Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Lemon Rind (SerenWise)
Shame that there are those among us who make us feel this way sometimes....
February 13th, 2019 14:00 - Cusp (Neville)
The beach with crashing waves, relentless, powerful beauty. Always...
February 13th, 2019 13:49 - Word Search (FineB)
Great to see poetry about the most diverse things in our lives. Great...
February 13th, 2019 13:42 - YESTERDAY, TODAY, TOMORROW. (Michael Edwards)
Lovely pic of the ex mum-in-law today Michael.
Tomorrows yesterday once...
February 13th, 2019 13:39 - JOINED. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful Fay. So many people robbed of their one true love by death must...
February 13th, 2019 13:35 - The Moon of Love - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
Is this algebra or poetry? LOL Well known now that i dislike mixing...
February 13th, 2019 13:27 - INVITING. (Fay Slimm.)
Gosh, you do write so beautifully about the dawn. How many of your dawn...
February 12th, 2019 08:54 - Self Harm (Neville)
Shocker. You\'ve brought to me a new appreciation of some aspects of self...
February 12th, 2019 08:45 - Aging Crime. (Goldfinch60)
Great music, reminds me of how Buddy Holly\'s sound filled my childhood...
February 12th, 2019 02:36 - PAINS OF YESTERDAY (Michael Edwards)
I like that, and it is so true. Another of life\'s gems, how sleeping on...
February 12th, 2019 02:27 - Insanity of a Sentence (ColeyCam)
This is falling in love. This is being in love. And there is worry in...
February 11th, 2019 16:31 - 487 (Aislinn Wilson)
There are many parts of our minds which we bind to another. Parts we...
February 11th, 2019 16:25 - Untitled (Suresh)
Ah there you have it. Your soul is for unscrupulous religious members to...
February 11th, 2019 16:22 - Disillusioned (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Lovely piece sir. Picture reminds me of Skye.
When they are gone, what...
February 11th, 2019 10:55 - Mental Wars (Asiakayy)
Life is a struggle at times especially when you are young. For advice is...
February 11th, 2019 10:49 - Nomad (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Do you feel better now? They say writing is theraputic and you appear to...
February 11th, 2019 09:41 - My sky (AJ)
I like this, gave me a big smile. Cute.
February 11th, 2019 08:58 - Save the Elephant 🐘 (Joanna Garrido)
It is illegal in U.K. to sell ivory unless it is old ivory as you will...
February 11th, 2019 08:56 - Mirrors Cracked (Neville)
Bits of this and that remain, glances at mirrors recall a lurking...
February 11th, 2019 08:51 - VEILS. (Fay Slimm.)
Reality is but an illusion! Yes I do look for something beyond my...
February 11th, 2019 08:45 - The Sixties, was I There? (Goldfinch60)
Yes those were the days, i must be a couple of years your junior for elvis...
February 11th, 2019 03:32 - MARY HAD...(3) (Michael Edwards)
Another good laugh from you... ok i\'ll publish some.
February 11th, 2019 03:20 - Sunday rhythm & breeze (Poetic Dan)
Great observational piece with lifestyle message.
February 10th, 2019 09:45 - scars (Dusk arising)
You are a true and genuine individual. Thank you for reading and comment.
February 10th, 2019 05:47 - Last Words (Neville)
A truly poetic farewell. Yes some goodbyes linger for they are a lost...
February 10th, 2019 04:50 - ANDY HAD... (Michael Edwards)
Nice one.... i\'ve decided to take up your challenge and post some of my...
February 10th, 2019 04:42 - My Granddaughter. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely read Goldfinch.
My two granddaughters are under 5 and such a...
February 10th, 2019 04:39 - Come give a cheer! (Poetic Dan)
This is a light fun read. I have no idea what marbleympics is all about...
February 9th, 2019 09:17 - Bethune Re-visited (Neville)
War is disgusting, now a lovely place is known for it\'s part in three...
February 9th, 2019 09:14 - Today Not Tomorrow. (Goldfinch60)
To right sir! I have slowed down so many things i used to rush with.
February 9th, 2019 09:04 - When The Lord Comes Back (ForeverJesus7)
Persistence is the therapy.
February 9th, 2019 09:02 - MARY HAD (2) (Michael Edwards)
Mary has a brother Michael
who posts on MPS
not always the finest...
February 9th, 2019 09:00 - I\'m Afraid I\'ll Lose You (BlackCat)
Jeez, if its that painful get out of the relationship. Whats the...
February 8th, 2019 21:59 - My heart (Dakota)
No you\'re not lost. Your heart just needs to learn to be happy enjoying...
February 8th, 2019 21:54 - Secrets (SerenWise)
Wonderful! and if you knew those fantasies would they please you or...
February 8th, 2019 17:32 - One Realisation and Two Ponders (Classicmister)
So if one foot is always still, then the other one is doing all the work....
February 8th, 2019 13:29 - Sunday (Luckykarma)
I remember the feeling which oozes from your writing here. Pure joy. Being...
February 8th, 2019 13:25 - Fooled by you (Theskyisnotblue)
Ouch! I bet that really hurt. I cant stand liars and cheats. The first lie...
February 8th, 2019 13:22 - I LOVE YOU (Shayl)
Made me laugh this one. The way you turn it around in last verse is good...
February 8th, 2019 13:19 - ABANDONMENT. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh my, what a wonderful conjunction of words \"tumbles at measured pace in...
February 8th, 2019 07:43 - memory (Siranswerer)
Excellent, that\'s just how certain memories and loss haunt us, an feel...
February 8th, 2019 07:39 - Love and Warm Toast (Neville)
I\' ve just been enjoying a refreshing cup of viagra tea. It doesn\'t do...
February 8th, 2019 04:34 - Darkness into Light. (Goldfinch60)
Really glad to read you are on the up my friend. Life\'s burdens can catch...
February 8th, 2019 03:15 - MARY HAD (1) (Michael Edwards)
Mary had a great big cat
she put it in bucket
and when she put a small...
February 8th, 2019 03:10 - Am I strong? (Middlearth)
You are the strength of humankind. You are the giver and protector of life...
February 7th, 2019 16:26 - The Journey (Vvnrose)
Lots of wisdom expressed in just a few lines from you.
Good, very...
February 7th, 2019 16:18 - I have it, they have it and so do you! (Poetic Dan)
I love those last two lines. Im that rebel who lives within the rules but...
February 7th, 2019 16:15 - Lest We Forget (AJ)
A famous poem by Dylan Thomas comes to mind, it begins:- \'Do not go...
February 7th, 2019 16:07 - Victims of Indifference (Neville)
I didn\'t know \"nutters within\" was latin.
Methinks you could be...
February 7th, 2019 06:39 - Victims of Indifference (Neville)
I didn\'t know \"nutters within\" was latin.
Methinks you could be...
February 7th, 2019 06:10 - RECALL. (Fay Slimm.)
Made me think of my own \'nom de plume\' dusk arising whilst reading...
February 7th, 2019 06:04 - The Lady of Shallott Rises. (Goldfinch60)
Cleverly put together.
A boss of mine years ago used to do huge jigsaws...
February 7th, 2019 05:56 - THE ORCHARD (Michael Edwards)
Something fishy going on in that picture.
Lovely read you\'ve given...
February 7th, 2019 05:51 - RESILIENCE. (Fay Slimm.)
Oooh-arrr my deario, I can see the nostril breath of lowing cattle in the...
February 6th, 2019 12:54 - Once Upon a Tablecloth (Neville)
Seeing this title in today\'s list just made me chuckle.
And yea, verily,...
February 6th, 2019 12:43 - 575s SERIOUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Imp is me disappearing through the hole.
But does choosing the hole as ...
February 6th, 2019 12:37 - Lake Walking. (Goldfinch60)
Dont risk it, i fell through the ice many times as a kid. I\'m not so...
February 6th, 2019 12:32 - How Can It Be? (Goldfinch60)
You lucky people.
February 6th, 2019 01:41 - HEARABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
You took me back to something half a lifetime ago.
i wonder if it is...
February 6th, 2019 01:39 - Many thoughts kept and lost (Poetic Dan)
The essence of the words of Desiderata come to mind again reading your...
February 6th, 2019 01:30 - Park Fun (W c)
Halcyon days, where did all that energy go to? The magic of so many first...
February 4th, 2019 19:00 - Just friends (Kasia Kevan)
Go on.... you know you want to.
February 4th, 2019 18:54 - OUTGROWN (Fay Slimm.)
What a wonderful analogy, casting seeds to the wind ... encouragement to...
February 4th, 2019 18:49 - New or Old. (Goldfinch60)
Especially shoes.
We all \'wear\' our clothes in unique manner. By...
February 4th, 2019 18:44 - Virus (Neville)
And we, none of us, are immune to her intent...... for upon us she...
February 4th, 2019 18:37 - SILENCE (Jenn2009)
In a silent way you\'re dead right there.
February 4th, 2019 18:31 - POLITICAL CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards)
I bet some cow turned him in. He was only acting the goat. He\'s too...
February 4th, 2019 01:56 - trust me (Lainacarson98)
I know where you\'re coming from with this. I warned each of my eight...
February 4th, 2019 01:53 - Maria (SerenWise)
Were you looking for/expecting salvation?
February 4th, 2019 01:22 - online dating (Abora)
Strange what the web can bring out in folk.
February 4th, 2019 01:20 - I Have No More Ideas. (Kevin browne)
Damn good fun read mate! Smiled all thru it.
February 4th, 2019 00:15 - I Guess This Is The Part I Say.... (Edthepoet)
When you\'ve battled thru and arrived at being a love scarred, worse for...
February 3rd, 2019 21:01 - Ink Blots (Neville)
Some people place before us that which we cannot see.
Oft described as...
February 3rd, 2019 20:48 - My dance with death (Birddie Jane)
Who\'s gonna write like this for us if he comes to stay eh?
Do you like...
February 3rd, 2019 20:46 - Different Pages (Sylviasearcher)
Love the way you have used the books and library analogy here. I just call...
February 3rd, 2019 20:43 - 575 SMILES (3) (Michael Edwards)
OMG it just begs for this..... lend me your herring aid then please.
February 3rd, 2019 20:37 - A letter to myself (Courtneyreanna)
That is most definitely a great stance from where to begin a poetic...
February 3rd, 2019 20:36 - Our Railroad Town (W c)
Yes, i feel the romance of railways in your writing.
Near to me there is...
February 2nd, 2019 14:30 - Our Railroad Town (W c)
Yes, i feel the romance of railways in your writing.
Near to me there is...
February 2nd, 2019 14:20 - Reflections (Suresh)
If we are to be held accountable, i wonder by who\'s standards we will be...
February 2nd, 2019 14:13 - When war comes (Heather Harrisson)
Powerful stuff. A nation of innocents raped and killed by a politician.
I...
February 2nd, 2019 08:42 - 575 Smiles (2) (Michael Edwards)
Nice to hear the accompanying fanfare of your first piece here.
No 2 is...
February 2nd, 2019 08:37 - Wanting to be Wanted (Neville)
She wants to be the apple of your eye - oh, and dare i mention, the apple...
February 2nd, 2019 08:33 - I AM COLORED (Heartbreak)
Too many bad judgements passed on by our fore bears from less enlightened...
February 2nd, 2019 08:29 - No, There Will be no Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60)
So many tales to be told of that night. Your final verse a magical trip in...
February 2nd, 2019 08:24 - Searching (Sylviasearcher)
Trying to fall into meditation i am \"searching for a moment\'s peace...
February 2nd, 2019 08:14 - TONIGHT. (Fay Slimm.)
\'In the bleak mid winter\' as the old hymn has it.
Many little creatures...
February 2nd, 2019 08:08 - Back in ‘09 I promised this wouldn’t be me (Millkenzi)
Reads like a poem to yourself.
February 2nd, 2019 07:59 - 575 SMILES (1) (Michael Edwards)
You have to be well oiled to slide down a lamppost these days. For what...
February 1st, 2019 16:03 - 575 SMILES (1) (Michael Edwards)
You have to be well oiled to slide down a lamppost these days. For what...
February 1st, 2019 14:08 - Chet Baker Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Love chet, hate acrostics.
Wonderful toothless fluffy trumpet and in...
February 1st, 2019 14:02 - Blink (Neville)
You\'re just taking the piss cos someones told you my telly\'s gone on the...
February 1st, 2019 13:58 - arms trade (Dusk arising)
That is exactly where i was coming from in writing this. Trying to take my...
February 1st, 2019 12:39 - Closing in (Allysnewworld)
Cor! You\'re gonna just love it when happiness arrives again.
January 31st, 2019 17:56 - UNDETERRED. (Fay Slimm.)
For me, when things go wrong and painful, i look back at the shared joys...
January 31st, 2019 16:29 - Will I ever be enough? (Prettylittlepoet)
And if you were ever enough, what would be your next \'I want?\'
January 31st, 2019 16:21 - Adoration (Sylviasearcher)
All this may be wonderful but in submission... you only submit to...
January 31st, 2019 16:18 - Many Things to Many Men (Neville)
And there are those who say the story of events at calvary were invented...
January 31st, 2019 16:16 - Old Age Phonephobia? (Goldfinch60)
You\'re never to old to learn a bad new trick. My 5\" screen phone is too...
January 31st, 2019 16:07 - DREAMS LOST (Michael Edwards)
Where do those dreams go to? They were so splendid, they can\'t just...
January 31st, 2019 02:47
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