Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• A Conversation with Self (Suresh) There you go Suresh.... that christian \'fear\' instilled in you as a...
  July 5th, 2019 11:09
• Favourable Fearing (Orchidee) I can\'t get past the first line here..... so your religion is built upon...
  July 5th, 2019 04:00
• But Worse Than That. (Goldfinch60) Isn\'t this a story for us all as we age my friend. We lose the things...
  July 5th, 2019 02:40
• Rant or opinion it\'s my dominion (Poetic Dan) Loved that video Dan. Whatever you chose or deny as a palliative or drug...
  July 4th, 2019 09:47
• Strange Friend. (Goldfinch60) Yep, even in the cold war Sting voiced \"I hope the Russians love their...
  July 4th, 2019 09:37
• FROM COMMENTS (4) (Michael Edwards) If you really could be tunefully farty Could you compete with Eric...
  July 4th, 2019 09:31
• Shelf-life (Suresh) You\'re right, i\'m ready to get off this shelf but i think i\'d like the...
  July 4th, 2019 04:29
• What could I learn (Poetic Dan) I rekkon it\'s a healthy thing to keep asking questions of ones-self and...
  July 3rd, 2019 10:56
• PRECIOUS. (Fay Slimm.) I have a son of forty years of whom i am so very proud... it is a joy to...
  July 3rd, 2019 05:27
• The First Move. (Goldfinch60) This is a very fine piece indeed Goldfinch. There are those who choose...
  July 3rd, 2019 05:22
• WHEN I WERE YOUNG (Michael Edwards) When i wo\' young, on a cold night me dad would suck a peppermint and...
  July 3rd, 2019 05:18
• Looking Just to See (Neville) I\'m sure Orchidee will be really pleased with this piece about his...
  July 3rd, 2019 05:15
• I dedicate these thoughts (Poetic Dan) I echo all the comments from others here today Dan. Ahead are some trying...
  July 3rd, 2019 05:11
• FROM the New World! (Goldfinch60) Your pedant-manship has an olde-worlde beauty to it here LOL
  July 2nd, 2019 03:07
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (15 and 16) (Michael Edwards) I\'m glad you have stopped lifting shops.. and now.... maybies (ha ha ha)...
  July 2nd, 2019 01:26
• A Temple is desecrated (Suresh) Desecration abounds, when man creates a religion to gain power to take...
  July 2nd, 2019 01:22
• All it took (Poetic Dan) \"I once was lost but now am found, was blind but now i see\" How...
  June 25th, 2019 04:01
• FERTILITY. (Fay Slimm.) Oh that you were my Biology teacher all those years ago! Maybe i would...
  June 25th, 2019 03:53
• Best Before See Date (Neville) Thats the stuff dreams are dreamed in. A somehow distant \'cotton wooley\'...
  June 25th, 2019 03:46
• Tears And Joys (Orchidee) I like this fantasy stuff, are you competing with my Elspenore?
  June 25th, 2019 03:37
• Art into Words. (Goldfinch60) Someone else reading your appraisal here could say that it is a rather...
  June 25th, 2019 03:28
• Fear Spreads...But So Does Love (Nafis Light) I\'d plumb for hope in answer to your well versed question. Positive hope...
  June 25th, 2019 03:22
• Let the spirit of your will drive your hope (Poetic Dan) \"some people find that it\'s easier to hate than to wait anymore\"..... ...
  June 24th, 2019 10:13
• Will I ever? (Sylviasearcher) This laying bare ones frailty and superbly written. You excel here. I feel...
  June 24th, 2019 10:03
• There Are No Graves (Neville) I knew this was Auschwitz as soon as i began to read it. No there are no...
  June 24th, 2019 07:59
• UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.) Lots of loving wrote this today... it shines out. Beautiful times...
  June 24th, 2019 07:48
• Miracles Exist. (Goldfinch60) OMG u ironed the socks. I hope you didn\'t get steamed up writing this....
  June 24th, 2019 07:45
• THE MINIMALIST MANTRA (Michael Edwards) OK how much cutlery do you keep? how many glasses..... how many socks...
  June 24th, 2019 07:39
• Ache (Neville) Aches which nag you and only time will heal are the weight of life\'s...
  June 24th, 2019 07:36
• Praise Proclaiming (Orchidee) If the god of love were capable of such wrath as your first verse contains...
  June 23rd, 2019 09:03
• My Spirit. (Goldfinch60) Absolutely!!! You dont have to be a victim of some man made...
  June 23rd, 2019 09:01
• TIME ALONE (Michael Edwards) I love this Michael but you tied me in knots. I\'m still trying to get...
  June 23rd, 2019 08:56
• Space For Grace (Orchidee) re first verse..... and if/when he comes...just how does that happen.......
  June 22nd, 2019 18:05
• Space For Grace (Orchidee) re first verse..... and if/when he comes...just how does that happen.......
  June 22nd, 2019 14:38
• Untitled - XX (Suresh) Many a piece published on MPS has been lubricated by teardrops. The most...
  June 22nd, 2019 13:40
• Keep going (Poetic Dan) Oi!! thats cheating! This is one you wrote a while ago.... the idea was...
  June 22nd, 2019 13:35
• Word Choice. (Goldfinch60) Now look what you have done... was that the right way to start off? You...
  June 22nd, 2019 13:33
• MY VILLAGE (Michael Edwards) U made i larff. Yes we could take up Goldfinch\'s suggestion and take it...
  June 22nd, 2019 13:31
• If you come across (Poetic Dan) OK i\'m gonna change the subject for u. Have a week off and dont write...
  June 21st, 2019 12:12
• Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5) (Orchidee) Where is this above place then?
  June 21st, 2019 12:06
• THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (2) (Michael Edwards) They\'re not on their own there. Ifor wun fynd smore diffickult spelin...
  June 21st, 2019 12:05
• Modesty? Moi? (Goldfinch60) How far do you travel to find a milliner who can handle your requirements?
  June 21st, 2019 11:59
• Old Sea Walls (Neville) Aaaah dear old skeggy of yesteryear when the slot machies took 1d which...
  June 21st, 2019 11:56
• Life Before Bar-codes (Neville) Before double yellow lines, before we got old, before cashpoints and self...
  June 20th, 2019 08:06
• Blessed or cursed in giving all my worth (Poetic Dan) Positivity wins every time - well done.
  June 20th, 2019 08:04
• Remembrance Recollections (Orchidee) Come on Orchidee, fess-up, what is this you need forgiving for?
  June 20th, 2019 07:56
• Life\'s Choices. (Goldfinch60) Nil illegitimus carborundum innit. Or from \'The Life of Brian\' - Always...
  June 20th, 2019 07:52
• THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (Michael Edwards) For some poetry is art. For some a poet is a boring old fart. For me, i\'m...
  June 20th, 2019 07:46
• Erigeron (Neville) Hardy little bloomers - it still feels like winter here.
  June 19th, 2019 14:13
• In shock (Poetic Dan) Dan, do the important stuff at times like this.
  June 19th, 2019 14:05
• EARTH (Michael Edwards) I grabbed a clod and shook the sod off. Provider of big holes for the...
  June 19th, 2019 01:34
• Word Struggle. (Goldfinch60) Do you pronounce themetal aloominum or al-you-min-ium. I had a technical...
  June 19th, 2019 01:30
• Fret Not To Do Evil (Orchidee) You know what, i wish it would happen.
  June 18th, 2019 12:44
• Past and Future - Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Love of life and love of the beauty all around us is a reward for being...
  June 18th, 2019 12:42
• Let’s Call That Day a Week (Neville) All those things we\'ve talked about in our lives with so many. The more...
  June 18th, 2019 12:40
• MY STAFF (Michael Edwards) The essential staff for life yes. Great thought expressed, great...
  June 18th, 2019 12:35
• Stop.. (Cynthia) Gave me a good fun laugh. I love your drama,
  June 17th, 2019 16:44
• I am no where near ready to die. (WildMoonChild) You certainly can write from empathy.
  June 17th, 2019 11:11
• Yours, Truly (SerenWise) Quite lovely. Just be careful not to stifle.
  June 17th, 2019 11:02
• Free Men (CindyB) What an incredible tapestry of mystery you have embroidered into the night...
  June 17th, 2019 10:29
• another poem about sadness and pastries (Abora) I am picturing you writing this in a pleasant whiskey augmented aura when...
  June 17th, 2019 10:19
• Ageless Advocate (Orchidee) In my mirror today i saw your title - an \"ageing avocado\". and i...
  June 17th, 2019 10:14
• Worthy (Sylviasearcher) The spirit which brought the essence of these thoughts to you is your...
  June 17th, 2019 10:09
• My Forgotten Life. (Camille) Very powerful writing. Enough to make every reader thoughful about what...
  June 17th, 2019 10:00
• Out of Sight (Neville) Were we all able to read each others thoughts then your writing would be...
  June 17th, 2019 05:50
• Again & Again (Poetic Dan) Quote:- Work is love made visible. And if you cannot work with love but...
  June 17th, 2019 05:46
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (13) (Michael Edwards) And when his python head arrives we shall all chant \" Nice to see you -...
  June 17th, 2019 05:39
• Hitchhikers Guide. (Goldfinch60) Hmmm hitch hikers.... i\'m reluctant. You just dont know what you are...
  June 17th, 2019 05:35
• Crash & burn (Poetic Dan) Life brings unexpected challenges, disappointments, and mistakes. Without...
  June 16th, 2019 18:26
• Out of the Blue (Neville) I\'ll quote some famous words to respond to your fine sweet and sour words...
  June 16th, 2019 08:59
• Tuneful Times (Orchidee) LOL praise him all u like .... he won\'t hear u Orchidee.
  June 16th, 2019 03:02
• Lady Lost. (Goldfinch60) There you go Goldfinch. You know already that the church will just dance...
  June 16th, 2019 01:45
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (12) (Michael Edwards) Charts don\'t do anything. Farts can do lots. Take that as definite...
  June 16th, 2019 01:39
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (12) (Michael Edwards) Charts don\'t do anything. Farts can do lots. Take that as definite...
  June 16th, 2019 01:19
• Make a long story short (Dls2012) Welcome to MPS. We are all kinds of poets. Some seem to have to write...
  June 15th, 2019 21:00
• Dear Children. (Kevin browne) shall we know peace when she comes this stranger to our land will...
  June 15th, 2019 11:32
• Old Poets (Neville) Life - a history lesson. Without a history, whats to write...
  June 15th, 2019 10:56
• Giving Glory (Orchidee) you you could could have have said said all all that that in in just just...
  June 15th, 2019 10:54
• Imagination Managing. (Goldfinch60) Amazing virtuoso piece and soooo long. Truly proving he is a master of...
  June 15th, 2019 10:51
• Before I Go Blind (Neville) But have u ever dabbled in the rings of saturn? Or the perverse pleasures...
  June 14th, 2019 10:58
• SEDUCTION. (Fay Slimm.) No escape desired or planned.... drown me.
  June 14th, 2019 10:54
• Faith Controls The Tongue - James Series (4) (Orchidee) Jeez u dont half use some weird grammar Orchidee.
  June 14th, 2019 10:52
• That Wonderful Place. (Goldfinch60) This is such an uplifting read coming from you in your circumstance. You...
  June 14th, 2019 10:49
• Persistence is a fun key (Poetic Dan) The crocodile snapped at Dan\'s feet But crafty Dan was way out of...
  June 14th, 2019 10:41
• So So Bad - \\\\\\\"Lane\\\\\\\" (So So Bad Official) Sounds like a shy kid, afraid of the microphone, mumbling in the...
  June 13th, 2019 15:27
• If Ever I Get A Girl Again. (Kevin browne) I wasn\'t sure where this was going but i enjoyed those twists and turns,...
  June 13th, 2019 12:42
• Forever (Lulu Boatwright) Lovely tribute to a missed someone special. May i politely suggest that...
  June 13th, 2019 07:17
• The Earthworm and Caterpillar (Jenny Wren) Hmmm surprisingly sad ending. I thought i was reading a joyful piece ideal...
  June 13th, 2019 07:11
• WE. (Fay Slimm.) Eyyup lass, tha\'s nailed eet wi words as teks me back tuh when dad bort...
  June 13th, 2019 07:06
• I\'ve seen (Poetic Dan) For mid June theres too many flippin showers.. and its too cold! Are...
  June 13th, 2019 06:59
• Zeal For Zion (Orchidee) What does this lord bloke do up there on his mountain... control...
  June 13th, 2019 06:55
• Transported from Reality. (Goldfinch60) Vincent\'s work can take me places with little doubt. Music is...
  June 13th, 2019 06:49
• Once an Item (Neville) The great things about memories are that they are stuff you did not stuff...
  June 13th, 2019 06:41
• ESTEEM. (Fay Slimm.) Your wonderful first verse here says it all for me.
  June 12th, 2019 02:37
• Who Am I - FIBS. (Goldfinch60) I am beside myself with admiration who is an old pal from way back when i...
  June 12th, 2019 02:36
• On Being Human (Neville) A lesson well presented. I hope it\'s taken on board. We are very...
  June 12th, 2019 02:33
• I am.... (Poetic Dan) Yep! nuff said?
  June 12th, 2019 02:29
• Shadows (Suresh) The measure of any man will not be the wealth or status he achieved. A man...
  June 12th, 2019 02:27
• Feels Like It\'s Been A While (Nafis Light) Uplifting.
  June 11th, 2019 16:51
• Runner Beans (Classicmister) Very enjoyable. Enjoy those beans.
  June 11th, 2019 16:44