Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• EDELECTS BY THREE (Michael Edwards) There was a young man from Bengal who had a hexagonal ball its volume...
  October 5th, 2018 02:39
• TO JEANNE (Michael Edwards) Does the meaning of love matter so much when your very existence is within...
  October 4th, 2018 02:39
• Forgiveness Freedom (Orchidee) These stories from the bible made such sense when we were kids. Taught us...
  October 4th, 2018 02:36
• Moonlife. (Goldfinch60) Aha, echoes of rebirth. Do you ever wonder about those who have passed and...
  October 4th, 2018 02:34
• Scale (Quemis) Outstanding! I must find and read more of your work. Took my mind to...
  October 4th, 2018 02:13
• Jester from Leicester. Limerick. (Goldfinch60) A sizzling dish from Broadway Fancied her chances with swordplay But a...
  October 3rd, 2018 11:52
• Loving you feels like... (Edthepoet) Epic Ed. I\'d say this was a different style and approach for you. It\'s...
  October 3rd, 2018 11:43
• WHY NOT ?. (Fay Slimm.) An invigorating breath of fresh air. and why not? Refreshing fun
  September 28th, 2018 06:22
• To Nirvana. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful that some sounds or voices can do this to us.
  September 28th, 2018 02:23
• LIMERICK No 56 (Michael Edwards) The dirty old bishop of Birmingham, Buggered his flock whilst confirming...
  September 27th, 2018 01:33
• Sexual Assault (The Gifted One) Dont be mislead by a sly slippery tongued compliments from potential...
  September 27th, 2018 00:17
• Love Fell In A Bottle. (Kevin browne) An old record well played. Lots of us have the old country in our blood...
  September 26th, 2018 21:30
• Life\'s Ocean. (Goldfinch60) There\'s a part of you desires shipwreck i\'ll bet. Nice mind romancing...
  September 26th, 2018 16:06
• A CINQUAIN COLLECTION (Michael Edwards) Formula belong in mathematics not in poetry in my book. \'You shall dream...
  September 26th, 2018 16:04
• The Myth of Love (MissileOfUncertainty) Love the way you describe your solid positive view of yourself whist...
  September 24th, 2018 18:44
• Teardrops (Christina8) Been there, done that, t-shirt rotted away. But your words bring it all...
  September 24th, 2018 18:39
• YOU ARE. (Fay Slimm.) Soothing and reassuring. A definate favourite.
  September 24th, 2018 09:23
• Centrality. (Goldfinch60) Things could get messy if you serve up spaghetti hoops!
  September 24th, 2018 09:01
• A Better Day. (Goldfinch60) Life pulls and tugs at us in all different directions every day. Your...
  September 23rd, 2018 04:44
• The Day Begins. (Goldfinch60) Wet and windy i expect you will awaken to on Thursday. Who cares about...
  September 19th, 2018 18:22
• OUCH (Michael Edwards) I had a green one yesterday chopped it off with grandads cutter damn...
  September 19th, 2018 18:18
• The Final Over. (Goldfinch60) Any other final line would simply not be cricket sir! You made this game,...
  September 18th, 2018 10:11
• HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN (Michael Edwards) Ha ha nice one. Playing with words is fun. Playing with the written word...
  September 18th, 2018 10:04
• UNSATED. (Fay Slimm.) Poignant - \"Best is closure so hunger can then turn elsewhere for...
  September 17th, 2018 05:32
• Lost Lover. (Goldfinch60) Somehow the beauty of this wonderful life is maimed by the loss of what...
  September 17th, 2018 05:20
• OCEANS TEARS (Michael Edwards) I came out of a fog to read this. Its filled with sombre mystery. Much...
  September 17th, 2018 05:09
• Eyetest. (Goldfinch60) Well i certainly hope you do pass this test. I had an eye test on saturday...
  September 16th, 2018 17:52
• POETIC CONSTRUCTION (Michael Edwards) The scaffold of your mind erected around the nuance of a blueprint brings...
  September 16th, 2018 17:48
• It\'s everyone and everything (Poetic Dan) Your life is what you make it. One thing your life is definitely not...
  September 15th, 2018 15:07
• Woof! Woof! A Fido Tale (Orchidee) Is it me or are we all thinking this isnt about a Dawg at all. Methinks...
  September 15th, 2018 15:02
• Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60) Lost in thoughtfully expressing your minds content. Eloquently.
  September 15th, 2018 14:58
• SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD (Michael Edwards) Women can be awful touchy about other peoples cooking. Now my mum was a...
  September 15th, 2018 14:55
• The Virgin (Nicki Jackson) Nicki, I totally support you in having the right to live your life in the...
  September 14th, 2018 02:31
• Time Giver. (Goldfinch60) I like your work, you know i do but i\'m going to have a go at you on this...
  September 14th, 2018 02:18
• Gracious Guidance (Orchidee) This Lord Geezer did a few good things in ancient times according to a...
  September 14th, 2018 02:06
• REINCARNATION (Michael Edwards) I swear the taller house has a Formica roof. An old friend passing in the...
  September 14th, 2018 01:59
• Just Let Me Cry. (Kevin browne) R.I.P. a fine man to have such fine a tribute written in tears. Life is so...
  September 13th, 2018 21:11
• With these hands (Poetic Dan) Life lived in its most wholesome must surely be life lived in harmony not...
  September 13th, 2018 21:03
• QUIET. (Fay Slimm.) I was so inspired by this that in writing a comment i actually wrote my...
  September 13th, 2018 20:37
• Natures Power - Senryu. (Goldfinch60) unusualy short piece from you. wonderful zesty music and virtuoso playing
  September 13th, 2018 20:29
• IRONY (Michael Edwards) I got caught out around this time last year when i\'d had my new car a few...
  September 13th, 2018 09:25
• Trees. (Mirrorphen) hmmm..It\'s what we do isn\'t it, we humans. Bosses of the world! Even the...
  September 12th, 2018 12:48
• There it is (Poetic Dan) I wonder at you being so harsh with yourself. You are a human thing, a...
  September 12th, 2018 11:14
• A stolen daughter (WildMoonChild) This is so sad and must break your heart to write. It breaks mine to read...
  September 12th, 2018 08:07
• Summer time... (Misskay) Lovely, there is so much we do outdoors in summer which makes it the most...
  September 12th, 2018 03:17
• Lust for a boy whom another feels love (Katrina Caudill) Lovely open and honest declaration of torment and temptation resisted....
  September 12th, 2018 03:13
• The Handbag (The Retired Bloke) Oh my word yes. Memories of attempting to find lost keys and a near broken...
  September 12th, 2018 03:10
• Doctor Who. (Goldfinch60) That\'s you that is! (a la Skinner and Baddeil). The time lord of MPS. The...
  September 12th, 2018 02:01
• Communing Contemplation (Orchidee) Churches have an effect upon the soul don\'t they. Quite apart from any...
  September 12th, 2018 01:58
• A FULL HEAD OF HAIR (Michael Edwards) And your point is??? (LOL i am shaven headed with a goatee beard - trying...
  September 12th, 2018 00:23
• Crayons (W c) Beautiful. Those magic pictures of childhood which is all too quickly...
  September 12th, 2018 00:20
• Our Love Shows. (Goldfinch60) Obviously a better class of serving wench round your way Mr G. Hereabouts...
  September 11th, 2018 03:50
• SHE SAW THE LIGHT (Michael Edwards) He struck a match to enlight her joy how she played with his shiney...
  September 11th, 2018 03:47
• BONDS. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully written observations of that creation of a lifetimes bond...
  September 10th, 2018 13:44
• The Idiot Walks. (Goldfinch60) I\'m so pleased you are not a naturist. Those people, I wonder if they\'re...
  September 10th, 2018 13:39
• SOME (MORE) 575s (Michael Edwards) You are so creative. I\'m a great fan of your driftwood street scenes. Do...
  September 10th, 2018 12:52
• Caution...I think? More from my soul (Poetic Dan) Wise words for the young to heed. But they are tied into human nature and...
  September 9th, 2018 09:36
• Harrowed World. (Goldfinch60) It most certainly does ease the troubled mind. However i was once given a...
  September 9th, 2018 07:33
• THE VIEWS OF NOBLER MEN (Michael Edwards) \"When i worra lad there wont none o this inta web stuff tha knows\"....
  September 9th, 2018 01:30
• It\'s Good To Be Back On The Road Again. (Kevin browne) Enjoyed this Kevin. A great mind trip.
  September 8th, 2018 16:03
• A-g-nother G-nu. (Goldfinch60) Brings out the wilderbeeste in me. But i\'m sure u gnu it would
  September 8th, 2018 13:24
• THEY DANCE (Michael Edwards) Aaah the dance of my muse cavorting through the ether.
  September 8th, 2018 13:22
• CULLED. (Fay Slimm.) How can we be made in gods image if we send our young to fight the...
  September 7th, 2018 03:55
• Scars (W c) The scars within which none see. Cleverly concealed yet weeping regret and...
  September 7th, 2018 02:51
• Lightness Abounds. (Goldfinch60) Long may you emit those rays of lightness creatively illuminating our...
  September 7th, 2018 02:43
• PRAGMATIC REALISM (Michael Edwards) And then you get Corbyn yoy yoy yoy yoy yoy yoy my life awlready.
  September 7th, 2018 02:40
• The birth of music in me (Poetic Dan) A mans tale of growing. A reflection of what was, from where you are now....
  September 6th, 2018 13:50
• Is Christmas Early? (Goldfinch60) Having been a bit of a recluse for ten or more years i\'m looking forward...
  September 6th, 2018 13:39
• THE MONTHS (Michael Edwards) Eeeh bah gum lad, memories of when i wor a lad in t\'countryside. Norrabit...
  September 6th, 2018 13:35
• Getting old (Poetic Dan) Every day Dan, you are becoming more aware and growing. Be proud of what...
  September 5th, 2018 16:21
• SIGNS. (Fay Slimm.) Hmmm, i\'m envious of the love you describe... and they say envy is a
  September 5th, 2018 07:38
• Infinite Art. (Goldfinch60) I can picture you sat staring at scrambled egg with a dash of...
  September 5th, 2018 07:35
• FINE WINE (Michael Edwards) I must be everso sophisticated because there are actually wines i...
  September 5th, 2018 07:32
• Morecombe. (Goldfinch60) The sketch with Shirley Bassey\'s shoe was one of my favourites. Great...
  September 3rd, 2018 12:45
• THE BIRD POEM (Michael Edwards) Big smiles here, really enjoyed this. Also i\'m really appreciating you...
  September 3rd, 2018 12:41
• When asked to trust in your belief (Poetic Dan) In harmony with your intent here. Alas fear holds back so many.
  September 2nd, 2018 14:26
• Into the Light (Goldfinch60) When your time comes may your wishes be exceeded.
  September 2nd, 2018 14:20
• DIGITAL ART (Michael Edwards) I write my poetry upon a laptop using a word processor... definately...
  September 2nd, 2018 14:17
• Days of Future Passed. (Goldfinch60) Great to listen back to those prog rock days. King Crimson were probably...
  September 1st, 2018 10:29
• ME, A SNOB? (Michael Edwards) You wont find me inMcDonalds when there\'s a perfectly good meal to be had...
  September 1st, 2018 10:27
• What an Amazing Hour. (Goldfinch60) I have to keep a hospital appointment this morning and i become a people...
  August 31st, 2018 01:46
• What an Amazing Hour. (Goldfinch60) I have to keep a hospital appointment this morning and i become a people...
  August 31st, 2018 01:41
• LIMERICK No 53 (Michael Edwards) Whilst trying so hard not to show it Our chivalrous wordsmith the...
  August 31st, 2018 01:05
• Apollo Eleven. (Goldfinch60) And youve still got the scorch marks on ya patio from where they took of...
  August 30th, 2018 15:11
• THIS WORLD, THIS LIBERAL PANTHEON (Michael Edwards) Will common sense prevail? Are the roots of a political movement a...
  August 30th, 2018 15:09
• Lateness Prevailed. (Goldfinch60) Disgraceful! Utterly shameful behaviour! I trust you were suitably...
  August 29th, 2018 02:57
• Abstract. For Michael Edwards. (Goldfinch60) The still lifes ME produces are the artworks i find most appealing....
  August 28th, 2018 07:11
• PLASTIC WASTE (Michael Edwards) Of great concern is the miniscule plastic particles in the food chain....
  August 28th, 2018 07:02
• Machined Lives. (Goldfinch60) I dont believe you Goldfinch LOL. Somehow i don\'t see you as a fellah...
  August 27th, 2018 07:54
• Absorbed and realised (Poetic Dan) Inside us all, each and every one, there is great strength and endurance....
  August 27th, 2018 07:49
• Miserable Man. (Goldfinch60) Great observational piece. Begs the question - where are these people...
  August 26th, 2018 11:15
• Running Late. (Goldfinch60) Tomorrow is another day. Allow yourself a few extra hours snooze now and...
  August 24th, 2018 05:16
• She Will Listen (Abu Aeesh) Abu. Those are very important words to every one of us. Your partner will...
  August 24th, 2018 05:07
• Opportunity. (Goldfinch60) Sound advice indeed. Seeing/creating the door is major, stepping thru it...
  August 23rd, 2018 16:04
• EARLY BIRD 5 & 6 (Michael Edwards) The early bird gets the worm. Gardner clamps down on localised...
  August 23rd, 2018 15:29
• Campfire (An Abstract View of Life) I really enjoyed your clever analogy with flames/fire and your passion in...
  August 22nd, 2018 03:29
• Time to Diet (The Retired Bloke) Good fun. I wish you every success with your weight loss/fighting the...
  August 22nd, 2018 03:01
• Words,, (Goldfinch60) \"It\'s only words, and words are all i have\" quoted from that BeeGees...
  August 22nd, 2018 01:57
• She Will Listen (Abu Aeesh) And the words are which?
  August 22nd, 2018 01:23
• For Finches (W c) Cute, but these nice birdies wont evolve into anything but snacks if those...
  August 22nd, 2018 00:20