Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Impermanence (viii) (ImpGratAdapt) No changes necessary. Short and sweet, \'less is more\'. Powerful and...
  October 14th, 2018 07:10
• Hastings Remembered. (Goldfinch60) Did England as we know it actually exist in 1066? Cornwall refused to be...
  October 14th, 2018 07:07
• LET\'S (Michael Edwards) The clock has turned another cog So come here doll, and giz a snog.
  October 14th, 2018 06:58
• The words I will never get to say (Birddie Jane) Sometimes it\'s make or break time. It\'s a great risk, but has to be...
  October 13th, 2018 15:48
• BUTTERFLY (Melissa Daly) A broken heart takes a long time to mend. Inner beauty can be so damaged...
  October 13th, 2018 08:38
• A Poem To You (Gabriella) Ouch at the contrasting past tense in line four! Is this looking back at a...
  October 13th, 2018 08:26
• A certain way of thinking (Alex) Ha ha, saving your own work as a favourite, classic!
  October 13th, 2018 08:20
• A Return to Romance (Ron parrish aka wordman) Love is love however we experience it. Whether it returns or not, it was...
  October 13th, 2018 07:57
• “To Every Human Being Whom Ever Lived Or Will Live Even If For Only A Few Seconds” (Gary Edward Geraci) Love in the mind which strives for purity. No sin or scandal here.
  October 13th, 2018 07:54
• Have You Ever (Songbird) There will be an answer, but only after we pass. Meantime enjoy the dance....
  October 13th, 2018 07:51
• Stand out! (Poetic Dan) Would you trade inner turmoil for peace on earth? Harmony, the...
  October 13th, 2018 07:46
• Sermon (Ssilvia) We all die alone. And then find the answers to the questions no one can...
  October 12th, 2018 10:48
• A Gathering Generation (ForeverJesus7) Learn the message of forgiveness. All will be gathered.
  October 12th, 2018 10:43
• Dying to be seen (Sylviasearcher) Ah, re-cycling at its zenith. Nothing goes to waste.
  October 12th, 2018 09:25
• Untitled (ImpGratAdapt) All true. But how boring simply to wait.... u may be disappointed. And...
  October 12th, 2018 09:24
• Crazy Cardinal (Christina8) Really entertaining read again. May i suggest that you place a small bird...
  October 12th, 2018 09:22
• What being human is to me (Poetic Dan) Harmony and forgiving. Two tenets of love meditate upon.
  October 12th, 2018 09:18
• Shepherd Security (Orchidee) LOL yep sheep and anglicans, a good comparison.
  October 12th, 2018 09:07
• She Looks to the Sea - Haiku and Senryu (Goldfinch60) Is a 747 something to write or fly the atlantic in? Gone are the days of...
  October 12th, 2018 09:06
• SOME QUATRAINS (Michael Edwards) Well here we go, i have just read the first piece and im laughing aloud......
  October 12th, 2018 09:01
• Good Friend (W c) It\'s good to put \'pen to paper\' for a lost loved one be they friend,...
  October 12th, 2018 08:57
• The Enchanted Forest (Songbird) Love the romance of this. I should want to dress-up as an elf and live...
  October 11th, 2018 15:14
• GONE FOREVER ( ONE OF MY BIGGEST FEARS) (Shayl) And so begins a new beginning. Your life moves on from here enriched by...
  October 11th, 2018 15:12
• coming out (Queer-with-a-pen) Long may your heart and mind be free to be what you are. For all the...
  October 11th, 2018 15:08
• Hugs All Around (DesertWords) And theres a kid in us all. Sadly though some deny that inner child so are...
  October 11th, 2018 15:04
• Under Her Rainbow\'s Light. (Kevin browne) Reading like a dreamscape of love and loves loss. Spaces and places...
  October 11th, 2018 15:02
• CHESIL. (Fay Slimm.) I know this place, seen in its majesty from high on Portland. They say the...
  October 11th, 2018 14:55
• It\'s okay (Alma Rose) It\'s ok not to be ok is often a concept the we cannot accept in ourselves...
  October 11th, 2018 14:44
• Tree Ducks (W c) I loved reading this entertaining piece. I\'ve not heard of this before.
  October 11th, 2018 05:42
• Seeing The Saviour (Orchidee) Those last two lines are a killer. Shame this omnipotent one cant stop...
  October 11th, 2018 05:30
• WORDS UNSAID (Michael Edwards) Blimey, story of my life there!
  October 11th, 2018 05:26
• Listen or Hear? (Goldfinch60) Somehow this reminds me of the native americans in those old westerns we...
  October 11th, 2018 05:25
• This isn\'t just fun it\'s who I am (Poetic Dan) Dan. This is a statement from you isn\'t it. To me it is saying \" i have...
  October 11th, 2018 05:23
• I am free (Poetic Dan) Dan, i am so in tune to your words today. The you you describe is where i...
  October 9th, 2018 13:43
• Grand wisdom of love (Poetic Dan) Often age is accompanied by a serene-ness which is so admirable. Oh that...
  October 7th, 2018 08:44
• Infinite Clouds. (Goldfinch60) Time, the great enigma. I like this, you\'ve encapsulated an everyday...
  October 7th, 2018 08:39
• SHORELINE (Michael Edwards) Greenery along the coastline tends to be coarse and a conflict to the...
  October 7th, 2018 08:34
• I Had a Shower Today. (Goldfinch60) Congratulations on surviving so many challenges. Can\'t say you\'ve made...
  October 6th, 2018 07:12
• LAMPOONING (Michael Edwards) Though your words have amused me let me please clearly state you won\'t...
  October 6th, 2018 06:47
• BITTER. (Fay Slimm.) Release feels better when the mind knows the situation was not right for...
  October 5th, 2018 02:59
• Evangelistic Expressions (Orchidee) Gosh you must be a fickle sinner asking for all this help and guidance....
  October 5th, 2018 02:54
• 5am trigger 7am Beach walk (Poetic Dan) Odd yet pleasing how interruptions to our daily pattern can lead to self...
  October 5th, 2018 02:48
• Coffee Art. (Goldfinch60) You are possibly a wealthy man Goldfinch, for the price of a coffee in so...
  October 5th, 2018 02:44
• EDELECTS BY THREE (Michael Edwards) There was a young man from Bengal who had a hexagonal ball its volume...
  October 5th, 2018 02:39
• TO JEANNE (Michael Edwards) Does the meaning of love matter so much when your very existence is within...
  October 4th, 2018 02:39
• Forgiveness Freedom (Orchidee) These stories from the bible made such sense when we were kids. Taught us...
  October 4th, 2018 02:36
• Moonlife. (Goldfinch60) Aha, echoes of rebirth. Do you ever wonder about those who have passed and...
  October 4th, 2018 02:34
• Scale (Quemis) Outstanding! I must find and read more of your work. Took my mind to...
  October 4th, 2018 02:13
• Jester from Leicester. Limerick. (Goldfinch60) A sizzling dish from Broadway Fancied her chances with swordplay But a...
  October 3rd, 2018 11:52
• Loving you feels like... (Edthepoet) Epic Ed. I\'d say this was a different style and approach for you. It\'s...
  October 3rd, 2018 11:43
• WHY NOT ?. (Fay Slimm.) An invigorating breath of fresh air. and why not? Refreshing fun
  September 28th, 2018 06:22
• To Nirvana. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful that some sounds or voices can do this to us.
  September 28th, 2018 02:23
• LIMERICK No 56 (Michael Edwards) The dirty old bishop of Birmingham, Buggered his flock whilst confirming...
  September 27th, 2018 01:33
• Sexual Assault (The Gifted One) Dont be mislead by a sly slippery tongued compliments from potential...
  September 27th, 2018 00:17
• Love Fell In A Bottle. (Kevin browne) An old record well played. Lots of us have the old country in our blood...
  September 26th, 2018 21:30
• Life\'s Ocean. (Goldfinch60) There\'s a part of you desires shipwreck i\'ll bet. Nice mind romancing...
  September 26th, 2018 16:06
• A CINQUAIN COLLECTION (Michael Edwards) Formula belong in mathematics not in poetry in my book. \'You shall dream...
  September 26th, 2018 16:04
• The Myth of Love (MissileOfUncertainty) Love the way you describe your solid positive view of yourself whist...
  September 24th, 2018 18:44
• Teardrops (Christina8) Been there, done that, t-shirt rotted away. But your words bring it all...
  September 24th, 2018 18:39
• YOU ARE. (Fay Slimm.) Soothing and reassuring. A definate favourite.
  September 24th, 2018 09:23
• Centrality. (Goldfinch60) Things could get messy if you serve up spaghetti hoops!
  September 24th, 2018 09:01
• A Better Day. (Goldfinch60) Life pulls and tugs at us in all different directions every day. Your...
  September 23rd, 2018 04:44
• The Day Begins. (Goldfinch60) Wet and windy i expect you will awaken to on Thursday. Who cares about...
  September 19th, 2018 18:22
• OUCH (Michael Edwards) I had a green one yesterday chopped it off with grandads cutter damn...
  September 19th, 2018 18:18
• The Final Over. (Goldfinch60) Any other final line would simply not be cricket sir! You made this game,...
  September 18th, 2018 10:11
• HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN (Michael Edwards) Ha ha nice one. Playing with words is fun. Playing with the written word...
  September 18th, 2018 10:04
• UNSATED. (Fay Slimm.) Poignant - \"Best is closure so hunger can then turn elsewhere for...
  September 17th, 2018 05:32
• Lost Lover. (Goldfinch60) Somehow the beauty of this wonderful life is maimed by the loss of what...
  September 17th, 2018 05:20
• OCEANS TEARS (Michael Edwards) I came out of a fog to read this. Its filled with sombre mystery. Much...
  September 17th, 2018 05:09
• Eyetest. (Goldfinch60) Well i certainly hope you do pass this test. I had an eye test on saturday...
  September 16th, 2018 17:52
• POETIC CONSTRUCTION (Michael Edwards) The scaffold of your mind erected around the nuance of a blueprint brings...
  September 16th, 2018 17:48
• It\'s everyone and everything (Poetic Dan) Your life is what you make it. One thing your life is definitely not...
  September 15th, 2018 15:07
• Woof! Woof! A Fido Tale (Orchidee) Is it me or are we all thinking this isnt about a Dawg at all. Methinks...
  September 15th, 2018 15:02
• Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60) Lost in thoughtfully expressing your minds content. Eloquently.
  September 15th, 2018 14:58
• SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD (Michael Edwards) Women can be awful touchy about other peoples cooking. Now my mum was a...
  September 15th, 2018 14:55
• The Virgin (Nicki Jackson) Nicki, I totally support you in having the right to live your life in the...
  September 14th, 2018 02:31
• Time Giver. (Goldfinch60) I like your work, you know i do but i\'m going to have a go at you on this...
  September 14th, 2018 02:18
• Gracious Guidance (Orchidee) This Lord Geezer did a few good things in ancient times according to a...
  September 14th, 2018 02:06
• REINCARNATION (Michael Edwards) I swear the taller house has a Formica roof. An old friend passing in the...
  September 14th, 2018 01:59
• Just Let Me Cry. (Kevin browne) R.I.P. a fine man to have such fine a tribute written in tears. Life is so...
  September 13th, 2018 21:11
• With these hands (Poetic Dan) Life lived in its most wholesome must surely be life lived in harmony not...
  September 13th, 2018 21:03
• QUIET. (Fay Slimm.) I was so inspired by this that in writing a comment i actually wrote my...
  September 13th, 2018 20:37
• Natures Power - Senryu. (Goldfinch60) unusualy short piece from you. wonderful zesty music and virtuoso playing
  September 13th, 2018 20:29
• IRONY (Michael Edwards) I got caught out around this time last year when i\'d had my new car a few...
  September 13th, 2018 09:25
• Trees. (Mirrorphen) hmmm..It\'s what we do isn\'t it, we humans. Bosses of the world! Even the...
  September 12th, 2018 12:48
• There it is (Poetic Dan) I wonder at you being so harsh with yourself. You are a human thing, a...
  September 12th, 2018 11:14
• A stolen daughter (WildMoonChild) This is so sad and must break your heart to write. It breaks mine to read...
  September 12th, 2018 08:07
• Summer time... (Misskay) Lovely, there is so much we do outdoors in summer which makes it the most...
  September 12th, 2018 03:17
• Lust for a boy whom another feels love (Katrina Caudill) Lovely open and honest declaration of torment and temptation resisted....
  September 12th, 2018 03:13
• The Handbag (The Retired Bloke) Oh my word yes. Memories of attempting to find lost keys and a near broken...
  September 12th, 2018 03:10
• Doctor Who. (Goldfinch60) That\'s you that is! (a la Skinner and Baddeil). The time lord of MPS. The...
  September 12th, 2018 02:01
• Communing Contemplation (Orchidee) Churches have an effect upon the soul don\'t they. Quite apart from any...
  September 12th, 2018 01:58
• A FULL HEAD OF HAIR (Michael Edwards) And your point is??? (LOL i am shaven headed with a goatee beard - trying...
  September 12th, 2018 00:23
• Crayons (W c) Beautiful. Those magic pictures of childhood which is all too quickly...
  September 12th, 2018 00:20
• Our Love Shows. (Goldfinch60) Obviously a better class of serving wench round your way Mr G. Hereabouts...
  September 11th, 2018 03:50
• SHE SAW THE LIGHT (Michael Edwards) He struck a match to enlight her joy how she played with his shiney...
  September 11th, 2018 03:47
• BONDS. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully written observations of that creation of a lifetimes bond...
  September 10th, 2018 13:44
• The Idiot Walks. (Goldfinch60) I\'m so pleased you are not a naturist. Those people, I wonder if they\'re...
  September 10th, 2018 13:39
• SOME (MORE) 575s (Michael Edwards) You are so creative. I\'m a great fan of your driftwood street scenes. Do...
  September 10th, 2018 12:52
• Caution...I think? More from my soul (Poetic Dan) Wise words for the young to heed. But they are tied into human nature and...
  September 9th, 2018 09:36