Comments on community poems by Neville
- Future (Jerry Reynolds)
One of the brightest and most accurate reflections seen in a very long...
September 9th, 2022 11:09 - Abating (Fay Slimm.)
I note that there are some lines herein that will without doubt now be...
September 9th, 2022 04:37 - Royal Rulership (Orchidee)
With much regret, the Queen is dead ..
September 9th, 2022 02:31 - A Fragment (Jarcher54)
in view of you bumping into me earlier, whether intentionally or by...
September 9th, 2022 02:28 - Sun Sighted but Otherwise Unassuming (Neville)
I may be unassuming, but I assure you, I still have my baby blue eyes .....
September 9th, 2022 02:22 - Autumnal ceremony (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
quite possibly my favourite season so well portrayed in all of her...
September 8th, 2022 15:09 - Willows Table (Jerry Reynolds)
I\'m a great fan of small & this sure does it for me ... Neville :)
September 6th, 2022 10:44 - This Time (Fay Slimm.)
nowt short of splendid say\'s I .. x
September 6th, 2022 10:38 - Proclaiming Promises (Orchidee)
never proclaim a promise you can not keep is one hell of a motto I...
September 6th, 2022 10:34 - starlight (Dusk arising)
I reckon as long as one is able to see beyond the glare and catch just...
September 6th, 2022 05:42 - no matter (SureshG)
as a matter of fact, they just don\'t get much better than this my...
September 5th, 2022 13:34 - The Steel Fortress (Bella Shepard)
such a sobering thought .. indeed I doubt I will ever forget this...
September 5th, 2022 13:27 - Words of Heart (Dr. Soma)
I can feel where you are coming from my new found literary friend .....
September 4th, 2022 03:58 - Burning Roses (MendedFences27)
love can be bloody brutal sometimes ..
you sir Phil are the master of...
September 4th, 2022 03:56 - I want You! (Shaa)
what a great introduction to your ink ..
Neville :)
September 4th, 2022 03:52 - Duet (Fay Slimm.)
perfectly poemed .. who needs a camera or a tape recorder these days...
September 4th, 2022 03:49 - Salvation Shown (Orchidee)
I am sure this is a fine hymnal poem :)
September 4th, 2022 03:43 - We Met On A Crossing. (Goldfinch60)
makes perfect sense in every sense .. a fine bit of poetry dear golden...
September 4th, 2022 03:41 - such romance as rests within (Dusk arising)
mighty good & subsequently very mulchly enjoyed ........... N :)
September 4th, 2022 03:38 - Servant Scenarios (Orchidee)
a fine hymn poem Mr. O :)
September 2nd, 2022 13:11 - Abandon (Fay Slimm.)
I got turned on by the first stanza .. and by the end of the fourth, I...
September 2nd, 2022 13:07 - Experience. (Goldfinch60)
one might well argue that experience is the mother of knowledge .....
September 2nd, 2022 02:35 - Love So Deep (MendedFences27)
I would say a story wrapped securely within a prose poem .. a compelling...
September 2nd, 2022 02:27 - Lamps (Screaming goat. (New and Improved))
I don\'t have a clue, but that doesn\'t mean a great deal .. I don\'t...
September 1st, 2022 13:17 - Girls (Fay Slimm.)
that\'s girls well n truly nailed for ya ..
I wonder who did the...
September 1st, 2022 12:42 - Light-Life (Orchidee)
a fine hymn poem Mr. O :)
September 1st, 2022 06:30 - Fiery Fred. (Goldfinch60)
I could never get my head around cricked .. Owzatt I hear you reply,...
September 1st, 2022 02:32 - Salvation Surety (Orchidee)
........... ☔☔☔do you like purple mushrooms Mr. O ......... :) ☔...
August 31st, 2022 10:38 - Frenzy (Fay Slimm.)
I first read this while getting ready to visit my GP this mane and...
August 31st, 2022 10:24 - Innocence. (Goldfinch60)
what an absolute treat of an observation, and now, well wrapped for...
August 31st, 2022 02:25 - Nature (Brycycle)
This is a little gem .. and very much enjoyed .. it\'s too late to...
August 30th, 2022 15:09 - [no title] (Brycycle)
sometimes, no title is the best title .. and in this case, I seriously...
August 30th, 2022 15:05 - Touch the non-existence (SureshG)
every now and zen .. although on increasingly rare occasions, certain...
August 30th, 2022 13:06 - Yearlong (MendedFences27)
this has more than just a hint of an autobiographical flavour to it .....
August 30th, 2022 12:54 - Her (Fay Slimm.)
I am almost too ashamed to suggest how much I enjoyed this poem .. and...
August 30th, 2022 03:34 - Indispensable People. (Goldfinch60)
as we journey through life, we inevitably meet all sorts .. and I ant...
August 30th, 2022 01:45 - Light Leading (Orchidee)
you can beat an egg and a drum but you just can\'t beat a bit of light...
August 30th, 2022 01:39 - This Should be Obvious… (Doggerel Dave)
looks like you may well have cracked it Dave ..
August 30th, 2022 01:33 - Resignation To Life. (Goldfinch60)
a happy lady and a brave soul in the making ..
August 29th, 2022 03:02 - Renewal (Fay Slimm.)
Now that, is what we call poetry around here...
August 29th, 2022 02:58 - Celebration Certainties (Orchidee)
you are without any doubt the most prolific hymn poem composer/poet I...
August 29th, 2022 02:45 - Cruel Rejection (Aradhya)
ouch .. I bet that memory still hurts now & then .. but bloomin well...
August 28th, 2022 03:12 - Peace In Music. (Goldfinch60)
that\'s music for ya .................. N
August 28th, 2022 03:05 - Happy Together (Bella Shepard)
You just brought music to my ears .. I can totally relate to every word...
August 28th, 2022 02:09 - Charlotte. (Paul Bell)
she\'s probably just misunderstood :)
August 28th, 2022 01:53 - hoops (Dusk arising)
if this is autobiographical, you have my utmost respect ..
if it is...
August 28th, 2022 01:45 - Restored (Fay Slimm.)
this is indeed verily goodsome and then some my lady ... x
August 28th, 2022 01:33 - The Final Over. (Goldfinch60)
Owzat .. there are some things one never forgets .. I bet you were...
August 27th, 2022 03:03 - Fragrance of kindness (Aradhya)
this makes perfect scents .. my eyes, heart and nose have insisted I...
August 27th, 2022 01:00 - To the Memories II (Aradhya)
I found this little bit of brevity intriguing .. clearly something to...
August 27th, 2022 00:55 - I\'D SEEN (Osei Zion)
a compelling introduction to your ink .. I am sure I shall visit more of...
August 27th, 2022 00:46 - Conceding (Fay Slimm.)
magnificent in its entirety .. but my word, that fourth stanza is...
August 26th, 2022 06:57 - Sharing Service (Orchidee)
wash a foot .. he asked aloud having misplaced his teef ... twelve...
August 26th, 2022 06:51 - September (Dusk arising)
Outstanding in every poetic sense of the word .. you just nailed my...
August 26th, 2022 06:45 - Flowers bloom from Time to Time (Aradhya)
I am so glad you found me today my friend, otherwise, I may not have...
August 26th, 2022 06:02 - Three Things. (Goldfinch60)
quite simply perfect in the clarity of its profoundness ............
August 26th, 2022 02:33 - Chatterton\'s redress (Arqios)
I could read this all day ..
near perfect in my humble opinion .....
August 26th, 2022 02:28 - Musing Missive (Orchidee)
unless I am mistaken, I imagine this will be a missive hit with your...
August 26th, 2022 02:22 - Appetite (Fay Slimm.)
enjoyed over breakfast, before work & I feel sure it will be enjoyed...
August 26th, 2022 02:14 - One drink down (MendedFences27)
the girls have got you sussed Phil .. ... I agree entirely with the...
August 24th, 2022 11:31 - Sweet Sensuality (Fay Slimm.)
This is so good and for so many reasons that I myself hold so very...
August 24th, 2022 05:18 - Flourishing Favourably (Orchidee)
I like the word flourish ............. one could say I favour it...
August 24th, 2022 01:40 - Uncaged Birds. (Goldfinch60)
Keeping a bird in a cage, is an outrage
how times do change though...
August 24th, 2022 01:14 - Crusin\' to reality (MendedFences27)
I know I have said it before .. but you have such a keen eye Phil .....
August 24th, 2022 01:04 - Ohhhh Ch...... (Orchidee)
deviations are always much appreciated sir and this deviant is no...
August 22nd, 2022 05:20 - Winter Loneliness (MendedFences27)
Hey Phil, what\'s a metaphor if you aint gonna use it well .. Used...
August 22nd, 2022 05:17 - -Symphonic sadness- (Dean langmuir)
If I was able to award you full marks, then I most surely would .....
August 22nd, 2022 05:13 - The string that pulls back (Spilleronsheet)
I too consider this to be one of your most powerful and hard hitting...
August 22nd, 2022 05:02 - Abundance (Fay Slimm.)
Poetic tributes to this, the most golden of seasons just dont get any...
August 21st, 2022 04:40 - Every Life is a Story (Bella Shepard)
this reads like a seamless marriage between a whimsey & a universal...
August 21st, 2022 03:53 - Being Human (Bella Shepard)
my word, you are so very write & true .. just wish my head popped like...
August 21st, 2022 03:46 - Changes In Time. (Goldfinch60)
that\'s the kind of observation and ensuing thought that would likely...
August 19th, 2022 02:57 - Think On These Things (Orchidee)
please refrain from trying to make any tuneful utterances .. or we shall...
August 18th, 2022 12:57 - Covert (Fay Slimm.)
Hue would have thought it possible to capture so many colours and...
August 18th, 2022 10:49 - Epitaph for a PC (Doggerel Dave)
Been there done that and worn the Tee shirt out .. glad I\'m not the...
August 18th, 2022 03:05 - Fresh Bread. (Goldfinch60)
you can beat an egg etc etc, but you just can\'t beat fresh home made...
August 18th, 2022 03:00 - Mad Musings With Fido (Orchidee)
what is it they say about mad dogs and Englishmen .. N :)
August 18th, 2022 02:50 - Happenings (Fay Slimm.)
This is nothing short of splendid ... x
August 17th, 2022 15:57 - My Beloved Ziggy (Dove)
I am so sorry to learn of your sad loss my friend...
August 17th, 2022 08:04 - Ruined By Heat. (Goldfinch60)
I normally love it when the temperature rises .. but one can have too...
August 12th, 2022 04:14 - Sticky Hands and Grape Juice Smiles (Bella Shepard)
I just knew from the delicious title and even before opening the page...
August 12th, 2022 04:10 - What We Were (Fay Slimm.)
this is not only quite brill .. but it is spooky too dont\'cha think...
August 11th, 2022 10:18 - surface tension (Dusk arising)
a little more than somewhat perfectly postulated my friend...
August 11th, 2022 10:04 - Strange Sight. (Goldfinch60)
takes ya back some doesn\'t it GF60
August 10th, 2022 07:20 - In Life (Bella Shepard)
My word, now that really is the million dollar question .. Can I press...
August 10th, 2022 07:10 - Woof - cats! (Orchidee)
I\'m much more a dog kinda guy myself .. But you know I just love it...
August 10th, 2022 07:06 - Waiting Tables (MendedFences27)
It all makes perfect sense to me .. Write on Phil ........................
August 10th, 2022 07:03 - We\'re Here..... (Doggerel Dave)
Each to their own I say .. and as long as no one gets hurt along the...
August 10th, 2022 07:00 - Led By The Light (Orchidee)
I kinda like what Fay said :)
August 4th, 2022 08:56 - Felt Care (Fay Slimm.)
I was one o them raised to believe a handshake must be delivered firmly...
August 3rd, 2022 08:47 - Her Daddies Old Grey Chevrolet (Neville)
even with full unequivocal mutual consent and a shared enthusiasm for...
August 3rd, 2022 07:41 - -me and my pen- (Dean langmuir)
existentialism rules OK .. ink well spent sir & truly...
August 3rd, 2022 02:11 - Harry Shalgosky. (Goldfinch60)
Good old Harry & may his memory long be fondly remembered ..
August 3rd, 2022 02:07 - Those Days (Fay Slimm.)
which reminds me, I need to buy another pillow ..
joking aside,...
August 2nd, 2022 11:29 - Excellent Exhortings (Orchidee)
Lost for words ................... I am :)
August 2nd, 2022 09:05 - Through The Mist. (Goldfinch60)
very atmospheric sir if you dont mind me saying so .. and your metaphors...
August 2nd, 2022 01:28 - GOODNIGHT MY LOVER (Manny Jordan)
Here\'s a tip from an old fella to a young man ..
Never go to sleep...
August 1st, 2022 07:27 - Satisfaction (Fay Slimm.)
there is absolutely nothing here not to absolutely love...
August 1st, 2022 07:23 - Seven (MendedFences27)
This was no simple journey you took this reader on MF27 ..
This was...
August 1st, 2022 03:25 - Sometimes (Bella Shepard)
Whose gonna argue with this little gem .. packed with good old honest...
July 31st, 2022 16:43
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