Comments on community poems by Neville
- Clarion (Draven)
I love your title, it just happens to be one of my favourite words...
December 8th, 2021 02:21 - the only love she held on to (Dusk arising)
How perfectly poetically ponderous sir ... I shall no doubt be back once...
December 7th, 2021 12:25 - Smothered (Lorna)
... they say many a true word written in jest ... but you aint jesting...
December 7th, 2021 12:22 - Mercy Manifest (Orchidee)
mercy\'s okay in moderation .. but you can\'t beat a bit of rough...
December 7th, 2021 12:17 - Slow Learner (Doggerel Dave)
I\'ll take a brace of them leather clad ones if you please...
December 7th, 2021 08:22 - Wild Land (Fay Slimm.)
even the most loveliest of landscapes has a harsh, ragged & ruthless...
December 7th, 2021 05:32 - My Christmas Present. (Goldfinch60)
my favourite car too Andy .. and only yesterday, I was chatting to a...
December 7th, 2021 04:28 - Time (SureshG)
How a single page can hold so much truth is beyond me .. lovely wording...
December 6th, 2021 17:03 - Kingdom Kindlings (Orchidee)
Likewise liked ....................as opposed to licked which would...
December 6th, 2021 12:59 - The Locker. (Kitty the naughty poet)
Arrrh me hearty, you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a bit o booty...
December 6th, 2021 12:57 - Glasya (Paul Bell)
and there\'s poor old me .. too slow to catch on .......... :) N
December 6th, 2021 12:44 - I asked myself (Spilleronsheet)
say it like it is .. anything else is self deception .. I like this a...
December 6th, 2021 10:09 - Frigorific (Draven)
this is more cleverer than many might suppose .. I take my hat off to ya...
December 6th, 2021 09:51 - Evolving (Fay Slimm.)
You took the words write out of my mouth .. or maybe I should have said...
December 6th, 2021 09:37 - Dark (Lorna)
they just dont get much starker than this .. and that\'s one hell of a...
December 6th, 2021 09:32 - Cherish People. (Goldfinch60)
Life may not always be a bowl of cherish .. but if we can spread a bit...
December 6th, 2021 02:30 - Wintery Sky (Fay Slimm.)
Just what I needed as I wind my way slowly up the hill & into bed .. my...
December 5th, 2021 16:52 - Above Water (Valerie Wilson)
what an introduction to your writing .. these words proved to be .. I...
December 5th, 2021 16:50 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (10-12) (Michael Edwards)
I am sooooooooooooooooooo glad he\'s back folks ..........................
December 5th, 2021 13:51 - Emotions (SureshG)
emotionally charged, just as it should be...
December 5th, 2021 12:07 - hide and go seek (Kitty the naughty poet)
who in their write mind aint gonna like this...
December 5th, 2021 10:37 - Graupel (Draven)
I had to look up \'Graupel\' & am so glad that I did ... write on my...
December 5th, 2021 10:31 - Notes (Lorna)
simply splendid ..........................with or without those...
December 5th, 2021 10:26 - Glasya (Paul Bell)
What a terrific title Paul & what a similarly dark yet tantalising main...
December 5th, 2021 10:20 - Frigid (Draven)
You just nailed it Draven ... made me shiver between my smiles .........
December 5th, 2021 07:26 - Skeletal (Draven)
very noir ... and also very much enjoyed .. posting in both English &...
December 5th, 2021 07:25 - Redeemer Revelation (Orchidee)
I do so like a good tune .... :)
December 5th, 2021 07:20 - The Lesson Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
one of the tenants on which I base my whole existence .. well penned my...
December 4th, 2021 04:11 - Looking For The Word (Jerry Reynolds)
take my word for it, this is more than just a little bit special ... N
December 3rd, 2021 17:57 - meshed within the creases, a smile of contentment (SureshG)
How bloomin wonderful is that eh\' .. mega muchly & then some...
December 3rd, 2021 12:51 - πππππ£ π₯ππ π€π‘πππ π π βππ£ππ€π₯πππ€ (Dove)
gentle she does it and perfectly too .. these few are from me and meant...
December 3rd, 2021 12:48 - Incomparable (Fay Slimm.)
nonpariel is a word I have only rarely used before ... but, it seems...
December 3rd, 2021 08:05 - global warning (Dusk arising)
I stand firmly in thy corner squire ...
.. something has got to give...
December 3rd, 2021 08:01 - Restoring And Reviving (Orchidee)
we call that CPR (Cardio Pulmonary Resuscitation) or the Lazarus...
December 3rd, 2021 07:46 - THE GUY WHO ISNβT THERE - A COLLABORATION (Michael Edwards)
Yep .. not half bad .. and I do mean both halves .. a seamless...
December 3rd, 2021 04:44 - Everyday Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Good on ya my golden friend .... N
December 2nd, 2021 14:14 - Never (Garth Rakumakoe)
on behalf of all concerned, I thank you sir...
December 2nd, 2021 08:50 - We Never Know. (Goldfinch60)
tis an absolute certainty, so it is ... an absolute social injustice...
December 2nd, 2021 02:04 - Restoring Rejoicings (Orchidee)
we only dunk biscuits in this neck of the woods .. an interesting hymn...
December 1st, 2021 10:15 - First Snow (Lorna)
you just nailed it Lorna .. it aint just children that look skyward and...
December 1st, 2021 10:09 - Faking (Fay Slimm.)
deceit aint a four letter word, it is something worse than all of em put...
December 1st, 2021 04:54 - Spankings. (Kitty the naughty poet)
there is a certain point isn\'t there .. and you just made it sublimely...
December 1st, 2021 04:24 - promise me (Dusk arising)
I remember this from maybe the first round ... who could possibly forget...
December 1st, 2021 04:15 - Looking. (Goldfinch60)
anyone who tries to formulate an argument against these words clearly...
December 1st, 2021 01:31 - Good Morning Mamma/Buongiorno Mammaβ₯οΈ (Lauraπ»)
Yes indeed, Brava my friend ... the hurt here is tangible .. an ache...
November 30th, 2021 12:37 - Strength Surety (Orchidee)
a fine hymn poem & without doubt, a very moving accompanying hymn ..
November 30th, 2021 12:20 - Her Love (Fay Slimm.)
as you no doubt already know .. these words of yours will surely make...
November 30th, 2021 12:15 - Ho Ho Oh No (Lorna)
I\'m very much a last minute kinda guy .. I know bah humbug n all that...
November 30th, 2021 11:08 - Someday (Nicholas Browning)
I have no doubt that someday .. its just gonna click .. nice poem too...
November 30th, 2021 11:04 - Wandering, to just find dismay (Spilleronsheet)
yes, absolutely beautiful but seriously sad...
November 30th, 2021 11:00 - No words, no sound, no acts necessary (SureshG)
... spot on my friend .. what could possibly be better than that ...
November 30th, 2021 02:15 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (7 - 9) (Michael Edwards)
.. very clever indeed squire .. tis good to have you scribing again ..
November 29th, 2021 13:29 - Was It You? (Lorna)
... this is one of those rare little gems that gives the reader...
November 29th, 2021 13:25 - Dandelions (Dove)
I got a real rush reading these few words .. made me think back on so...
November 29th, 2021 09:25 - Arrow (Nicholas Browning)
Without doubt my most favouwritest Nicholas Browning poem to date .. I...
November 29th, 2021 09:19 - Muse alertβ¦.. Sorry β My Mistake (Doggerel Dave)
a musing ..
made me nearly sh... meself larfin .. :)
November 29th, 2021 09:03 - it was as if (Dusk arising)
You and me both my friend ..
I just love the way your mind and your...
November 29th, 2021 05:43 - Edge Of Eternity (Orchidee)
to boldly go where ... etc etc ..
interesting sir O .. I do like old...
November 29th, 2021 04:43 - Winter is coming (Kitty the naughty poet)
I\'m not a great fan of winter but you make it sound so cool ..............
November 29th, 2021 04:39 - In The Making (Fay Slimm.)
what an absolute marvel you are dear lady Fay ... I could smell, taste...
November 29th, 2021 04:35 - What Ghost! (Goldfinch60)
a super spectral post very ghouled indeed ............... N :)
November 29th, 2021 03:15 - Who Among Us? (Garth Rakumakoe)
filled to overflowing with sad and bitter truths ... and that summative...
November 28th, 2021 15:09 - Happy Diwali 2021 (SureshG)
I know I\'m late in getting here .. but hey .. your message reads FAB...
November 28th, 2021 15:06 - The king, his kingdom and its fiefdom (Spilleronsheet)
Gadzooks .. a fascinating account of kings & fiefs .. you can beat an egg,...
November 28th, 2021 15:01 - Mr Mcintosh (Paul Bell)
you are fast becoming the master of this type of post .. you have quite...
November 28th, 2021 14:25 - bear faced lies (Dusk arising)
this is nothing like I thought it might be from the title .. it was...
November 28th, 2021 14:06 - Sunday Shores (Fay Slimm.)
This is superb Fay ... I could read it over and over and not find any...
November 28th, 2021 14:00 - Holiday (Lorna)
I love this .. great wordswomanship & an altogether keen eye for ah\'hem...
November 28th, 2021 13:54 - Kingdom of the King (Orchidee)
I like the idea behind this .. lets keep our fingers crossed ..
November 28th, 2021 13:49 - I Wrote Of You (Garth Rakumakoe)
reads like a dream .. quite beautiful sir .. no idea why I aint been...
November 27th, 2021 13:28 - On My Mind (Lorna)
yes indeed .. no two ways about it .. absolutely stunning ...........
November 27th, 2021 13:21 - Inside Out (Garth Rakumakoe)
I thought I left my thoughts on \'Inside Out\' yesterday when I first...
November 27th, 2021 13:18 - Loves First Kiss - A Villanelle (Dove)
I just popped back to check whether your villanelle could stand up to...
November 27th, 2021 13:11 - Lovely Rainbows (Dove)
this is a terribly lovely little whimsey my Dove .. hope you are gonna...
November 27th, 2021 13:07 - johannes sabastian WOOF (Dusk arising)
the whole worlds gone crazy ......... maybe I can start making some real...
November 27th, 2021 12:31 - Balance your nature. (Kitty the naughty poet)
.... seriously enjoyed no end, from end to end ..................... N
November 27th, 2021 07:35 - Heaven and Hell (Paul Bell)
another great tale told terribly well and what\'s more, I defy anyone to...
November 27th, 2021 07:32 - Exchange (Fay Slimm.)
what could possibly be better than that ... said it all so she has .......
November 27th, 2021 05:11 - Thankful Turning (Orchidee)
there is something I quite like about this Mr. O ... maybe the fact it has...
November 27th, 2021 04:17 - From Experience. (Goldfinch60)
You can beat and egg and you can beat a drum ... Bang on my friend ..
November 27th, 2021 04:05 - upon midnight (Dusk arising)
sadly ... they just dont get much better than this .. N
November 26th, 2021 15:06 - Love and Battle in the North (Nicholas Browning)
a tale told terribly well .. write on sir ..
November 26th, 2021 14:58 - Inside Out (Garth Rakumakoe)
Be very proud of these words, now fixed in time & dated this 26th day...
November 26th, 2021 11:08 - Free at last.......... (Doggerel Dave)
how can this not be liked, maybe just a little bit ... bless ... cabin...
November 26th, 2021 11:02 - Voiceless (Fay Slimm.)
this is so seriously good Fay .. the previously unspoken, unrecorded yet...
November 26th, 2021 04:02 - Resting Light on a Wing and Prayer (Neville)
...... then I\'m gonna double thank you .. hope you like the more recently...
November 26th, 2021 03:48 - I wonder (Spilleronsheet)
my word my friend .. it seems we think similarly ... my mental muscle is...
November 26th, 2021 03:46 - Saving Scenes (Orchidee)
I have travelled quite extensively but I have never felt so poorly as I...
November 26th, 2021 02:58 - Only if (Spilleronsheet)
I hope you dont publicise the inspiration or reason behind these...
November 25th, 2021 17:14 - Anchored (Fay Slimm.)
I first read this as I walked along the coast road .. tell a lie, I was...
November 25th, 2021 11:17 - The Tele-visions In Their Televisions (Garth Rakumakoe)
you should pen another along similar lines & we could make it into a...
November 25th, 2021 05:18 - a little of England (Dusk arising)
yep .. that\'s got me all seasonally nostalgified ... roll over winter...
November 25th, 2021 05:13 - Thanksgiving Tale (Orchidee)
.. sometime, you can be such a hoot
not sure whether you are trying to...
November 25th, 2021 03:16 - Solitude Acrostic (Goldfinch60)
quite possibly the most stand alone acrostic I\'ve come across in a very...
November 25th, 2021 03:05 - Heed, Hope, Help (Orchidee)
Ah\' the three H\'s .. similar to mine .. Health, Happiness &...
November 24th, 2021 08:54 - Unfathomed (Fay Slimm.)
if this is what you call playing with words, then I would dearly love to...
November 24th, 2021 08:49 - Poor Woman (Garth Rakumakoe)
a sad tale told so terribly well .. and held my attention from beginning...
November 24th, 2021 08:25 - the great healer (Dusk arising)
let the muse rest a while longer and recuperate .. I like what\'s going...
November 24th, 2021 04:09 - Lost Worries. (Goldfinch60)
what can one say except well observed my friend and of course, read on...
November 24th, 2021 03:19 - First meeting (Spilleronsheet)
this has more than just a ring of truth to its name & what a wonderful...
November 23rd, 2021 16:39
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