Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- To Whom It May Concern (Neville)
Was it you who wrote prince Phillips proposal to Elizabeth.
So formal....
March 31st, 2019 05:29 - Sometimes I forget (Poetic Dan)
There\'s love in them there words mister. And lots of it.
Difficult...
March 31st, 2019 05:17 - LOVE\'S TUNE. (Fay Slimm.)
Your first verse made me guffaw. So apt..... so much conveyed in four...
March 31st, 2019 05:04 - A Plethora of Sues. (Goldfinch60)
Mad. You are delightfully mad! I put it down to the company you keep when...
March 31st, 2019 04:59 - LAVENDER\'S BLUE (No 3) (Michael Edwards)
Lavenders blue silly billy
makes me look quite dapper
all on my...
March 31st, 2019 04:51 - Before Breakfast (Neville)
Oh yes, a wicked reminder upon beard and fingers. Such a pleasurable...
March 31st, 2019 00:06 - How much does yours? (Poetic Dan)
\"Ah - there he goes\" they will say about you in forty years \"The old...
March 31st, 2019 00:02 - TROUBLE. (Fay Slimm.)
If i put on my rain gear in Cornwall then i know the wind will get me...
March 30th, 2019 23:57 - At Peace Once More. (Goldfinch60)
The Avon, your buddy. A peaceful river. I knew it as it flows through...
March 30th, 2019 23:54 - LAVENDER\'S BLUE (Michael Edwards)
Bloke at the next table sent his meal back.... five minutes later they...
March 30th, 2019 23:49 - Cutlery Talking (Neville)
A good fork is a guarantee of many an ongoing good insertion. Juices flow...
March 29th, 2019 07:15 - Just keep skipping, another ranting! (Poetic Dan)
Yeah oh yeah!
Most of the crap which hits us has had a spin put on it by...
March 29th, 2019 07:03 - LEVELS. (Fay Slimm.)
Reading your joy of being able to detach from your physical and morph into...
March 29th, 2019 06:50 - Humour in Life. (Goldfinch60)
And so it should be! Great writing, to bring us some of your personal...
March 29th, 2019 06:44 - BENEATH (Michael Edwards)
And then they dropped the bomb!
I could smell the cold earth and...
March 29th, 2019 06:42 - 3-27-19 (Wilted)
We are all survivors of one trauma or another.
It is good to read your...
March 27th, 2019 08:53 - Your daughter too (Amherrera1190)
Hmm, much hurt and anger here shows through the contradictions.
March 27th, 2019 05:18 - shine on (Queer-with-a-pen)
Mixed thoughts of missing someone in a cruel world. Our beds always...
March 27th, 2019 05:15 - Promise (Sylviasearcher)
Ah yes the hope that we shall be remembered with positive thoughts. So...
March 27th, 2019 05:11 - It (Killer._bee)
That\'ll teach you not to eat cheese at supper time. You really dreamed...
March 27th, 2019 05:06 - HAVENS. (Fay Slimm.)
Jeez, if this is true i will life a life of enforced celibacy for my home...
March 27th, 2019 05:02 - The words you all help me find! (Poetic Dan)
Fine words of a wise and enlightened soul. Self aware and harmonising....
March 27th, 2019 04:56 - Back Streets of Banjul (Neville)
Did it all change with decimalisation into tenpea?
I\'ve never been to...
March 27th, 2019 04:50 - Shadow Across the Sky. (Goldfinch60)
And when the future dawns for you the shadow will be lifted. It IS out...
March 27th, 2019 04:45 - GRINLOADS OF 575s (1) (Michael Edwards)
They\'re the stuff my grins are made of and thats for sure.
March 27th, 2019 04:43 - Note to self (Rose.a.lee)
Contrary to your opening line. You have chosen an excellent way of saying...
March 26th, 2019 20:43 - love-hate but always communicate (Misskay)
The beauty untold of making a relationship work. None of us the perfect...
March 26th, 2019 20:40 - We\'ll Meet Again (Ettolrahc)
As a firm believer in continuance of the spirit into another existence i...
March 26th, 2019 20:36 - Cliff (Hedy)
Beautifully expressed the lust for freedom from this ludicrous society and...
March 26th, 2019 20:15 - Clouds; Megan Ross (Meganr921)
When you dip into the reality of existence, casting off conditioning, the...
March 26th, 2019 20:12 - Misinterpretation (Nicholas Browning)
And there you have it in your own words.... \'certainty does not exist\'...
March 26th, 2019 20:07 - Instead (Sylviasearcher)
The ocean will do as the ocean does. It cares not for your consciousness...
March 26th, 2019 19:59 - Leaves On The Lawn. (Kevin browne)
A tale of lifes travels, where and how it took us. What we were, what we...
March 26th, 2019 19:40 - Harmonising (Poetic Dan)
You fell in among poets and you gave us the real you. In return you saw us...
March 26th, 2019 13:40 - Stuck (Neville)
I was glued to this from start to finish.
Your last stanza could be the...
March 26th, 2019 13:30 - COURAGE. (Fay Slimm.)
Many a wise and courageous life has been lost, overcome by the magestic...
March 26th, 2019 13:25 - Saturday Nights Were Special. (Goldfinch60)
Now that sir is a great nostalgic write!
\"Can it be that it was all so...
March 26th, 2019 13:17 - Hellos and goodbyes (Poetic Dan)
Good stuff.... so many of us overlook these wonderful simple pleasures...
March 23rd, 2019 16:41 - The Boy Sat on the Burning Deck. (Goldfinch60)
Great story telling there Mr G.
March 23rd, 2019 16:38 - BODY DESIGN (Michael Edwards)
For the bum so placed
it was surely an art
to enable a retreat
as we...
March 23rd, 2019 16:35 - UNKNOWN (Suresh)
How about we spend some time just accepting and living in harmony with our...
March 22nd, 2019 16:29 - Toilet humour (Poetic Dan)
I\'m pleased to tell you
That this poetic lump
Is at his most...
March 22nd, 2019 08:26 - Recollections (Neville)
You story teller you.... you man of the half told mystery leaving us,...
March 22nd, 2019 08:22 - MYSTERY. (Fay Slimm.)
Such a last verse to make one sit up and think today. Could the mystery...
March 22nd, 2019 08:18 - Set Her Free. (Goldfinch60)
We hold such faith in the \'after\' that none could do anything but be...
March 22nd, 2019 08:02 - DEFINITIONS (4) (Michael Edwards)
I can see that a conversation with you could be laced with hidden...
March 22nd, 2019 07:48 - Lucky dip (Poetic Dan)
Oh you lucky people! Great time of life for you both..... ahead are...
March 16th, 2019 07:40 - DEFINITIONS (2) (Michael Edwards)
When will we see the Oxford Edwards Dictionary?
COMPOSER
A Mao Tse...
March 16th, 2019 07:37 - for my father (MSA-19)
Poetry?
March 16th, 2019 07:30 - Trash talking (Cinderella_Pixie)
So sad to read. This horrible cycle is something i went through too....
March 16th, 2019 07:29 - The Call of The Gold Cup. (Goldfinch60)
Yuk @ gambling. a pet hate of mine.
Now that we have high definition TV...
March 16th, 2019 07:25 - AIR. (Fay Slimm.)
Oh dear, this is where the poet in me comes into conflict with the...
March 15th, 2019 03:52 - Beware! (Goldfinch60)
blimey... i bet someone famous was finished off on every other day of the...
March 15th, 2019 03:48 - LUSCIOUS LUCY (Michael Edwards)
Languidly loathing lighthearted lyrics
lording language lightly...
March 15th, 2019 03:45 - OMENS. (Fay Slimm.)
Somehow these noble stones command a respect. A sense of wonderment...
March 14th, 2019 12:40 - Numbers in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Yes i remember my tenth birthday.
I like the encouragement in your...
March 14th, 2019 12:31 - ATHENA\'S FLUTE (Michael Edwards)
I think you have expressed the loneliness inside most people of great age...
March 14th, 2019 12:28 - Morning Dew. (Kevin browne)
\'The little dog laughed to see such fun, and the cow jumped over the...
March 13th, 2019 16:43 - Conceivable (Jeffrey Roy)
That\'s a real poem about knowing you\'re falling in love with someone...
March 13th, 2019 13:02 - Father & lover I should need be no other (Poetic Dan)
I think you know where i\'m coming from on this sort of stuff before i say...
March 13th, 2019 12:59 - MEANT. (Fay Slimm.)
This is so much about the coming together of new true soul mates i...
March 13th, 2019 04:58 - Everywhere I look around (Poetic Dan)
Nuts to everything, spring is in the air .... and you have loadsa life...
March 13th, 2019 04:37 - LIMERICK No.60 (Michael Edwards)
A mental picture suddenly flikkers
of egg yolk all over her knickers
and...
March 13th, 2019 04:32 - Such a Sadness. (Goldfinch60)
Such pain in your words G. I am a positive minded person and i believe you...
March 13th, 2019 04:27 - When I Was Dead (Neville)
Metaphor for drowning in a relationship? only to find oneself washed limp...
March 13th, 2019 04:21 - Perhaps (Sylviasearcher)
Needed to be written. So many of us have similar daydreams about fantasy...
March 13th, 2019 04:09 - Mourning Song (Neville)
Mountains of passion fade to calm once the crashing waves finally stop....
March 13th, 2019 04:07 - Watching Snooker. (Goldfinch60)
And for those watching in black and white, the brown ball is behind the...
March 13th, 2019 02:55 - DEFINITIONS (1) (Michael Edwards)
The wonders of the English language made real before our eyes. I...
March 13th, 2019 02:52 - Wrecking Ball (SerenWise)
Ah but did you learn from it? do you feel better for it being your past...
March 11th, 2019 14:40 - You (Lonelyraccoon)
Short and punchy does the trick every time. Why write twenty lines when...
March 11th, 2019 14:38 - Je Riviens by Worth (Neville)
It is indeed odd how a scent on one lady can differ from the same scent on...
March 11th, 2019 14:34 - You never forget (Poetic Dan)
I guess our pain teaches us a lot. Knowing a pain that is a cold shudder...
March 11th, 2019 14:25 - My little pocket watch (JaydeVictoria)
Yes, you need something much more fun in your pocket than that miserable...
March 11th, 2019 14:07 - Cloud (TheNMH)
So very true. I think the secret is to stop looking skywards and you\'ll...
March 11th, 2019 14:01 - Rape (TheNMH)
Be good to see equality in the law surrounding this horrible crime and the...
March 11th, 2019 12:34 - Clickety Click. (Goldfinch60)
Nice one Goldfinch, you have to keep these youngsters happy!
Six and...
March 11th, 2019 02:50 - Clickety Click. (Goldfinch60)
Nice one Goldfinch, you have to keep these youngsters happy!
Six and...
March 11th, 2019 02:37 - LIMERICK 59 (Michael Edwards)
Good one, OK my juices are flowing...here\'s one off the cuff:-
a...
March 11th, 2019 02:34 - Not Just Any Words (Neville)
Aye sir, from the roof tops let the words ring out. Like the wind through...
March 9th, 2019 05:56 - Living the Day. (Goldfinch60)
Too right Goldfinch, what a refreshing poem to read. I\'m cursed with an...
March 9th, 2019 05:50 - MARCH 1st 2019 (Michael Edwards)
Forget those seasons
global warming\'s here
\'I\'ll be right back\' says...
March 9th, 2019 05:47 - Why (Purdy61)
Love IS love and when it falls apart it doesn\'t mean that there was never...
March 8th, 2019 13:47 - Wish I Was What You Need Me To Be (BlackCat)
\"I wish i was what you need me to be\" are words which tear at the...
March 8th, 2019 13:38 - Boudoir (Neville)
Hmm reminds me of Les Dawson describing the decor in the Paris brothel...
March 8th, 2019 06:05 - Boudoir (Neville)
Hmm reminds me of Les Dawson describing the decor in the Paris brothel...
March 8th, 2019 05:50 - BIRD-TALK.. (Fay Slimm.)
Amazing wild life story from you again. I wonder just what these little...
March 8th, 2019 05:40 - Church Swansong. (Goldfinch60)
Trust Mr Goldfinch to always have an opened packet of biscuits in his...
March 8th, 2019 05:34 - HER VEINS (Michael Edwards)
Reminded me of an occasion in my youth when the doctor asked for a urine...
March 8th, 2019 05:30 - I need time (Drea)
Time doesn\'t heal that one. You take a leap of faith and make it work...
March 7th, 2019 20:06 - No saints no sinners (Poetic Dan)
Ain\'t no saints here, likewise ain\'t no sinners neither..... we\'re all...
March 7th, 2019 20:01 - Prolet (Neville)
And i though a prolet was something the NHS operated on.
A fitting...
March 7th, 2019 15:18 - ARDOUR. (Fay Slimm.)
My word, what beast lurks within?
Do not go gentle through that dark...
March 7th, 2019 15:16 - Jacques Loussier. (Goldfinch60)
Great tribute, i have to familiarise myself with his work starting here.
March 7th, 2019 15:07 - TOFFEE AND COFFEE (Michael Edwards)
That\'s beyond a choke!
My coffee is either mocha beans or kenyan.... ...
March 7th, 2019 15:01 - Take me (Killer._bee)
LOL Looks like you are already taken! A delightful steamy hot passion...
March 6th, 2019 06:57 - You2015 (Amherrera1190)
All about physical attraction which isn\'t really what keeps people...
March 6th, 2019 06:48 - Unrequited Car Rearing Paramours Of Yesteryear (Rew4er2nail)
Brought back fond memories of a Morris Minor in the dip at Lower Slaughter...
March 6th, 2019 06:45 - Precious Scars (Neville)
OK, so you noticed i\'m a broken old croc. I didn\'t get this cracked up...
March 6th, 2019 06:41 - RISING. (Fay Slimm.)
The wonder of springtime made glorious with your fine words here...
March 6th, 2019 06:30
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