Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Fooled by you (Theskyisnotblue)
Ouch! I bet that really hurt. I cant stand liars and cheats. The first lie...
February 8th, 2019 13:22 - I LOVE YOU (Shayl)
Made me laugh this one. The way you turn it around in last verse is good...
February 8th, 2019 13:19 - ABANDONMENT. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh my, what a wonderful conjunction of words \"tumbles at measured pace in...
February 8th, 2019 07:43 - memory (Siranswerer)
Excellent, that\'s just how certain memories and loss haunt us, an feel...
February 8th, 2019 07:39 - Love and Warm Toast (Neville)
I\' ve just been enjoying a refreshing cup of viagra tea. It doesn\'t do...
February 8th, 2019 04:34 - Darkness into Light. (Goldfinch60)
Really glad to read you are on the up my friend. Life\'s burdens can catch...
February 8th, 2019 03:15 - MARY HAD (1) (Michael Edwards)
Mary had a great big cat
she put it in bucket
and when she put a small...
February 8th, 2019 03:10 - Am I strong? (Middlearth)
You are the strength of humankind. You are the giver and protector of life...
February 7th, 2019 16:26 - The Journey (Vvnrose)
Lots of wisdom expressed in just a few lines from you.
Good, very...
February 7th, 2019 16:18 - I have it, they have it and so do you! (Poetic Dan)
I love those last two lines. Im that rebel who lives within the rules but...
February 7th, 2019 16:15 - Lest We Forget (AJ)
A famous poem by Dylan Thomas comes to mind, it begins:- \'Do not go...
February 7th, 2019 16:07 - Victims of Indifference (Neville)
I didn\'t know \"nutters within\" was latin.
Methinks you could be...
February 7th, 2019 06:39 - Victims of Indifference (Neville)
I didn\'t know \"nutters within\" was latin.
Methinks you could be...
February 7th, 2019 06:10 - RECALL. (Fay Slimm.)
Made me think of my own \'nom de plume\' dusk arising whilst reading...
February 7th, 2019 06:04 - The Lady of Shallott Rises. (Goldfinch60)
Cleverly put together.
A boss of mine years ago used to do huge jigsaws...
February 7th, 2019 05:56 - THE ORCHARD (Michael Edwards)
Something fishy going on in that picture.
Lovely read you\'ve given...
February 7th, 2019 05:51 - RESILIENCE. (Fay Slimm.)
Oooh-arrr my deario, I can see the nostril breath of lowing cattle in the...
February 6th, 2019 12:54 - Once Upon a Tablecloth (Neville)
Seeing this title in today\'s list just made me chuckle.
And yea, verily,...
February 6th, 2019 12:43 - 575s SERIOUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Imp is me disappearing through the hole.
But does choosing the hole as ...
February 6th, 2019 12:37 - Lake Walking. (Goldfinch60)
Dont risk it, i fell through the ice many times as a kid. I\'m not so...
February 6th, 2019 12:32 - How Can It Be? (Goldfinch60)
You lucky people.
February 6th, 2019 01:41 - HEARABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
You took me back to something half a lifetime ago.
i wonder if it is...
February 6th, 2019 01:39 - Many thoughts kept and lost (Poetic Dan)
The essence of the words of Desiderata come to mind again reading your...
February 6th, 2019 01:30 - Park Fun (W c)
Halcyon days, where did all that energy go to? The magic of so many first...
February 4th, 2019 19:00 - Just friends (Kasia Kevan)
Go on.... you know you want to.
February 4th, 2019 18:54 - OUTGROWN (Fay Slimm.)
What a wonderful analogy, casting seeds to the wind ... encouragement to...
February 4th, 2019 18:49 - New or Old. (Goldfinch60)
Especially shoes.
We all \'wear\' our clothes in unique manner. By...
February 4th, 2019 18:44 - Virus (Neville)
And we, none of us, are immune to her intent...... for upon us she...
February 4th, 2019 18:37 - SILENCE (Jenn2009)
In a silent way you\'re dead right there.
February 4th, 2019 18:31 - POLITICAL CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards)
I bet some cow turned him in. He was only acting the goat. He\'s too...
February 4th, 2019 01:56 - trust me (Lainacarson98)
I know where you\'re coming from with this. I warned each of my eight...
February 4th, 2019 01:53 - Maria (SerenWise)
Were you looking for/expecting salvation?
February 4th, 2019 01:22 - online dating (Abora)
Strange what the web can bring out in folk.
February 4th, 2019 01:20 - I Have No More Ideas. (Kevin browne)
Damn good fun read mate! Smiled all thru it.
February 4th, 2019 00:15 - I Guess This Is The Part I Say.... (Edthepoet)
When you\'ve battled thru and arrived at being a love scarred, worse for...
February 3rd, 2019 21:01 - Ink Blots (Neville)
Some people place before us that which we cannot see.
Oft described as...
February 3rd, 2019 20:48 - My dance with death (Birddie Jane)
Who\'s gonna write like this for us if he comes to stay eh?
Do you like...
February 3rd, 2019 20:46 - Different Pages (Sylviasearcher)
Love the way you have used the books and library analogy here. I just call...
February 3rd, 2019 20:43 - 575 SMILES (3) (Michael Edwards)
OMG it just begs for this..... lend me your herring aid then please.
February 3rd, 2019 20:37 - A letter to myself (Courtneyreanna)
That is most definitely a great stance from where to begin a poetic...
February 3rd, 2019 20:36 - Our Railroad Town (W c)
Yes, i feel the romance of railways in your writing.
Near to me there is...
February 2nd, 2019 14:30 - Our Railroad Town (W c)
Yes, i feel the romance of railways in your writing.
Near to me there is...
February 2nd, 2019 14:20 - Reflections (Suresh)
If we are to be held accountable, i wonder by who\'s standards we will be...
February 2nd, 2019 14:13 - When war comes (Heather Harrisson)
Powerful stuff. A nation of innocents raped and killed by a politician.
I...
February 2nd, 2019 08:42 - 575 Smiles (2) (Michael Edwards)
Nice to hear the accompanying fanfare of your first piece here.
No 2 is...
February 2nd, 2019 08:37 - Wanting to be Wanted (Neville)
She wants to be the apple of your eye - oh, and dare i mention, the apple...
February 2nd, 2019 08:33 - I AM COLORED (Heartbreak)
Too many bad judgements passed on by our fore bears from less enlightened...
February 2nd, 2019 08:29 - No, There Will be no Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60)
So many tales to be told of that night. Your final verse a magical trip in...
February 2nd, 2019 08:24 - Searching (Sylviasearcher)
Trying to fall into meditation i am \"searching for a moment\'s peace...
February 2nd, 2019 08:14 - TONIGHT. (Fay Slimm.)
\'In the bleak mid winter\' as the old hymn has it.
Many little creatures...
February 2nd, 2019 08:08 - Back in ‘09 I promised this wouldn’t be me (Millkenzi)
Reads like a poem to yourself.
February 2nd, 2019 07:59 - 575 SMILES (1) (Michael Edwards)
You have to be well oiled to slide down a lamppost these days. For what...
February 1st, 2019 16:03 - 575 SMILES (1) (Michael Edwards)
You have to be well oiled to slide down a lamppost these days. For what...
February 1st, 2019 14:08 - Chet Baker Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Love chet, hate acrostics.
Wonderful toothless fluffy trumpet and in...
February 1st, 2019 14:02 - Blink (Neville)
You\'re just taking the piss cos someones told you my telly\'s gone on the...
February 1st, 2019 13:58 - arms trade (Dusk arising)
That is exactly where i was coming from in writing this. Trying to take my...
February 1st, 2019 12:39 - Closing in (Allysnewworld)
Cor! You\'re gonna just love it when happiness arrives again.
January 31st, 2019 17:56 - UNDETERRED. (Fay Slimm.)
For me, when things go wrong and painful, i look back at the shared joys...
January 31st, 2019 16:29 - Will I ever be enough? (Prettylittlepoet)
And if you were ever enough, what would be your next \'I want?\'
January 31st, 2019 16:21 - Adoration (Sylviasearcher)
All this may be wonderful but in submission... you only submit to...
January 31st, 2019 16:18 - Many Things to Many Men (Neville)
And there are those who say the story of events at calvary were invented...
January 31st, 2019 16:16 - Old Age Phonephobia? (Goldfinch60)
You\'re never to old to learn a bad new trick. My 5\" screen phone is too...
January 31st, 2019 16:07 - DREAMS LOST (Michael Edwards)
Where do those dreams go to? They were so splendid, they can\'t just...
January 31st, 2019 02:47 - Home Is a Time (A__pott)
So many people cannot move with the times. Is it because today is a less...
January 31st, 2019 02:45 - Your sweater (‘Lyss)
Pah! I\'m jealous..... no body ever slept in my sweater .... tongue...
January 30th, 2019 12:58 - Girl, You Showed Him That You Cared (Brooklyn6timesplus)
This is a perpetual story sorrowing the hearts of us all.... we live, we...
January 30th, 2019 12:55 - Countless Indiscretions (Neville)
Yeah, when two people have something which is \'right\'.... celebrate the...
January 30th, 2019 12:45 - Lasting Love (Tiffany_Arnold)
This is really moving. It clearly shows your love for your mother and her...
January 30th, 2019 12:41 - UNTITLED. (Nikhil Vadher)
Hmm my world is not shaken by Kardashian headlines sir! My spirit is with...
January 30th, 2019 12:36 - The devils awakemimg (Sisdrenjen)
Yes i agree with the sentiment of this \" Poncing about like they own us...
January 30th, 2019 12:30 - Choosing To Be Strong (NaomiRayne)
I see your learned wisdom reigning here. I read that you have suffered...
January 30th, 2019 12:26 - Gone Away. (Goldfinch60)
To the river Goldfinch where peace and the spiritual you rest and re-set...
January 30th, 2019 12:20 - Le cœur (Mia_Rose)
So much conveyed here in so few words. Once again \'less is more\'.
January 30th, 2019 12:17 - NO GOLD TO GLISTEN (Michael Edwards)
Love the way you took my imagination and wove a mystery of lost...
January 30th, 2019 12:15 - Not All Art Goes Down in History (Lily_)
Wow! When you do say something it has power and ... you sure know how to...
January 30th, 2019 12:08 - ghost letter (Lainacarson98)
I really feel this poem. Some things smoulder in you forever, i know...
January 30th, 2019 12:05 - \'Till Death Do Us Part... (Halo_xx)
A truly lovely read.
January 29th, 2019 23:22 - LUNACY. (Fay Slimm.)
Look what happened to Easter Island.
All very well to sympathise from...
January 29th, 2019 18:43 - Spiritual Humanity. (Goldfinch60)
We are born human Goldfinch. Every instinct a bratty child exhibits is...
January 29th, 2019 18:38 - I CREATE (Michael Edwards)
A great jazz musician said that he lived for his mistakes. When i\'m...
January 29th, 2019 18:28 - WITCHDOCTORS! (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Thats a good fun storyline. Light hearted but poignant.
Made me think of...
January 28th, 2019 14:24 - NIGHTNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
The way you capture your readers mind, re-pace their perception with your...
January 28th, 2019 08:09 - Crisp clean (Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87)
Hey, what\'s in that drink. A mindful cocktail with a slice of reality...
January 28th, 2019 08:01 - Might She by Chance be a Witch (Neville)
Bewitched by her femininity you have been sir! And such a wonderful spell...
January 28th, 2019 05:04 - But is it Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
It always dismays me when i hear some twerp identify one artists work...
January 28th, 2019 04:50 - Be (Michael Edwards)
yawning has broken like the first y.... ooh deja vu
January 28th, 2019 04:42 - I Build Her a Lighthouse (Edthepoet)
Hmmm. The need for a lighthouse denotes dangerous waters.
Rocky...
January 27th, 2019 14:38 - Mozart Acrostic 1. (Goldfinch60)
For my ears i prefer the recording of the Zemlinsky quartet accompanied by...
January 27th, 2019 14:32 - FROM WHERE DO THE BREEZES BLOW? (Michael Edwards)
The laws of flatulence go back to our childhood.
Given a fair wind i used...
January 27th, 2019 14:20 - What We Got (Neville)
As the psychiatrist told me \'speaking to your second personality, i\'d...
January 27th, 2019 14:17 - I asked God for just one (Joseph M Marion)
Shame you had to include god in this. This Omnipotent god brings famine,...
January 25th, 2019 10:57 - Life’s Last Moments (The Retired Bloke)
Epic writing today. Long may you wait for any final moments, that we may...
January 25th, 2019 10:48 - appen (Markashley1961)
Appen as this worra a reet gud advenchah tu reed. Ent gorra clue worrits...
January 25th, 2019 05:26 - appen (Markashley1961)
Appen as this worra a reet gud advenchah tu reed. Ent gorra clue worrits...
January 25th, 2019 05:12 - Mirislavka (Neville)
Excellent story and excellent composition.
Each line a thrill leading to...
January 25th, 2019 05:08 - Calliope Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Always there for you, you lucky person to have such a muse. Mine\'s taken...
January 25th, 2019 05:03 - BOOKS IN RETIREMENT (Michael Edwards)
In the milder months of the year i am a bedtime reader. Dozing off with a...
January 25th, 2019 04:59 - Homeless In Roanoke (W c)
I know that most of us have the wrong mental picture of homeless folk. I...
January 24th, 2019 17:45 - Is it to late? (Carmine)
A shaggy dog story i guess.
January 24th, 2019 17:37 - Ink talk (Down the rabbithole)
Confrontation of your deamons, kept at bay with a pen, mightier than the...
January 24th, 2019 17:32
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