Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- My New Life. (Goldfinch60)
I can feel the emotions in this sensitive write - my thoughts are with you...
July 17th, 2019 02:16 - Witch (Sylviasearcher)
Brill write Sylvia.
July 15th, 2019 09:32 - ENGLAND ~ WORLD CRICKET CHAMPIONS 2019 ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Some match - now perhaps the programmes will get back to normal - sadly.
July 15th, 2019 09:30 - The Whimbrel (Neville)
I\'m a mixed-heritage Shag-Knott - it\'s these darn knees. Enjoyed this...
July 15th, 2019 09:28 - WINGED. (Fay Slimm.)
Flying high - great words.
July 15th, 2019 09:25 - Forgotten. (Goldfinch60)
I visit this place regularly. Often when in bed - an idea comes and...
July 15th, 2019 00:56 - A ballet (Suresh)
Really drawn in by this. The elegance of the written word reflects the...
July 15th, 2019 00:54 - Miss Me Hard (Neville)
I\'ll decline on this occasion - super little penning.
July 14th, 2019 14:40 - Quiet Love (Christina8)
A touching if somewhat enigmatic write - nice one Christina.
July 14th, 2019 14:38 - Doves. (Goldfinch60)
We are currently infested with jackdaws - not quite so bad but playing...
July 14th, 2019 14:36 - Maybe if... (Suresh)
One of the first questions I was taught in training was to ask: What if? -...
July 14th, 2019 14:33 - LANGUAGE OF ROSES ~ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 4 - 10 Free Verse Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great write and your comments made me smile.
July 13th, 2019 05:42 - I sit by me again offering a hand (Poetic Dan)
Oh you\'ll listen - I admire your resilience and your pen - keep writing...
July 13th, 2019 05:41 - Sunflowers (Neville)
Sounds like a patch of heaven - great observational write.
July 13th, 2019 05:39 - Temple Tenancy (Orchidee)
Miss Berles lives in a temple.- fine write O.
July 13th, 2019 05:38 - Smaller Mouth. (Goldfinch60)
I have similiar problems when I put things in the waste bin. for some...
July 13th, 2019 05:37 - Action (Suresh)
Super write - think I\'ll go and lie down.
July 13th, 2019 05:35 - Guilt Ridden. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m with Orchidee - such a painful read - I really don\'t know how I\'d...
July 12th, 2019 08:33 - Servitude (Suresh)
Me also keepth mine options open.
July 12th, 2019 08:02 - DREAM A LITTLE DREAM OF ME ! ANGELA ~ FOUR RHYMING QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah a great write Angela.
July 11th, 2019 11:17 - In My Spare Time (ForeverJesus7)
It might not be your best piece but it\'s still pretty darn good....
July 11th, 2019 05:55 - Chatterbox. (Goldfinch60)
They say a word in edgeways sounds lie a squeak. Nice one - I can envisage...
July 11th, 2019 05:53 - Trying Hard (Suresh)
Keep trying - very trying - nice one Suresh.
July 11th, 2019 01:38 - POP IN FOR A PIZZA ! ~ BRIAN ~ A 2 4 5 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Sounds like a great evening. I must say that whilst I enjoy a pizza I can...
July 10th, 2019 12:45 - Exposed (Suresh)
A great verse which also, mutatis mutandis, applies to the artist - one...
July 10th, 2019 07:54 - PLANNED. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderfully written, superbly expressed = as ever from your magical pen.
July 10th, 2019 07:52 - Laudable Light (Orchidee)
Nice write O
July 10th, 2019 02:19 - Two Drivers. (Goldfinch60)
Great observation and you are so good at these - much enjoyed.
July 10th, 2019 02:09 - Integrity (Poetic Dan)
Add integrity to tolerance and respect - fine work Dan
July 9th, 2019 11:19 - TENDED. (Fay Slimm.)
For a Lady deserving of love - beautiful write dear Fay.-
July 9th, 2019 06:24 - Love Is........ (Suresh)
Super write Suresh
July 9th, 2019 02:03 - Lantern Light (Orchidee)
Miss Berles love this one - I think it\'s the metre.
July 9th, 2019 01:58 - Clarity Resumed. (Goldfinch60)
Long may your river flow.
July 9th, 2019 01:57 - blue eyes (Dusk arising)
Lovely piece of verse dusk.
July 9th, 2019 01:56 - Among The Stars (Christina8)
Lovely uplifting write - much enjoyed.
July 9th, 2019 00:07 - Love Is........ (Suresh)
Hear hear, fine write Suresh.
July 8th, 2019 16:23 - LOVE ALLIGATORS ~ BRIAN ~ A 4 10 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Fantastic creatures and sorry to say I\'ve not seen them in the wild -...
July 8th, 2019 07:33 - Mindful Ministry (Orchidee)
Keep writin\' O
July 8th, 2019 02:25 - A Game of Tennis. (Goldfinch60)
Somehow the tennis of yesteryear was more watchable - I haven\'t bothered...
July 8th, 2019 02:24 - Home stretch (Poetic Dan)
This a real gem - an inspiring write.
July 7th, 2019 07:20 - Musical Brass. (Goldfinch60)
Just great - wish I\'d been with you.
July 7th, 2019 06:43 - Labours Of Love (Orchidee)
Nice one Orchi
July 7th, 2019 06:42 - Living in the Moment (Suresh)
Every day is a bonus so live for today but plan for tomorrow - well...
July 7th, 2019 00:05 - Hope To Hold To (Orchidee)
When will you be releasing that song you wrote on the battlefield?
July 6th, 2019 14:02 - Missing You. (Goldfinch60)
I know you\'ll miss her but do enjoy the break - you deserve it.
July 6th, 2019 13:57 - Greatness Gratitude (Orchidee)
Fine work O
July 4th, 2019 04:21 - Rant or opinion it\'s my dominion (Poetic Dan)
In my eyes you are a positive man and this write spells it out.
July 4th, 2019 04:20 - Strange Friend. (Goldfinch60)
Friends they may well turn out to be. When I look at someone I don\'t know...
July 4th, 2019 01:22 - Shelf-life (Suresh)
And mines getting closer - thankfully I don\'tr sit on a shelf.
July 4th, 2019 00:29 - What could I learn (Poetic Dan)
What a super philosophical write.
Your poem reminded me that one of the...
July 3rd, 2019 08:56 - PRECIOUS. (Fay Slimm.)
When I think of children I melt
When I think of my own children I\'m...
July 3rd, 2019 08:49 - Ponginess! (Orchidee)
When detected by the conk
there\'s nothing worse than unwashed ponk.
and...
July 3rd, 2019 08:45 - The First Move. (Goldfinch60)
What a true write and so many of them are the elderly who deserve not to...
July 3rd, 2019 01:26 - RIDERLESS horses (Suresh)
A ghostly read but what a great poem - love it.
July 3rd, 2019 01:24 - Looking Just to See (Neville)
Beautiful - a gentle read and my eyes (hazel) just floated across the
July 3rd, 2019 01:22 - A FINE PEAR ! ANGELA ~ FIVE BALANCED QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes such a lovely fruit - I like mine still a tad on the crunchy side but...
July 2nd, 2019 09:37 - Tomorrow Lost (Neville)
Some lovely lines. I do like The shade of absent bruise and moments shed...
July 2nd, 2019 09:34 - LEARNING. (Fay Slimm.)
We shall achieve - great write Fay.
July 2nd, 2019 09:31 - Marked (Sylviasearcher)
A well woven work - and Neville is right - you do melancholy so well - not...
July 2nd, 2019 09:30 - FROM the New World! (Goldfinch60)
And a lovely piece of music it is too. Just a shame it overshadows his...
July 2nd, 2019 01:53 - A Temple is desecrated (Suresh)
So so different and a super work - as a race why do we continually...
July 2nd, 2019 00:38 - Pershore bridge (Dusk arising)
A real beauty of a fun-write - apart from the important message it gave me...
July 2nd, 2019 00:35 - Anger (Christina8)
Teenage years can be so fraught - but they come out of it. Fine write...
July 2nd, 2019 00:30 - To Those Who Call Themselves Atheists (ForeverJesus7)
You write a great argument even though I am in total disagreement with the...
July 1st, 2019 08:27 - HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 338 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I too love ballooning - fine work B
July 1st, 2019 07:56 - Chaos Theory (Neville)
A compelling way to describe man\'s total disrespect for the planet - and...
July 1st, 2019 07:55 - CHANGE. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay invoking the glories of each day
July 1st, 2019 03:42 - No harm (Poetic Dan)
Both are wonderful insects - lovely touching write.
July 1st, 2019 03:40 - Childlike Communings (Orchidee)
May your pen be always full O.
July 1st, 2019 02:19 - Untitled - XIII (Suresh)
But the word \'IF\' is the qualifier. Does love ever leave us exposed to...
July 1st, 2019 00:30 - Bemused (Suresh)
What a super shortie - great work Suresh.
June 30th, 2019 15:37 - GOD IS EVERYWHERE ~ AMEN ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A Free Verse 6-6-2 Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I think the comments have been hi-jacked - not my belief but well written.
June 30th, 2019 09:10 - Should & Could (Poetic Dan)
Ah but it can be so
Glad I never entered the human race - never could...
June 30th, 2019 09:08 - Captivating Games (Neville)
There\'s lots of things I\'d like to be but actually I aint disappointed...
June 30th, 2019 09:06 - Escaping From Reality. (Goldfinch60)
yes this is the real thing - we are apt to forget sometimes. Nice one
June 30th, 2019 01:51 - Truth Be Told (Orchidee)
Still in top form O
June 30th, 2019 01:50 - Gutter Gardening. (Goldfinch60)
I have the same \'problem\' - great lumps of moss removed from the tiles...
June 29th, 2019 09:51 - Red Lorry, Yellow Lorry? (Goldfinch60)
Here’s the lorries with the lollies
love the lollies on the...
June 27th, 2019 02:35 - GUILTY ~ OF NOT BEING GREEN ENOUGH ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 4442 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You can add leaving devices (TV etc) on standby and leaving the tap...
June 26th, 2019 05:01 - Will I ever? (Sylviasearcher)
It is a gem indeed - great write Sylvia.
June 24th, 2019 10:45 - EUROPE ~ MOST DIVERSE CONTINENT ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A VIGINTI QUINQUE (5 6 11 3 !) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes I\'ve visited them all too - and such an exciting continent it is. You...
June 24th, 2019 10:43 - There Are No Graves (Neville)
This sums up so well my memories of this dreadful \'monument\' to man\'s...
June 24th, 2019 10:39 - Colors and feelings (for the painter and poet Michael Edwards) (Marijoy)
I feel really honoured - I\'ll print this off and keep it in my studio -...
June 24th, 2019 10:34 - Faith Produces Humility - James Series (6) (Orchidee)
Keep writing O.
June 24th, 2019 03:19 - UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.)
Just love this one - full of joyous memories - very uplifting.
June 24th, 2019 03:18 - Miracles Exist. (Goldfinch60)
You must have been working flat out - great stuff Andy.
June 24th, 2019 03:17 - Ache (Neville)
There\'s beauty in this little gem of a write - nice one Neville.
June 23rd, 2019 14:40 - Summer is here (Marijoy)
There are some great postings today and this is up at the top with them -...
June 23rd, 2019 14:32 - Curtain call (Andrew Charles Forrest)
This is something special - great work Andrew.
June 23rd, 2019 14:30 - Confession (Poetic Dan)
You\'re looking forward to letting go of your own story ans writing about...
June 23rd, 2019 14:28 - Praise Proclaiming (Orchidee)
Good work O
June 23rd, 2019 03:17 - My Spirit. (Goldfinch60)
Well expressed Andy
June 23rd, 2019 03:16 - SHOPLIFTING ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A BIDECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Nice one A&B
Never tried to lift a shop in my life:
Shoplifting’s...
June 22nd, 2019 08:27 - Human soup (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Sadly there\'s a lot in that last line - super write Andrew.
June 22nd, 2019 08:12 - Keep going (Poetic Dan)
Never avoid what life throws at you, eventually it will be a golden...
June 22nd, 2019 08:10 - Space For Grace (Orchidee)
Fine work but is \'thorough\' the right word in the last line?
June 22nd, 2019 01:57 - Word Choice. (Goldfinch60)
Take the other - an inspiring word for a poem.
June 22nd, 2019 01:55 - If you come across (Poetic Dan)
Love the positivity - keep going Dan.
June 21st, 2019 10:25 - Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5) (Orchidee)
Well done Faith but a funny name for her son.
June 21st, 2019 07:42 - VIBES. (Fay Slimm.)
A linguistic extravaganza - keep \'em coming.
June 21st, 2019 07:41
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