Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Safe at last (Friendsaresuicide) Baggage from our yesterdays. We all have it, it slows us, alarms us, makes...
  January 15th, 2019 09:58
• Borrowed Characters (Neville) Yep, sylviasearcher is right with her corinthians point...... all...
  January 15th, 2019 07:07
• Morning Glory. (Goldfinch60) Your times of peace and reflection bring out the you we all see here.
  January 15th, 2019 07:02
• LUSTS EMBRACE (Michael Edwards) And to think that twenty minutes earlier all that passion was in a coal...
  January 15th, 2019 07:01
• MOVES. (Fay Slimm.) Time... what was that which was our yesterdays? Here and now we are...
  January 14th, 2019 18:47
• We are all on this show (Poetic Dan) Where ya been? Somewhere nicer than where u were before thats for...
  January 14th, 2019 18:41
• Trust in Politicians. (Goldfinch60) Look... i never said mexico was paying for brexit !!!
  January 14th, 2019 18:36
• TWO SHORTIES (Michael Edwards) Peace in the valley?... is that the quiet after the storm?
  January 14th, 2019 18:34
• Street Art (Neville) Though provoking and confusing .... but... i came out of it thinking about...
  January 14th, 2019 18:33
• Keep These Broken Shards (Neville) I did exactly a bid. So far it is keeping all sorts of lovers from my...
  January 13th, 2019 14:00
• No Signalling Day. (Goldfinch60) I\'m exactly the same about use of indicators/trafficators... i judge non...
  January 13th, 2019 13:57
• LIMERICK 61 (Michael Edwards) oh i do love some crackers and cheese when the veins match my legs if you...
  January 13th, 2019 13:50
• Students (Neville) Its all done with mirrors and trickery. Least ways, that was the story of...
  January 11th, 2019 11:07
• SCRATCH IT ? (Michael Edwards) Cheek!
  January 11th, 2019 11:03
• WINTER CLOSES (1) (Michael Edwards) All change here. The Global Warming express now arriving on all platforms...
  January 7th, 2019 13:43
• She. (Goldfinch60) There are often beautiful endings to entertain us. Sadly, reflecting upon...
  January 7th, 2019 13:40
• Lost in my Head (Cooper) The need for therapy shouts.
  January 6th, 2019 08:46
• A Self Fulfilling Prophecy (TrystanBehm) \"Do not go gentle into that dark night, Rage, RAGE against the dying of...
  January 6th, 2019 06:51
• OEDIPAL COMPLEX (Fuche_bu) Takes a good trainer to get a dog to this stage.
  January 6th, 2019 06:47
• Engaged to Disengage (Sunshinefalling) If there be anyone present who knows why this divorce should not take...
  January 6th, 2019 06:46
• Breathe (Silver) I only ever had a panic attack once.. I think your words are quite apt.. ...
  January 6th, 2019 06:44
• does love really exist? (Lea cobain .) Love is like the weather, seasonal and changeable.
  January 6th, 2019 06:42
• In Life, You Can’t Pretend (Asrealastheycome) And all the rest is just poetry!
  January 6th, 2019 06:40
• The Hunt in the Forest (Goldfinch60) I had a wonderful dream last night. I\'m pleased to report that no animals...
  January 6th, 2019 06:39
• TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS (Michael Edwards) Customer announcement - to avoid a parking penalty charge dont forget to...
  January 6th, 2019 06:36
• Journeys of Life. (Goldfinch60) I suspect the man who returns from your river is a changed man.
  January 5th, 2019 03:52
• AUTUMN BREEZE (Michael Edwards) The sparrow shudders, feathers ruffled For in Pussy\'s mouth his cries...
  January 5th, 2019 03:50
• A Handful of Nightingales (Neville) Far too complicated for a humble sinner like me to attempt. My body clock...
  January 3rd, 2019 08:16
• Day of Bach. (Goldfinch60) Have you heard this played on the ukelele?
  January 3rd, 2019 08:13
• WHERE AM I ? (Michael Edwards) Reality is but an illusion.
  January 3rd, 2019 08:12
• Just Take a Look (Neville) Truly enigmatic and very cleverly done.
  January 2nd, 2019 09:59
• Water Shock. (Goldfinch60) I bet u never make that mistake if there are still presents around its...
  January 2nd, 2019 03:18
• PARADOX (Michael Edwards) This made me think of my hair. I\'m still not sure where it went.
  January 2nd, 2019 03:16
• Selfish Suffering (Unknownt) Your words show that you are a natural poet, and a serious one. Write...
  January 2nd, 2019 02:39
• Power (John Prophet) I agree with every word. Looking around this site its easy to see how the...
  January 2nd, 2019 02:32
• Alone (TheStrongInHeart) I like this. The thinking man realising he\'s on a different planet to...
  January 2nd, 2019 02:27
• When The World Has Let You Down (Kevin browne) The right frame of mind to read your works is truly rewarded today....
  January 2nd, 2019 02:23
• Dali’s Eyes (Neville) LOL every writer dreams of such wishes. But better to see and be who you...
  January 1st, 2019 06:52
• thank you (Faye.birch) Yes, you will succeed! Great piece of positive writing in the face of...
  January 1st, 2019 01:13
• HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL AT MPS (Michael Edwards) ooh-er, umm err yes well maybe innit. Later during Jan 1st no doubt many...
  December 31st, 2018 15:50
• New Year Scotch. (Goldfinch60) I\'ll be with you in spirit. I wish you and yours well in 2019. May your...
  December 31st, 2018 15:47
• The Songbird Sings (Edthepoet) Ed, when you\'re brilliant you really hit the spot. Masterful. Loves...
  December 31st, 2018 15:36
• Reflections (Neville) Now come on! If you wanted to do a proper reflection it should have been...
  December 31st, 2018 10:24
• Dream of Peace. (Goldfinch60) You know we CAN give peace a chance, it\'s the other buggers who spoil it.
  December 30th, 2018 09:26
• VICE VERSA (Michael Edwards) Flippin artistic types! One never knows if they\'re coming or going. Or...
  December 17th, 2018 11:43
• Travel in Hope. (Goldfinch60) I love it. Totally share your expression of faith here.
  December 17th, 2018 11:42
• Lack of Understanding. (Goldfinch60) It is the inner dog within you. A hair of the dog in the morning is always...
  December 16th, 2018 13:34
• MY SPIRIT (Michael Edwards) Always plenty of spirit to be found in the next bottle sir.
  December 16th, 2018 13:32
• The Glue of Life. (Goldfinch60) Yes, excellent Goldfinch, love - the glue of life!
  December 15th, 2018 04:42
• A STRANGER (Michael Edwards) Aye \'appen lad.... in need of t\'oil... To light his lamp i...
  December 15th, 2018 04:40
• A DISARRAY OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Each one a gem in itself.
  December 14th, 2018 21:18
• The Experts Opinion. (Goldfinch60) A guy once hired me as an expert in my field. Later he explained his...
  December 14th, 2018 21:17
• My age (Heather Harrisson) The lyrics of an old song come to mind. \"Walk a mile in my shoes, before...
  December 12th, 2018 11:41
• Love Hate. (Goldfinch60) Love conquers all... but (there\'s always that flipping \'but\' isn\'t...
  December 12th, 2018 11:37
• BREXIT - A WILFUL BETRAYAL? (Michael Edwards) Look...whatever they try and foist on us for Brexit, I\'m sticking to...
  December 12th, 2018 11:31
• SHORTIE ONE (Michael Edwards) OMG you mean i must never go to the seaside again? The way gets much...
  December 10th, 2018 09:33
• Together in Paradise. (Goldfinch60) There they were together in paradise, the only discernable sounds were...
  December 10th, 2018 09:29
• None Other Like It (Gary Edward Geraci) Who would want to offer anything to such a cruel god. Gods so called...
  December 8th, 2018 19:23
• Him ❤️ (Friendsaresuicide) What a lovely first offering from you. Compact and punchy, says it all...
  December 8th, 2018 13:37
• Storm (Debsspot) Made me smile. I love short punchy pieces like yours. Made me think \'hey...
  December 8th, 2018 13:15
• message to my angel (MSA-19) A beautiful tribute to a sadly lost and truly loved soul. Very moving.
  December 8th, 2018 13:13
• Last words (Edwinknox) \'a man far better than me\' such thoughts are a trap so easily we can...
  December 8th, 2018 13:11
• Down (Arazimus) Or to put it another way... you are a born survivor. Live long and...
  December 8th, 2018 13:03
• im sorry (Lainacarson98) I really like the way you\'ve chosen to write about this painful part of...
  December 8th, 2018 13:01
• Sick of Waitin’ (Asrealastheycome) Could you have said this in a more punchy way in six or eight lines? I...
  December 8th, 2018 12:55
• Integrity in Life. (Goldfinch60) Ah, a part of me believes i have become the mature craftsman who takes a...
  December 8th, 2018 12:53
• OILS DIFFUSED (Michael Edwards) \'Unsettled by truth\'... mind blowing line. Oft i burn essential oils,...
  December 8th, 2018 12:45
• EMOTION (Michael Edwards) ha ha ha, i second that emotion
  November 28th, 2018 12:36
• Old Fashioned? Moi? (Goldfinch60) What\'s a newspaper? he he he
  November 25th, 2018 11:52
• IT ONLY TAKES ONE (Michael Edwards) i didnt get that bronze medal for swimming for nothing u know!
  November 25th, 2018 11:50
• That Flaming Song! (Goldfinch60) Bah-Humbug. The supermarkets are full of christmas goodies. Yep earlier...
  November 24th, 2018 03:28
• OUT OF BOUNCE (Michael Edwards) A hearty laugh at this one.
  November 24th, 2018 03:23
• Seasons of Love. (Goldfinch60) I know the experience of the first two verses. The latter two i have...
  November 23rd, 2018 17:26
• ONE DAY EACH WEEK (Michael Edwards) It travelled as far as worcestershire thats for sure. Big grin but no...
  November 23rd, 2018 06:25
• UNDERSTANDING. (Fay Slimm.) I love your teaching healing message here. As often happens, it reminds me...
  November 22nd, 2018 10:07
• Writing not Tapping. (Goldfinch60) Every piece in MPS creates a mental picture. Today yours throws up a...
  November 22nd, 2018 02:49
• THE STATISTICIAN (Michael Edwards) He just had to be a busy bee i guess. p.s. is that a typo in the title...
  November 22nd, 2018 02:43
• DOUBLE TROUBLE (Michael Edwards) Could bring a whole new meaning to \'morning glory\'.
  November 22nd, 2018 02:41
• WITH YOU. (Fay Slimm.) Wonderful. Recounted beautiful things which remain long after the physical...
  November 22nd, 2018 02:36
• What is the Time? (Goldfinch60) There\'s a new version of that \'joke\' around here. One is awakened by...
  November 20th, 2018 12:49
• THE RISING SUN (Michael Edwards) That sun and it\'s rays of positivity beckoning us to do whatever it is to...
  November 20th, 2018 12:43
• Enlightened Way. (Goldfinch60) Everything around you is the same as it ever was with one huge...
  November 19th, 2018 12:35
• I Defeated Satan (Gary Edward Geraci) He he he. I think you defeated the person who invented the concept of...
  November 17th, 2018 11:24
• The Leaves. (Goldfinch60) One of my all time favourites, Miles interpretation of Autumn Leaves,...
  November 17th, 2018 10:26
• THE DEWS OF DAWN (Michael Edwards) This lovely gal and her life\'s experience qualify her for free entry upon...
  November 17th, 2018 10:10
• Mantovani (Goldfinch60) Oh yes,there are those old tunes which bring back similar memories for me....
  November 16th, 2018 09:30
• KNOCK KNOCK (Michael Edwards) Aww for a moment there i thought it was going to be your pet dawg come...
  November 16th, 2018 09:29
• FORGOTTEN (Michael Edwards) Ah, the thinker who spoke his mind to the wrong persons. People who heard...
  November 13th, 2018 04:02
• The Corner of My Dreams. (Goldfinch60) In western mainstream religion the concept of reincarnation has been...
  November 13th, 2018 03:56
• Spiritual Warfare (Orchidee) So brainwasheth the lord eh?
  November 12th, 2018 15:32
• Dreams (Christina8) Our minds take us back in our dreams and romance with reality. Well mine...
  November 12th, 2018 13:06
• STRANGENESS. (Fay Slimm.) I\'m made of stardust - or someone told me i was anyway. A child of the...
  November 12th, 2018 12:58
• The Sea of Harmony. (Goldfinch60) Thats a truly great mind picture. Like that area of the moon but not so...
  November 12th, 2018 12:51
• AND SO TO BED (Michael Edwards) Honey bunny swears shes funny and giggles in her burrow. Here and now...
  November 12th, 2018 12:47
• The Last Night (Lorna) Sad. I wonder how many had the thouights you describe. Writing in first...
  November 11th, 2018 11:38
• To let it go I must flow (Poetic Dan) Kudos. Those who choose to live an evil life will find evil comes and gets...
  November 11th, 2018 11:34
• The Guns Stopped. (Goldfinch60) No the guns havent stopped you\'re so right. Sadly mankind seems...
  November 11th, 2018 11:25
• RIOJA (Michael Edwards) What are you, an artist or somethimg?? LOL Such a lovely idea and carried...
  November 11th, 2018 11:17
• Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off! (DesertWords) Ironic isn\'t that a preacher regurgitates phrases from a book that has...
  November 10th, 2018 16:33
• WAR CRY. (Fay Slimm.) Lest we should ever forget. A lovely tribute to the war fallen Fay. I...
  November 9th, 2018 04:12