Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Manic Monday (Christina8)
I know where you are coming from in this. For me poetry could never be a 9...
July 22nd, 2019 06:21 - Weak and alone (Gogeta)
Time comes to us when we are ready to reflect upon the meaning of it all....
July 22nd, 2019 04:37 - UNTELLABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
Love slumbers and relaxes into the everyday, camoflaged withing the...
July 22nd, 2019 04:07 - She Sparkles (Neville)
Ah the dagger drawn which is love.
July 22nd, 2019 04:02 - Greeting My River. (Goldfinch60)
I was pleased to read your comments yesterday about your joy of more...
July 22nd, 2019 03:59 - ART (Michael Edwards)
Your image today reminds me of my own \'theme\' when i was a keen...
July 22nd, 2019 03:53 - Reject (Aa Harvey)
I am imagining your CV.
July 21st, 2019 11:30 - I\'m a fan of you all (Poetic Dan)
You cover a lot of ground today in these words. It\'s now plain to see you...
July 21st, 2019 10:08 - One Day Maybe (Neville)
There\'s an untold story and a well intentioned deed revealed here....
July 21st, 2019 10:04 - A PLEB\'S WHAT I AM (Michael Edwards)
Bugger the spoon, gimmie a good win on the premium bonds.
July 21st, 2019 10:01 - The Choir - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Good to see you are enjoying your music.
July 21st, 2019 01:32 - Witness To The World (Orchidee)
Fitting tribute to a bloodthirsting religion. Pocket vampires all of...
July 21st, 2019 01:31 - Stay With Me... (Nafis Light)
The perfect partner... are there enough to go round?
July 21st, 2019 00:57 - This Day (DesertWords)
Beautiful thoughts. What would our world be were we all to live this...
July 20th, 2019 09:44 - OUT (Thomas J. Dooley)
Get away from the surroundings and people who hold you back and find your...
July 20th, 2019 09:25 - I no longer deny (Poetic Dan)
Yes i agree, we do place our own judgements of ourselves into the eyes of...
July 20th, 2019 08:10 - Restless (Mary73223)
Hmmm, experience shows me that opposites attract, similar repels.
July 20th, 2019 04:30 - A throwaway poem (Aa Harvey)
Throw me a line, drop me an \'h\', cast me a seed of a thought. Write it...
July 20th, 2019 04:28 - Of Loneliness (Andrew Charles Forrest)
The torment of a lonely soul\'s ache with time. A haunting write.
July 20th, 2019 04:26 - Encouraging Exhortation (Orchidee)
Though you and me have a different god thing, your first two stanzas i...
July 20th, 2019 02:18 - Too Much Time... (Nafis Light)
Don\'t wish your time away please. I am in my 60\'s and wishing time away...
July 20th, 2019 02:16 - SATURDAY (Michael Edwards)
All through our working lives we looked forward to providing our minds and...
July 20th, 2019 02:14 - Words Do Not Matter. (Goldfinch60)
Sing along to this one Goldfinch ...
July 20th, 2019 01:48 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (4) (Michael Edwards)
Reads like me staring at my screen when my muse has done a runner.
July 17th, 2019 12:59 - My New Life. (Goldfinch60)
Brave new world of a most deserving traveller of life\'s highways,...
July 17th, 2019 12:57 - Life is the plan (Poetic Dan)
It seems you are very much aware of the ying and yang inside you. The...
July 12th, 2019 06:02 - Chatterbox. (Goldfinch60)
This reminds me of a remarkable photograph of my mother in law which must...
July 11th, 2019 07:52 - TENDED. (Fay Slimm.)
May she feel again the compost of adulation as the muck spreader of good...
July 9th, 2019 11:49 - Clarity Resumed. (Goldfinch60)
Your lady of the Avon looks after you Goldfinch. Your guardian angel who...
July 9th, 2019 01:37 - DYING EMBERS (Michael Edwards)
Quite lovely. Brought to me the thought of how we are refreshed by tides...
July 9th, 2019 01:15 - A Game of Tennis. (Goldfinch60)
Hmmm never been a fan of Wimbledon but your quotes certainly ARE something...
July 8th, 2019 01:28 - THE GREATER GOOD (Michael Edwards)
Respect is very interesting. Should we quietly allow continual praise for...
July 8th, 2019 01:15 - To My Light (Alexa Pineda)
And the sad truth is that the very fire can burn painfully into your...
July 6th, 2019 11:11 - Is Being on \'My Poetic Side\' An Achievement? (Nafis Light)
It is an achievement for those discovering their ability. An achievement...
July 6th, 2019 11:07 - Vibration adjustment (Poetic Dan)
All around you are people with similar wounds. You won\'t know them for...
July 6th, 2019 11:00 - Missing You. (Goldfinch60)
Life brings many changes. The guy next door showed me a picture of his...
July 6th, 2019 10:42 - HEART STRINGS (Michael Edwards)
Maybe it\'s your gentle wind?
July 6th, 2019 10:40 - A Conversation with Self (Suresh)
There you go Suresh.... that christian \'fear\' instilled in you as a...
July 5th, 2019 11:09 - Favourable Fearing (Orchidee)
I can\'t get past the first line here..... so your religion is built upon...
July 5th, 2019 04:00 - But Worse Than That. (Goldfinch60)
Isn\'t this a story for us all as we age my friend. We lose the things...
July 5th, 2019 02:40 - Rant or opinion it\'s my dominion (Poetic Dan)
Loved that video Dan.
Whatever you chose or deny as a palliative or drug...
July 4th, 2019 09:47 - Strange Friend. (Goldfinch60)
Yep, even in the cold war Sting voiced \"I hope the Russians love their...
July 4th, 2019 09:37 - FROM COMMENTS (4) (Michael Edwards)
If you really could be tunefully farty
Could you compete with Eric...
July 4th, 2019 09:31 - Shelf-life (Suresh)
You\'re right, i\'m ready to get off this shelf but i think i\'d like the...
July 4th, 2019 04:29 - What could I learn (Poetic Dan)
I rekkon it\'s a healthy thing to keep asking questions of ones-self and...
July 3rd, 2019 10:56 - PRECIOUS. (Fay Slimm.)
I have a son of forty years of whom i am so very proud... it is a joy to...
July 3rd, 2019 05:27 - The First Move. (Goldfinch60)
This is a very fine piece indeed Goldfinch.
There are those who choose...
July 3rd, 2019 05:22 - WHEN I WERE YOUNG (Michael Edwards)
When i wo\' young, on a cold night me dad would suck a peppermint and...
July 3rd, 2019 05:18 - Looking Just to See (Neville)
I\'m sure Orchidee will be really pleased with this piece about his...
July 3rd, 2019 05:15 - I dedicate these thoughts (Poetic Dan)
I echo all the comments from others here today Dan. Ahead are some trying...
July 3rd, 2019 05:11 - FROM the New World! (Goldfinch60)
Your pedant-manship has an olde-worlde beauty to it here LOL
July 2nd, 2019 03:07 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (15 and 16) (Michael Edwards)
I\'m glad you have stopped lifting shops.. and now.... maybies (ha ha ha)...
July 2nd, 2019 01:26 - A Temple is desecrated (Suresh)
Desecration abounds, when man creates a religion to gain power to take...
July 2nd, 2019 01:22 - All it took (Poetic Dan)
\"I once was lost but now am found, was blind but now i see\"
How...
June 25th, 2019 04:01 - FERTILITY. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh that you were my Biology teacher all those years ago! Maybe i would...
June 25th, 2019 03:53 - Best Before See Date (Neville)
Thats the stuff dreams are dreamed in. A somehow distant \'cotton wooley\'...
June 25th, 2019 03:46 - Tears And Joys (Orchidee)
I like this fantasy stuff, are you competing with my Elspenore?
June 25th, 2019 03:37 - Art into Words. (Goldfinch60)
Someone else reading your appraisal here could say that it is a rather...
June 25th, 2019 03:28 - Fear Spreads...But So Does Love (Nafis Light)
I\'d plumb for hope in answer to your well versed question. Positive hope...
June 25th, 2019 03:22 - Let the spirit of your will drive your hope (Poetic Dan)
\"some people find that it\'s easier to hate than to wait anymore\"..... ...
June 24th, 2019 10:13 - Will I ever? (Sylviasearcher)
This laying bare ones frailty and superbly written. You excel here. I feel...
June 24th, 2019 10:03 - There Are No Graves (Neville)
I knew this was Auschwitz as soon as i began to read it.
No there are no...
June 24th, 2019 07:59 - UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.)
Lots of loving wrote this today... it shines out. Beautiful times...
June 24th, 2019 07:48 - Miracles Exist. (Goldfinch60)
OMG u ironed the socks.
I hope you didn\'t get steamed up writing this....
June 24th, 2019 07:45 - THE MINIMALIST MANTRA (Michael Edwards)
OK how much cutlery do you keep? how many glasses..... how many socks...
June 24th, 2019 07:39 - Ache (Neville)
Aches which nag you and only time will heal are the weight of life\'s...
June 24th, 2019 07:36 - Praise Proclaiming (Orchidee)
If the god of love were capable of such wrath as your first verse contains...
June 23rd, 2019 09:03 - My Spirit. (Goldfinch60)
Absolutely!!! You dont have to be a victim of some man made...
June 23rd, 2019 09:01 - TIME ALONE (Michael Edwards)
I love this Michael but you tied me in knots. I\'m still trying to get...
June 23rd, 2019 08:56 - Space For Grace (Orchidee)
re first verse..... and if/when he comes...just how does that happen.......
June 22nd, 2019 18:05 - Space For Grace (Orchidee)
re first verse..... and if/when he comes...just how does that happen.......
June 22nd, 2019 14:38 - Untitled - XX (Suresh)
Many a piece published on MPS has been lubricated by teardrops. The most...
June 22nd, 2019 13:40 - Keep going (Poetic Dan)
Oi!! thats cheating! This is one you wrote a while ago.... the idea was...
June 22nd, 2019 13:35 - Word Choice. (Goldfinch60)
Now look what you have done... was that the right way to start off? You...
June 22nd, 2019 13:33 - MY VILLAGE (Michael Edwards)
U made i larff. Yes we could take up Goldfinch\'s suggestion and take it...
June 22nd, 2019 13:31 - If you come across (Poetic Dan)
OK i\'m gonna change the subject for u. Have a week off and dont write...
June 21st, 2019 12:12 - Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5) (Orchidee)
Where is this above place then?
June 21st, 2019 12:06 - THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (2) (Michael Edwards)
They\'re not on their own there. Ifor wun fynd smore diffickult spelin...
June 21st, 2019 12:05 - Modesty? Moi? (Goldfinch60)
How far do you travel to find a milliner who can handle your requirements?
June 21st, 2019 11:59 - Old Sea Walls (Neville)
Aaaah dear old skeggy of yesteryear when the slot machies took 1d which...
June 21st, 2019 11:56 - Life Before Bar-codes (Neville)
Before double yellow lines, before we got old, before cashpoints and self...
June 20th, 2019 08:06 - Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth (Poetic Dan)
Positivity wins every time - well done.
June 20th, 2019 08:04 - Remembrance Recollections (Orchidee)
Come on Orchidee, fess-up, what is this you need forgiving for?
June 20th, 2019 07:56 - Life\'s Choices. (Goldfinch60)
Nil illegitimus carborundum innit. Or from \'The Life of Brian\' - Always...
June 20th, 2019 07:52 - THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (Michael Edwards)
For some poetry is art. For some a poet is a boring old fart. For me, i\'m...
June 20th, 2019 07:46 - Erigeron (Neville)
Hardy little bloomers - it still feels like winter here.
June 19th, 2019 14:13 - In shock (Poetic Dan)
Dan, do the important stuff at times like this.
June 19th, 2019 14:05 - EARTH (Michael Edwards)
I grabbed a clod and shook the sod off.
Provider of big holes for the...
June 19th, 2019 01:34 - Word Struggle. (Goldfinch60)
Do you pronounce themetal aloominum or al-you-min-ium. I had a technical...
June 19th, 2019 01:30 - Fret Not To Do Evil (Orchidee)
You know what, i wish it would happen.
June 18th, 2019 12:44 - Past and Future - Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Love of life and love of the beauty all around us is a reward for being...
June 18th, 2019 12:42 - Let’s Call That Day a Week (Neville)
All those things we\'ve talked about in our lives with so many. The more...
June 18th, 2019 12:40 - MY STAFF (Michael Edwards)
The essential staff for life yes. Great thought expressed, great...
June 18th, 2019 12:35 - Stop.. (Cynthia)
Gave me a good fun laugh. I love your drama,
June 17th, 2019 16:44 - I am no where near ready to die. (WildMoonChild)
You certainly can write from empathy.
June 17th, 2019 11:11 - Yours, Truly (SerenWise)
Quite lovely. Just be careful not to stifle.
June 17th, 2019 11:02 - Free Men (CindyB)
What an incredible tapestry of mystery you have embroidered into the night...
June 17th, 2019 10:29 - another poem about sadness and pastries (Abora)
I am picturing you writing this in a pleasant whiskey augmented aura when...
June 17th, 2019 10:19 - Ageless Advocate (Orchidee)
In my mirror today i saw your title - an \"ageing avocado\".
and i...
June 17th, 2019 10:14 - Worthy (Sylviasearcher)
The spirit which brought the essence of these thoughts to you is your...
June 17th, 2019 10:09
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