Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- ridiculous organism (Dusk arising)
There really is but sadly many never find it - great first read today.
September 19th, 2019 00:29 - BAREFOOT IN ANDALUCIA 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 BLANK VERSE QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Really enjoyed the read and your comments - super read.
September 17th, 2019 15:31 - First Love. (Fay Slimm.)
A delightful confection dear Fay.
September 17th, 2019 15:29 - Fondly and Truly (Neville)
Now if I was a woman - fine write N
September 17th, 2019 15:26 - evening descends (Dusk arising)
Great work dusk.
September 17th, 2019 15:25 - That Fine Evening. (Goldfinch60)
Nothing more to ask at all - I recall the concert - great music - and I...
September 17th, 2019 02:12 - Walk your path well (Poetic Dan)
Chose your path well and when you find it walk tall - great write Dan
September 17th, 2019 01:34 - Deep Purple (Sylviasearcher)
And I\'m going for a blood test later in the week - thanks for this -...
September 16th, 2019 12:31 - Blackrock. (Fay Slimm.)
A sad read so soundly penned
September 16th, 2019 12:29 - Client (Neville)
Well I\'m still pondericating but I guess dusk sums it up best. an...
September 16th, 2019 12:27 - Protective Power (Orchidee)
Keep writing O.
September 16th, 2019 02:18 - Mind in Overtime. (Goldfinch60)
Good choice - save the other two for another day.
September 16th, 2019 02:18 - Inside Her Pants (Neville)
They found romance
inside her pants
whilst only stickers rhymes with...
September 15th, 2019 04:59 - Reverie. (Fay Slimm.)
Pleased you reposted - that\'s the place where I am most of the time these...
September 14th, 2019 03:13 - Guineas And Other Friends (Orchidee)
It\'s a world I know. I was brought up in a fur and feather environment...
September 14th, 2019 03:10 - Food for Thought (Neville)
Inspired - a melt in your mouth kind of poem - great work.
September 14th, 2019 03:07 - She found me in the grass (Poetic Dan)
A great outpouring of creativity - super work Dan.
September 14th, 2019 03:05 - Another Good Day to Come. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful words and beautiful music - my kind of music.
September 14th, 2019 01:00 - Downtown Girl (Laura🌻)
A super write about such a difficult subject. I hope all went well and...
September 13th, 2019 00:33 - big old moon (love) (Dusk arising)
A great write dusk
September 12th, 2019 11:00 - Indelible. (Fay Slimm.)
A joy to read !!
September 12th, 2019 10:58 - Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
Yes it can be great fun until someone takes it too seriously and it then...
September 12th, 2019 01:45 - Correction (Neville)
Correct me if I\'m wrong but this is very right
September 12th, 2019 01:37 - FOOD FOR THOUGHT ~ A 3 4 7 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great work - we cook all our own from fresh ingredients and never throw...
September 12th, 2019 01:34 - RECEIVED FROM MARKS AND SPENCER (Michael Edwards)
Thankfully I don\'t have manboobs - err what are they?
September 10th, 2019 15:12 - LESOTHOHTOSEL ~ A REFLECTION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It is an amazing country with an interesting history - great work.
September 10th, 2019 04:08 - Constant. (Fay Slimm.)
I can taste the salt - another top notch write dear Fay.
September 10th, 2019 04:06 - No fear (Poetic Dan)
A great little write Dan - and may it ever be so.
September 10th, 2019 04:05 - Search Me, See Me (Orchidee)
I admire your ability to write these on such a regular basis and still...
September 10th, 2019 04:03 - last dance (Dusk arising)
It is indeed a clever little write.
September 10th, 2019 04:01 - Sailing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks so much Andy - I\'ll keep this super write to go with the picture
September 10th, 2019 01:35 - Ageing (Jeremy Leach)
One of the best I\'ve read for a long time - concept, structure, meter,...
September 8th, 2019 15:59 - Infinite beauty (Alta H Mabin)
I\'m a lover of this form and you\'ve sure done it justice.
September 8th, 2019 03:06 - The Book of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Well said but it gets hard when you realise y
you\'re in the epilogue.
September 8th, 2019 01:48 - Double Jeopardy (Neville)
Oh what a great write - it had me smiling and yet there is an underlying...
September 8th, 2019 01:46 - Tock (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Super work and so original in composition
September 7th, 2019 09:20 - God Paradox (Chris Yellow)
I am with you on this - a fine write on a difficult subject.
September 7th, 2019 05:12 - Victory Vindication (Orchidee)
If only those without sin come to the top it will lonely up there. Fine...
September 7th, 2019 04:40 - smouldered (Dusk arising)
I can read so much into this - super write dusk.
September 7th, 2019 04:39 - Strong is Quiet. (Goldfinch60)
So true and, yes, that video is really something.
September 7th, 2019 04:38 - An Autumn Harvest (Neville)
Such a vivid picture painted in the real gem of a write - into the favs.
September 7th, 2019 04:35 - Lover\'s Game (Clara)
A beautiful rounded write
September 5th, 2019 14:47 - Suave. (Fay Slimm.)
A real beauty Fay - love it.
September 5th, 2019 14:45 - MEMORIES 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A really touching write
September 5th, 2019 14:44 - My hero (Poetic Dan)
What a fabulous relationship - you are truly blessed.
September 5th, 2019 14:43 - Banners Blessed (Orchidee)
Great stuff great O
September 5th, 2019 14:41 - State of Death. (Goldfinch60)
When I had my near death experience late last year I felt as if I was...
September 5th, 2019 14:40 - Somewhere Behind These Eyes (Neville)
Broken words that fall on arid lands
will no more grow again
nor will...
September 5th, 2019 03:08 - Ink-Bitten. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely piece Fay - and it maketh the poetry in art.
September 4th, 2019 04:36 - Disturbed? (Orchidee)
I\'m all for it - trouble is I don\'t have an organ - only a penny...
September 4th, 2019 04:26 - SUMMER TO AUTUMN ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine acrostic - yes summer\'s over - I was feeling decidedly chilly last...
September 4th, 2019 04:22 - I Can Listen. (Goldfinch60)
In later years friendship is worth its weight in gold - and that\'s all I...
September 4th, 2019 02:43 - A Ladies Man (Neville)
Great write meter maestro.
September 4th, 2019 01:22 - Try your luck and never give up (Poetic Dan)
Not quite sure what to make of this which makes it ever more intriguing -...
September 3rd, 2019 10:41 - Morphing. (Fay Slimm.)
A great smile - wasn\'t expecting this when I clicked on ..!
September 3rd, 2019 10:39 - ORCHIDEE*S DEPUTY DAWG FIDO ~ A 4 4 6 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What do you mean - he\'s imaginary - no he aint - don\'t spoil my day -...
September 3rd, 2019 03:31 - The Sum of our parts/ Gestalt’s antidote (Sylviasearcher)
Not sure what it is about this but it really appeals - great work Sylvia.
September 3rd, 2019 03:28 - Peace Proferred (Orchidee)
Your pen never fails O
September 3rd, 2019 03:27 - For The Sake of Poetry (Neville)
Great write and I love the dangling ending.
September 3rd, 2019 03:26 - To Church. (Goldfinch60)
Good reasons and good write
September 3rd, 2019 03:25 - white rabbits (Dusk arising)
Love this - you\'ve got me saying \'White Rabbits\'. Angoras? My...
September 1st, 2019 09:53 - She is....... (Goldfinch60)
Tis bitter sweet indeed - a touching write.
September 1st, 2019 09:50 - I (Poetic Dan)
The main obstacles in life are recognising the problems and having the...
August 31st, 2019 07:55 - HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT I 🧡 YOU ? A 🧡 B 💙 A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Keep crooning the pair of you - hope you are both well.
August 31st, 2019 07:12 - Loving Leadings (Orchidee)
Fine work O
August 31st, 2019 01:54 - Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant - thanks for getting my day off with a smile.
August 31st, 2019 01:36 - Candle or Mirror. (Goldfinch60)
Well I\'ll go light my wick - fine write Andy.
August 30th, 2019 02:17 - Gateway to Where? (Goldfinch60)
Yes I know it too - life is full of frustrations and we must learn to
August 21st, 2019 03:04 - The Appetite of Voyeurs (Neville)
Love it - right up my quirky street.
August 21st, 2019 03:02 - Fly Me in Circles (Neville)
This seems so personal and so tender - fine write N
August 20th, 2019 13:00 - Sensuality. (Fay Slimm.)
It\'s not fair - here\'s me about to have my knee done and you foist those...
August 15th, 2019 07:38 - Not My Day. (Goldfinch60)
I recognise this - my biggest complaint is a local roundabout which is...
August 15th, 2019 01:43 - MY LIFE IN NUMBERS ~ BRIAN ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A great little number Brian.
August 15th, 2019 01:40 - War a Senryu (Neville)
And so it always will be - great little \'un.
August 15th, 2019 01:37 - FRUSTRATION (FineB)
I never (or very rarely) look back and know not frustration - mine is more...
August 14th, 2019 23:27 - NO SILVER MEDALS IN LIFE & LOVE ~ ANGELA ~ A 6 5 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Welcome back and a super write. I love the story of the two teachers
August 14th, 2019 05:01 - Singular I’s (Neville)
Singularly good write Neville
😊
August 14th, 2019 04:24 - Even This August... Elegy #1 for Teresa R (Andrew Charles Forrest)
What a super tribute to a missed friend.
August 14th, 2019 04:19 - Mature Love (Christina8)
Love in Maturity framed in a paradigm
Cheese in maturity smells more in...
August 14th, 2019 04:17 - Rock Of Refuge (Orchidee)
Nice one O.
August 14th, 2019 04:08 - Living Life. (Goldfinch60)
Spot on - the way to live.
August 14th, 2019 04:07 - Hemlock (Sylviasearcher)
Sure took me from glee to gloom - fine write.
August 14th, 2019 04:04 - INNER PEACE (Laura🌻)
A real gem here Laura.
August 13th, 2019 10:57 - what lights your eyes (Dusk arising)
It draws you in as you read it - would love to hear it sung.
August 13th, 2019 10:54 - Perhaps, there\'s a reason (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Love the humour and what makes it stand out is the great rhythm and meter....
August 13th, 2019 10:51 - See beyond & travel on (Poetic Dan)
Keep those wheels oiled with love and you can go anywhere.
August 13th, 2019 10:48 - Secret. (Fay Slimm.)
Great work and those last two lines are to die for (well not literally...
August 13th, 2019 10:45 - Living Dead (Sylviasearcher)
A great write Sylvia - I don\'t quite know why but it\'s reminded me of a...
August 13th, 2019 10:37 - True Blessedness (Orchidee)
Great work - did you have help from Para Berle?
August 13th, 2019 10:26 - Time? What Time? (Goldfinch60)
Where time goes no man knows
Day then night
dark then light
Or is it...
August 13th, 2019 01:33 - DINER (Thomas J. Dooley)
Enjoyed this write and learnt something. Never knew what a bus tub is -...
August 12th, 2019 11:32 - Parents – They mess you up (Aa Harvey)
Reminds me of Larkin\'s They F***k You Up Your Mum and Dad. Great write.
August 12th, 2019 08:20 - Gangster of love! (Poetic Dan)
The joy reaches out from the words and brought a smile to my face as I...
August 12th, 2019 07:48 - Untitled - XXII (Suresh)
Tolls as in funds? By the time the knowledge manifests it is often too...
August 12th, 2019 02:30 - Underprized.. (Fay Slimm.)
Great words Fay.
August 12th, 2019 02:28 - Fed With Music. (Goldfinch60)
With you all the way Andy - music is part of my life.
August 12th, 2019 01:08 - DROLL COUPLETS (4) (Michael Edwards)
It wasn\'t the cough that carried him off, but the coffin they carried him...
August 12th, 2019 00:26 - Bated Breath (Christina8)
So steamy - A great read even at this early hour.
August 12th, 2019 00:16 - destiny (Dusk arising)
Well this is truly exceptional and that last verse is a belter - thanks...
August 12th, 2019 00:15 - we need a whole lot of love (Dusk arising)
Don\'t we just - great write .
August 11th, 2019 09:47
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