Comments on community poems by Neville
- Invited (Fay Slimm.)
you are indeed the mistress of subtle and tasteful erotica my lady .....
July 31st, 2022 08:13 - Fall (Autumn) (MendedFences27)
you can beat an egg, a carpet and a drum ..
but you sure can\'t beat...
July 31st, 2022 01:57 - Sheep Security (Orchidee)
sheep dogs and electric fences both worked in my day :)
July 31st, 2022 01:52 - I don’t see color (KRWonder)
I like the cut of your jib my friend .. a neat poem, a fine...
July 30th, 2022 16:26 - Storm Stilled (Orchidee)
I started to feel sea-sick part way through .. so shall reserve my...
July 30th, 2022 08:24 - Tenderness (MendedFences27)
.................. this is even ..................
more beautiful than...
July 30th, 2022 08:16 - Lunacy (Fay Slimm.)
No one in their write mind would either care or dare to argue with you...
July 30th, 2022 08:12 - Just a Dream (MendedFences27)
I\'m with you Phil & truly sir ... Amen
July 29th, 2022 13:28 - Salvation Sure (Orchidee)
I feel certain that this is a hymn poem in 6.6.8.6 format .. unless of...
July 29th, 2022 13:23 - Edge of sorrow and love (Jerry Reynolds)
wot else is a metaphor for eh\' very cleva & very much enjoyed mate...
July 29th, 2022 10:59 - freight train (Dusk arising)
what a bluesy little number this turned out to be .. and my word sir, I...
July 29th, 2022 07:47 - One Patch (Fay Slimm.)
I think I caught a glimpse of it too ..
delightful and truly...
July 29th, 2022 03:42 - Laughter And Sleep. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m gonna try & put your last four lines to the test the next time I\'m...
July 29th, 2022 03:07 - Welcome Worship (Orchidee)
Don\'t ya just love them joyful noises Mr. O :)
July 28th, 2022 13:32 - Somewhere (Fay Slimm.)
poetry personified my dear lady Fay x
July 28th, 2022 06:27 - if i were a flower (Dusk arising)
I being a lover of words and indeed of satire and truth am mightily...
July 28th, 2022 03:39 - home (Arqios)
yet sadly, home is all too often where the hurt is...
July 28th, 2022 03:19 - Behind That Navajo Smile (Neville)
.................................. true
July 28th, 2022 03:15 - Fishing (Jerry Reynolds)
Now ya talkin my kinda language Jez
and if you can make room for a...
July 27th, 2022 16:06 - silent glow (Arqios)
I seriously hope that this little work of poetic art gets all the...
July 27th, 2022 09:36 - So Much (Fay Slimm.)
there be not a single thing here that\'s not to like .. on the contrary,...
July 27th, 2022 09:33 - there were shadows (Dusk arising)
the ability to convey such wistfulness is rarely encountered in so few...
July 27th, 2022 03:50 - Pleasant Prospects (Orchidee)
one has gotta have prospects, otherwise, what\'s the point in...
July 27th, 2022 03:34 - Strange Dream. (Goldfinch60)
Blimey, sounds like someone slipped an acid tab in ya cocoa .. Just you...
July 27th, 2022 01:47 - Someday (Paul Bell)
I\'m bloomin glad I\'m not the only one .. life is full of em isn\'t it...
July 26th, 2022 10:24 - Life In The Light (Orchidee)
no one wants to be kept in the dark surely...
July 26th, 2022 07:00 - Happenings (Fay Slimm.)
Whilst I so hope we are still in the very depths of mid-summer .. Your...
July 26th, 2022 04:02 - the love years (Dusk arising)
I felt every single bloomin well placed word sir ..
Not only can I...
July 26th, 2022 03:15 - The Concert Ends Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Bravo sir .. I imagine at least a dozen encore\'s...
July 26th, 2022 03:09 - days of morphine sulphate (Dusk arising)
My thoughts are with you DA & no kidding...
July 25th, 2022 13:06 - Hold My Hand (Bella Shepard)
Now this is what we call a love poem round these parts .. it feels to...
July 25th, 2022 09:35 - Summer Birds (Jerry Reynolds)
I like it Jez, I like it a lot sir ......... N :)
July 25th, 2022 09:31 - Growing In Graces (Orchidee)
it looks like you have ticked all of the hymn poem tick boxes Orchidee...
July 25th, 2022 09:29 - Deadly Intent. (Fay Slimm.)
If I could be anything other than me, I would probably wish to be a...
July 25th, 2022 07:50 - Irony (Bella Shepard)
I\'m write behind you all the way Bella .. this is a little gem .....
July 25th, 2022 03:12 - Summer Day (Jerry Reynolds)
you can beat an egg & a root, but you can\'t beat a tomato :)
July 25th, 2022 03:01 - Summer Moon (Arqios)
this is so cool crypticbard it would be sheer lunacy to suggest...
July 25th, 2022 02:57 - Acorns at fall (Spilleronsheet)
Terrific title
Fantastic four stanzas - maybe to match the four...
July 24th, 2022 12:00 - Does sky have space ? (Spilleronsheet)
You ask a series of 64 billion dollar questions dear spills .. whether...
July 24th, 2022 11:54 - Breathless (Dove)
Hey JK you are indeed the mistress of the villanelle .. which of...
July 24th, 2022 02:08 - Peace Possible (Orchidee)
I do so love your title Mr. O and I aint talking Mr. neither .. I also...
July 24th, 2022 02:00 - Let’s Touch (Dove)
I\'m back for a second helping .. and it tastes just as good as the...
July 24th, 2022 01:03 - Plethora (Fay Slimm.)
How can I resist my lady Fay .. she knocks Juicy Lucy outa the way ......
July 24th, 2022 00:56 - One Thing (Orchidee)
and another thing he said sheepishly when too many lambs, sheep n ewes...
July 23rd, 2022 10:16 - Recalled, Remembered, Redeemed (Orchidee)
you have got this hymn poem thing in the proverbial bag sir & no...
July 23rd, 2022 02:11 - Gulmohur Spring (Thinkerbell)
a delightful introduction to your ink dear think :) Neville
July 23rd, 2022 02:06 - Joy To All. (Goldfinch60)
Good luck this evening squire .. and the same to the rest of the choir...
July 23rd, 2022 01:12 - Calmness Into Reality. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m with you all the way sir Andy .. I doubt if their is a single...
July 23rd, 2022 01:09 - The Music Wraps Around Me (Bella Shepard)
I simply dont know what on earth we would do without it .. people...
July 22nd, 2022 17:02 - Knowingly (Fay Slimm.)
I know that ache & know it well .. take this longing from my tongue,...
July 22nd, 2022 16:50 - Temporal And Timeless (Orchidee)
Aye lad, tis grim up north .......... :)
July 21st, 2022 16:26 - Inbringing (Fay Slimm.)
what a picture you have poemed here dear Fay .. a veritable...
July 21st, 2022 12:00 - I Dreamt (Bella Shepard)
now there\'s a conundrum and a predicament for ya ..
and it all...
July 21st, 2022 11:29 - My first time (AlitaOpal)
this is a good example of why I fell in love with poetry .. and what a...
July 20th, 2022 14:44 - Love\'s Odour (Fay Slimm.)
Powerful, punchy and probably one of the most poignant poems I have had...
July 20th, 2022 06:40 - Reigning Ruler (Orchidee)
I\'ve heard of raining cat\'s n dogs but reigning rulers must surely be...
July 20th, 2022 03:22 - Leaky Day. (Goldfinch60)
I heart-warming reflection indeed sir .. I hear it happens as one gets...
July 20th, 2022 02:53 - Windfalls (Fay Slimm.)
mine are going to be turned into cider before they drop this year .....
July 19th, 2022 07:44 - Refreshing Rains (Orchidee)
this could be most refreshing .. just add some bubbles :)
July 19th, 2022 04:02 - RAINBOW (Thekkinkkattil)
You pose and poem a difficult question .. all beautiful in their own...
July 19th, 2022 03:55 - My Eyes Are Closed (Bella Shepard)
a real treat at the end of a very long day .. very much enjoyed Bell...
July 18th, 2022 16:24 - King Of His Kingdom (Orchidee)
as far as hymn poems are concerned on a hot day, this is cool :)
July 18th, 2022 07:14 - Our Kelly (Paul Bell)
I sincerely hope every single MPS participant, regardless of whether...
July 18th, 2022 05:46 - Why, write? (L. B. Mek)
there shall always be blank pages, just waiting ..
and those of us...
July 18th, 2022 05:40 - This Day. (Fay Slimm.)
I know I must read like a stuck record must sound, but when it comes...
July 18th, 2022 05:30 - The Rhymester (Arqios)
awesome on it\'s own would be both an injustice and an understatement,...
July 18th, 2022 03:18 - Bewitched (Dove)
succinct & to the point .. in effect, superb...
July 17th, 2022 16:24 - Once Upon a Downing Street (Neville)
July 17th, 2022 12:16 - To Ignorance (Bella Shepard)
Say it like it is why dont\'cha .. amazingly articulated & I...
July 17th, 2022 12:15 - Hot or Wot? (Doggerel Dave)
it\'s a funny old world, innit sir .. but we\'ve only got ourselves to...
July 17th, 2022 12:08 - From Blindness To Sight (Orchidee)
Good old Blind Bartimaeus, I bet he never thought he would see the day...
July 17th, 2022 12:04 - Boisterous (Fay Slimm.)
it\'s all very cool on a hot summers day but that summative and...
July 17th, 2022 11:59 - The Little Yellow Pill (Paul Bell)
dont listen to the guy that say\'s stick it up ya arse .. they all...
July 17th, 2022 11:56 - Love And Nature. (Goldfinch60)
this ticks all the write boxes Andy ..
July 17th, 2022 02:09 - Let’s Touch (Dove)
A little treat for all your fans out here I see, so thank you for the...
July 17th, 2022 01:01 - What Beauty I found (Dove)
a splendiferous sonnet, if indeed ever there was .........unashamedly...
July 17th, 2022 00:53 - Battle (Fay Slimm.)
I guess if there was ever such a word as \'wordsmithess\' .. you would...
July 17th, 2022 00:45 - Swan Lake (Bella Shepard)
What an outstanding poem you have crafted here Bella .. You have without...
July 17th, 2022 00:35 - At Specsavers. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ... even a prophet couldn\'t have seen this coming .. I wonder, on ya...
July 16th, 2022 03:16 - Reasons (Fay Slimm.)
Brulee Bru Bruiser Parsley Parsnip Pettitt say\'s it\'s a ruff tuff...
July 15th, 2022 12:06 - Certainty (Bella Shepard)
You seem absolutely sure of yourself .. & who am I to argue .....
July 15th, 2022 11:53 - Cold heart (Spilleronsheet)
I swear to the great architect of the universe .. A shiver ran up and...
July 15th, 2022 02:59 - Please Tell Me It\'s Raining (MendedFences27)
This is terrible Phil .. terribly well thought out, terribly well...
July 15th, 2022 01:09 - Natures Artwork. (Goldfinch60)
No matter how often we each witness it and in it\'s many forms, you just...
July 15th, 2022 01:02 - When Trees Go To Sleep (Bella Shepard)
Had my visit been more timely, I would probably not be here right now...
July 14th, 2022 15:24 - The Lone Cyclist (Bella Shepard)
It may have taken me a while to get here, but the journey has been...
July 14th, 2022 12:20 - Gaining Relief (Fay Slimm.)
animal husbandry is so very important isn\'t it .. I loved todays...
July 14th, 2022 11:53 - Andy’s New Car (Doggerel Dave)
sounds about write ... more than merely chucklworthy mate .. but...
July 14th, 2022 11:47 - Cutting Up (Orchidee)
I kinda liked the sentiment behind this Mr. O .. it was a kind thought...
July 14th, 2022 11:21 - Lifes little trip (Poetic Dan)
Sadly, I like this Dan, very much enjoyed sir .. Glad you didn\'t keep...
July 14th, 2022 02:34 - Ode to My Brain (Bella Shepard)
I think .. no, I am absolutely convinced that you have just nailed our...
July 13th, 2022 15:28 - Humpty Dumpty (Paul Bell)
you can beat an egg, but nothing beats blowing one up ... a cracking...
July 13th, 2022 08:51 - Until Day (Fay Slimm.)
I knew she was good, but here she has excelled herself ...
this is...
July 13th, 2022 08:33 - Heim- / Fern- weh (Draven)
Hello again my lovely Draven, this is seriously a really lovely poem...
July 13th, 2022 08:25 - Self-Denial Service (Orchidee)
I can\'t deny it Mr. O .. this is indeed a hymn poem ...................
July 13th, 2022 02:26 - Goodbye Furry Friend (Orchidee)
Please accept my sincere condolences Steven, its never nice when one...
July 13th, 2022 02:19 - Into The New Day. (Goldfinch60)
Upon my very word sir, when they were dishing out optimism, you somehow...
July 13th, 2022 00:59 - Catch (Fay Slimm.)
splendiferous was just one of the many neogilisms that sprang to this...
July 12th, 2022 23:43 - Beauty Upon The Sea (Dove)
There is a familiar taste to this particular poem .. But every now and...
July 12th, 2022 08:07 - History it is Not (Part two) (Doggerel Dave)
I have a feeling and a corresponding fear that there will always be wars...
July 12th, 2022 03:20
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