Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Through Ugly Rows And Telegraph. (Kevin browne)
I\'m thinking theres a woman in here who was false. Attractive but out to...
May 22nd, 2019 11:51 - Words left hanging (Poetic Dan)
If i wish the world to love my offspring am i guilty of deluding myself...
May 22nd, 2019 11:36 - We the Innocent (Neville)
A fitting tribute to the murdering nutter of the twentieth century and his...
May 22nd, 2019 11:12 - FLASHES. (Fay Slimm.)
Agape indeed. Firstly, thats is a really super picture.
You capture the...
May 22nd, 2019 11:07 - this body/my body (Queer-with-a-pen)
Great finale there. Your words made me think of your mind and its struggle...
May 22nd, 2019 01:57 - Untitled - XIV (Suresh)
Cor! you don\'t half write them..... I love this.
Brings to mind...
May 22nd, 2019 01:48 - Obscurity Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
Tallest mountains
snowbound footprints
Yeti
A Duskiku (of uncounted...
May 22nd, 2019 01:47 - WORDS (Michael Edwards)
Thought provoking words today. Also your paints are waiting for your...
May 22nd, 2019 01:42 - WE LOVE THE OLD THINGS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
ok thanks for replying ... i will know where to look in future
May 21st, 2019 19:59 - WE LOVE THE OLD THINGS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Whats this \"sorry i replied with a comment - please check\" check...
May 21st, 2019 17:31 - The Killer Of All Time. (Kevin browne)
You busy mind finds time stretched and echoing as time itself is taking...
May 21st, 2019 14:14 - The love plan (Aa Harvey)
Wow, tremendous love poem.
Been there, done that, T-shirts are all worn...
May 21st, 2019 14:06 - WE LOVE THE OLD THINGS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
My love of old things has now become self love. Yep, i\'m antique.
My...
May 21st, 2019 14:03 - The Gnome knows (Poetic Dan)
I used to have a gnome but he buggered off after some swine pinched his...
May 21st, 2019 07:29 - RE-WRITING RHYMES. (Fay Slimm.)
Ha ha ha love it. I have done similar things with this lovely poem several...
May 21st, 2019 07:26 - Wonderful Evening. (Goldfinch60)
Blissful moments when the things we have long enjoyed come together and we...
May 21st, 2019 07:22 - Six Degrees of Motion (Suresh)
Is this simulator as advanced as you are. Are robots as advanced as we...
May 21st, 2019 07:17 - Tserevo Koria (Neville)
Encouraged by daredevil M.E.\'s comment i found the 4x4 vid on you tube...
May 21st, 2019 06:55 - Diamonds and Dust (SerenWise)
heres an extract from something i wrote recently:-
for thats where every...
May 20th, 2019 14:46 - Ignorance\'s Dilemma (Suresh)
Elusive politicians cannot claim the lack of the right questions when they...
May 20th, 2019 14:39 - Ignorance\'s Dilemma (Suresh)
Elusive politicians cannot claim the lack of the right questions when they...
May 20th, 2019 12:10 - My Problem. (Wholeheart97)
Emotional stuff. Do you think this situation will get any better? I\'m...
May 20th, 2019 08:31 - Know Thy Worth (Hidden)
A lot of good stuff in there sir and nicely written.
A pleasure to read.
May 20th, 2019 08:25 - Don’t Cry (Demi.T)
Don\'t look too closely, no one else sees the you which you see.
So brave...
May 20th, 2019 05:37 - NATIONAL RULES ~ RULE ~ OK ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
In Luxembourg,
so i have heard
trains never run on Sundays
it\'s not...
May 20th, 2019 04:38 - Epilogue (Poetic Dan)
Everyday is followed by a rhyme. Monday is followed by Tuesday... they...
May 20th, 2019 04:33 - Chasing After Tomorrow (Gino)
Yes, we overlook those familiars in a rush of chasing dreams. But our...
May 20th, 2019 03:15 - Upon Her Ears (Neville)
Your way of imparting these words speaks of so much more finesse and...
May 20th, 2019 03:06 - WOMAN-FED. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful taken for granted days of yore. You give initially a really...
May 20th, 2019 02:59 - A Night at the Opera. (Goldfinch60)
Initially i joined the music scene as a singer and went on to front...
May 20th, 2019 02:51 - SHE WAITS (Michael Edwards)
I had in mind Goldilocks until i realised she had only three bears unlike...
May 20th, 2019 02:48 - Hal Blaine (SoulMeetsBody)
Welcome to MPS where you will find many of us have the music coursing thru...
May 19th, 2019 13:47 - Long distance bittersweet (Theskyisnotblue)
Love is a beautiful thing and it simply oozes out of your words today.
A...
May 19th, 2019 13:44 - Everyday I still remember (Demi.T)
This is a really moving and heartfelt tribute to a loved person.
It is a...
May 19th, 2019 10:12 - Signor (Neville)
Ahhh Cuba eh? Heavenly Havannah.
Thanks for the big smile.
May 19th, 2019 03:51 - Our Way to Move Forward (Nafis Light)
Good positive reading and delightful. You validate this/our way of life...
May 19th, 2019 03:49 - A Letter Unsent (Gemma)
Those letters we write but dare not send are the bleeding of our true...
May 19th, 2019 03:45 - Open Arms Welcome Poetry Muse (Rew4er2nail)
Challenge you to say all that in five or six lines which would be a really...
May 19th, 2019 03:44 - A Call In Calamity (Orchidee)
Do you get answers to prayer or is it all a game people play for...
May 19th, 2019 03:41 - MANTRAS FOR HAPPINESS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Harmony with all around you generates inner and outer peace.
Live and...
May 19th, 2019 03:38 - Before 40 I\'m building a starship (Poetic Dan)
Yes, be proud of what you are. The things you have overcome are your CV of...
May 19th, 2019 03:33 - Wine for Water. (Goldfinch60)
Disguising ones alcoholic addiction with food huh? A cheap trick... and on...
May 19th, 2019 03:22 - Wine for Water. (Goldfinch60)
Disguising ones alcoholic addiction with food huh? A cheap trick... and on...
May 19th, 2019 02:50 - Wine for Water. (Goldfinch60)
Disguising ones alcoholic addiction with food huh? A cheap trick... and on...
May 19th, 2019 02:46 - IN LIFE SPARE US (Michael Edwards)
i stopped reading the Mirror. There are so many trashier...
May 19th, 2019 02:39 - TODAY (Demi.T)
Good one.... i agree with you oh so much too.
Well written and...
May 18th, 2019 16:31 - When Words Can Not Express Themselves Clearly (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Oh so very very true. Wise words.
May 18th, 2019 13:49 - Untitled - XII (Suresh)
Yep, M.E. has said it for me too.
A little beauty.
May 18th, 2019 13:46 - Soul Petals (Mirela Athanas)
As we are all individuals moulded by experience.
Yes that makes us the...
May 18th, 2019 10:49 - Dark and light, never two shall meet (Poetic Dan)
Do those theta and delta waves of our brain in sleep hold the gateway to...
May 18th, 2019 09:11 - Beautifully Broken (Neville)
LOL good fun.
May 18th, 2019 09:00 - BY CRAFTSMEN LONG SINCE DEAD (Michael Edwards)
Here lies a rotting poet
whos quill duth write no more
His rhythm and...
May 18th, 2019 08:58 - Back in the Day. (Goldfinch60)
Nostalgia and romance... bringing back great times.
Certain music takes...
May 18th, 2019 08:50 - Down (Kasia Kevan)
Stop enjoying the down times then. Do something else.
May 17th, 2019 17:14 - The painter of the war (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Humanity treated as cannon fodder and shot by their own for being...
May 17th, 2019 17:13 - The Initiation (Neville)
One hopes the recipient is duly appreciative.
May 17th, 2019 14:33 - My Mind is blank (FineB)
FineB let it ride. You dont have to write. Sometimes we poets are not...
May 17th, 2019 12:08 - Borrowed Love (Caleb.A)
Your piece today brought to mind a fellow i know in his late years, sound...
May 17th, 2019 04:26 - STONES KNOW. (Fay Slimm.)
Long ago my family was from StBuryan in your fair Cornwall. All around...
May 17th, 2019 04:19 - A rhyme is a rhyme (Poetic Dan)
That is one lovely video. The lovely long haired German Shepherd is...
May 17th, 2019 04:10 - That Clock. (Goldfinch60)
My father had a similar timepiece but it began to play up. It would run...
May 17th, 2019 04:03 - TEA? (Michael Edwards)
Strong Earl Grey in a one pint mug with five sweeteners and milk sat...
May 17th, 2019 03:58 - Someone to Watch Over You (Lorna)
Like watching your Baby learning to walk. Every encouragement is there...
May 16th, 2019 07:17 - Selfhood (Poetic Dan)
Oh so very true. You have mined deep into yourself to find those words and...
May 16th, 2019 07:10 - UNANSWERABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh it\'s clear enough Fay, for it is enigmatic.
My personal feelings are...
May 16th, 2019 07:02 - Smoking in Time. (Goldfinch60)
Yes me too with the golden virginia rollies and a wee filter tip. Its...
May 16th, 2019 06:48 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (6) (Michael Edwards)
Bring on the pie and eels
May 16th, 2019 06:43 - Flowers Musing on Rain (Lorna)
You look to the sky and all you see is grey
Whats Trump doing to the...
May 15th, 2019 12:51 - YESTERDAY. (Fay Slimm.)
Your first line made me laugh out loud - a smelly yesterday indeed!
Well...
May 15th, 2019 04:19 - Watering Can (Poetic Dan)
I thought i should write u some prose
All about the new garden hose...
May 15th, 2019 03:29 - Dame Janet. (Goldfinch60)
A fine tribute to this lady Goldfinch. Unknown to me for I\'ve not been a...
May 15th, 2019 01:25 - Dame Janet. (Goldfinch60)
A fine tribute to this lady Goldfinch. Unknown to me for I\'ve not been a...
May 15th, 2019 01:25 - DESERT ISLAND RISKS ! A RHYMING SONNET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I\'d require one more thingy
An inflatable dingy
And a lovely lady
to...
May 15th, 2019 00:37 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (5) (Michael Edwards)
Oh my what a clanger
The missing coat hanger
and the dressing gown
over...
May 15th, 2019 00:24 - Sliding Scale of Mercy (Suresh)
Without imposed authority there will be murder, rape and robbery with no...
May 14th, 2019 11:42 - Back to fun, my ships are done (Poetic Dan)
When ya chips are done its time to smile at the missus and tuck...
May 14th, 2019 08:01 - SELFHOOD. (Fay Slimm.)
YEE-Hah !! And ska-reeem it from the roof tops....
...... just...
May 14th, 2019 07:55 - Red Cushions (Lorna)
Happiness is after all a frame of mind. So is contentment.
May 14th, 2019 07:51 - Winning Belief. (Goldfinch60)
Never mind bullshit phrases from the man made bible some people are...
May 14th, 2019 01:54 - FOLLY. (Fay Slimm.)
Sad tale of promise lost and promises broken. Love lost or... she is...
May 14th, 2019 01:21 - Second letter to my younger self (Poetic Dan)
I guess life is a series of phases we enter slowly and before we realise...
May 14th, 2019 01:15 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (5) (Michael Edwards)
raspberry sauce
in banana ice cream
sundae bloody sundae
May 14th, 2019 01:10 - Chet Blow Your Horn. (Goldfinch60)
Chet\'s mournful sound on trumpet is quite unique and compelling just as...
May 13th, 2019 01:45 - Mix Ups #27 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
People goto churches etc because it appears to be the right thing to do....
May 13th, 2019 01:21 - Our World (AJ)
Distressing. Is this to self or to another, or yet still oncoming...
May 13th, 2019 01:20 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (4) (Michael Edwards)
No worries, given enough sunshine those dropping will bleach white.
What...
May 13th, 2019 01:17 - Thinker (Suresh)
Im sure that worldwide PEOPLE agree with protecting our planet. Some...
May 13th, 2019 01:16 - Ugly (EpsilonLessThanZero)
Ugly is only whats outside and only negative to humans. but what faith do...
May 12th, 2019 15:00 - All The Love He Kept. (Kevin browne)
Re-evaluation of where one fits into the scheme of things when, ageing, we...
May 12th, 2019 14:20 - Worth (Poetic Dan)
I\'ll quote to you words of Rudyard Kipling
\"If you can meet with...
May 12th, 2019 14:01 - Easy 19 (AJ)
You told it like it ever was. Desire is so dangerous in the hands of the...
May 12th, 2019 13:52 - We should meet more people not like us (Andrew Charles Forrest)
I second that emotion, so long as they are equally receptive.
Bring on...
May 12th, 2019 13:44 - Untitled - XI (Suresh)
Shame that cloaks and shrouds should be necessary. Maybe once removed, the...
May 12th, 2019 13:41 - Raindrop. (Goldfinch60)
Quote \"and i think to myself, what a wonderful world\".
Showing us...
May 12th, 2019 13:37 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (3) (Michael Edwards)
A song composed to the tune of \'A few of my favourite...
May 12th, 2019 13:31 - 11 years of absorbing, thank you to all (Poetic Dan)
Many wise phrases here Dan. Like teachings, they are thought provoking and...
May 11th, 2019 07:39 - 11 years of absorbing, thank you to all (Poetic Dan)
Many wise phrases here Dan. Like teachings, they are thought provoking and...
May 11th, 2019 04:18 - Riddle of the Dark Kind (Suresh)
A single minded opinion from you both.
Or maybe two ways of looking at...
May 11th, 2019 03:50 - Untitled - X (Suresh)
LOL I love that, especially after yesterday.
Going to have to go into...
May 10th, 2019 13:47 - The Evil Twin (Cynthia)
Will the story continue in the new place..... ???
You have an amazing...
May 10th, 2019 11:16
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