Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Know Your Worth. (Goldfinch60)
So very true. This something I have taken on board and i am affronted by...
March 6th, 2019 06:20 - Know Your Worth. (Goldfinch60)
So very true. This something I have taken on board and i am affronted by...
March 6th, 2019 04:34 - RICIN\'S NICE (Michael Edwards)
Whatever next... congregational traffic wardens ?... coned off \'aisle...
March 6th, 2019 04:28 - What We Have Here (Neville)
Nice one. A bit like a mirror for me... I\'m a creature of mood.
You do...
March 5th, 2019 05:51 - A Laugh Or Two...... (Orchidee)
Good to see you in high spirits. You always come across in MPS as a...
March 5th, 2019 04:44 - INSIDE ME. (Fay Slimm.)
Though we can be shaken to the foundations by the unexpected actions of...
March 5th, 2019 04:36 - Flower. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, but could you stand being interfered with by a bee?
And there i...
March 5th, 2019 04:23 - YOU DO NOT SEE (Michael Edwards)
You brought out the bat in me until i realised the blood had gone to my...
March 5th, 2019 04:09 - Paranoia is right (Poetic Dan)
Well yeah, kind of.
Look i used to be in bands, more than i care to...
March 4th, 2019 15:14 - TO THE SANDMAN (Fay Slimm.)
Excellent timing, i didn\'t sleep a wink last night.
Oh falling asleep...
March 4th, 2019 15:08 - Evil in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Fine wise words. But there are some who are content to be evil. Self not...
March 4th, 2019 03:19 - I Am That Guy (Neville)
I could cuss you but you\'re the guy i always wanted to be?
The guy i...
March 4th, 2019 03:16 - MOPPING UP (Michael Edwards)
Good laugh, filth of course.
March 4th, 2019 03:12 - One Bird, Two Stones (Wi11ow)
Amazing. You had me gripped with this. Usually i get bored with works of...
March 3rd, 2019 16:36 - In a Room (Sylviasearcher)
Your words reminded me very much of an affair i had with a lady in a chat...
March 3rd, 2019 16:27 - Paper Cuts (Neville)
Yes we do see them along the high street, in their chains of magazine...
March 3rd, 2019 12:09 - Valley on the Hill. (Goldfinch60)
English language has become Englitch hasn\'t it. And a garden centre has...
March 3rd, 2019 12:06 - A COUPLE MORE (Michael Edwards)
LOL that last one made me think of a flock of christian sheep.
March 3rd, 2019 12:02 - ONCE (Fay Slimm.)
Betwixt the light of dusk and dawn
In deepest dreams my mind be drawn
To...
March 1st, 2019 10:35 - E.U. (Neville)
A place where i can...... move the world just one step on.
Fun to...
March 1st, 2019 10:27 - Ministerial Anger. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m not sure whether the correct word which comes to mind for these false...
March 1st, 2019 10:19 - SOME EDITITS (Michael Edwards)
Dick
Dick Tator
Dick tator ship
Bismark
Love your play on words, ...
March 1st, 2019 10:12 - Incrementally Speaking (Neville)
My life of never never
one of carefree deposits
and repossession...
February 27th, 2019 14:54 - SOLO. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah the sailors girl waits, knowing all the tides. Knowing his last words....
February 27th, 2019 14:45 - Mary Had a Little Lamb 7. (Goldfinch60)
Those were my teenage years, loads of sex all around but no experience...
February 27th, 2019 14:38 - A MIRTH OF INSIGHTFUL MONOSTICHS (Michael Edwards)
A word in your ear..... \"drum\".
February 27th, 2019 14:32 - The West (SerenWise)
Both the joy and pain of a romance divided by an ocean call out from your...
February 26th, 2019 17:19 - My Muse (Tiffany_Arnold)
Awwww so much love here. Really is a pleasure to read your words.
February 26th, 2019 15:40 - Coronating a nightshade dawn (Whisperingquill)
The best is yet to come.
February 26th, 2019 06:27 - AWESOME. (Fay Slimm.)
An experience beyond my own. I can\'t say i\'m envious as there is no...
February 26th, 2019 06:23 - Reconfigure it out (Neville)
Maths yuk... i dont believe arithmetic and poetry should mix except...
February 26th, 2019 05:11 - “Love” (MissileOfUncertainty)
So walk away, or did someone take your legs away?
\"Without you i\'d be...
February 26th, 2019 04:49 - Time Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60)
I have so many unfinished pieces which i think stem from the occasions you...
February 26th, 2019 04:43 - MY OWN EMISSARY (Michael Edwards)
Aren\'t we all, unless we are easily led.
What a shame we have nothing in...
February 26th, 2019 04:38 - The Darkness (Prettylittlepoet)
It can be safe in the dark.
February 25th, 2019 19:40 - Snowdrops at Bridgewater (P.H.Rose)
You brought back memories of a romantic time spent in the Somerset levels....
February 25th, 2019 11:42 - Remind myself and maybe you (Poetic Dan)
Dan...Absolutely bang on the truth there mate! I couldn\'t agree...
February 25th, 2019 11:37 - Bring Along a Lantern (Neville)
Who\'s gonna despise you lit up against the backdrop like that and...
February 25th, 2019 11:32 - Our Choir. (Goldfinch60)
Blame the director every time, you\'re right.
February 25th, 2019 05:01 - THE LADY AND HER DOG (Michael Edwards)
Really funny piece today. So many snooty ladies with their lapdogs roam...
February 25th, 2019 04:59 - Just for one second (Rebeccasr5)
All hearts are fragile. Needy of tender loving care.... good luck.
February 24th, 2019 17:53 - Thank you again (Poetic Dan)
Go for it man. Theres a person inside you waiting for his public. Your...
February 24th, 2019 17:06 - demons in my head (Elmina)
Simple you say but its very good.
I like the thoughts it brought to me of...
February 24th, 2019 12:32 - Little White Lies (Neville)
We all tell a few porky pies don\'t we. But i never do in these comments....
February 24th, 2019 12:28 - Hairstyles. (Goldfinch60)
I knew a lady who had legs like her dawg. It was a basset hound.
On...
February 24th, 2019 12:24 - LAST NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
What had been in the can? Was it a ring pull or just another leg...
February 24th, 2019 12:21 - The betrayal (Hoopie)
A fine retelling of the \"no honour amongst theives\" theme.
pmsl @...
February 22nd, 2019 11:25 - ONCE-SIPPED. (Fay Slimm.)
You are a steamy hot bundle of passion here Fay.
February 22nd, 2019 07:25 - A Certain Point of Beauty (Neville)
Ahhh that moment of descision \"should I stay or should i...
February 22nd, 2019 07:20 - Ink spots and paper snowballs (Andrew Charles Forrest)
I wish you many refills for your many talented pens sir.
Excellent...
February 22nd, 2019 07:16 - Contentment. (Goldfinch60)
Contentment has only ever been a transient in my life.
February 22nd, 2019 07:13 - MORE 575 SMILES (3) (Michael Edwards)
LOL @ gobbledegook instructions. I bought a set of timer plug ins on...
February 22nd, 2019 07:10 - Risk (Hoopie)
I hope you are successful with your plans. Remain positive no matter what...
February 21st, 2019 10:18 - Spring (Sylviasearcher)
Falling in love will bring you into blossom.... a radiance.
When my ex...
February 21st, 2019 10:15 - WORDLESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Ribbit! You brought to mind the quiet of woodland with a gentle roar...
February 21st, 2019 09:51 - Heathen (Neville)
Cor mistah, you dont half bring out the neanderthal in me. Me and the boys...
February 21st, 2019 09:45 - Strength (Natasha_J_Bella)
God, the omnipotent one! Causes famine, birth defects, illness,...
February 21st, 2019 03:39 - Dance the Tango. (Goldfinch60)
Look at them handbags..... \"are ya dancin\"... \"are y\'askin\" .... ...
February 21st, 2019 03:35 - Lie to Me (Goddess of the Mist)
Crafty, you give no mention of the little white lies you\'re feeding to...
February 21st, 2019 02:28 - alone i lay (Frtheheart)
This is quite a little gem. I think it can be taken as either pessimistic...
February 21st, 2019 02:26 - The Bad Ass (Hoopie)
Yes, that\'s how it goes till one sorts oneself out... if ever.
February 21st, 2019 02:21 - Phantoms (Amherrera1190)
Remain fond of them, they\'re jewels in your memory. This is you moving...
February 21st, 2019 01:57 - Wishlist (NaomiRayne)
Yes it sure is. Collect as many as you can. Write them for your memory\'s...
February 21st, 2019 01:55 - Someone\'s Eye. (Kevin browne)
A mysterious wander through the verve of yesterday and a hint of sadness...
February 21st, 2019 01:51 - BLACK AND WHITE (Shayl)
Yes war is awful.... and we see ISIS men happily beheading non combatant...
February 20th, 2019 17:15 - Blooming (GeorgiaRayne)
Absolutely right ! When the sun shines for you.... just blossom out!...
February 20th, 2019 17:12 - Days in the Ocean (Sese)
I was a crab once too but the sideways walking nearly got me run over.
February 20th, 2019 17:10 - These Bitches (Miana) (JaydeVictoria)
Confront their hostility with vomit and enjoy their revulsion.
Great...
February 20th, 2019 17:09 - i cant feel anymore (Laurenroe)
Lovely \'feelings\' writing poet. I often wonder whether i am writing...
February 20th, 2019 16:42 - Blink of an eye (Poetic Dan)
Is it right to listen to the heart and mind. ??? You pose as a...
February 20th, 2019 13:36 - FORCES OF CREATION ....2 (Suresh)
Well that was really great poetry (not).
February 20th, 2019 13:30 - Good Teacher (W c)
If only.... (sighs). I wish they were all like that to ALL their
February 20th, 2019 13:25 - Falling Short (Cynthia)
You sound like just my kind of a gal! A true and genuine one-off.
February 20th, 2019 13:24 - All Things Matter (DesertWords)
If there were an answer to this important question, then my suggestion...
February 20th, 2019 09:01 - What Do You Drive (Neville)
I can hear that baritone sax solo..... and the coloured girls say \'do...
February 20th, 2019 07:52 - MORE 575 SMILES (2) (Michael Edwards)
It was probably the occupier turning themselves inside out after a...
February 20th, 2019 07:41 - Honour Unfounded. (Goldfinch60)
When a politically minded person allocates their loyalty to a political...
February 20th, 2019 07:38 - Writer\'s Block (DesertWords)
Writers block only exists when you\'ve nothing clear to say.
February 17th, 2019 08:58 - Embu (Neville)
What need of words when they are only a carriage of sentiment. The prayer...
February 17th, 2019 08:56 - Shadows to Light. (Goldfinch60)
Great positive message.
But this link tells it...
February 17th, 2019 08:46 - My Mother My Friend (Ranita)
A very beautiful tribute to your mother. Love shines from your words....
February 17th, 2019 02:40 - I AM, I WILL BE (Michael Edwards)
Old dawg, new tricks? .... nah!
February 17th, 2019 02:35 - A Handful of Ghosts (Neville)
A pleasant near Miss for your heart. Not the right companion for the whole...
February 16th, 2019 09:41 - Taxi (Brittany Jo)
Dont forget the romance of such times, beautifully captured here. They...
February 16th, 2019 09:38 - Newspaper Chatting. (Goldfinch60)
I recall a voice from my youth, a strange voice from across the atlantic...
February 16th, 2019 09:35 - MONOSTICHS BY THE SEVERAL (Michael Edwards)
Every one a jem.
February 16th, 2019 09:30 - Saviour life’s moments (Dominique ruth)
Great and such good advice in a lovely positive package. I like this,...
February 15th, 2019 09:22 - RECOLLECTIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful. All those lovely things we took for granted as children are now...
February 15th, 2019 04:21 - When I am Far (Neville)
Hmmmmm how lovers didst communicate their passion afore the days of...
February 15th, 2019 04:17 - Birthday Valentine. (Goldfinch60)
You certainly write them Goldfinch!.
Do you ever wonder about how...
February 15th, 2019 04:13 - SECRET SANCTUARY (Michael Edwards)
Such underwear ruined the public need for a certain product which had a...
February 15th, 2019 04:08 - The empty cage... (Jon Nakapalau)
She is gone and somewhere, every now and again, a breeze catches my face...
February 15th, 2019 04:01 - Sans Sustenance (Neville)
Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in...
February 14th, 2019 09:49 - Sans Sustenance (Neville)
Superb \'less is more\' lesson for those who drag on and on and on in...
February 14th, 2019 09:01 - RELIANCE. (Fay Slimm.)
I wouldn\'t want to wake to a life without a sky. The sky illuminates...
February 14th, 2019 08:58 - Saint Valentines Day Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
You are truly blessed.
February 14th, 2019 05:18 - SUGGESTIVELY STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
And the choirboy was struck dumb at the sight.
the dirty old bishop of...
February 14th, 2019 05:17 - Locusts (Amherrera1190)
You cannot be serious. Surely you dont have such a low opinion of...
February 13th, 2019 14:16 - It Feels Like ...... (Suresh)
I don\'t know who this HE is but if i were you i wouldn\'t waste any more...
February 13th, 2019 14:07 - If you see it! Nudge it back my way (Poetic Dan)
Now this is you at your poetic best Dan. Your last line is worthy of a...
February 13th, 2019 14:04
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