Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- ECLIPSE (Michael Edwards)
I know you wrote this for the crater good of mankind in mind but such a...
October 30th, 2018 05:07 - CONCORDANCE. (Fay Slimm.)
Love is a lesson which continues to teach us. So long as we have an open...
October 29th, 2018 16:37 - River to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Less frequent your river walks may be but both you and the river know it...
October 29th, 2018 03:21 - THE FUNERAL (Michael Edwards)
I hope they\'re not going to burn his remains,... just imagine the...
October 29th, 2018 03:15 - Big up Yourself (Poetic Dan)
Reads like u have it sussed sir! Respect.
October 28th, 2018 19:25 - Duvet Cover. (Goldfinch60)
Two large bulldog clips to keep those first two corners in the right place...
October 28th, 2018 19:23 - NOW THEN (Michael Edwards)
These days of future past have led me to believe that last weeks job...
October 28th, 2018 19:21 - Usual Day. (Goldfinch60)
OK so Goldfinch is the weatherman. You\'re very brave indeed. So its your...
October 27th, 2018 09:26 - TIME (Michael Edwards)
At last, praise comes home! My great great great grandpa invented time, or...
October 27th, 2018 09:21 - Living from my soul (Poetic Dan)
Lovely mate! Big smiles here. Wicked picture.
October 25th, 2018 12:47 - Back into My World (Goldfinch60)
Such a sad way for a good spirited man to find himself questioning...
October 25th, 2018 12:43 - Hassled By Humans (Orchidee)
Christ? Is Christ god? If so what was the suffering?
October 25th, 2018 12:34 - INACTIVE, EXERCISE. (Michael Edwards)
Hmmmm interesting concept. Training to be a poet.
October 25th, 2018 12:33 - Gone (Used)
Sad. Difficult times. Don\'t waste your beautiful life waiting. When you...
October 24th, 2018 10:31 - NEW NOTIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah and so to bed to rest your active mind. For your past works reveal the...
October 24th, 2018 06:53 - Old mixing with new (Poetic Dan)
I am reading that a weight is lifting off your shoulders.
Once again i...
October 24th, 2018 06:49 - Wondrous Art. (Goldfinch60)
Some pass by,
aware of the building,
some love the frames,
the...
October 24th, 2018 06:43 - BIG FEET (Michael Edwards)
Quack quack, wide elevens here, quack quack! Recently found twelves more...
October 24th, 2018 06:38 - Want or Are. (Goldfinch60)
The older we get, the more we come to know ourselves, accept our...
October 23rd, 2018 15:50 - FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE (Michael Edwards)
Beautifully crafted poetry ME. So often we see a lengthy piece of writing...
October 23rd, 2018 15:44 - How Strange! (Goldfinch60)
You did it again, who else has this knack of pulling out something from...
October 23rd, 2018 11:45 - CRAZY COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
For being clever enough to sleep in the cowshed,
He got a pat on the...
October 23rd, 2018 11:44 - Ghosts With Old Lovers. (Kevin browne)
\'Flowers are sweeter the closer you are to the grave\' and oh how we are...
October 21st, 2018 17:51 - Mind at the door (Poetic Dan)
Really good to read such positive words from you sir. How brave you were...
October 21st, 2018 16:13 - A RECOLLECTION (Michael Edwards)
He he, excellent. What picture my mind creates. Similar to the little girl...
October 21st, 2018 16:06 - Rap Man, Rap. (Goldfinch60)
Reminds me of when my friend bought a brass plate copy of the lords prayer...
October 21st, 2018 16:02 - Freedom Flight (Orchidee)
\"Came to our help and aid\" er...where exactly did that happen?
Flows...
October 20th, 2018 18:39 - I feel the chains breaking (Poetic Dan)
Often my mind slips back to this piece which i recommend...
October 20th, 2018 10:19 - Music is Calm. (Goldfinch60)
This draws me into a relaxing sleep with...
October 20th, 2018 10:13 - CRAZY COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
I had this bird in hand,
but i didn\'t want to in the bush.
October 20th, 2018 10:06 - Stuff. (Goldfinch60)
Tell me about it! If only my \'stuff\' were inspirational i would write...
October 17th, 2018 02:04 - INTO AUTUMN (Michael Edwards)
Gave me the vision of dawn at this time of year. A shudder of chill yet...
October 17th, 2018 02:01 - Coffee Stitch. (Goldfinch60)
I bet you are selective about the poems you hand over. Some people inspire...
October 15th, 2018 11:58 - Coffee Stitch. (Goldfinch60)
I bet you are selective about the poems you hand over. Some people inspire...
October 15th, 2018 05:41 - Coffee Stitch. (Goldfinch60)
I bet you are selective about the poems you hand over. Some people inspire...
October 15th, 2018 05:22 - NATURAL WORLD (Michael Edwards)
Bee A says to Bee B, \'I Love you Bee B\'. Bee B replies \'Buzz...
October 15th, 2018 05:16 - Summer Love (Kevin Michael Bloor)
You lucky lucky man. Your note and verse say so much.
October 14th, 2018 07:22 - Impermanence (viii) (ImpGratAdapt)
No changes necessary. Short and sweet, \'less is more\'.
Powerful and...
October 14th, 2018 07:10 - Hastings Remembered. (Goldfinch60)
Did England as we know it actually exist in 1066? Cornwall refused to be...
October 14th, 2018 07:07 - LET\'S (Michael Edwards)
The clock has turned another cog
So come here doll, and giz a snog.
October 14th, 2018 06:58 - The words I will never get to say (Birddie Jane)
Sometimes it\'s make or break time. It\'s a great risk, but has to be...
October 13th, 2018 15:48 - BUTTERFLY (Melissa Daly)
A broken heart takes a long time to mend. Inner beauty can be so damaged...
October 13th, 2018 08:38 - A Poem To You (Gabriella)
Ouch at the contrasting past tense in line four! Is this looking back at a...
October 13th, 2018 08:26 - A certain way of thinking (Alex)
Ha ha, saving your own work as a favourite, classic!
October 13th, 2018 08:20 - A Return to Romance (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Love is love however we experience it. Whether it returns or not, it was...
October 13th, 2018 07:57 - “To Every Human Being Whom Ever Lived Or Will Live Even If For Only A Few Seconds” (Gary Edward Geraci)
Love in the mind which strives for purity. No sin or scandal here.
October 13th, 2018 07:54 - Have You Ever (Songbird)
There will be an answer, but only after we pass. Meantime enjoy the dance....
October 13th, 2018 07:51 - Stand out! (Poetic Dan)
Would you trade inner turmoil for peace on earth?
Harmony, the...
October 13th, 2018 07:46 - Sermon (Ssilvia)
We all die alone.
And then find the answers to the questions no one can...
October 12th, 2018 10:48 - A Gathering Generation (ForeverJesus7)
Learn the message of forgiveness. All will be gathered.
October 12th, 2018 10:43 - Dying to be seen (Sylviasearcher)
Ah, re-cycling at its zenith. Nothing goes to waste.
October 12th, 2018 09:25 - Untitled (ImpGratAdapt)
All true. But how boring simply to wait.... u may be disappointed. And...
October 12th, 2018 09:24 - Crazy Cardinal (Christina8)
Really entertaining read again. May i suggest that you place a small bird...
October 12th, 2018 09:22 - What being human is to me (Poetic Dan)
Harmony and forgiving. Two tenets of love meditate upon.
October 12th, 2018 09:18 - Shepherd Security (Orchidee)
LOL yep sheep and anglicans, a good comparison.
October 12th, 2018 09:07 - She Looks to the Sea - Haiku and Senryu (Goldfinch60)
Is a 747 something to write or fly the atlantic in? Gone are the days of...
October 12th, 2018 09:06 - SOME QUATRAINS (Michael Edwards)
Well here we go, i have just read the first piece and im laughing aloud......
October 12th, 2018 09:01 - Good Friend (W c)
It\'s good to put \'pen to paper\' for a lost loved one be they friend,...
October 12th, 2018 08:57 - The Enchanted Forest (Songbird)
Love the romance of this. I should want to dress-up as an elf and live...
October 11th, 2018 15:14 - GONE FOREVER ( ONE OF MY BIGGEST FEARS) (Shayl)
And so begins a new beginning. Your life moves on from here enriched by...
October 11th, 2018 15:12 - coming out (Queer-with-a-pen)
Long may your heart and mind be free to be what you are. For all the...
October 11th, 2018 15:08 - Hugs All Around (DesertWords)
And theres a kid in us all. Sadly though some deny that inner child so are...
October 11th, 2018 15:04 - Under Her Rainbow\'s Light. (Kevin browne)
Reading like a dreamscape of love and loves loss. Spaces and places...
October 11th, 2018 15:02 - CHESIL. (Fay Slimm.)
I know this place, seen in its majesty from high on Portland. They say the...
October 11th, 2018 14:55 - It\'s okay (Alma Rose)
It\'s ok not to be ok is often a concept the we cannot accept in ourselves...
October 11th, 2018 14:44 - Tree Ducks (W c)
I loved reading this entertaining piece. I\'ve not heard of this before.
October 11th, 2018 05:42 - Seeing The Saviour (Orchidee)
Those last two lines are a killer. Shame this omnipotent one cant stop...
October 11th, 2018 05:30 - WORDS UNSAID (Michael Edwards)
Blimey, story of my life there!
October 11th, 2018 05:26 - Listen or Hear? (Goldfinch60)
Somehow this reminds me of the native americans in those old westerns we...
October 11th, 2018 05:25 - This isn\'t just fun it\'s who I am (Poetic Dan)
Dan. This is a statement from you isn\'t it. To me it is saying \" i have...
October 11th, 2018 05:23 - I am free (Poetic Dan)
Dan, i am so in tune to your words today. The you you describe is where i...
October 9th, 2018 13:43 - Grand wisdom of love (Poetic Dan)
Often age is accompanied by a serene-ness which is so admirable. Oh that...
October 7th, 2018 08:44 - Infinite Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
Time, the great enigma.
I like this, you\'ve encapsulated an everyday...
October 7th, 2018 08:39 - SHORELINE (Michael Edwards)
Greenery along the coastline tends to be coarse and a conflict to the...
October 7th, 2018 08:34 - I Had a Shower Today. (Goldfinch60)
Congratulations on surviving so many challenges. Can\'t say you\'ve made...
October 6th, 2018 07:12 - LAMPOONING (Michael Edwards)
Though your words have amused me
let me please clearly state
you won\'t...
October 6th, 2018 06:47 - BITTER. (Fay Slimm.)
Release feels better when the mind knows the situation was not right for...
October 5th, 2018 02:59 - Evangelistic Expressions (Orchidee)
Gosh you must be a fickle sinner asking for all this help and guidance....
October 5th, 2018 02:54 - 5am trigger 7am Beach walk (Poetic Dan)
Odd yet pleasing how interruptions to our daily pattern can lead to self...
October 5th, 2018 02:48 - Coffee Art. (Goldfinch60)
You are possibly a wealthy man Goldfinch, for the price of a coffee in so...
October 5th, 2018 02:44 - EDELECTS BY THREE (Michael Edwards)
There was a young man from Bengal
who had a hexagonal ball
its volume...
October 5th, 2018 02:39 - TO JEANNE (Michael Edwards)
Does the meaning of love matter so much when your very existence is within...
October 4th, 2018 02:39 - Forgiveness Freedom (Orchidee)
These stories from the bible made such sense when we were kids. Taught us...
October 4th, 2018 02:36 - Moonlife. (Goldfinch60)
Aha, echoes of rebirth. Do you ever wonder about those who have passed and...
October 4th, 2018 02:34 - Scale (Quemis)
Outstanding! I must find and read more of your work.
Took my mind to...
October 4th, 2018 02:13 - Jester from Leicester. Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
A sizzling dish from Broadway
Fancied her chances with swordplay
But a...
October 3rd, 2018 11:52 - Loving you feels like... (Edthepoet)
Epic Ed. I\'d say this was a different style and approach for you. It\'s...
October 3rd, 2018 11:43 - WHY NOT ?. (Fay Slimm.)
An invigorating breath of fresh air. and why not?
Refreshing fun
September 28th, 2018 06:22 - To Nirvana. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful that some sounds or voices can do this to us.
September 28th, 2018 02:23 - LIMERICK No 56 (Michael Edwards)
The dirty old bishop of Birmingham,
Buggered his flock whilst confirming...
September 27th, 2018 01:33 - Sexual Assault (The Gifted One)
Dont be mislead by a sly slippery tongued compliments from potential...
September 27th, 2018 00:17 - Love Fell In A Bottle. (Kevin browne)
An old record well played. Lots of us have the old country in our blood...
September 26th, 2018 21:30 - Life\'s Ocean. (Goldfinch60)
There\'s a part of you desires shipwreck i\'ll bet.
Nice mind romancing...
September 26th, 2018 16:06 - A CINQUAIN COLLECTION (Michael Edwards)
Formula belong in mathematics not in poetry in my book. \'You shall dream...
September 26th, 2018 16:04 - The Myth of Love (MissileOfUncertainty)
Love the way you describe your solid positive view of yourself whist...
September 24th, 2018 18:44 - Teardrops (Christina8)
Been there, done that, t-shirt rotted away. But your words bring it all...
September 24th, 2018 18:39 - YOU ARE. (Fay Slimm.)
Soothing and reassuring. A definate favourite.
September 24th, 2018 09:23 - Centrality. (Goldfinch60)
Things could get messy if you serve up spaghetti hoops!
September 24th, 2018 09:01 - A Better Day. (Goldfinch60)
Life pulls and tugs at us in all different directions every day. Your...
September 23rd, 2018 04:44 - The Day Begins. (Goldfinch60)
Wet and windy i expect you will awaken to on Thursday.
Who cares about...
September 19th, 2018 18:22
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