Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• Open Arms Welcome Poetry Muse (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Challenge you to say all that in five or six lines which would be a really...
  May 19th, 2019 03:44
• A Call In Calamity (Orchidee) Do you get answers to prayer or is it all a game people play for...
  May 19th, 2019 03:41
• MANTRAS FOR HAPPINESS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Harmony with all around you generates inner and outer peace. Live and...
  May 19th, 2019 03:38
• Before 40 I\'m building a starship (Poetic Dan) Yes, be proud of what you are. The things you have overcome are your CV of...
  May 19th, 2019 03:33
• Wine for Water. (Goldfinch60) Disguising ones alcoholic addiction with food huh? A cheap trick... and on...
  May 19th, 2019 03:22
• Wine for Water. (Goldfinch60) Disguising ones alcoholic addiction with food huh? A cheap trick... and on...
  May 19th, 2019 02:50
• Wine for Water. (Goldfinch60) Disguising ones alcoholic addiction with food huh? A cheap trick... and on...
  May 19th, 2019 02:46
• IN LIFE SPARE US (Michael Edwards) i stopped reading the Mirror. There are so many trashier...
  May 19th, 2019 02:39
• TODAY (Demi.T) Good one.... i agree with you oh so much too. Well written and...
  May 18th, 2019 16:31
• When Words Can Not Express Themselves Clearly (Brooklyn6timesplus) Oh so very very true. Wise words.
  May 18th, 2019 13:49
• Untitled - XII (Suresh) Yep, M.E. has said it for me too. A little beauty.
  May 18th, 2019 13:46
• Soul Petals (Mirela Athanas) As we are all individuals moulded by experience. Yes that makes us the...
  May 18th, 2019 10:49
• Dark and light, never two shall meet (Poetic Dan) Do those theta and delta waves of our brain in sleep hold the gateway to...
  May 18th, 2019 09:11
• Beautifully Broken (Neville) LOL good fun.
  May 18th, 2019 09:00
• BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD (Michael Edwards) Here lies a rotting poet whos quill duth write no more His rhythm and...
  May 18th, 2019 08:58
• Back in the Day. (Goldfinch60) Nostalgia and romance... bringing back great times. Certain music takes...
  May 18th, 2019 08:50
• Down (Kasia Kevan) Stop enjoying the down times then. Do something else.
  May 17th, 2019 17:14
• The painter of the war (Andrew Charles Forrest) Humanity treated as cannon fodder and shot by their own for being...
  May 17th, 2019 17:13
• The Initiation (Neville) One hopes the recipient is duly appreciative.
  May 17th, 2019 14:33
• My Mind is blank (FineB) FineB let it ride. You dont have to write. Sometimes we poets are not...
  May 17th, 2019 12:08
• Borrowed Love (Caleb.A) Your piece today brought to mind a fellow i know in his late years, sound...
  May 17th, 2019 04:26
• STONES KNOW. (Fay Slimm.) Long ago my family was from StBuryan in your fair Cornwall. All around...
  May 17th, 2019 04:19
• A rhyme is a rhyme (Poetic Dan) That is one lovely video. The lovely long haired German Shepherd is...
  May 17th, 2019 04:10
• That Clock. (Goldfinch60) My father had a similar timepiece but it began to play up. It would run...
  May 17th, 2019 04:03
• TEA? (Michael Edwards) Strong Earl Grey in a one pint mug with five sweeteners and milk sat...
  May 17th, 2019 03:58
• Someone to Watch Over You (Lorna) Like watching your Baby learning to walk. Every encouragement is there...
  May 16th, 2019 07:17
• Selfhood (Poetic Dan) Oh so very true. You have mined deep into yourself to find those words and...
  May 16th, 2019 07:10
• UNANSWERABLE. (Fay Slimm.) Oh it\'s clear enough Fay, for it is enigmatic. My personal feelings are...
  May 16th, 2019 07:02
• Smoking in Time. (Goldfinch60) Yes me too with the golden virginia rollies and a wee filter tip. Its...
  May 16th, 2019 06:48
• OBSCURE SENRYUS (6) (Michael Edwards) Bring on the pie and eels
  May 16th, 2019 06:43
• Flowers Musing on Rain (Lorna) You look to the sky and all you see is grey Whats Trump doing to the...
  May 15th, 2019 12:51
• YESTERDAY. (Fay Slimm.) Your first line made me laugh out loud - a smelly yesterday indeed! Well...
  May 15th, 2019 04:19
• Watering Can (Poetic Dan) I thought i should write u some prose All about the new garden hose...
  May 15th, 2019 03:29
• Dame Janet. (Goldfinch60) A fine tribute to this lady Goldfinch. Unknown to me for I\'ve not been a...
  May 15th, 2019 01:25
• Dame Janet. (Goldfinch60) A fine tribute to this lady Goldfinch. Unknown to me for I\'ve not been a...
  May 15th, 2019 01:25
• DESERT ISLAND RISKS ! A RHYMING SONNET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) I\'d require one more thingy An inflatable dingy And a lovely lady to...
  May 15th, 2019 00:37
• OBSCURE SENRYUS (5) (Michael Edwards) Oh my what a clanger The missing coat hanger and the dressing gown over...
  May 15th, 2019 00:24
• Sliding Scale of Mercy (Suresh) Without imposed authority there will be murder, rape and robbery with no...
  May 14th, 2019 11:42
• Back to fun, my ships are done (Poetic Dan) When ya chips are done its time to smile at the missus and tuck...
  May 14th, 2019 08:01
• SELFHOOD. (Fay Slimm.) YEE-Hah !! And ska-reeem it from the roof tops.... ...... just...
  May 14th, 2019 07:55
• Red Cushions (Lorna) Happiness is after all a frame of mind. So is contentment.
  May 14th, 2019 07:51
• Winning Belief. (Goldfinch60) Never mind bullshit phrases from the man made bible some people are...
  May 14th, 2019 01:54
• FOLLY. (Fay Slimm.) Sad tale of promise lost and promises broken. Love lost or... she is...
  May 14th, 2019 01:21
• Second letter to my younger self (Poetic Dan) I guess life is a series of phases we enter slowly and before we realise...
  May 14th, 2019 01:15
• OBSCURE SENRYUS (5) (Michael Edwards) raspberry sauce in banana ice cream sundae bloody sundae
  May 14th, 2019 01:10
• Chet Blow Your Horn. (Goldfinch60) Chet\'s mournful sound on trumpet is quite unique and compelling just as...
  May 13th, 2019 01:45
• Mix Ups #27 (Andrew Charles Forrest) People goto churches etc because it appears to be the right thing to do....
  May 13th, 2019 01:21
• Our World (AJ) Distressing. Is this to self or to another, or yet still oncoming...
  May 13th, 2019 01:20
• OBSCURE SENRYUS (4) (Michael Edwards) No worries, given enough sunshine those dropping will bleach white. What...
  May 13th, 2019 01:17
• Thinker (Suresh) Im sure that worldwide PEOPLE agree with protecting our planet. Some...
  May 13th, 2019 01:16
• Ugly (EpsilonLessThanZero) Ugly is only whats outside and only negative to humans. but what faith do...
  May 12th, 2019 15:00
• All The Love He Kept. (Kevin browne) Re-evaluation of where one fits into the scheme of things when, ageing, we...
  May 12th, 2019 14:20
• Worth (Poetic Dan) I\'ll quote to you words of Rudyard Kipling \"If you can meet with...
  May 12th, 2019 14:01
• Easy 19 (AJ) You told it like it ever was. Desire is so dangerous in the hands of the...
  May 12th, 2019 13:52
• We should meet more people not like us (Andrew Charles Forrest) I second that emotion, so long as they are equally receptive. Bring on...
  May 12th, 2019 13:44
• Untitled - XI (Suresh) Shame that cloaks and shrouds should be necessary. Maybe once removed, the...
  May 12th, 2019 13:41
• Raindrop. (Goldfinch60) Quote \"and i think to myself, what a wonderful world\". Showing us...
  May 12th, 2019 13:37
• OBSCURE SENRYUS (3) (Michael Edwards) A song composed to the tune of \'A few of my favourite...
  May 12th, 2019 13:31
• 11 years of absorbing, thank you to all (Poetic Dan) Many wise phrases here Dan. Like teachings, they are thought provoking and...
  May 11th, 2019 07:39
• 11 years of absorbing, thank you to all (Poetic Dan) Many wise phrases here Dan. Like teachings, they are thought provoking and...
  May 11th, 2019 04:18
• Riddle of the Dark Kind (Suresh) A single minded opinion from you both. Or maybe two ways of looking at...
  May 11th, 2019 03:50
• Untitled - X (Suresh) LOL I love that, especially after yesterday. Going to have to go into...
  May 10th, 2019 13:47
• The Evil Twin (Cynthia) Will the story continue in the new place..... ??? You have an amazing...
  May 10th, 2019 11:16
• RESEARCH IN THE RAINFOREST ~ A PANTOUM ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Did the forest need to be visited? Did the insects need to be recorded? If...
  May 10th, 2019 04:40
• Stay With My Heartache. (Kevin browne) Again a lot of self healing here and a truly wonderful line \"You landed...
  May 10th, 2019 04:33
• Can’t anymore (Nwriting) Heartfelt writing from you. Welcome to MyPoeticSide. On a positive note...
  May 10th, 2019 03:16
• We\'re all needed (Poetic Dan) Ooooppss, i\'m imagining a boozey Dan singing as he trudges home. In such...
  May 10th, 2019 03:08
• The Light Of Life (Orchidee) Cor blimey Orchidee youre really into this anglican way of phrasing. Youll...
  May 10th, 2019 02:28
• Wordiku One (Goldfinch60) Abdominal Overimbrication Obesity Yep, he has started something (I\'m...
  May 10th, 2019 02:13
• OBSCURE SENRYUS (2) (Michael Edwards) Flummuxed!
  May 10th, 2019 00:49
• Break With The Broken. (Kevin browne) A tapestry of loves embroidery here. Save it or sling it, reflect upon it...
  May 9th, 2019 21:12
• A Beautiful Place Called Earth (Daydreaming) From dubious beginnings you arrive at a worthy message. Living a...
  May 9th, 2019 17:45
• Contrariety (Suresh) Delving into the man made conceptions of good and evil will be...
  May 9th, 2019 17:43
• Not Ready.. (Cynthia) What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger. Peace and harmony.
  May 9th, 2019 17:39
• It\'s not a crime to rhyme (Poetic Dan) You\'ve really come to terms with the aid poetry to self help and healing...
  May 9th, 2019 16:13
• LOOKING. (Fay Slimm.) Beauty in accepting the simple as it is. We complicated beings so...
  May 9th, 2019 15:48
• God and Religion Again. (Goldfinch60) Need I say I agree with you - you know i do. And much respect to you for...
  May 9th, 2019 15:39
• OBSCURE SENRYUS (1) (Michael Edwards) Japanese form. Ah-so!
  May 9th, 2019 00:16
• Quiet Lion (WL Schuett) Wonderful tribute to your father. Exceptional writing.
  May 8th, 2019 23:39
• Fire-Crest (Neville) Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read...
  May 8th, 2019 05:43
• Fire-Crest (Neville) Beauty, love, lust and abuse cleverly compacted into six lines whilst read...
  May 8th, 2019 05:25
• Bum lie (Poetic Dan) Oh that life were simple, but that would merely present us a different set...
  May 8th, 2019 05:12
• Bum lie (Poetic Dan) Oh that life were simple, but that would merely present us a different set...
  May 8th, 2019 03:46
• The Fallen soldier (BronyVinyl) So noble are our thoughts of the fallen soldier. For they shall never grow...
  May 8th, 2019 03:34
• WINDING DOWN. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely romantic lines of rural life as was and continues. Yes dusk is a...
  May 8th, 2019 03:24
• Peaceful Buzzard. (Goldfinch60) Majestic are our large birds of prey. When i lived at Upper Wick there...
  May 8th, 2019 03:16
• Untitled - IX (Suresh) What prize awaits the moderate? Does it guarantee good health? No. Good...
  May 8th, 2019 03:10
• The Climb (G84) Life and lifes have taught me thus. It is not the high one achieves by...
  May 7th, 2019 17:21
• Misguided (Frederick Samson) A sad tale which seems all to familiar. Why does wisdom take so long to...
  May 7th, 2019 17:12
• The Witch and the Crow (Jenny Wren) What a story teller you are. There is a crow lurking within many a...
  May 7th, 2019 16:57
• TASTEFUL. (Fay Slimm.) At home? Don\'t you hear the beach calling. All those bodies beautiful...
  May 7th, 2019 16:49
• Ghosts & Shells (Neville) I knew a lady recently who\'s memories were erased within a fortnight just...
  May 7th, 2019 16:44
• Find your rhythm (Poetic Dan) Re-align disharmony with the rhythm of a fulfilling life. I used to dance...
  May 7th, 2019 16:38
• Past\'s Intro (Nafis Light) As we all are. I am definitely a has-been. Once i was a wannabe. Before...
  May 7th, 2019 16:35
• Treasure Hunting (Suresh) Coincidentally my latest is a look back in time. Just the way we write...
  May 7th, 2019 16:33
• Satisfaction in Life. (Goldfinch60) You have developed a pastime which requires a great deal of patience and...
  May 7th, 2019 16:27
• Strange Awakening. (Goldfinch60) As that old song goes \"Ev\'ry body dreams about a new world in the...
  May 2nd, 2019 02:17
• Strange Awakening. (Goldfinch60) As that old song goes \"Ev\'ry body dreams about a new world in the...
  May 2nd, 2019 01:21
• FROM COMMENTS (2) (Michael Edwards) As are we all when we think things thru. Lest we choose to be fallen...
  May 2nd, 2019 01:16
• Let it roll of the tongue (Poetic Dan) Fun stuff. Like balls of fluff, fluffing up the pillows for the wind and...
  May 1st, 2019 06:39