Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- Slither Moon. (Goldfinch60)
As we age and wisdom plays a sweeter tune, the word \'love\' expands to...
April 15th, 2019 00:13 - NO MORE HER OWN PHILOSOPHER (Michael Edwards)
Lovely opening \'untinctured\'. How many of the fairer sex do we know who...
April 15th, 2019 00:11 - Watching (Neville)
Been there, done that, tripped over my tongue.
April 13th, 2019 04:53 - Love Is (Mirela Athanas)
Yup, i guess you have got love sussed there. A you have written about love...
April 13th, 2019 02:17 - Unconditional Paternal Love Toward Shana Punim (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Wow, stats on your profile show you don\'t read other peoples poetry on...
April 13th, 2019 01:21 - SHE CRIED IN VAIN (Michael Edwards)
Hmmm reminded me of the chap who went to McDonalds to buy a spare tyre...
April 13th, 2019 01:16 - F**k It (SerenWise)
Sometimes it is enough... sometimes those words just fill the space you...
April 13th, 2019 01:09 - Where Are You God? (Goldfinch60)
This is terrible for you. An awful cry out of anger and...
April 13th, 2019 01:05 - Assumptions (Poetic Dan)
Its what we do when we think we are able to do.... but big BUT. We often...
April 12th, 2019 19:26 - Assumptions (Poetic Dan)
Its what we do when we think we are able to do.... but big BUT. We often...
April 12th, 2019 19:20 - Mended Wing (W c)
You lucky person to have been blessed with this opportunity to reach into...
April 12th, 2019 11:15 - La Petit Mort (Neville)
What wakes me from le petit mort... are we talking the flare or the...
April 12th, 2019 11:09 - DEPARTURE. (Fay Slimm.)
A part of life\'s cycle, leaving leadened skies and sulking horizon with...
April 12th, 2019 11:02 - SADNESS (Michael Edwards)
Such sadness, but the analogy brings forth a smile, for a mushroom is to...
April 12th, 2019 10:54 - Something Missing. (Goldfinch60)
Since my op last year i would not be able to eat a full english but i do...
April 12th, 2019 10:51 - And Satan responds...... (Suresh)
I wish you wouldn\'t write about me on here.... it\'s...
April 11th, 2019 16:15 - Morning Coffee (Neville)
Lucky sod! Most blokes have to suffer the earache of her indoors innit.
April 11th, 2019 16:12 - NEWNESS.. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes indeed, I mean, look what happened to the dinosaurs.
April 11th, 2019 16:10 - Only a Dream. (Goldfinch60)
And a dream worth having too.
April 11th, 2019 16:08 - ONCE (Michael Edwards)
If u put u into that that theory then the whole thing lightens up.
It\'s...
April 11th, 2019 16:07 - Yes! You.. (Poetic Dan)
I dunno what normal is, I\'m not sure about acceptable either.
In so many...
April 11th, 2019 16:02 - Prison Rust (Last Shadow)
Without prisoners there are no prisons.
Without crime there are no...
April 10th, 2019 11:17 - Prison Rust (Last Shadow)
Without prisoners there are no prisons.
Without crime there are no...
April 10th, 2019 10:13 - \"Did I Get Too Old For You?\" (Lonelyraccoon)
Hope you feel better after that. I see you have only read 4 other peoples...
April 10th, 2019 09:58 - LIT. (Fay Slimm.)
What lurks behind the poetic genius whose daily masterpieces leave us...
April 10th, 2019 09:26 - Shadow Envy (Neville)
Now thats clever and contains such wisdom.
Short and sweet (thus...
April 10th, 2019 08:38 - Hey.... (Poetic Dan)
First of all i went for as osteopath rub
on the way home i thought about...
April 10th, 2019 08:35 - NIGHTS OF SOLITUDE (Michael Edwards)
A \'self abandoned beating heart\' is that a suicide perchance?
Great...
April 10th, 2019 08:17 - Sad Spike. (Goldfinch60)
The phrase \'tears of a clown\' comes to mind.
He has of course written...
April 10th, 2019 08:13 - The Office (Purdy61)
Nice fun piece. Reminds me of the reasons i quit the office environment.
April 9th, 2019 08:54 - Canvas (Neville)
Keep her fresh by keeping your love vibrant.
I am a fan of short pieces....
April 9th, 2019 07:23 - GEMS. (Fay Slimm.)
Delightful little raindrops. Oh where were they when i was literally...
April 9th, 2019 07:14 - Stopped. (Goldfinch60)
Well i\'m glad you were enjoying yourself, toe tapping and all. Can\'t say...
April 9th, 2019 07:06 - LITTLE BOY BLUE (2) (Michael Edwards)
There\'s something symbolic
about a threesome frolic.
Kicking the day...
April 9th, 2019 07:02 - The most important things in life (JB)
But the sun never dies for us JB. And the sun refreshes tomorrow, even...
April 8th, 2019 20:43 - Waiting For Dad (W c)
A lovely adult recalling of the love and devotion felt as a child in terms...
April 8th, 2019 20:34 - Poppies (Neville)
This beautiful fragile flower has as you write many associations. Chief...
April 8th, 2019 12:05 - ILL-SENT (Fay Slimm.)
I get the feeling that you have in mind a family or person who has been...
April 8th, 2019 11:56 - The View from the Window. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful. The first man knowing his time was near was recounting the...
April 8th, 2019 11:49 - LITTLE BOY BLUE (1) (Michael Edwards)
Yeah, but only if they blow the tune you elected them to do in the houses...
April 8th, 2019 00:26 - The Freedom of Slaves (Neville)
Slaves are human beings and like you and me and our loved ones have human...
April 8th, 2019 00:21 - You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you (Poetic Dan)
Oh chim chim chutney to you now.... Grrr you put that damn song in my...
April 8th, 2019 00:15 - Bin Man. (Goldfinch60)
Maybe he thought you were all a load of rubbish. Nowt stranger than folk.
April 8th, 2019 00:09 - Our Lady of the Harbour (Neville)
A scorcher of a pile for the maid of Orleans.
What horrible times those...
April 5th, 2019 09:14 - I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it! (Poetic Dan)
Great piece of writing today m8. All about being in harmony with ones...
April 5th, 2019 09:05 - SOUNDS. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes those beauties hunt easily over our lit up motorways etc...
April 5th, 2019 08:53 - Choices. (Goldfinch60)
Begs the thought... one can choose death?
I shall be avoiding buses all...
April 5th, 2019 08:46 - LIMERICK 57 (Michael Edwards)
Thank you for a good laugh on my first read of the day.
April 5th, 2019 08:43 - WHISPERINGS. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh such a tender trap.
This must be how it feels to be a drug addict or...
April 4th, 2019 06:40 - Reasons (Poetic Dan)
\"Knowing is just half, \'Being\' is the other step. Wise words...
April 4th, 2019 06:34 - Read Yourself (Neville)
Love this expression of a lifetimes commitment to a lovers memory. For...
April 4th, 2019 06:21 - Banter. (Goldfinch60)
I agree with you IF banter is what you and i grew up with and regard as...
April 4th, 2019 06:14 - Stop questioning! (Poetic Dan)
Be gentle with yourself friend. Life dealt you a hard hand early on and...
April 2nd, 2019 13:14 - Hungry Corner (Neville)
There is hungry corner and hungry corner. Several completely differing...
April 2nd, 2019 13:03 - SOLO-CHILL. (Fay Slimm.)
The drawing in of the evening can bring sadness and lead us to reflect...
April 2nd, 2019 12:54 - How Can I Fail? (Goldfinch60)
You are not going to fail in anything, you\'re far too positive a bloke to...
April 2nd, 2019 12:46 - A Thirst Well Quenched (Neville)
A bird in hand is worth keeping out of your pocket.
\"You say it loudest...
April 1st, 2019 06:16 - Warning! Magic is not always pretty (Poetic Dan)
If you were a crab, you could re-grow a leg you know... dont try it... ...
April 1st, 2019 06:07 - I AM BREEZE - (A Series) (Fay Slimm.)
I know you .. you are the one who stole my hat, you made me cry as a six...
April 1st, 2019 06:03 - Gone for a Week. (Goldfinch60)
That is a reallly refreshing read Goldfinch because it\'s clear you are...
April 1st, 2019 05:55 - Free Yourself (Asrealastheycome)
Superb powerful writing with a bit of alliteration thrown in for good...
March 31st, 2019 06:30 - Free Yourself (Asrealastheycome)
Superb powerful writing with a bit of alliteration thrown in for good...
March 31st, 2019 05:41 - To be lied to (Paris)
I cannot stand liars. Once i realise a person is a liar then they lose not...
March 31st, 2019 05:36 - To Whom It May Concern (Neville)
Was it you who wrote prince Phillips proposal to Elizabeth.
So formal....
March 31st, 2019 05:29 - Sometimes I forget (Poetic Dan)
There\'s love in them there words mister. And lots of it.
Difficult...
March 31st, 2019 05:17 - LOVE\'S TUNE. (Fay Slimm.)
Your first verse made me guffaw. So apt..... so much conveyed in four...
March 31st, 2019 05:04 - A Plethora of Sues. (Goldfinch60)
Mad. You are delightfully mad! I put it down to the company you keep when...
March 31st, 2019 04:59 - LAVENDER\'S BLUE (No 3) (Michael Edwards)
Lavenders blue silly billy
makes me look quite dapper
all on my...
March 31st, 2019 04:51 - Before Breakfast (Neville)
Oh yes, a wicked reminder upon beard and fingers. Such a pleasurable...
March 31st, 2019 00:06 - How much does yours? (Poetic Dan)
\"Ah - there he goes\" they will say about you in forty years \"The old...
March 31st, 2019 00:02 - TROUBLE. (Fay Slimm.)
If i put on my rain gear in Cornwall then i know the wind will get me...
March 30th, 2019 23:57 - At Peace Once More. (Goldfinch60)
The Avon, your buddy. A peaceful river. I knew it as it flows through...
March 30th, 2019 23:54 - LAVENDER\'S BLUE (Michael Edwards)
Bloke at the next table sent his meal back.... five minutes later they...
March 30th, 2019 23:49 - Cutlery Talking (Neville)
A good fork is a guarantee of many an ongoing good insertion. Juices flow...
March 29th, 2019 07:15 - Just keep skipping, another ranting! (Poetic Dan)
Yeah oh yeah!
Most of the crap which hits us has had a spin put on it by...
March 29th, 2019 07:03 - LEVELS. (Fay Slimm.)
Reading your joy of being able to detach from your physical and morph into...
March 29th, 2019 06:50 - Humour in Life. (Goldfinch60)
And so it should be! Great writing, to bring us some of your personal...
March 29th, 2019 06:44 - BENEATH (Michael Edwards)
And then they dropped the bomb!
I could smell the cold earth and...
March 29th, 2019 06:42 - 3-27-19 (Wilted)
We are all survivors of one trauma or another.
It is good to read your...
March 27th, 2019 08:53 - Your daughter too (Amherrera1190)
Hmm, much hurt and anger here shows through the contradictions.
March 27th, 2019 05:18 - shine on (Queer-with-a-pen)
Mixed thoughts of missing someone in a cruel world. Our beds always...
March 27th, 2019 05:15 - Promise (Sylviasearcher)
Ah yes the hope that we shall be remembered with positive thoughts. So...
March 27th, 2019 05:11 - It (Killer._bee)
That\'ll teach you not to eat cheese at supper time. You really dreamed...
March 27th, 2019 05:06 - HAVENS. (Fay Slimm.)
Jeez, if this is true i will life a life of enforced celibacy for my home...
March 27th, 2019 05:02 - The words you all help me find! (Poetic Dan)
Fine words of a wise and enlightened soul. Self aware and harmonising....
March 27th, 2019 04:56 - Back Streets of Banjul (Neville)
Did it all change with decimalisation into tenpea?
I\'ve never been to...
March 27th, 2019 04:50 - Shadow Across the Sky. (Goldfinch60)
And when the future dawns for you the shadow will be lifted. It IS out...
March 27th, 2019 04:45 - GRINLOADS OF 575s (1) (Michael Edwards)
They\'re the stuff my grins are made of and thats for sure.
March 27th, 2019 04:43 - Note to self (Rose.a.lee)
Contrary to your opening line. You have chosen an excellent way of saying...
March 26th, 2019 20:43 - love-hate but always communicate (Misskay)
The beauty untold of making a relationship work. None of us the perfect...
March 26th, 2019 20:40 - We\'ll Meet Again (Ettolrahc)
As a firm believer in continuance of the spirit into another existence i...
March 26th, 2019 20:36 - Cliff (Hedy)
Beautifully expressed the lust for freedom from this ludicrous society and...
March 26th, 2019 20:15 - Clouds; Megan Ross (Meganr921)
When you dip into the reality of existence, casting off conditioning, the...
March 26th, 2019 20:12 - Misinterpretation (Nicholas Browning)
And there you have it in your own words.... \'certainty does not exist\'...
March 26th, 2019 20:07 - Instead (Sylviasearcher)
The ocean will do as the ocean does. It cares not for your consciousness...
March 26th, 2019 19:59 - Leaves On The Lawn. (Kevin browne)
A tale of lifes travels, where and how it took us. What we were, what we...
March 26th, 2019 19:40 - Harmonising (Poetic Dan)
You fell in among poets and you gave us the real you. In return you saw us...
March 26th, 2019 13:40 - Stuck (Neville)
I was glued to this from start to finish.
Your last stanza could be the...
March 26th, 2019 13:30 - COURAGE. (Fay Slimm.)
Many a wise and courageous life has been lost, overcome by the magestic...
March 26th, 2019 13:25 - Saturday Nights Were Special. (Goldfinch60)
Now that sir is a great nostalgic write!
\"Can it be that it was all so...
March 26th, 2019 13:17
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