Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Breathe (Silver)
I only ever had a panic attack once.. I think your words are quite apt.. ...
January 6th, 2019 06:44 - does love really exist? (Lea cobain .)
Love is like the weather, seasonal and changeable.
January 6th, 2019 06:42 - In Life, You Can’t Pretend (Asrealastheycome)
And all the rest is just poetry!
January 6th, 2019 06:40 - The Hunt in the Forest (Goldfinch60)
I had a wonderful dream last night. I\'m pleased to report that no animals...
January 6th, 2019 06:39 - TODAY\'S ANNOUNCEMENTS (Michael Edwards)
Customer announcement - to avoid a parking penalty charge dont forget to...
January 6th, 2019 06:36 - Journeys of Life. (Goldfinch60)
I suspect the man who returns from your river is a changed man.
January 5th, 2019 03:52 - AUTUMN BREEZE (Michael Edwards)
The sparrow shudders,
feathers ruffled
For in Pussy\'s mouth
his cries...
January 5th, 2019 03:50 - A Handful of Nightingales (Neville)
Far too complicated for a humble sinner like me to attempt. My body clock...
January 3rd, 2019 08:16 - Day of Bach. (Goldfinch60)
Have you heard this played on the ukelele?
January 3rd, 2019 08:13 - WHERE AM I ? (Michael Edwards)
Reality is but an illusion.
January 3rd, 2019 08:12 - Just Take a Look (Neville)
Truly enigmatic and very cleverly done.
January 2nd, 2019 09:59 - Water Shock. (Goldfinch60)
I bet u never make that mistake if there are still presents around its...
January 2nd, 2019 03:18 - PARADOX (Michael Edwards)
This made me think of my hair. I\'m still not sure where it went.
January 2nd, 2019 03:16 - Selfish Suffering (Unknownt)
Your words show that you are a natural poet, and a serious one. Write...
January 2nd, 2019 02:39 - Power (John Prophet)
I agree with every word. Looking around this site its easy to see how the...
January 2nd, 2019 02:32 - Alone (TheStrongInHeart)
I like this. The thinking man realising he\'s on a different planet to...
January 2nd, 2019 02:27 - When The World Has Let You Down (Kevin browne)
The right frame of mind to read your works is truly rewarded today....
January 2nd, 2019 02:23 - Dali’s Eyes (Neville)
LOL every writer dreams of such wishes.
But better to see and be who you...
January 1st, 2019 06:52 - thank you (Faye.birch)
Yes, you will succeed! Great piece of positive writing in the face of...
January 1st, 2019 01:13 - HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL AT MPS (Michael Edwards)
ooh-er, umm err yes well maybe innit.
Later during Jan 1st no doubt many...
December 31st, 2018 15:50 - New Year Scotch. (Goldfinch60)
I\'ll be with you in spirit. I wish you and yours well in 2019. May your...
December 31st, 2018 15:47 - The Songbird Sings (Edthepoet)
Ed, when you\'re brilliant you really hit the spot.
Masterful.
Loves...
December 31st, 2018 15:36 - Reflections (Neville)
Now come on! If you wanted to do a proper reflection it should have been...
December 31st, 2018 10:24 - Dream of Peace. (Goldfinch60)
You know we CAN give peace a chance, it\'s the other buggers who spoil it.
December 30th, 2018 09:26 - VICE VERSA (Michael Edwards)
Flippin artistic types! One never knows if they\'re coming or going.
Or...
December 17th, 2018 11:43 - Travel in Hope. (Goldfinch60)
I love it. Totally share your expression of faith here.
December 17th, 2018 11:42 - Lack of Understanding. (Goldfinch60)
It is the inner dog within you. A hair of the dog in the morning is always...
December 16th, 2018 13:34 - MY SPIRIT (Michael Edwards)
Always plenty of spirit to be found in the next bottle sir.
December 16th, 2018 13:32 - The Glue of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, excellent Goldfinch, love - the glue of life!
December 15th, 2018 04:42 - A STRANGER (Michael Edwards)
Aye \'appen lad.... in need of t\'oil... To light his lamp i...
December 15th, 2018 04:40 - A DISARRAY OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Each one a gem in itself.
December 14th, 2018 21:18 - The Experts Opinion. (Goldfinch60)
A guy once hired me as an expert in my field. Later he explained his...
December 14th, 2018 21:17 - My age (Heather Harrisson)
The lyrics of an old song come to mind. \"Walk a mile in my shoes, before...
December 12th, 2018 11:41 - Love Hate. (Goldfinch60)
Love conquers all... but (there\'s always that flipping \'but\' isn\'t...
December 12th, 2018 11:37 - BREXIT - A WILFUL BETRAYAL? (Michael Edwards)
Look...whatever they try and foist on us for Brexit, I\'m sticking to...
December 12th, 2018 11:31 - SHORTIE ONE (Michael Edwards)
OMG you mean i must never go to the seaside again? The way gets much...
December 10th, 2018 09:33 - Together in Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
There they were together in paradise, the only discernable sounds were...
December 10th, 2018 09:29 - None Other Like It (Gary Edward Geraci)
Who would want to offer anything to such a cruel god. Gods so called...
December 8th, 2018 19:23 - Him ❤️ (Friendsaresuicide)
What a lovely first offering from you. Compact and punchy, says it all...
December 8th, 2018 13:37 - Storm (Debsspot)
Made me smile. I love short punchy pieces like yours.
Made me think \'hey...
December 8th, 2018 13:15 - message to my angel (MSA-19)
A beautiful tribute to a sadly lost and truly loved soul. Very moving.
December 8th, 2018 13:13 - Last words (Edwinknox)
\'a man far better than me\' such thoughts are a trap so easily we can...
December 8th, 2018 13:11 - Down (Arazimus)
Or to put it another way... you are a born survivor.
Live long and...
December 8th, 2018 13:03 - im sorry (Lainacarson98)
I really like the way you\'ve chosen to write about this painful part of...
December 8th, 2018 13:01 - Sick of Waitin’ (Asrealastheycome)
Could you have said this in a more punchy way in six or eight lines?
I...
December 8th, 2018 12:55 - Integrity in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Ah, a part of me believes i have become the mature craftsman who takes a...
December 8th, 2018 12:53 - OILS DIFFUSED (Michael Edwards)
\'Unsettled by truth\'... mind blowing line.
Oft i burn essential oils,...
December 8th, 2018 12:45 - EMOTION (Michael Edwards)
ha ha ha, i second that emotion
November 28th, 2018 12:36 - Old Fashioned? Moi? (Goldfinch60)
What\'s a newspaper?
he he he
November 25th, 2018 11:52 - IT ONLY TAKES ONE (Michael Edwards)
i didnt get that bronze medal for swimming for nothing u know!
November 25th, 2018 11:50 - That Flaming Song! (Goldfinch60)
Bah-Humbug.
The supermarkets are full of christmas goodies. Yep earlier...
November 24th, 2018 03:28 - OUT OF BOUNCE (Michael Edwards)
A hearty laugh at this one.
November 24th, 2018 03:23 - Seasons of Love. (Goldfinch60)
I know the experience of the first two verses. The latter two i have...
November 23rd, 2018 17:26 - ONE DAY EACH WEEK (Michael Edwards)
It travelled as far as worcestershire thats for sure. Big grin but no...
November 23rd, 2018 06:25 - UNDERSTANDING. (Fay Slimm.)
I love your teaching healing message here. As often happens, it reminds me...
November 22nd, 2018 10:07 - Writing not Tapping. (Goldfinch60)
Every piece in MPS creates a mental picture. Today yours throws up a...
November 22nd, 2018 02:49 - THE STATISTICIAN (Michael Edwards)
He just had to be a busy bee i guess.
p.s. is that a typo in the title...
November 22nd, 2018 02:43 - DOUBLE TROUBLE (Michael Edwards)
Could bring a whole new meaning to \'morning glory\'.
November 22nd, 2018 02:41 - WITH YOU. (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful. Recounted beautiful things which remain long after the physical...
November 22nd, 2018 02:36 - What is the Time? (Goldfinch60)
There\'s a new version of that \'joke\' around here. One is awakened by...
November 20th, 2018 12:49 - THE RISING SUN (Michael Edwards)
That sun and it\'s rays of positivity beckoning us to do whatever it is to...
November 20th, 2018 12:43 - Enlightened Way. (Goldfinch60)
Everything around you is the same as it ever was with one huge...
November 19th, 2018 12:35 - I Defeated Satan (Gary Edward Geraci)
He he he. I think you defeated the person who invented the concept of...
November 17th, 2018 11:24 - The Leaves. (Goldfinch60)
One of my all time favourites, Miles interpretation of Autumn Leaves,...
November 17th, 2018 10:26 - THE DEWS OF DAWN (Michael Edwards)
This lovely gal and her life\'s experience qualify her for free entry upon...
November 17th, 2018 10:10 - Mantovani (Goldfinch60)
Oh yes,there are those old tunes which bring back similar memories for me....
November 16th, 2018 09:30 - KNOCK KNOCK (Michael Edwards)
Aww for a moment there i thought it was going to be your pet dawg come...
November 16th, 2018 09:29 - FORGOTTEN (Michael Edwards)
Ah, the thinker who spoke his mind to the wrong persons. People who heard...
November 13th, 2018 04:02 - The Corner of My Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
In western mainstream religion the concept of reincarnation has been...
November 13th, 2018 03:56 - Spiritual Warfare (Orchidee)
So brainwasheth the lord eh?
November 12th, 2018 15:32 - Dreams (Christina8)
Our minds take us back in our dreams and romance with reality. Well mine...
November 12th, 2018 13:06 - STRANGENESS. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m made of stardust - or someone told me i was anyway. A child of the...
November 12th, 2018 12:58 - The Sea of Harmony. (Goldfinch60)
Thats a truly great mind picture. Like that area of the moon but not so...
November 12th, 2018 12:51 - AND SO TO BED (Michael Edwards)
Honey bunny swears shes funny and giggles in her burrow.
Here and now...
November 12th, 2018 12:47 - The Last Night (Lorna)
Sad. I wonder how many had the thouights you describe.
Writing in first...
November 11th, 2018 11:38 - To let it go I must flow (Poetic Dan)
Kudos. Those who choose to live an evil life will find evil comes and gets...
November 11th, 2018 11:34 - The Guns Stopped. (Goldfinch60)
No the guns havent stopped you\'re so right. Sadly mankind seems...
November 11th, 2018 11:25 - RIOJA (Michael Edwards)
What are you, an artist or somethimg?? LOL
Such a lovely idea and carried...
November 11th, 2018 11:17 - Stop The Sermon, I Want To Get Off! (DesertWords)
Ironic isn\'t that a preacher regurgitates phrases from a book that has...
November 10th, 2018 16:33 - WAR CRY. (Fay Slimm.)
Lest we should ever forget. A lovely tribute to the war fallen Fay.
I...
November 9th, 2018 04:12 - Hair Dying. (Goldfinch60)
I bet she looked a million dollars so all your cleaning up was a humble...
November 9th, 2018 04:06 - A FEW BITS AND PIECES (Michael Edwards)
Yes, these wee gems of wisdom must be a devil to dream up. But i guess if...
November 9th, 2018 04:04 - SEVERED THREADS (Michael Edwards)
The poetry of a peaceful passing into whatever follows.
Oh that we all...
November 9th, 2018 03:55 - The George (Goldfinch60)
I guess all of us guys had a similar place. My first such place was the...
November 9th, 2018 03:49 - Time\'s Bouquet (Lorna)
Every now is a new one and reading your words today is a jolt to me...
November 9th, 2018 03:26 - VICTORIOUS. (Fay Slimm.)
That\'s love alright!
I wonder what one would make of your fine piece...
November 5th, 2018 11:16 - Blessings to a new member of the crew! (Poetic Dan)
May you and your new loved pack member bring much joy to one and all...
November 3rd, 2018 15:59 - Blessings to a new member of the crew! (Poetic Dan)
May you and your new loved pack member bring much joy to one and all...
November 3rd, 2018 14:47 - Bring Spring To the World (Lorna)
Lovely joyous piece from you. Evokes the electric feelings a special...
November 3rd, 2018 13:31 - NO MORE (Michael Edwards)
Sad how a bad judgement can harden a person.
So much in life overlooked...
November 3rd, 2018 07:37 - Treats From Kay. (Goldfinch60)
Look at that, someone who treasures your company gives you a small token...
November 3rd, 2018 07:34 - Sunday Lunch to Prepare. (Goldfinch60)
Today i prepare my ears for this evenings premature firework explosions....
November 2nd, 2018 07:38 - OPPORTUNITIES (Michael Edwards)
Name and shame this foolish man!
Love the line drawing, but which end...
November 2nd, 2018 07:32 - The Beaver Moon (November) (Lorna)
i like the way you have used \'less is more\' in this compact piece. No...
November 1st, 2018 08:37 - Knowledge\'s Frontier. (Goldfinch60)
Personally anything with a front ear seems a step too far to me. I dunno...
November 1st, 2018 08:07 - THE HEAD UPON THE NAIL (Michael Edwards)
This reminds me of how my older brother taught me the art of winning a...
November 1st, 2018 08:01 - CROSS YOUR HEART (Michael Edwards)
Whatever next? Does this mean i can stop shoving a towel down the front of...
October 31st, 2018 03:21 - One Dark Night. (Goldfinch60)
Nice one! Yes, there are only two certainties in life - birth and death....
October 31st, 2018 03:18 - LISTENING IN. (Fay Slimm.)
One could imagine the Fay Tree gently cascading her foliage upon the damp...
October 30th, 2018 06:48 - Catch a Falling Leaf Two Ways. (Goldfinch60)
An old song suggested \'catch a falling star and put it in your pocket,...
October 30th, 2018 05:14
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