Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Life is yours (Poetic Dan)
The way you have about you of humbly sharing makes you immediately...
August 7th, 2019 12:20 - My Wish (DesertWords)
There but for the grace..... go I.
August 7th, 2019 07:24 - My Wish (DesertWords)
There but for the grace..... go I.
August 7th, 2019 06:40 - She\'s Delighted. (Kevin browne)
Dreamy delight rides through your words today Kevin. Strawberry sandwiches...
August 7th, 2019 05:40 - Wishing For A Clown As A Friend (Nafis Light)
But inside you there would soon arise a need to see behind that...
August 7th, 2019 05:34 - Otherness. (Fay Slimm.)
Again i journeyed with your words. Today you took me to the path along the...
August 7th, 2019 05:24 - Blood Red Rim (Neville)
And who could knowingly disagree that the future may find your lost ones...
August 7th, 2019 05:17 - End of A Rainbow (PoeticBiscuit)
And brighten my day it did. What a delight from behind your clown mask...
August 7th, 2019 05:09 - To The Right Place. (Goldfinch60)
That sir is a very good read. Immediately i thought of the book \"The road...
August 7th, 2019 05:03 - DROLL COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
I don\'t like to be seen in public so often these days, i feel they need a...
August 7th, 2019 04:58 - Rule by Tweetcree (Seek)
Years of USA politics home and overseas condensed into poetic irony and...
August 6th, 2019 13:02 - Rule by Tweetcree (Seek)
Years of USA politics home and overseas condensed into poetic irony and...
August 6th, 2019 13:00 - Butterfly Strings (Baddaytobealive)
Why do we fall so fast, so deeply online?
Because it\'s not like dating....
August 6th, 2019 05:53 - Knowing. (Fay Slimm.)
You have me standing on a hilltop common (Burleigh, Glos) gazing to the...
August 6th, 2019 05:45 - Love is Giving (Nafis Light)
Joker... love can be all around you... if you put it there,
August 6th, 2019 05:34 - Thinking Backwards (Neville)
Blimey, how you brought to mind love in the woodlands over Elan valley and...
August 6th, 2019 05:33 - Play a role, listening to your soul (Poetic Dan)
I\'m sure i\'ve sung this before....
Spider Dan, Spider Dan,
does...
August 6th, 2019 05:13 - Reuben had a Brother. (Goldfinch60)
Lucky Reuben has a younger brother,
How they\'ll laugh and play with one...
August 6th, 2019 05:04 - Masked (PoeticBiscuit)
Yep, behind my painted smile live many miseries but i will not dwell...
August 6th, 2019 01:15 - Treasure Trove (Woodkatie28)
And we never cease learning unless we close our minds.
However, some of...
August 6th, 2019 00:39 - Holes (Evergreen)
I like that. It\'s very clever and brought a broad smile to my face.
August 5th, 2019 23:12 - Being Here Is A Hobby...No It\'s Not (Nafis Light)
Very good subject you raise today Joker. Some i guess are compelled to...
August 5th, 2019 14:47 - DO EVERYTHING TENDERLY ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A 5 5 4 Blank Verse Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I so agree that we would all benefit from more tenderness in our approach...
August 5th, 2019 14:38 - Enemy of being great (Aa Harvey)
I like the way you write. I too read that book and becoming truly adult...
August 5th, 2019 14:31 - lover boy (Queer-with-a-pen)
When a love is special poetry is in the air. When a poet finds that love,...
August 5th, 2019 12:57 - Need. (Fay Slimm.)
You are the champion of romantic recollection. Beautiful phrasing held me...
August 5th, 2019 12:51 - Herb Song (Neville)
Sense of smell reigns supreme for it takes the mind to where it was when...
August 5th, 2019 12:46 - Dreamworld Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ve lived through many changes and now, relaxed, reflective,...
August 5th, 2019 12:42 - Storm (PoeticBiscuit)
At last sir there is sunshine from your words on mps. Very welcome they...
August 5th, 2019 12:36 - Summer Daze (Christina8)
Oh jeez did i smile then laugh with pleasure reading you today.... that...
August 5th, 2019 12:33 - Fearless (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful vid Dan... your kids are great .... a pair of rising...
August 5th, 2019 12:31 - See Passed Your Own Yard (Teek)
Yep, i know what the words mean, I have been using the english language...
August 5th, 2019 02:05 - LOVE TO EVERYONE 🧡 ANGELA ~ A SONNET FROM MY 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
My wish is that this is a wonderful world in everybodies heart. The ill,...
August 4th, 2019 13:16 - See Passed Your Own Yard (Teek)
Should that be \'past\' not \'passed\' ??
August 4th, 2019 13:09 - Underwear (Neville)
Asks the man who knows exactly where and when..... teasing poem.
August 4th, 2019 08:20 - Nature said (Poetic Dan)
That is one wicked video - superb, great selection of soundtrack...
August 4th, 2019 08:17 - Health and Stupidity. (Goldfinch60)
And on the side of a bus it said \"may contain people\".
But the funniest...
August 4th, 2019 08:09 - Cause Of Life (Baddaytobealive)
You transfer feelings to words well which is going to make you a great...
August 3rd, 2019 19:22 - the hidden lies I dare not speak (Misskay)
Wow, a complex subject. If this is a part of your life right now then i...
August 3rd, 2019 12:05 - An Imperfect Delusion (Theotherjside)
I like it. It tells a tale oh so many lovers will easily relate to. But,...
August 3rd, 2019 11:58 - Memories Visiting (DesertWords)
Poetic excellence here! It has everything of the nights alone...
August 3rd, 2019 11:50 - my lonely (Purged-soul whispered-sin)
Beautifully expressed comfort from deep within ones self preservation...
August 3rd, 2019 11:41 - Panic! (Christina8)
I only ever had one panic attack which was brought on by skunk cannabis...
August 3rd, 2019 11:34 - A Little or More...Dream (Nafis Light)
Aren\'t we a varied lot us humans. Such a vast variety of interests and...
August 3rd, 2019 11:19 - Elders are the question, youth are the answer (Poetic Dan)
No reason to lose touch with our youth but do not dismiss the wisdom of...
August 3rd, 2019 07:25 - ONLY THE LONELY ....... ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ INTERNAL RHYME LAMENT ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lucky man, brave man, contented man, reflective poetic man.... and you\'re...
August 3rd, 2019 07:21 - Any Colour at All (Neville)
Whether its the drugs i\'m on i dont know but... reading yours and others...
August 3rd, 2019 07:16 - Mary Had a Little Lamb 12 (Goldfinch60)
Mary had another lamb
I thought i\'d keep this random
And everywhere...
August 3rd, 2019 07:06 - A Serious Face...Good? (Nafis Light)
I\'m confused! Have you lost your way.... I very much doubt that. Maybe...
August 2nd, 2019 16:08 - Kiss/Kill Me (Baddaytobealive)
The power of love is immense and overwhelming. When it first enters a...
August 2nd, 2019 16:03 - 5/29/19 Night (Slutdj666)
Yes this is a needy poem. Why should anybody need someone who is just...
August 2nd, 2019 13:15 - Sculpting (PoeticBiscuit)
Never worth carving yourself up, you\'ll make a mess of it. Far better to...
August 2nd, 2019 13:09 - Tended. (Fay Slimm.)
Bah gum lass tha\'s dun it agin... boil kettle an put pot on t\'ob for...
August 2nd, 2019 07:38 - A Gift of Seasons (Neville)
Beyond my words to tell you how good this piece is Neville.
For mature...
August 2nd, 2019 07:32 - Who covers the young ears, explicit language (Poetic Dan)
Some will only see your words and not your meaning today Dan. Sadly swear...
August 2nd, 2019 07:25 - At One With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Envious of your finding such places.
August 2nd, 2019 07:15 - HUMAN DESIGN (Michael Edwards)
It hasn\'t escaped me
It\'s a bit of a farce
But you finally invented
A...
August 2nd, 2019 07:12 - Love you more (Poetic Dan)
Dan, if you put that video together you sure have a talent for it...... ...
August 1st, 2019 11:49 - Unwrapped. (Fay Slimm.)
How love makes the world spin for lovers..... life at the excitement end...
August 1st, 2019 11:38 - In Absentia (Ronald Watson)
Oh the joys of a funeral.
August 1st, 2019 02:17 - Wordpress is Meant For Fantasy (Nafis Light)
I have no idea what wordpress is but i and others are glad you are here on...
August 1st, 2019 02:05 - This is my day (Aa Harvey)
Hmmm, questions one wishes one could \'put away\' and relax knowing the...
August 1st, 2019 02:04 - AN AFTERNOON TEA ~ BRIAN ~ A 2 9 3 Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Now that\'s a tea i would readily enjoy for i am a lover of good hot Earl...
August 1st, 2019 02:01 - UNSAID (Michael Edwards)
That\'s the wisdom of knowing when to keep shtumm.
August 1st, 2019 01:58 - Open House (PoeticBiscuit)
I, for one, feel the welcome. And i bring along my friends who will help...
August 1st, 2019 01:56 - Fonts and Guises (Neville)
You exist, and very actively, in the tradition of wisdom imparted by the...
August 1st, 2019 01:31 - Knowledges. (Goldfinch60)
Education is something all too many regard as a thing of their past. Quite...
August 1st, 2019 01:28 - Distracted. (Fay Slimm.)
I came back to your poem tonite for a re-read and i have to say its really...
July 31st, 2019 16:36 - Summer Haze (She_was_torture)
Ice tea and a bottle of beer, strange combination. Nice lazy day at the...
July 31st, 2019 15:56 - Confetti (Smallblackflowers)
As an occasional tree hugger I salute your address to a beautiful flowers...
July 31st, 2019 09:59 - Silhouette (Baddaytobealive)
Harsh words at a time when they will do you good.... find something else...
July 31st, 2019 08:32 - BLACK STYLE (Thomas J. Dooley)
It is what it is... not exclusively good or bad.... same as any kind of...
July 31st, 2019 07:40 - FORGOT TO PACK ~ YOUR PLASTIC MAC ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A Lament ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Brit weather now demands you pack a \'pak-a-mac\'... although if u do get...
July 31st, 2019 07:34 - Pest Control (Ronald Watson)
Dear Pest Controller,
Please send me approx 1500 pairs of...
July 31st, 2019 07:29 - Mixed Signals (PoeticBiscuit)
Many of us poets cry with words my friend... i am not ashamed to cry...
July 31st, 2019 07:26 - The ashes of a phoenix heart (Aa Harvey)
With tenacity and faith may you succeed.
If you both should fail, never...
July 31st, 2019 06:36 - Another day Another struggle (Jessicaendingxo)
May your struggle succeed though the days be dark.
July 31st, 2019 06:35 - her weakness (Dusk arising)
Its odd the things which stop us dead and jolt our thoughts to where they...
July 31st, 2019 05:04 - Untitled - XVII (Suresh)
Thoughtful. I\'m wondering whether, in wishing for these things, are we...
July 31st, 2019 04:54 - Distracted. (Fay Slimm.)
You have just inspired my poem for tomorrow which i gladly dedicate to you...
July 31st, 2019 04:50 - Shard of a shard (Poetic Dan)
If you keep on doing what you are doing.... are you headed in the right...
July 31st, 2019 04:38 - Mirror Envy (Neville)
Amazing association of mirrors and memories and coupled to inner...
July 31st, 2019 03:13 - Conned to the End. (Goldfinch60)
He should have noticed there was no squeeky wheel. All wheelbarrows...
July 31st, 2019 03:02 - ANOTHER SHORTIE (Michael Edwards)
Sound advice, heeded.
July 31st, 2019 03:00 - A Cup Of Tea (Christina8)
I am drinking a mug of earl grey tea as i read you today.
I too enjoy a...
July 31st, 2019 02:56 - this might hurt a little (Leaaa)
A tale of growing, looking forward to becoming adult and realising true...
July 30th, 2019 12:22 - On finding Truth (Neville)
Gibran or Rumi? TBH there\'s so many of the greats in who\'s shadow we...
July 30th, 2019 12:18 - Thirst. (Fay Slimm.)
There\'s an ocean of love out there... I\'m hoping for a tsunami any day...
July 30th, 2019 12:06 - A speck (Poetic Dan)
We may teach OUR children of love, peace and tolerance but.... what...
July 30th, 2019 10:00 - How Are You Today? (Goldfinch60)
Frankly i woke feeling knackered after a really hard days work. Aches and...
July 30th, 2019 03:31 - FIT AS A FIDDLE (Michael Edwards)
Is it a gut feeling?
July 30th, 2019 03:30 - When Tomorrow Comes (Nafis Light)
I read the words of a complex soul who finds release and acceptance...
July 29th, 2019 16:14 - Learnt Curves. (Fay Slimm.)
Reading your first stanza brought forth a gasp and \"there is much wisdom...
July 29th, 2019 16:10 - Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain (Poetic Dan)
I used to wonder what my appearance conjoured up in peoples minds. Then i...
July 29th, 2019 16:04 - Out of it (PoeticBiscuit)
A view into a very disturbed mind leaps off my screen. Your words, your...
July 29th, 2019 15:57 - People Feeling. (Goldfinch60)
As one positive and happy person to another..... YEP! Total agreement... ...
July 29th, 2019 15:54 - Cold Under The Coat (Neville)
Outstanding Neville! This is you at your very best. There is so much here...
July 29th, 2019 15:49 - THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards)
And such is the beauty in his work.
July 29th, 2019 15:40 - The Fall (Christina8)
More drama here, more punch.... in the delivery here for you today. I\'m...
July 29th, 2019 15:37 - Planting seeds of life - growing self awareness... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
According to your profile page you do not read other poets work on here or...
July 28th, 2019 13:39
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