Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- my lonely (Purged-soul whispered-sin)
Beautifully expressed comfort from deep within ones self preservation...
August 3rd, 2019 11:41 - Panic! (Christina8)
I only ever had one panic attack which was brought on by skunk cannabis...
August 3rd, 2019 11:34 - A Little or More...Dream (Nafis Light)
Aren\'t we a varied lot us humans. Such a vast variety of interests and...
August 3rd, 2019 11:19 - Elders are the question, youth are the answer (Poetic Dan)
No reason to lose touch with our youth but do not dismiss the wisdom of...
August 3rd, 2019 07:25 - ONLY THE LONELY ....... ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ INTERNAL RHYME LAMENT ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lucky man, brave man, contented man, reflective poetic man.... and you\'re...
August 3rd, 2019 07:21 - Any Colour at All (Neville)
Whether its the drugs i\'m on i dont know but... reading yours and others...
August 3rd, 2019 07:16 - Mary Had a Little Lamb 12 (Goldfinch60)
Mary had another lamb
I thought i\'d keep this random
And everywhere...
August 3rd, 2019 07:06 - A Serious Face...Good? (Nafis Light)
I\'m confused! Have you lost your way.... I very much doubt that. Maybe...
August 2nd, 2019 16:08 - Kiss/Kill Me (Baddaytobealive)
The power of love is immense and overwhelming. When it first enters a...
August 2nd, 2019 16:03 - 5/29/19 Night (Slutdj666)
Yes this is a needy poem. Why should anybody need someone who is just...
August 2nd, 2019 13:15 - Sculpting (PoeticBiscuit)
Never worth carving yourself up, you\'ll make a mess of it. Far better to...
August 2nd, 2019 13:09 - Tended. (Fay Slimm.)
Bah gum lass tha\'s dun it agin... boil kettle an put pot on t\'ob for...
August 2nd, 2019 07:38 - A Gift of Seasons (Neville)
Beyond my words to tell you how good this piece is Neville.
For mature...
August 2nd, 2019 07:32 - Who covers the young ears, explicit language (Poetic Dan)
Some will only see your words and not your meaning today Dan. Sadly swear...
August 2nd, 2019 07:25 - At One With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Envious of your finding such places.
August 2nd, 2019 07:15 - HUMAN DESIGN (Michael Edwards)
It hasn\'t escaped me
It\'s a bit of a farce
But you finally invented
A...
August 2nd, 2019 07:12 - Love you more (Poetic Dan)
Dan, if you put that video together you sure have a talent for it...... ...
August 1st, 2019 11:49 - Unwrapped. (Fay Slimm.)
How love makes the world spin for lovers..... life at the excitement end...
August 1st, 2019 11:38 - In Absentia (Ronald Watson)
Oh the joys of a funeral.
August 1st, 2019 02:17 - Wordpress is Meant For Fantasy (Nafis Light)
I have no idea what wordpress is but i and others are glad you are here on...
August 1st, 2019 02:05 - This is my day (Aa Harvey)
Hmmm, questions one wishes one could \'put away\' and relax knowing the...
August 1st, 2019 02:04 - AN AFTERNOON TEA ~ BRIAN ~ A 2 9 3 Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Now that\'s a tea i would readily enjoy for i am a lover of good hot Earl...
August 1st, 2019 02:01 - UNSAID (Michael Edwards)
That\'s the wisdom of knowing when to keep shtumm.
August 1st, 2019 01:58 - Open House (PoeticBiscuit)
I, for one, feel the welcome. And i bring along my friends who will help...
August 1st, 2019 01:56 - Fonts and Guises (Neville)
You exist, and very actively, in the tradition of wisdom imparted by the...
August 1st, 2019 01:31 - Knowledges. (Goldfinch60)
Education is something all too many regard as a thing of their past. Quite...
August 1st, 2019 01:28 - Distracted. (Fay Slimm.)
I came back to your poem tonite for a re-read and i have to say its really...
July 31st, 2019 16:36 - Summer Haze (She_was_torture)
Ice tea and a bottle of beer, strange combination. Nice lazy day at the...
July 31st, 2019 15:56 - Confetti (Smallblackflowers)
As an occasional tree hugger I salute your address to a beautiful flowers...
July 31st, 2019 09:59 - Silhouette (Baddaytobealive)
Harsh words at a time when they will do you good.... find something else...
July 31st, 2019 08:32 - BLACK STYLE (Thomas J. Dooley)
It is what it is... not exclusively good or bad.... same as any kind of...
July 31st, 2019 07:40 - FORGOT TO PACK ~ YOUR PLASTIC MAC ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A Lament ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Brit weather now demands you pack a \'pak-a-mac\'... although if u do get...
July 31st, 2019 07:34 - Pest Control (Ronald Watson)
Dear Pest Controller,
Please send me approx 1500 pairs of...
July 31st, 2019 07:29 - Mixed Signals (PoeticBiscuit)
Many of us poets cry with words my friend... i am not ashamed to cry...
July 31st, 2019 07:26 - The ashes of a phoenix heart (Aa Harvey)
With tenacity and faith may you succeed.
If you both should fail, never...
July 31st, 2019 06:36 - Another day Another struggle (Jessicaendingxo)
May your struggle succeed though the days be dark.
July 31st, 2019 06:35 - her weakness (Dusk arising)
Its odd the things which stop us dead and jolt our thoughts to where they...
July 31st, 2019 05:04 - Untitled - XVII (Suresh)
Thoughtful. I\'m wondering whether, in wishing for these things, are we...
July 31st, 2019 04:54 - Distracted. (Fay Slimm.)
You have just inspired my poem for tomorrow which i gladly dedicate to you...
July 31st, 2019 04:50 - Shard of a shard (Poetic Dan)
If you keep on doing what you are doing.... are you headed in the right...
July 31st, 2019 04:38 - Mirror Envy (Neville)
Amazing association of mirrors and memories and coupled to inner...
July 31st, 2019 03:13 - Conned to the End. (Goldfinch60)
He should have noticed there was no squeeky wheel. All wheelbarrows...
July 31st, 2019 03:02 - ANOTHER SHORTIE (Michael Edwards)
Sound advice, heeded.
July 31st, 2019 03:00 - A Cup Of Tea (Christina8)
I am drinking a mug of earl grey tea as i read you today.
I too enjoy a...
July 31st, 2019 02:56 - this might hurt a little (Leaaa)
A tale of growing, looking forward to becoming adult and realising true...
July 30th, 2019 12:22 - On finding Truth (Neville)
Gibran or Rumi? TBH there\'s so many of the greats in who\'s shadow we...
July 30th, 2019 12:18 - Thirst. (Fay Slimm.)
There\'s an ocean of love out there... I\'m hoping for a tsunami any day...
July 30th, 2019 12:06 - A speck (Poetic Dan)
We may teach OUR children of love, peace and tolerance but.... what...
July 30th, 2019 10:00 - How Are You Today? (Goldfinch60)
Frankly i woke feeling knackered after a really hard days work. Aches and...
July 30th, 2019 03:31 - FIT AS A FIDDLE (Michael Edwards)
Is it a gut feeling?
July 30th, 2019 03:30 - When Tomorrow Comes (Nafis Light)
I read the words of a complex soul who finds release and acceptance...
July 29th, 2019 16:14 - Learnt Curves. (Fay Slimm.)
Reading your first stanza brought forth a gasp and \"there is much wisdom...
July 29th, 2019 16:10 - Strange! Come see \"it\" in my brain (Poetic Dan)
I used to wonder what my appearance conjoured up in peoples minds. Then i...
July 29th, 2019 16:04 - Out of it (PoeticBiscuit)
A view into a very disturbed mind leaps off my screen. Your words, your...
July 29th, 2019 15:57 - People Feeling. (Goldfinch60)
As one positive and happy person to another..... YEP! Total agreement... ...
July 29th, 2019 15:54 - Cold Under The Coat (Neville)
Outstanding Neville! This is you at your very best. There is so much here...
July 29th, 2019 15:49 - THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards)
And such is the beauty in his work.
July 29th, 2019 15:40 - The Fall (Christina8)
More drama here, more punch.... in the delivery here for you today. I\'m...
July 29th, 2019 15:37 - Planting seeds of life - growing self awareness... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
According to your profile page you do not read other poets work on here or...
July 28th, 2019 13:39 - N..O..R..M..A..L >>>> D..R..E..A..M..$ !!!! (O.G. Tone)
LOL what size is cancer size?
July 28th, 2019 13:35 - Society (British tea)
A point well made about \'normal\' society and it\'s apparent narrow...
July 28th, 2019 11:57 - Love rays everyday (Poetic Dan)
Lovely to read of your happiness together. Keep this because trying times...
July 28th, 2019 08:58 - And They Called Her Iris (Neville)
I\'ll stick with the rainbow mate. A different coloured lady for each day...
July 28th, 2019 08:52 - Slip (Vanessa wallace)
How thoughtful of you to make a mess in the bathroom where it can be...
July 28th, 2019 08:47 - To Know Christ Is To Know God (Orchidee)
Who you kidding Orchidee. Why do you keep publishing all this christian...
July 28th, 2019 08:41 - Conclusions. (Goldfinch60)
Another Goldfinch pearl of wisdom imparted here..... you should include...
July 28th, 2019 08:38 - Break Your Heart (Christina8)
Tis a fact of life that more relationships fail than last. Experience...
July 28th, 2019 08:32 - I Hate You (Belle)
Hating love will bring you a lifetime of bitterness. Learning to love and...
July 27th, 2019 15:59 - Dear Anger (Tiffany_Arnold)
Are you going to change the ending to this one too or are we stuck with...
July 27th, 2019 09:05 - It doesn\'t matter any more (Poetic Dan)
Now when it comes to beautiful words i think you\'ve created something...
July 27th, 2019 06:31 - The Right People Will Come to Us (Nafis Light)
Your words capture the essence of our creative nature here.
July 27th, 2019 06:26 - What Happened? (Vanessa wallace)
You are still a young person and both you and your friend are going thru a...
July 27th, 2019 06:24 - Fishing Again. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s something i never learned to do apart from age ten catching a...
July 27th, 2019 06:18 - Bring it On (Neville)
In these my later days i have learned to write down such moments. On...
July 27th, 2019 06:11 - An Extraordinary Afternoon (Christina8)
I am envious, such happy memories you have brought to my mind with your...
July 27th, 2019 06:07 - Penitent Prayer (Orchidee)
I made a terrible error which was, at the time, beyond my control. It was...
July 26th, 2019 12:34 - Anxiety (Tiffany_Arnold)
My dear mum was a great worrier... she lived for it... but only to...
July 26th, 2019 10:10 - Be In Time (Nafis Light)
As one who hates to be late I applaud your writing today.
July 26th, 2019 10:07 - At Dawn And To Dusk. (Kevin browne)
That sivth stanza alone is a masterpiece Kevin.... It speaks to me of...
July 26th, 2019 09:58 - Always & Forever (Neville)
Oh my, here writes a man who has surrendered his credit card to the lady...
July 26th, 2019 09:54 - HAPPENINGS. (Fay Slimm.)
Eeh bah gum lass, the\'rs nowt strange bout nature nor nowt stranger than...
July 26th, 2019 09:43 - Final Words (PoeticBiscuit)
The world will not see what you want it to see of you if you were to...
July 26th, 2019 04:29 - Ignorant People. (Goldfinch60)
Yep, i play tricks on them.... at the checkout, those who cant put the...
July 26th, 2019 01:48 - Waking Gently (Christina8)
Here in U.K. we are having a heat wave with highest ever recorded...
July 26th, 2019 01:07 - Lies (Tiffany_Arnold)
pmsl... you deleted my line... don\'t blame u though..... quiet...
July 26th, 2019 00:28 - Worlds Collided (PoeticBiscuit)
A chance encounter? yet u mention \'compared to your love\' LOL. If shes a...
July 25th, 2019 21:04 - You (Trin)
I don\'t think i have ever read such a compelling expression of love as...
July 25th, 2019 04:42 - Untarnished (Christina8)
Lovely picture you create in my minds eye.
Personally i find rhyme...
July 25th, 2019 04:36 - selfless (Kalanigarcia)
It certainly is not my life Mr Poet. The pains associated with suicide...
July 25th, 2019 04:29 - Days end (The_bleak_visionary)
Hmm, are yesterdays ever truly gone? Dont they rather have a cumulative...
July 25th, 2019 04:22 - Another time (The death of love, not me.) (Aa Harvey)
A song of love which truly transcends romantic love into the essence of...
July 25th, 2019 04:20 - BE A JITTERBUGGA NOT A LITTERBUGGA ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DITTY ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I share your sentiments 100%. I cannot understand how folk can be so...
July 25th, 2019 04:19 - A Silent Refrain (Neville)
Methinks you do not need teaching. However a refresher course can be so...
July 25th, 2019 04:17 - Love\'s Call. (Fay Slimm.)
Reads like the heartache of a lovers parting with the agonising waiting,...
July 25th, 2019 04:12 - Summer Sky (MrNobody40)
Wonderfully composed reflection upon a time when life was a vibrant...
July 25th, 2019 02:36 - In This Life. (Kevin browne)
The love of life and having lived one shines out here.
July 25th, 2019 02:34 - Salvation Security (Orchidee)
Odd how your god feels the need to call out for worshipers yet so many...
July 25th, 2019 02:32 - Crucifixion? (Goldfinch60)
I wonder how spiritually he meant that. The biblical act before re-birth...
July 25th, 2019 02:28 - Thunder (Poetic Dan)
Do you have room in your life for the imperfect? Can you tolerate the...
July 25th, 2019 02:24 - That\'s What Made The Food So Good (Nafis Light)
Sounds like thats just to my taste.
July 25th, 2019 02:20
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