Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Just a man in natures plan (Poetic Dan)
You\'re definitely a bloke Dan, I\'ve seen your picture. Don\'t knock it...
September 6th, 2019 03:38 - Autumn Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Great choice of music to associate with the sun arising.
Darker days...
September 6th, 2019 02:06 - DROLL COUPLETS (14) (Michael Edwards)
Made me larff! How wise you are not to stand in her way. Does she take...
September 6th, 2019 02:02 - Affinity. (Fay Slimm.)
You definitely are at one with nature \'old bean\'. You\'ve taken me on a...
September 6th, 2019 01:59 - You (Clara)
It is time to realise the spirit you seek is within you.
Glory in it\'s...
September 6th, 2019 01:55 - Infinity (Neville)
Outstanding tribute to the fallen and the futility of warfare.
I have...
September 6th, 2019 01:51 - Suave. (Fay Slimm.)
Clothed in a gold leaf of majestic royal foliage I would proudly parade...
September 5th, 2019 02:57 - MEMORIES 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Sincerely I hope your love continues through so that it can be seen in the...
September 5th, 2019 02:48 - My hero (Poetic Dan)
Happy birthday young \'un. I repeat the words of Goldfinch for there are...
September 5th, 2019 02:28 - State of Death. (Goldfinch60)
Death brings forth a sadness in those who new the newly passed with...
September 5th, 2019 02:25 - Somewhere Behind These Eyes (Neville)
Reads like wishful thinking. The desire to forget that which haunts ones...
September 5th, 2019 02:18 - What if LOVE was enough? (Bragee)
What if love were the prime emotion in mankind... love for mankind would...
September 4th, 2019 12:33 - The Sum of our parts/ Gestalt’s antidote (Sylviasearcher)
In all we do, in all our vanity, every strain and effort to achieve, to...
September 4th, 2019 11:33 - Euphoria (Vanessa wallace)
Beautiful. Who could ask for more. Let it be and let it last.
September 4th, 2019 11:28 - Epitaph (John McChord)
Thoughts of living a noble and loving life surely should proceed any death...
September 4th, 2019 11:24 - I Held Your Hand (G84)
I am such an advocate of pieces recounting these times....
Forever...
September 4th, 2019 11:11 - I don’t want to read between lines anymore (AJ)
This is so similar to my thoughts of the afterlife. A place of...
September 4th, 2019 11:06 - Just let me live (A passing lyric)
People can be tiresome, too predictable and downright disappointing. I\'m...
September 4th, 2019 11:02 - Imperfection (Vanessa wallace)
I like this a lot. I understand completely but .... BIG but, ... ...
September 4th, 2019 10:59 - Thoughts+Feelings=Never healing (812Uknow)
A little song comes to mind \"Always look on the bright side of...
September 4th, 2019 06:40 - Masks (Meg)
Brought a smile to my face with the way you have phrased this very...
September 4th, 2019 06:36 - Our Crescendo (Clara)
Beautifully expressed \'the dance of love\'.
Wonderfully crafted...
September 4th, 2019 05:46 - Rain of Forgiveness (Nafis Light)
I read the refreshing renewal rain can bring to our spirit. That dash from...
September 4th, 2019 05:41 - Ink-Bitten. (Fay Slimm.)
Yeay dear Charlotte whence i didst first sight ye \'pon that sweet day,...
September 4th, 2019 05:35 - Morphing. (Fay Slimm.)
She stood on the bridge at midnight
Looking prim and somewhat dour
She...
September 4th, 2019 02:13 - Flipping Gods (Poetic Dan)
The light of god is within you. Those who search will find it.
Maybe...
September 4th, 2019 01:59 - SUMMER TO AUTUMN ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ouch! talking about cold days of year when i need what is left of the...
September 4th, 2019 01:51 - I Can Listen. (Goldfinch60)
As we should all listen to those close confidences and worries of our...
September 4th, 2019 01:46 - A Ladies Man (Neville)
Singleton lifestyle is freedom to do exactly as u like..... and retain...
September 4th, 2019 01:37 - DROLL COUPLETS (12) (Michael Edwards)
You\'re complaining??? somebody\'s nicked my RAM!
September 4th, 2019 01:34 - ORCHIDEE*S DEPUTY DAWG FIDO ~ A 4 4 6 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
LOL
When will somebody teach a dawg to close a door behind itself..... ...
September 3rd, 2019 03:50 - DROLL COUPLETS (11) (Michael Edwards)
I\'m regularly impressed by my own stupidity.... i don\'t really know...
September 3rd, 2019 03:47 - To Church. (Goldfinch60)
Aha! The same principles that keep me shopping at tescos.
(Yes i often...
September 3rd, 2019 02:36 - Goodbye fleeting river (Chris Yellow)
Dismay haunts your poem but resolves within your strength to take...
September 2nd, 2019 05:34 - The pretensions of a poet misunderstood (Sylviasearcher)
I feel there is someone being undervalued and ignored crying out from your...
September 2nd, 2019 05:28 - Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.)
Yours is the dawn Fay. Time after time you give us another facet of its...
September 2nd, 2019 05:24 - Two Friends. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely piece Goldfinch. Reminded me how lucky i am to get along so well...
September 2nd, 2019 05:13 - Your Tresses Of Night Shade (Satishverma)
Beautiful words from you. We shall all meet with the truth one day and...
September 2nd, 2019 00:39 - DROLL COUPLETS (10) (Michael Edwards)
Been there, done that, got a black eye to prove it!
The art of...
September 2nd, 2019 00:36 - Scattered shiny stars (Alta H Mabin)
Sadly we can grow weary of looking and being attracted to imperfect stars....
September 2nd, 2019 00:02 - Forever (Christina8)
I guess we go the extra mile because that love puts us on the biggest...
September 1st, 2019 16:19 - Forever (Christina8)
I guess we go the extra mile because that love puts us on the biggest...
September 1st, 2019 14:47 - When (Poetboy123)
Sincere and moving writing from you. I share your emotion here.
shall...
September 1st, 2019 11:34 - Septembers first tear (Poetic Dan)
\"In the eyes of my family i am all i need to be\" .... ...
September 1st, 2019 11:20 - God\'s Chosen (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Have you tried escaping rhyme? Once you do i think you may find yourself a...
September 1st, 2019 09:25 - Nature...Friend (Nafis Light)
Just enter a woodland and quietly hug a tree. Put your arms around the...
September 1st, 2019 05:44 - To Be in Love. (Kevin browne)
This is really you at your best Kevin. The wonder of falling in love is...
September 1st, 2019 05:41 - a poison paradise (Lucifer very very very 1st)
Once again none of your words are from the \'middle ages\'
September 1st, 2019 05:35 - The Walking Dead (Vvnrose)
A nice poem about post brexit U.K.?
September 1st, 2019 05:32 - I Reach For The Knife (Clara)
Just a thought comes to mind. A drawer which only contains a picture of...
September 1st, 2019 05:30 - The Girl Before (Clara)
Because \"Life is what happens to you when you are busy doing something...
September 1st, 2019 04:49 - PARLIAMENT\'S WORD (Michael Edwards)
So everyone has become a politically outspoken know it all at a time when...
September 1st, 2019 04:45 - She is....... (Goldfinch60)
Life is beautiful, life is cruel. You know you are on a journey to...
September 1st, 2019 04:43 - PRAYER CHANGES EVERYTHING ~ A & B ~ A HYMN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Prayer is the fix for those in the belief of prayer. Some religions which...
September 1st, 2019 04:39 - Through These Eyes (MrNobody40)
The seer in you reaching out to the future and maybe realising what you...
September 1st, 2019 04:30 - Humour and Age (Nafis Light)
Humour makes the world go around with the proviso that you can laugh at...
September 1st, 2019 04:28 - I (Poetic Dan)
This reads like you are in a state of flux Dan. The answers are there but...
August 31st, 2019 07:48 - HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT I 🧡 YOU ? A 🧡 B 💙 A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Get a room!
August 31st, 2019 07:43 - Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
He was just drumming up a news story for clark kent to publish in the...
August 31st, 2019 07:39 - UNDEMOCRATIC DEMOCRACY (Michael Edwards)
I totally agree with each point you have made.
I hope that boris gets the...
August 31st, 2019 07:36 - This Is My Heart And This Is How It Reads. (Kevin browne)
A day in the life of... a man of many days and emotions.... of love, lust...
August 30th, 2019 15:11 - My man (Poetic Dan)
Teen years can be difficult and trying for him and you. Stay close, teens...
August 30th, 2019 04:42 - CHICKEN TONIGHT ! 🧡 BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 A CULLINARY SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes i agree, definitely improved by a sauce... im using korma at the...
August 30th, 2019 04:39 - One moment at a time (Alta H Mabin)
Day by day, inch by inch, self returns with colours after the blackout of...
August 30th, 2019 03:15 - Journey Concluded. (Fay Slimm.)
Aha, the ways and wiles of the growing lady. Heartbreak shrugged off and...
August 30th, 2019 03:07 - Candle or Mirror. (Goldfinch60)
When the light enters you, i believe it shines from you upon others. Many...
August 30th, 2019 02:59 - In Front of The Whole World (Nafis Light)
Sadly disunity also keeps the world rotating Joker. Along with murder,...
August 29th, 2019 16:25 - Inside my soul (Alta H Mabin)
Drenched in the melancholy of missing.
Beautifully and skillfully...
August 29th, 2019 16:20 - Imagine (Sylviasearcher)
At 15 i left home. There was much imagining and scant success but the will...
August 29th, 2019 16:14 - Bittersweet (Hidden)
Bitter sweet like a gooseberry.
August 29th, 2019 16:08 - I am found (Poetic Dan)
A lyric from that old Beatles song comes to mind Dan. \"Nothing you can do...
August 29th, 2019 12:04 - The Journey Continued. (Fay Slimm.)
So glad you spelled \'wily\' correctly here.
In the words of Joni...
August 29th, 2019 11:57 - EXCELLENCE GOOD ? 🧡 BRIAN 🧡 AN ACROSTIC SONNET 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I agree. Though in music most of use achieve enjoyment and satisfaction...
August 29th, 2019 11:50 - I Knew I was Right! (Goldfinch60)
I haven\'t had a glass of red (my fav is cabernet sauvignon) since my...
August 29th, 2019 11:43 - Bedroom Walls & Borrowers (Neville)
In my trade i have lifted many a floorboard Put my hand into dark unknown...
August 29th, 2019 11:39 - Seasons Change (Christina8)
I love springtime for it\'s verdant greens but autumn reigns in the golden...
August 28th, 2019 13:37 - Nightmare Next Door (Meg)
That\'s life! Most people seem to find it easier to \'cold shoulder\' than...
August 28th, 2019 09:34 - The Journey. (Fay Slimm.)
One of the best parts of being in this MPS group is the pleasure of seeing...
August 28th, 2019 05:12 - ENTHUSIASM IN JOB 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 AN ACROSTIC SUPASONNET 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I share your enthusiasm for work. I am self employed so i guess enthusiasm...
August 28th, 2019 02:29 - Trapped (Neville)
Ouch! It is truly tragic to hear of young people self harming for whatever...
August 28th, 2019 02:23 - Crossing Out. (Goldfinch60)
Ha, do you use a quill when writing too? I\'m laughing at your description...
August 28th, 2019 02:18 - 37 weeks and I love her to bits (Poetic Dan)
A privilege to read your personal promise of love and \'good behaviour\'...
August 28th, 2019 02:10 - Suchness. (Fay Slimm.)
I so agree with your sentiment. Where does it come from, this mental...
August 27th, 2019 18:20 - OPTIMISTS 💙 BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC IN C MAJOR ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Always been a glass half full man.
August 27th, 2019 06:47 - Farmer Dan (Poetic Dan)
Kids will be kids.
August 27th, 2019 06:45 - New Life. (Goldfinch60)
That unconditional love for our offspring is a wonderful thing. I know the...
August 27th, 2019 01:04 - Juxtaposition (Meg)
No, don\'t go back. There\'s a new light in your soul which will not allow...
August 26th, 2019 05:47 - Sweet Brush Strokes (Nafis Light)
Painting a picture of life. Many colours applied timely and with
August 26th, 2019 05:45 - Alltogetherness. (Fay Slimm.)
I believe that as we age we begin to understand love and self love. With...
August 26th, 2019 05:43 - COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yep I couldn\'t agree more. The sentiments of this piece are in my very...
August 26th, 2019 05:37 - Always there (Poetic Dan)
Ah, now this is Dan at his most poetic and meaningful.
An oasis of great...
August 26th, 2019 05:35 - Mistakes. (Goldfinch60)
So very true of course. And one becomes more prepared to accept the risks...
August 26th, 2019 05:31 - The Reflection (Suresh)
Self knowledge - worth waiting for - is also the path to true...
August 26th, 2019 05:28 - Train Ride For Kids...So What? (Nafis Light)
The child in us all needs entertaining.
August 25th, 2019 15:06 - It Comes (PoeticBiscuit)
A fight is only worth fighting if it frightens you. Anything else is...
August 25th, 2019 15:05 - Nocturnal hour (Poetic Dan)
\'Giving the gifts we never had\'
Those gifts were growing inside...
August 25th, 2019 14:02 - Nocturnal hour (Poetic Dan)
\'Giving the gifts we never had\'
Those gifts were growing inside...
August 25th, 2019 12:03 - OUT OF THE IVORY PALACES ~ SONG FOR SUNDAY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Whats not to love about a man of love.
August 25th, 2019 04:04 - Steadfast. (Goldfinch60)
Would that we all could feel so respectful and loving toward our parents.
August 25th, 2019 02:53 - Love and Warm Toast (Neville)
A toast in a country bar always takes me back.
Seldom does the landlord...
August 25th, 2019 02:52
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