Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- time flies (Crystal Hope)
Lovely tribute with much love and affection shining from your words.
March 3rd, 2020 16:36 - Richer. (Fay Slimm.)
I feel I should re-visit your poem today having ranted earlier for which i...
March 3rd, 2020 12:06 - Scars (John Prophet)
Scarface maybe LOL.
Your words today echo thoughts i have had many...
March 3rd, 2020 11:09 - Closed Side - Simple Gratitude (Nafis Light)
Short and sweet (more powerful in my eyes).
Your words today are of the...
March 3rd, 2020 11:03 - The Wood is Green (Saxon Crow)
Great welcoming of spring in your words today. Bring on warmer...
March 3rd, 2020 11:01 - Global Warning (Neville)
Meanwhile several million voices cried out as if in a silence of impotence...
March 3rd, 2020 08:45 - Richer. (Fay Slimm.)
Seeing so many around with the droop of sadness about their personna I...
March 3rd, 2020 06:31 - Losing The Loveliest Love (Adrianna Kjeld)
A heartfelt plea comes through very strong here.
March 3rd, 2020 06:14 - FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
These sexually active subjects of your couplets are obviously out to...
March 3rd, 2020 06:10 - Self Belief. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s about conditioning and a certain kind of narrow mindedness. Now...
March 3rd, 2020 06:05 - His Masterpiece (Clara)
Love what you\'ve done here. Truly artistic poetry. Frame it LOL.
March 2nd, 2020 13:22 - The Illusion of Now (Saxon Crow)
Playing devils advocate here.... how useful is the past? What do we...
March 2nd, 2020 10:52 - Some Words Are Too Heavy (Neville)
Ha! You\'re a poet and dontcha just know it. Words are our tools which we...
March 2nd, 2020 07:30 - All or nothing (Aa Harvey)
Written by a person who knows their mind and knows what they want.
March 2nd, 2020 07:26 - Love\'s Due. (Fay Slimm.)
An anatomy of reticence to allow ones heart to play again in three concise...
March 2nd, 2020 07:24 - Crossing Out/Thinking Again. (Goldfinch60)
As Kenneth Williams famously said \"Stop messin about\".
Just a bit of...
March 2nd, 2020 07:18 - Bound by the river (Poetic Dan)
Wisdom in your words today Dan. Something must be in the March air for I...
March 2nd, 2020 07:15 - i am,all that i am (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A masterpiece! Pure brilliance!
I love this piece, it\'s composition,...
March 1st, 2020 17:03 - Empty of Love (Shahla Latifi)
A very moving piece from you. Is this the sadness held deep within one in...
March 1st, 2020 13:17 - a poem about nothing (Ivanpetryshyn)
Don\'t bother with people who cant see writing beyond a formulae. Just...
March 1st, 2020 12:17 - Authenticity (Dakota)
Lack of and inappropriately placed punctuation has left me confuse about...
March 1st, 2020 08:38 - Awaking Each Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Positivity. You either have it or you don\'t (though i do try to encourage...
March 1st, 2020 07:39 - The Atheist (PotbellyPleb)
Potbelly rather than send me huge private messages attempting to tell me...
March 1st, 2020 07:26 - A Book By its Cover (JWKP98)
A very long winded way of saying what the title leads us to...
February 29th, 2020 11:01 - Nature\'s Orchestra. (Goldfinch60)
To be in harmony with nature in that environment is priceless. Wonderful...
February 29th, 2020 05:50 - thin skin (AJ)
Have you actually tried laying down on your own at night in a graveyard....
February 28th, 2020 16:53 - Time (Narcisa)
Like a mantra of truth in a time of suffering..... Should be read aloud...
February 28th, 2020 16:21 - The Other Side (Gino)
Here you show us the human belief in another existence without touching...
February 28th, 2020 13:19 - The Atheist (PotbellyPleb)
I\'m not sure who is the most confused here, you or your readers.
February 28th, 2020 13:10 - stuck with endless over\'s (Lauraoverxo)
I agree with Nemo but somehow this left me feeling like it ought to be two...
February 28th, 2020 10:09 - Mediocre Days of Living (Saxon Crow)
Reads like the current page of my life story SC.
Yet still my mind has...
February 28th, 2020 09:52 - Together (Neville)
Without a traditional gravestone or plaque it is fitting to have words...
February 28th, 2020 09:48 - Watch as I fall (Ethan Daniel)
Great personal words displaying the pain of watching your love being...
February 28th, 2020 09:40 - Spring Knows. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh what a superior final line. Sgt Major Nature commands his bulb forces...
February 28th, 2020 04:41 - The Croquet Myth. (Goldfinch60)
Aqua croquet, the underwater version.... not a game to be snorkelled at!...
February 28th, 2020 04:33 - Tone Deaf? (Saxon Crow)
Bring on surround sound...... such an eerie thought though. where would...
February 27th, 2020 17:24 - VALUE OF AN EGG ? ๐ ANGELA ๐ BRIAN ๐ NUTRITION 1. (ANGELA & BRIAN)
LOL this reads like a lesson in junior school.
February 27th, 2020 12:41 - WINTER NIGHTS (1) (Michael Edwards)
I feel the chill of your words and shudder at the resemblance above it.
February 27th, 2020 10:39 - The Gaz Hughes Sextet. (Goldfinch60)
Ya wants be-bop? Shouldda played some Diz and Bird.
But you already...
February 27th, 2020 03:02 - Of course I take my job personal, it\'s a way of life (Poetic Dan)
I was brought up with dogs and i love \'em. They love a bit of loving.
February 27th, 2020 02:59 - Love & nothingness (Poetic Dan)
Same for us all i guess Dan. Other wise we would be shedding a lot of...
February 26th, 2020 16:57 - Madly (Skie Khaleesi)
Dunno why but this reminded me of a certain religious nutter who has...
February 26th, 2020 14:23 - Spring Splendour. (Fay Slimm.)
Cor! I wish.... even the wading birds round here have got their wellies...
February 26th, 2020 09:35 - Broke my back (Renzi)
So sad to learn today
You\'ve busted some vertebrae
But while you\'re...
February 26th, 2020 08:46 - Lawless Tears (Saxon Crow)
Hmmm you seem to be pointing a finger in a certain direction... but....
February 26th, 2020 07:12 - You Stole my breath. (Markziff)
And then she buggered off with the milkman?
I wish relationships were...
February 26th, 2020 07:09 - Disequilibrium (Neville)
Reality shouts from your piece today. For some of us life and living can...
February 26th, 2020 06:23 - Hurt (2) (Sylviasearcher)
Short, sweet and punchy.
The suffering of nature amid it\'s beauty.
February 26th, 2020 06:19 - The better Gems (๐คs.zaynab.kamoonpuri๐ท๐ฆ๐ฝ)
Heaven has eyes now? What stuff has been taught to you i#m wondering....
February 26th, 2020 06:11 - Coloured Nonsense. (Goldfinch60)
I hope you\'re not mixing that with anything/
Delightful read today...
February 26th, 2020 06:07 - Online Trolls, its NOT okay (Renzi)
So sad to see you upset. I agree with your plea completely. I think you...
February 25th, 2020 13:52 - Memories of Uranus (Barry Hodges)
I wish for the moons of Uranus. Such disclosures afore the naked eye...
February 25th, 2020 12:14 - Pencil or Pen? (Aziza S)
You seem to write from the standpoint of one who has questioned christian...
February 25th, 2020 11:07 - Mission Message (Orchidee)
Did you know that there was no such place as Nazareth when Jesus was...
February 25th, 2020 11:00 - Life Song. (Fay Slimm.)
These are lovely words consigning a humane message to each...
February 25th, 2020 10:35 - Four Words. (Goldfinch60)
As you know I was diagnosed with a cancer last year and went through...
February 25th, 2020 05:44 - Fog (Skie Khaleesi)
This reads like somebody who cannot validate themselves when in a...
February 24th, 2020 22:28 - The Greenman (Saxon Crow)
This recounts the feelings some of us can begin to experience in...
February 24th, 2020 16:05 - Just habit (TWENTY3)
Reminded me of a piece i wrote some time ago:-
How many times
must we...
February 24th, 2020 10:40 - Anonymous (Seek)
The sadness of the florists \'merchandise\'.
The cast-off \'didn\'t...
February 24th, 2020 10:29 - Swansong. (Fay Slimm.)
Don\'t we all share your wish too.
Lovely short piece today which made...
February 24th, 2020 10:24 - The Untrod Path. (Goldfinch60)
Despite your words today i think you have an innate and spiritual sense of...
February 24th, 2020 10:22 - SEEING THE LIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Delightful picture today, most striking.
I missed so many lectures at...
February 24th, 2020 10:18 - Embrace (FoolishHeart)
I enjoyed reading this and \'bite my lip\' made me laugh out loud....
February 23rd, 2020 13:18 - Nightfall (Xeina)
I really like this one. \"Where the falling stars live\" is a particularly...
February 23rd, 2020 06:28 - Taking Time (Orchidee)
To live a life of debauchery
was not the way for old Orchidee
but for...
February 23rd, 2020 04:12 - \" \'Ello Andy\". (Goldfinch60)
More rabbit than sainsbury\'s??? I used to have a famous photo of the mum...
February 23rd, 2020 02:34 - I\'m yours (Skie Khaleesi)
Wo-ah! Steady on there gal LOL. Yours are words of a gal falling in love....
February 22nd, 2020 23:52 - Paradise Gone (Aa Harvey)
Your writing today brought to mind the dying thoughts of a young soldier....
February 22nd, 2020 23:47 - Billie Eilish (Georgiarous101)
There are many people who can only see the superficial. They are not...
February 22nd, 2020 23:40 - BEFORE I MET ~ ANGELA ๐ BRIAN ๐ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Are you looking forward to becoming a wise old man?
February 22nd, 2020 04:01 - Laughter Abounds. (Goldfinch60)
Lots of fun in those videos. Good to read a piece si full of mirth.
February 22nd, 2020 02:38 - Words For You (Pootรซn)
What are you, man or mouse LOL. If you are feeling this way then i...
February 22nd, 2020 00:29 - She Rises. (Fay Slimm.)
Overpowered by majestic sun
darkness hides in shadows
until, reaching...
February 21st, 2020 19:20 - Guilty Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Sad that you wrote this piece about guilt. You have been so open about...
February 21st, 2020 19:10 - HAS ANYONE EVER SAID โBOOโ TO A GOOSE? (Michael Edwards)
Fun stuff. Has a visual arts master ever been goosed?
February 21st, 2020 19:02 - Knowing. (Fay Slimm.)
The last verse got me. To me it speaks of repressed desire now released...
February 20th, 2020 13:04 - HAIKU SPRING (3) (Michael Edwards)
I\'m not buying into this formula at all you know (poor excuse for my own...
February 20th, 2020 12:55 - Drug of Choice. (Goldfinch60)
Well Goldie i\'m a bit taken aback to see you admit you are hung up on...
February 20th, 2020 12:52 - Sunday (TWENTY3)
Welcome to mps. This is a great first piece from you. You have your own...
February 20th, 2020 12:46 - I hate you (Aa Harvey)
Ouch! Get rid of that hate. Hate is no good in anyone\'s life, it\'s far...
February 18th, 2020 11:15 - Bring the play, rhyme once a day (Poetic Dan)
Stay fit dude. My body\'s falling apart from all the abuse i gave it...
February 18th, 2020 07:29 - Depression (Georgiarous101)
Yep, so many people reside within their depressive state. Often we see the...
February 18th, 2020 06:35 - Scaled (Fay Slimm.)
\"I saw a giant of a man brought down by a thing called love\". \"Love...
February 18th, 2020 06:09 - LIKE A ROSE ๐ OF ๐งก PEACE ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lovely piece from you recounting part of a loved ones life and their sad...
February 18th, 2020 04:20 - Irrevocable (Ontheedge)
Reading between the lines of this you certainly devalue your worth in your...
February 18th, 2020 04:13 - Pensieve moment (Saxon Crow)
Nice picture you painted here and you painted it well.
On the premise...
February 18th, 2020 04:09 - HAIKU SPRING (1) (Michael Edwards)
Haiku shmykoo pah! E=mC?..
Bring on that departure. Nice flow to
February 18th, 2020 04:04 - For my one (Markziff)
How many times
must we taste
and try
the fruits of
the love tree...
February 18th, 2020 04:00 - Into My New World. (Goldfinch60)
Look after your health Goldie, you need it to get around and enjoy this...
February 18th, 2020 03:56 - Over ? (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, though the passion and \'adoration\' has gone, it should never be...
February 17th, 2020 06:25 - I see you (Aa Harvey)
This is quite lovely. The longing reaches out. The male side of me says...
February 17th, 2020 06:11 - I see you (Aa Harvey)
This is quite lovely. The longing reaches out. The male side of me says...
February 17th, 2020 05:51 - A Poets Lot (Saxon Crow)
Just do what you do to let it all flow out of you in any way you feel is...
February 17th, 2020 03:39 - For Unsub. (Goldfinch60)
Or the bloody fence gets blown away and it\'s so windy and rainy that you...
February 17th, 2020 03:33 - Label (Jeremy Leach)
Dontcha just love it when the last line of a piece validates the whole. I...
February 17th, 2020 02:07 - POETRY (Michael Edwards)
Yes, i\'ll go along with your words today 100%.
All the better if it also...
February 17th, 2020 02:01 - Locked Out (Neville)
When my key broke in her lock we knew that we would have to find something...
February 15th, 2020 13:53 - Elusive pursuit endeavoring to craft a great poem (Rew4er2nail)
Why not find something you want to say and say it in plain language,...
February 15th, 2020 05:04 - Amazed by Music Again. (Goldfinch60)
To be honest i never was a fan of Cleo\'s. Her other half tho, Mr...
February 15th, 2020 03:47
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