Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• My Mother My Friend (Ranita) A very beautiful tribute to your mother. Love shines from your words....
  February 17th, 2019 02:40
• I AM, I WILL BE (Michael Edwards) Old dawg, new tricks? .... nah!
  February 17th, 2019 02:35
• A Handful of Ghosts (Neville) A pleasant near Miss for your heart. Not the right companion for the whole...
  February 16th, 2019 09:41
• Taxi (Brittany Jo) Dont forget the romance of such times, beautifully captured here. They...
  February 16th, 2019 09:38
• Newspaper Chatting. (Goldfinch60) I recall a voice from my youth, a strange voice from across the atlantic...
  February 16th, 2019 09:35
• MONOSTICHS BY THE SEVERAL (Michael Edwards) Every one a jem.
  February 16th, 2019 09:30
• Saviour life’s moments (Dominique ruth) Great and such good advice in a lovely positive package. I like this,...
  February 15th, 2019 09:22
• RECOLLECTIONS. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful. All those lovely things we took for granted as children are now...
  February 15th, 2019 04:21
• When I am Far (Neville) Hmmmmm how lovers didst communicate their passion afore the days of...
  February 15th, 2019 04:17
• Birthday Valentine. (Goldfinch60) You certainly write them Goldfinch!. Do you ever wonder about how...
  February 15th, 2019 04:13
• SECRET SANCTUARY (Michael Edwards) Such underwear ruined the public need for a certain product which had a...
  February 15th, 2019 04:08
• The empty cage... (Jon Nakapalau) She is gone and somewhere, every now and again, a breeze catches my face...
  February 15th, 2019 04:01
• Sans Sustenance (Neville) Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in...
  February 14th, 2019 09:49
• Sans Sustenance (Neville) Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in...
  February 14th, 2019 09:01
• RELIANCE. (Fay Slimm.) I wouldn\'t want to wake to a life without a sky. The sky illuminates...
  February 14th, 2019 08:58
• Saint Valentines Day Senryu. (Goldfinch60) You are truly blessed.
  February 14th, 2019 05:18
• SUGGESTIVELY STRUCK (Michael Edwards) And the choirboy was struck dumb at the sight. the dirty old bishop of...
  February 14th, 2019 05:17
• Locusts (Amherrera1190) You cannot be serious. Surely you dont have such a low opinion of...
  February 13th, 2019 14:16
• It Feels Like ...... (Suresh) I don\'t know who this HE is but if i were you i wouldn\'t waste any more...
  February 13th, 2019 14:07
• If you see it! Nudge it back my way (Poetic Dan) Now this is you at your poetic best Dan. Your last line is worthy of a...
  February 13th, 2019 14:04
• Lemon Rind (SerenWise) Shame that there are those among us who make us feel this way sometimes....
  February 13th, 2019 14:00
• Cusp (Neville) The beach with crashing waves, relentless, powerful beauty. Always...
  February 13th, 2019 13:49
• Word Search (FineB) Great to see poetry about the most diverse things in our lives. Great...
  February 13th, 2019 13:42
• YESTERDAY, TODAY, TOMORROW. (Michael Edwards) Lovely pic of the ex mum-in-law today Michael. Tomorrows yesterday once...
  February 13th, 2019 13:39
• JOINED. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful Fay. So many people robbed of their one true love by death must...
  February 13th, 2019 13:35
• The Moon of Love - FIBS. (Goldfinch60) Is this algebra or poetry? LOL Well known now that i dislike mixing...
  February 13th, 2019 13:27
• INVITING. (Fay Slimm.) Gosh, you do write so beautifully about the dawn. How many of your dawn...
  February 12th, 2019 08:54
• Self Harm (Neville) Shocker. You\'ve brought to me a new appreciation of some aspects of self...
  February 12th, 2019 08:45
• Aging Crime. (Goldfinch60) Great music, reminds me of how Buddy Holly\'s sound filled my childhood...
  February 12th, 2019 02:36
• PAINS OF YESTERDAY (Michael Edwards) I like that, and it is so true. Another of life\'s gems, how sleeping on...
  February 12th, 2019 02:27
• Insanity of a Sentence (ColeyCam) This is falling in love. This is being in love. And there is worry in...
  February 11th, 2019 16:31
• 487 (Aislinn Wilson) There are many parts of our minds which we bind to another. Parts we...
  February 11th, 2019 16:25
• Untitled (Suresh) Ah there you have it. Your soul is for unscrupulous religious members to...
  February 11th, 2019 16:22
• Disillusioned (Andrew Charles Forrest) Lovely piece sir. Picture reminds me of Skye. When they are gone, what...
  February 11th, 2019 10:55
• Mental Wars (Asiakayy) Life is a struggle at times especially when you are young. For advice is...
  February 11th, 2019 10:49
• Nomad (LIGHT WARRIOR) Do you feel better now? They say writing is theraputic and you appear to...
  February 11th, 2019 09:41
• My sky (AJ) I like this, gave me a big smile. Cute.
  February 11th, 2019 08:58
• Save the Elephant 🐘 (Joanna Garrido) It is illegal in U.K. to sell ivory unless it is old ivory as you will...
  February 11th, 2019 08:56
• Mirrors Cracked (Neville) Bits of this and that remain, glances at mirrors recall a lurking...
  February 11th, 2019 08:51
• VEILS. (Fay Slimm.) Reality is but an illusion! Yes I do look for something beyond my...
  February 11th, 2019 08:45
• The Sixties, was I There? (Goldfinch60) Yes those were the days, i must be a couple of years your junior for elvis...
  February 11th, 2019 03:32
• MARY HAD...(3) (Michael Edwards) Another good laugh from you... ok i\'ll publish some.
  February 11th, 2019 03:20
• Sunday rhythm & breeze (Poetic Dan) Great observational piece with lifestyle message.
  February 10th, 2019 09:45
• scars (Dusk arising) You are a true and genuine individual. Thank you for reading and comment.
  February 10th, 2019 05:47
• Last Words (Neville) A truly poetic farewell. Yes some goodbyes linger for they are a lost...
  February 10th, 2019 04:50
• ANDY HAD... (Michael Edwards) Nice one.... i\'ve decided to take up your challenge and post some of my...
  February 10th, 2019 04:42
• My Granddaughter. (Goldfinch60) Lovely read Goldfinch. My two granddaughters are under 5 and such a...
  February 10th, 2019 04:39
• Come give a cheer! (Poetic Dan) This is a light fun read. I have no idea what marbleympics is all about...
  February 9th, 2019 09:17
• Bethune Re-visited (Neville) War is disgusting, now a lovely place is known for it\'s part in three...
  February 9th, 2019 09:14
• Today Not Tomorrow. (Goldfinch60) To right sir! I have slowed down so many things i used to rush with.
  February 9th, 2019 09:04
• When The Lord Comes Back (ForeverJesus7) Persistence is the therapy.
  February 9th, 2019 09:02
• MARY HAD (2) (Michael Edwards) Mary has a brother Michael who posts on MPS not always the finest...
  February 9th, 2019 09:00
• I\'m Afraid I\'ll Lose You (BlackCat) Jeez, if its that painful get out of the relationship. Whats the...
  February 8th, 2019 21:59
• My heart (Dakota) No you\'re not lost. Your heart just needs to learn to be happy enjoying...
  February 8th, 2019 21:54
• Secrets (SerenWise) Wonderful! and if you knew those fantasies would they please you or...
  February 8th, 2019 17:32
• One Realisation and Two Ponders (Classicmister) So if one foot is always still, then the other one is doing all the work....
  February 8th, 2019 13:29
• Sunday (Luckykarma) I remember the feeling which oozes from your writing here. Pure joy. Being...
  February 8th, 2019 13:25
• Fooled by you (Theskyisnotblue) Ouch! I bet that really hurt. I cant stand liars and cheats. The first lie...
  February 8th, 2019 13:22
• I LOVE YOU (Shayl) Made me laugh this one. The way you turn it around in last verse is good...
  February 8th, 2019 13:19
• ABANDONMENT. (Fay Slimm.) Oh my, what a wonderful conjunction of words \"tumbles at measured pace in...
  February 8th, 2019 07:43
• memory (Siranswerer) Excellent, that\'s just how certain memories and loss haunt us, an feel...
  February 8th, 2019 07:39
• Love and Warm Toast (Neville) I\' ve just been enjoying a refreshing cup of viagra tea. It doesn\'t do...
  February 8th, 2019 04:34
• Darkness into Light. (Goldfinch60) Really glad to read you are on the up my friend. Life\'s burdens can catch...
  February 8th, 2019 03:15
• MARY HAD (1) (Michael Edwards) Mary had a great big cat she put it in bucket and when she put a small...
  February 8th, 2019 03:10
• Am I strong? (Middlearth) You are the strength of humankind. You are the giver and protector of life...
  February 7th, 2019 16:26
• The Journey (Vvnrose) Lots of wisdom expressed in just a few lines from you. Good, very...
  February 7th, 2019 16:18
• I have it, they have it and so do you! (Poetic Dan) I love those last two lines. Im that rebel who lives within the rules but...
  February 7th, 2019 16:15
• Lest We Forget (AJ) A famous poem by Dylan Thomas comes to mind, it begins:- \'Do not go...
  February 7th, 2019 16:07
• Victims of Indifference (Neville) I didn\'t know \"nutters within\" was latin. Methinks you could be...
  February 7th, 2019 06:39
• Victims of Indifference (Neville) I didn\'t know \"nutters within\" was latin. Methinks you could be...
  February 7th, 2019 06:10
• RECALL. (Fay Slimm.) Made me think of my own \'nom de plume\' dusk arising whilst reading...
  February 7th, 2019 06:04
• The Lady of Shallott Rises. (Goldfinch60) Cleverly put together. A boss of mine years ago used to do huge jigsaws...
  February 7th, 2019 05:56
• THE ORCHARD (Michael Edwards) Something fishy going on in that picture. Lovely read you\'ve given...
  February 7th, 2019 05:51
• RESILIENCE. (Fay Slimm.) Oooh-arrr my deario, I can see the nostril breath of lowing cattle in the...
  February 6th, 2019 12:54
• Once Upon a Tablecloth (Neville) Seeing this title in today\'s list just made me chuckle. And yea, verily,...
  February 6th, 2019 12:43
• 575s SERIOUS (2) (Michael Edwards) Imp is me disappearing through the hole. But does choosing the hole as ...
  February 6th, 2019 12:37
• Lake Walking. (Goldfinch60) Dont risk it, i fell through the ice many times as a kid. I\'m not so...
  February 6th, 2019 12:32
• How Can It Be? (Goldfinch60) You lucky people.
  February 6th, 2019 01:41
• HEARABLE. (Fay Slimm.) You took me back to something half a lifetime ago. i wonder if it is...
  February 6th, 2019 01:39
• Many thoughts kept and lost (Poetic Dan) The essence of the words of Desiderata come to mind again reading your...
  February 6th, 2019 01:30
• Park Fun (W c) Halcyon days, where did all that energy go to? The magic of so many first...
  February 4th, 2019 19:00
• Just friends (Kasia Kevan) Go on.... you know you want to.
  February 4th, 2019 18:54
• OUTGROWN (Fay Slimm.) What a wonderful analogy, casting seeds to the wind ... encouragement to...
  February 4th, 2019 18:49
• New or Old. (Goldfinch60) Especially shoes. We all \'wear\' our clothes in unique manner. By...
  February 4th, 2019 18:44
• Virus (Neville) And we, none of us, are immune to her intent...... for upon us she...
  February 4th, 2019 18:37
• SILENCE (Jenn2009) In a silent way you\'re dead right there.
  February 4th, 2019 18:31
• POLITICAL CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards) I bet some cow turned him in. He was only acting the goat. He\'s too...
  February 4th, 2019 01:56
• trust me (Lainacarson98) I know where you\'re coming from with this. I warned each of my eight...
  February 4th, 2019 01:53
• Maria (SerenWise) Were you looking for/expecting salvation?
  February 4th, 2019 01:22
• online dating (Abora) Strange what the web can bring out in folk.
  February 4th, 2019 01:20
• I Have No More Ideas. (Kevin browne) Damn good fun read mate! Smiled all thru it.
  February 4th, 2019 00:15
• I Guess This Is The Part I Say.... (Edthepoet) When you\'ve battled thru and arrived at being a love scarred, worse for...
  February 3rd, 2019 21:01
• Ink Blots (Neville) Some people place before us that which we cannot see. Oft described as...
  February 3rd, 2019 20:48
• My dance with death (Birddie Jane) Who\'s gonna write like this for us if he comes to stay eh? Do you like...
  February 3rd, 2019 20:46
• Different Pages (Sylviasearcher) Love the way you have used the books and library analogy here. I just call...
  February 3rd, 2019 20:43
• 575 SMILES (3) (Michael Edwards) OMG it just begs for this..... lend me your herring aid then please.
  February 3rd, 2019 20:37
• A letter to myself (Courtneyreanna) That is most definitely a great stance from where to begin a poetic...
  February 3rd, 2019 20:36
• Our Railroad Town (W c) Yes, i feel the romance of railways in your writing. Near to me there is...
  February 2nd, 2019 14:30
• Our Railroad Town (W c) Yes, i feel the romance of railways in your writing. Near to me there is...
  February 2nd, 2019 14:20
• Reflections (Suresh) If we are to be held accountable, i wonder by who\'s standards we will be...
  February 2nd, 2019 14:13