Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- Celestial City - New Jerusalem (Orchidee) 
You can\'t beat a good Alleluia! - great stuff O.
September 21st, 2019 03:04 - Boundless Admiration. (Goldfinch60) 
A beautiful write - I can see whu she was so touched. - it\'s great to...
September 21st, 2019 01:33 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.) 
I can see it, I can hear it, I can smell it - a great write Fay.
September 20th, 2019 08:46 - Band Class  (Sylviasearcher) 
Poetic craftsmanship - great work Sylvia.
September 20th, 2019 08:34 - A Perfectly Reasonable Question (Neville) 
When I am dead and gone
the space I occupy
will with me be...
September 20th, 2019 08:32 - River of love, that\'s now joined all of us!  (Poetic Dan) 
The most heart warming event you could wish for - even at this distance...
September 20th, 2019 08:19 - BORROWING & LENDING  🧡  A  SONNET  💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN) 
Sadly neighbourliness is a dissappearing virtue although it does still...
September 20th, 2019 08:08 - Presenting Praises (Orchidee) 
Presenta Berles would approve of this as do I.
September 20th, 2019 08:04 - Acceptance. (Goldfinch60) 
So right but it\'s hard dealing with those prejudiced people who won\'t...
September 20th, 2019 08:03 - Very memorable occasion (Dusk arising) 
Unexpected knowing your thoughts on religion but, yes faith can shine and...
September 20th, 2019 01:33 - Interlude (FredPeyer) 
Great tender write - a feel good piece in the very best of senses. 
September 20th, 2019 01:29 - All Was Right. (Goldfinch60) 
Ah this so uplifting - may the feather ever be with them.
September 19th, 2019 02:09 - Waiting Game (FredPeyer) 
So great to see your work again - don\'t leave it too long before the next...
September 19th, 2019 00:31 - Perky pyramids (Alta H Mabin) 
Sweet
September 19th, 2019 00:30 - ridiculous organism (Dusk arising) 
There really is but sadly many never find it - great first read today.
September 19th, 2019 00:29 - BAREFOOT IN ANDALUCIA  🧡  ANGELA  🧡  BLANK VERSE QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN) 
Really enjoyed the read and your comments - super read.
September 17th, 2019 15:31 - First Love. (Fay Slimm.) 
A delightful confection dear Fay.
September 17th, 2019 15:29 - Fondly and Truly (Neville) 
Now if I was a woman - fine write N
September 17th, 2019 15:26 - evening descends (Dusk arising) 
Great work dusk.
September 17th, 2019 15:25 - That Fine Evening. (Goldfinch60) 
Nothing more to ask at all - I recall the concert - great music - and I...
September 17th, 2019 02:12 - Walk your path well (Poetic Dan) 
Chose your path well and when you find it walk tall - great write Dan
September 17th, 2019 01:34 - Deep Purple (Sylviasearcher) 
And I\'m going for a blood test later in the week - thanks for this -...
September 16th, 2019 12:31 - Blackrock. (Fay Slimm.) 
A sad read so soundly penned
September 16th, 2019 12:29 - Client (Neville) 
Well I\'m still pondericating but I guess dusk sums it up best. an...
September 16th, 2019 12:27 - Protective Power (Orchidee) 
Keep writing O.
September 16th, 2019 02:18 - Mind in Overtime. (Goldfinch60) 
Good choice - save the other two for another day. 
September 16th, 2019 02:18 - Inside Her Pants (Neville) 
They found romance 
inside her pants
whilst only stickers rhymes with...
September 15th, 2019 04:59 - Reverie. (Fay Slimm.) 
Pleased you reposted - that\'s the place where I am most of the time these...
September 14th, 2019 03:13 - Guineas And Other Friends (Orchidee) 
It\'s a world I know. I was brought up in a fur and feather environment...
September 14th, 2019 03:10 - Food for Thought (Neville) 
Inspired - a melt in your mouth kind of poem - great work. 
September 14th, 2019 03:07 - She found me in the grass  (Poetic Dan) 
A great outpouring of creativity - super work Dan.
September 14th, 2019 03:05 - Another Good Day to Come. (Goldfinch60) 
Beautiful words and beautiful music - my kind of music. 
September 14th, 2019 01:00 - Downtown Girl (Laura🌻) 
A super write about such a difficult subject. I hope all went well and...
September 13th, 2019 00:33 - big old moon (love) (Dusk arising) 
A great write dusk 
September 12th, 2019 11:00 - Indelible. (Fay Slimm.) 
A joy to read !!
September 12th, 2019 10:58 - Croquet. (Goldfinch60) 
Yes it can be great fun until someone takes it too seriously and it then...
September 12th, 2019 01:45 - Correction  (Neville) 
Correct me if I\'m wrong but this is very right 
September 12th, 2019 01:37 - FOOD  FOR  THOUGHT ~ A  3 4 7  Acrostic Sonnet  (ANGELA & BRIAN) 
Great work - we cook all our own from fresh ingredients and never throw...
September 12th, 2019 01:34 - RECEIVED FROM MARKS AND SPENCER (Michael Edwards) 
Thankfully I don\'t have manboobs  - err what are they?
September 10th, 2019 15:12 - LESOTHOHTOSEL ~ A REFLECTION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) 
It is an amazing country with an interesting history - great work.
September 10th, 2019 04:08 - Constant. (Fay Slimm.) 
I can taste the salt - another top notch write dear Fay.
September 10th, 2019 04:06 - No fear  (Poetic Dan) 
A great little write Dan - and may it ever be so.
September 10th, 2019 04:05 - Search Me, See Me (Orchidee) 
I admire your ability to write these on such a regular basis and still...
September 10th, 2019 04:03 - last dance (Dusk arising) 
It is indeed a clever little write.
September 10th, 2019 04:01 - Sailing to Eternity. (Goldfinch60) 
Thanks so much Andy - I\'ll keep this super write to go with the picture
September 10th, 2019 01:35 - Ageing (Jeremy Leach) 
One of the best I\'ve read for a long time - concept, structure, meter,...
September 8th, 2019 15:59 - Infinite beauty (Alta H Mabin) 
I\'m a lover of this form and you\'ve sure done it justice.
September 8th, 2019 03:06 - The Book of Life. (Goldfinch60) 
Well said but it gets hard when you realise y
you\'re in the epilogue.
September 8th, 2019 01:48 - Double Jeopardy (Neville) 
Oh what a great write - it had me smiling and yet there is an underlying...
September 8th, 2019 01:46 - Tock (Andrew Charles Forrest) 
Super work and so original in composition 
September 7th, 2019 09:20 - God Paradox (Chris Yellow) 
I am with you on this - a fine write on a difficult subject.
September 7th, 2019 05:12 - Victory Vindication (Orchidee) 
If only those without sin come to the top it will lonely up there. Fine...
September 7th, 2019 04:40 - smouldered (Dusk arising) 
I can read so much into this - super write dusk.
September 7th, 2019 04:39 - Strong is Quiet. (Goldfinch60) 
So true and, yes, that video is  really something.
September 7th, 2019 04:38 - An Autumn Harvest (Neville) 
Such a vivid picture painted in the real gem of a write - into the favs.
September 7th, 2019 04:35 - Lover\'s Game (Clara) 
A beautiful rounded write
September 5th, 2019 14:47 - Suave. (Fay Slimm.) 
A real beauty Fay - love it.
September 5th, 2019 14:45 - MEMORIES  🧡  ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) 
A really touching write 
September 5th, 2019 14:44 - My hero  (Poetic Dan) 
What a fabulous relationship - you are truly blessed.
September 5th, 2019 14:43 - Banners Blessed (Orchidee) 
Great stuff great O
September 5th, 2019 14:41 - State of Death. (Goldfinch60) 
When I had my near death experience late last year I felt as if I was...
September 5th, 2019 14:40 - Somewhere Behind These Eyes (Neville) 
Broken words that fall on arid lands
will no more grow again 
nor will...
September 5th, 2019 03:08 - Ink-Bitten. (Fay Slimm.) 
Lovely piece Fay -  and it maketh the poetry in art.
September 4th, 2019 04:36 - Disturbed? (Orchidee) 
I\'m all for it - trouble is I don\'t have an organ - only a penny...
September 4th, 2019 04:26 - SUMMER TO AUTUMN ~ AN ACROSTIC  6 2 6  SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) 
A fine acrostic - yes summer\'s over - I was feeling decidedly chilly last...
September 4th, 2019 04:22 - I Can Listen. (Goldfinch60) 
In later years friendship is worth its weight in gold - and that\'s all I...
September 4th, 2019 02:43 - A Ladies Man (Neville) 
Great write meter maestro.
September 4th, 2019 01:22 - Try your luck and never give up (Poetic Dan) 
Not quite sure what to make of this which makes it ever more intriguing -...
September 3rd, 2019 10:41 - Morphing. (Fay Slimm.) 
A great smile - wasn\'t expecting this when I clicked on ..! 
September 3rd, 2019 10:39 - ORCHIDEE*S DEPUTY DAWG FIDO ~ A  4 4 6  SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) 
What do you mean - he\'s imaginary - no he aint - don\'t spoil my day -...
September 3rd, 2019 03:31 - The Sum of our parts/ Gestalt’s antidote  (Sylviasearcher) 
Not sure what it is about this but it really appeals - great work Sylvia.
September 3rd, 2019 03:28 - Peace Proferred (Orchidee) 
Your pen never fails O 
September 3rd, 2019 03:27 - For The Sake of Poetry (Neville) 
Great write and I love the dangling ending.
September 3rd, 2019 03:26 - To Church. (Goldfinch60) 
Good reasons and good write
September 3rd, 2019 03:25 - white rabbits (Dusk arising) 
Love this - you\'ve got me saying \'White Rabbits\'.  Angoras?  My...
September 1st, 2019 09:53 - She is....... (Goldfinch60) 
Tis bitter sweet indeed - a touching write.
September 1st, 2019 09:50 - I (Poetic Dan) 
The main obstacles in life are recognising the problems and having the...
August 31st, 2019 07:55 - HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT I  🧡  YOU ?   A  🧡  B  💙  A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) 
Keep crooning the pair of you - hope you are both well.
August 31st, 2019 07:12 - Loving Leadings (Orchidee) 
Fine work O
August 31st, 2019 01:54 - Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60) 
Brilliant - thanks for getting my day off with a smile.
August 31st, 2019 01:36 - Candle or Mirror. (Goldfinch60) 
Well I\'ll go light my wick - fine write Andy.
August 30th, 2019 02:17 - Gateway to Where? (Goldfinch60) 
Yes I know it too - life is full of frustrations and we must learn to
August 21st, 2019 03:04 - The Appetite of Voyeurs (Neville) 
Love it - right up my quirky street.
August 21st, 2019 03:02 - Fly Me in Circles (Neville) 
This seems so personal and so tender - fine write N 
August 20th, 2019 13:00 - Sensuality. (Fay Slimm.) 
It\'s not fair - here\'s me about to have my knee done and you foist those...
August 15th, 2019 07:38 - Not My Day. (Goldfinch60) 
I recognise this - my biggest complaint is a local roundabout which is...
August 15th, 2019 01:43 - MY LIFE IN NUMBERS ~ BRIAN ~ A  BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) 
A great little number Brian.
August 15th, 2019 01:40 - War a Senryu (Neville) 
And so it always will be - great little \'un.
August 15th, 2019 01:37 - FRUSTRATION  (FineB) 
I never (or very rarely) look back and know not frustration - mine is more...
August 14th, 2019 23:27 - NO SILVER MEDALS IN LIFE & LOVE ~ ANGELA ~ A  6 5 3  SONNET  (ANGELA & BRIAN) 
Welcome back and a super write. I love the story of the two teachers 
August 14th, 2019 05:01 - Singular I’s (Neville) 
Singularly good write Neville 
😊
August 14th, 2019 04:24 - Even This August... Elegy #1 for Teresa R (Andrew Charles Forrest) 
What a super tribute to a missed friend.
August 14th, 2019 04:19 - Mature Love (Christina8) 
Love in Maturity  framed in a paradigm
Cheese in maturity smells more in...
August 14th, 2019 04:17 - Rock Of Refuge (Orchidee) 
Nice one O.
August 14th, 2019 04:08 - Living Life. (Goldfinch60) 
Spot on - the way to live. 
August 14th, 2019 04:07 - Hemlock  (Sylviasearcher) 
Sure took me from glee to gloom - fine write. 
August 14th, 2019 04:04 - INNER PEACE  (Laura🌻) 
A real gem here Laura.
August 13th, 2019 10:57 - what lights your eyes (Dusk arising) 
It draws you in as you read it - would love to hear it sung.
August 13th, 2019 10:54 - Perhaps, there\'s a reason (Andrew Charles Forrest) 
Love the humour and what makes it stand out is the great rhythm and meter....
August 13th, 2019 10:51 - See beyond & travel on (Poetic Dan) 
Keep those wheels oiled with love and you can go anywhere.
August 13th, 2019 10:48 
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