Comments on community poems by Shadowbox15

• Buried secrets (SilverXball) This is precisely the reason I write poetry. Because paper can handle my...
  June 2nd, 2018 13:47
• Butterflies (Evie.36) \"For those butterflies with more than a pretty façade.\" What...
  June 1st, 2018 19:14
• Trial (Christina8) Such a beautiful story of repentance.
  March 6th, 2018 14:16
• A Letter To The Prison (ForeverJesus7) I think that you wrote a very sweet poem. Everyone needs to take...
  February 26th, 2018 12:50
• Ingestion (Aislinn Wilson) Fascinating piece of writing! Had you not mentioned that it was a dream, I...
  January 29th, 2018 17:14
• A TEDDY BEAR IS ~ BETTER THAN A MAN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I liked how you said that you always buy your dates a teddy bear, in case...
  January 27th, 2018 14:50
• ME ~ SLAM POET (BRIAN & ANGELA) First of all: WOW. I never knew that the Sonnet-master could...
  January 25th, 2018 14:00
• LIQUOR AND LOVE LOST (Bradwerd) Beautiful and melancholic.
  January 24th, 2018 21:34
• Black Lives Matter (Malayzia) Equality for ALL!!!
  January 24th, 2018 21:25
• You Matter (SorrowfullyHappy) Thank you. I’ve got a huge math test tomorrow. I really needed this.
  January 23rd, 2018 16:30
• Determined, Alone (Jessie) Powerful.
  January 15th, 2018 11:45
• \"PROPITIATION\" (Andrew Guzaldo) Beautiful.
  January 9th, 2018 18:04
• To the guy who broke my heart (ZeroAnnJone) Hate-reading isn’t helpful. Hate-anything isn’t helpful. Outback may...
  January 8th, 2018 18:20
• \"PASSIONATELY\" (Andrew Guzaldo) Very emotive.
  January 8th, 2018 18:07
• Abuse #1 (KR) 😱 Wow. Chivalry’s not only dead, it’s being mocked and tortured in...
  January 6th, 2018 23:55
• Blank Page (DeviLove) 😂 You literally wrote a poem on how you couldn’t write a poem.
  January 6th, 2018 21:16
• \"ENDLESS SKIES ABOVE\" (Andrew Guzaldo) I can’t tell if this is about a long-distance realationship or simply a...
  January 6th, 2018 18:20
• Hopeless Romantic (RebeccaRose.x) 😊❤️
  January 6th, 2018 14:29
• WHO CREATED THE ROSE ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) “How can I make it?-the gardeners cry.” That was brilliant. I enjoy...
  January 6th, 2018 13:46
• HOW TO READ A POEM ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) I can do rhyme and reason. Rhythm is tricky though!
  January 6th, 2018 13:38
• Running Girl (Jessie) Well written and expressed. I almost cried.
  January 6th, 2018 13:37
• What A Smile (Harsbars12281953) 😁
  January 6th, 2018 13:35
• Light Bulb (Josh chamberlain) 🤩
  January 6th, 2018 13:34
• A no answer machine (Aa Harvey) 😢
  January 6th, 2018 13:33
• Insides (M.E.M.) It’s beautiful, but I’m struggling to figure out why you put in...
  January 4th, 2018 15:44
• Suicide Survivors (W c) That was quite thought-provoking. Made me cry. Good job.
  January 2nd, 2018 13:27
• Past the Realms of Nature’s Shires (DuKord) Stunning.
  January 2nd, 2018 12:40
• Soft (WL Schuett) Beautiful imagery
  January 1st, 2018 12:28
• Self love 101 (Aylissadanielle) Wow.
  January 1st, 2018 12:23
• \" Cards I was Dealt\" (Andrew Guzaldo) Yep. Love is indeed a gamble. You can either hit the jackpot, or lose...
  December 30th, 2017 12:56
• WORDS & ORIGINS 4 P Q R S T (BRIAN & ANGELA) I’m playing scrabble this weekend! What fortunate timing I’ve come...
  December 30th, 2017 12:53
• Steamy (Christina8) I think the room just got warmer... ~Never mind! That’s just me reading...
  December 30th, 2017 12:49
• Prince Of A Cat - Ninth Life Long Since Spent (Rew4er2nail) Awww!
  December 30th, 2017 12:46
• WORDS & ORIGINS - U V W X Y Z (BRIAN & ANGELA) My first language is English, but I enjoy writing poetry in French. Can I...
  December 30th, 2017 12:39
• Under Water (Jayce Elliot) “I’m glass and everything you do makes me bubbly.” I know the...
  December 30th, 2017 12:24
• after math thoughts (Clark) Brilliantly written.
  December 28th, 2017 22:49
• TO PEOPLE THAT THINK CALLING GIRLS NAMES IS OKAY (Toby Hart) You misspelled your title. It should be “TO PEOPLE who think calling...
  December 27th, 2017 19:13
• Dans la mort de la nuit (Tristan Robert Lange) Why are you using plural? Also “mort” is masculine.
  December 27th, 2017 12:01
• Cry Wolf. (Wallace) I’m sorry, but what are you trying to get across? I don’t understand.
  December 27th, 2017 11:58
• THE PAIN OF REJECTION (Michael Edwards) That’s a lot of feeling thrust into those few stanzas. Well done.
  December 27th, 2017 10:49
• Inner Fire (Poetessdarkly) That’s a beautiful message.
  December 27th, 2017 10:47
• My Fantasyland (Nat Muñoz) This is what the 18+ button was for.
  December 27th, 2017 10:45
• Who Knew (Abigail Shiels) Very true. Well done.
  December 27th, 2017 10:43
• Twilight (Poetessdarkly) I love the darkness lurking in your poetry. Well done.
  December 26th, 2017 13:14
• CARDINAL ~ BIRD OF JOY ! HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA) That’s a very beautiful bird, Brian. I love the red colour you used to...
  December 23rd, 2017 13:19
• The Devil Said Be Careful (Edthepoet) Wow
  December 23rd, 2017 13:17
• Mistakes (Stephenfairfax) Wow. How did you know what I wanted to ask my ex?
  December 19th, 2017 12:50
• Bingle Jells (Accidental Poet) I\'m not sure even I\'M dark enough to turn jolly st. nick into that kooky...
  December 19th, 2017 11:50
• \"Haunted Hope\" (Merissa) I love the stair-like format of the poem. \"Fearing karma\'s curse\" is...
  December 19th, 2017 11:46
• Sinner (Eowyn) Excellent write. ~Shadow
  December 19th, 2017 11:36
• It was just a little scratch (Willow_Wander) Powerful writing there. I love the way you compare mental illness with...
  December 19th, 2017 11:35
• TEN COLLECTIVE NOUNS FOR PROFESSIONS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine write Brian. But your reference to porridge has made me hungry.
  December 19th, 2017 07:56
• A Wilting Rose (BLFV) How does the title relate to the poem?
  December 18th, 2017 23:13
• Delusions of the Cave (Olivergreenwood19) Chilling. Well done.
  December 18th, 2017 22:50
• H.A.T.E. (Eyeamsoule) I quite enjoyed it. I loved the way that you seperated the sentence with...
  December 18th, 2017 22:07
• ENDURE (Andrew Guzaldo) Pretty good.
  December 18th, 2017 22:03
• Killing spree (Dantae) Wow. All really is fair in love and war.
  December 18th, 2017 21:28
• TEN COLLECTIVE NOUNS FOR ANIMALS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) You forgot a Murder of crows. Always a delight to read, Brian.
  December 18th, 2017 12:57
• now (Sugar Suicide) Hello darkness, my old friend.
  December 17th, 2017 16:18
• SNOWBALLS ! A Contour Mirror Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Beautiful Chiasmus.
  December 17th, 2017 16:17
• My Brave (Katelynn) Finally.
  December 17th, 2017 16:12
• LOVE IS ~ SENSUAL ! A 3 3 3 3 2 Sonnet. (BRIAN & ANGELA) Lovely write.
  December 17th, 2017 16:10
• YOU ARE A TREE ! A 7 7 Blank Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) That was a lovely poem. Reminded me of a scripture story, one of my...
  December 10th, 2017 10:02
• FRUSTRATED (Kennedy Rose) An interesting perspective on frustration! I love the use of the word...
  December 10th, 2017 09:33
• Make Up For The Love (Its Raskolnikov) That would make a good rap. Very fast paced, and a very a nice rhythm....
  December 4th, 2017 19:24
• Two Sides to the Blade (Darthvisa) That’s okay! Bad grammar is common for new writers. I suggest reading it...
  December 4th, 2017 19:21
• () Beautiful imagery as always Diamond.
  December 4th, 2017 16:52
• the past is dead (Sugar Suicide) Such a pretty poem! Keep it up Sugar!
  December 4th, 2017 16:43
• Poetry is in your DNA (Mottakeenur Rehman) Lovely Poem. Keep up the good work.
  December 4th, 2017 11:51
• Turmoil! (Malctg) That sounds like a terrible world! No animals?! Starvation?!! All...
  November 30th, 2017 15:14
• Upset (Sugar Suicide) Ouch.
  November 28th, 2017 16:44
• Not the Problem (MissileOfUncertainty) 😢
  November 27th, 2017 18:44
• MY SWEET ANGEL ~ FALLEN FROM GRACE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Lovely poem. I enjoy the imagery.
  November 25th, 2017 15:21
• If Dogs Could Get Married (Shadowbox15) My parents think that I should make this a children’s book. Any
  November 24th, 2017 23:36
• Is this love? (QuietPoetInTheCorner) Aww. So sweet!
  November 24th, 2017 20:07
• Fatal Hope (PoetessKrys) A wise woman once said \"It\'s better to give me a harsh reality than...
  November 23rd, 2017 12:27
• Gambling Myself Away (Shadowbox15) Thank you all for your appreciation.
  November 22nd, 2017 19:22
• The man who wants to be heard. (Z) It\'s true that the way to fix a situation is through understanding...
  November 20th, 2017 13:21
• Conversations with the Universe (Poemsbyliz) They go to me. I get thoughts like those at random moments within the day.
  November 20th, 2017 13:18
• Deadly Lie (Alex Arnot) Interesting outlook on heartbreak.
  November 20th, 2017 13:17
• Lovely Storms (Katelynn) The imagery’s pretty.
  November 16th, 2017 20:08
• What is wrong with me? (Birddie Jane) That was a beautifully written poem. I enjoy the self-reflection within,...
  November 16th, 2017 20:06
• FIVE SEASONAL HAIKU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Buenas Noches Brian. Yo me gusta el haiku de invierno. I like the plot...
  November 15th, 2017 21:30
• Talented colors (Katelynn) Reflection of society! “I wish I had the talent to show or paint the way...
  November 15th, 2017 21:23
• I’m Just An E c h o (ElenaGrace) That was a wonderful poem. But, if you could use a bit more repetition to...
  November 15th, 2017 21:19
• A N G E L A ~ Country Girl ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Your Angela sounds Angelic (lol)!
  November 15th, 2017 17:53
• A Beautiful Dream come True (Chalierif) I’m gonna cry. That struck a chord.
  November 15th, 2017 17:44
• \"Cupid Missed\" (Dopeitscliff) I appreciate the honesty in this poem. It shows how not all of us are the...
  November 15th, 2017 12:54
• Fragile Heart (Writings From The Unknown13) That\'s such a sweet message.
  November 15th, 2017 10:58
• Walk the Road Before You (HChristian74) Interesting perspective on growing up. I liked the phrase “bask before...
  November 14th, 2017 22:16
• 11/17 (Beckii) Miss Rebecca B. I love your story of breaking free.
  November 14th, 2017 21:52
• You Have Me (Brie) Marvelous poem. The use of language was exquisite!
  November 14th, 2017 21:48
• You told me (_le.hp) You told me Is a wonderful title as it is. It’s catchy, and describes...
  November 14th, 2017 20:43
• You told me (_le.hp) Helloo Levi! I really enjoyed your poem! It was well explained and I loved...
  November 14th, 2017 20:39
• AROMATHERAPY ~ OK (BRIAN & ANGELA) I really enjoyed this poem. It reminded me of when my grandma gave me...
  November 14th, 2017 20:20
• THE JUNGLE IN THE MEDIA (Chellybelly) You did AWESOME!! I’m very proud of you.
  November 14th, 2017 20:12
• Leave, Leave, Leave (Cesi) Thank you for the message. It was a well written poem, and I hope that...
  November 14th, 2017 20:10
• Sleep my darling (Wordsofflorence) I love it!
  November 14th, 2017 20:07
• .Simple Love. (Overtheedge) Aww. That’s such a sweet message. So cute!
  November 14th, 2017 20:06
• Me & The Dragon (LukeCoomer) Is the dragon symbolic?
  November 14th, 2017 17:46