Comments on community poems by WriteBeLight

• Man in Orange. (Goldfinch60) Maybe he should cut out all of that orange juice! Very citrusy write...
  August 8th, 2017 08:20
• It\'s Not All About Me (Edward Charles McDevitt) Nice Edward. Hope all of your days are filled with poetic ideas to write...
  August 8th, 2017 08:18
• The Beginning More Important.... (Kurt Philip Behm) Good post Kurt. Each line is so true, and to steal words from that...
  August 8th, 2017 08:16
• So Much. (Fay Slimm.) I love flowers, especially Sunflowers. Very bright, fresh and cheery work...
  August 8th, 2017 08:00
• wild horses (Heather T) Very lovely. Like how the words flow.
  August 7th, 2017 12:21
• Forever Friends (Edward Charles McDevitt) When you lend money to family or friends, you should never expect to get...
  August 7th, 2017 11:56
• A Loving You (Edward Charles McDevitt) It is nice to have a relationship so dear. Nice job.
  August 7th, 2017 11:53
• Loneliness (Bibbeck) Very poignant!
  August 7th, 2017 09:28
• Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating. (Goldfinch60) Love the beginning, in particular.
  August 7th, 2017 09:26
• Nature Numinous (Orchidee) Colorful work orchidee!
  August 7th, 2017 09:24
• A FEW COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) Very interesting!
  August 7th, 2017 09:23
• OUR LIFE\'S MELODY (Louis Gibbs) Beautiful!
  August 7th, 2017 09:20
• Hats Off. (Fay Slimm.) They do work hard, an not always in the best of weather! Nice Fay.
  August 7th, 2017 09:17
• Autumnal (Bibbeck) I used to not enjoy the Fall and Winter, but your poem reminds me how much...
  August 6th, 2017 10:15
• I want to run to you.... (Rrodriguez) Wow! I feel the want and desire of the writer! Great work!
  August 6th, 2017 10:08
• LIMERICK No40 (Michael Edwards) HA HA Great humor and ART!
  August 6th, 2017 10:04
• Healing Helps (Orchidee) Very, very uplifting!
  August 6th, 2017 09:58
• Last Flight (FredPeyer) Very thought provoking. Thanks and I hope you can get caught up. I can...
  August 6th, 2017 09:56
• Midnight Owl (Its Raskolnikov) Who Who! I love owls! Great job on this. You are very wise :)
  August 5th, 2017 09:14
• SHE SLEPT IN RESTFUL PEACE (Michael Edwards) I feel sleepy! :) Nice Michael.
  August 5th, 2017 09:13
• Cleansing Rain. (Goldfinch60) I would agree! Very cleansing Goldfinch!
  August 5th, 2017 09:11
• Never (FredPeyer) So sorry about your regrets. But, I guess they are just part of life and...
  August 5th, 2017 09:09
• Too Long. (Fay Slimm.) Hope it stops raining! I agree that too much rain in one\'s life can do us...
  August 5th, 2017 09:07
• My MPS friends (Christina8) Hope all settles down kiddo! Great write.
  August 5th, 2017 08:56
• GRANDFATHERS (Louis Gibbs) Great job Louis. Lot of imagery.
  August 4th, 2017 12:33
• SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Adds up to a great one Brian.
  August 4th, 2017 12:31
• Not A Doubt. (Fay Slimm.) Such elegance, Fay!
  August 4th, 2017 12:31
• Degermanation/ Melted (Whisperingquill) Such intellectual talent here!
  August 4th, 2017 12:27
• DROWNED IN SORROW (Michael Edwards) Two whoop, whoops, Michael! Very deep, no pun intended! Perfect painting...
  August 4th, 2017 08:31
• Flawed Paradigm (Noquarter4) Great twist. You touch on a very difficult topic so very well and with...
  August 3rd, 2017 16:01
• Cutting Free. (Fay Slimm.) Love it Fay, in particular the very first line! My feelings exactly!
  August 3rd, 2017 12:38
• Twenty four of darkness.... (P.H.Rose) Incredible PH! Great expression of your feelings and experience. Don\'t...
  August 3rd, 2017 12:36
• THE SMILING DIED (Michael Edwards) Poignant Michael. Beautiful drawing too.
  August 3rd, 2017 12:30
• Class Reunion (FredPeyer) Those are tough events. Good news and sad news. But, still something you...
  August 3rd, 2017 12:25
• Cook (Tony36) Great job Tony!
  August 3rd, 2017 12:23
• Sentiments It Found. (Kevin browne) Great flowing style you have Kevin!
  August 3rd, 2017 12:23
• Come With Me (Its Raskolnikov) Very well done!
  August 3rd, 2017 12:20
• Sincere Serving (Orchidee) You are so talented. Great job!
  August 3rd, 2017 10:51
• MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP (BRIAN & ANGELA) Thanks for that Brian!
  August 2nd, 2017 06:12
• More Than. (Fay Slimm.) Wonderful images, here Fay, with wonderful words!
  August 2nd, 2017 06:12
• 3 ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) Ha Ha. Very clever. Great art, as well.
  August 2nd, 2017 06:11
• My Motorcycle (FredPeyer) Great tribute Fred. Great ride!
  August 2nd, 2017 06:10
• On the Bus (FredPeyer) That is pretty darn good! Although poignant. Love how you put that he...
  August 1st, 2017 12:29
• song of the hollow house (Heather T) Very visual and so eloquent.
  August 1st, 2017 12:05
• THREE SENRYUS (Michael Edwards) Touching.
  August 1st, 2017 11:25
• Searching Through Stillness (Augustus) Hey Augustus! YOU are our MUSE! :)
  August 1st, 2017 09:20
• Memories revisited... (P.H.Rose) Love it PH. Very visual as well. Feel better my great poet friend!
  August 1st, 2017 09:16
• I can\'t wait to be an old man (Quemis) Pretty deep Psentinel, but enjoy the ride in the meantime :)
  August 1st, 2017 08:08
• AUGUSTUS (Louis Gibbs) I do not know. He is a tough one. I think of him always. Thanks for...
  August 1st, 2017 07:56
• foolish heart (Heather T) Hey Heather T. I haven\'t been on the site for awhile. Busy summer. I am...
  July 31st, 2017 13:18
• The Foley (Augustus) Sometimes you just have no choice and have to let it all hang out. Great...
  May 30th, 2017 09:19
• Having Self consciousness and Self doubt (P.H.Rose) Many can relate P.H. Great subject and work.
  May 30th, 2017 09:15
• THE ICE CREAM MAN ~ A SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA) I remember the sherbet cones that had a surprise figure on the top of the...
  May 29th, 2017 09:32
• The Church of No Thanks. (Goldfinch60) I offer my thanks to you for your faithful service! And, I agree. They...
  May 29th, 2017 09:28
• My Opposing twin within.... (P.H.Rose) You did such a deep and meaningful job with this P.H. Really hit the mark...
  May 29th, 2017 09:26
• Doubt to my Friend ? (Rajkumar) Great question and answers!
  May 29th, 2017 09:24
• Joy of Desolation (Swingline) Great imagery swingline!
  May 29th, 2017 09:23
• DISCHORDANCE (Louis Gibbs) Such a sweet and loving poem Louis!
  May 29th, 2017 09:21
• Alcohol\'s next day... (P.H.Rose) Great subject matter P.H.! You put it down in a very classy way.
  May 27th, 2017 13:55
• WHY DO THEY DO IT? (Michael Edwards) Great write about the frustration Michael. We pay so very much to relax...
  May 27th, 2017 13:52
• On the Nature of Daylight. (Goldfinch60) Written by a man who truly loves music!
  May 27th, 2017 13:50
• Swings (Augustus) Love the picture you chose. Makes me think of your poem in that what could...
  May 27th, 2017 13:44
• Emotional Precipitation (Swingline) Excellent swingline!
  May 26th, 2017 08:53
• THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR (Michael Edwards) Deep and dark Michael.
  May 26th, 2017 08:09
• Nam (Augustus) Excellent work Augustus! You will stir many a soul with this one. You...
  May 26th, 2017 08:05
• Who Is God ? (Swingline) Very beautiful and wonderful write swingline!
  May 23rd, 2017 13:28
• LIMMERICK 29 (Michael Edwards) That one \"cracked\" me up Michael! Ha Ha
  May 23rd, 2017 13:27
• The Bubble. (Goldfinch60) My heart goes out to you Goldfinch!
  May 23rd, 2017 13:26
• Words as I fall asleep... (P.H.Rose) Very poignant poem P.H. It is really thought provoking. I wish you sweeter...
  May 23rd, 2017 13:25
• Watery Secrets. (Fay Slimm.) So beautiful, once again dear poet friend Fay!
  May 23rd, 2017 13:24
• SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet) (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great tribute and points made here Dear Brian relative to this horrible...
  May 23rd, 2017 13:21
• Rogation Wednesday (Orchidee) Great one orchidee!
  May 23rd, 2017 13:18
• Muse Calling (Augustus) Such a great approach to something all writers dread. Great job Augustus....
  May 23rd, 2017 13:05
• The Forge (Augustus) I can relate. There are things I miss, as well, as children and family and...
  May 22nd, 2017 18:14
• THE CLOAK I WEAR (Michael Edwards) I feel the struggle Michael. Great poem.
  May 22nd, 2017 18:11
• Struggle to Nobility. (Goldfinch60) It is hard to always try to improve everyday, but your message is correct!
  May 22nd, 2017 18:09
• After Today. (Fay Slimm.) Very positive message Fay!
  May 22nd, 2017 18:08
• Cook (Tony36) Delicious Tony!
  May 22nd, 2017 18:07
• For Augustus (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful Kurt! Such a wonderful man Augustus is and so kind of you to...
  May 22nd, 2017 18:04
• today is my birthday (Avigail) I wish you the most happiest of Birthdays Avigail! Great poetry, as well!
  May 22nd, 2017 17:59
• Withering Lows (Swingline) Reality finally sunk in, I guess. Great story swingline.
  May 18th, 2017 05:26
• SCOTLANDS INDEPENDENCE (Michael Edwards) It is man\'s and woman\'s desire to be free to have real independence. I...
  May 18th, 2017 05:24
• First new day.... (P.H.Rose) Nice work P.H.
  May 18th, 2017 05:21
• PATIENCE ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Not enough patience in the world Brian. Nice reminder.
  May 18th, 2017 05:20
• HIS NAME NOT HANDED DOWN (Michael Edwards) Like the heart\'s unconscious calling line Michael.
  May 17th, 2017 11:58
• Incoming. (Fay Slimm.) Just how I felt this morning Fay!
  May 17th, 2017 11:56
• Reflections in My Life. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful Goldfinch.
  May 17th, 2017 11:56
• Jimena and El Cid (Swingline) Very nicely done!
  May 17th, 2017 11:55
• Ode to Peanut Butter (Mandi) Quite a tribute to the stuff that is so well known around the world!
  May 17th, 2017 11:54
• for a very special friend (Nicolerobinson) Great write!
  May 17th, 2017 11:51
• Fear of cowardice (P.H.Rose) I will have to look it up P.H. :)
  May 17th, 2017 11:50
• The Candle (Gary Edward Geraci) Lovely :)
  May 17th, 2017 11:49
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (Michael Edwards) Poem and picture work so well together!
  May 17th, 2017 11:49
• The Innocence of Pens. (Goldfinch60) Kind of like a metaphor in a way, Goldfinch. People like to point the...
  May 17th, 2017 11:46
• Removed my rose tinted glasses (P.H.Rose) I can relate to this very much P.H. True friends are the confidants in...
  May 17th, 2017 11:44
• PEANUT BUTTER OK ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great one Brian.
  May 17th, 2017 11:42
• See me now. (Mello) Very poignant Somerica.
  May 17th, 2017 11:41
• Deliverance Desirings (Orchidee) Once again a well-done work.
  May 17th, 2017 11:40
• Unsuccessful and boredom!!! (P.H.Rose) It can be the toughest thing, P.H. having to return to the grind after...
  May 15th, 2017 13:34
• Your The Sunshine In My Life. (Kevin browne) Wow! Kick ass Kevin! Covered everything but the kitchen sink :)
  May 15th, 2017 13:33