Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• WINTER NIGHTS (1) (Michael Edwards) I feel the chill of your words and shudder at the resemblance above it.
  February 27th, 2020 10:39
• The Gaz Hughes Sextet. (Goldfinch60) Ya wants be-bop? Shouldda played some Diz and Bird. But you already...
  February 27th, 2020 03:02
• Of course I take my job personal, it\'s a way of life (Poetic Dan) I was brought up with dogs and i love \'em. They love a bit of loving.
  February 27th, 2020 02:59
• Love & nothingness (Poetic Dan) Same for us all i guess Dan. Other wise we would be shedding a lot of...
  February 26th, 2020 16:57
• Madly (Skie Khaleesi) Dunno why but this reminded me of a certain religious nutter who has...
  February 26th, 2020 14:23
• Spring Splendour. (Fay Slimm.) Cor! I wish.... even the wading birds round here have got their wellies...
  February 26th, 2020 09:35
• Broke my back (Renzi) So sad to learn today You\'ve busted some vertebrae But while you\'re...
  February 26th, 2020 08:46
• Lawless Tears (Saxon Crow) Hmmm you seem to be pointing a finger in a certain direction... but....
  February 26th, 2020 07:12
• You Stole my breath. (Markziff) And then she buggered off with the milkman? I wish relationships were...
  February 26th, 2020 07:09
• Disequilibrium (Neville) Reality shouts from your piece today. For some of us life and living can...
  February 26th, 2020 06:23
• Hurt (2) (Sylviasearcher) Short, sweet and punchy. The suffering of nature amid it\'s beauty.
  February 26th, 2020 06:19
• The better Gems (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Heaven has eyes now? What stuff has been taught to you i#m wondering....
  February 26th, 2020 06:11
• Coloured Nonsense. (Goldfinch60) I hope you\'re not mixing that with anything/ Delightful read today...
  February 26th, 2020 06:07
• Online Trolls, its NOT okay (Renzi) So sad to see you upset. I agree with your plea completely. I think you...
  February 25th, 2020 13:52
• Memories of Uranus (Barry Hodges) I wish for the moons of Uranus. Such disclosures afore the naked eye...
  February 25th, 2020 12:14
• Pencil or Pen? (Aziza S) You seem to write from the standpoint of one who has questioned christian...
  February 25th, 2020 11:07
• Mission Message (Orchidee) Did you know that there was no such place as Nazareth when Jesus was...
  February 25th, 2020 11:00
• Life Song. (Fay Slimm.) These are lovely words consigning a humane message to each...
  February 25th, 2020 10:35
• Four Words. (Goldfinch60) As you know I was diagnosed with a cancer last year and went through...
  February 25th, 2020 05:44
• Fog (Skie Khaleesi) This reads like somebody who cannot validate themselves when in a...
  February 24th, 2020 22:28
• The Greenman (Saxon Crow) This recounts the feelings some of us can begin to experience in...
  February 24th, 2020 16:05
• Just habit (TWENTY3) Reminded me of a piece i wrote some time ago:- How many times must we...
  February 24th, 2020 10:40
• Anonymous (Seek) The sadness of the florists \'merchandise\'. The cast-off \'didn\'t...
  February 24th, 2020 10:29
• Swansong. (Fay Slimm.) Don\'t we all share your wish too. Lovely short piece today which made...
  February 24th, 2020 10:24
• The Untrod Path. (Goldfinch60) Despite your words today i think you have an innate and spiritual sense of...
  February 24th, 2020 10:22
• SEEING THE LIGHT (Michael Edwards) Delightful picture today, most striking. I missed so many lectures at...
  February 24th, 2020 10:18
• Embrace (FoolishHeart) I enjoyed reading this and \'bite my lip\' made me laugh out loud....
  February 23rd, 2020 13:18
• Nightfall (Xeina) I really like this one. \"Where the falling stars live\" is a particularly...
  February 23rd, 2020 06:28
• Taking Time (Orchidee) To live a life of debauchery was not the way for old Orchidee but for...
  February 23rd, 2020 04:12
• \" \'Ello Andy\". (Goldfinch60) More rabbit than sainsbury\'s??? I used to have a famous photo of the mum...
  February 23rd, 2020 02:34
• I\'m yours (Skie Khaleesi) Wo-ah! Steady on there gal LOL. Yours are words of a gal falling in love....
  February 22nd, 2020 23:52
• Paradise Gone (Aa Harvey) Your writing today brought to mind the dying thoughts of a young soldier....
  February 22nd, 2020 23:47
• Billie Eilish (Georgiarous101) There are many people who can only see the superficial. They are not...
  February 22nd, 2020 23:40
• BEFORE I MET ~ ANGELA 💙 BRIAN 💙 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Are you looking forward to becoming a wise old man?
  February 22nd, 2020 04:01
• Laughter Abounds. (Goldfinch60) Lots of fun in those videos. Good to read a piece si full of mirth.
  February 22nd, 2020 02:38
• Words For You (Pootën) What are you, man or mouse LOL. If you are feeling this way then i...
  February 22nd, 2020 00:29
• She Rises. (Fay Slimm.) Overpowered by majestic sun darkness hides in shadows until, reaching...
  February 21st, 2020 19:20
• Guilty Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Sad that you wrote this piece about guilt. You have been so open about...
  February 21st, 2020 19:10
• HAS ANYONE EVER SAID ‘BOO’ TO A GOOSE? (Michael Edwards) Fun stuff. Has a visual arts master ever been goosed?
  February 21st, 2020 19:02
• Knowing. (Fay Slimm.) The last verse got me. To me it speaks of repressed desire now released...
  February 20th, 2020 13:04
• HAIKU SPRING (3) (Michael Edwards) I\'m not buying into this formula at all you know (poor excuse for my own...
  February 20th, 2020 12:55
• Drug of Choice. (Goldfinch60) Well Goldie i\'m a bit taken aback to see you admit you are hung up on...
  February 20th, 2020 12:52
• Sunday (TWENTY3) Welcome to mps. This is a great first piece from you. You have your own...
  February 20th, 2020 12:46
• I hate you (Aa Harvey) Ouch! Get rid of that hate. Hate is no good in anyone\'s life, it\'s far...
  February 18th, 2020 11:15
• Bring the play, rhyme once a day (Poetic Dan) Stay fit dude. My body\'s falling apart from all the abuse i gave it...
  February 18th, 2020 07:29
• Depression (Georgiarous101) Yep, so many people reside within their depressive state. Often we see the...
  February 18th, 2020 06:35
• Scaled (Fay Slimm.) \"I saw a giant of a man brought down by a thing called love\". \"Love...
  February 18th, 2020 06:09
• LIKE A ROSE 💛 OF 🧡 PEACE ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Lovely piece from you recounting part of a loved ones life and their sad...
  February 18th, 2020 04:20
• Irrevocable (Ontheedge) Reading between the lines of this you certainly devalue your worth in your...
  February 18th, 2020 04:13
• Pensieve moment (Saxon Crow) Nice picture you painted here and you painted it well. On the premise...
  February 18th, 2020 04:09
• HAIKU SPRING (1) (Michael Edwards) Haiku shmykoo pah! E=mC?.. Bring on that departure. Nice flow to
  February 18th, 2020 04:04
• For my one (Markziff) How many times must we taste and try the fruits of the love tree...
  February 18th, 2020 04:00
• Into My New World. (Goldfinch60) Look after your health Goldie, you need it to get around and enjoy this...
  February 18th, 2020 03:56
• Over ? (Fay Slimm.) Yes, though the passion and \'adoration\' has gone, it should never be...
  February 17th, 2020 06:25
• I see you (Aa Harvey) This is quite lovely. The longing reaches out. The male side of me says...
  February 17th, 2020 06:11
• I see you (Aa Harvey) This is quite lovely. The longing reaches out. The male side of me says...
  February 17th, 2020 05:51
• A Poets Lot (Saxon Crow) Just do what you do to let it all flow out of you in any way you feel is...
  February 17th, 2020 03:39
• For Unsub. (Goldfinch60) Or the bloody fence gets blown away and it\'s so windy and rainy that you...
  February 17th, 2020 03:33
• Label (Jeremy Leach) Dontcha just love it when the last line of a piece validates the whole. I...
  February 17th, 2020 02:07
• POETRY (Michael Edwards) Yes, i\'ll go along with your words today 100%. All the better if it also...
  February 17th, 2020 02:01
• Locked Out (Neville) When my key broke in her lock we knew that we would have to find something...
  February 15th, 2020 13:53
• Elusive pursuit endeavoring to craft a great poem (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Why not find something you want to say and say it in plain language,...
  February 15th, 2020 05:04
• Amazed by Music Again. (Goldfinch60) To be honest i never was a fan of Cleo\'s. Her other half tho, Mr...
  February 15th, 2020 03:47
• Silent Side - Bye and Hi (Nafis Light) Yes you\'re so right we do tend to live like that.... as Neville pointed...
  February 14th, 2020 09:46
• Discarded (Neville) Yes i had noticed this trend and don\'t care for it.... but the throw...
  February 14th, 2020 09:42
• Vibrations (John Prophet) I found this format/layout too difficult to read and absorb the content....
  February 14th, 2020 07:57
• SAINT VALENTINE 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 A 5 7 ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) PMSL well if you believe all that stuff you\'ve placed as a footnote you...
  February 14th, 2020 05:09
• Penny Senryu. (Goldfinch60) The light is surely there Goldfinch but I wish all could see it and bathe...
  February 14th, 2020 02:49
• What Happened to my Dream? (Rrodriguez) Is this in ernest or tongue in cheek? All around us is the beautiful...
  February 14th, 2020 01:15
• reckless in love and other things (Queer-with-a-pen) Love as an emotion, rther than a physical act, is a noble place to begin...
  February 14th, 2020 01:12
• Waiting (Neville) Took me straight to the woods where we used to trek and play when i was a...
  February 13th, 2020 17:51
• I\'m you, I\'m me, I\'m rippling free (Poetic Dan) Happy families is important Mr Family Man.
  February 13th, 2020 17:46
• Valentine Moon. (Fay Slimm.) Please, please send me a valentines Missy Moon for the crater good of...
  February 13th, 2020 17:20
• There Are Good People. (Goldfinch60) LOL send him round .. I have fences to mend but leaving them until this...
  February 13th, 2020 17:12
• Ages Past? (Saxon Crow) Ah, wisdom comes at a price, accompanied by aching limbs and failing...
  February 12th, 2020 13:47
• Beginnings. (Fay Slimm.) You\'ve so well encompassed the joy of life in advancing years here. I...
  February 12th, 2020 13:38
• To Be Heard (Tiffany_Arnold) This is so well written and held me gripped to the end. It\'s not only...
  February 12th, 2020 13:01
• Until Spring (Neville) Your words today make me mindful of the current state of our trees. In my...
  February 12th, 2020 06:05
• LOVE & MARRIAGE 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 FIVE 57577 SENRYU ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) I enjoyed this full of mirth piece. Marriage hmm... been there failed at...
  February 12th, 2020 03:55
• This Is Our Life Now (Clara) Laughed out loud at your last line. The scurge of society today... erm...
  February 12th, 2020 03:47
• SHALL WE ? (Fay Slimm.) Oh for contentment! That knowing togetherness bred of love trust and...
  February 12th, 2020 03:31
• Remarkably Unfinished (Neville) Yep, you gotta let \'em go otherwise you\'re cage-ing them. \"If you love...
  February 12th, 2020 03:26
• I met him on here & now I give more than a tear. R.i.p (poet passed) (Poetic Dan) Dan, such sad news. Kevin was a true \'one off\'. He had a unique style...
  February 12th, 2020 03:13
• Stained Heart (FredPeyer) Hello Fred, good to see you posting again. Well if the words you publish...
  February 12th, 2020 03:00
• Porch Light (Goldfinch60) Ya just cant get rid of the buggers can you? LOL Joking apart, your...
  February 12th, 2020 02:31
• Different (Sylviasearcher) This is really powerful and so well composed. I\'m envious of the skill...
  February 10th, 2020 10:34
• Forsaken (Fractured Dreams) As you portray, sometimes it\'s easier to live in the night. Where one\'s...
  February 10th, 2020 10:31
• noitcelfeR (Neville) Pathos! I thought i\'d found myself long ago but only recently it dawned...
  February 10th, 2020 10:28
• Resolutions. (Fay Slimm.) Do you know, after reading this piece, i\'m getting all enthusiastic. If...
  February 10th, 2020 10:22
• Hold on if you can (Poetic Dan) What a wonderful treat for your beloved to see these words from your...
  February 10th, 2020 10:18
• Departed Manners. (Goldfinch60) Is it the way they were brought up (dragged?). Where did the parents get...
  February 10th, 2020 02:43
• Together (Daydream Believer) Brought to me the warmth of love shared, lives entwined. Happiness.
  February 9th, 2020 19:40
• Cosmic Reflections (Seek) The wisdom of years woven here into a very pleasing read. Everything...
  February 9th, 2020 19:37
• Silent Side - Stars (Nafis Light) Offering us big questions of what it\'s all about, what\'s it all for. And...
  February 9th, 2020 19:31
• Measure Up (DeviLove) Reminded me of the Janis Ian song \'at 17\'. Well she may get all the...
  February 9th, 2020 19:13
• The Beginning (Kenjii) Have you considered that poetry with rhyming lines one after the other...
  February 9th, 2020 19:07
• Calliope Acrostic (Goldfinch60) Somewhere woven in your words today is the true meaning of unconditional...
  February 9th, 2020 12:34
• How do you (Jaayx3) You start by telling yourself what a fool you would be to let such a...
  February 8th, 2020 19:59
• Hark thee Lover (Neville) This is quite quite beautiful Neville. Sight of such wonderful things as...
  February 8th, 2020 19:53
• Heidi and Snoop (Alan .S. Jeeves) Where do they get all that zest from? I reckon a dogs life cant be all...
  February 8th, 2020 17:26