Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60

• The Sailor\'s Farewell (Lorna) Very good write with great imagery.
  February 24th, 2018 01:22
• Absence of Truth (Nicholas Browning) Good write and so true.
  February 24th, 2018 01:21
• Siren Song (Jabberwocky) Maybe the song should be changed and a new beginning would be upon you.
  February 24th, 2018 01:19
• STILL CLIMBING. (Fay Slimm.) Super write Fay. Being betrayed is one of the worst things that can happen...
  February 24th, 2018 01:17
• BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS (Michael Edwards) \"To approach the spiritual in art, one will make as little use as...
  February 23rd, 2018 02:14
• BENEATH THE WANDERING STARS (Michael Edwards) May your words forever flow May your colours forever glow May the stars...
  February 23rd, 2018 02:13
• B of E #16: the man who knew (Frank Prem) Such a good write Frank, he knows but doesn\'t want to accept it.
  February 23rd, 2018 02:07
• Emotion (Mrskobrien) Good write and that last stanza is so very true.
  February 23rd, 2018 02:00
• Depression And Anxiety (Christina8) \"Hope wanes as winter lags on in such a way My solace is knowing...
  February 23rd, 2018 01:37
• Aye! That\'s Us Away! (Lorna) Very good write, I was sailing with you.
  February 23rd, 2018 01:34
• BEGINNINGS. (Fay Slimm.) Wonderful write Fay, fabulous and very meaningful last two lines.
  February 23rd, 2018 01:32
• Wholly Holy (Orchidee) Good write, may all the wicked be dealt with.
  February 22nd, 2018 02:47
• Baby Blues (Ambest) Beautiful write, babies are so special and stay in the memory, I can still...
  February 22nd, 2018 02:39
• TRUE HISTORY (Michael Edwards) Very true but what we also need to realise is that history is written by...
  February 22nd, 2018 02:36
• BILLY GRAHAM R.I.P ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Very good write Brian, I guessed that you would write a tribute to Billy...
  February 22nd, 2018 02:35
• First Dance (Resa71) Good emotive write, maybe that first dance is still to come.
  February 22nd, 2018 01:59
• Early Start. (Wallace) Those early morning strolls with nature are wonderful.
  February 22nd, 2018 01:58
• B of E #15: untitled - a (Frank Prem) Are we back in Emiles?
  February 22nd, 2018 01:57
• I don\'t think you love me (Birddie Jane) Very emotive write.
  February 22nd, 2018 01:56
• Happiness (Hoopie) Welcome to the world of happiness, may your Faith continue under God\'s...
  February 22nd, 2018 01:53
• Dance (Tally) \"Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass...It\'s about learning...
  February 22nd, 2018 01:42
• Shame And Doubt (Christina8) Good emotive write Christina but all will be well, Spring is nearly here,...
  February 22nd, 2018 01:37
• Last breathe (Diane260965) Very good emotive write Diane, yes you WILL meet again. Welcome to MPS.
  February 22nd, 2018 01:28
• Dear Grandpa (Ambest) Good write and tribute to a well loved grandpa. He will always be with...
  February 22nd, 2018 01:25
• Constant (Mrskobrien) Good emotive write, I hope your battle takes you into a peaceful world....
  February 22nd, 2018 01:23
• Bette Davis - The Legend (FineB) Good tribute to a very fine actress.
  February 22nd, 2018 01:18
• Dissonance (Jabberwocky) There are many like this but lieing can be hard as you have to remember...
  February 22nd, 2018 01:15
• Dispatcher - Table Down! (Lorna) What position did you use to write this poem. Good fun write Laura.
  February 21st, 2018 04:08
• LIVE SILVER. (Fay Slimm.) Hard work back in the day and maybe even harder now as the fish stocks get...
  February 21st, 2018 03:21
• Philadelphia Prosperities (Orchidee) Good write, that worship will strengthen all the time.
  February 21st, 2018 03:11
• NOVEMBER (Michael Edwards) Super write Michael, once more the imagery is brilliant.
  February 21st, 2018 02:56
• B of E #14: a pride in hands (Frank Prem) Life changes.
  February 21st, 2018 01:18
• Weeping Away The World. (Kevin browne) Good strong write Kevin and those last two lines are so true.
  February 21st, 2018 01:17
• My Quill (FredPeyer) That quietened room is such a special place to be where you can be one...
  February 21st, 2018 01:15
• INVENTION. (Fay Slimm.) Very good write Fay, your words inspire us.
  February 20th, 2018 08:46
• I\'ll Read the Clouds (Lorna) Good write, so many do not look up and there are so many great messages in...
  February 20th, 2018 08:45
• Rose Garden (Jabberwocky) Good one J, at least you can see the roses and they can lead to beauty.
  February 20th, 2018 08:44
• Deity Designings (Orchidee) Blessings to all.
  February 20th, 2018 03:21
• LOVE IS...etcetera (Michael Edwards) So you put washing up liquid in your Pinot Grigio eh?
  February 20th, 2018 02:42
• B of E #13: learning to twirl (Frank Prem) My dancing days are over but I did try to make an idiot of myself back in...
  February 20th, 2018 01:43
• A nobody (Hoopie) So very true, some people in this day and age cannot see past their own...
  February 20th, 2018 01:41
• SUCHNESS. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful write Fay.
  February 20th, 2018 01:24
• The Last Rail Ticket (Lorna) Very good write Laura and great imagery.
  February 20th, 2018 01:19
• Metamorphosis (Jabberwocky) Loves metamorphosis Wakens your repose It may then just go Leaving a...
  February 19th, 2018 05:02
• Patient Persuals (Orchidee) Your patience will not be tried as he is always with you.
  February 19th, 2018 04:19
• RAINBOW ~ REFLECTIONS ~ A Mirror Acrostic ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Beautiful picture to acompany a beautiful write. This reminded me of a...
  February 19th, 2018 04:18
• No Movement. (Wallace) It will.
  February 19th, 2018 01:42
• now ready to depart (Dusk arising) Beautiful write with great imagery.
  February 19th, 2018 01:41
• B of E #12: lights out (Frank Prem) Beautiful write, the normality of being together in bed is so reassuring.
  February 19th, 2018 01:39
• THE PATH (Michael Edwards) Good write Michael, I only hope she finds the right path.
  February 19th, 2018 01:37
• Soaring Past the Mountains (Poetboy123) Good write with the last two lines very uplifting.
  February 19th, 2018 01:26
• Lack (Jabberwocky) Maybe not all our yesterdays had jam but many of them did.
  February 19th, 2018 01:09
• God\'s Mistake (Lorna) Very true Lorna, I hope that I am not hear on earth to see it.
  February 19th, 2018 01:06
• 21 again?! (Orchidee) Happy Birthday young man, one with a zero in front of it eh. I have that...
  February 19th, 2018 01:05
• SEARCH ME ~ O GOD ! A Blank Verse 6 6 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Amen.
  February 18th, 2018 03:03
• MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER (Michael Edwards) Another one of your wonderful abstracts. Thank you.
  February 18th, 2018 03:01
• MORE THAN ONE ONE LINER (Michael Edwards) There are some good ones there Michael. I like them all. The first one...
  February 18th, 2018 03:01
• Why. (Wallace) Why indeed!
  February 18th, 2018 02:58
• B 0f E #11: a thickening gloom (Frank Prem) This one got to me, I read tragedy into this.
  February 18th, 2018 02:18
• I need you (Hoopie) Very true, we must always keep in touch with people.
  February 18th, 2018 02:14
• ETERNAL (ZIGGY) I was there, and always have been, My Spirit has come from infinity and...
  February 18th, 2018 01:45
• Madness In The Air (DesertWords) What a very powerfully emotive write.
  February 18th, 2018 01:43
• The Yew Tree (FredPeyer) Good write, those yew trees could tell many, many stories.
  February 17th, 2018 09:07
• Wisdom\'s Workings (Orchidee) Another good one Orchi.
  February 17th, 2018 09:05
• HAVE A NICE DAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good write Brian, each moment is special and they need grabbing with both...
  February 17th, 2018 09:04
• KISS ME HARDY (Michael Edwards) In that battle where he fell He could not get up and yell So the words...
  February 17th, 2018 01:50
• B of E #10: decisive uncertainty (Frank Prem) \'Decisive uncertainty\' rules.
  February 17th, 2018 01:44
• Calling (Lovelydove) Strong write straight from the heart, he will always be with you.
  February 17th, 2018 01:42
• Garden Break (W c) I really must get out into the garden! Good write.
  February 17th, 2018 01:40
• \"The Traveler\" (HeatherRose) Very good write, travelling with nature is so wonderful.
  February 17th, 2018 01:39
• Bette Davis and Joan Crawford - The Feud (FineB) Good write and tribute to two great actresses.
  February 17th, 2018 01:35
• Beneath a co-write with CandleWitch final part 3 ) (ZIGGY) Good write but the light will never die it will lighten the dark and...
  February 17th, 2018 01:32
• LIFE\'S LITTLE JOYS (Lasergraph) This is so true, the best present that you can give anybody is time and...
  February 17th, 2018 01:25
• Maybe (Myself and me) Maybe?
  February 16th, 2018 08:58
• unprepared (Dusk arising) Good write, may your life continue in ts new love.
  February 16th, 2018 08:58
• More Than. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful write and imagery Fay.
  February 16th, 2018 08:48
• B of E #9: watching the thread (Frank Prem) Those unexpected photos can really surprise us.
  February 16th, 2018 03:43
• Omniscient Observations (Orchidee) Lead me indeed Orchi. Good write.
  February 16th, 2018 03:41
• IN DENIAL (Michael Edwards) Very true Michael, but some just do not understand or want to understand.
  February 16th, 2018 03:40
• Love can never be denied (FredPeyer) Yes Fred, love can never be disguised or denied.
  February 16th, 2018 01:23
• Leaking Clock (WL Schuett) Super write WL, the emotion and imagery leak through your words so very...
  February 16th, 2018 01:21
• Unequivocal Bliss (FredPeyer) Beautiful write. This is the thing about embracing nature, we can all go...
  February 16th, 2018 01:18
• Bitter Valentine (Jabberwocky) Good write, no messing around with these words.
  February 16th, 2018 01:14
• CAGELESS. (Fay Slimm.) It is wonderful to see raptors in flight, they should all have their...
  February 15th, 2018 08:58
• HIGHWAY TO HAWAII (BRIAN & ANGELA) I have used that joke in a poem before. Thanks for a smile today Brian.
  February 15th, 2018 08:56
• Weeping Willow. (Wallace) Beautiful write.
  February 15th, 2018 02:26
• WHERE ONCE IN TIME I HELD DOMAIN (Michael Edwards) Very good dark write, the imagery is wonderful, a picture painted with...
  February 15th, 2018 02:25
• B of E #8: special occasion (Frank Prem) The romantic side comes out at last.
  February 15th, 2018 02:24
• For Valentine’s Day (Malubotelho) Wonderful write mal, so glad to see you back. Thank you for your kind...
  February 15th, 2018 02:21
• A Love So True (Christina8) Beautiful loving write.
  February 14th, 2018 09:01
• VALENTINE\'S MESSAGE. (Fay Slimm.) Super write Fay.
  February 14th, 2018 09:00
• Sounds of Hawaii (FredPeyer) Super write and sounds of your wonderful world Fred.
  February 14th, 2018 08:58
• ANGELA VALENTINE ~ A SUPA SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good write, may your love never cease. Regards Uncle Andy.
  February 14th, 2018 02:47
• ME AND MY FAMILY (Michael Edwards) But if you trace it back to Adam and Eve how did you get back to the...
  February 14th, 2018 01:59
• B of E #7: digging water and kissing clouds (Frank Prem) Intriguing as ever Frank.
  February 14th, 2018 01:56
• A Selection of Couplets (FredPeyer) Very good couplets Fred.
  February 14th, 2018 01:53
• words your eyes will never see (Dusk arising) Very good emotive laden write.
  February 14th, 2018 01:30
• UNDETERRED. (Fay Slimm.) Good write, looking for the positive in all is a wonderful thing to do.
  February 13th, 2018 09:09
• I JUST PRAY THAT I\'LL SURVIVE ~ Title Progression Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Survival is always good, I am 70 this year and have managed to survive.
  February 13th, 2018 09:06
• Too Bad She Died - She Made Lovely Pickles (Lorna) Good write, those women were wonderfully strong in the most difficult of...
  February 13th, 2018 09:05