Comments on community poems by dusk arising at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by dusk arising

Modesty? Moi? (Goldfinch60) How far do you travel to find a milliner who can handle your requirements?
June 21st, 2019 11:59
Old Sea Walls (Neville) Aaaah dear old skeggy of yesteryear when the slot machies took 1d which...
June 21st, 2019 11:56
Life Before Bar-codes (Neville) Before double yellow lines, before we got old, before cashpoints and self...
June 20th, 2019 08:06
Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth (Poetic Dan) Positivity wins every time - well done.
June 20th, 2019 08:04
Remembrance Recollections (Orchidee) Come on Orchidee, fess-up, what is this you need forgiving for?
June 20th, 2019 07:56
Life\'s Choices. (Goldfinch60) Nil illegitimus carborundum innit. Or from \'The Life of Brian\' - Always...
June 20th, 2019 07:52
THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (Michael Edwards) For some poetry is art. For some a poet is a boring old fart. For me, i\'m...
June 20th, 2019 07:46
Erigeron (Neville) Hardy little bloomers - it still feels like winter here.
June 19th, 2019 14:13
In shock (Poetic Dan) Dan, do the important stuff at times like this.
June 19th, 2019 14:05
EARTH (Michael Edwards) I grabbed a clod and shook the sod off. Provider of big holes for the...
June 19th, 2019 01:34
Word Struggle. (Goldfinch60) Do you pronounce themetal aloominum or al-you-min-ium. I had a technical...
June 19th, 2019 01:30
Fret Not To Do Evil (Orchidee) You know what, i wish it would happen.
June 18th, 2019 12:44
Past and Future - Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Love of life and love of the beauty all around us is a reward for being...
June 18th, 2019 12:42
Let’s Call That Day a Week (Neville) All those things we\'ve talked about in our lives with so many. The more...
June 18th, 2019 12:40
MY STAFF (Michael Edwards) The essential staff for life yes. Great thought expressed, great...
June 18th, 2019 12:35
I am no where near ready to die. (WildMoonChild) You certainly can write from empathy.
June 17th, 2019 11:11
Yours, Truly (SerenWise) Quite lovely. Just be careful not to stifle.
June 17th, 2019 11:02
Free Men (CindyB) What an incredible tapestry of mystery you have embroidered into the night...
June 17th, 2019 10:29
another poem about sadness and pastries (Abora) I am picturing you writing this in a pleasant whiskey augmented aura when...
June 17th, 2019 10:19
Ageless Advocate (Orchidee) In my mirror today i saw your title - an \"ageing avocado\". and i...
June 17th, 2019 10:14
Worthy (Sylviasearcher) The spirit which brought the essence of these thoughts to you is your...
June 17th, 2019 10:09
My Forgotten Life. (Camille) Very powerful writing. Enough to make every reader thoughful about what...
June 17th, 2019 10:00
Out of Sight (Neville) Were we all able to read each others thoughts then your writing would be...
June 17th, 2019 05:50
Again & Again (Poetic Dan) Quote:- Work is love made visible. And if you cannot work with love but...
June 17th, 2019 05:46
From \'A COLLECTION\' (13) (Michael Edwards) And when his python head arrives we shall all chant \" Nice to see you -...
June 17th, 2019 05:39
Hitchhikers Guide. (Goldfinch60) Hmmm hitch hikers.... i\'m reluctant. You just dont know what you are...
June 17th, 2019 05:35
Crash & burn (Poetic Dan) Life brings unexpected challenges, disappointments, and mistakes. Without...
June 16th, 2019 18:26
Out of the Blue (Neville) I\'ll quote some famous words to respond to your fine sweet and sour words...
June 16th, 2019 08:59
Tuneful Times (Orchidee) LOL praise him all u like .... he won\'t hear u Orchidee.
June 16th, 2019 03:02
Lady Lost. (Goldfinch60) There you go Goldfinch. You know already that the church will just dance...
June 16th, 2019 01:45
From \'A COLLECTION\' (12) (Michael Edwards) Charts don\'t do anything. Farts can do lots. Take that as definite...
June 16th, 2019 01:39
From \'A COLLECTION\' (12) (Michael Edwards) Charts don\'t do anything. Farts can do lots. Take that as definite...
June 16th, 2019 01:19
Make a long story short (Dls2012) Welcome to MPS. We are all kinds of poets. Some seem to have to write...
June 15th, 2019 21:00
Dear Children. (Kevin browne) shall we know peace when she comes this stranger to our land will...
June 15th, 2019 11:32
Old Poets (Neville) Life - a history lesson. Without a history, whats to write...
June 15th, 2019 10:56
Giving Glory (Orchidee) you you could could have have said said all all that that in in just just...
June 15th, 2019 10:54
Imagination Managing. (Goldfinch60) Amazing virtuoso piece and soooo long. Truly proving he is a master of...
June 15th, 2019 10:51
Before I Go Blind (Neville) But have u ever dabbled in the rings of saturn? Or the perverse pleasures...
June 14th, 2019 10:58
SEDUCTION. (Fay Slimm.) No escape desired or planned.... drown me.
June 14th, 2019 10:54
Faith Controls The Tongue - James Series (4) (Orchidee) Jeez u dont half use some weird grammar Orchidee.
June 14th, 2019 10:52
That Wonderful Place. (Goldfinch60) This is such an uplifting read coming from you in your circumstance. You...
June 14th, 2019 10:49
Persistence is a fun key (Poetic Dan) The crocodile snapped at Dan\'s feet But crafty Dan was way out of...
June 14th, 2019 10:41
So So Bad - \\\\\\\"Lane\\\\\\\" (So So Bad Official) Sounds like a shy kid, afraid of the microphone, mumbling in the...
June 13th, 2019 15:27
If Ever I Get A Girl Again. (Kevin browne) I wasn\'t sure where this was going but i enjoyed those twists and turns,...
June 13th, 2019 12:42
Forever (Lulu Boatwright) Lovely tribute to a missed someone special. May i politely suggest that...
June 13th, 2019 07:17
The Earthworm and Caterpillar (Jenny Wren) Hmmm surprisingly sad ending. I thought i was reading a joyful piece ideal...
June 13th, 2019 07:11
WE. (Fay Slimm.) Eyyup lass, tha\'s nailed eet wi words as teks me back tuh when dad bort...
June 13th, 2019 07:06
I\'ve seen (Poetic Dan) For mid June theres too many flippin showers.. and its too cold! Are...
June 13th, 2019 06:59
Zeal For Zion (Orchidee) What does this lord bloke do up there on his mountain... control...
June 13th, 2019 06:55
Transported from Reality. (Goldfinch60) Vincent\'s work can take me places with little doubt. Music is...
June 13th, 2019 06:49
Once an Item (Neville) The great things about memories are that they are stuff you did not stuff...
June 13th, 2019 06:41
ESTEEM. (Fay Slimm.) Your wonderful first verse here says it all for me.
June 12th, 2019 02:37
Who Am I - FIBS. (Goldfinch60) I am beside myself with admiration who is an old pal from way back when i...
June 12th, 2019 02:36
On Being Human (Neville) A lesson well presented. I hope it\'s taken on board. We are very...
June 12th, 2019 02:33
I am.... (Poetic Dan) Yep! nuff said?
June 12th, 2019 02:29
Shadows (Suresh) The measure of any man will not be the wealth or status he achieved. A man...
June 12th, 2019 02:27
Feels Like It\'s Been A While (Nafis Light) Uplifting.
June 11th, 2019 16:51
Runner Beans (Classicmister) Very enjoyable. Enjoy those beans.
June 11th, 2019 16:44
I’m jealous (Ady123) Learn how to love and jealousy will leave you alone. How do you learn...
June 11th, 2019 16:42
who did you think i am? (Aamina) Why should the reader think you are male? Maybe it\'s the way you write...
June 11th, 2019 16:39
Outrageous (Suresh) Buy a gun. Become an american. Trust in Trump. Everything else is just...
June 11th, 2019 16:36
Searching (An Abstract View of Life) You long for love and you ain\'t dead yet. Are you near death? I hope not....
June 11th, 2019 16:28
Butterworth Crows (Neville) Poor train driver. Traumatised for life. And SHE has fallen asleep in the...
June 11th, 2019 03:34
Teaching (Sylviasearcher) Viking raiders all around are plundering again, arriving in their posh...
June 11th, 2019 03:29
SMALLNESS. (Fay Slimm.) Heady things that we are, it is so easy to ignore the tiny world at our...
June 11th, 2019 03:26
Sending it somewhere (Poetic Dan) Read my piece today m8. Although it is a true part of my life, you came to...
June 11th, 2019 03:21
A Song Or Two? (Orchidee) That dog at the keyboard i picture as your alter ego Orchidee.
June 11th, 2019 03:18
Michael\'s Artistic World (Goldfinch60) Come back Goldfinch! Don\'t take another step. Thats porridge you are...
June 11th, 2019 03:14
From \'A COLLECTION\' (11) (Michael Edwards) Is that where the axe hit her. Some cleavage it left, Your pic is similar...
June 11th, 2019 03:07
Your pocket or mine it will be fine (Poetic Dan) Reads like somebody enjoying some of lifes little pleasures.
June 10th, 2019 05:59
The Monster (Aa Harvey) Oi! story of my life - except the last happy bits. LOL I just had to...
June 10th, 2019 05:11
GORMLESS. (Fay Slimm.) Reminded me of our modified lyrics to that Tom Jones hit \"down the lane i...
June 10th, 2019 04:44
Coffee (Down the rabbithole) It feels like you are living a lost love and in pain. Your immediate...
June 10th, 2019 04:36
Catching Flies (Neville) AS my daughter went through her infant special schools we met a lot of...
June 10th, 2019 04:29
Spirit Shine (Orchidee) Well i don\'t believe in a christian god but i do hold with everything in...
June 10th, 2019 04:22
From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards) Ha! Trust a female to try entrapment at a time like that! Great picture...
June 10th, 2019 04:15
Does Size Matter. (Goldfinch60) I have always been a lover of big cars probably because i have always been...
June 10th, 2019 04:12
Stay Beautiful (Meg) I guess that eventually the stuff we have been through and our coping...
June 9th, 2019 12:11
Blessed to know you all (Poetic Dan) I wholeheartedly agree with Nevilles words. Consider this. Each one of...
June 9th, 2019 12:04
Puppy Love (Neville) The salty truth of a dog\'s affection revealed at last!
June 9th, 2019 11:56
Dead to love (Aa Harvey) When love is a two way emotion i.e. coming right back at you with the same...
June 9th, 2019 11:55
Pentecost Pourings (Orchidee) Blimey... you\'ll have a congregation knackerd singing all that.
June 9th, 2019 11:48
From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards) You definitely nailed it M.E.
June 9th, 2019 11:46
Reality (Just Another Person :)) A sad viewpoint to admit to. Poets, being mostly people quite quite...
June 8th, 2019 17:15
What If? (Meg) Interesting. Will it make any difference telling them if they already know...
June 8th, 2019 13:17
What If? (Meg) Interesting. Will it make any difference telling them if they already know...
June 8th, 2019 12:13
Gender Bender (Frank J III) I read an interesting article in a U.K. newspaper called Daily Mail...
June 8th, 2019 12:09
Of those we lose (Andrew Charles Forrest) I think we pass on by example that which was passed to us by example. Some...
June 8th, 2019 10:57
Man flu (Aa Harvey) Thats telling it how it is.
June 8th, 2019 10:31
Fold & keep (Poetic Dan) These modified words of an old but very popular song come to mind:- ...
June 8th, 2019 10:29
Coffee Sir? (Goldfinch60) And (stupidly) the lady asked \"what would you like me to wear tonite...
June 8th, 2019 10:21
From \'A COLLECTION\' (9) (Michael Edwards) KInnell you made i larff. Bringing to mind a sight i have not yet seen....
June 8th, 2019 10:16
My Fathers Jacket (Neville) Very moving Neville. A bond so very strong comes across. A blessing which...
June 8th, 2019 10:10
Neighbors Are Special (W c) Envious of you. Would be so good if we all had a similar familiarity and...
June 8th, 2019 08:54
Broken (Neville) Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn. Tis true how things can be...
June 8th, 2019 08:41
Broken (Neville) Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn. Tis true how things can be...
June 7th, 2019 03:47
CHOICES. (Fay Slimm.) I know that you a lover of the dawning day and here you show us your love...
June 7th, 2019 03:28
Home is me (Poetic Dan) \'That which does not kill you makes you stronger\' You have gathered...
June 7th, 2019 03:23
Willing Way (Orchidee) I could not read beyond the first few lines because..... how does an...
June 7th, 2019 03:19
Memory Lost. (Goldfinch60) Looking back into my poetry, i find pieces i have written which take me...
June 7th, 2019 03:15

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