Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Reverse it (Poetic Dan) This piece excells at what i like to call \"less is more\" poetry. Short...
  October 17th, 2019 04:30
• COMES AUTUMN. (Fay Slimm.) What a beauty, and yes thank you for posting this gem again. Goes into...
  October 17th, 2019 04:26
• A Woodland Encounter (Neville) Each woodland has a way Neville, but you must be open to letting a...
  October 16th, 2019 14:53
• I\'ll die a happy Dan (part 1&2) (Poetic Dan) Dan, don\'t ever worry about grammar or spelling.... cos fact is you are a...
  October 16th, 2019 11:09
• DESTINY ? 🧡 ANGELA FOR BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN) Great, now is the time when we can expect to see some REAL poetry from you...
  October 16th, 2019 03:46
• End Of The Ever Afters... (Kevin browne) Kevin i absolutely loved this one sir! It has so so many pearls within it...
  October 15th, 2019 03:51
• A poet inspired a message to pass on (Poetic Dan) Good to see you with ya tongue in cheek on MPS m8. I get te feeling...
  October 15th, 2019 03:45
• Her Love For Me. (Goldfinch60) What a lovely smiling face. I\'m lost for words and deeply moved by...
  October 15th, 2019 03:40
• ‘One Touch Or Two’ (Thoughts In Time) Hey.... who\'s counting..... tell me afterwards.
  October 15th, 2019 03:36
• ALL GOOD THINGS (Michael Edwards) Clever and surprisingly thought provoking piece today ME. New ones will...
  October 15th, 2019 03:35
• Sterilite Tubs and Reflections (Lonelyraccoon) I disagree with your final line. You\'ve got a life, and a good head....
  October 14th, 2019 16:26
• Morning brew and perfect moments with you (Alta H Mabin) Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it...
  October 14th, 2019 16:15
• Morning brew and perfect moments with you (Alta H Mabin) Coffee certainly does something for you gal. What are you taking with it...
  October 14th, 2019 12:49
• LOVE ME & BE MY WIFE 🧡 BRIAN 🧡 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN) Thinking of you two. Hoping that you arrive on time, it\'s 10.27 a.m. GMT...
  October 14th, 2019 04:30
• Captive. (Fay Slimm.) How cruel and unthinking we are to cage the wild animals. The epitome of...
  October 14th, 2019 04:28
• I forgot (Poetic Dan) Envy is according to christianity a sin. I envy you my friend for the love...
  October 14th, 2019 04:22
• The Hastings Wake. (Goldfinch60) Awww u make orchi sound like a killjoy.... i bet he\'s a real nice guy...
  October 14th, 2019 04:18
• Two 575s (Michael Edwards) We are all pissed off with Brit democracy at the mo..... wrote several...
  October 14th, 2019 04:16
• Post-Delirium (RiverJordan) Hmmm this is the 2nd piece of yours i have read and its much clearer than...
  October 13th, 2019 14:47
• Post-Delirium (RiverJordan) Hmmm this is the 2nd piece of yours i have read and its much clearer than...
  October 13th, 2019 14:29
• It hurts as a human (FineB) What an intriguing write about such negatives but somehow you maintain a...
  October 13th, 2019 14:25
• Home (Clara) What a lovely clear honest declaration of your feelings you give...
  October 13th, 2019 14:18
• The \" LIGHT \" at the end of the dark tunnel (RiverJordan) Your philosophy as outlined here in \'comment from author\' is commendable...
  October 13th, 2019 14:10
• My love for you will never die (Alta H Mabin) Firstly, an excuse, you\'ll never find me a fan of mixed arithmetic and...
  October 13th, 2019 13:15
• A LORDS PRAYER IN MAORI 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 TRANSLATION (ANGELA & BRIAN) One wonders whether Maori society has improved or benefitted from the...
  October 13th, 2019 09:34
• Everything seemed fine (MrB) Oh what it was to be young and learning about romantic love. Memories...
  October 13th, 2019 08:45
• The seaside in the winter (Andrew Charles Forrest) Much neglected and naturally beautiful. A time to appreciate its beauty in...
  October 13th, 2019 08:39
• THE LAST THING (575) (Michael Edwards) Finally - give me a big cardboard box, drop me into it, bury it deep and...
  October 13th, 2019 07:19
• ‘Smile A While’ (Thoughts In Time) It simply adds a grace yes, to any face if we smile if just for a...
  October 13th, 2019 07:16
• Croquet Prize. (Goldfinch60) Admiration and a tribute to the lady who it seems not only loved the game,...
  October 13th, 2019 06:39
• Hat, home & tea. (Poetic Dan) This is Dan at his absolute best so far! I love this piece, filled with...
  October 13th, 2019 06:33
• NO DIRECTION (Suebedoobedoo) What on earth is beauty school?
  October 11th, 2019 15:37
• Apologies (SheWasTheSun) Thoughts in time is absolutely right in her comment. We are not the...
  October 11th, 2019 15:35
• He and... C (Clara) The dreadful C is among us and thriving.... it\'s inside me right now and...
  October 11th, 2019 14:21
• A darker shade of grey (Alta H Mabin) Emotional writing from the moment. Fresh and vivid. Well captured and...
  October 11th, 2019 14:13
• Sightless. (Fay Slimm.) How disgusting is war really. Mankinds stupidity in murderous manufacture...
  October 11th, 2019 07:23
• Challenges to Experience. (Goldfinch60) So true you sage. And from experience hopefully wisdom. (tongue in...
  October 11th, 2019 06:53
• ‘Connections Through Time’ (Thoughts In Time) Definitely in tune with you here. Touched upon this in my piece today. A...
  October 11th, 2019 01:20
• ‘Connections Through Time’ (Thoughts In Time) Definitely in tune with you here. Touched upon this in my piece today. A...
  October 11th, 2019 01:06
• My Light Knight (Clara) The world is and will never be black and white. Give me those shades of...
  October 10th, 2019 19:22
• THE WAITINGS OVER ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Pure joy for the both of you. MPS needs to put out the bunting and...
  October 10th, 2019 11:39
• Colorful accessories and grey memories (Alta H Mabin) The days go on, their beauty pushed aside by dark clouds of inner turmoil...
  October 10th, 2019 11:36
• First Light. (Fay Slimm.) I have to say a big grin warmed my face when i saw this title.... \"ah...
  October 10th, 2019 11:30
• Lonely? Not I. (Goldfinch60) Most of my life i have lived alone and i don\'t ever feel lonely....
  October 10th, 2019 11:21
• THE AMERICAN \'R\' (Michael Edwards) i just ccept it for what it is tbh, but everytime i hear the different...
  October 10th, 2019 11:18
• Ticked all my box\'s & off I flew... Thank you (Poetic Dan) That\'s the reality of existence you just encompassed Dan. No rules, and...
  October 10th, 2019 11:11
• Old soul new idea (Dakota) Your first three lines said it all
  October 9th, 2019 18:34
• Morning coffee (Alta H Mabin) Yes, the moments of essence, moments when pleasure alleviates all.
  October 9th, 2019 15:24
• The Party (FredPeyer) Too tempting to not ask you.... why invent a new you? what was so wrong...
  October 9th, 2019 13:24
• The Party (FredPeyer) Too tempting to not ask you.... why invent a new you? what was so wrong...
  October 9th, 2019 12:47
• Be the \"S\" in front of our word (Poetic Dan) You is what u is. Whether others are aware enough to perceive that is in...
  October 9th, 2019 12:05
• WHICH SHOWER GEL? (Michael Edwards) Only here to replenish what pleases you most a fragrant whisper, from...
  October 9th, 2019 08:14
• The Lady in White. (Goldfinch60) Nice to read beauty being appreciated for what it is.
  October 9th, 2019 08:10
• The perfect gentleman (Alta H Mabin) A gentleman will never demand, he awaits your pleasure.
  October 8th, 2019 15:22
• Awayness. (Fay Slimm.) How melancholy can be those final train departures. The innocent yearning,...
  October 8th, 2019 06:52
• Little Girl (FredPeyer) Wonderful when little ones begin to be self motivatedly creative..... ...
  October 8th, 2019 05:47
• To App or Not to App. (Goldfinch60) Dammit a phone is a phone not a life controller! Mines for phone calls,...
  October 8th, 2019 05:45
• Tattooed (Poetic Dan) Yes, no doubt you were that pure innocent child Dan as were we all. You...
  October 8th, 2019 05:42
• Silence. (Fay Slimm.) You\'ve encapsulated the beauty of silent times here very well indeed. For...
  October 7th, 2019 07:11
• Questioned by dog (Poetic Dan) Filthy habit smoking..... you should pack it in!
  October 7th, 2019 06:38
• Walk Together to Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Your inner faith and newfound strength from it shine today Andy. Self...
  October 7th, 2019 05:56
• BEYOND THE RIVER (Michael Edwards) Those all seeing UK cloud lined skies. So much detail in your piece today...
  October 7th, 2019 05:48
• Mushroom Hill (Poetic Dan) Life goes on and brings what it brings both welcome and unwelcome to our...
  October 6th, 2019 17:31
• Definitions in Music. (Goldfinch60) Bugger reading dots dashes alphabet or squiggles i just play the darned...
  October 6th, 2019 01:23
• Vibrational link (Poetic Dan) It is so much pleasure to read you today having read you for a couple of...
  October 5th, 2019 15:45
• Vibrational link (Poetic Dan) It is so much pleasure to read you today having read you for a couple of...
  October 5th, 2019 06:02
• HE EARNS HIS FEE (Michael Edwards) Its beyond me tbh. I just can\'t get that low in spirit.
  October 5th, 2019 05:53
• A Good Day on the Road. (Goldfinch60) Having been a patient driven by a volunteer driver (bless their souls)...
  October 5th, 2019 05:51
• Michele Marrulo. (Goldfinch60) Do you mind??? I\'m still saving up to paint the stairs!
  October 4th, 2019 06:30
• Struggle in happiness (Poetic Dan) Yes Dan you most certainly are doing just what you say. I\'m proud to know...
  October 4th, 2019 01:34
• Time\'s Needle. (Fay Slimm.) Ah, Fay and the dawning, harmony. Yes indeed the dawning for the ageing...
  October 4th, 2019 01:29
• A KNOBBLY BONE (Michael Edwards) Tell me about it! Everyday i have a battery powered 24/7 drug injector...
  October 4th, 2019 01:17
• Perfect Imperfections (Neville) Such imperfection as beauty finds lodged into our hearts..... unique...
  October 3rd, 2019 10:49
• Joyful tear or two, I\'m ready are you? (Poetic Dan) Your last line contains such an important message to all who are...
  October 3rd, 2019 05:56
• Asking. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully written poem of \'love\'s story\' in mature years and the...
  October 3rd, 2019 02:54
• DISCOVERING A NEW CAVE ! 💙 BRIAN 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN) Great and entertaining story Brian. I admire pot-holers with a healthy...
  October 3rd, 2019 02:38
• Croquet and Nature. (Goldfinch60) Good to read that now you have found your \'recreational drug of choice\'...
  October 3rd, 2019 02:32
• UNDER THE WEATHER? (Michael Edwards) Or they\'ll do just what it says on the tin! Good laugh with my first...
  October 3rd, 2019 02:27
• Staircase to oblivion (Thesunseeker) But if you can see the direction is downward then you must be observing...
  October 2nd, 2019 16:48
• Blood, water, and sadness (Vanessa wallace) LOL @ your \"stay\" at MPS... that\'s gotta become your \"life\" in...
  October 2nd, 2019 16:44
• Who is She? (Clara) Life brings all sorts to our door including demons and disasters, which...
  October 2nd, 2019 10:03
• My Poems 26 - 50 (Jose Radin Llorca Garduque) Yep, just like you said yesterday. If quality goes out of the window then...
  October 2nd, 2019 06:39
• THE LANGUAGE OF ROSES ? 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 COLLABORATION POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Yes, our luscious roses are so full and rewarding. Hard not to be...
  October 2nd, 2019 06:34
• Self Hate (JV) Nothing wrong with a measure of self hate. To hate you must have made...
  October 2nd, 2019 06:32
• Indecent Propositions (Neville) UTTER FILTH!! More please. Reminded me of the hooker who was pissed...
  October 2nd, 2019 06:12
• Message to My River. (Goldfinch60) Hard to find a meaningful way to say heartfelt thank you for this....
  October 2nd, 2019 06:08
• Maybe. (Fay Slimm.) Cor! Fay. That is so so beautiful. Just so damn moving. So beautiful...
  October 2nd, 2019 05:59
• Rhyme for life (Poetic Dan) Near misses can be terrifying but oh so much better to reflect upon and...
  October 2nd, 2019 05:56
• Pick up the pieces (Alta H Mabin) They are the making of us.
  October 1st, 2019 18:58
• dreaming (Siranswerer) Lovely romantic fairy tale poetry. Lights up fantasy, would like to see...
  October 1st, 2019 18:56
• Here lies She (Clara) Sometimes that war just can\'t be resisted and oh boy do we pay the price....
  October 1st, 2019 18:53
• My Poems 1 - 25 (Jose Radin Llorca Garduque) I agree with Orchidee.... you will not get comprehension with a flood....
  October 1st, 2019 18:40
• In A Dreamers Way. (Kevin browne) Had to come back to this a few times. It\'s mesmerising. Flakes and...
  October 1st, 2019 15:33
• Day By Day With Chronic Pain (Michelle Syd) There are times this life brings us the anguish of pain, be it mental or...
  October 1st, 2019 15:23
• THERE SHE GOES (Jayb_garang) It takes two, a lesson wisely learned but not easily learned.
  October 1st, 2019 15:04
• Strange Curiosity (Shahla Latifi) You are right to look to where you see freedom and beauty for those are...
  October 1st, 2019 15:03
• Crying Earth (Christina8) I hope i\'m reading this correctly as a metaphor for green issues. Yep...
  October 1st, 2019 14:52
• Tell me I’m beautiful (Thewayiwrite) Love the way you have written the tease which surrounds this.
  October 1st, 2019 14:40
• No spoon! (Poetic Dan) There\'s a lot of good going on in your life these days mister... ain\'t...
  October 1st, 2019 14:36
• Midnight rendezvous (Alta H Mabin) All ingredients of the evenings recipe for love....
  October 1st, 2019 12:18