Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- Secret. (Fay Slimm.)
Great work and those last two lines are to die for (well not literally...
August 13th, 2019 10:45 - Living Dead (Sylviasearcher)
A great write Sylvia - I don\'t quite know why but it\'s reminded me of a...
August 13th, 2019 10:37 - True Blessedness (Orchidee)
Great work - did you have help from Para Berle?
August 13th, 2019 10:26 - Time? What Time? (Goldfinch60)
Where time goes no man knows
Day then night
dark then light
Or is it...
August 13th, 2019 01:33 - DINER (Thomas J. Dooley)
Enjoyed this write and learnt something. Never knew what a bus tub is -...
August 12th, 2019 11:32 - Parents – They mess you up (Aa Harvey)
Reminds me of Larkin\'s They F***k You Up Your Mum and Dad. Great write.
August 12th, 2019 08:20 - Gangster of love! (Poetic Dan)
The joy reaches out from the words and brought a smile to my face as I...
August 12th, 2019 07:48 - Untitled - XXII (Suresh)
Tolls as in funds? By the time the knowledge manifests it is often too...
August 12th, 2019 02:30 - Underprized.. (Fay Slimm.)
Great words Fay.
August 12th, 2019 02:28 - Fed With Music. (Goldfinch60)
With you all the way Andy - music is part of my life.
August 12th, 2019 01:08 - DROLL COUPLETS (4) (Michael Edwards)
It wasn\'t the cough that carried him off, but the coffin they carried him...
August 12th, 2019 00:26 - Bated Breath (Christina8)
So steamy - A great read even at this early hour.
August 12th, 2019 00:16 - destiny (Dusk arising)
Well this is truly exceptional and that last verse is a belter - thanks...
August 12th, 2019 00:15 - we need a whole lot of love (Dusk arising)
Don\'t we just - great write .
August 11th, 2019 09:47 - But Not Yet. (Goldfinch60)
I am prepared but not ready - so much to do - it\'s a wonderful life.
August 11th, 2019 09:04 - Rejoicing Regalings (Orchidee)
Oooh regale me , regale me, or perhaps not!
August 11th, 2019 09:02 - Kunoichi no Geisha (Neville)
Another top notch write - your pen is magical.
August 11th, 2019 09:00 - Shedding (PoeticBiscuit)
This truly reaches out - may the new skin weld itself into a great future.
August 11th, 2019 08:59 - King\'s, Queens and all in between (Poetic Dan)
Sadly the song is not for me but your heart-lifting poem certainly is - a...
August 11th, 2019 01:13 - Rare (Poetic Dan)
May friendships grow
with the words you distribute
a mighty fine tribute...
August 10th, 2019 05:13 - all the times she tried (Dusk arising)
Love it - more please.
August 10th, 2019 05:06 - Flawed (Neville)
Well this really held the attention - she\'s some minx - wonder what that...
August 10th, 2019 05:04 - Teenage Dream (PoeticBiscuit)
Great write and great form - wherever it came from I hope there are more...
August 10th, 2019 02:42 - Looking To Love (Orchidee)
Your pen never fails - keep it filled.
August 10th, 2019 02:02 - Modesty Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Great stuff Andy - if only everyone was as modest as me!!
August 10th, 2019 01:09 - Alive (Christina8)
Magic moments - ah to return to my youth with the knowledge and patience...
August 10th, 2019 01:06 - Try... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
You paint a great picture - and have given me a big smile - thankfully us...
August 10th, 2019 01:05 - the Jesus within (Dusk arising)
It is not what you believe in life, it\'s how you lead your life.
Great...
August 9th, 2019 15:21 - The Girl Who Stole The Moon (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A delight of a read
August 9th, 2019 15:19 - Why When Where and How (Neville)
That\'s what she said to me - I\'m getting worried.
August 9th, 2019 15:16 - Fulfilled. (Fay Slimm.)
Super form and write.
August 9th, 2019 15:14 - Simple Symbols (Orchidee)
I hope Miss Berles knows about those extra syllables.
August 9th, 2019 15:12 - Fire & Ice (PoeticBiscuit)
Ice puts out fire, fire melts ice , nothing left but ashes - there\'s a...
August 9th, 2019 15:11 - Wasted (Sylviasearcher)
Forget the format - it stands up as it is. Super work.
August 8th, 2019 10:53 - Unreal. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh the scene you paint - I could be there.
August 8th, 2019 10:51 - Whatever The Weather (Orchidee)
Another bright write Orchi.
August 8th, 2019 10:50 - That Secret Place (Neville)
I\'m with Christina (not literally) - your writing goes from strength to...
August 8th, 2019 10:49 - Abandoning christianity. (Goldfinch60)
I feel for the \'journey\' you\'ve been on - seems like you\'ve arrived at...
August 8th, 2019 10:47 - Night Time Symphony (Christina8)
Just lately my wife and I have only been switching the TV on for the news...
August 8th, 2019 02:42 - be able to enter (Dusk arising)
I share many of your views and agree there is much hypocrisy and double...
August 8th, 2019 02:29 - Life is yours (Poetic Dan)
Uplifting - the world is yours Dan.
August 7th, 2019 15:01 - Untitled- XXI (Suresh)
A little gem.
August 7th, 2019 14:59 - Otherness. (Fay Slimm.)
Me too - back into childhood - a gentle yet poignant write.
August 7th, 2019 08:11 - there (Dusk arising)
So simply written with such effectiveness - a gem of a write.
August 7th, 2019 08:09 - Blood Red Rim (Neville)
Another lexiconic delight - a true work of the poetic art.
August 7th, 2019 08:07 - Stable Steps (Orchidee)
Nice one O - wish I had a pair of unwobbly ladders.
August 7th, 2019 08:02 - End of A Rainbow (PoeticBiscuit)
And brighten it it does - nice to know others write light verse - it can...
August 7th, 2019 03:17 - To The Right Place. (Goldfinch60)
We can\'t ask more than that in life - I also have ended in a good place...
August 7th, 2019 03:15 - Health and Stupidity. (Goldfinch60)
Loved this one. Had an experience at a dinner in our village hall...
August 4th, 2019 02:35 - Help And Hope (Orchidee)
When you married KP were you dressed as a peanut? Fine write O.
August 3rd, 2019 03:04 - Hello Mother Nature (PoeticBiscuit)
Seeing nature going about its business makes life worthwhile - great
August 3rd, 2019 03:03 - Mary Had a Little Lamb 12 (Goldfinch60)
I don\'t ride a bike - well not these days - you wouldn\'t get me wearing...
August 3rd, 2019 03:01 - Panic! (Christina8)
A horrible affliction - seems so irrational and yet so very real. so sorry...
August 3rd, 2019 02:59 - A Gift of Seasons (Neville)
A superb piece - your work just gets better and better.
August 2nd, 2019 02:51 - Tended. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah the rustic idyll - so well captured here.
August 2nd, 2019 02:50 - At One With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
You paint a great scene and one I recognise. I\'ve never been fishing and...
August 2nd, 2019 02:22 - Facade (Christina8)
Pain can\'t always be hidden - great shortie Christina.
August 2nd, 2019 01:23 - Fool I am.... (Suresh)
If so we are all fools but I think not - a great read Suresh.
August 2nd, 2019 01:22 - Love you more (Poetic Dan)
A tugfull of great comments - I could use them all when it comes to my own...
August 1st, 2019 05:41 - Unwrapped. (Fay Slimm.)
An uplifting write Fay - now where is that skinny dipping taking place?
August 1st, 2019 05:38 - Light Of Life (Orchidee)
Nice work O
August 1st, 2019 05:37 - AN AFTERNOON TEA ~ BRIAN ~ A 2 9 3 Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hum you said a rude word : teabag. Great write about a practice now sadly...
August 1st, 2019 05:35 - the love of birdsong (Dusk arising)
Love the write and that last line is to break wind for.
August 1st, 2019 05:33 - Fonts and Guises (Neville)
You\'re a poetic sage who flavours the day.
August 1st, 2019 05:31 - Knowledges. (Goldfinch60)
I dun edukashun at skool - knowledge is power. Fine write Andy.
August 1st, 2019 05:29 - Distracted. (Fay Slimm.)
Some write - must read it again.
July 31st, 2019 10:34 - FORGOT TO PACK ~ YOUR PLASTIC MAC ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A Lament ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Jeanne and I must be boringly methodical - yes we have a check list...
July 31st, 2019 10:33 - her weakness (Dusk arising)
Conjures up such a great, albeit sad, scene.
July 31st, 2019 10:28 - Mirror Envy (Neville)
No gain without pain - tell that to the remainers - another great...
July 31st, 2019 10:23 - A Cup Of Tea (Christina8)
I\'ve worked for my caffeine, I deserve my caffeine and I\'m darn well...
July 31st, 2019 10:18 - Conned to the End. (Goldfinch60)
And they never go in a straight line. Have you ever played the game: Spot...
July 31st, 2019 10:15 - Untitled - XVII (Suresh)
And I wish for a purpose that will guide me - spot on Suresh. We\'re all...
July 31st, 2019 01:38 - ARE WE ALL BORROWERS & LENDERS ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A Double Nonnet (18 lines) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
As a lad everyone loaned and borrowed but now in a \'posh\' village...
July 30th, 2019 10:23 - Thirst. (Fay Slimm.)
Your magical pen has again created a joy of a read.
July 30th, 2019 10:19 - On finding Truth (Neville)
i hope (probably in vain) that my work will endure and will champion love...
July 30th, 2019 10:17 - A speck (Poetic Dan)
All we can do is lead by example - if only the values were universally...
July 30th, 2019 10:12 - How Are You Today? (Goldfinch60)
My response is always - \'Well bits of me are okay\'
July 30th, 2019 03:33 - LADY IN RED ~ BRIAN ~ 4 QUATRAINS plus line one repeat ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A flame red warming write.
July 29th, 2019 13:09 - Mom (British tea)
And long may you continue to be. Fine write.
July 29th, 2019 13:05 - Learnt Curves. (Fay Slimm.)
And long may that love continue to breathe dear Fay. No room for shivers.
July 29th, 2019 13:04 - Guiding Grace (Orchidee)
Fine work O.
July 29th, 2019 03:59 - People Feeling. (Goldfinch60)
Some may say it\'s a gift but anyone can do it with a bit of effort - even...
July 29th, 2019 03:13 - Cold Under The Coat (Neville)
Never had a mandolin nor a meerschaum pipe but I do have a bowler hat. In...
July 29th, 2019 03:10 - The Fall (Christina8)
It sure works - I\'ve been away for a while and a super first read for my...
July 29th, 2019 00:18 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Fine work - fine form.
July 22nd, 2019 12:47 - She Sparkles (Neville)
Ah the rose and the thorn.
July 22nd, 2019 12:42 - Greeting My River. (Goldfinch60)
May you walk with your river forever - great write.
July 22nd, 2019 03:46 - Unbearable! (Orchidee)
Great stuff Orchi - I\'ll write a poem about your singing - post it...
July 22nd, 2019 03:45 - Manic Monday (Christina8)
A common problem - and so often the ideas are ost before I put pen to...
July 22nd, 2019 01:14 - I\'m a fan of you all (Poetic Dan)
Some great lines in this - wish I\'d thought of them - from the soul...
July 21st, 2019 13:40 - A PURPOSE IN LIFE ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 1 7 2 4 ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Well expressed - freedom is a right - not a gift.
July 21st, 2019 04:45 - One Day Maybe (Neville)
Something so appealing about this simple piece - I did enjoy the read .
July 21st, 2019 04:42 - The Choir - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Great music and love the senryu - would love to have been there.
July 21st, 2019 04:38 - Witness To The World (Orchidee)
Uplifting - another winner O
July 21st, 2019 04:36 - but unbeaten (Dusk arising)
A strong heart - long may it beat.
July 21st, 2019 04:35 - Of Loneliness (Andrew Charles Forrest)
I can \'feel\' the loneliness in this.
July 21st, 2019 01:04 - SENSE OF COLOUR ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
May your lives be ever full of colour.
July 21st, 2019 01:02 - I no longer deny (Poetic Dan)
There\'s a star in the sky in this great write - may it ever shine on you...
July 21st, 2019 01:00 - Words Do Not Matter. (Goldfinch60)
I struggle with this. I agree that the voice is an instrument but it does...
July 20th, 2019 01:31 - The catapult clause (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Lets hope it does - I much enjoyed this shortie.
July 20th, 2019 00:59
« Return to the profile of Michael Edwards
