Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Waiting for Cancer (Neville) Strange frame of mind comes thru your words. Is it one of defeat? Is it...
  January 24th, 2019 17:26
• EVOKING. (Fay Slimm.) Yes, yes, yes. My muse is in slumber at the moment and I look forward to...
  January 24th, 2019 17:21
• ARTY COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) His inventions had become prolific They eclipsed the known...
  January 24th, 2019 17:18
• Paid Retirement (Goldfinch60) Some of those workers messed things up for me. The man made credit crunch...
  January 24th, 2019 17:15
• Dreaming (‘Lyss) Alone again and ready to blossom into the sunlight when you once again...
  January 23rd, 2019 14:24
• Determine Our Path (SilverXball) The river of life. I really like this analogy. Lifes current takes us...
  January 23rd, 2019 14:19
• HOPING. (Fay Slimm.) Subtle. I read this as the human condition. Emotionally we are creatures...
  January 23rd, 2019 14:15
• An Occasional Dream (Neville) Let dreams be as dreams are.... dreams. The reality is in the everyday...
  January 23rd, 2019 14:10
• Understanding. (Goldfinch60) Excellent thought provoking writing. I don\'t agree with your finale...
  January 23rd, 2019 08:53
• Your Last (Rayray2) I love the sentiment in this piece. I have lived every bit of it. Sadly...
  January 23rd, 2019 08:47
• Broken (Hidden emotion) The feelings you express is what makes u a poet. We are all individuals...
  January 23rd, 2019 08:42
• A (Michael Edwards) A nice one.
  January 23rd, 2019 08:38
• renzi (Dusk arising) And thank you very much for reminding me of Renzi. i am going to...
  January 23rd, 2019 07:43
• What Happened to the Painter (Neville) Where did our magic go, those differences which pleased me into loving...
  January 22nd, 2019 19:06
• The Part Of Love I\'m Scared Of. (Kevin browne) Theres a lot of living gone into your words again here. Reflective, sad...
  January 22nd, 2019 18:52
• My life (SorrowfullyHappy) Try apologising to her man.
  January 20th, 2019 15:03
• Painfully Yours (Neville) To attract game one learns to play the game.
  January 20th, 2019 05:48
• Coffee Time. (Goldfinch60) I like it fine. Mocha beans or Kenya but never bitter columbian.
  January 20th, 2019 05:46
• A COUPLE MORE (Michael Edwards) Dastardly deeds discovered Doggedly demanding dictation Direction...
  January 20th, 2019 05:44
• In All The Things We Usually Do. (Kevin browne) Reads like wisdom from a life lived by a man who\'s learned how to cope.
  January 18th, 2019 19:09
• In All The Things We Usually Do. (Kevin browne) Reads like wisdom from a life lived by a man who\'s learned how to cope.
  January 18th, 2019 19:08
• Nobody knows what I hide inside (Joseph M Marion) Is it the pain we carry inside which makes poets of us? I imagine each...
  January 18th, 2019 14:14
• HUSBANDRY. (Fay Slimm.) A late brother-in-law was a dairy farmer and introduced me to some of his...
  January 18th, 2019 14:09
• 747 (Michael Edwards) OK, do you remember the old 60\'s disc dance tune by wilson pickett...
  January 18th, 2019 13:58
• Moments in Words. (Goldfinch60) This so true for me sir. Within my published pieces on MPS are those which...
  January 18th, 2019 13:49
• My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville) The eye of the beholder sees as it sees. What is it which makes one...
  January 18th, 2019 13:44
• Shapeshifter (DesiAnn7) I see you\'ve met the ex.
  January 17th, 2019 17:47
• Being (Sylviasearcher) How much should we reveal of ourselves when we relax into loving. Such a...
  January 17th, 2019 09:12
• Turquoise (Neville) Loves dance, loves game, poignant when we have to follow someone elses...
  January 17th, 2019 09:04
• WHY ? (Fay Slimm.) How lifes past disappointments can poison hope. Beautifully portrayed in...
  January 17th, 2019 09:02
• forgotten field (Markashley1961) Wonderful writing. My busy mind immediately worries me that night has...
  January 17th, 2019 08:56
• Teddy Man. (Goldfinch60) Disgusting, i think you would not have made such comments if it was a...
  January 17th, 2019 08:48
• TWO 575s (Michael Edwards) How about a jumbo, a 747 piece. Or even larger piece, a \'drone\'.
  January 17th, 2019 08:42
• Suffocating in silence (Theskyisnotblue) I know where you are coming from with this. Please have a look at my...
  January 16th, 2019 16:53
• Things You Break (Xlayla55x) Yes, breaking even would be nice. Do we only notice the breaks inflicted...
  January 16th, 2019 14:59
• Living to Die (DesiAnn7) Do we die several times over before we learn to really live? I think many...
  January 16th, 2019 14:53
• Live To Tell The Tale (Edthepoet) Yeah, thats a love story told well. I really like the way you leave...
  January 16th, 2019 14:51
• The Weavers Knot (Neville) Ah, the enigmatic female dances through your words, enchanting, enticing,...
  January 16th, 2019 14:45
• TAKE WING. (Fay Slimm.) Positivity reigns here, as it does with me. An uplifting read.
  January 16th, 2019 14:42
• Score for Words. (Goldfinch60) Sing it.... record it..... - i\'ll hand out the earplugs.
  January 16th, 2019 14:40
• A WHISKY MAC (Michael Edwards) Stones or crabbies?
  January 16th, 2019 14:38
• All I know (Tiffany_Arnold) Fight fight fight..... what are you fighting? Life is for living, if...
  January 15th, 2019 18:15
• Whatever Game We\'re Playing (Edthepoet) Hope you show her this. Hope you show your work to appreciative people.
  January 15th, 2019 18:13
• Safe at last (Friendsaresuicide) Baggage from our yesterdays. We all have it, it slows us, alarms us, makes...
  January 15th, 2019 09:58
• Borrowed Characters (Neville) Yep, sylviasearcher is right with her corinthians point...... all...
  January 15th, 2019 07:07
• Morning Glory. (Goldfinch60) Your times of peace and reflection bring out the you we all see here.
  January 15th, 2019 07:02
• LUSTS EMBRACE (Michael Edwards) And to think that twenty minutes earlier all that passion was in a coal...
  January 15th, 2019 07:01
• MOVES. (Fay Slimm.) Time... what was that which was our yesterdays? Here and now we are...
  January 14th, 2019 18:47
• We are all on this show (Poetic Dan) Where ya been? Somewhere nicer than where u were before thats for...
  January 14th, 2019 18:41
• Trust in Politicians. (Goldfinch60) Look... i never said mexico was paying for brexit !!!
  January 14th, 2019 18:36
• TWO SHORTIES (Michael Edwards) Peace in the valley?... is that the quiet after the storm?
  January 14th, 2019 18:34
• Street Art (Neville) Though provoking and confusing .... but... i came out of it thinking about...
  January 14th, 2019 18:33
• Keep These Broken Shards (Neville) I did exactly a bid. So far it is keeping all sorts of lovers from my...
  January 13th, 2019 14:00
• No Signalling Day. (Goldfinch60) I\'m exactly the same about use of indicators/trafficators... i judge non...
  January 13th, 2019 13:57
• LIMERICK 61 (Michael Edwards) oh i do love some crackers and cheese when the veins match my legs if you...
  January 13th, 2019 13:50
• Students (Neville) Its all done with mirrors and trickery. Least ways, that was the story of...
  January 11th, 2019 11:07
• SCRATCH IT ? (Michael Edwards) Cheek!
  January 11th, 2019 11:03
• WINTER CLOSES (1) (Michael Edwards) All change here. The Global Warming express now arriving on all platforms...
  January 7th, 2019 13:43
• She. (Goldfinch60) There are often beautiful endings to entertain us. Sadly, reflecting upon...
  January 7th, 2019 13:40
• Lost in my Head (Cooper) The need for therapy shouts.
  January 6th, 2019 08:46
• A Self Fulfilling Prophecy (TrystanBehm) \"Do not go gentle into that dark night, Rage, RAGE against the dying of...
  January 6th, 2019 06:51
• OEDIPAL COMPLEX (Fuche_bu) Takes a good trainer to get a dog to this stage.
  January 6th, 2019 06:47
• Engaged to Disengage (Sunshinefalling) If there be anyone present who knows why this divorce should not take...
  January 6th, 2019 06:46
• Breathe (Silver) I only ever had a panic attack once.. I think your words are quite apt.. ...
  January 6th, 2019 06:44
• does love really exist? (Lea cobain .) Love is like the weather, seasonal and changeable.
  January 6th, 2019 06:42
• In Life, You Can’t Pretend (Asrealastheycome) And all the rest is just poetry!
  January 6th, 2019 06:40
• The Hunt in the Forest (Goldfinch60) I had a wonderful dream last night. I\'m pleased to report that no animals...
  January 6th, 2019 06:39
• TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS (Michael Edwards) Customer announcement - to avoid a parking penalty charge dont forget to...
  January 6th, 2019 06:36
• Journeys of Life. (Goldfinch60) I suspect the man who returns from your river is a changed man.
  January 5th, 2019 03:52
• AUTUMN BREEZE (Michael Edwards) The sparrow shudders, feathers ruffled For in Pussy\'s mouth his cries...
  January 5th, 2019 03:50
• A Handful of Nightingales (Neville) Far too complicated for a humble sinner like me to attempt. My body clock...
  January 3rd, 2019 08:16
• Day of Bach. (Goldfinch60) Have you heard this played on the ukelele?
  January 3rd, 2019 08:13
• WHERE AM I ? (Michael Edwards) Reality is but an illusion.
  January 3rd, 2019 08:12
• Just Take a Look (Neville) Truly enigmatic and very cleverly done.
  January 2nd, 2019 09:59
• Water Shock. (Goldfinch60) I bet u never make that mistake if there are still presents around its...
  January 2nd, 2019 03:18
• PARADOX (Michael Edwards) This made me think of my hair. I\'m still not sure where it went.
  January 2nd, 2019 03:16
• Selfish Suffering (Unknownt) Your words show that you are a natural poet, and a serious one. Write...
  January 2nd, 2019 02:39
• Power (John Prophet) I agree with every word. Looking around this site its easy to see how the...
  January 2nd, 2019 02:32
• Alone (TheStrongInHeart) I like this. The thinking man realising he\'s on a different planet to...
  January 2nd, 2019 02:27
• When The World Has Let You Down (Kevin browne) The right frame of mind to read your works is truly rewarded today....
  January 2nd, 2019 02:23
• Dali’s Eyes (Neville) LOL every writer dreams of such wishes. But better to see and be who you...
  January 1st, 2019 06:52
• thank you (Faye.birch) Yes, you will succeed! Great piece of positive writing in the face of...
  January 1st, 2019 01:13
• HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL AT MPS (Michael Edwards) ooh-er, umm err yes well maybe innit. Later during Jan 1st no doubt many...
  December 31st, 2018 15:50
• New Year Scotch. (Goldfinch60) I\'ll be with you in spirit. I wish you and yours well in 2019. May your...
  December 31st, 2018 15:47
• The Songbird Sings (Edthepoet) Ed, when you\'re brilliant you really hit the spot. Masterful. Loves...
  December 31st, 2018 15:36
• Reflections (Neville) Now come on! If you wanted to do a proper reflection it should have been...
  December 31st, 2018 10:24
• Dream of Peace. (Goldfinch60) You know we CAN give peace a chance, it\'s the other buggers who spoil it.
  December 30th, 2018 09:26
• VICE VERSA (Michael Edwards) Flippin artistic types! One never knows if they\'re coming or going. Or...
  December 17th, 2018 11:43
• Travel in Hope. (Goldfinch60) I love it. Totally share your expression of faith here.
  December 17th, 2018 11:42
• Lack of Understanding. (Goldfinch60) It is the inner dog within you. A hair of the dog in the morning is always...
  December 16th, 2018 13:34
• MY SPIRIT (Michael Edwards) Always plenty of spirit to be found in the next bottle sir.
  December 16th, 2018 13:32
• The Glue of Life. (Goldfinch60) Yes, excellent Goldfinch, love - the glue of life!
  December 15th, 2018 04:42
• A STRANGER (Michael Edwards) Aye \'appen lad.... in need of t\'oil... To light his lamp i...
  December 15th, 2018 04:40
• A DISARRAY OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Each one a gem in itself.
  December 14th, 2018 21:18
• The Experts Opinion. (Goldfinch60) A guy once hired me as an expert in my field. Later he explained his...
  December 14th, 2018 21:17
• My age (Heather Harrisson) The lyrics of an old song come to mind. \"Walk a mile in my shoes, before...
  December 12th, 2018 11:41
• Love Hate. (Goldfinch60) Love conquers all... but (there\'s always that flipping \'but\' isn\'t...
  December 12th, 2018 11:37
• BREXIT - A WILFUL BETRAYAL? (Michael Edwards) Look...whatever they try and foist on us for Brexit, I\'m sticking to...
  December 12th, 2018 11:31
• SHORTIE ONE (Michael Edwards) OMG you mean i must never go to the seaside again? The way gets much...
  December 10th, 2018 09:33
• Together in Paradise. (Goldfinch60) There they were together in paradise, the only discernable sounds were...
  December 10th, 2018 09:29