Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Bring Along a Lantern (Neville) Who\'s gonna despise you lit up against the backdrop like that and...
  February 25th, 2019 11:32
• Our Choir. (Goldfinch60) Blame the director every time, you\'re right.
  February 25th, 2019 05:01
• THE LADY AND HER DOG (Michael Edwards) Really funny piece today. So many snooty ladies with their lapdogs roam...
  February 25th, 2019 04:59
• Just for one second (Rebeccasr5) All hearts are fragile. Needy of tender loving care.... good luck.
  February 24th, 2019 17:53
• Thank you again (Poetic Dan) Go for it man. Theres a person inside you waiting for his public. Your...
  February 24th, 2019 17:06
• demons in my head (Elmina) Simple you say but its very good. I like the thoughts it brought to me of...
  February 24th, 2019 12:32
• Little White Lies (Neville) We all tell a few porky pies don\'t we. But i never do in these comments....
  February 24th, 2019 12:28
• Hairstyles. (Goldfinch60) I knew a lady who had legs like her dawg. It was a basset hound. On...
  February 24th, 2019 12:24
• LAST NIGHT (Michael Edwards) What had been in the can? Was it a ring pull or just another leg...
  February 24th, 2019 12:21
• The betrayal (Hoopie) A fine retelling of the \"no honour amongst theives\" theme. pmsl @...
  February 22nd, 2019 11:25
• ONCE-SIPPED. (Fay Slimm.) You are a steamy hot bundle of passion here Fay.
  February 22nd, 2019 07:25
• A Certain Point of Beauty (Neville) Ahhh that moment of descision \"should I stay or should i...
  February 22nd, 2019 07:20
• Ink spots and paper snowballs (Andrew Charles Forrest) I wish you many refills for your many talented pens sir. Excellent...
  February 22nd, 2019 07:16
• Contentment. (Goldfinch60) Contentment has only ever been a transient in my life.
  February 22nd, 2019 07:13
• MORE 575 SMILES (3) (Michael Edwards) LOL @ gobbledegook instructions. I bought a set of timer plug ins on...
  February 22nd, 2019 07:10
• Risk (Hoopie) I hope you are successful with your plans. Remain positive no matter what...
  February 21st, 2019 10:18
• Spring (Sylviasearcher) Falling in love will bring you into blossom.... a radiance. When my ex...
  February 21st, 2019 10:15
• WORDLESS. (Fay Slimm.) Ribbit! You brought to mind the quiet of woodland with a gentle roar...
  February 21st, 2019 09:51
• Heathen (Neville) Cor mistah, you dont half bring out the neanderthal in me. Me and the boys...
  February 21st, 2019 09:45
• Strength (Natasha_J_Bella) God, the omnipotent one! Causes famine, birth defects, illness,...
  February 21st, 2019 03:39
• Dance the Tango. (Goldfinch60) Look at them handbags..... \"are ya dancin\"... \"are y\'askin\" .... ...
  February 21st, 2019 03:35
• Lie to Me (Goddess of the Mist) Crafty, you give no mention of the little white lies you\'re feeding to...
  February 21st, 2019 02:28
• alone i lay (Frtheheart) This is quite a little gem. I think it can be taken as either pessimistic...
  February 21st, 2019 02:26
• The Bad Ass (Hoopie) Yes, that\'s how it goes till one sorts oneself out... if ever.
  February 21st, 2019 02:21
• Phantoms (Amherrera1190) Remain fond of them, they\'re jewels in your memory. This is you moving...
  February 21st, 2019 01:57
• Wishlist (NaomiRayne) Yes it sure is. Collect as many as you can. Write them for your memory\'s...
  February 21st, 2019 01:55
• Someone\'s Eye. (Kevin browne) A mysterious wander through the verve of yesterday and a hint of sadness...
  February 21st, 2019 01:51
• BLACK AND WHITE (Shayl) Yes war is awful.... and we see ISIS men happily beheading non combatant...
  February 20th, 2019 17:15
• Blooming (GeorgiaRayne) Absolutely right ! When the sun shines for you.... just blossom out!...
  February 20th, 2019 17:12
• Days in the Ocean (Sese) I was a crab once too but the sideways walking nearly got me run over.
  February 20th, 2019 17:10
• These Bitches (Miana) (JaydeVictoria) Confront their hostility with vomit and enjoy their revulsion. Great...
  February 20th, 2019 17:09
• i cant feel anymore (Laurenroe) Lovely \'feelings\' writing poet. I often wonder whether i am writing...
  February 20th, 2019 16:42
• Blink of an eye (Poetic Dan) Is it right to listen to the heart and mind. ??? You pose as a...
  February 20th, 2019 13:36
• FORCES OF CREATION ....2 (Suresh) Well that was really great poetry (not).
  February 20th, 2019 13:30
• Good Teacher (W c) If only.... (sighs). I wish they were all like that to ALL their
  February 20th, 2019 13:25
• Falling Short (Cynthia) You sound like just my kind of a gal! A true and genuine one-off.
  February 20th, 2019 13:24
• All Things Matter (DesertWords) If there were an answer to this important question, then my suggestion...
  February 20th, 2019 09:01
• What Do You Drive (Neville) I can hear that baritone sax solo..... and the coloured girls say \'do...
  February 20th, 2019 07:52
• MORE 575 SMILES (2) (Michael Edwards) It was probably the occupier turning themselves inside out after a...
  February 20th, 2019 07:41
• Honour Unfounded. (Goldfinch60) When a politically minded person allocates their loyalty to a political...
  February 20th, 2019 07:38
• Writer\'s Block (DesertWords) Writers block only exists when you\'ve nothing clear to say.
  February 17th, 2019 08:58
• Embu (Neville) What need of words when they are only a carriage of sentiment. The prayer...
  February 17th, 2019 08:56
• Shadows to Light. (Goldfinch60) Great positive message. But this link tells it...
  February 17th, 2019 08:46
• My Mother My Friend (Ranita) A very beautiful tribute to your mother. Love shines from your words....
  February 17th, 2019 02:40
• I AM, I WILL BE (Michael Edwards) Old dawg, new tricks? .... nah!
  February 17th, 2019 02:35
• A Handful of Ghosts (Neville) A pleasant near Miss for your heart. Not the right companion for the whole...
  February 16th, 2019 09:41
• Taxi (Brittany Jo) Dont forget the romance of such times, beautifully captured here. They...
  February 16th, 2019 09:38
• Newspaper Chatting. (Goldfinch60) I recall a voice from my youth, a strange voice from across the atlantic...
  February 16th, 2019 09:35
• MONOSTICHS BY THE SEVERAL (Michael Edwards) Every one a jem.
  February 16th, 2019 09:30
• Saviour life’s moments (Dominique ruth) Great and such good advice in a lovely positive package. I like this,...
  February 15th, 2019 09:22
• RECOLLECTIONS. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful. All those lovely things we took for granted as children are now...
  February 15th, 2019 04:21
• When I am Far (Neville) Hmmmmm how lovers didst communicate their passion afore the days of...
  February 15th, 2019 04:17
• Birthday Valentine. (Goldfinch60) You certainly write them Goldfinch!. Do you ever wonder about how...
  February 15th, 2019 04:13
• SECRET SANCTUARY (Michael Edwards) Such underwear ruined the public need for a certain product which had a...
  February 15th, 2019 04:08
• The empty cage... (Jon Nakapalau) She is gone and somewhere, every now and again, a breeze catches my face...
  February 15th, 2019 04:01
• Sans Sustenance (Neville) Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in...
  February 14th, 2019 09:49
• Sans Sustenance (Neville) Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in...
  February 14th, 2019 09:01
• RELIANCE. (Fay Slimm.) I wouldn\'t want to wake to a life without a sky. The sky illuminates...
  February 14th, 2019 08:58
• Saint Valentines Day Senryu. (Goldfinch60) You are truly blessed.
  February 14th, 2019 05:18
• SUGGESTIVELY STRUCK (Michael Edwards) And the choirboy was struck dumb at the sight. the dirty old bishop of...
  February 14th, 2019 05:17
• Locusts (Amherrera1190) You cannot be serious. Surely you dont have such a low opinion of...
  February 13th, 2019 14:16
• It Feels Like ...... (Suresh) I don\'t know who this HE is but if i were you i wouldn\'t waste any more...
  February 13th, 2019 14:07
• If you see it! Nudge it back my way (Poetic Dan) Now this is you at your poetic best Dan. Your last line is worthy of a...
  February 13th, 2019 14:04
• Lemon Rind (SerenWise) Shame that there are those among us who make us feel this way sometimes....
  February 13th, 2019 14:00
• Cusp (Neville) The beach with crashing waves, relentless, powerful beauty. Always...
  February 13th, 2019 13:49
• Word Search (FineB) Great to see poetry about the most diverse things in our lives. Great...
  February 13th, 2019 13:42
• YESTERDAY, TODAY, TOMORROW. (Michael Edwards) Lovely pic of the ex mum-in-law today Michael. Tomorrows yesterday once...
  February 13th, 2019 13:39
• JOINED. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful Fay. So many people robbed of their one true love by death must...
  February 13th, 2019 13:35
• The Moon of Love - FIBS. (Goldfinch60) Is this algebra or poetry? LOL Well known now that i dislike mixing...
  February 13th, 2019 13:27
• INVITING. (Fay Slimm.) Gosh, you do write so beautifully about the dawn. How many of your dawn...
  February 12th, 2019 08:54
• Self Harm (Neville) Shocker. You\'ve brought to me a new appreciation of some aspects of self...
  February 12th, 2019 08:45
• Aging Crime. (Goldfinch60) Great music, reminds me of how Buddy Holly\'s sound filled my childhood...
  February 12th, 2019 02:36
• PAINS OF YESTERDAY (Michael Edwards) I like that, and it is so true. Another of life\'s gems, how sleeping on...
  February 12th, 2019 02:27
• Insanity of a Sentence (ColeyCam) This is falling in love. This is being in love. And there is worry in...
  February 11th, 2019 16:31
• 487 (Aislinn Wilson) There are many parts of our minds which we bind to another. Parts we...
  February 11th, 2019 16:25
• Untitled (Suresh) Ah there you have it. Your soul is for unscrupulous religious members to...
  February 11th, 2019 16:22
• Disillusioned (Andrew Charles Forrest) Lovely piece sir. Picture reminds me of Skye. When they are gone, what...
  February 11th, 2019 10:55
• Mental Wars (Asiakayy) Life is a struggle at times especially when you are young. For advice is...
  February 11th, 2019 10:49
• Nomad (LIGHT WARRIOR) Do you feel better now? They say writing is theraputic and you appear to...
  February 11th, 2019 09:41
• My sky (AJ) I like this, gave me a big smile. Cute.
  February 11th, 2019 08:58
• Save the Elephant 🐘 (Joanna Garrido) It is illegal in U.K. to sell ivory unless it is old ivory as you will...
  February 11th, 2019 08:56
• Mirrors Cracked (Neville) Bits of this and that remain, glances at mirrors recall a lurking...
  February 11th, 2019 08:51
• VEILS. (Fay Slimm.) Reality is but an illusion! Yes I do look for something beyond my...
  February 11th, 2019 08:45
• The Sixties, was I There? (Goldfinch60) Yes those were the days, i must be a couple of years your junior for elvis...
  February 11th, 2019 03:32
• MARY HAD...(3) (Michael Edwards) Another good laugh from you... ok i\'ll publish some.
  February 11th, 2019 03:20
• Sunday rhythm & breeze (Poetic Dan) Great observational piece with lifestyle message.
  February 10th, 2019 09:45
• scars (Dusk arising) You are a true and genuine individual. Thank you for reading and comment.
  February 10th, 2019 05:47
• Last Words (Neville) A truly poetic farewell. Yes some goodbyes linger for they are a lost...
  February 10th, 2019 04:50
• ANDY HAD... (Michael Edwards) Nice one.... i\'ve decided to take up your challenge and post some of my...
  February 10th, 2019 04:42
• My Granddaughter. (Goldfinch60) Lovely read Goldfinch. My two granddaughters are under 5 and such a...
  February 10th, 2019 04:39
• Come give a cheer! (Poetic Dan) This is a light fun read. I have no idea what marbleympics is all about...
  February 9th, 2019 09:17
• Bethune Re-visited (Neville) War is disgusting, now a lovely place is known for it\'s part in three...
  February 9th, 2019 09:14
• Today Not Tomorrow. (Goldfinch60) To right sir! I have slowed down so many things i used to rush with.
  February 9th, 2019 09:04
• When The Lord Comes Back (ForeverJesus7) Persistence is the therapy.
  February 9th, 2019 09:02
• MARY HAD (2) (Michael Edwards) Mary has a brother Michael who posts on MPS not always the finest...
  February 9th, 2019 09:00
• I\'m Afraid I\'ll Lose You (BlackCat) Jeez, if its that painful get out of the relationship. Whats the...
  February 8th, 2019 21:59
• My heart (Dakota) No you\'re not lost. Your heart just needs to learn to be happy enjoying...
  February 8th, 2019 21:54
• Secrets (SerenWise) Wonderful! and if you knew those fantasies would they please you or...
  February 8th, 2019 17:32
• One Realisation and Two Ponders (Classicmister) So if one foot is always still, then the other one is doing all the work....
  February 8th, 2019 13:29
• Sunday (Luckykarma) I remember the feeling which oozes from your writing here. Pure joy. Being...
  February 8th, 2019 13:25