Breakdown to breakthrough (warning emotional) (Poetic Dan)
There are some things which happen in our lives which turn us about - put...
September 7th, 2019 06:40 - Two Face (Butterflyme1983)
Don\'t hold ya breath.
September 7th, 2019 01:57 - Victory Vindication (Orchidee)
Let me know what reply you get to this prayer...... if any.
September 7th, 2019 01:55 - God Paradox (Chris Yellow)
You are right to question the man made traditions of god worship. When we...
September 7th, 2019 01:52 - Strong is Quiet. (Goldfinch60)
Strength and steadfastness needs no noise and bluster. In the face of...
September 7th, 2019 01:38 - An Autumn Harvest (Neville)
Reads like a traditional folk / workers song and has great rythmn.
On...
September 7th, 2019 01:34 - AS NIGHT DISPLACES (Michael Edwards)
I scent the salted air and hear the pebbles rumble as they\'re clawed by...
September 7th, 2019 01:27 - Shutter (Vanessa wallace)
A picture tells a story, and your photograph is, and always will be, part...
September 6th, 2019 06:42 - It\'s Not Always About Getting It \'All RIGHT\' (Nafis Light)
Many an armed robber serving time in jail would agree with you,... it\'s...
September 6th, 2019 06:37
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