Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- RESEARCH IN THE RAINFOREST ~ A PANTOUM ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Did the forest need to be visited? Did the insects need to be recorded? If...
May 10th, 2019 04:40 - Stay With My Heartache. (Kevin browne)
Again a lot of self healing here and a truly wonderful line \"You landed...
May 10th, 2019 04:33 - Can’t anymore (Nwriting)
Heartfelt writing from you. Welcome to MyPoeticSide.
On a positive note...
May 10th, 2019 03:16 - We\'re all needed (Poetic Dan)
Ooooppss, i\'m imagining a boozey Dan singing as he trudges home.
In such...
May 10th, 2019 03:08 - The Light Of Life (Orchidee)
Cor blimey Orchidee youre really into this anglican way of phrasing. Youll...
May 10th, 2019 02:28 - Wordiku One (Goldfinch60)
Abdominal
Overimbrication
Obesity
Yep, he has started something (I\'m...
May 10th, 2019 02:13 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Flummuxed!
May 10th, 2019 00:49 - Break With The Broken. (Kevin browne)
A tapestry of loves embroidery here. Save it or sling it, reflect upon it...
May 9th, 2019 21:12 - A Beautiful Place Called Earth (Daydreaming)
From dubious beginnings you arrive at a worthy message.
Living a...
May 9th, 2019 17:45 - Contrariety (Suresh)
Delving into the man made conceptions of good and evil will be...
May 9th, 2019 17:43 - Not Ready.. (Cynthia)
What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger.
Peace and harmony.
May 9th, 2019 17:39 - It\'s not a crime to rhyme (Poetic Dan)
You\'ve really come to terms with the aid poetry to self help and healing...
May 9th, 2019 16:13 - LOOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
Beauty in accepting the simple as it is. We complicated beings so...
May 9th, 2019 15:48 - God and Religion Again. (Goldfinch60)
Need I say I agree with you - you know i do. And much respect to you for...
May 9th, 2019 15:39 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Japanese form. Ah-so!
May 9th, 2019 00:16 - Quiet Lion (WL Schuett)
Wonderful tribute to your father. Exceptional writing.
May 8th, 2019 23:39 - Fire-Crest (Neville)
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read...
May 8th, 2019 05:43 - Fire-Crest (Neville)
Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read...
May 8th, 2019 05:25 - Bum lie (Poetic Dan)
Oh that life were simple, but that would merely present us a different set...
May 8th, 2019 05:12 - Bum lie (Poetic Dan)
Oh that life were simple, but that would merely present us a different set...
May 8th, 2019 03:46 - The Fallen soldier (BronyVinyl)
So noble are our thoughts of the fallen soldier. For they shall never grow...
May 8th, 2019 03:34 - WINDING DOWN. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely romantic lines of rural life as was and continues. Yes dusk is a...
May 8th, 2019 03:24 - Peaceful Buzzard. (Goldfinch60)
Majestic are our large birds of prey. When i lived at Upper Wick there...
May 8th, 2019 03:16 - Untitled - IX (Suresh)
What prize awaits the moderate? Does it guarantee good health? No. Good...
May 8th, 2019 03:10 - The Climb (G84)
Life and lifes have taught me thus. It is not the high one achieves by...
May 7th, 2019 17:21 - Misguided (Frederick Samson)
A sad tale which seems all to familiar. Why does wisdom take so long to...
May 7th, 2019 17:12 - The Witch and the Crow (Jenny Wren)
What a story teller you are. There is a crow lurking within many a...
May 7th, 2019 16:57 - TASTEFUL. (Fay Slimm.)
At home? Don\'t you hear the beach calling.
All those bodies beautiful...
May 7th, 2019 16:49 - Ghosts & Shells (Neville)
I knew a lady recently who\'s memories were erased within a fortnight just...
May 7th, 2019 16:44 - Find your rhythm (Poetic Dan)
Re-align disharmony with the rhythm of a fulfilling life. I used to dance...
May 7th, 2019 16:38 - Past\'s Intro (Nafis Light)
As we all are. I am definitely a has-been. Once i was a wannabe. Before...
May 7th, 2019 16:35 - Treasure Hunting (Suresh)
Coincidentally my latest is a look back in time.
Just the way we write...
May 7th, 2019 16:33 - Satisfaction in Life. (Goldfinch60)
You have developed a pastime which requires a great deal of patience and...
May 7th, 2019 16:27 - Strange Awakening. (Goldfinch60)
As that old song goes \"Ev\'ry body dreams about a new world in the...
May 2nd, 2019 02:17 - Strange Awakening. (Goldfinch60)
As that old song goes \"Ev\'ry body dreams about a new world in the...
May 2nd, 2019 01:21 - FROM COMMENTS (2) (Michael Edwards)
As are we all when we think things thru. Lest we choose to be fallen...
May 2nd, 2019 01:16 - Let it roll of the tongue (Poetic Dan)
Fun stuff.
Like balls of fluff, fluffing up the pillows for the wind and...
May 1st, 2019 06:39 - UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.)
Exquisite. Oh that memories should all have such sweetness, untainted by...
May 1st, 2019 06:31 - Between Mountains (Neville)
Wonderful atmospheric blend of mystery and romance.
May 1st, 2019 06:25 - Another Week Alone. (Goldfinch60)
If the future is to be an alone-ness then you are a big enough...
May 1st, 2019 01:40 - FROM COMMENTS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha.
She who never learns turned her nose up at sauterns.
And...
May 1st, 2019 01:13 - A Heart, Broken (Magic_in_the_pages)
Sad and extremely evocative of the hopelessness of an ended love.
Short...
May 1st, 2019 00:10 - Your Lips To Mine. (Kevin browne)
Great lovers poem today Kevin. Not sure whether you are remembering or...
April 30th, 2019 23:01 - Queen (HeartfullyFallen)
I like this. Happiness sings and dances out of it and reminds old gits...
April 30th, 2019 20:10 - Concerto of Dreams (Moordykspot2)
Well i hope your wife is over the moon with that!
Great creative stuff...
April 30th, 2019 20:06 - Windscreen (Whodis)
You express yourself clearly and tell a story whilst letting us into your...
April 30th, 2019 19:59 - Following examples (Poetic Dan)
None of us are perfect except you and me Dan. Because you are perfectly...
April 30th, 2019 13:56 - Prone to bouts of melancholy (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Sounds like a place i retreat to sometimes.
You have painted this well....
April 30th, 2019 13:45 - WILD. (Fay Slimm.)
The pictured lady awaits fate. Wild the smile inside.
April 30th, 2019 13:38 - Colours Without Names (Neville)
Like the colours of the places which frequent my dreams..... unable to...
April 30th, 2019 12:34 - New World Calls. (Goldfinch60)
Setting them free into a world of opportunity yet knowing the greater...
April 30th, 2019 12:29 - DAY MONTH YEAR (Michael Edwards)
Great opportunity to point out how confused a long sea journey can make...
April 30th, 2019 12:11 - For the record (Poetic Dan)
Very well written. Keeping your head above water is success you know. Look...
April 29th, 2019 14:12 - Crumbs of Comfort (Neville)
ee-bah-gum lad. Thou reminds me of yon Hovis advert here. Always runnin...
April 29th, 2019 06:44 - SIGNS. (Fay Slimm.)
Spring is in the air and in your words. Hope, faith and renewal.
Now if...
April 29th, 2019 06:39 - Weighty Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Send me the batteries that you dream on - i need to lose weight.
April 29th, 2019 02:06 - Laughing Mirror (Prequel) (Nafis Light)
Nice one. I am with you all the way with this.
A time to laugh, a time...
April 29th, 2019 01:57 - Laughing Mirror (Prequel) (Nafis Light)
Nice one. I am with you all the way with this.
A time to laugh, a time...
April 29th, 2019 00:49 - ONCE I HAD A LOVER (Michael Edwards)
I laughed out loud at \'her lips were never long enough\'. Thank you for...
April 29th, 2019 00:46 - Lie is the new truth (Suresh)
I really like this and find it very though provoking. Already it has given...
April 28th, 2019 11:24 - Welcome to my jungle (Poetic Dan)
Indescribable when the depth takes you and around you becomes your...
April 28th, 2019 11:08 - Empty Sky (Neville)
Empty skies,
forever blue
deserve filling
from a poet
as today
so...
April 28th, 2019 11:03 - FREEING . (Fay Slimm.)
Wanton, absolute wanton from you today.
Leaves me breathlessly begging ...
April 28th, 2019 10:55 - Suited Times. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, I too wore the clothes of a businessman (a gentleman is MORE than the...
April 28th, 2019 10:46 - Orchid (Neville)
Ouch!
A beauty beheld can indeed lose its magnificence when the storm of...
April 27th, 2019 03:24 - Daughter of creation (Poetic Dan)
And surely the love in our hearts defines the world around us too.
Great...
April 27th, 2019 03:20 - LUSTY TIMES. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh my word... such lusty innuendo from a Cornish coastal siren. I must...
April 27th, 2019 03:13 - Curry Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
My take-away love message
to my Asian princess
\"Won\'t you send me the...
April 27th, 2019 01:38 - Where is Truth? (Gary Edward Geraci)
You will not find it in a book written by man/men thousands of years ago...
April 26th, 2019 20:34 - BACK THEN. (Fay Slimm.)
ee-bah-gum lass thou dont half drag up some reet good memrees.
But let...
April 26th, 2019 10:48 - Even simple things...Laughter (Nafis Light)
Laughter oils the cogs of the day-to-day grind my friend.
April 26th, 2019 10:30 - Death becomes (Scary-mary)
So when the cross dresser in front of his flock says \"peace be apon you\"...
April 26th, 2019 10:29 - In a Moment Gone (Neville)
Thats just what the mother-in-law said to me in bed last nite
(she was...
April 26th, 2019 10:27 - Each Day I Arise. (Goldfinch60)
i\'m hoping for some great days ahead
April 26th, 2019 08:10 - Let\'s take a walk (Suresh)
Ying and yang. The perfect balance of the imperfect.
An OK subject for...
April 25th, 2019 16:09 - Let\'s take a walk (Suresh)
Ying and yang. The perfect balance of the imperfect.
An OK subject for...
April 25th, 2019 15:10 - Wisdom comes with age, clarity comes in time (Poetic Dan)
Yes absolutely right mate ! It\'s ok to make mistakes, to have the wrong...
April 25th, 2019 10:02 - Jelly Rolls Again. (Goldfinch60)
Most musicians are not playing the music they love but its great when the...
April 25th, 2019 02:18 - Ten Dead Chickens (Neville)
There\'s more goes on than that which we can perceive.
April 24th, 2019 08:52 - BEING. (Fay Slimm.)
Wouldn\'t it be such a wonderful world if we all were content with the...
April 24th, 2019 08:49 - You are part of me (Poetic Dan)
Yes, we never stop learning nor re-learning do we. Giving and receiving...
April 24th, 2019 08:45 - Life in Art. (Goldfinch60)
There are many beautiful things to behold all around us which are...
April 24th, 2019 08:41 - EVENTS. (Fay Slimm.)
Through these words today i can hear you boldly saying \"Bring it on, ...
April 24th, 2019 08:18 - Exiting right (Poetic Dan)
Great stuff. This tells of moving on through life and finding that life...
April 24th, 2019 08:15 - Head Rest (Neville)
Oh dear, that last verse doth tell of lifes experiences.
However planting...
April 24th, 2019 08:10 - PARDON ? (Michael Edwards)
reply \"well how the Dickens do you expect me to know.... I wasnt even...
April 24th, 2019 08:03 - My monsters (JJ1)
Hi and welcome to the \"We all have monsters too\" club here in MPS. Yes...
April 22nd, 2019 18:27 - Finally (SerenWise)
Tremendous building of joy and excitement in this. I felt it. Very...
April 22nd, 2019 18:22 - When Duty Calls (Neville)
I really like this, especially the last line which in fact validates the...
April 22nd, 2019 06:22 - SWEETNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Your eye sees more than the casual viewer methinks.
The candied...
April 22nd, 2019 03:21 - Thank you for triggering my train (Poetic Dan)
Forgiving is something which love teaches us i think. Time plays its...
April 22nd, 2019 03:10 - Mouth Full of Words. (Goldfinch60)
Love is a many splendoured thing. Giving ones love, letting it radiate...
April 22nd, 2019 01:17 - BELLS (Michael Edwards)
Quasimodo bought his wife Esmerelda a wok, so she could iron his...
April 22nd, 2019 00:25 - Our Scars (SerenWise)
So very true. Encompassing this struggle and perhaps what is to follow, i...
April 21st, 2019 19:05 - resurrect (Suresh)
Well he ain\'t coming, he never said he was did he, that was a MAN MADE...
April 21st, 2019 12:59 - My show begins (Poetic Dan)
LOL Dan - yes i got the message here. I\'m so sorry i missed this one...
April 21st, 2019 11:20 - 🕊🥀Come Home (YoursTruly9)
This piece really shows the anguish and mixed sentiments of a loves...
April 21st, 2019 07:55 - 🕊🥀Come Home (YoursTruly9)
This piece really shows the anguish and mixed sentiments of a loves...
April 21st, 2019 06:50 - My Vision (Nafis Light)
Wholeheartedly support your desire for this.
What a world we would have...
April 21st, 2019 06:09 - My Vision (Nafis Light)
Wholeheartedly support your desire for this.
What a world we would have...
April 21st, 2019 06:04
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