Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- DESTINATION MARS ~ THE RED PLANET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian but I do tend to agree with Outback and see if we can get...
August 20th, 2017 00:21 - Tedious days!! (Sue.evans)
Very good acrostic. Time has that effect sometimes but when we are doing...
August 20th, 2017 00:16 - Searching Far and Wide (Gino)
Very good message and write. If only the world could see the wonder in the...
August 20th, 2017 00:08 - BENEATH A WANING MOON (Michael Edwards)
Very clever write Michael.
The painting spoke to me immediately, in my...
August 19th, 2017 00:47 - Shadow Of A Storm (WL Schuett)
This is another wondrous write wl. thank you for sharing it with us.
August 19th, 2017 00:42 - THE ULTIMATE SCHEME (Louis Gibbs)
Good write. The differences are there to test us, it is a pit that so many...
August 19th, 2017 00:26 - Safe Place (Caden)
Beautiful loving write, that one person who we go to at all times is...
August 19th, 2017 00:23 - A Scholar\'s Colloquy (Nicholas Browning)
Good commentary on the conversation. Maybe they are all parables written...
August 19th, 2017 00:22 - Righteous Rulings 2 (Orchidee)
Very good write Orchi.
August 19th, 2017 00:17 - BARCELONA ~ WE WEEP WITH YOU TODAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write, the people themselves showed that they would not be defeated...
August 19th, 2017 00:08 - The shapes of my life! (Sue.evans)
A very good write, our lives can be governed by the different paths we...
August 19th, 2017 00:07 - Losing You. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful write again Fay, as Fred has sad that last stanza is superb.
August 19th, 2017 00:05 - Expectations (FredPeyer)
We all have expectations that are sometimes dashed but what we must do is...
August 18th, 2017 01:06 - A MERRY LUNCH (Michael Edwards)
And a good time was had by all, including those who read these...
August 18th, 2017 01:04 - Choices (WL Schuett)
That candle must always be relit and the light it produces followed to...
August 18th, 2017 01:00 - Bongo Drum (Tony36)
Music can do this, it can raise the mind into a wonderfully beautiful,...
August 18th, 2017 00:53 - Crystal (Malubotelho)
May that crystal shine like these words.
August 18th, 2017 00:51 - Prayer Prosperings (Orchidee)
Another good write Orchi. Taize music has a way of entering ones soul.
August 18th, 2017 00:50 - Your Light (Caden)
Good positive write. The light is always there.
August 18th, 2017 00:49 - IT BREAKS MY HEART (Louis Gibbs)
Very good and very true write. So many people have the ability to help...
August 18th, 2017 00:48 - I AM A MIDDLEMAN ! A Rhyming 662 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian but many middlemen are purveyors of untruths and are like...
August 18th, 2017 00:42 - Yeah, I Said Those Things (Jabberwocky)
Good strong write. Take it or leave eh?
August 18th, 2017 00:38 - Show Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful prayer. Amen.
August 17th, 2017 07:54 - Time (Sue.evans)
Time can be a pain sometimes but it is made up of moments and each moment...
August 17th, 2017 07:51 - Ill (Nicholas Browning)
Good write. Your mind is not lost if you can create these words.
August 17th, 2017 01:51 - LIMERICK No 41 (Michael Edwards)
Good fun write.
Another wonderful abstract Michael.
August 17th, 2017 01:50 - Tinnitus (FredPeyer)
Very strong write, it is an awful problem for many. One of my friends has...
August 17th, 2017 01:49 - Do it (LoneWolf1)
Good write. The die have already been rolled and they have been good to...
August 17th, 2017 01:44 - DON\'T (Kaychee)
Good emotive write.
August 17th, 2017 01:43 - The Silence (YepYep)
Very good write. That peace may be hard to find but it will be there. ...
August 17th, 2017 01:42 - Pablo Picasso (O.G. Tone)
Very good write. Picasso changed the way of the art world with his...
August 17th, 2017 01:39 - For Aaron🌈 (Allan Fitzgerald)
Very good tribute to your friend. He will always be with you.
August 17th, 2017 01:36 - Just Waiting (Rj1way)
Good loving write.
August 17th, 2017 00:58 - Follow me (LukeCoomer)
Very good write, I am with you.
August 17th, 2017 00:56 - Golden Rule (John Prophet)
It makes sense to me as well. We may not know but I believe there is a...
August 17th, 2017 00:55 - counting sighs (Heather T)
Super write Heather, you have come through it though. It will not be...
August 17th, 2017 00:50 - To Share With You My Love (Tony36)
Very good emotive write.
August 17th, 2017 00:48 - The Question (Caden)
Very good write. All can be seen within peoples eyes.
August 17th, 2017 00:44 - EU What pal? (Edthepoet)
Good write and I totally agree with you. I am one of \'the old fogies\'...
August 17th, 2017 00:44 - The ballerina (The Drunk Pirate)
May the door to your prison soon be opened. Good write.
August 17th, 2017 00:41 - After (Private poet)
Super write. He will always be there looking after you. May your life be...
August 17th, 2017 00:34 - How do I? (Simple-Man87)
Very troubled emotive write and so well written.
August 17th, 2017 00:31 - Follow Your Dreams (Alf W)
Good write and thought provoking.
Another aspect is we follow dreams...
August 17th, 2017 00:22 - Blue notes (WL Schuett)
Wonderful write evoking the blues in my mind.
Love the guitar.
August 17th, 2017 00:17 - Lost without you (Sue.evans)
Very good write, it can be so hard losing parents but their memory will...
August 17th, 2017 00:13 - Quiet City. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you Santita, I am honoured.
August 16th, 2017 12:35 - THE OLD MAN (Lasergraph)
There are many like this who still suffer through what they went through...
August 16th, 2017 07:58 - Rising tides (Malubotelho)
Good emotive write.
August 16th, 2017 07:55 - DEAFENING SILENCE (Louis Gibbs)
Good write, sometimes the noise silences drowns all other sounds.
August 16th, 2017 07:55 - Changeling. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write Fay.
August 16th, 2017 07:49 - Farting Around (WriteBeLight)
Good fun write, it gets worse the older you get.
August 16th, 2017 07:48 - Hiding In The Rain (Accidental Poet)
Very good write, we all need to hide sometimes.
August 16th, 2017 07:47 - CARIBBEAN MAMMY ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write, may me Mammy always look over you.
August 16th, 2017 03:00 - stone (Ummbree)
Very good write, trust in people can sometimes be destroyed but there ARE...
August 16th, 2017 02:12 - Four Shorts: Concupiscence / Longing / Old Couple / Love (FredPeyer)
Good write(s). I especially relate to \'Old couple\' I have seen those...
August 16th, 2017 01:13 - THE DESTITUTE (Michael Edwards)
Wonderful pictures in both words and painting Michael.
August 16th, 2017 01:10 - pretty (Heather T)
Good write, it is what is within people that really enhances
August 16th, 2017 01:05 - Will not give up (Poetic Dan)
Very good positive write, we must all keep trying.
August 16th, 2017 00:56 - The Cycle (Caden)
The cycle of life is always there. Good write.
August 16th, 2017 00:55 - Itinerary (WriteBeLight)
Good write, those short breaks are priceless. Did you take your alpaca...
August 16th, 2017 00:53 - Kingly Kindlings (Orchidee)
Very good write again Orchi. The tune fits very well.
August 16th, 2017 00:44 - ()
Very good write and an almost impossible question to answer as in life...
August 16th, 2017 00:42 - A Relationship. (Lasergraph)
Good write and so true, my wife and I have been together for 36 years in...
August 15th, 2017 08:02 - THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY (Louis Gibbs)
Good write, the horror of war must be stopped.
August 15th, 2017 08:00 - dead in a vase (Stefan badham)
Very good write.
August 15th, 2017 07:58 - Ten Feet From The Ledge (Accidental Poet)
Very good write, we must all do our best in this life.
August 15th, 2017 03:46 - First Love (FredPeyer)
Beautiful write reminding us of that first love.
August 15th, 2017 02:36 - ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE (Michael Edwards)
I do like these two liners Michael, clever writing.
Like the abstract...
August 15th, 2017 00:50 - Homeless (Myself and me)
Very good write, there seem to be so many people in this place and those...
August 15th, 2017 00:44 - River Music Haunts Me (WL Schuett)
Wonderful write, you took me there with your words.
Once more a very...
August 15th, 2017 00:42 - Snowy Day (Bibbeck)
Good write but as far as I am concerned snow is best seen in pictures.
August 15th, 2017 00:35 - To Her (Caden)
Good emotive write. Welcome to MPS.
August 15th, 2017 00:29 - Favourable Fare (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
August 15th, 2017 00:18 - Battle (Lakiea)
Good write, I will spread my feathers.
August 14th, 2017 08:13 - Clocks and Calendars (WriteBeLight)
Good write. I have a theory that we never want to know the actual time,...
August 14th, 2017 08:12 - THE CYCLE REPLAYED (Louis Gibbs)
Good write about our possible end in this world, see you in the next.
August 14th, 2017 08:08 - What if I told you? (Emile Dubois)
Good write about the truth that nobody will admit to.
August 14th, 2017 08:07 - Black and Blue ( the colours of a grudge) (Sue.evans)
Good write. Grudges should be over almost as soon as they start as they...
August 14th, 2017 08:06 - Intake. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write, I was sitting on that cliff top with you.
August 14th, 2017 08:03 - the labyrinth (Stefan badham)
Good write,I wonder what is around the next corner.
August 14th, 2017 08:02 - Time to Leave (FredPeyer)
Such a good write over s very sad situation, I just do not understand this...
August 14th, 2017 08:01 - I\'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE ~ ENJOY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Very good fun write. The cricket with the Caribbean Pirates starts this...
August 14th, 2017 07:58 - SUMMER IDYL (Michael Edwards)
Superb write Michael. Life is wonderful.
August 14th, 2017 01:44 - red clay baptism (Heather T)
Very good write and wonderful insight into your life, thank you for...
August 14th, 2017 01:39 - Simplicity Sentiments (Orchidee)
Good faith-filled write.
August 14th, 2017 01:34 - PRAISE THE LORD ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Amen.
August 14th, 2017 01:26 - Dandelion Seeds (FredPeyer)
That perfect place seems to be my garden! Very good write Fred they are...
August 13th, 2017 02:16 - I\'m your girl (Malubotelho)
Beautiful write. This is a girl of absolute power.
August 13th, 2017 02:15 - ()
The experiment has worked. good write.
August 13th, 2017 02:14 - CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards)
Good write Michael and thank you for showing me a new style of poetry.
August 13th, 2017 02:13 - Broken Shutters (WL Schuett)
Wonderful write. I always wonder what stories old building could...
August 13th, 2017 02:11 - Waiting Is End (Myself and me)
Good write and yes option 2 is the better one but all are good.
August 13th, 2017 02:09 - Katrina dials 911 (Bibbeck)
Good write. The people will always pull together when trouble looms.
August 13th, 2017 02:08 - Living (FredPeyer)
LIfe is there to be lived in ALL its various incarnations. Good write...
August 13th, 2017 02:07 - Resurrection Raptures (Orchidee)
Another good write Orchi.
August 13th, 2017 02:06 - Let Go Your Ego (WriteBeLight)
Very good write and very true. There are many like this.
August 13th, 2017 02:02 - Indifference (Jabberwocky)
Indifference can be a mighty weapon.
August 13th, 2017 02:01 - CARIBBEAN GIRL ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good write Brian. I have never been to the Caribbean but all the people...
August 13th, 2017 00:59 - Enticing. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write and opening to my day in the UK. Thank you Fay.
August 13th, 2017 00:51 - Cellblock D (Stephanie91)
Very good write about the way you feel trapped within this awful...
August 13th, 2017 00:35
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