Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- You are part of me (Poetic Dan)
Yes, we never stop learning nor re-learning do we. Giving and receiving...
April 24th, 2019 08:45 - Life in Art. (Goldfinch60)
There are many beautiful things to behold all around us which are...
April 24th, 2019 08:41 - EVENTS. (Fay Slimm.)
Through these words today i can hear you boldly saying \"Bring it on, ...
April 24th, 2019 08:18 - Exiting right (Poetic Dan)
Great stuff. This tells of moving on through life and finding that life...
April 24th, 2019 08:15 - Head Rest (Neville)
Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting...
April 24th, 2019 08:10 - PARDON ? (Michael Edwards)
reply \"well how the Dickens do you expect me to know.... I wasnt even...
April 24th, 2019 08:03 - My monsters (JJ1)
Hi and welcome to the \"We all have monsters too\" club here in MPS. Yes...
April 22nd, 2019 18:27 - Finally (SerenWise)
Tremendous building of joy and excitement in this. I felt it. Very...
April 22nd, 2019 18:22 - When Duty Calls (Neville)
I really like this, especially the last line which in fact validates the...
April 22nd, 2019 06:22 - SWEETNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Your eye sees more than the casual viewer methinks.
The candied...
April 22nd, 2019 03:21 - Thank you for triggering my train (Poetic Dan)
Forgiving is something which love teaches us i think. Time plays its...
April 22nd, 2019 03:10 - Mouth Full of Words. (Goldfinch60)
Love is a many splendoured thing. Giving ones love, letting it radiate...
April 22nd, 2019 01:17 - BELLS (Michael Edwards)
Quasimodo bought his wife Esmerelda a wok, so she could iron his...
April 22nd, 2019 00:25 - Our Scars (SerenWise)
So very true. Encompassing this struggle and perhaps what is to follow, i...
April 21st, 2019 19:05 - resurrect (Suresh)
Well he ain\'t coming, he never said he was did he, that was a MAN MADE...
April 21st, 2019 12:59 - My show begins (Poetic Dan)
LOL Dan - yes i got the message here. I\'m so sorry i missed this one...
April 21st, 2019 11:20 - 🕊🥀Come Home (YoursTruly9)
This piece really shows the anguish and mixed sentiments of a loves...
April 21st, 2019 07:55 - 🕊🥀Come Home (YoursTruly9)
This piece really shows the anguish and mixed sentiments of a loves...
April 21st, 2019 06:50 - My Vision (Nafis Light)
Wholeheartedly support your desire for this.
What a world we would have...
April 21st, 2019 06:09 - My Vision (Nafis Light)
Wholeheartedly support your desire for this.
What a world we would have...
April 21st, 2019 06:04 - Feral Girls (Neville)
My wide grin at foo-kin-ya soon faded for the plight of so many...
April 21st, 2019 04:12 - STILL LAMENTING (Michael Edwards)
Ha Ha Ha laughed out loud at this masterpiece of wit today.
No doubt...
April 21st, 2019 04:03 - AS FORETOLD. (Fay Slimm.)
The story of Jesus taught to us all as children re-told in condensed and...
April 21st, 2019 03:58 - Laughter in our plight (Poetic Dan)
Really good to read light pieces from you Dan. This one is a pleasure and...
April 21st, 2019 03:55 - Nominal Amnesia. (Goldfinch60)
\"Oh no, not again, why have i come upstairs?\"... amnesia.. tell me...
April 21st, 2019 03:52 - Untitled - V (Suresh)
Yes, we are only guaranteed two things in this earthly existence - birth...
April 20th, 2019 16:08 - Fine Young Disciples (Neville)
Well that\'s life isn\'t it and aptly described by you. The risk we all...
April 20th, 2019 10:22 - STUFF! (Goldfinch60)
Oh this chimes too much with my cluttered life.
I am going to ebay my...
April 20th, 2019 08:41 - THE LUMBERING KINE (Michael Edwards)
constrained by numbers
from intent the poet blunders
restriction...
April 20th, 2019 08:37 - Hey! come here (Poetic Dan)
Lovely sunny reading. Fun to read to children and talk about afterwards -...
April 19th, 2019 07:50 - Beware of Mirrors (Neville)
A reflection is a prize for it allows us to see from another viewpoint....
April 19th, 2019 04:45 - Faithless. (Goldfinch60)
This God hasn\'t spoken to anyone i know Goldfinch.
It is a myth created...
April 19th, 2019 04:40 - BOOK OF DESTINY (Michael Edwards)
5, 4, 3, 2, 1.
Poetry or arithmetic?
April 19th, 2019 04:34 - Evening of Our Great Content (Lorna)
I love that last line of this joyful poem.
Such a pleasing read and my...
April 18th, 2019 05:43 - Play. (Goldfinch60)
Aha, a wordsmith at play i see.
Playtime is the daytime in the right...
April 18th, 2019 05:40 - Harbour Side (Neville)
Therein is love, adventure and devotion. The stuff of classic poetry and a...
April 18th, 2019 05:33 - LETTING GO. (Fay Slimm.)
Words cannot convey agonies nor ecstacy when felt first hand. The reader...
April 18th, 2019 05:31 - LIVING IN A DREAM (Michael Edwards)
Super shortie today. I transposed the first two lines as soon as i read...
April 18th, 2019 05:20 - WRAITHS (Fay Slimm.)
You certainly capture the speed and agility of these night sky dancers...
April 17th, 2019 06:47 - Turn Toward the Window (Neville)
A good \'loves epitaph\' written with the feeling of the moment which...
April 17th, 2019 06:38 - For What More Could I Ask? (Goldfinch60)
You lucky people.
Desifinado is a piece i learned long ago and remains a...
April 17th, 2019 06:34 - WOMAN IN BLACK (Michael Edwards)
Just as it should be, unless the widow wishes to look attractive.
In all,...
April 17th, 2019 06:28 - Past The Point of Restlessness (Nafis Light)
I think i know the feeling you describe.
It amazes me how many people...
April 16th, 2019 11:57 - THE INTEGRITY OF MAN !!!!! (O.G. Tone)
Guns are designed to kill. Dont look for any other purpose for a gun, or...
April 16th, 2019 11:51 - I asked! (Poetic Dan)
I am a sceptic.
Kudos will retain my faith.
Too many charlatans in the...
April 16th, 2019 11:09 - Another New Day (Neville)
I want to stay under my quilt till at least mid-day.... and never.. i...
April 16th, 2019 05:09 - SOLUTIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
Hmm that elusive two way bargain. A duet in perfect harmony and support....
April 16th, 2019 04:53 - Punctuality Spurned. (Goldfinch60)
As a big fan of Weather Report I\'m pleased to see your music choice...
April 16th, 2019 04:46 - THE EGOTIST (Michael Edwards)
Love that picture. Both pieces today describe me so well. I\'m giving out...
April 16th, 2019 04:32 - Plum Pencil Skirt (Neville)
Ha ha yes, the world is full of great looking but quite forgettable
April 15th, 2019 04:54 - MAGICAL. (Fay Slimm.)
\'Stillness breeds awe\' and quiet yes, does become lush.
Slowly...
April 15th, 2019 02:38 - The Foggy, Foggy Dew. (Goldfinch60)
I\'d never heard this before. It certainly reminded me of my fathers ever...
April 15th, 2019 01:32 - MARY HAD .....A RAM (Michael Edwards)
Mary had a little sheep
and with her sheep she went to sleep
but her...
April 15th, 2019 00:56 - Grow Some Flowers. (Kevin browne)
Like you I have grown many a flower and enjoyed every part of their beauty...
April 15th, 2019 00:37 - Just a little one (Poetic Dan)
God \'n short
imagination caught.
April 15th, 2019 00:22 - MIXTURES. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow! Now i can look in the mirror and begin to think i DO fit into the...
April 15th, 2019 00:20 - Tis Only Angels Crying (Neville)
Stay home indeed, for who would want to frolic in the tears of angels. Let...
April 15th, 2019 00:18 - Slither Moon. (Goldfinch60)
As we age and wisdom plays a sweeter tune, the word \'love\' expands to...
April 15th, 2019 00:13 - NO MORE HER OWN PHILOSOPHER (Michael Edwards)
Lovely opening \'untinctured\'. How many of the fairer sex do we know who...
April 15th, 2019 00:11 - Watching (Neville)
Been there, done that, tripped over my tongue.
April 13th, 2019 04:53 - Love Is (Mirela Athanas)
Yup, i guess you have got love sussed there. A you have written about love...
April 13th, 2019 02:17 - Unconditional Paternal Love Toward Shana Punim (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Wow, stats on your profile show you don\'t read other peoples poetry on...
April 13th, 2019 01:21 - SHE CRIED IN VAIN (Michael Edwards)
Hmmm reminded me of the chap who went to McDonalds to buy a spare tyre...
April 13th, 2019 01:16 - F**k It (SerenWise)
Sometimes it is enough... sometimes those words just fill the space you...
April 13th, 2019 01:09 - Where Are You God? (Goldfinch60)
This is terrible for you. An awful cry out of anger and...
April 13th, 2019 01:05 - Assumptions (Poetic Dan)
Its what we do when we think we are able to do.... but big BUT. We often...
April 12th, 2019 19:26 - Assumptions (Poetic Dan)
Its what we do when we think we are able to do.... but big BUT. We often...
April 12th, 2019 19:20 - Mended Wing (W c)
You lucky person to have been blessed with this opportunity to reach into...
April 12th, 2019 11:15 - La Petit Mort (Neville)
What wakes me from le petit mort... are we talking the flare or the...
April 12th, 2019 11:09 - DEPARTURE. (Fay Slimm.)
A part of life\'s cycle, leaving leadened skies and sulking horizon with...
April 12th, 2019 11:02 - SADNESS (Michael Edwards)
Such sadness, but the analogy brings forth a smile, for a mushroom is to...
April 12th, 2019 10:54 - Something Missing. (Goldfinch60)
Since my op last year i would not be able to eat a full english but i do...
April 12th, 2019 10:51 - And Satan responds...... (Suresh)
I wish you wouldn\'t write about me on here.... it\'s...
April 11th, 2019 16:15 - Morning Coffee (Neville)
Lucky sod! Most blokes have to suffer the earache of her indoors innit.
April 11th, 2019 16:12 - NEWNESS.. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes indeed, I mean, look what happened to the dinosaurs.
April 11th, 2019 16:10 - Only a Dream. (Goldfinch60)
And a dream worth having too.
April 11th, 2019 16:08 - ONCE (Michael Edwards)
If u put u into that that theory then the whole thing lightens up.
It\'s...
April 11th, 2019 16:07 - Yes! You.. (Poetic Dan)
I dunno what normal is, I\'m not sure about acceptable either.
In so many...
April 11th, 2019 16:02 - Prison Rust (Last Shadow)
Without prisoners there are no prisons.
Without crime there are no...
April 10th, 2019 11:17 - Prison Rust (Last Shadow)
Without prisoners there are no prisons.
Without crime there are no...
April 10th, 2019 10:13 - \"Did I Get Too Old For You?\" (Lonelyraccoon)
Hope you feel better after that. I see you have only read 4 other peoples...
April 10th, 2019 09:58 - LIT. (Fay Slimm.)
What lurks behind the poetic genius whose daily masterpieces leave us...
April 10th, 2019 09:26 - Shadow Envy (Neville)
Now thats clever and contains such wisdom.
Short and sweet (thus...
April 10th, 2019 08:38 - Hey.... (Poetic Dan)
First of all i went for as osteopath rub
on the way home i thought about...
April 10th, 2019 08:35 - NIGHTS OF SOLITUDE (Michael Edwards)
A \'self abandoned beating heart\' is that a suicide perchance?
Great...
April 10th, 2019 08:17 - Sad Spike. (Goldfinch60)
The phrase \'tears of a clown\' comes to mind.
He has of course written...
April 10th, 2019 08:13 - The Office (Purdy61)
Nice fun piece. Reminds me of the reasons i quit the office environment.
April 9th, 2019 08:54 - Canvas (Neville)
Keep her fresh by keeping your love vibrant.
I am a fan of short pieces....
April 9th, 2019 07:23 - GEMS. (Fay Slimm.)
Delightful little raindrops. Oh where were they when i was literally...
April 9th, 2019 07:14 - Stopped. (Goldfinch60)
Well i\'m glad you were enjoying yourself, toe tapping and all. Can\'t say...
April 9th, 2019 07:06 - LITTLE BOY BLUE (2) (Michael Edwards)
There\'s something symbolic
about a threesome frolic.
Kicking the day...
April 9th, 2019 07:02 - The most important things in life (JB)
But the sun never dies for us JB. And the sun refreshes tomorrow, even...
April 8th, 2019 20:43 - Waiting For Dad (W c)
A lovely adult recalling of the love and devotion felt as a child in terms...
April 8th, 2019 20:34 - Poppies (Neville)
This beautiful fragile flower has as you write many associations. Chief...
April 8th, 2019 12:05 - ILL-SENT (Fay Slimm.)
I get the feeling that you have in mind a family or person who has been...
April 8th, 2019 11:56 - The View from the Window. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful. The first man knowing his time was near was recounting the...
April 8th, 2019 11:49 - LITTLE BOY BLUE (1) (Michael Edwards)
Yeah, but only if they blow the tune you elected them to do in the houses...
April 8th, 2019 00:26 - The Freedom of Slaves (Neville)
Slaves are human beings and like you and me and our loved ones have human...
April 8th, 2019 00:21 - You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you (Poetic Dan)
Oh chim chim chutney to you now.... Grrr you put that damn song in my...
April 8th, 2019 00:15 - Bin Man. (Goldfinch60)
Maybe he thought you were all a load of rubbish. Nowt stranger than folk.
April 8th, 2019 00:09
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