Comments on community poems by ForeverJesus7
- The Secret (Crowns4Christ)
This is truely one of the best poems I read on this site.
Persistence is...
January 30th, 2022 05:07 - I choose to fight (Crowns4Christ)
I like the third set of rhymes my love. Keep writing.
Persistence is key
January 25th, 2022 01:06 - I love (Crowns4Christ)
It seems as though I have lost my poetic touch lately, but I will never...
January 18th, 2022 03:26 - The Cross (Matthew jay)
This was a great and uplifting piece. This could not be more...
August 31st, 2021 10:38 - TREASURES OF THE SNOW ! ~ A SEASONAL BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Congratulations on receiving so many views. You two really are...
December 11th, 2020 13:44 - Memories (Rose~)
This is a nice poem. If you were in America, I would wish you a Happy...
November 26th, 2020 11:54 - ... And So They Wait (ForeverJesus7)
Thank you for your comment.
I have been wanting to go to England for some...
November 19th, 2020 10:48 - The Kingdom (Crowns4Christ)
My love, this is a great piece. It is so true. I long for the day to be in...
October 16th, 2020 20:58 - WHAT IS THE PURPOSE OF WASPS ? ~ AN AFFIRMATIVE PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
How are you my friends? This is a great write and very informative. Still,...
October 16th, 2020 01:59 - ode to a pizza (Crowns4Christ)
I like pizza, but I love garlic bread more (haha).
Still, I did like this...
October 13th, 2020 19:08 - judge not (Crowns4Christ)
I love this piece. It is so true that we must not judge others. People who...
October 11th, 2020 09:46 - Happiness Butterfly. (Goldfinch60)
I really like this poem. This is the story of alot of people\'s lives. At...
October 8th, 2020 23:19 - What If I Lost It All? (ForeverJesus7)
D&M CROWN\'S poetry...
That sounds very good my love.
I am not sure...
September 22nd, 2020 18:02 - all work,no play (Crowns4Christ)
I said it before,
that few things are more,
rewarding than a long day of...
September 8th, 2020 20:59 - the nightmare (Crowns4Christ)
Try as I might,
This is a nightmare to write.
Poetry can sometimes be a...
September 7th, 2020 19:35 - WINE CATALOGUE MAJESTIC ~ A 8 6 BOOZY SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah my friend, give me a good Cabernet Sauvignon with a steak. On occasion,...
September 3rd, 2020 22:34 - HOME COOKIN* ? BRIAN & ANGELA ~ AN 8 4 2 RHYMING SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good day to the Mr. and Mrs. I truely enjoyed this piece. It was somewhat...
August 29th, 2020 02:19 - Dream (Rose~)
I enjoyed reading this poem. Keep writing. Persistence is key
August 27th, 2020 13:16 - BRIDGES GET US TO THE OTHER SIDE ! ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I enjoyed this piece. As Mr. Neville said, I always admired bridges. I...
August 21st, 2020 01:45 - EXAM RESULTS ~ RULE KO ! ~ FIVE SENRYU 5-7-5-7-7 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I like this piece. It is hard to comment on just one part. I am looking...
August 13th, 2020 19:09 - 2020 THAT WAS THE YEAR .. ! ~ YEAR OF COVID 19 ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I can really appreciate the timeline of this piece. When this C-19 thing...
August 3rd, 2020 01:32 - NOT EATING OUT ! DID YOU MISS IT DURING LOCKDOWN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oh how I missed it. I had actually went out to eat twice recently, but it...
July 26th, 2020 02:14 - JOBS FOR THE BOYS & GIRLS ~ WHATS YOUR DREAM JOB ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I am not sure,
what my dream job would be.
I suppose I like hard...
July 25th, 2020 11:33 - LIFE GETS TEDIOUS DON* IT ~ BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Life does get tedious sometimes. Oh, does it get tedious. Still,...
July 24th, 2020 23:28 - Letter to God (Mik@el)
I enjoyed this piece. Clearly you should right more seeing as how so many...
July 23rd, 2020 01:40 - Cold Showers (Cali Kittana)
There is something about this piece. I am not sure, but I like it. I am...
July 21st, 2020 03:28 - OUR FIRST GARDEN ~ BRIAN ~ A MODERN TRI-OCTET POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I think it is great the way you wrote this piece. Personally, I definitely...
July 19th, 2020 02:55 - Skin to Skin (DianeKey6)
Wow, this is some piece. Unfortunately, I can\'t remember what that is...
July 11th, 2020 16:16 - My Garden (ForeverJesus7)
Thank you for reading my piece about Heaven. I will be sure to add to the...
July 10th, 2020 14:30 - Song, My Lament (AwHec8)
Since everyone is giving their opinion, I figure that I will give mine. I...
July 8th, 2020 22:42 - LIBERATION SATURDAY BLUES ~ FIVE 57577 TANKAS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You sound as though you have a fun life. Recently, I haven\'t been doing...
July 3rd, 2020 22:35 - Poem, Godβs True Nature (AwHec8)
The only way to recieve salvation is through Christ Jesus, our Lord and...
June 11th, 2020 05:25 - SCIENCE FACT OR SCIENCE FICTION ? ~ END OF HUMAN CIVILISATION ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This was a great piece, and very reflective. I enjoyed being a part of...
June 7th, 2020 14:13 - Forgiveness (SheWasTheSun)
I enjoyed reading this piece. It is very true. Forgiveness is very...
May 29th, 2020 00:20 - Found and Lost (Arobot)
I really liked this piece, and it is so true. We must never put things...
May 27th, 2020 15:40 - BLUEBELLS π RING IN THE SPRING π AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is a nice piece. I live in Dania, Fl, where it is full of nature...
May 2nd, 2020 17:07 - EMBRACING (Illia)
I believe in embracing the person, but not their sin, and I don\'t always...
March 4th, 2020 11:55 - God versus religion (Mildred Achoch)
This could be one of the better poems that I have read in a...
January 18th, 2020 22:09 - WHAT WE BELIEVE π§‘ ANGELA & BRIAN π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I like this piece. You are right. Whether we are right or wrong, God...
December 15th, 2019 23:10 - EMPATHY π§‘ ANGELA & BRIAN π A MIRROR DIABLO (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Many people enjoy sympathy when it is needed. It is comforting. Still,...
November 13th, 2019 22:45 - SEA LEVEL RISE ~ MYTH OR MENACE π§‘ANGELA π BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I agree on the last part. These are apocalyptic scenarios on Christ...
November 1st, 2019 11:14 - SEA LEVEL RISE ~ MYTH OR MENACE π§‘ANGELA π BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I do not see it as a myth or a menace. I personally do not think that it...
November 1st, 2019 06:39 - BLUE HAWAII π§‘ ANGELA & BRIAN π A COLLABORATION (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I have been to Hawaii before. It is very true that Hawaii is very calm and...
October 18th, 2019 05:29 - GOODBYE FOR NOW ! π§‘ ANGELA π§‘ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Cause I\'m leaving on a jet plane,
I don\'t know when I\'ll be back...
October 17th, 2019 22:21 - TOGETHER AGAIN π§‘ ANGELA & BRIAN π A LOVE POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I am happy for you two. Good things come from having patience. May the...
October 12th, 2019 07:24 - DISCOVERING A NEW CAVE ! π BRIAN π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I go to Belize often. One of the things that they are very famous for are...
October 4th, 2019 02:56 - BORROWING & LENDING π§‘ A SONNET π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is very true. We need to stop being so selfish. Of course we must...
September 21st, 2019 01:01 - That\'s what I want (Jitender Joshi)
This is a nice piece. I understand that today is your birthday. Have a...
September 3rd, 2019 07:53 - S E P T E M B E R ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I love autumn. Especially, up north in Pennsilvania. My mother\'s birthday...
September 2nd, 2019 20:34 - TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I have to be honest with you. I did not read the poem. My eyes kept being...
August 21st, 2019 23:37 - OUR LEISURE TIME ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I would like to go sailing someday. It looks really fun. ...then again so...
August 17th, 2019 01:08 - THE LIFE OF ANGELA ~ IN NUMBERS ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is a nice piece that you had written. I enjoyed reading it.
Keep...
August 16th, 2019 13:31 - NO SILVER MEDALS IN LIFE & LOVE ~ ANGELA ~ A 6 5 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
No silver medals in life... It is good to hear from you again. I had taken...
August 14th, 2019 22:17 - DO EVERYTHING TENDERLY ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A 5 5 4 Blank Verse Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Very nice poem.
August 5th, 2019 11:39 - LOVE TO EVERYONE π§‘ ANGELA ~ A SONNET FROM MY π§‘ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah yes, how wonderful it is. We should wake up every morning grateful to...
August 4th, 2019 22:24 - BE A JITTERBUGGA NOT A LITTERBUGGA ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DITTY ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is a funny, and yet very true piece. I really like the title....
July 25th, 2019 10:03 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is one of my favorite songs. Great piece...
Persistence is key
July 22nd, 2019 16:51 - Silent Coffee Time. (Goldfinch60)
That is just how I like to enjoy my coffee - fifteen minutes of...
July 19th, 2019 10:21 - CARS ! FRIEND OR FOE ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I must say that my favorite car is an infinite. The cars I do not like the...
July 6th, 2019 09:44 - AMERICAN INDEPENDENCE DAY ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ JULY 4 1776 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I could agree that Thomas Jefferson is definitely on my list of the \'top...
July 4th, 2019 08:43 - HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 338 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I think I will leave the hot air balloons to you. Maybe I will try it...
July 1st, 2019 08:50 - GOD IS EVERYWHERE ~ AMEN ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A Free Verse 6-6-2 Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
It is amazing how some things are so unexplainable. The only answer is...
June 30th, 2019 22:13 - MY SECRET GARDEN ~ BRIAN ~ A 66666 TRIGINTA XXX ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This was a very nice piece. I am not exactly sure what to comment on it. I...
June 28th, 2019 02:37 - ORANGE & LEMONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DOUBLE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I like this piece. Maybe it is mostly because I am from South Florida....
June 25th, 2019 09:45 - EUROPE ~ MOST DIVERSE CONTINENT ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A VIGINTI QUINQUE (5 6 11 3 !) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
My mom is Belizean. As for my dad, his dad was full Irish, and his mom was...
June 24th, 2019 21:33 - EUROPE ~ MOST DIVERSE CONTINENT ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A VIGINTI QUINQUE (5 6 11 3 !) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Honestly, a country that I often thought about going to was Czech-Republic...
June 24th, 2019 21:29 - BALANCED DIET = BALANCED LIFE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I agree with this piece. I enjoy all kinds of desserts. Still, I know when...
June 18th, 2019 22:41 - NEW ZEALAND ~ NEW EXPERIENCES ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is a very nice piece.
June 12th, 2019 05:22 - ADDRESS TO A TOOTHACHE ! ROBBIE BURNS ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ouch! That sounds painful just thinking about it. This is a good...
June 11th, 2019 08:46 - ON DDAY LANDINGS ~ BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is in memory to our troops who stormed the beaches of Normandy, and...
June 6th, 2019 05:36 - WHAT IS WINE ? ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Personally, when I do drink wine, I prefer Italian red wine. My mom loves...
June 4th, 2019 04:29 - Flock of friends (Crystal Hope)
I like this poem. This is a very charming piece. Keep...
June 4th, 2019 04:23 - I AM THE UMBRELLA MAN ! BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I like this piece. It is very creative. Persistence is key
May 27th, 2019 21:22 - POEM WITHOUT WORDS ~ BRIAN for ANGELA ~ A NONRYU (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I have never seen an unwritten poem before. It is very different. Still,...
May 24th, 2019 17:43 - WE LOVE THE OLD THINGS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I really like this piece. Nothing beats the classics. That is why they are...
May 21st, 2019 05:37 - COFFEE A LA MODE ~ A Sonnet in Internal Rhyme ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Mmmmm, another piece about coffee. I usually drink mine black. However,...
May 8th, 2019 02:34 - \"I Baptize Thee...\" (Kurt Philip Behm)
I must say that I had raised an eyebrow to this poem. Respectfully, you...
May 3rd, 2019 10:19 - FRANZ JOSEF GLACIER BY HELICOPTER ! DOUBLE SONNET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Flying over a glacier sounds awesome. I once took a helicopter ride...
April 30th, 2019 15:47 - Redemption (Gerrylegister)
\'Redemption Song\', is actually my favorite song by Bob Marly.
Jesus...
April 26th, 2019 00:50 - Beloved Blood (Crystal Hope)
This was a great piece. His love is everlasting.
Persistence is key
April 22nd, 2019 15:24 - BRIAN ~ MY BIG BEAR HAS LANDED ~ ANGELA ~ 8 8 4 BIDECET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wow, you have alot of celebrations. Congratulations... The airplane...
April 20th, 2019 22:10 - EASTER ~ ANGELA ~ ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Happy Easter! Remember Jesus\'s life, death, resurrection, ascension, and...
April 19th, 2019 11:58 - Sometimes love... (Crystal Hope)
This is very true.
April 18th, 2019 13:35 - SIGHTS OF THE SEASONS ~ ANGELA ~ QUATRO QUARANTAS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Autumn is my personal favorite season. I like it because the air is cool,...
April 11th, 2019 02:52 - βHate living with demons cause they always inviting moreβ - J.Cole (Rosebel)
Jesus asked him, saying, \"What is your name?\" And he said, \"Legion\",...
April 7th, 2019 22:52 - The butterfly tree (Crystal Hope)
This is a very charming poem.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key
April 1st, 2019 21:13 - I LOVE YOU MORE THAN YOU WILL EVER KNOW ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What you have is something very rare. You two are truely blessed. May your...
March 29th, 2019 08:35 - God Called You Home (Ternic73)
This was a very nice piece. It is very well put together, and a nice...
March 28th, 2019 17:35 - SEASONS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Tis the season.
Spring is here.
Fall has come.
Now summer is near.
March 27th, 2019 09:03 - MICKEY MOUSE RULES OK ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I personally am a Donald Duck fan. I remember that I was five when I first...
March 21st, 2019 04:38 - CHRISTCHURCH NZ ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC LAMENT (ANGELA & BRIAN)
As a person, I have my convictions. I have my disagreements, and...
March 16th, 2019 07:04 - Forgiven (Crystal Hope)
I hope you continue to write. I enjoy reading your work. You have a very...
March 14th, 2019 22:27 - Enliven in me (Crystal Hope)
This was a very nice piece. It sounds almost as though it would be a...
March 14th, 2019 07:53 - Apocalypse - World War I (Suresh)
Personally, I know and believe that God had created the Heavens and earth,...
March 10th, 2019 13:29 - I BELIEVE IN YOU ! ~ SONNET FOR ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is a nice piece. I can tell it is from the heart. It seems you two...
March 9th, 2019 08:15 - NEW ZEALAND LAMB & CLARET ~ ANGELA ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Not only does it taste good, but it makes a great jacket.
Jesus...
March 7th, 2019 12:33 - The Land Without Name (Poetboy123)
The only way to Heaven is through Christ Jesus, the son of the true living...
March 6th, 2019 22:17 - WINSOMENESS OF WINTER ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is a very nice piece. All of those different seasons in different...
March 5th, 2019 10:19 - LIFE & DEATH OF JESUS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This is definately one of my favorite pieces I have ever heard. This is...
February 23rd, 2019 05:09 - WORKIN\' NINE TO FIVE ~ BRIAN ~ A RHYMING DODECET ~ Including DOLLY PARTON VIDEO ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Alot of people do not know what an opportunity they have to work. Many...
February 18th, 2019 22:20
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