Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Corona Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
For a poetic old timer
there\'s really nowt finer
than to rhyme
what...
March 29th, 2020 04:15 - Living Side - Poet’s Note 4 (Nafis Light)
Unwind relax and let it flow as it will.
March 28th, 2020 11:44 - Aurora. (Fay Slimm.)
You led me through a woodland with freshened senses as i read and re-read...
March 28th, 2020 11:41 - Victim of Loneliness? (Goldfinch60)
With age comes a myriad of blessings and trials but one rare quality is...
March 28th, 2020 04:13 - THE GLASS (Michael Edwards)
Is this about my toilet bowl?
Careful what you wish for! LOL
March 28th, 2020 04:07 - Frustration. (Fay Slimm.)
LOL sometimes its not easy to read the other genders needs and that works...
March 27th, 2020 04:50 - I can\'t write them a letter so I\'ll start with you! (Poetic Dan)
Seeing your videos which are always so enjoyable and reading you on your...
March 27th, 2020 04:42 - Day 4 - Arthur\'s lament (Saxon Crow)
Excellent writing Crow. Loved the Arthurian context and the message was...
March 27th, 2020 04:35 - A Walk to My Willow. (Goldfinch60)
That river of yours does you a power of good. But you are supposed to be...
March 27th, 2020 04:31 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Excellent nonsense! More of this kind of stuff please. Great pic too.
March 27th, 2020 04:28 - MASKING THE TRUTH (Joe Marcello)
Think about it...if god created this planet.... yeah that saviour bloke...
March 26th, 2020 16:02 - End of Times? (PoeticBiscuit)
He he he SNAP! I wrote on the same theme today...please have a look at my...
March 26th, 2020 15:58 - What the Hell am I supposed to do? (Cresposaccent)
Wisdom arrives after a lot of suffering and suffering is written all...
March 26th, 2020 15:52 - Darkness (Rrodriguez)
Wasting your time praying, it doesn\'t work.... checkout those who prayed...
March 26th, 2020 13:14 - Day 3 (Saxon Crow)
One might say there are more questions than answers. But when a blackbird...
March 26th, 2020 11:30 - Corona Virus ~ Mother E (Angel~Wings)
Whereas i totally agree i do think this could have been several poems...
March 26th, 2020 06:31 - My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions (Neville)
A young man\'s question is asked here i believe. For a matured man is...
March 26th, 2020 04:23 - Friday May 5th 2017 (Elsiewarrenswords)
Nice one! But lets see what life has done for your expression in the...
March 26th, 2020 03:52 - LSD (CharlieFanning)
Why? unsure! Justification - I walked away from it with a mind expanded.
March 26th, 2020 03:44 - here and now (Siranswerer)
A woman or a cat? They\'re so damned similar.
Thank you for getting the...
March 26th, 2020 03:42 - you won\'t read my poems (Hazel Kaye)
That\'s the real poetry of love and desire. Excellent!
March 26th, 2020 03:39 - That\'s Tuesday (Afternoontea)
And that\'s one delightful poem. You lucky person having such a wonderful...
March 26th, 2020 03:35 - Tell Me (Mary73223)
Beautiful love poem which reads like watching a bud turn into a wonderful...
March 26th, 2020 03:32 - Realism. Short n simple (A)
Feelings into words are the equasion which is the making of a poet. It...
March 26th, 2020 03:29 - Together for Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
And so, to so many questions we cannot find answers for. Many avenues our...
March 26th, 2020 03:20 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Been there, done that.... I wish I could still fit into that T-shirt.
March 26th, 2020 03:15 - Agony XoX (Charlotte ♡︎)
Wow! this reads like a prelude to exodus.
Often who we are perceived to...
March 25th, 2020 18:17 - Past Memory (PoeticBiscuit)
Ha! the bitter sweet of the one that got away, or was cast aside. But are...
March 25th, 2020 12:13 - Day 2 (Saxon Crow)
Lovely happy words and fun to read. I hope you can look back on these...
March 25th, 2020 12:11 - Tasting. (Fay Slimm.)
As described by you and Goldfinch today it is indeed a wonderful,...
March 25th, 2020 12:09 - What a Wonderful World. (Goldfinch60)
The \'church\' of god is all around you in this piece Mr G. What better...
March 25th, 2020 04:18 - Job Lot of Biro’s (Neville)
Well penned (groan)... Well constable Neville, it\'s all done on video...
March 24th, 2020 13:17 - Still trying Mr Lee (Poetic Dan)
I reckon that if you can give 100% of yourself to a task then you must...
March 24th, 2020 13:12 - Lost. (Fay Slimm.)
Love the second part especially Fay. Reminds us all who still have the...
March 24th, 2020 13:07 - Strange Times Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Well i was planning to do some DIY whilst at home but it looks like there...
March 24th, 2020 03:05 - Day 1 (Saxon Crow)
Yes i got my text from NHS at teatime monday telling my i am vulnerable...
March 24th, 2020 02:59 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Now that made me laugh out loud and i\'m still smiling. Top marks.
March 24th, 2020 02:57 - Living Side - Penguins Go Out While People Stay In (Nafis Light)
The penguins shall inherit the toilet tissue.
March 22nd, 2020 18:43 - Mother-Fed. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow Fay Wow! I loved every word of this.... i pictured so vividly...
March 22nd, 2020 18:16 - My Road to Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
Then along came Bird, Dizzy and Presley handing reins to Zawinul, Brecker...
March 22nd, 2020 18:04 - HIDDEN BENEFITS (Michael Edwards)
DOH! This explains then why there are no rape scenes in the Simpsons...
March 22nd, 2020 17:58 - Insidious (Neville)
I doubt she will answer you with honesty. They like to come across as...
March 21st, 2020 13:50 - SWEETER THAN HONEY. PSALMS 119:103 (Amon)
Worship on high the omnipotent creator of coronavirus. Killing many...
March 21st, 2020 03:52 - Ironing Sadness. (Goldfinch60)
These sad occasions will spring out of the woodwork at you many mire times...
March 21st, 2020 02:33 - THE ARTISTS DILEMMA (Michael Edwards)
Ha! Maybe if you drank a certain liquid you, easel pallet and all, would...
March 21st, 2020 01:36 - who\'s your daddy? (Queer-with-a-pen)
There is a great deal of pain and sadness pouring out of your words today....
March 21st, 2020 01:18 - More than the dogs (Birddie Jane)
Ah but therein lies the dilemma. Would you love him more if there were no...
March 20th, 2020 15:54 - They Paved Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
Excellent piece and such a meaningful message.
Fortunately we can find...
March 20th, 2020 10:57 - 3 MORE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
A ploughman who severed one arm
wore it round his neck iike a...
March 20th, 2020 10:36 - failure isn’t an option (Mmoonshine)
Refreshing to know that we all have a past. As our past grows so hopefully...
March 19th, 2020 14:16 - Voices (Dominick beltran)
That\'s gonna take more than an asprin to sort out.
March 19th, 2020 14:13 - Living Side - We Stay Alive (Nafis Light)
Great words for today\'s global concern.
I don\'t know what advice is...
March 19th, 2020 12:33 - A relative moment (Saxon Crow)
A very fitting piece for today\'s global scare.
Really well written and...
March 19th, 2020 12:25 - Patty cake (Poetic Dan)
Patty cake, patty cake bakers Dan
parades his daughter around in her...
March 19th, 2020 06:25 - Diversity. (Fay Slimm.)
Not half - and what diverse lot of poetic believers we are too here on...
March 19th, 2020 06:21 - Patty cake (Poetic Dan)
The leader of the poetic clan
was a southern gent they call Dan
but...
March 19th, 2020 04:33 - Beautiful Lives Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Tread that path at moderate pace for the scenery can be amazing, and...
March 19th, 2020 03:52 - NEEDLES (Michael Edwards)
oh no panic buying of hedgehog food and toothpaste..... you never see...
March 19th, 2020 03:48 - Cat Cuddles (Impromptu Poem #1) (DeviLove)
Love of your cat shines thru. You lucky person having that love and...
March 18th, 2020 22:36 - Secret Pleasure (Chantallove2017)
Reminded me very much of something i wrote a while back which i wanted to...
March 18th, 2020 13:48 - happiness (iv) (Mmoonshine)
True love won\'t have you feeling like that you know. I\'m guessing...
March 18th, 2020 13:42 - 💛 POETICIANS 💛 ANGELA 💛 THREE BLANK VERSE SEXTETS 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Poetician was a new word to me so i looked it up on google where it is...
March 18th, 2020 05:17 - Mad world privileges (Poetic Dan)
There#s a lot to be said for the wisdom in your words. Especially the last...
March 18th, 2020 04:46 - Wordiku Six. (Goldfinch60)
Clever stuff.
March 18th, 2020 02:10 - From the ridiculous to...... (Saxon Crow)
Hmm i agree we should be laughing in the face of this scurge but we must...
March 18th, 2020 02:08 - A COUPLE OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Funny and clever... i hate you.
March 18th, 2020 02:05 - your not right for me (Natalie Heisey)
Reading between the lines it must have hurt lots to write this. It\'s very...
March 17th, 2020 23:55 - Readied. (Fay Slimm.)
Wherefore art thy certificate of X ? Forsooth my doublet dampens as...
March 17th, 2020 13:19 - EATING CURRY (Michael Edwards)
And those hygene rules are a right flippin caper,
I wanna eat my chips...
March 17th, 2020 13:15 - William Holman Hunt. (Goldfinch60)
Never heard of the fellow you pay tribute to here. I shall return later...
March 17th, 2020 13:10 - Cake! (Saxon Crow)
Brit slang \'cake hole\' = your mouth.
We were made to love cake, if...
March 17th, 2020 13:08 - Insignificant (Poetic Dan)
When i sit by the crashing ocean (not talking about south coast ripples)...
March 16th, 2020 13:31 - When winter rages (Tundrol)
oooh \'eck. Whilst i respect thy right to hold these desires and i respect...
March 16th, 2020 05:35 - Enticing. (Fay Slimm.)
Unlike me lately, you must be an early riser. As a busy bee i was too but...
March 16th, 2020 05:04 - The Little Things (Saxon Crow)
yes yes yes.... crafty fool that i am though i bought another potato...
March 16th, 2020 02:10 - LIMERICK No 66 (Michael Edwards)
A lithe and long legged lassie
definitely one you\'d call classy
with a...
March 16th, 2020 01:42 - Thoughts Version 2. (Goldfinch60)
Just keep it coming. Life flows like your river, carrying everything from...
March 16th, 2020 01:32 - You will remember (Nemo)
Reads like the note a mass murderer left behind on his way to kill as many...
March 15th, 2020 23:29 - Death I guess (Last Shadow)
And all whilst you read a magazine on a trip to the bathroom. Turn the...
March 15th, 2020 23:26 - ride (i) (Mmoonshine)
I hope someone bought you a toffee apple after the wheels fell off.
March 15th, 2020 23:23 - Death (The Lesser Being)
ooh ouch.... death is a demon? really?
A demon may kill you yes, but...
March 15th, 2020 23:19 - Naive (Olivergeorgebutcher)
I guess if one has a very high opinion of ones self then polygamy could be...
March 15th, 2020 18:22 - Fun house (Poetic Dan)
Expands the mind doesn\'t it.
March 15th, 2020 18:17 - LIMERICK No 65 (Michael Edwards)
LOL good one
Clipping off the klingons and smellies
he dropped the...
March 15th, 2020 18:10 - Thoughts Version 1. (Goldfinch60)
I repeat what ME wrote above. I only write when inspiration leads me to.
March 15th, 2020 18:02 - Stop, Forward, Pause, Rewind. (Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87)
I can see and feel where you are coming from with this. How much more...
March 14th, 2020 16:24 - I will not be quitting you (Aa Harvey)
Very sad and thought provoking.
March 14th, 2020 15:53 - Blackbird (Rein Armstrong)
The pope being the figurehead of the most wealthy organisation in the...
March 14th, 2020 15:52 - And you woke me up at four in the morning to tell me that!!??! (Tundrol)
Most of us find cats enigmatic and relax into \'their way\' as you...
March 14th, 2020 11:14 - WE WILL WALK WITH GOD 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 A PANTOUM 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
In times of need and distress i suggest one leads their camel laden with...
March 14th, 2020 10:57 - Faith (Last Shadow)
Depends upon your faith. If your faith is true to god then you dont need...
March 14th, 2020 10:49 - Part 2: The girl I once was (_unleash_your_creativity_)
Oh easy peasey to answer that one. LOL Easy for some old fogey like me but...
March 14th, 2020 10:40 - Call of the moon (The Lesser Being)
Congratulations for being the first to make me contemplate the moon in...
March 14th, 2020 10:31 - Love Is (Sonnypooh)
Well that\'s romantic love i\'ll grant you. But there\'s so much more to...
March 14th, 2020 10:24 - Consumed by Mercs. (Goldfinch60)
ahem! ... i drive a merc.... wossa mattah wiff drivin a merc...
March 14th, 2020 10:22 - LIMERICK No 64 (Michael Edwards)
he jad also two heads on one neck
one looked forward the other looked...
March 14th, 2020 10:14 - Grandma (Mikal)
I never knew my grandparents but boy does this hit the spot.
Your words...
March 13th, 2020 16:23 - I heard an owl in the night (Sylviasearcher)
I don\'t think a wise owl will come anywhere near. There are far more...
March 13th, 2020 10:16 - Part 1: The girl I once was (_unleash_your_creativity_)
If anyone tries to answer your questions they will be wrong because only...
March 13th, 2020 08:57 - Every biscuit but one (Poetic Dan)
I am most definitely a garibaldi biscuit.... full of dead flies .....and...
March 13th, 2020 08:34
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