Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Home Is a Time (A__pott)
So many people cannot move with the times. Is it because today is a less...
January 31st, 2019 02:45 - Your sweater (‘Lyss)
Pah! I\'m jealous..... no body ever slept in my sweater .... tongue...
January 30th, 2019 12:58 - Girl, You Showed Him That You Cared (Brooklyn6timesplus)
This is a perpetual story sorrowing the hearts of us all.... we live, we...
January 30th, 2019 12:55 - Countless Indiscretions (Neville)
Yeah, when two people have something which is \'right\'.... celebrate the...
January 30th, 2019 12:45 - Lasting Love (Tiffany_Arnold)
This is really moving. It clearly shows your love for your mother and her...
January 30th, 2019 12:41 - UNTITLED. (Nikhil Vadher)
Hmm my world is not shaken by Kardashian headlines sir! My spirit is with...
January 30th, 2019 12:36 - The devils awakemimg (Sisdrenjen)
Yes i agree with the sentiment of this \" Poncing about like they own us...
January 30th, 2019 12:30 - Choosing To Be Strong (NaomiRayne)
I see your learned wisdom reigning here. I read that you have suffered...
January 30th, 2019 12:26 - Gone Away. (Goldfinch60)
To the river Goldfinch where peace and the spiritual you rest and re-set...
January 30th, 2019 12:20 - Le cœur (Mia_Rose)
So much conveyed here in so few words. Once again \'less is more\'.
January 30th, 2019 12:17 - NO GOLD TO GLISTEN (Michael Edwards)
Love the way you took my imagination and wove a mystery of lost...
January 30th, 2019 12:15 - Not All Art Goes Down in History (Lily_)
Wow! When you do say something it has power and ... you sure know how to...
January 30th, 2019 12:08 - ghost letter (Lainacarson98)
I really feel this poem. Some things smoulder in you forever, i know...
January 30th, 2019 12:05 - \'Till Death Do Us Part... (Halo_xx)
A truly lovely read.
January 29th, 2019 23:22 - LUNACY. (Fay Slimm.)
Look what happened to Easter Island.
All very well to sympathise from...
January 29th, 2019 18:43 - Spiritual Humanity. (Goldfinch60)
We are born human Goldfinch. Every instinct a bratty child exhibits is...
January 29th, 2019 18:38 - I CREATE (Michael Edwards)
A great jazz musician said that he lived for his mistakes. When i\'m...
January 29th, 2019 18:28 - WITCHDOCTORS! (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Thats a good fun storyline. Light hearted but poignant.
Made me think of...
January 28th, 2019 14:24 - NIGHTNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
The way you capture your readers mind, re-pace their perception with your...
January 28th, 2019 08:09 - Crisp clean (Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87)
Hey, what\'s in that drink. A mindful cocktail with a slice of reality...
January 28th, 2019 08:01 - Might She by Chance be a Witch (Neville)
Bewitched by her femininity you have been sir! And such a wonderful spell...
January 28th, 2019 05:04 - But is it Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
It always dismays me when i hear some twerp identify one artists work...
January 28th, 2019 04:50 - Be (Michael Edwards)
yawning has broken like the first y.... ooh deja vu
January 28th, 2019 04:42 - I Build Her a Lighthouse (Edthepoet)
Hmmm. The need for a lighthouse denotes dangerous waters.
Rocky...
January 27th, 2019 14:38 - Mozart Acrostic 1. (Goldfinch60)
For my ears i prefer the recording of the Zemlinsky quartet accompanied by...
January 27th, 2019 14:32 - FROM WHERE DO THE BREEZES BLOW? (Michael Edwards)
The laws of flatulence go back to our childhood.
Given a fair wind i used...
January 27th, 2019 14:20 - What We Got (Neville)
As the psychiatrist told me \'speaking to your second personality, i\'d...
January 27th, 2019 14:17 - I asked God for just one (Joseph M Marion)
Shame you had to include god in this. This Omnipotent god brings famine,...
January 25th, 2019 10:57 - Life’s Last Moments (The Retired Bloke)
Epic writing today. Long may you wait for any final moments, that we may...
January 25th, 2019 10:48 - appen (Markashley1961)
Appen as this worra a reet gud advenchah tu reed. Ent gorra clue worrits...
January 25th, 2019 05:26 - appen (Markashley1961)
Appen as this worra a reet gud advenchah tu reed. Ent gorra clue worrits...
January 25th, 2019 05:12 - Mirislavka (Neville)
Excellent story and excellent composition.
Each line a thrill leading to...
January 25th, 2019 05:08 - Calliope Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Always there for you, you lucky person to have such a muse. Mine\'s taken...
January 25th, 2019 05:03 - BOOKS IN RETIREMENT (Michael Edwards)
In the milder months of the year i am a bedtime reader. Dozing off with a...
January 25th, 2019 04:59 - Homeless In Roanoke (W c)
I know that most of us have the wrong mental picture of homeless folk. I...
January 24th, 2019 17:45 - Is it to late? (Carmine)
A shaggy dog story i guess.
January 24th, 2019 17:37 - Ink talk (Down the rabbithole)
Confrontation of your deamons, kept at bay with a pen, mightier than the...
January 24th, 2019 17:32 - Waiting for Cancer (Neville)
Strange frame of mind comes thru your words. Is it one of defeat? Is it...
January 24th, 2019 17:26 - EVOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, yes, yes. My muse is in slumber at the moment and I look forward to...
January 24th, 2019 17:21 - ARTY COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
His inventions had become prolific
They eclipsed the known...
January 24th, 2019 17:18 - Paid Retirement (Goldfinch60)
Some of those workers messed things up for me. The man made credit crunch...
January 24th, 2019 17:15 - Dreaming (‘Lyss)
Alone again and ready to blossom into the sunlight when you once again...
January 23rd, 2019 14:24 - Determine Our Path (SilverXball)
The river of life.
I really like this analogy. Lifes current takes us...
January 23rd, 2019 14:19 - HOPING. (Fay Slimm.)
Subtle. I read this as the human condition. Emotionally we are creatures...
January 23rd, 2019 14:15 - An Occasional Dream (Neville)
Let dreams be as dreams are.... dreams.
The reality is in the everyday...
January 23rd, 2019 14:10 - Understanding. (Goldfinch60)
Excellent thought provoking writing. I don\'t agree with your finale...
January 23rd, 2019 08:53 - Your Last (Rayray2)
I love the sentiment in this piece. I have lived every bit of it. Sadly...
January 23rd, 2019 08:47 - Broken (Hidden emotion)
The feelings you express is what makes u a poet. We are all individuals...
January 23rd, 2019 08:42 - A (Michael Edwards)
A nice one.
January 23rd, 2019 08:38 - renzi (Dusk arising)
And thank you very much for reminding me of Renzi. i am going to...
January 23rd, 2019 07:43 - What Happened to the Painter (Neville)
Where did our magic go, those differences which pleased me into loving...
January 22nd, 2019 19:06 - The Part Of Love I\'m Scared Of. (Kevin browne)
Theres a lot of living gone into your words again here. Reflective, sad...
January 22nd, 2019 18:52 - My life (SorrowfullyHappy)
Try apologising to her man.
January 20th, 2019 15:03 - Painfully Yours (Neville)
To attract game one learns to play the game.
January 20th, 2019 05:48 - Coffee Time. (Goldfinch60)
I like it fine. Mocha beans or Kenya but never bitter columbian.
January 20th, 2019 05:46 - A COUPLE MORE (Michael Edwards)
Dastardly deeds discovered
Doggedly demanding dictation
Direction...
January 20th, 2019 05:44 - In All The Things We Usually Do. (Kevin browne)
Reads like wisdom from a life lived by a man who\'s learned how to cope.
January 18th, 2019 19:09 - In All The Things We Usually Do. (Kevin browne)
Reads like wisdom from a life lived by a man who\'s learned how to cope.
January 18th, 2019 19:08 - Nobody knows what I hide inside (Joseph M Marion)
Is it the pain we carry inside which makes poets of us?
I imagine each...
January 18th, 2019 14:14 - HUSBANDRY. (Fay Slimm.)
A late brother-in-law was a dairy farmer and introduced me to some of his...
January 18th, 2019 14:09 - 747 (Michael Edwards)
OK, do you remember the old 60\'s disc dance tune by wilson pickett...
January 18th, 2019 13:58 - Moments in Words. (Goldfinch60)
This so true for me sir. Within my published pieces on MPS are those which...
January 18th, 2019 13:49 - My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville)
The eye of the beholder sees as it sees.
What is it which makes one...
January 18th, 2019 13:44 - Shapeshifter (DesiAnn7)
I see you\'ve met the ex.
January 17th, 2019 17:47 - Being (Sylviasearcher)
How much should we reveal of ourselves when we relax into loving. Such a...
January 17th, 2019 09:12 - Turquoise (Neville)
Loves dance, loves game, poignant when we have to follow someone elses...
January 17th, 2019 09:04 - WHY ? (Fay Slimm.)
How lifes past disappointments can poison hope. Beautifully portrayed in...
January 17th, 2019 09:02 - forgotten field (Markashley1961)
Wonderful writing. My busy mind immediately worries me that night has...
January 17th, 2019 08:56 - Teddy Man. (Goldfinch60)
Disgusting, i think you would not have made such comments if it was a...
January 17th, 2019 08:48 - TWO 575s (Michael Edwards)
How about a jumbo, a 747 piece.
Or even larger piece, a \'drone\'.
January 17th, 2019 08:42 - Suffocating in silence (Theskyisnotblue)
I know where you are coming from with this. Please have a look at my...
January 16th, 2019 16:53 - Things You Break (Xlayla55x)
Yes, breaking even would be nice.
Do we only notice the breaks inflicted...
January 16th, 2019 14:59 - Living to Die (DesiAnn7)
Do we die several times over before we learn to really live? I think many...
January 16th, 2019 14:53 - Live To Tell The Tale (Edthepoet)
Yeah, thats a love story told well.
I really like the way you leave...
January 16th, 2019 14:51 - The Weavers Knot (Neville)
Ah, the enigmatic female dances through your words, enchanting, enticing,...
January 16th, 2019 14:45 - TAKE WING. (Fay Slimm.)
Positivity reigns here, as it does with me.
An uplifting read.
January 16th, 2019 14:42 - Score for Words. (Goldfinch60)
Sing it.... record it..... - i\'ll hand out the earplugs.
January 16th, 2019 14:40 - A WHISKY MAC (Michael Edwards)
Stones or crabbies?
January 16th, 2019 14:38 - All I know (Tiffany_Arnold)
Fight fight fight..... what are you fighting? Life is for living, if...
January 15th, 2019 18:15 - Whatever Game We\'re Playing (Edthepoet)
Hope you show her this. Hope you show your work to appreciative people.
January 15th, 2019 18:13 - Safe at last (Friendsaresuicide)
Baggage from our yesterdays. We all have it, it slows us, alarms us, makes...
January 15th, 2019 09:58 - Borrowed Characters (Neville)
Yep, sylviasearcher is right with her corinthians point...... all...
January 15th, 2019 07:07 - Morning Glory. (Goldfinch60)
Your times of peace and reflection bring out the you we all see here.
January 15th, 2019 07:02 - LUSTS EMBRACE (Michael Edwards)
And to think that twenty minutes earlier all that passion was in a coal...
January 15th, 2019 07:01 - MOVES. (Fay Slimm.)
Time... what was that which was our yesterdays? Here and now we are...
January 14th, 2019 18:47 - We are all on this show (Poetic Dan)
Where ya been? Somewhere nicer than where u were before thats for...
January 14th, 2019 18:41 - Trust in Politicians. (Goldfinch60)
Look... i never said mexico was paying for brexit !!!
January 14th, 2019 18:36 - TWO SHORTIES (Michael Edwards)
Peace in the valley?... is that the quiet after the storm?
January 14th, 2019 18:34 - Street Art (Neville)
Though provoking and confusing .... but... i came out of it thinking about...
January 14th, 2019 18:33 - Keep These Broken Shards (Neville)
I did exactly a bid. So far it is keeping all sorts of lovers from my...
January 13th, 2019 14:00 - No Signalling Day. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m exactly the same about use of indicators/trafficators... i judge non...
January 13th, 2019 13:57 - LIMERICK 61 (Michael Edwards)
oh i do love some crackers and cheese
when the veins match my legs if you...
January 13th, 2019 13:50 - Students (Neville)
Its all done with mirrors and trickery. Least ways, that was the story of...
January 11th, 2019 11:07 - SCRATCH IT ? (Michael Edwards)
Cheek!
January 11th, 2019 11:03 - WINTER CLOSES (1) (Michael Edwards)
All change here. The Global Warming express now arriving on all platforms...
January 7th, 2019 13:43 - She. (Goldfinch60)
There are often beautiful endings to entertain us. Sadly, reflecting upon...
January 7th, 2019 13:40 - Lost in my Head (Cooper)
The need for therapy shouts.
January 6th, 2019 08:46 - A Self Fulfilling Prophecy (TrystanBehm)
\"Do not go gentle into that dark night,
Rage, RAGE against the dying of...
January 6th, 2019 06:51 - OEDIPAL COMPLEX (Fuche_bu)
Takes a good trainer to get a dog to this stage.
January 6th, 2019 06:47 - Engaged to Disengage (Sunshinefalling)
If there be anyone present who knows why this divorce should not take...
January 6th, 2019 06:46
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