Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Foremost. (Fay Slimm.)
You have encapsulated many of love\'s wonders here but i feel there\'s one...
December 9th, 2019 18:31 - Don\'t be long (Poetic Dan)
My thoughts are with you and yours Dan. Wishing you all a positive...
December 9th, 2019 18:27 - UNDIES (3) (Michael Edwards)
Whether ironed or wrinkly
let me state quite distinctly
they should...
December 6th, 2019 08:56 - Words on the Page. (Goldfinch60)
It has been written many times that writing poetry is a kind of self...
December 6th, 2019 08:53 - Catchtrap. (Fay Slimm.)
The hairs on the back of my neck stood on end reading this. What is it...
December 5th, 2019 04:43 - Doctor Respect. (Goldfinch60)
You are a very strong, positive and outwardly brave man Goldfinch. Life...
December 5th, 2019 04:11 - When life was really child\'s play (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Reads like happy memories of childhood. Sadly several poets on MPS were...
December 4th, 2019 10:49 - Tortured Mind (Poetic Dan)
There will always be scar tissue.
Not every day will you see the sun...
December 4th, 2019 04:17 - Stunning Unique Patterns. (Goldfinch60)
Catch it\'s beauty while you can.
December 4th, 2019 02:40 - UNDIES (2) (Michael Edwards)
\'after their sex he felt a little uncertain,
no tissues, so he wiped it...
December 4th, 2019 02:30 - War is Not for Lovers (Neville)
Brilliant evocative writing. Hard hitting reality. Each of the thousands...
November 9th, 2019 15:45 - She is Not There. (Goldfinch60)
This really reached deep into me and i feel for your loss.
Only your...
November 5th, 2019 05:06 - Four Letter Words (Neville)
Having proved my fecundity i no longer have much use for the word unless...
October 30th, 2019 16:09 - Adversity Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Cleverly pieced Acrostic Goldfinch.
October 30th, 2019 04:00 - Soul-beauty. (Fay Slimm.)
Where did you get that X-ray picture of my 2nd left top molar?
I read...
October 30th, 2019 03:49 - 3 for 1 because I\'ll never be done (Poetic Dan)
I agree with Goldfinch.
October 30th, 2019 03:44 - Thank God For Poetry (ForeverJesus7)
How come i write poetry and publish on here more often than you do and...
October 29th, 2019 19:52 - Tin Whistle Player. (Goldfinch60)
Very relaxing peaceful music.
I can picture you and the scenes you...
October 29th, 2019 19:46 - Open up & flex (Poetic Dan)
I guess that when you find yourself laughing at yourself and your...
October 29th, 2019 19:40 - Making Richer. (Fay Slimm.)
I doubt there is a view of anything, anywhere which seen through your...
October 29th, 2019 19:32 - Good and Proper (Neville)
Hmmm maybe she loved him more than he knew..... and saved him from...
October 28th, 2019 10:18 - F*** you universe, I\'ll rhyme another day (Poetic Dan)
Thats life innit. I just tell myself im big enough and ugly enought to...
October 28th, 2019 10:14 - In Transit. (Fay Slimm.)
Aaaaaah, even from the tiniest of natures gems she creates yet another...
October 28th, 2019 10:12 - RANDOM THUNKS (4) (Michael Edwards)
He spat out his words quite bitterly
for each line he read he took...
October 28th, 2019 10:10 - Pedantry - Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
One you can\'t say about Goldie
is that he\'s grown old and turned...
October 28th, 2019 10:06 - Help for Friends. (Goldfinch60)
Please keep on being that friend. Chemo/radiotherapy drags on inside you...
October 26th, 2019 21:05 - Morecombe (Goldfinch60)
Magic is there for us always Goldfinch, for those of us who see magic that...
October 24th, 2019 18:36 - Autumn Into Winter. (Goldfinch60)
This piece is great and straight from your sincerely held faith. Very...
October 22nd, 2019 11:53 - BOLDNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much...
October 22nd, 2019 11:18 - BOLDNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much...
October 21st, 2019 19:42 - BOLDNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
These little beauties must have been able to sense that you are very much...
October 21st, 2019 19:18 - During This Month (ForeverJesus7)
Interesting rant, but far too repetitive. Have you considered editing down...
October 21st, 2019 19:14 - Nelson Went to Battle. (Goldfinch60)
First laugh of the day to Mr G Finch. nice one!
October 21st, 2019 01:52 - Imagining. (Goldfinch60)
I don\'t know if life turns out the way you describe, but no complaints so...
October 17th, 2019 04:47 - WINTER FOLLOWS (Michael Edwards)
Wonderful skyline picture ME.
Today brilliant sunshine wakes my autumn...
October 17th, 2019 04:44 - GOODBYE FOR NOW ! 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Fare well on your journey \'home\' and the rest of your lifes...
October 17th, 2019 04:40 - Breaking Bread (Neville)
A message of companionship offered to a traveller upon their own journey...
October 17th, 2019 04:35 - Reverse it (Poetic Dan)
This piece excells at what i like to call \"less is more\" poetry.
Short...
October 17th, 2019 04:30 - COMES AUTUMN. (Fay Slimm.)
What a beauty, and yes thank you for posting this gem again.
Goes into...
October 17th, 2019 04:26 - A Woodland Encounter (Neville)
Each woodland has a way Neville, but you must be open to letting a...
October 16th, 2019 14:53 - I\'ll die a happy Dan (part 1&2) (Poetic Dan)
Dan, don\'t ever worry about grammar or spelling.... cos fact is you are a...
October 16th, 2019 11:09 - DESTINY ? 🧡 ANGELA FOR BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great, now is the time when we can expect to see some REAL poetry from you...
October 16th, 2019 03:46 - End Of The Ever Afters... (Kevin browne)
Kevin i absolutely loved this one sir! It has so so many pearls within it...
October 15th, 2019 03:51 - A poet inspired a message to pass on (Poetic Dan)
Good to see you with ya tongue in cheek on MPS m8.
I get te feeling...
October 15th, 2019 03:45 - Her Love For Me. (Goldfinch60)
What a lovely smiling face.
I\'m lost for words and deeply moved by...
October 15th, 2019 03:40 - ‘One Touch Or Two’ (Thoughts In Time)
Hey.... who\'s counting..... tell me afterwards.
October 15th, 2019 03:36 - ALL GOOD THINGS (Michael Edwards)
Clever and surprisingly thought provoking piece today ME.
New ones will...
October 15th, 2019 03:35 - Sterilite Tubs and Reflections (Lonelyraccoon)
I disagree with your final line. You\'ve got a life, and a good head....
October 14th, 2019 16:26 - Morning brew and perfect moments with you (Alta H Mabin)
Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it...
October 14th, 2019 16:15 - Morning brew and perfect moments with you (Alta H Mabin)
Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it...
October 14th, 2019 12:49 - LOVE ME & BE MY WIFE 🧡 BRIAN 🧡 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thinking of you two. Hoping that you arrive on time, it\'s 10.27 a.m. GMT...
October 14th, 2019 04:30 - Captive. (Fay Slimm.)
How cruel and unthinking we are to cage the wild animals.
The epitome of...
October 14th, 2019 04:28 - I forgot (Poetic Dan)
Envy is according to christianity a sin. I envy you my friend for the love...
October 14th, 2019 04:22 - The Hastings Wake. (Goldfinch60)
Awww u make orchi sound like a killjoy.... i bet he\'s a real nice guy...
October 14th, 2019 04:18 - Two 575s (Michael Edwards)
We are all pissed off with Brit democracy at the mo..... wrote several...
October 14th, 2019 04:16 - Post-Delirium (RiverJordan)
Hmmm this is the 2nd piece of yours i have read and its much clearer than...
October 13th, 2019 14:47 - Post-Delirium (RiverJordan)
Hmmm this is the 2nd piece of yours i have read and its much clearer than...
October 13th, 2019 14:29 - It hurts as a human (FineB)
What an intriguing write about such negatives but somehow you maintain a...
October 13th, 2019 14:25 - Home (Clara)
What a lovely clear honest declaration of your feelings you give...
October 13th, 2019 14:18 - The \" LIGHT \" at the end of the dark tunnel (RiverJordan)
Your philosophy as outlined here in \'comment from author\' is commendable...
October 13th, 2019 14:10 - My love for you will never die (Alta H Mabin)
Firstly, an excuse, you\'ll never find me a fan of mixed arithmetic and...
October 13th, 2019 13:15 - A LORDS PRAYER IN MAORI 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 TRANSLATION (ANGELA & BRIAN)
One wonders whether Maori society has improved or benefitted from the...
October 13th, 2019 09:34 - Everything seemed fine (MrB)
Oh what it was to be young and learning about romantic love. Memories...
October 13th, 2019 08:45 - The seaside in the winter (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Much neglected and naturally beautiful. A time to appreciate its beauty in...
October 13th, 2019 08:39 - THE LAST THING (575) (Michael Edwards)
Finally - give me a big cardboard box, drop me into it, bury it deep and...
October 13th, 2019 07:19 - ‘Smile A While’ (Thoughts In Time)
It simply adds a grace
yes, to any face
if we smile
if just for a...
October 13th, 2019 07:16 - Croquet Prize. (Goldfinch60)
Admiration and a tribute to the lady who it seems not only loved the game,...
October 13th, 2019 06:39 - Hat, home & tea. (Poetic Dan)
This is Dan at his absolute best so far! I love this piece, filled with...
October 13th, 2019 06:33 - NO DIRECTION (Suebedoobedoo)
What on earth is beauty school?
October 11th, 2019 15:37 - Apologies (SheWasTheSun)
Thoughts in time is absolutely right in her comment. We are not the...
October 11th, 2019 15:35 - He and... C (Clara)
The dreadful C is among us and thriving.... it\'s inside me right now and...
October 11th, 2019 14:21 - A darker shade of grey (Alta H Mabin)
Emotional writing from the moment. Fresh and vivid.
Well captured and...
October 11th, 2019 14:13 - Sightless. (Fay Slimm.)
How disgusting is war really. Mankinds stupidity in murderous manufacture...
October 11th, 2019 07:23 - Challenges to Experience. (Goldfinch60)
So true you sage. And from experience hopefully wisdom.
(tongue in...
October 11th, 2019 06:53 - ‘Connections Through Time’ (Thoughts In Time)
Definitely in tune with you here. Touched upon this in my piece today.
A...
October 11th, 2019 01:20 - ‘Connections Through Time’ (Thoughts In Time)
Definitely in tune with you here. Touched upon this in my piece today.
A...
October 11th, 2019 01:06 - My Light Knight (Clara)
The world is and will never be black and white. Give me those shades of...
October 10th, 2019 19:22 - THE WAITINGS OVER ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Pure joy for the both of you. MPS needs to put out the bunting and...
October 10th, 2019 11:39 - Colorful accessories and grey memories (Alta H Mabin)
The days go on, their beauty pushed aside by dark clouds of inner turmoil...
October 10th, 2019 11:36 - First Light. (Fay Slimm.)
I have to say a big grin warmed my face when i saw this title.... \"ah...
October 10th, 2019 11:30 - Lonely? Not I. (Goldfinch60)
Most of my life i have lived alone and i don\'t ever feel lonely....
October 10th, 2019 11:21 - THE AMERICAN \'R\' (Michael Edwards)
i just ccept it for what it is tbh, but everytime i hear the different...
October 10th, 2019 11:18 - Ticked all my box\'s & off I flew... Thank you (Poetic Dan)
That\'s the reality of existence you just encompassed Dan. No rules, and...
October 10th, 2019 11:11 - Old soul new idea (Dakota)
Your first three lines said it all
October 9th, 2019 18:34 - Morning coffee (Alta H Mabin)
Yes, the moments of essence, moments when pleasure alleviates all.
October 9th, 2019 15:24 - The Party (FredPeyer)
Too tempting to not ask you.... why invent a new you? what was so wrong...
October 9th, 2019 13:24 - The Party (FredPeyer)
Too tempting to not ask you.... why invent a new you? what was so wrong...
October 9th, 2019 12:47 - Be the \"S\" in front of our word (Poetic Dan)
You is what u is. Whether others are aware enough to perceive that is in...
October 9th, 2019 12:05 - WHICH SHOWER GEL? (Michael Edwards)
Only here to replenish
what pleases you most
a fragrant whisper,
from...
October 9th, 2019 08:14 - The Lady in White. (Goldfinch60)
Nice to read beauty being appreciated for what it is.
October 9th, 2019 08:10 - The perfect gentleman (Alta H Mabin)
A gentleman will never demand, he awaits your pleasure.
October 8th, 2019 15:22 - Awayness. (Fay Slimm.)
How melancholy can be those final train departures. The innocent yearning,...
October 8th, 2019 06:52 - Little Girl (FredPeyer)
Wonderful when little ones begin to be self motivatedly creative..... ...
October 8th, 2019 05:47 - To App or Not to App. (Goldfinch60)
Dammit a phone is a phone not a life controller! Mines for phone calls,...
October 8th, 2019 05:45 - Tattooed (Poetic Dan)
Yes, no doubt you were that pure innocent child Dan as were we all. You...
October 8th, 2019 05:42 - Silence. (Fay Slimm.)
You\'ve encapsulated the beauty of silent times here very well indeed. For...
October 7th, 2019 07:11 - Questioned by dog (Poetic Dan)
Filthy habit smoking..... you should pack it in!
October 7th, 2019 06:38 - Walk Together to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Your inner faith and newfound strength from it shine today Andy. Self...
October 7th, 2019 05:56 - BEYOND THE RIVER (Michael Edwards)
Those all seeing UK cloud lined skies. So much detail in your piece today...
October 7th, 2019 05:48 - Mushroom Hill (Poetic Dan)
Life goes on and brings what it brings both welcome and unwelcome to our...
October 6th, 2019 17:31
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