Comments on community poems by dusk arising at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by dusk arising

Hellos and goodbyes (Poetic Dan) Good stuff.... so many of us overlook these wonderful simple pleasures...
March 23rd, 2019 16:41
The Boy Sat on the Burning Deck. (Goldfinch60) Great story telling there Mr G.
March 23rd, 2019 16:38
BODY DESIGN (Michael Edwards) For the bum so placed it was surely an art to enable a retreat as we...
March 23rd, 2019 16:35
UNKNOWN (Suresh) How about we spend some time just accepting and living in harmony with our...
March 22nd, 2019 16:29
Toilet humour (Poetic Dan) I\'m pleased to tell you That this poetic lump Is at his most...
March 22nd, 2019 08:26
Recollections (Neville) You story teller you.... you man of the half told mystery leaving us,...
March 22nd, 2019 08:22
MYSTERY. (Fay Slimm.) Such a last verse to make one sit up and think today. Could the mystery...
March 22nd, 2019 08:18
Set Her Free. (Goldfinch60) We hold such faith in the \'after\' that none could do anything but be...
March 22nd, 2019 08:02
DEFINITIONS (4) (Michael Edwards) I can see that a conversation with you could be laced with hidden...
March 22nd, 2019 07:48
Lucky dip (Poetic Dan) Oh you lucky people! Great time of life for you both..... ahead are...
March 16th, 2019 07:40
DEFINITIONS (2) (Michael Edwards) When will we see the Oxford Edwards Dictionary? COMPOSER A Mao Tse...
March 16th, 2019 07:37
for my father (MSA-19) Poetry?
March 16th, 2019 07:30
Trash talking (Cinderella_Pixie) So sad to read. This horrible cycle is something i went through too....
March 16th, 2019 07:29
The Call of The Gold Cup. (Goldfinch60) Yuk @ gambling. a pet hate of mine. Now that we have high definition TV...
March 16th, 2019 07:25
AIR. (Fay Slimm.) Oh dear, this is where the poet in me comes into conflict with the...
March 15th, 2019 03:52
Beware! (Goldfinch60) blimey... i bet someone famous was finished off on every other day of the...
March 15th, 2019 03:48
LUSCIOUS LUCY (Michael Edwards) Languidly loathing lighthearted lyrics lording language lightly...
March 15th, 2019 03:45
OMENS. (Fay Slimm.) Somehow these noble stones command a respect. A sense of wonderment...
March 14th, 2019 12:40
Numbers in Life. (Goldfinch60) Yes i remember my tenth birthday. I like the encouragement in your...
March 14th, 2019 12:31
ATHENA\'S FLUTE (Michael Edwards) I think you have expressed the loneliness inside most people of great age...
March 14th, 2019 12:28
Morning Dew. (Kevin browne) \'The little dog laughed to see such fun, and the cow jumped over the...
March 13th, 2019 16:43
Conceivable (Jeffrey Roy) That\'s a real poem about knowing you\'re falling in love with someone...
March 13th, 2019 13:02
Father & lover I should need be no other (Poetic Dan) I think you know where i\'m coming from on this sort of stuff before i say...
March 13th, 2019 12:59
MEANT. (Fay Slimm.) This is so much about the coming together of new true soul mates i...
March 13th, 2019 04:58
Everywhere I look around (Poetic Dan) Nuts to everything, spring is in the air .... and you have loadsa life...
March 13th, 2019 04:37
LIMERICK No.60 (Michael Edwards) A mental picture suddenly flikkers of egg yolk all over her knickers and...
March 13th, 2019 04:32
Such a Sadness. (Goldfinch60) Such pain in your words G. I am a positive minded person and i believe you...
March 13th, 2019 04:27
When I Was Dead (Neville) Metaphor for drowning in a relationship? only to find oneself washed limp...
March 13th, 2019 04:21
Perhaps (Sylviasearcher) Needed to be written. So many of us have similar daydreams about fantasy...
March 13th, 2019 04:09
Mourning Song (Neville) Mountains of passion fade to calm once the crashing waves finally stop....
March 13th, 2019 04:07
Watching Snooker. (Goldfinch60) And for those watching in black and white, the brown ball is behind the...
March 13th, 2019 02:55
DEFINITIONS (1) (Michael Edwards) The wonders of the English language made real before our eyes. I...
March 13th, 2019 02:52
Wrecking Ball (SerenWise) Ah but did you learn from it? do you feel better for it being your past...
March 11th, 2019 14:40
You (Lonelyraccoon) Short and punchy does the trick every time. Why write twenty lines when...
March 11th, 2019 14:38
Je Riviens by Worth (Neville) It is indeed odd how a scent on one lady can differ from the same scent on...
March 11th, 2019 14:34
You never forget (Poetic Dan) I guess our pain teaches us a lot. Knowing a pain that is a cold shudder...
March 11th, 2019 14:25
My little pocket watch (JaydeVictoria) Yes, you need something much more fun in your pocket than that miserable...
March 11th, 2019 14:07
Cloud (TheNMH) So very true. I think the secret is to stop looking skywards and you\'ll...
March 11th, 2019 14:01
Rape (TheNMH) Be good to see equality in the law surrounding this horrible crime and the...
March 11th, 2019 12:34
Clickety Click. (Goldfinch60) Nice one Goldfinch, you have to keep these youngsters happy! Six and...
March 11th, 2019 02:50
Clickety Click. (Goldfinch60) Nice one Goldfinch, you have to keep these youngsters happy! Six and...
March 11th, 2019 02:37
LIMERICK 59 (Michael Edwards) Good one, OK my juices are flowing...here\'s one off the cuff:- a...
March 11th, 2019 02:34
Not Just Any Words (Neville) Aye sir, from the roof tops let the words ring out. Like the wind through...
March 9th, 2019 05:56
Living the Day. (Goldfinch60) Too right Goldfinch, what a refreshing poem to read. I\'m cursed with an...
March 9th, 2019 05:50
MARCH 1st 2019 (Michael Edwards) Forget those seasons global warming\'s here \'I\'ll be right back\' says...
March 9th, 2019 05:47
Why (Purdy61) Love IS love and when it falls apart it doesn\'t mean that there was never...
March 8th, 2019 13:47
Wish I Was What You Need Me To Be (BlackCat) \"I wish i was what you need me to be\" are words which tear at the...
March 8th, 2019 13:38
Boudoir (Neville) Hmm reminds me of Les Dawson describing the decor in the Paris brothel...
March 8th, 2019 06:05
Boudoir (Neville) Hmm reminds me of Les Dawson describing the decor in the Paris brothel...
March 8th, 2019 05:50
BIRD-TALK.. (Fay Slimm.) Amazing wild life story from you again. I wonder just what these little...
March 8th, 2019 05:40
Church Swansong. (Goldfinch60) Trust Mr Goldfinch to always have an opened packet of biscuits in his...
March 8th, 2019 05:34
HER VEINS (Michael Edwards) Reminded me of an occasion in my youth when the doctor asked for a urine...
March 8th, 2019 05:30
I need time (Drea) Time doesn\'t heal that one. You take a leap of faith and make it work...
March 7th, 2019 20:06
No saints no sinners (Poetic Dan) Ain\'t no saints here, likewise ain\'t no sinners neither..... we\'re all...
March 7th, 2019 20:01
Prolet (Neville) And i though a prolet was something the NHS operated on. A fitting...
March 7th, 2019 15:18
ARDOUR. (Fay Slimm.) My word, what beast lurks within? Do not go gentle through that dark...
March 7th, 2019 15:16
Jacques Loussier. (Goldfinch60) Great tribute, i have to familiarise myself with his work starting here.
March 7th, 2019 15:07
TOFFEE AND COFFEE (Michael Edwards) That\'s beyond a choke! My coffee is either mocha beans or kenyan.... ...
March 7th, 2019 15:01
Take me (Killer._bee) LOL Looks like you are already taken! A delightful steamy hot passion...
March 6th, 2019 06:57
You2015 (Amherrera1190) All about physical attraction which isn\'t really what keeps people...
March 6th, 2019 06:48
Unrequited Car Rearing Paramours Of Yesteryear (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Brought back fond memories of a Morris Minor in the dip at Lower Slaughter...
March 6th, 2019 06:45
Precious Scars (Neville) OK, so you noticed i\'m a broken old croc. I didn\'t get this cracked up...
March 6th, 2019 06:41
RISING. (Fay Slimm.) The wonder of springtime made glorious with your fine words here...
March 6th, 2019 06:30
Know Your Worth. (Goldfinch60) So very true. This something I have taken on board and i am affronted by...
March 6th, 2019 06:20
Know Your Worth. (Goldfinch60) So very true. This something I have taken on board and i am affronted by...
March 6th, 2019 04:34
RICIN\'S NICE (Michael Edwards) Whatever next... congregational traffic wardens ?... coned off \'aisle...
March 6th, 2019 04:28
What We Have Here (Neville) Nice one. A bit like a mirror for me... I\'m a creature of mood. You do...
March 5th, 2019 05:51
A Laugh Or Two...... (Orchidee) Good to see you in high spirits. You always come across in MPS as a...
March 5th, 2019 04:44
INSIDE ME. (Fay Slimm.) Though we can be shaken to the foundations by the unexpected actions of...
March 5th, 2019 04:36
Flower. (Goldfinch60) Yes, but could you stand being interfered with by a bee? And there i...
March 5th, 2019 04:23
YOU DO NOT SEE (Michael Edwards) You brought out the bat in me until i realised the blood had gone to my...
March 5th, 2019 04:09
Paranoia is right (Poetic Dan) Well yeah, kind of. Look i used to be in bands, more than i care to...
March 4th, 2019 15:14
TO THE SANDMAN (Fay Slimm.) Excellent timing, i didn\'t sleep a wink last night. Oh falling asleep...
March 4th, 2019 15:08
Evil in Life. (Goldfinch60) Fine wise words. But there are some who are content to be evil. Self not...
March 4th, 2019 03:19
I Am That Guy (Neville) I could cuss you but you\'re the guy i always wanted to be? The guy i...
March 4th, 2019 03:16
MOPPING UP (Michael Edwards) Good laugh, filth of course.
March 4th, 2019 03:12
One Bird, Two Stones (Wi11ow) Amazing. You had me gripped with this. Usually i get bored with works of...
March 3rd, 2019 16:36
In a Room (Sylviasearcher) Your words reminded me very much of an affair i had with a lady in a chat...
March 3rd, 2019 16:27
Paper Cuts (Neville) Yes we do see them along the high street, in their chains of magazine...
March 3rd, 2019 12:09
Valley on the Hill. (Goldfinch60) English language has become Englitch hasn\'t it. And a garden centre has...
March 3rd, 2019 12:06
A COUPLE MORE (Michael Edwards) LOL that last one made me think of a flock of christian sheep.
March 3rd, 2019 12:02
ONCE (Fay Slimm.) Betwixt the light of dusk and dawn In deepest dreams my mind be drawn To...
March 1st, 2019 10:35
E.U. (Neville) A place where i can...... move the world just one step on. Fun to...
March 1st, 2019 10:27
Ministerial Anger. (Goldfinch60) I\'m not sure whether the correct word which comes to mind for these false...
March 1st, 2019 10:19
SOME EDITITS (Michael Edwards) Dick Dick Tator Dick tator ship Bismark Love your play on words, ...
March 1st, 2019 10:12
Incrementally Speaking (Neville) My life of never never one of carefree deposits and repossession...
February 27th, 2019 14:54
SOLO. (Fay Slimm.) Ah the sailors girl waits, knowing all the tides. Knowing his last words....
February 27th, 2019 14:45
Mary Had a Little Lamb 7. (Goldfinch60) Those were my teenage years, loads of sex all around but no experience...
February 27th, 2019 14:38
A MIRTH OF INSIGHTFUL MONOSTICHS (Michael Edwards) A word in your ear..... \"drum\".
February 27th, 2019 14:32
The West (SerenWise) Both the joy and pain of a romance divided by an ocean call out from your...
February 26th, 2019 17:19
My Muse (Tiffany_Arnold) Awwww so much love here. Really is a pleasure to read your words.
February 26th, 2019 15:40
Coronating a nightshade dawn (Whisperingquill) The best is yet to come.
February 26th, 2019 06:27
AWESOME. (Fay Slimm.) An experience beyond my own. I can\'t say i\'m envious as there is no...
February 26th, 2019 06:23
Reconfigure it out (Neville) Maths yuk... i dont believe arithmetic and poetry should mix except...
February 26th, 2019 05:11
“Love” (MissileOfUncertainty) So walk away, or did someone take your legs away? \"Without you i\'d be...
February 26th, 2019 04:49
Time Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60) I have so many unfinished pieces which i think stem from the occasions you...
February 26th, 2019 04:43
MY OWN EMISSARY (Michael Edwards) Aren\'t we all, unless we are easily led. What a shame we have nothing in...
February 26th, 2019 04:38
The Darkness (Prettylittlepoet) It can be safe in the dark.
February 25th, 2019 19:40
Snowdrops at Bridgewater (P.H.Rose) You brought back memories of a romantic time spent in the Somerset levels....
February 25th, 2019 11:42
Remind myself and maybe you (Poetic Dan) Dan...Absolutely bang on the truth there mate! I couldn\'t agree...
February 25th, 2019 11:37

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