Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• ENTHUSIASM IN JOB 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 AN ACROSTIC SUPASONNET 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) I share your enthusiasm for work. I am self employed so i guess enthusiasm...
  August 28th, 2019 02:29
• Trapped (Neville) Ouch! It is truly tragic to hear of young people self harming for whatever...
  August 28th, 2019 02:23
• Crossing Out. (Goldfinch60) Ha, do you use a quill when writing too? I\'m laughing at your description...
  August 28th, 2019 02:18
• 37 weeks and I love her to bits (Poetic Dan) A privilege to read your personal promise of love and \'good behaviour\'...
  August 28th, 2019 02:10
• Suchness. (Fay Slimm.) I so agree with your sentiment. Where does it come from, this mental...
  August 27th, 2019 18:20
• OPTIMISTS 💙 BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC IN C MAJOR ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Always been a glass half full man.
  August 27th, 2019 06:47
• Farmer Dan (Poetic Dan) Kids will be kids.
  August 27th, 2019 06:45
• New Life. (Goldfinch60) That unconditional love for our offspring is a wonderful thing. I know the...
  August 27th, 2019 01:04
• Juxtaposition (Meg) No, don\'t go back. There\'s a new light in your soul which will not allow...
  August 26th, 2019 05:47
• Sweet Brush Strokes (Nafis Light) Painting a picture of life. Many colours applied timely and with
  August 26th, 2019 05:45
• Alltogetherness. (Fay Slimm.) I believe that as we age we begin to understand love and self love. With...
  August 26th, 2019 05:43
• COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Yep I couldn\'t agree more. The sentiments of this piece are in my very...
  August 26th, 2019 05:37
• Always there (Poetic Dan) Ah, now this is Dan at his most poetic and meaningful. An oasis of great...
  August 26th, 2019 05:35
• Mistakes. (Goldfinch60) So very true of course. And one becomes more prepared to accept the risks...
  August 26th, 2019 05:31
• The Reflection (Suresh) Self knowledge - worth waiting for - is also the path to true...
  August 26th, 2019 05:28
• Train Ride For Kids...So What? (Nafis Light) The child in us all needs entertaining.
  August 25th, 2019 15:06
• It Comes (PoeticBiscuit) A fight is only worth fighting if it frightens you. Anything else is...
  August 25th, 2019 15:05
• Nocturnal hour (Poetic Dan) \'Giving the gifts we never had\' Those gifts were growing inside...
  August 25th, 2019 14:02
• Nocturnal hour (Poetic Dan) \'Giving the gifts we never had\' Those gifts were growing inside...
  August 25th, 2019 12:03
• OUT OF THE IVORY PALACES ~ SONG FOR SUNDAY (ANGELA & BRIAN) Whats not to love about a man of love.
  August 25th, 2019 04:04
• Steadfast. (Goldfinch60) Would that we all could feel so respectful and loving toward our parents.
  August 25th, 2019 02:53
• Love and Warm Toast (Neville) A toast in a country bar always takes me back. Seldom does the landlord...
  August 25th, 2019 02:52
• HOMESICK ON HOLIDAY ? ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A BALLAD (ANGELA & BRIAN) TBH i never ever had that desire to travel abroad. I went to cyprus once...
  August 23rd, 2019 12:58
• DROLL COUPLETS (8) (Michael Edwards) Reminded me of that farsical search for saddam\'s weapons of mass...
  August 23rd, 2019 04:19
• My Chest it Flutters (Neville) I can\'t hold a candle to this kind of verse sir! Though i did have...
  August 23rd, 2019 03:25
• Outing. (Fay Slimm.) Gone! those youthful days of stay in bed and grow. Nowadays it\'s up at...
  August 23rd, 2019 03:18
• Prom of Peace. (Goldfinch60) If only music could be the weapon of mass peace and goodwill. History...
  August 23rd, 2019 02:48
• POLLUTION SOLUTION ? UR ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN INTERNAL RHYMING POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Great theme! Hopefully the more of us to post about environmental issues,...
  August 22nd, 2019 04:41
• Chafing. (Fay Slimm.) i\'m embarrassed to reveal i am still a virgin (sssshhh I haven\'t told...
  August 22nd, 2019 03:20
• Car Trouble? (Goldfinch60) Your car was merely rewarding you for the love, care and attention you...
  August 22nd, 2019 02:29
• Over The Hill (Neville) Indeed we should all acknowledge our allotted acre of desire and tend it...
  August 22nd, 2019 02:25
• TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Thats a clever piece today. May the sands of time run true for you two...
  August 21st, 2019 04:47
• Ours. (Fay Slimm.) Love in a none demanding, acceptance of mutual appreciation, comfort and...
  August 21st, 2019 04:43
• Gateway to Where? (Goldfinch60) There are some things which are closed to us in this earthly...
  August 21st, 2019 04:32
• The Appetite of Voyeurs (Neville) My dark sedan windows and mirrored lenses protect my innocence. I don\'t...
  August 21st, 2019 04:25
• DROLL COUPLETS (7) (Michael Edwards) A well stubbed toe serves the memory well. A momentary \'oh no\' before...
  August 21st, 2019 04:19
• 4 weeks today! (Poetic Dan) Hello Mrs Dan. What a wonderful bump you are carrying and you carry it so...
  August 20th, 2019 18:01
• My two best companion - Heart and Mind (Aman1586) One day both will relax alongside the heart and mind of another.
  August 20th, 2019 13:22
• Tribute to Skelly - Skeleton Clown (Nafis Light) You have played some weird looking games in your time LOL. Better than...
  August 20th, 2019 09:34
• Little John (Woodkatie28) I like the way you have romanced with this character bringing to him a...
  August 20th, 2019 09:07
• Tear drops 💦 (Chris Yellow) What a refreshing read. So few seem to realise how envigorating and...
  August 20th, 2019 09:02
• The World Around (Sindhuja) And some have no coin to contemplate. Your profile page shows you...
  August 20th, 2019 08:59
• SOCIALIST STATE ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Nice to see U.K. described as a socialist state for once. It really pee\'s...
  August 20th, 2019 05:09
• Trouble. (Fay Slimm.) Oh I get letters like these every other week! Away wench of loose ways...
  August 20th, 2019 05:02
• TKR (Michael Edwards) Welcome back hop-along-Edwards and thank you for this wonderful record of...
  August 20th, 2019 04:40
• I Told You So. (Goldfinch60) Excellent poem for today. Thought provoking - what has to happen before...
  August 20th, 2019 04:30
• Fly Me in Circles (Neville) An intimate moment between lovers beautifully portrayed.
  August 20th, 2019 04:27
• Robin Hood (Woodkatie28) Shoiulda written home i guess.
  August 19th, 2019 14:53
• Thinking Of You (Christina8) That is passion. Everyone who has felt passion so strong within a love...
  August 19th, 2019 12:29
• I don\'t know (Aa Harvey) Well described \'high\' of love together with it\'s nagging fears of...
  August 19th, 2019 09:38
• WOODMAN SPARE THAT TREE ~ FOR ME ~ A BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) They used to fell oak trees to build warships... I even heard a story...
  August 19th, 2019 09:32
• Story of my life (Aman1586) Oh, and welcome to MPS by the way (I nearly forgot to say...
  August 19th, 2019 08:24
• Story of my life (Aman1586) Later i learned to thank them. Closing my mind to the bullying insults,...
  August 19th, 2019 08:19
• Tenderness Ticks. (Kevin browne) Your first verse is so strong it deserves a page alone. It contains so...
  August 19th, 2019 08:14
• I\'d Rather Be A Clown! (Nafis Light) The trouble with being a clown - and believe me i am writing this from...
  August 19th, 2019 07:59
• Such and When. (Fay Slimm.) I hear the strains of Cornishmen\'s voices raised in \'no hopers, jokers...
  August 19th, 2019 07:09
• How Did We Get This Far (Part 6) (ForeverJesus7) Well written and excellent question raised. Have you considered that the...
  August 19th, 2019 06:46
• Wordiku Three. (Goldfinch60) Clever.
  August 19th, 2019 06:40
• From a Certain Distance (Neville) Ho ho ho, \"more tea vicar?\" Sometimes it\'s best to appreciate the...
  August 19th, 2019 06:37
• Just Do What You Do...Regularly (Nafis Light) Be yourself, no matter what they say. To thine own self be...
  August 18th, 2019 13:15
• Dancing Through the Moors (Woodkatie28) Fog clears and there is sunshine again warming one\'s enthusiasm..... ...
  August 18th, 2019 12:04
• Miracles (Andrew Charles Forrest) Well we sure need miracles don\'t we. I\'m thinking about what we are...
  August 18th, 2019 11:47
• THE GOODNESS OF OUR GOD ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Ouch! at using the possessive term \'our\' god. God is god period and...
  August 18th, 2019 09:14
• Tanka - Tanka (Neville) Semi civilised people being judged by western standards? Does making...
  August 18th, 2019 09:04
• Towards the Top. (Goldfinch60) And a prize awarded before the climb to the summit is worn well by you sir...
  August 18th, 2019 08:55
• Fire Fly (PoeticBiscuit) That night will live on for you Biscuit. One of the added bonus\' of being...
  August 18th, 2019 08:51
• It\'s be fun but she had to go (Poetic Dan) Ahh yes that first car and learning how to repair it. All those...
  August 17th, 2019 14:00
• It\'s be fun but she had to go (Poetic Dan) Ahh yes that first car and learning how to repair it. All those...
  August 17th, 2019 12:36
• Dirty Margarita (Neville) For she is a beguiling seducer adorned in her finery. No visible promise...
  August 17th, 2019 12:33
• Free At Last (PoeticBiscuit) That\'s it mate, cast her out of your system.
  August 17th, 2019 00:05
• Nocturnal Love (Christina8) Steamy stuff Christina. Love is love and the moon sees all.
  August 16th, 2019 23:58
• Those Who Live With No Light (ForeverJesus7) The gospel of Thomas, The gospel of Philip, The gospel of Truth, all...
  August 16th, 2019 23:56
• Love Fulfill (Sylviasearcher) A beautiful prayer for love\'s passion. Complete and fulfilling ecstacy.
  August 16th, 2019 19:46
• SERENITY (Laura🌻) Serenity.... life\'s morphine.
  August 16th, 2019 19:33
• Untitled - XXIII (Suresh) My mother (born 1909) used to say \"If wishes were horses, then beggars...
  August 16th, 2019 19:31
• Perfectly imperfect (Poetic Dan) Oh i\'m far to old to remember anything like that Dan. My childhood...
  August 16th, 2019 13:29
• Flight. (Fay Slimm.) So it ever was. To mind came the wonderful BBC Serengeti program where...
  August 16th, 2019 13:25
• Each Day. (Goldfinch60) So much empathy for you my friend. Some wonderful words are written and...
  August 16th, 2019 13:13
• Through a Tangle of Shadows (Neville) So today i learn a new put-down... \"kiss my bruise punk\"
  August 16th, 2019 12:38
• Trapped Dove (PoeticBiscuit) So very true. Caging a beautiful thing/lover stops it being what it was....
  August 16th, 2019 12:33
• Sensuality. (Fay Slimm.) and I thought I was going to get to watch a video of her..... ...
  August 16th, 2019 12:29
• Not My Day. (Goldfinch60) Couple of weeks back i set off early to ensure i would find good parking...
  August 16th, 2019 12:23
• War a Senryu (Neville) Both of which are not dollar earners for the power crazed. Sadly how...
  August 16th, 2019 12:17
• A NEW KNEE (Michael Edwards) I want one! (well two really). Wishing you a speedy recovery from this...
  August 16th, 2019 12:12
• Victim (PoeticBiscuit) Amazing spunk in this! Really can relate to this stand. Having read...
  August 16th, 2019 12:10
• Perhaps, there\'s a reason (Andrew Charles Forrest) Most definitely i have ancients in me. You can tell from how i drag my...
  August 13th, 2019 04:51
• See beyond & travel on (Poetic Dan) Just keep moving forwards mate. With those two sprouts along there will be...
  August 13th, 2019 04:48
• Secret. (Fay Slimm.) A rose? Or a lady blossoming mature? I\'m preferring to romance the...
  August 13th, 2019 04:41
• Time? What Time? (Goldfinch60) Lucky you! You wouldn\'t have it any other way.
  August 13th, 2019 04:36
• DROLL COUPLETS (5) (Michael Edwards) But so useful for dislodging pieces of nut stuck between the molars.
  August 13th, 2019 04:34
• Dear Cancer (Hidden) I\'m suffering the effects of chemotherapy at the moment and being very...
  August 12th, 2019 12:21
• DINER (Thomas J. Dooley) Good entertaining write. Why don\'t you read other peoples work on here -...
  August 12th, 2019 11:37
• DINER (Thomas J. Dooley) Good entertaining write. Why don\'t you read other peoples work on here -...
  August 12th, 2019 11:33
• Frustrated Love (V) There is evil in so many places. Engendered by a lack of goodwill to...
  August 12th, 2019 10:09
• Just Share Something Positive (Nafis Light) Joker, If you read some of the many poems on here which tell of inner...
  August 12th, 2019 08:26
• Gangster of love! (Poetic Dan) So much joy i see and read in you and your sprouts. Just think of how it...
  August 12th, 2019 05:41
• Only So Much (ForeverJesus7) Goodness me. There you go again talking FEAR of christ. A man made fear by...
  August 12th, 2019 02:12
• Singing to the Moon (Tom Wood) Hold on, that big ole moon is still there patiently coming your way again.
  August 12th, 2019 02:08
• Still lost (Aa Harvey) Vividly sad lament to past love. Very well written i feel, revealing the...
  August 12th, 2019 02:06
• Underprized.. (Fay Slimm.) We begin to understand love as a romantic notion i think. But as we mature...
  August 12th, 2019 01:00