Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Hair Dying. (Goldfinch60)
I bet she looked a million dollars so all your cleaning up was a humble...
November 9th, 2018 04:06 - A FEW BITS AND PIECES (Michael Edwards)
Yes, these wee gems of wisdom must be a devil to dream up. But i guess if...
November 9th, 2018 04:04 - SEVERED THREADS (Michael Edwards)
The poetry of a peaceful passing into whatever follows.
Oh that we all...
November 9th, 2018 03:55 - The George (Goldfinch60)
I guess all of us guys had a similar place. My first such place was the...
November 9th, 2018 03:49 - Time\'s Bouquet (Lorna)
Every now is a new one and reading your words today is a jolt to me...
November 9th, 2018 03:26 - VICTORIOUS. (Fay Slimm.)
That\'s love alright!
I wonder what one would make of your fine piece...
November 5th, 2018 11:16 - Blessings to a new member of the crew! (Poetic Dan)
May you and your new loved pack member bring much joy to one and all...
November 3rd, 2018 15:59 - Blessings to a new member of the crew! (Poetic Dan)
May you and your new loved pack member bring much joy to one and all...
November 3rd, 2018 14:47 - Bring Spring To the World (Lorna)
Lovely joyous piece from you. Evokes the electric feelings a special...
November 3rd, 2018 13:31 - NO MORE (Michael Edwards)
Sad how a bad judgement can harden a person.
So much in life overlooked...
November 3rd, 2018 07:37 - Treats From Kay. (Goldfinch60)
Look at that, someone who treasures your company gives you a small token...
November 3rd, 2018 07:34 - Sunday Lunch to Prepare. (Goldfinch60)
Today i prepare my ears for this evenings premature firework explosions....
November 2nd, 2018 07:38 - OPPORTUNITIES (Michael Edwards)
Name and shame this foolish man!
Love the line drawing, but which end...
November 2nd, 2018 07:32 - The Beaver Moon (November) (Lorna)
i like the way you have used \'less is more\' in this compact piece. No...
November 1st, 2018 08:37 - Knowledge\'s Frontier. (Goldfinch60)
Personally anything with a front ear seems a step too far to me. I dunno...
November 1st, 2018 08:07 - THE HEAD UPON THE NAIL (Michael Edwards)
This reminds me of how my older brother taught me the art of winning a...
November 1st, 2018 08:01 - CROSS YOUR HEART (Michael Edwards)
Whatever next? Does this mean i can stop shoving a towel down the front of...
October 31st, 2018 03:21 - One Dark Night. (Goldfinch60)
Nice one! Yes, there are only two certainties in life - birth and death....
October 31st, 2018 03:18 - LISTENING IN. (Fay Slimm.)
One could imagine the Fay Tree gently cascading her foliage upon the damp...
October 30th, 2018 06:48 - Catch a Falling Leaf Two Ways. (Goldfinch60)
An old song suggested \'catch a falling star and put it in your pocket,...
October 30th, 2018 05:14 - ECLIPSE (Michael Edwards)
I know you wrote this for the crater good of mankind in mind but such a...
October 30th, 2018 05:07 - CONCORDANCE. (Fay Slimm.)
Love is a lesson which continues to teach us. So long as we have an open...
October 29th, 2018 16:37 - River to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Less frequent your river walks may be but both you and the river know it...
October 29th, 2018 03:21 - THE FUNERAL (Michael Edwards)
I hope they\'re not going to burn his remains,... just imagine the...
October 29th, 2018 03:15 - Big up Yourself (Poetic Dan)
Reads like u have it sussed sir! Respect.
October 28th, 2018 19:25 - Duvet Cover. (Goldfinch60)
Two large bulldog clips to keep those first two corners in the right place...
October 28th, 2018 19:23 - NOW THEN (Michael Edwards)
These days of future past have led me to believe that last weeks job...
October 28th, 2018 19:21 - Usual Day. (Goldfinch60)
OK so Goldfinch is the weatherman. You\'re very brave indeed. So its your...
October 27th, 2018 09:26 - TIME (Michael Edwards)
At last, praise comes home! My great great great grandpa invented time, or...
October 27th, 2018 09:21 - Living from my soul (Poetic Dan)
Lovely mate! Big smiles here. Wicked picture.
October 25th, 2018 12:47 - Back into My World (Goldfinch60)
Such a sad way for a good spirited man to find himself questioning...
October 25th, 2018 12:43 - Hassled By Humans (Orchidee)
Christ? Is Christ god? If so what was the suffering?
October 25th, 2018 12:34 - INACTIVE, EXERCISE. (Michael Edwards)
Hmmmm interesting concept. Training to be a poet.
October 25th, 2018 12:33 - Gone (Used)
Sad. Difficult times. Don\'t waste your beautiful life waiting. When you...
October 24th, 2018 10:31 - NEW NOTIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah and so to bed to rest your active mind. For your past works reveal the...
October 24th, 2018 06:53 - Old mixing with new (Poetic Dan)
I am reading that a weight is lifting off your shoulders.
Once again i...
October 24th, 2018 06:49 - Wondrous Art. (Goldfinch60)
Some pass by,
aware of the building,
some love the frames,
the...
October 24th, 2018 06:43 - BIG FEET (Michael Edwards)
Quack quack, wide elevens here, quack quack! Recently found twelves more...
October 24th, 2018 06:38 - Want or Are. (Goldfinch60)
The older we get, the more we come to know ourselves, accept our...
October 23rd, 2018 15:50 - FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE (Michael Edwards)
Beautifully crafted poetry ME. So often we see a lengthy piece of writing...
October 23rd, 2018 15:44 - How Strange! (Goldfinch60)
You did it again, who else has this knack of pulling out something from...
October 23rd, 2018 11:45 - CRAZY COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
For being clever enough to sleep in the cowshed,
He got a pat on the...
October 23rd, 2018 11:44 - Ghosts With Old Lovers. (Kevin browne)
\'Flowers are sweeter the closer you are to the grave\' and oh how we are...
October 21st, 2018 17:51 - Mind at the door (Poetic Dan)
Really good to read such positive words from you sir. How brave you were...
October 21st, 2018 16:13 - A RECOLLECTION (Michael Edwards)
He he, excellent. What picture my mind creates. Similar to the little girl...
October 21st, 2018 16:06 - Rap Man, Rap. (Goldfinch60)
Reminds me of when my friend bought a brass plate copy of the lords prayer...
October 21st, 2018 16:02 - Freedom Flight (Orchidee)
\"Came to our help and aid\" er...where exactly did that happen?
Flows...
October 20th, 2018 18:39 - I feel the chains breaking (Poetic Dan)
Often my mind slips back to this piece which i recommend...
October 20th, 2018 10:19 - Music is Calm. (Goldfinch60)
This draws me into a relaxing sleep with...
October 20th, 2018 10:13 - CRAZY COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
I had this bird in hand,
but i didn\'t want to in the bush.
October 20th, 2018 10:06 - Stuff. (Goldfinch60)
Tell me about it! If only my \'stuff\' were inspirational i would write...
October 17th, 2018 02:04 - INTO AUTUMN (Michael Edwards)
Gave me the vision of dawn at this time of year. A shudder of chill yet...
October 17th, 2018 02:01 - Coffee Stitch. (Goldfinch60)
I bet you are selective about the poems you hand over. Some people inspire...
October 15th, 2018 11:58 - Coffee Stitch. (Goldfinch60)
I bet you are selective about the poems you hand over. Some people inspire...
October 15th, 2018 05:41 - Coffee Stitch. (Goldfinch60)
I bet you are selective about the poems you hand over. Some people inspire...
October 15th, 2018 05:22 - NATURAL WORLD (Michael Edwards)
Bee A says to Bee B, \'I Love you Bee B\'. Bee B replies \'Buzz...
October 15th, 2018 05:16 - Summer Love (Kevin Michael Bloor)
You lucky lucky man. Your note and verse say so much.
October 14th, 2018 07:22 - Impermanence (viii) (ImpGratAdapt)
No changes necessary. Short and sweet, \'less is more\'.
Powerful and...
October 14th, 2018 07:10 - Hastings Remembered. (Goldfinch60)
Did England as we know it actually exist in 1066? Cornwall refused to be...
October 14th, 2018 07:07 - LET\'S (Michael Edwards)
The clock has turned another cog
So come here doll, and giz a snog.
October 14th, 2018 06:58 - The words I will never get to say (Birddie Jane)
Sometimes it\'s make or break time. It\'s a great risk, but has to be...
October 13th, 2018 15:48 - BUTTERFLY (Melissa Daly)
A broken heart takes a long time to mend. Inner beauty can be so damaged...
October 13th, 2018 08:38 - A Poem To You (Gabriella)
Ouch at the contrasting past tense in line four! Is this looking back at a...
October 13th, 2018 08:26 - A certain way of thinking (Alex)
Ha ha, saving your own work as a favourite, classic!
October 13th, 2018 08:20 - A Return to Romance (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Love is love however we experience it. Whether it returns or not, it was...
October 13th, 2018 07:57 - “To Every Human Being Whom Ever Lived Or Will Live Even If For Only A Few Seconds” (Gary Edward Geraci)
Love in the mind which strives for purity. No sin or scandal here.
October 13th, 2018 07:54 - Have You Ever (Songbird)
There will be an answer, but only after we pass. Meantime enjoy the dance....
October 13th, 2018 07:51 - Stand out! (Poetic Dan)
Would you trade inner turmoil for peace on earth?
Harmony, the...
October 13th, 2018 07:46 - Sermon (Ssilvia)
We all die alone.
And then find the answers to the questions no one can...
October 12th, 2018 10:48 - A Gathering Generation (ForeverJesus7)
Learn the message of forgiveness. All will be gathered.
October 12th, 2018 10:43 - Dying to be seen (Sylviasearcher)
Ah, re-cycling at its zenith. Nothing goes to waste.
October 12th, 2018 09:25 - Untitled (ImpGratAdapt)
All true. But how boring simply to wait.... u may be disappointed. And...
October 12th, 2018 09:24 - Crazy Cardinal (Christina8)
Really entertaining read again. May i suggest that you place a small bird...
October 12th, 2018 09:22 - What being human is to me (Poetic Dan)
Harmony and forgiving. Two tenets of love meditate upon.
October 12th, 2018 09:18 - Shepherd Security (Orchidee)
LOL yep sheep and anglicans, a good comparison.
October 12th, 2018 09:07 - She Looks to the Sea - Haiku and Senryu (Goldfinch60)
Is a 747 something to write or fly the atlantic in? Gone are the days of...
October 12th, 2018 09:06 - SOME QUATRAINS (Michael Edwards)
Well here we go, i have just read the first piece and im laughing aloud......
October 12th, 2018 09:01 - Good Friend (W c)
It\'s good to put \'pen to paper\' for a lost loved one be they friend,...
October 12th, 2018 08:57 - The Enchanted Forest (Songbird)
Love the romance of this. I should want to dress-up as an elf and live...
October 11th, 2018 15:14 - GONE FOREVER ( ONE OF MY BIGGEST FEARS) (Shayl)
And so begins a new beginning. Your life moves on from here enriched by...
October 11th, 2018 15:12 - coming out (Queer-with-a-pen)
Long may your heart and mind be free to be what you are. For all the...
October 11th, 2018 15:08 - Hugs All Around (DesertWords)
And theres a kid in us all. Sadly though some deny that inner child so are...
October 11th, 2018 15:04 - Under Her Rainbow\'s Light. (Kevin browne)
Reading like a dreamscape of love and loves loss. Spaces and places...
October 11th, 2018 15:02 - CHESIL. (Fay Slimm.)
I know this place, seen in its majesty from high on Portland. They say the...
October 11th, 2018 14:55 - It\'s okay (Alma Rose)
It\'s ok not to be ok is often a concept the we cannot accept in ourselves...
October 11th, 2018 14:44 - Tree Ducks (W c)
I loved reading this entertaining piece. I\'ve not heard of this before.
October 11th, 2018 05:42 - Seeing The Saviour (Orchidee)
Those last two lines are a killer. Shame this omnipotent one cant stop...
October 11th, 2018 05:30 - WORDS UNSAID (Michael Edwards)
Blimey, story of my life there!
October 11th, 2018 05:26 - Listen or Hear? (Goldfinch60)
Somehow this reminds me of the native americans in those old westerns we...
October 11th, 2018 05:25 - This isn\'t just fun it\'s who I am (Poetic Dan)
Dan. This is a statement from you isn\'t it. To me it is saying \" i have...
October 11th, 2018 05:23 - I am free (Poetic Dan)
Dan, i am so in tune to your words today. The you you describe is where i...
October 9th, 2018 13:43 - Grand wisdom of love (Poetic Dan)
Often age is accompanied by a serene-ness which is so admirable. Oh that...
October 7th, 2018 08:44 - Infinite Clouds. (Goldfinch60)
Time, the great enigma.
I like this, you\'ve encapsulated an everyday...
October 7th, 2018 08:39 - SHORELINE (Michael Edwards)
Greenery along the coastline tends to be coarse and a conflict to the...
October 7th, 2018 08:34 - I Had a Shower Today. (Goldfinch60)
Congratulations on surviving so many challenges. Can\'t say you\'ve made...
October 6th, 2018 07:12 - LAMPOONING (Michael Edwards)
Though your words have amused me
let me please clearly state
you won\'t...
October 6th, 2018 06:47 - BITTER. (Fay Slimm.)
Release feels better when the mind knows the situation was not right for...
October 5th, 2018 02:59 - Evangelistic Expressions (Orchidee)
Gosh you must be a fickle sinner asking for all this help and guidance....
October 5th, 2018 02:54 - 5am trigger 7am Beach walk (Poetic Dan)
Odd yet pleasing how interruptions to our daily pattern can lead to self...
October 5th, 2018 02:48 - Coffee Art. (Goldfinch60)
You are possibly a wealthy man Goldfinch, for the price of a coffee in so...
October 5th, 2018 02:44
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