Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• None Other Like It (Gary Edward Geraci) Who would want to offer anything to such a cruel god. Gods so called...
  December 8th, 2018 19:23
• Him ❤️ (Friendsaresuicide) What a lovely first offering from you. Compact and punchy, says it all...
  December 8th, 2018 13:37
• Storm (Debsspot) Made me smile. I love short punchy pieces like yours. Made me think \'hey...
  December 8th, 2018 13:15
• message to my angel (MSA-19) A beautiful tribute to a sadly lost and truly loved soul. Very moving.
  December 8th, 2018 13:13
• Last words (Edwinknox) \'a man far better than me\' such thoughts are a trap so easily we can...
  December 8th, 2018 13:11
• Down (Arazimus) Or to put it another way... you are a born survivor. Live long and...
  December 8th, 2018 13:03
• im sorry (Lainacarson98) I really like the way you\'ve chosen to write about this painful part of...
  December 8th, 2018 13:01
• Sick of Waitin’ (Asrealastheycome) Could you have said this in a more punchy way in six or eight lines? I...
  December 8th, 2018 12:55
• Integrity in Life. (Goldfinch60) Ah, a part of me believes i have become the mature craftsman who takes a...
  December 8th, 2018 12:53
• OILS DIFFUSED (Michael Edwards) \'Unsettled by truth\'... mind blowing line. Oft i burn essential oils,...
  December 8th, 2018 12:45
• EMOTION (Michael Edwards) ha ha ha, i second that emotion
  November 28th, 2018 12:36
• Old Fashioned? Moi? (Goldfinch60) What\'s a newspaper? he he he
  November 25th, 2018 11:52
• IT ONLY TAKES ONE (Michael Edwards) i didnt get that bronze medal for swimming for nothing u know!
  November 25th, 2018 11:50
• That Flaming Song! (Goldfinch60) Bah-Humbug. The supermarkets are full of christmas goodies. Yep earlier...
  November 24th, 2018 03:28
• OUT OF BOUNCE (Michael Edwards) A hearty laugh at this one.
  November 24th, 2018 03:23
• Seasons of Love. (Goldfinch60) I know the experience of the first two verses. The latter two i have...
  November 23rd, 2018 17:26
• ONE DAY EACH WEEK (Michael Edwards) It travelled as far as worcestershire thats for sure. Big grin but no...
  November 23rd, 2018 06:25
• UNDERSTANDING. (Fay Slimm.) I love your teaching healing message here. As often happens, it reminds me...
  November 22nd, 2018 10:07
• Writing not Tapping. (Goldfinch60) Every piece in MPS creates a mental picture. Today yours throws up a...
  November 22nd, 2018 02:49
• THE STATISTICIAN (Michael Edwards) He just had to be a busy bee i guess. p.s. is that a typo in the title...
  November 22nd, 2018 02:43
• DOUBLE TROUBLE (Michael Edwards) Could bring a whole new meaning to \'morning glory\'.
  November 22nd, 2018 02:41
• WITH YOU. (Fay Slimm.) Wonderful. Recounted beautiful things which remain long after the physical...
  November 22nd, 2018 02:36
• What is the Time? (Goldfinch60) There\'s a new version of that \'joke\' around here. One is awakened by...
  November 20th, 2018 12:49
• THE RISING SUN (Michael Edwards) That sun and it\'s rays of positivity beckoning us to do whatever it is to...
  November 20th, 2018 12:43
• Enlightened Way. (Goldfinch60) Everything around you is the same as it ever was with one huge...
  November 19th, 2018 12:35
• I Defeated Satan (Gary Edward Geraci) He he he. I think you defeated the person who invented the concept of...
  November 17th, 2018 11:24
• The Leaves. (Goldfinch60) One of my all time favourites, Miles interpretation of Autumn Leaves,...
  November 17th, 2018 10:26
• THE DEWS OF DAWN (Michael Edwards) This lovely gal and her life\'s experience qualify her for free entry upon...
  November 17th, 2018 10:10
• Mantovani (Goldfinch60) Oh yes,there are those old tunes which bring back similar memories for me....
  November 16th, 2018 09:30
• KNOCK KNOCK (Michael Edwards) Aww for a moment there i thought it was going to be your pet dawg come...
  November 16th, 2018 09:29
• FORGOTTEN (Michael Edwards) Ah, the thinker who spoke his mind to the wrong persons. People who heard...
  November 13th, 2018 04:02
• The Corner of My Dreams. (Goldfinch60) In western mainstream religion the concept of reincarnation has been...
  November 13th, 2018 03:56
• Spiritual Warfare (Orchidee) So brainwasheth the lord eh?
  November 12th, 2018 15:32
• Dreams (Christina8) Our minds take us back in our dreams and romance with reality. Well mine...
  November 12th, 2018 13:06
• STRANGENESS. (Fay Slimm.) I\'m made of stardust - or someone told me i was anyway. A child of the...
  November 12th, 2018 12:58
• The Sea of Harmony. (Goldfinch60) Thats a truly great mind picture. Like that area of the moon but not so...
  November 12th, 2018 12:51
• AND SO TO BED (Michael Edwards) Honey bunny swears shes funny and giggles in her burrow. Here and now...
  November 12th, 2018 12:47
• The Last Night (Lorna) Sad. I wonder how many had the thouights you describe. Writing in first...
  November 11th, 2018 11:38
• To let it go I must flow (Poetic Dan) Kudos. Those who choose to live an evil life will find evil comes and gets...
  November 11th, 2018 11:34
• The Guns Stopped. (Goldfinch60) No the guns havent stopped you\'re so right. Sadly mankind seems...
  November 11th, 2018 11:25
• RIOJA (Michael Edwards) What are you, an artist or somethimg?? LOL Such a lovely idea and carried...
  November 11th, 2018 11:17
• Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off! (DesertWords) Ironic isn\'t that a preacher regurgitates phrases from a book that has...
  November 10th, 2018 16:33
• WAR CRY. (Fay Slimm.) Lest we should ever forget. A lovely tribute to the war fallen Fay. I...
  November 9th, 2018 04:12
• Hair Dying. (Goldfinch60) I bet she looked a million dollars so all your cleaning up was a humble...
  November 9th, 2018 04:06
• A FEW BITS AND PIECES (Michael Edwards) Yes, these wee gems of wisdom must be a devil to dream up. But i guess if...
  November 9th, 2018 04:04
• SEVERED THREADS (Michael Edwards) The poetry of a peaceful passing into whatever follows. Oh that we all...
  November 9th, 2018 03:55
• The George (Goldfinch60) I guess all of us guys had a similar place. My first such place was the...
  November 9th, 2018 03:49
• Time\'s Bouquet (Lorna) Every now is a new one and reading your words today is a jolt to me...
  November 9th, 2018 03:26
• VICTORIOUS. (Fay Slimm.) That\'s love alright! I wonder what one would make of your fine piece...
  November 5th, 2018 11:16
• Blessings to a new member of the crew! (Poetic Dan) May you and your new loved pack member bring much joy to one and all...
  November 3rd, 2018 15:59
• Blessings to a new member of the crew! (Poetic Dan) May you and your new loved pack member bring much joy to one and all...
  November 3rd, 2018 14:47
• Bring Spring To the World (Lorna) Lovely joyous piece from you. Evokes the electric feelings a special...
  November 3rd, 2018 13:31
• NO MORE (Michael Edwards) Sad how a bad judgement can harden a person. So much in life overlooked...
  November 3rd, 2018 07:37
• Treats From Kay. (Goldfinch60) Look at that, someone who treasures your company gives you a small token...
  November 3rd, 2018 07:34
• Sunday Lunch to Prepare. (Goldfinch60) Today i prepare my ears for this evenings premature firework explosions....
  November 2nd, 2018 07:38
• OPPORTUNITIES (Michael Edwards) Name and shame this foolish man! Love the line drawing, but which end...
  November 2nd, 2018 07:32
• The Beaver Moon (November) (Lorna) i like the way you have used \'less is more\' in this compact piece. No...
  November 1st, 2018 08:37
• Knowledge\'s Frontier. (Goldfinch60) Personally anything with a front ear seems a step too far to me. I dunno...
  November 1st, 2018 08:07
• THE HEAD UPON THE NAIL (Michael Edwards) This reminds me of how my older brother taught me the art of winning a...
  November 1st, 2018 08:01
• CROSS YOUR HEART (Michael Edwards) Whatever next? Does this mean i can stop shoving a towel down the front of...
  October 31st, 2018 03:21
• One Dark Night. (Goldfinch60) Nice one! Yes, there are only two certainties in life - birth and death....
  October 31st, 2018 03:18
• LISTENING IN. (Fay Slimm.) One could imagine the Fay Tree gently cascading her foliage upon the damp...
  October 30th, 2018 06:48
• Catch a Falling Leaf Two Ways. (Goldfinch60) An old song suggested \'catch a falling star and put it in your pocket,...
  October 30th, 2018 05:14
• ECLIPSE (Michael Edwards) I know you wrote this for the crater good of mankind in mind but such a...
  October 30th, 2018 05:07
• CONCORDANCE. (Fay Slimm.) Love is a lesson which continues to teach us. So long as we have an open...
  October 29th, 2018 16:37
• River to Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Less frequent your river walks may be but both you and the river know it...
  October 29th, 2018 03:21
• THE FUNERAL (Michael Edwards) I hope they\'re not going to burn his remains,... just imagine the...
  October 29th, 2018 03:15
• Big up Yourself (Poetic Dan) Reads like u have it sussed sir! Respect.
  October 28th, 2018 19:25
• Duvet Cover. (Goldfinch60) Two large bulldog clips to keep those first two corners in the right place...
  October 28th, 2018 19:23
• NOW THEN (Michael Edwards) These days of future past have led me to believe that last weeks job...
  October 28th, 2018 19:21
• Usual Day. (Goldfinch60) OK so Goldfinch is the weatherman. You\'re very brave indeed. So its your...
  October 27th, 2018 09:26
• TIME (Michael Edwards) At last, praise comes home! My great great great grandpa invented time, or...
  October 27th, 2018 09:21
• Living from my soul (Poetic Dan) Lovely mate! Big smiles here. Wicked picture.
  October 25th, 2018 12:47
• Back into My World (Goldfinch60) Such a sad way for a good spirited man to find himself questioning...
  October 25th, 2018 12:43
• Hassled By Humans (Orchidee) Christ? Is Christ god? If so what was the suffering?
  October 25th, 2018 12:34
• INACTIVE, EXERCISE. (Michael Edwards) Hmmmm interesting concept. Training to be a poet.
  October 25th, 2018 12:33
• Gone (Used) Sad. Difficult times. Don\'t waste your beautiful life waiting. When you...
  October 24th, 2018 10:31
• NEW NOTIONS. (Fay Slimm.) Ah and so to bed to rest your active mind. For your past works reveal the...
  October 24th, 2018 06:53
• Old mixing with new (Poetic Dan) I am reading that a weight is lifting off your shoulders. Once again i...
  October 24th, 2018 06:49
• Wondrous Art. (Goldfinch60) Some pass by, aware of the building, some love the frames, the...
  October 24th, 2018 06:43
• BIG FEET (Michael Edwards) Quack quack, wide elevens here, quack quack! Recently found twelves more...
  October 24th, 2018 06:38
• Want or Are. (Goldfinch60) The older we get, the more we come to know ourselves, accept our...
  October 23rd, 2018 15:50
• FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE (Michael Edwards) Beautifully crafted poetry ME. So often we see a lengthy piece of writing...
  October 23rd, 2018 15:44
• How Strange! (Goldfinch60) You did it again, who else has this knack of pulling out something from...
  October 23rd, 2018 11:45
• CRAZY COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) For being clever enough to sleep in the cowshed, He got a pat on the...
  October 23rd, 2018 11:44
• Ghosts With Old Lovers. (Kevin browne) \'Flowers are sweeter the closer you are to the grave\' and oh how we are...
  October 21st, 2018 17:51
• Mind at the door (Poetic Dan) Really good to read such positive words from you sir. How brave you were...
  October 21st, 2018 16:13
• A RECOLLECTION (Michael Edwards) He he, excellent. What picture my mind creates. Similar to the little girl...
  October 21st, 2018 16:06
• Rap Man, Rap. (Goldfinch60) Reminds me of when my friend bought a brass plate copy of the lords prayer...
  October 21st, 2018 16:02
• Freedom Flight (Orchidee) \"Came to our help and aid\" er...where exactly did that happen? Flows...
  October 20th, 2018 18:39
• I feel the chains breaking (Poetic Dan) Often my mind slips back to this piece which i recommend...
  October 20th, 2018 10:19
• Music is Calm. (Goldfinch60) This draws me into a relaxing sleep with...
  October 20th, 2018 10:13
• CRAZY COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards) I had this bird in hand, but i didn\'t want to in the bush.
  October 20th, 2018 10:06
• Stuff. (Goldfinch60) Tell me about it! If only my \'stuff\' were inspirational i would write...
  October 17th, 2018 02:04
• INTO AUTUMN (Michael Edwards) Gave me the vision of dawn at this time of year. A shudder of chill yet...
  October 17th, 2018 02:01
• Coffee Stitch. (Goldfinch60) I bet you are selective about the poems you hand over. Some people inspire...
  October 15th, 2018 11:58
• Coffee Stitch. (Goldfinch60) I bet you are selective about the poems you hand over. Some people inspire...
  October 15th, 2018 05:41
• Coffee Stitch. (Goldfinch60) I bet you are selective about the poems you hand over. Some people inspire...
  October 15th, 2018 05:22
• NATURAL WORLD (Michael Edwards) Bee A says to Bee B, \'I Love you Bee B\'. Bee B replies \'Buzz...
  October 15th, 2018 05:16
• Summer Love (Kevin Michael Bloor) You lucky lucky man. Your note and verse say so much.
  October 14th, 2018 07:22