Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Scattered shiny stars (Alta H Mabin) Sadly we can grow weary of looking and being attracted to imperfect stars....
  September 2nd, 2019 00:02
• Forever (Christina8) I guess we go the extra mile because that love puts us on the biggest...
  September 1st, 2019 16:19
• Forever (Christina8) I guess we go the extra mile because that love puts us on the biggest...
  September 1st, 2019 14:47
• When (Poetboy123) Sincere and moving writing from you. I share your emotion here. shall...
  September 1st, 2019 11:34
• Septembers first tear (Poetic Dan) \"In the eyes of my family i am all i need to be\" .... ...
  September 1st, 2019 11:20
• God\'s Chosen (Kevin Michael Bloor) Have you tried escaping rhyme? Once you do i think you may find yourself a...
  September 1st, 2019 09:25
• Nature...Friend (Nafis Light) Just enter a woodland and quietly hug a tree. Put your arms around the...
  September 1st, 2019 05:44
• To Be in Love. (Kevin browne) This is really you at your best Kevin. The wonder of falling in love is...
  September 1st, 2019 05:41
• a poison paradise (Lucifer very very very 1st) Once again none of your words are from the \'middle ages\'
  September 1st, 2019 05:35
• The Walking Dead (Vvnrose) A nice poem about post brexit U.K.?
  September 1st, 2019 05:32
• I Reach For The Knife (Clara) Just a thought comes to mind. A drawer which only contains a picture of...
  September 1st, 2019 05:30
• The Girl Before (Clara) Because \"Life is what happens to you when you are busy doing something...
  September 1st, 2019 04:49
• PARLIAMENT\'S WORD (Michael Edwards) So everyone has become a politically outspoken know it all at a time when...
  September 1st, 2019 04:45
• She is....... (Goldfinch60) Life is beautiful, life is cruel. You know you are on a journey to...
  September 1st, 2019 04:43
• PRAYER CHANGES EVERYTHING ~ A & B ~ A HYMN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Prayer is the fix for those in the belief of prayer. Some religions which...
  September 1st, 2019 04:39
• Through These Eyes (MrNobody40) The seer in you reaching out to the future and maybe realising what you...
  September 1st, 2019 04:30
• Humour and Age (Nafis Light) Humour makes the world go around with the proviso that you can laugh at...
  September 1st, 2019 04:28
• I (Poetic Dan) This reads like you are in a state of flux Dan. The answers are there but...
  August 31st, 2019 07:48
• HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT I 🧡 YOU ? A 🧡 B 💙 A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Get a room!
  August 31st, 2019 07:43
• Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60) He was just drumming up a news story for clark kent to publish in the...
  August 31st, 2019 07:39
• UNDEMOCRATIC DEMOCRACY (Michael Edwards) I totally agree with each point you have made. I hope that boris gets the...
  August 31st, 2019 07:36
• This Is My Heart And This Is How It Reads. (Kevin browne) A day in the life of... a man of many days and emotions.... of love, lust...
  August 30th, 2019 15:11
• My man (Poetic Dan) Teen years can be difficult and trying for him and you. Stay close, teens...
  August 30th, 2019 04:42
• CHICKEN TONIGHT ! 🧡 BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 A CULLINARY SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Yes i agree, definitely improved by a sauce... im using korma at the...
  August 30th, 2019 04:39
• One moment at a time (Alta H Mabin) Day by day, inch by inch, self returns with colours after the blackout of...
  August 30th, 2019 03:15
• Journey Concluded. (Fay Slimm.) Aha, the ways and wiles of the growing lady. Heartbreak shrugged off and...
  August 30th, 2019 03:07
• Candle or Mirror. (Goldfinch60) When the light enters you, i believe it shines from you upon others. Many...
  August 30th, 2019 02:59
• In Front of The Whole World (Nafis Light) Sadly disunity also keeps the world rotating Joker. Along with murder,...
  August 29th, 2019 16:25
• Inside my soul (Alta H Mabin) Drenched in the melancholy of missing. Beautifully and skillfully...
  August 29th, 2019 16:20
• Imagine (Sylviasearcher) At 15 i left home. There was much imagining and scant success but the will...
  August 29th, 2019 16:14
• Bittersweet (Hidden) Bitter sweet like a gooseberry.
  August 29th, 2019 16:08
• I am found (Poetic Dan) A lyric from that old Beatles song comes to mind Dan. \"Nothing you can do...
  August 29th, 2019 12:04
• The Journey Continued. (Fay Slimm.) So glad you spelled \'wily\' correctly here. In the words of Joni...
  August 29th, 2019 11:57
• EXCELLENCE GOOD ? 🧡 BRIAN 🧡 AN ACROSTIC SONNET 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) I agree. Though in music most of use achieve enjoyment and satisfaction...
  August 29th, 2019 11:50
• I Knew I was Right! (Goldfinch60) I haven\'t had a glass of red (my fav is cabernet sauvignon) since my...
  August 29th, 2019 11:43
• Bedroom Walls & Borrowers (Neville) In my trade i have lifted many a floorboard Put my hand into dark unknown...
  August 29th, 2019 11:39
• Seasons Change (Christina8) I love springtime for it\'s verdant greens but autumn reigns in the golden...
  August 28th, 2019 13:37
• Nightmare Next Door (Meg) That\'s life! Most people seem to find it easier to \'cold shoulder\' than...
  August 28th, 2019 09:34
• The Journey. (Fay Slimm.) One of the best parts of being in this MPS group is the pleasure of seeing...
  August 28th, 2019 05:12
• ENTHUSIASM IN JOB 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 AN ACROSTIC SUPASONNET 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) I share your enthusiasm for work. I am self employed so i guess enthusiasm...
  August 28th, 2019 02:29
• Trapped (Neville) Ouch! It is truly tragic to hear of young people self harming for whatever...
  August 28th, 2019 02:23
• Crossing Out. (Goldfinch60) Ha, do you use a quill when writing too? I\'m laughing at your description...
  August 28th, 2019 02:18
• 37 weeks and I love her to bits (Poetic Dan) A privilege to read your personal promise of love and \'good behaviour\'...
  August 28th, 2019 02:10
• Suchness. (Fay Slimm.) I so agree with your sentiment. Where does it come from, this mental...
  August 27th, 2019 18:20
• OPTIMISTS 💙 BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC IN C MAJOR ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Always been a glass half full man.
  August 27th, 2019 06:47
• Farmer Dan (Poetic Dan) Kids will be kids.
  August 27th, 2019 06:45
• New Life. (Goldfinch60) That unconditional love for our offspring is a wonderful thing. I know the...
  August 27th, 2019 01:04
• Juxtaposition (Meg) No, don\'t go back. There\'s a new light in your soul which will not allow...
  August 26th, 2019 05:47
• Sweet Brush Strokes (Nafis Light) Painting a picture of life. Many colours applied timely and with
  August 26th, 2019 05:45
• Alltogetherness. (Fay Slimm.) I believe that as we age we begin to understand love and self love. With...
  August 26th, 2019 05:43
• COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Yep I couldn\'t agree more. The sentiments of this piece are in my very...
  August 26th, 2019 05:37
• Always there (Poetic Dan) Ah, now this is Dan at his most poetic and meaningful. An oasis of great...
  August 26th, 2019 05:35
• Mistakes. (Goldfinch60) So very true of course. And one becomes more prepared to accept the risks...
  August 26th, 2019 05:31
• The Reflection (Suresh) Self knowledge - worth waiting for - is also the path to true...
  August 26th, 2019 05:28
• Train Ride For Kids...So What? (Nafis Light) The child in us all needs entertaining.
  August 25th, 2019 15:06
• It Comes (PoeticBiscuit) A fight is only worth fighting if it frightens you. Anything else is...
  August 25th, 2019 15:05
• Nocturnal hour (Poetic Dan) \'Giving the gifts we never had\' Those gifts were growing inside...
  August 25th, 2019 14:02
• Nocturnal hour (Poetic Dan) \'Giving the gifts we never had\' Those gifts were growing inside...
  August 25th, 2019 12:03
• OUT OF THE IVORY PALACES ~ SONG FOR SUNDAY (ANGELA & BRIAN) Whats not to love about a man of love.
  August 25th, 2019 04:04
• Steadfast. (Goldfinch60) Would that we all could feel so respectful and loving toward our parents.
  August 25th, 2019 02:53
• Love and Warm Toast (Neville) A toast in a country bar always takes me back. Seldom does the landlord...
  August 25th, 2019 02:52
• HOMESICK ON HOLIDAY ? ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A BALLAD (ANGELA & BRIAN) TBH i never ever had that desire to travel abroad. I went to cyprus once...
  August 23rd, 2019 12:58
• DROLL COUPLETS (8) (Michael Edwards) Reminded me of that farsical search for saddam\'s weapons of mass...
  August 23rd, 2019 04:19
• My Chest it Flutters (Neville) I can\'t hold a candle to this kind of verse sir! Though i did have...
  August 23rd, 2019 03:25
• Outing. (Fay Slimm.) Gone! those youthful days of stay in bed and grow. Nowadays it\'s up at...
  August 23rd, 2019 03:18
• Prom of Peace. (Goldfinch60) If only music could be the weapon of mass peace and goodwill. History...
  August 23rd, 2019 02:48
• POLLUTION SOLUTION ? UR ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN INTERNAL RHYMING POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Great theme! Hopefully the more of us to post about environmental issues,...
  August 22nd, 2019 04:41
• Chafing. (Fay Slimm.) i\'m embarrassed to reveal i am still a virgin (sssshhh I haven\'t told...
  August 22nd, 2019 03:20
• Car Trouble? (Goldfinch60) Your car was merely rewarding you for the love, care and attention you...
  August 22nd, 2019 02:29
• Over The Hill (Neville) Indeed we should all acknowledge our allotted acre of desire and tend it...
  August 22nd, 2019 02:25
• TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Thats a clever piece today. May the sands of time run true for you two...
  August 21st, 2019 04:47
• Ours. (Fay Slimm.) Love in a none demanding, acceptance of mutual appreciation, comfort and...
  August 21st, 2019 04:43
• Gateway to Where? (Goldfinch60) There are some things which are closed to us in this earthly...
  August 21st, 2019 04:32
• The Appetite of Voyeurs (Neville) My dark sedan windows and mirrored lenses protect my innocence. I don\'t...
  August 21st, 2019 04:25
• DROLL COUPLETS (7) (Michael Edwards) A well stubbed toe serves the memory well. A momentary \'oh no\' before...
  August 21st, 2019 04:19
• 4 weeks today! (Poetic Dan) Hello Mrs Dan. What a wonderful bump you are carrying and you carry it so...
  August 20th, 2019 18:01
• My two best companion - Heart and Mind (Aman1586) One day both will relax alongside the heart and mind of another.
  August 20th, 2019 13:22
• Tribute to Skelly - Skeleton Clown (Nafis Light) You have played some weird looking games in your time LOL. Better than...
  August 20th, 2019 09:34
• Little John (Woodkatie28) I like the way you have romanced with this character bringing to him a...
  August 20th, 2019 09:07
• Tear drops 💦 (Chris Yellow) What a refreshing read. So few seem to realise how envigorating and...
  August 20th, 2019 09:02
• The World Around (Sindhuja) And some have no coin to contemplate. Your profile page shows you...
  August 20th, 2019 08:59
• SOCIALIST STATE ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Nice to see U.K. described as a socialist state for once. It really pee\'s...
  August 20th, 2019 05:09
• Trouble. (Fay Slimm.) Oh I get letters like these every other week! Away wench of loose ways...
  August 20th, 2019 05:02
• TKR (Michael Edwards) Welcome back hop-along-Edwards and thank you for this wonderful record of...
  August 20th, 2019 04:40
• I Told You So. (Goldfinch60) Excellent poem for today. Thought provoking - what has to happen before...
  August 20th, 2019 04:30
• Fly Me in Circles (Neville) An intimate moment between lovers beautifully portrayed.
  August 20th, 2019 04:27
• Robin Hood (Woodkatie28) Shoiulda written home i guess.
  August 19th, 2019 14:53
• Thinking Of You (Christina8) That is passion. Everyone who has felt passion so strong within a love...
  August 19th, 2019 12:29
• I don\'t know (Aa Harvey) Well described \'high\' of love together with it\'s nagging fears of...
  August 19th, 2019 09:38
• WOODMAN SPARE THAT TREE ~ FOR ME ~ A BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) They used to fell oak trees to build warships... I even heard a story...
  August 19th, 2019 09:32
• Story of my life (Aman1586) Oh, and welcome to MPS by the way (I nearly forgot to say...
  August 19th, 2019 08:24
• Story of my life (Aman1586) Later i learned to thank them. Closing my mind to the bullying insults,...
  August 19th, 2019 08:19
• Tenderness Ticks. (Kevin browne) Your first verse is so strong it deserves a page alone. It contains so...
  August 19th, 2019 08:14
• I\'d Rather Be A Clown! (Nafis Light) The trouble with being a clown - and believe me i am writing this from...
  August 19th, 2019 07:59
• Such and When. (Fay Slimm.) I hear the strains of Cornishmen\'s voices raised in \'no hopers, jokers...
  August 19th, 2019 07:09
• How Did We Get This Far (Part 6) (ForeverJesus7) Well written and excellent question raised. Have you considered that the...
  August 19th, 2019 06:46
• Wordiku Three. (Goldfinch60) Clever.
  August 19th, 2019 06:40
• From a Certain Distance (Neville) Ho ho ho, \"more tea vicar?\" Sometimes it\'s best to appreciate the...
  August 19th, 2019 06:37
• Just Do What You Do...Regularly (Nafis Light) Be yourself, no matter what they say. To thine own self be...
  August 18th, 2019 13:15
• Dancing Through the Moors (Woodkatie28) Fog clears and there is sunshine again warming one\'s enthusiasm..... ...
  August 18th, 2019 12:04