Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.)
Exquisite. Oh that memories should all have such sweetness, untainted by...
May 1st, 2019 06:31 - Between Mountains (Neville)
Wonderful atmospheric blend of mystery and romance.
May 1st, 2019 06:25 - Another Week Alone. (Goldfinch60)
If the future is to be an alone-ness then you are a big enough...
May 1st, 2019 01:40 - FROM COMMENTS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha.
She who never learns turned her nose up at sauterns.
And...
May 1st, 2019 01:13 - A Heart, Broken (Magic_in_the_pages)
Sad and extremely evocative of the hopelessness of an ended love.
Short...
May 1st, 2019 00:10 - Your Lips To Mine. (Kevin browne)
Great lovers poem today Kevin. Not sure whether you are remembering or...
April 30th, 2019 23:01 - Queen (HeartfullyFallen)
I like this. Happiness sings and dances out of it and reminds old gits...
April 30th, 2019 20:10 - Concerto of Dreams (Moordykspot2)
Well i hope your wife is over the moon with that!
Great creative stuff...
April 30th, 2019 20:06 - Windscreen (Whodis)
You express yourself clearly and tell a story whilst letting us into your...
April 30th, 2019 19:59 - Following examples (Poetic Dan)
None of us are perfect except you and me Dan. Because you are perfectly...
April 30th, 2019 13:56 - Prone to bouts of melancholy (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Sounds like a place i retreat to sometimes.
You have painted this well....
April 30th, 2019 13:45 - WILD. (Fay Slimm.)
The pictured lady awaits fate. Wild the smile inside.
April 30th, 2019 13:38 - Colours Without Names (Neville)
Like the colours of the places which frequent my dreams..... unable to...
April 30th, 2019 12:34 - New World Calls. (Goldfinch60)
Setting them free into a world of opportunity yet knowing the greater...
April 30th, 2019 12:29 - DAY MONTH YEAR (Michael Edwards)
Great opportunity to point out how confused a long sea journey can make...
April 30th, 2019 12:11 - For the record (Poetic Dan)
Very well written. Keeping your head above water is success you know. Look...
April 29th, 2019 14:12 - Crumbs of Comfort (Neville)
ee-bah-gum lad. Thou reminds me of yon Hovis advert here. Always runnin...
April 29th, 2019 06:44 - SIGNS. (Fay Slimm.)
Spring is in the air and in your words. Hope, faith and renewal.
Now if...
April 29th, 2019 06:39 - Weighty Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Send me the batteries that you dream on - i need to lose weight.
April 29th, 2019 02:06 - Laughing Mirror (Prequel) (Nafis Light)
Nice one. I am with you all the way with this.
A time to laugh, a time...
April 29th, 2019 01:57 - Laughing Mirror (Prequel) (Nafis Light)
Nice one. I am with you all the way with this.
A time to laugh, a time...
April 29th, 2019 00:49 - ONCE I HAD A LOVER (Michael Edwards)
I laughed out loud at \'her lips were never long enough\'. Thank you for...
April 29th, 2019 00:46 - Lie is the new truth (Suresh)
I really like this and find it very though provoking. Already it has given...
April 28th, 2019 11:24 - Welcome to my jungle (Poetic Dan)
Indescribable when the depth takes you and around you becomes your...
April 28th, 2019 11:08 - Empty Sky (Neville)
Empty skies,
forever blue
deserve filling
from a poet
as today
so...
April 28th, 2019 11:03 - FREEING . (Fay Slimm.)
Wanton, absolute wanton from you today.
Leaves me breathlessly begging ...
April 28th, 2019 10:55 - Suited Times. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, I too wore the clothes of a businessman (a gentleman is MORE than the...
April 28th, 2019 10:46 - Orchid (Neville)
Ouch!
A beauty beheld can indeed lose its magnificence when the storm of...
April 27th, 2019 03:24 - Daughter of creation (Poetic Dan)
And surely the love in our hearts defines the world around us too.
Great...
April 27th, 2019 03:20 - LUSTY TIMES. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh my word... such lusty innuendo from a Cornish coastal siren. I must...
April 27th, 2019 03:13 - Curry Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
My take-away love message
to my Asian princess
\"Won\'t you send me the...
April 27th, 2019 01:38 - Where is Truth? (Gary Edward Geraci)
You will not find it in a book written by man/men thousands of years ago...
April 26th, 2019 20:34 - BACK THEN. (Fay Slimm.)
ee-bah-gum lass thou dont half drag up some reet good memrees.
But let...
April 26th, 2019 10:48 - Even simple things...Laughter (Nafis Light)
Laughter oils the cogs of the day-to-day grind my friend.
April 26th, 2019 10:30 - Death becomes (Scary-mary)
So when the cross dresser in front of his flock says \"peace be apon you\"...
April 26th, 2019 10:29 - In a Moment Gone (Neville)
Thats just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last nite
(she was...
April 26th, 2019 10:27 - Each Day I Arise. (Goldfinch60)
i\'m hoping for some great days ahead
April 26th, 2019 08:10 - Let\'s take a walk (Suresh)
Ying and yang. The perfect balance of the imperfect.
An OK subject for...
April 25th, 2019 16:09 - Let\'s take a walk (Suresh)
Ying and yang. The perfect balance of the imperfect.
An OK subject for...
April 25th, 2019 15:10 - Wisdom comes with age, clarity comes in time (Poetic Dan)
Yes absolutely right mate ! It\'s ok to make mistakes, to have the wrong...
April 25th, 2019 10:02 - Jelly Rolls Again. (Goldfinch60)
Most musicians are not playing the music they love but its great when the...
April 25th, 2019 02:18 - Ten Dead Chickens (Neville)
There\'s more goes on than that which we can perceive.
April 24th, 2019 08:52 - BEING. (Fay Slimm.)
Wouldn\'t it be such a wonderful world if we all were content with the...
April 24th, 2019 08:49 - You are part of me (Poetic Dan)
Yes, we never stop learning nor re-learning do we. Giving and receiving...
April 24th, 2019 08:45 - Life in Art. (Goldfinch60)
There are many beautiful things to behold all around us which are...
April 24th, 2019 08:41 - EVENTS. (Fay Slimm.)
Through these words today i can hear you boldly saying \"Bring it on, ...
April 24th, 2019 08:18 - Exiting right (Poetic Dan)
Great stuff. This tells of moving on through life and finding that life...
April 24th, 2019 08:15 - Head Rest (Neville)
Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting...
April 24th, 2019 08:10 - PARDON ? (Michael Edwards)
reply \"well how the Dickens do you expect me to know.... I wasnt even...
April 24th, 2019 08:03 - My monsters (JJ1)
Hi and welcome to the \"We all have monsters too\" club here in MPS. Yes...
April 22nd, 2019 18:27 - Finally (SerenWise)
Tremendous building of joy and excitement in this. I felt it. Very...
April 22nd, 2019 18:22 - When Duty Calls (Neville)
I really like this, especially the last line which in fact validates the...
April 22nd, 2019 06:22 - SWEETNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Your eye sees more than the casual viewer methinks.
The candied...
April 22nd, 2019 03:21 - Thank you for triggering my train (Poetic Dan)
Forgiving is something which love teaches us i think. Time plays its...
April 22nd, 2019 03:10 - Mouth Full of Words. (Goldfinch60)
Love is a many splendoured thing. Giving ones love, letting it radiate...
April 22nd, 2019 01:17 - BELLS (Michael Edwards)
Quasimodo bought his wife Esmerelda a wok, so she could iron his...
April 22nd, 2019 00:25 - Our Scars (SerenWise)
So very true. Encompassing this struggle and perhaps what is to follow, i...
April 21st, 2019 19:05 - resurrect (Suresh)
Well he ain\'t coming, he never said he was did he, that was a MAN MADE...
April 21st, 2019 12:59 - My show begins (Poetic Dan)
LOL Dan - yes i got the message here. I\'m so sorry i missed this one...
April 21st, 2019 11:20 - 🕊🥀Come Home (YoursTruly9)
This piece really shows the anguish and mixed sentiments of a loves...
April 21st, 2019 07:55 - 🕊🥀Come Home (YoursTruly9)
This piece really shows the anguish and mixed sentiments of a loves...
April 21st, 2019 06:50 - My Vision (Nafis Light)
Wholeheartedly support your desire for this.
What a world we would have...
April 21st, 2019 06:09 - My Vision (Nafis Light)
Wholeheartedly support your desire for this.
What a world we would have...
April 21st, 2019 06:04 - Feral Girls (Neville)
My wide grin at foo-kin-ya soon faded for the plight of so many...
April 21st, 2019 04:12 - STILL LAMENTING (Michael Edwards)
Ha Ha Ha laughed out loud at this masterpiece of wit today.
No doubt...
April 21st, 2019 04:03 - AS FORETOLD. (Fay Slimm.)
The story of Jesus taught to us all as children re-told in condensed and...
April 21st, 2019 03:58 - Laughter in our plight (Poetic Dan)
Really good to read light pieces from you Dan. This one is a pleasure and...
April 21st, 2019 03:55 - Nominal Amnesia. (Goldfinch60)
\"Oh no, not again, why have i come upstairs?\"... amnesia.. tell me...
April 21st, 2019 03:52 - Untitled - V (Suresh)
Yes, we are only guaranteed two things in this earthly existence - birth...
April 20th, 2019 16:08 - Fine Young Disciples (Neville)
Well that\'s life isn\'t it and aptly described by you. The risk we all...
April 20th, 2019 10:22 - STUFF! (Goldfinch60)
Oh this chimes too much with my cluttered life.
I am going to ebay my...
April 20th, 2019 08:41 - THE LUMBERING KINE (Michael Edwards)
constrained by numbers
from intent the poet blunders
restriction...
April 20th, 2019 08:37 - Hey! come here (Poetic Dan)
Lovely sunny reading. Fun to read to children and talk about afterwards -...
April 19th, 2019 07:50 - Beware of Mirrors (Neville)
A reflection is a prize for it allows us to see from another viewpoint....
April 19th, 2019 04:45 - Faithless. (Goldfinch60)
This God hasn\'t spoken to anyone i know Goldfinch.
It is a myth created...
April 19th, 2019 04:40 - BOOK OF DESTINY (Michael Edwards)
5, 4, 3, 2, 1.
Poetry or arithmetic?
April 19th, 2019 04:34 - Evening of Our Great Content (Lorna)
I love that last line of this joyful poem.
Such a pleasing read and my...
April 18th, 2019 05:43 - Play. (Goldfinch60)
Aha, a wordsmith at play i see.
Playtime is the daytime in the right...
April 18th, 2019 05:40 - Harbour Side (Neville)
Therein is love, adventure and devotion. The stuff of classic poetry and a...
April 18th, 2019 05:33 - LETTING GO. (Fay Slimm.)
Words cannot convey agonies nor ecstacy when felt first hand. The reader...
April 18th, 2019 05:31 - LIVING IN A DREAM (Michael Edwards)
Super shortie today. I transposed the first two lines as soon as i read...
April 18th, 2019 05:20 - WRAITHS (Fay Slimm.)
You certainly capture the speed and agility of these night sky dancers...
April 17th, 2019 06:47 - Turn Toward the Window (Neville)
A good \'loves epitaph\' written with the feeling of the moment which...
April 17th, 2019 06:38 - For What More Could I Ask? (Goldfinch60)
You lucky people.
Desifinado is a piece i learned long ago and remains a...
April 17th, 2019 06:34 - WOMAN IN BLACK (Michael Edwards)
Just as it should be, unless the widow wishes to look attractive.
In all,...
April 17th, 2019 06:28 - Past The Point of Restlessness (Nafis Light)
I think i know the feeling you describe.
It amazes me how many people...
April 16th, 2019 11:57 - THE INTEGRITY OF MAN !!!!! (O.G. Tone)
Guns are designed to kill. Dont look for any other purpose for a gun, or...
April 16th, 2019 11:51 - I asked! (Poetic Dan)
I am a sceptic.
Kudos will retain my faith.
Too many charlatans in the...
April 16th, 2019 11:09 - Another New Day (Neville)
I want to stay under my quilt till at least mid-day.... and never.. i...
April 16th, 2019 05:09 - SOLUTIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
Hmm that elusive two way bargain. A duet in perfect harmony and support....
April 16th, 2019 04:53 - Punctuality Spurned. (Goldfinch60)
As a big fan of Weather Report I\'m pleased to see your music choice...
April 16th, 2019 04:46 - THE EGOTIST (Michael Edwards)
Love that picture. Both pieces today describe me so well. I\'m giving out...
April 16th, 2019 04:32 - Plum Pencil Skirt (Neville)
Ha ha yes, the world is full of great looking but quite forgettable
April 15th, 2019 04:54 - MAGICAL. (Fay Slimm.)
\'Stillness breeds awe\' and quiet yes, does become lush.
Slowly...
April 15th, 2019 02:38 - The Foggy, Foggy Dew. (Goldfinch60)
I\'d never heard this before. It certainly reminded me of my fathers ever...
April 15th, 2019 01:32 - MARY HAD .....A RAM (Michael Edwards)
Mary had a little sheep
and with her sheep she went to sleep
but her...
April 15th, 2019 00:56 - Grow Some Flowers. (Kevin browne)
Like you I have grown many a flower and enjoyed every part of their beauty...
April 15th, 2019 00:37 - Just a little one (Poetic Dan)
God \'n short
imagination caught.
April 15th, 2019 00:22 - MIXTURES. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow! Now i can look in the mirror and begin to think i DO fit into the...
April 15th, 2019 00:20 - Tis Only Angels Crying (Neville)
Stay home indeed, for who would want to frolic in the tears of angels. Let...
April 15th, 2019 00:18
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