Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- OUCH (Michael Edwards)
I had a green one yesterday
chopped it off with grandads cutter
damn...
September 19th, 2018 18:18 - The Final Over. (Goldfinch60)
Any other final line would simply not be cricket sir! You made this game,...
September 18th, 2018 10:11 - HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha nice one. Playing with words is fun. Playing with the written word...
September 18th, 2018 10:04 - UNSATED. (Fay Slimm.)
Poignant - \"Best is closure so hunger can then turn elsewhere for...
September 17th, 2018 05:32 - Lost Lover. (Goldfinch60)
Somehow the beauty of this wonderful life is maimed by the loss of what...
September 17th, 2018 05:20 - OCEANS TEARS (Michael Edwards)
I came out of a fog to read this. Its filled with sombre mystery. Much...
September 17th, 2018 05:09 - Eyetest. (Goldfinch60)
Well i certainly hope you do pass this test. I had an eye test on saturday...
September 16th, 2018 17:52 - POETIC CONSTRUCTION (Michael Edwards)
The scaffold of your mind erected around the nuance of a blueprint brings...
September 16th, 2018 17:48 - It\'s everyone and everything (Poetic Dan)
Your life is what you make it. One thing your life is definitely not...
September 15th, 2018 15:07 - Woof! Woof! A Fido Tale (Orchidee)
Is it me or are we all thinking this isnt about a Dawg at all.
Methinks...
September 15th, 2018 15:02 - Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60)
Lost in thoughtfully expressing your minds content. Eloquently.
September 15th, 2018 14:58 - SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD (Michael Edwards)
Women can be awful touchy about other peoples cooking. Now my mum was a...
September 15th, 2018 14:55 - The Virgin (Nicki Jackson)
Nicki, I totally support you in having the right to live your life in the...
September 14th, 2018 02:31 - Time Giver. (Goldfinch60)
I like your work, you know i do but i\'m going to have a go at you on this...
September 14th, 2018 02:18 - Gracious Guidance (Orchidee)
This Lord Geezer did a few good things in ancient times according to a...
September 14th, 2018 02:06 - REINCARNATION (Michael Edwards)
I swear the taller house has a Formica roof.
An old friend passing in the...
September 14th, 2018 01:59 - Just Let Me Cry. (Kevin browne)
R.I.P. a fine man to have such fine a tribute written in tears. Life is so...
September 13th, 2018 21:11 - With these hands (Poetic Dan)
Life lived in its most wholesome must surely be life lived in harmony not...
September 13th, 2018 21:03 - QUIET. (Fay Slimm.)
I was so inspired by this that in writing a comment i actually wrote my...
September 13th, 2018 20:37 - Natures Power - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
unusualy short piece from you. wonderful zesty music and virtuoso playing
September 13th, 2018 20:29 - IRONY (Michael Edwards)
I got caught out around this time last year when i\'d had my new car a few...
September 13th, 2018 09:25 - Trees. (Mirrorphen)
hmmm..It\'s what we do isn\'t it, we humans. Bosses of the world! Even the...
September 12th, 2018 12:48 - There it is (Poetic Dan)
I wonder at you being so harsh with yourself. You are a human thing, a...
September 12th, 2018 11:14 - A stolen daughter (WildMoonChild)
This is so sad and must break your heart to write. It breaks mine to read...
September 12th, 2018 08:07 - Summer time... (Misskay)
Lovely, there is so much we do outdoors in summer which makes it the most...
September 12th, 2018 03:17 - Lust for a boy whom another feels love (Katrina Caudill)
Lovely open and honest declaration of torment and temptation resisted....
September 12th, 2018 03:13 - The Handbag (The Retired Bloke)
Oh my word yes. Memories of attempting to find lost keys and a near broken...
September 12th, 2018 03:10 - Doctor Who. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s you that is! (a la Skinner and Baddeil). The time lord of MPS. The...
September 12th, 2018 02:01 - Communing Contemplation (Orchidee)
Churches have an effect upon the soul don\'t they. Quite apart from any...
September 12th, 2018 01:58 - A FULL HEAD OF HAIR (Michael Edwards)
And your point is??? (LOL i am shaven headed with a goatee beard - trying...
September 12th, 2018 00:23 - Crayons (W c)
Beautiful. Those magic pictures of childhood which is all too quickly...
September 12th, 2018 00:20 - Our Love Shows. (Goldfinch60)
Obviously a better class of serving wench round your way Mr G. Hereabouts...
September 11th, 2018 03:50 - SHE SAW THE LIGHT (Michael Edwards)
He struck a match
to enlight her joy
how she played
with his shiney...
September 11th, 2018 03:47 - BONDS. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully written observations of that creation of a lifetimes bond...
September 10th, 2018 13:44 - The Idiot Walks. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m so pleased you are not a naturist. Those people, I wonder if they\'re...
September 10th, 2018 13:39 - SOME (MORE) 575s (Michael Edwards)
You are so creative. I\'m a great fan of your driftwood street scenes. Do...
September 10th, 2018 12:52 - Caution...I think? More from my soul (Poetic Dan)
Wise words for the young to heed. But they are tied into human nature and...
September 9th, 2018 09:36 - Harrowed World. (Goldfinch60)
It most certainly does ease the troubled mind. However i was once given a...
September 9th, 2018 07:33 - THE VIEWS OF NOBLER MEN (Michael Edwards)
\"When i worra lad there wont none o this inta web stuff tha knows\"....
September 9th, 2018 01:30 - It\'s Good To Be Back On The Road Again. (Kevin browne)
Enjoyed this Kevin. A great mind trip.
September 8th, 2018 16:03 - A-g-nother G-nu. (Goldfinch60)
Brings out the wilderbeeste in me. But i\'m sure u gnu it would
September 8th, 2018 13:24 - THEY DANCE (Michael Edwards)
Aaah the dance of my muse cavorting through the ether.
September 8th, 2018 13:22 - CULLED. (Fay Slimm.)
How can we be made in gods image if we send our young to fight the...
September 7th, 2018 03:55 - Scars (W c)
The scars within which none see. Cleverly concealed yet weeping regret and...
September 7th, 2018 02:51 - Lightness Abounds. (Goldfinch60)
Long may you emit those rays of lightness creatively illuminating our...
September 7th, 2018 02:43 - PRAGMATIC REALISM (Michael Edwards)
And then you get Corbyn yoy yoy yoy yoy yoy yoy my life awlready.
September 7th, 2018 02:40 - The birth of music in me (Poetic Dan)
A mans tale of growing. A reflection of what was, from where you are now....
September 6th, 2018 13:50 - Is Christmas Early? (Goldfinch60)
Having been a bit of a recluse for ten or more years i\'m looking forward...
September 6th, 2018 13:39 - THE MONTHS (Michael Edwards)
Eeeh bah gum lad, memories of when i wor a lad in t\'countryside. Norrabit...
September 6th, 2018 13:35 - Getting old (Poetic Dan)
Every day Dan, you are becoming more aware and growing. Be proud of what...
September 5th, 2018 16:21 - SIGNS. (Fay Slimm.)
Hmmm, i\'m envious of the love you describe... and they say envy is a
September 5th, 2018 07:38 - Infinite Art. (Goldfinch60)
I can picture you sat staring at scrambled egg with a dash of...
September 5th, 2018 07:35 - FINE WINE (Michael Edwards)
I must be everso sophisticated because there are actually wines i...
September 5th, 2018 07:32 - Morecombe. (Goldfinch60)
The sketch with Shirley Bassey\'s shoe was one of my favourites. Great...
September 3rd, 2018 12:45 - THE BIRD POEM (Michael Edwards)
Big smiles here, really enjoyed this. Also i\'m really appreciating you...
September 3rd, 2018 12:41 - When asked to trust in your belief (Poetic Dan)
In harmony with your intent here. Alas fear holds back so many.
September 2nd, 2018 14:26 - Into the Light (Goldfinch60)
When your time comes may your wishes be exceeded.
September 2nd, 2018 14:20 - DIGITAL ART (Michael Edwards)
I write my poetry upon a laptop using a word processor... definately...
September 2nd, 2018 14:17 - Days of Future Passed. (Goldfinch60)
Great to listen back to those prog rock days. King Crimson were probably...
September 1st, 2018 10:29 - ME, A SNOB? (Michael Edwards)
You wont find me inMcDonalds when there\'s a perfectly good meal to be had...
September 1st, 2018 10:27 - What an Amazing Hour. (Goldfinch60)
I have to keep a hospital appointment this morning and i become a people...
August 31st, 2018 01:46 - What an Amazing Hour. (Goldfinch60)
I have to keep a hospital appointment this morning and i become a people...
August 31st, 2018 01:41 - LIMERICK No 53 (Michael Edwards)
Whilst trying so hard not to show it
Our chivalrous wordsmith the...
August 31st, 2018 01:05 - Apollo Eleven. (Goldfinch60)
And youve still got the scorch marks on ya patio from where they took of...
August 30th, 2018 15:11 - THIS WORLD, THIS LIBERAL PANTHEON (Michael Edwards)
Will common sense prevail? Are the roots of a political movement a...
August 30th, 2018 15:09 - Lateness Prevailed. (Goldfinch60)
Disgraceful! Utterly shameful behaviour! I trust you were suitably...
August 29th, 2018 02:57 - Abstract. For Michael Edwards. (Goldfinch60)
The still lifes ME produces are the artworks i find most appealing....
August 28th, 2018 07:11 - PLASTIC WASTE (Michael Edwards)
Of great concern is the miniscule plastic particles in the food chain....
August 28th, 2018 07:02 - Machined Lives. (Goldfinch60)
I dont believe you Goldfinch LOL. Somehow i don\'t see you as a fellah...
August 27th, 2018 07:54 - Absorbed and realised (Poetic Dan)
Inside us all, each and every one, there is great strength and endurance....
August 27th, 2018 07:49 - Miserable Man. (Goldfinch60)
Great observational piece. Begs the question - where are these people...
August 26th, 2018 11:15 - Running Late. (Goldfinch60)
Tomorrow is another day. Allow yourself a few extra hours snooze now and...
August 24th, 2018 05:16 - She Will Listen (Abu Aeesh)
Abu. Those are very important words to every one of us. Your partner will...
August 24th, 2018 05:07 - Opportunity. (Goldfinch60)
Sound advice indeed. Seeing/creating the door is major, stepping thru it...
August 23rd, 2018 16:04 - EARLY BIRD 5 & 6 (Michael Edwards)
The early bird gets the worm.
Gardner clamps down on localised...
August 23rd, 2018 15:29 - Campfire (An Abstract View of Life)
I really enjoyed your clever analogy with flames/fire and your passion in...
August 22nd, 2018 03:29 - Time to Diet (The Retired Bloke)
Good fun. I wish you every success with your weight loss/fighting the...
August 22nd, 2018 03:01 - Words,, (Goldfinch60)
\"It\'s only words, and words are all i have\" quoted from that BeeGees...
August 22nd, 2018 01:57 - She Will Listen (Abu Aeesh)
And the words are which?
August 22nd, 2018 01:23 - For Finches (W c)
Cute, but these nice birdies wont evolve into anything but snacks if those...
August 22nd, 2018 00:20 - CLEAR CONSCIENCE (Michael Edwards)
Several meanings come to mind. My chosen interpretation is of the...
August 22nd, 2018 00:18 - Glories And Graces (Orchidee)
Bit patronising to say that you know how animals think. Who is this Lord...
August 21st, 2018 12:52 - CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards)
Read all the comments here (lest i say the wrong thing) and by and large...
August 21st, 2018 12:46 - I Will (HomelessCrippleTroll)
This reads like somebody making rules for themselves over affairs of the...
August 19th, 2018 17:40 - home from home (Misskay)
I related to this so well because closeness to the ocean renews me so. At...
August 19th, 2018 15:33 - My Dark Friend (Clareuk)
Loved this. Know your demons, know yourself..... be whole, be strong....
August 19th, 2018 15:27 - A Love Poem (Sylviasearcher)
Good fun analogy. Begs the question why somebody should choose to behave...
August 19th, 2018 04:35 - My broken heart (Nicki Jackson)
Well time will tell if the depth of your shared together was mutual. We...
August 19th, 2018 02:36 - O\'Reilly\'s Genius. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, not many miles from your door in the faithful city of Worcester...
August 19th, 2018 01:32 - THE EARLY BIRD (1 & 2) (Michael Edwards)
Look i appreciate your support, not everyone holds my worms eye view as a...
August 19th, 2018 01:09 - A darkened world (Misskay)
I\'ve worked backwards through your works published on MPS today and i\'m...
August 19th, 2018 01:03 - A darkened world (Misskay)
I\'ve worked backwards through your works published on MPS today and i\'m...
August 19th, 2018 01:03 - You have a way with me (Misskay)
Magnificent, lovely, delicate... oh dammit its brilliant!
Should be made...
August 19th, 2018 00:57 - Princes and a king (Misskay)
Quite lovely \"Eyes don’t lie and neither do kisses I’ve nearly...
August 19th, 2018 00:50 - I NEED YOU (Misskay)
He he he great declaration of love.
August 19th, 2018 00:46 - Redirected thoughts to you (Misskay)
I\'m so glad i checked you out having seen \'Satan\'s touch\' today. ...
August 19th, 2018 00:45 - Satan’s touch (Misskay)
Wow! Your intensity of feeling comes across so readily through your...
August 19th, 2018 00:41 - Aretha Louise Franklin (1942-2018) (Brooklyn6timesplus)
A lovely fitting tribute to Aretha. I too published one on here entitled...
August 19th, 2018 00:34 - What do you see (Poetic Dan)
Tuning into and accepting the way of the planet is your way. All life has...
August 18th, 2018 10:41 - Humble Heart (Orchidee)
You do an awful lot of praying.
August 18th, 2018 10:36
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