Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Hunger. (Fay Slimm.)
Within these words i can feel the longing of one looking out to sea. The...
April 7th, 2020 09:09 - IN LOCKDOWN (Michael Edwards)
He he he, or a \"room crawl\"... best of it is, who cares if u actually...
April 7th, 2020 09:04 - Frustrated Calendar. (Goldfinch60)
You still find time for those river walks though I bet. Stay at home...
April 7th, 2020 09:02 - Things That Cats Taught Me (Sanjana Varma)
A really delightful read from you today. I have also learned about both...
April 6th, 2020 10:51 - Ache (SerenWise)
A very mindful write. Loneliness can take us to the most interesting of...
April 6th, 2020 06:23 - Loose Leafed and Fancy Free (Neville)
Times certainly change when u become able to attach an index to her...
April 6th, 2020 06:19 - Take Me. (Fay Slimm.)
There is tragedy in the air and your first verse here took me straight to...
April 6th, 2020 06:15 - Hello! (Goldfinch60)
A pal called his young alsation \'Elgar\', he wasnt able to train it at...
April 6th, 2020 06:11 - STIFF ZIP (Michael Edwards)
There\'s a sexual junction
lubricates well with unction
but have the...
April 6th, 2020 06:07 - Love\'s Effect. (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s what breathings for surely? Careful with that breathlessness at the...
April 5th, 2020 08:42 - Fear of Haiku (Neville)
I loves having me a go at poetry see.... but i cants do the math for they...
April 5th, 2020 08:39 - Flying Towards Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Carried on the gentle breeze of love flying to all the places of you know...
April 5th, 2020 05:23 - THIS SENTENCE - A SELECTION OF MONOSUCHS (Michael Edwards)
That\'s all i can stand! I can\'t stand no more! (falls over).
Each...
April 4th, 2020 06:30 - Hooligans. (Goldfinch60)
Whereas i agree with you, it appears we are out of step with society. Now...
April 4th, 2020 06:25 - Stop (Vanessa wallace)
You will only hear crap if you mix with people who talk crap. If you are...
April 4th, 2020 06:17 - Perfection. (Fay Slimm.)
Aren\'t we all. by and large, envious of our aerial friends. I have often...
April 3rd, 2020 03:50 - Annie\'s Smile. (Goldfinch60)
A luxury i don\'t have. Not missed until something goes wrong.
April 3rd, 2020 03:41 - Once upon a time (J. J.)
That\'s my kind of poem. Short and with bags of punch!
Good one!
April 2nd, 2020 17:30 - Unprecedented (Heather Harrisson)
On your profile page it shows that you have never ever bothered to read...
April 2nd, 2020 12:11 - To be is not to forget (Poetic Dan)
Moments end.. thats natural. Surely taking the mental spirit of those...
April 2nd, 2020 10:32 - Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful drama in this Fay as you once again own the dawning day and...
April 2nd, 2020 03:55 - Ascend (Into Madness) (Sanjana Varma)
Ascent? Love the mental pic of crows with teeth.
April 2nd, 2020 03:21 - I\'VE NEVER SEEN (Michael Edwards)
That kind of stuff is not easy to write... do you save up these gems ?...
April 2nd, 2020 03:19 - Blimey! (Goldfinch60)
Yes, so much more fun than playstation/nintendo and any kid passing by...
April 2nd, 2020 01:41 - Revived. (Fay Slimm.)
Each love is different isn\'t it. Maybe more learned as we realise how...
April 1st, 2020 11:51 - Coronavirus song (Renzi)
Ello, good to see you on here again. I love the sincerity of your demeanor...
April 1st, 2020 11:45 - Sheep Selected (Orchidee)
I dunno Orchi, you christians are a questionable lot. In the bible thers...
April 1st, 2020 11:40 - Came the Day. (Goldfinch60)
You write with feeling and empathy for this lady today G. One can\'t but...
April 1st, 2020 11:35 - Treasure. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Shall i compare thee to an alcoholic ... one who doth constantly drink...
March 31st, 2020 05:31 - Discerning Distancing (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchidee.... I have started to imagine u playing that old...
March 31st, 2020 05:25 - They belong to me (Arturo Fernandez Ferre)
The closing part of your piece today is a path i have mentally strolled...
March 31st, 2020 02:38 - I FOUND A QUIZ (Michael Edwards)
\'Arc at you, ... Joan.
In an argument a long long time ago i said to...
March 31st, 2020 01:48 - River Journey. (Goldfinch60)
Whilst asking nothing, taking nothing and exposing everything it seems...
March 31st, 2020 01:42 - me (The Lesser Being)
well. I\'d like to see quite a lot more poetry from you. By doing that you...
March 31st, 2020 01:38 - Holy Sonnet Of The Two Destinies (Richard Paulson)
He he he so you\'ve seen what eyes look like in heaven and in hell have...
March 31st, 2020 00:19 - Sistership. (Fay Slimm.)
Glorious and sad. Very touching to me because I was so close to my older...
March 30th, 2020 08:22 - Battle with Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Such an inportant message youve conveyed today in plain words.
We didn\'t...
March 30th, 2020 03:14 - Corona Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
For a poetic old timer
there\'s really nowt finer
than to rhyme
what...
March 29th, 2020 04:15 - Living Side - Poet’s Note 4 (Nafis Light)
Unwind relax and let it flow as it will.
March 28th, 2020 11:44 - Aurora. (Fay Slimm.)
You led me through a woodland with freshened senses as i read and re-read...
March 28th, 2020 11:41 - Victim of Loneliness? (Goldfinch60)
With age comes a myriad of blessings and trials but one rare quality is...
March 28th, 2020 04:13 - THE GLASS (Michael Edwards)
Is this about my toilet bowl?
Careful what you wish for! LOL
March 28th, 2020 04:07 - Frustration. (Fay Slimm.)
LOL sometimes its not easy to read the other genders needs and that works...
March 27th, 2020 04:50 - I can\'t write them a letter so I\'ll start with you! (Poetic Dan)
Seeing your videos which are always so enjoyable and reading you on your...
March 27th, 2020 04:42 - Day 4 - Arthur\'s lament (Saxon Crow)
Excellent writing Crow. Loved the Arthurian context and the message was...
March 27th, 2020 04:35 - A Walk to My Willow. (Goldfinch60)
That river of yours does you a power of good. But you are supposed to be...
March 27th, 2020 04:31 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Excellent nonsense! More of this kind of stuff please. Great pic too.
March 27th, 2020 04:28 - MASKING THE TRUTH (Joe Marcello)
Think about it...if god created this planet.... yeah that saviour bloke...
March 26th, 2020 16:02 - End of Times? (PoeticBiscuit)
He he he SNAP! I wrote on the same theme today...please have a look at my...
March 26th, 2020 15:58 - What the Hell am I supposed to do? (Cresposaccent)
Wisdom arrives after a lot of suffering and suffering is written all...
March 26th, 2020 15:52 - Darkness (Rrodriguez)
Wasting your time praying, it doesn\'t work.... checkout those who prayed...
March 26th, 2020 13:14 - Day 3 (Saxon Crow)
One might say there are more questions than answers. But when a blackbird...
March 26th, 2020 11:30 - Corona Virus ~ Mother E (Angel~Wings)
Whereas i totally agree i do think this could have been several poems...
March 26th, 2020 06:31 - My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions (Neville)
A young man\'s question is asked here i believe. For a matured man is...
March 26th, 2020 04:23 - Friday May 5th 2017 (Elsiewarrenswords)
Nice one! But lets see what life has done for your expression in the...
March 26th, 2020 03:52 - LSD (CharlieFanning)
Why? unsure! Justification - I walked away from it with a mind expanded.
March 26th, 2020 03:44 - here and now (Siranswerer)
A woman or a cat? They\'re so damned similar.
Thank you for getting the...
March 26th, 2020 03:42 - you won\'t read my poems (Hazel Kaye)
That\'s the real poetry of love and desire. Excellent!
March 26th, 2020 03:39 - That\'s Tuesday (Afternoontea)
And that\'s one delightful poem. You lucky person having such a wonderful...
March 26th, 2020 03:35 - Tell Me (Mary73223)
Beautiful love poem which reads like watching a bud turn into a wonderful...
March 26th, 2020 03:32 - Realism. Short n simple (A)
Feelings into words are the equasion which is the making of a poet. It...
March 26th, 2020 03:29 - Together for Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
And so, to so many questions we cannot find answers for. Many avenues our...
March 26th, 2020 03:20 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Been there, done that.... I wish I could still fit into that T-shirt.
March 26th, 2020 03:15 - Agony XoX (Charlotte ♡︎)
Wow! this reads like a prelude to exodus.
Often who we are perceived to...
March 25th, 2020 18:17 - Past Memory (PoeticBiscuit)
Ha! the bitter sweet of the one that got away, or was cast aside. But are...
March 25th, 2020 12:13 - Day 2 (Saxon Crow)
Lovely happy words and fun to read. I hope you can look back on these...
March 25th, 2020 12:11 - Tasting. (Fay Slimm.)
As described by you and Goldfinch today it is indeed a wonderful,...
March 25th, 2020 12:09 - What a Wonderful World. (Goldfinch60)
The \'church\' of god is all around you in this piece Mr G. What better...
March 25th, 2020 04:18 - Job Lot of Biro’s (Neville)
Well penned (groan)... Well constable Neville, it\'s all done on video...
March 24th, 2020 13:17 - Still trying Mr Lee (Poetic Dan)
I reckon that if you can give 100% of yourself to a task then you must...
March 24th, 2020 13:12 - Lost. (Fay Slimm.)
Love the second part especially Fay. Reminds us all who still have the...
March 24th, 2020 13:07 - Strange Times Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Well i was planning to do some DIY whilst at home but it looks like there...
March 24th, 2020 03:05 - Day 1 (Saxon Crow)
Yes i got my text from NHS at teatime monday telling my i am vulnerable...
March 24th, 2020 02:59 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Now that made me laugh out loud and i\'m still smiling. Top marks.
March 24th, 2020 02:57 - Living Side - Penguins Go Out While People Stay In (Nafis Light)
The penguins shall inherit the toilet tissue.
March 22nd, 2020 18:43 - Mother-Fed. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow Fay Wow! I loved every word of this.... i pictured so vividly...
March 22nd, 2020 18:16 - My Road to Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
Then along came Bird, Dizzy and Presley handing reins to Zawinul, Brecker...
March 22nd, 2020 18:04 - HIDDEN BENEFITS (Michael Edwards)
DOH! This explains then why there are no rape scenes in the Simpsons...
March 22nd, 2020 17:58 - Insidious (Neville)
I doubt she will answer you with honesty. They like to come across as...
March 21st, 2020 13:50 - SWEETER THAN HONEY. PSALMS 119:103 (Amon)
Worship on high the omnipotent creator of coronavirus. Killing many...
March 21st, 2020 03:52 - Ironing Sadness. (Goldfinch60)
These sad occasions will spring out of the woodwork at you many mire times...
March 21st, 2020 02:33 - THE ARTISTS DILEMMA (Michael Edwards)
Ha! Maybe if you drank a certain liquid you, easel pallet and all, would...
March 21st, 2020 01:36 - who\'s your daddy? (Queer-with-a-pen)
There is a great deal of pain and sadness pouring out of your words today....
March 21st, 2020 01:18 - More than the dogs (Birddie Jane)
Ah but therein lies the dilemma. Would you love him more if there were no...
March 20th, 2020 15:54 - They Paved Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
Excellent piece and such a meaningful message.
Fortunately we can find...
March 20th, 2020 10:57 - 3 MORE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
A ploughman who severed one arm
wore it round his neck iike a...
March 20th, 2020 10:36 - failure isn’t an option (Mmoonshine)
Refreshing to know that we all have a past. As our past grows so hopefully...
March 19th, 2020 14:16 - Voices (Dominick beltran)
That\'s gonna take more than an asprin to sort out.
March 19th, 2020 14:13 - Living Side - We Stay Alive (Nafis Light)
Great words for today\'s global concern.
I don\'t know what advice is...
March 19th, 2020 12:33 - A relative moment (Saxon Crow)
A very fitting piece for today\'s global scare.
Really well written and...
March 19th, 2020 12:25 - Patty cake (Poetic Dan)
Patty cake, patty cake bakers Dan
parades his daughter around in her...
March 19th, 2020 06:25 - Diversity. (Fay Slimm.)
Not half - and what diverse lot of poetic believers we are too here on...
March 19th, 2020 06:21 - Patty cake (Poetic Dan)
The leader of the poetic clan
was a southern gent they call Dan
but...
March 19th, 2020 04:33 - Beautiful Lives Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Tread that path at moderate pace for the scenery can be amazing, and...
March 19th, 2020 03:52 - NEEDLES (Michael Edwards)
oh no panic buying of hedgehog food and toothpaste..... you never see...
March 19th, 2020 03:48 - Cat Cuddles (Impromptu Poem #1) (DeviLove)
Love of your cat shines thru. You lucky person having that love and...
March 18th, 2020 22:36 - Secret Pleasure (Chantallove2017)
Reminded me very much of something i wrote a while back which i wanted to...
March 18th, 2020 13:48 - happiness (iv) (Mmoonshine)
True love won\'t have you feeling like that you know. I\'m guessing...
March 18th, 2020 13:42 - 💛 POETICIANS 💛 ANGELA 💛 THREE BLANK VERSE SEXTETS 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Poetician was a new word to me so i looked it up on google where it is...
March 18th, 2020 05:17 - Mad world privileges (Poetic Dan)
There#s a lot to be said for the wisdom in your words. Especially the last...
March 18th, 2020 04:46
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