Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Harrowed World. (Goldfinch60) It most certainly does ease the troubled mind. However i was once given a...
  September 9th, 2018 07:33
• THE VIEWS OF NOBLER MEN (Michael Edwards) \"When i worra lad there wont none o this inta web stuff tha knows\"....
  September 9th, 2018 01:30
• It\'s Good To Be Back On The Road Again. (Kevin browne) Enjoyed this Kevin. A great mind trip.
  September 8th, 2018 16:03
• A-g-nother G-nu. (Goldfinch60) Brings out the wilderbeeste in me. But i\'m sure u gnu it would
  September 8th, 2018 13:24
• THEY DANCE (Michael Edwards) Aaah the dance of my muse cavorting through the ether.
  September 8th, 2018 13:22
• CULLED. (Fay Slimm.) How can we be made in gods image if we send our young to fight the...
  September 7th, 2018 03:55
• Scars (W c) The scars within which none see. Cleverly concealed yet weeping regret and...
  September 7th, 2018 02:51
• Lightness Abounds. (Goldfinch60) Long may you emit those rays of lightness creatively illuminating our...
  September 7th, 2018 02:43
• PRAGMATIC REALISM (Michael Edwards) And then you get Corbyn yoy yoy yoy yoy yoy yoy my life awlready.
  September 7th, 2018 02:40
• The birth of music in me (Poetic Dan) A mans tale of growing. A reflection of what was, from where you are now....
  September 6th, 2018 13:50
• Is Christmas Early? (Goldfinch60) Having been a bit of a recluse for ten or more years i\'m looking forward...
  September 6th, 2018 13:39
• THE MONTHS (Michael Edwards) Eeeh bah gum lad, memories of when i wor a lad in t\'countryside. Norrabit...
  September 6th, 2018 13:35
• Getting old (Poetic Dan) Every day Dan, you are becoming more aware and growing. Be proud of what...
  September 5th, 2018 16:21
• SIGNS. (Fay Slimm.) Hmmm, i\'m envious of the love you describe... and they say envy is a
  September 5th, 2018 07:38
• Infinite Art. (Goldfinch60) I can picture you sat staring at scrambled egg with a dash of...
  September 5th, 2018 07:35
• FINE WINE (Michael Edwards) I must be everso sophisticated because there are actually wines i...
  September 5th, 2018 07:32
• Morecombe. (Goldfinch60) The sketch with Shirley Bassey\'s shoe was one of my favourites. Great...
  September 3rd, 2018 12:45
• THE BIRD POEM (Michael Edwards) Big smiles here, really enjoyed this. Also i\'m really appreciating you...
  September 3rd, 2018 12:41
• When asked to trust in your belief (Poetic Dan) In harmony with your intent here. Alas fear holds back so many.
  September 2nd, 2018 14:26
• Into the Light (Goldfinch60) When your time comes may your wishes be exceeded.
  September 2nd, 2018 14:20
• DIGITAL ART (Michael Edwards) I write my poetry upon a laptop using a word processor... definately...
  September 2nd, 2018 14:17
• Days of Future Passed. (Goldfinch60) Great to listen back to those prog rock days. King Crimson were probably...
  September 1st, 2018 10:29
• ME, A SNOB? (Michael Edwards) You wont find me inMcDonalds when there\'s a perfectly good meal to be had...
  September 1st, 2018 10:27
• What an Amazing Hour. (Goldfinch60) I have to keep a hospital appointment this morning and i become a people...
  August 31st, 2018 01:46
• What an Amazing Hour. (Goldfinch60) I have to keep a hospital appointment this morning and i become a people...
  August 31st, 2018 01:41
• LIMERICK No 53 (Michael Edwards) Whilst trying so hard not to show it Our chivalrous wordsmith the...
  August 31st, 2018 01:05
• Apollo Eleven. (Goldfinch60) And youve still got the scorch marks on ya patio from where they took of...
  August 30th, 2018 15:11
• THIS WORLD, THIS LIBERAL PANTHEON (Michael Edwards) Will common sense prevail? Are the roots of a political movement a...
  August 30th, 2018 15:09
• Lateness Prevailed. (Goldfinch60) Disgraceful! Utterly shameful behaviour! I trust you were suitably...
  August 29th, 2018 02:57
• Abstract. For Michael Edwards. (Goldfinch60) The still lifes ME produces are the artworks i find most appealing....
  August 28th, 2018 07:11
• PLASTIC WASTE (Michael Edwards) Of great concern is the miniscule plastic particles in the food chain....
  August 28th, 2018 07:02
• Machined Lives. (Goldfinch60) I dont believe you Goldfinch LOL. Somehow i don\'t see you as a fellah...
  August 27th, 2018 07:54
• Absorbed and realised (Poetic Dan) Inside us all, each and every one, there is great strength and endurance....
  August 27th, 2018 07:49
• Miserable Man. (Goldfinch60) Great observational piece. Begs the question - where are these people...
  August 26th, 2018 11:15
• Running Late. (Goldfinch60) Tomorrow is another day. Allow yourself a few extra hours snooze now and...
  August 24th, 2018 05:16
• She Will Listen (Abu Aeesh) Abu. Those are very important words to every one of us. Your partner will...
  August 24th, 2018 05:07
• Opportunity. (Goldfinch60) Sound advice indeed. Seeing/creating the door is major, stepping thru it...
  August 23rd, 2018 16:04
• EARLY BIRD 5 & 6 (Michael Edwards) The early bird gets the worm. Gardner clamps down on localised...
  August 23rd, 2018 15:29
• Campfire (An Abstract View of Life) I really enjoyed your clever analogy with flames/fire and your passion in...
  August 22nd, 2018 03:29
• Time to Diet (The Retired Bloke) Good fun. I wish you every success with your weight loss/fighting the...
  August 22nd, 2018 03:01
• Words,, (Goldfinch60) \"It\'s only words, and words are all i have\" quoted from that BeeGees...
  August 22nd, 2018 01:57
• She Will Listen (Abu Aeesh) And the words are which?
  August 22nd, 2018 01:23
• For Finches (W c) Cute, but these nice birdies wont evolve into anything but snacks if those...
  August 22nd, 2018 00:20
• CLEAR CONSCIENCE (Michael Edwards) Several meanings come to mind. My chosen interpretation is of the...
  August 22nd, 2018 00:18
• Glories And Graces (Orchidee) Bit patronising to say that you know how animals think. Who is this Lord...
  August 21st, 2018 12:52
• CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards) Read all the comments here (lest i say the wrong thing) and by and large...
  August 21st, 2018 12:46
• I Will (HomelessCrippleTroll) This reads like somebody making rules for themselves over affairs of the...
  August 19th, 2018 17:40
• home from home (Misskay) I related to this so well because closeness to the ocean renews me so. At...
  August 19th, 2018 15:33
• My Dark Friend (Clareuk) Loved this. Know your demons, know yourself..... be whole, be strong....
  August 19th, 2018 15:27
• A Love Poem (Sylviasearcher) Good fun analogy. Begs the question why somebody should choose to behave...
  August 19th, 2018 04:35
• My broken heart (Nicki Jackson) Well time will tell if the depth of your shared together was mutual. We...
  August 19th, 2018 02:36
• O\'Reilly\'s Genius. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, not many miles from your door in the faithful city of Worcester...
  August 19th, 2018 01:32
• THE EARLY BIRD (1 & 2) (Michael Edwards) Look i appreciate your support, not everyone holds my worms eye view as a...
  August 19th, 2018 01:09
• A darkened world (Misskay) I\'ve worked backwards through your works published on MPS today and i\'m...
  August 19th, 2018 01:03
• A darkened world (Misskay) I\'ve worked backwards through your works published on MPS today and i\'m...
  August 19th, 2018 01:03
• You have a way with me (Misskay) Magnificent, lovely, delicate... oh dammit its brilliant! Should be made...
  August 19th, 2018 00:57
• Princes and a king (Misskay) Quite lovely \"Eyes don’t lie and neither do kisses I’ve nearly...
  August 19th, 2018 00:50
• I NEED YOU (Misskay) He he he great declaration of love.
  August 19th, 2018 00:46
• Redirected thoughts to you (Misskay) I\'m so glad i checked you out having seen \'Satan\'s touch\' today. ...
  August 19th, 2018 00:45
• Satan’s touch (Misskay) Wow! Your intensity of feeling comes across so readily through your...
  August 19th, 2018 00:41
• Aretha Louise Franklin (1942-2018) (Brooklyn6timesplus) A lovely fitting tribute to Aretha. I too published one on here entitled...
  August 19th, 2018 00:34
• What do you see (Poetic Dan) Tuning into and accepting the way of the planet is your way. All life has...
  August 18th, 2018 10:41
• Humble Heart (Orchidee) You do an awful lot of praying.
  August 18th, 2018 10:36
• What Day is it Today? (Goldfinch60) Blessed is the bringer of joy.
  August 18th, 2018 10:35
• A cry of more light (Poetic Dan) No meaningful words of comfort from me today brother man, for none will...
  August 17th, 2018 04:30
• Angels Assisting (Orchidee) Of course a modern day angel might not be quite what you were expecting to...
  August 17th, 2018 04:19
• Apocalypse Now? (Goldfinch60) Now THERE\'S an inspiration for a poet.... a successful toasting accident....
  August 17th, 2018 04:17
• HIGH FIVES (Michael Edwards) The \'finger\' seemed to catch on quite quickly and somehow has replaced...
  August 17th, 2018 00:34
• shut the burka boris (Hilllow) HEY! that\'s not a letter bomb in your hand is it?
  August 17th, 2018 00:29
• Come Join The Risen (Edthepoet) There\'s so much in here. I think you\'ve got to have been on both sides...
  August 15th, 2018 15:06
• Mindless Bipolar (Reyas) Hmmm i had the opportunity to live with an officially bi-polar partner for...
  August 15th, 2018 14:43
• Summer Breeze (Christina8) Summer and it\'s heat, a time to watch people playing laughing loving...
  August 15th, 2018 14:36
• Education! Education! Education! (Sylviasearcher) Sometimes roles are amazingly reversed. Here you have led us to read of...
  August 15th, 2018 05:38
• FOR SALE. (Fay Slimm.) Very moving. Indeed what scenes have been witnessed by the rooms we...
  August 15th, 2018 05:27
• Awakening Days. (Goldfinch60) It is good to welcome each new day with its challenges and rewards, life...
  August 15th, 2018 05:21
• Maybe...... (Orchidee) \'False pretences\' have brought out your fallible humanity onto our...
  August 15th, 2018 04:35
• How should I feel (Jooles) I love the repeated question in your piece. For right there and then its a...
  August 15th, 2018 04:28
• EVERY NOW AND THEN (Michael Edwards) love that humour
  August 15th, 2018 04:22
• AWAKENING. (Fay Slimm.) A lesson i learned well in 1976 on the south west coast of your lovely...
  August 14th, 2018 12:02
• God Only Knows. (Goldfinch60) Great personification of todays multi ethnic society
  August 14th, 2018 11:58
• EXPOSED (Michael Edwards) So you\'d met my mother in law? You using your artistry of fine...
  August 14th, 2018 11:35
• My affirmation (Poetic Dan) That world is the here and now. Your message is wholesome and...
  August 13th, 2018 15:51
• APTITUDE. (Fay Slimm.) A lot of life and living shines from your short piece today.
  August 13th, 2018 15:47
• The Lost Words. (Goldfinch60) Lovely,so aptly describing a poets dilemma. I think these \'lost words\'...
  August 13th, 2018 15:44
• POETICAL OUTTAKES (Michael Edwards) Each one a gem for my mind to play with! Looking forward to your poem.
  August 13th, 2018 15:37
• COMPLIANCE. (Fay Slimm.) Is this lady now trapped by circumstance to continue? Love for those...
  August 8th, 2018 10:44
• More rambling of life (Poetic Dan) You make it plain to see that special children, whom society seems to be...
  August 8th, 2018 10:32
• Noticing The Needy (Orchidee) And long may that light play upon you. Tough indeed when a relative is...
  August 8th, 2018 02:21
• Hummingbird\'s Lullaby (Sylviasearcher) You know this could well be saying goodbye to the spirit of a loved one...
  August 8th, 2018 02:16
• Cropped Tops (Goldfinch60) LOL \'twoderful\'. I just left a video clip for Orchidee to demonstrate...
  August 8th, 2018 02:13
• THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1) (Michael Edwards) That\'ll be a smelly place! I do so hope that you don\'t find a certain...
  August 8th, 2018 02:02
• Don’t Falter (Reyas) Aha the external shell we all build around our feelings and inner...
  August 7th, 2018 11:45
• Sunday Afternoon. (Goldfinch60) Your piece describes a state i have oft experienced and long to be there...
  August 7th, 2018 05:47
• THE FLY (Michael Edwards) Excellent cartoon and poem. ^^8^^ don\'t buzz round the house when the...
  August 7th, 2018 05:26
• Sanddune Solitude (Sylviasearcher) Read all your comments before making my own here. I really enjoyed this....
  August 7th, 2018 05:00
• What is Love? (Goldfinch60) Love suffers long and is kind; love does not envy; love does not parade...
  August 6th, 2018 02:28
• Untravelled traveler (Poetic Dan) Whatever faith we have, so long as it does not demand anything from...
  August 6th, 2018 02:19
• The slower I go the deeper I flow (Poetic Dan) First impressions are something which just happens, difficult to combat. I...
  August 6th, 2018 01:25
• The Gas Station Rose (Clark) This is great. End of a love but not the end of the world. A refreshing...
  August 6th, 2018 01:14
• SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED (Michael Edwards) Eyyup lad, i\'m off t\'woods to snap a twig underfoot. Appen as i\'m...
  August 6th, 2018 01:08