Comments on community poems by Neville
- Mermaid- Acrostic (Dove)
I was hooked from the off ... Never seen a quadruple acrostic before .....
January 3rd, 2022 09:27 - Crystalline (Draven)
& in that moment, the truth is crystalised ............ it dont take a...
January 3rd, 2022 09:22 - Yore (Draven)
this was simply crying out to be writ, posted & read ................ ...
January 3rd, 2022 09:19 - Freedom (Paul Bell)
Now dont that feel so much better...
December 31st, 2021 18:07 - Untitled - LV (SureshG)
show off ... regardless .................. :)
December 31st, 2021 18:05 - Sing-Song Silliness (Orchidee)
I take it this is a ruff draft from one who is seriously barking...
December 31st, 2021 15:07 - New Depths (Fay Slimm.)
one has to look more than just closely to see beyond the tip...
December 31st, 2021 09:25 - destiny (Dusk arising)
No matter how or which way I look at it, I can\'t fault this .....
December 31st, 2021 09:22 - Respect. (Goldfinch60)
it costs nowt does it .. respect, I mean .......... clearly well noted...
December 31st, 2021 04:37 - Mind Your Thoughts (Rozina)
once again, you are absolutely write ..
terrifying I imagine...
December 31st, 2021 04:35 - Arousal (Fay Slimm.)
its no accident that I found these words by accident, is it ... one...
December 30th, 2021 18:00 - Untitled - LIV (SureshG)
simply perfect ... of course ..
and knowing too there is...
December 30th, 2021 10:48 - Ire (Draven)
just remember, if enough people bang their heads against the wall .....
December 30th, 2021 09:45 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (22 & 23) (Michael Edwards)
splendid sir M ... keep em coming ..
I am firmly in your corner...
December 30th, 2021 05:23 - Deep In Thought (FallenAngel1🕊)
.. a most original concept encapsulated within a most profound idiom...
December 30th, 2021 05:19 - the educators (Dusk arising)
I take my hat off to you DA .. there are some words simply crying to be...
December 30th, 2021 05:09 - Yin and Yang (Rozina)
I have absolutely no idea how I managed to miss this little...
December 30th, 2021 05:05 - White Icing (Fay Slimm.)
snow blindingly brilliant Ms Slimm .. as ever...
December 30th, 2021 05:01 - Raining In My Heart. (Goldfinch60)
I remember that day my golden friend .. and my thoughts are with you...
December 30th, 2021 04:57 - Birth Blessed (Orchidee)
and a Very Christmas to you too
December 30th, 2021 04:54 - Singing In The Bar. (Goldfinch60)
Quite write too sir .. Not lost and neither are they forgotten ............
December 29th, 2021 05:11 - Ageing (Rozina)
a lovely message wrapped & held fast in a real cuddle of a poem .......
December 29th, 2021 05:03 - though tears (Dusk arising)
to place my own thoughts here is but an honour sir & all mine...
December 28th, 2021 13:16 - Winding Down (Fay Slimm.)
glad you re-posted, there is something a little special about this .. I...
December 28th, 2021 13:11 - Missing Moonlight (Dove)
Delightful Dove ... and I rays me glass to you with best wishes for...
December 28th, 2021 13:04 - A disease called overthinking (Spilleronsheet)
you know its good when one\'s mental muscle begs for mercy & submits...
December 28th, 2021 13:00 - Suffering Scene (Orchidee)
just can\'t beat a bit o dark n sad Mr. O
... reads like an out of...
December 28th, 2021 12:56 - Battlefields (Poetic Dan)
I dare not go against the flow .. I must just say, this is simply too...
December 27th, 2021 05:28 - To Rhyme Or Not To Rhyme (Rozina)
you ask a perfectly valid question encapsulated so well
within the...
December 27th, 2021 05:24 - Christmas Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
This little gem just made my eyes water involuntarily … I am seriously...
December 26th, 2021 16:53 - Stephen\'s Story (Orchidee)
I immediately thought you had written this with yourself in mind...
December 26th, 2021 13:38 - Greetings (Fay Slimm.)
and back at you Fay with bells on :)
December 26th, 2021 13:36 - HAPPY HOLIDAYS (Laura🌻)
lovely my friend ... and each sentiment back at you & swiftly so :) 🌻
December 26th, 2021 13:00 - Bag For Life. (Paul Bell)
I am almost ashamed to admit just how much I enjoyed these words …...
December 26th, 2021 07:16 - blackness of night (Dusk arising)
Simply splendid DA .., my bag entirely sir & here’s to many more...
December 26th, 2021 07:11 - Time a slave or master (Spilleronsheet)
I wish I had an answer but you pose such an age old question, I fear I...
December 25th, 2021 03:01 - Sheep or blacksheep (Spilleronsheet)
I am proud to be the black sheep in a flock of polar opposites …....
December 25th, 2021 03:01 - Sheep or blacksheep (Spilleronsheet)
I am proud to be the black sheep in a flock of polar opposites …....
December 24th, 2021 16:53 - FEARS (Rozina)
I must confess, I really enjoyed my visit here … N 😎👍
December 24th, 2021 16:38 - Time a slave or master (Spilleronsheet)
I wish I had an answer but you pose such an age old question, I fear I...
December 24th, 2021 16:33 - Future Of Light (Goldfinch60)
My guess is we would be lost without it sir 👍
December 24th, 2021 16:28 - A MERRY CHRISTMAS (Michael Edwards)
and back at ya Michael .. with bells on sir...
December 23rd, 2021 14:10 - torn but not forgotten (Dusk arising)
well worthy of a re-post mate ... might I suggest an annual airing...
December 23rd, 2021 14:07 - Wax (Draven)
sh ... it happens to the best of us ... enjoyed by me ...
December 23rd, 2021 14:03 - Flames (Draven)
Fire is a good friend .. but an absolute bugger of a foe...
December 23rd, 2021 14:00 - Benedictus Bestowal (Orchidee)
this must surely rank among your epic xmas hymn poems or thereabouts...
December 23rd, 2021 13:55 - The Almost Heard (Fay Slimm.)
how exquisitely write you are again today my dear lady Fay...
December 23rd, 2021 13:50 - My Handbag is a Rucksack / Elegance is an attitude (Solar Impulse_1912)
You are so darn write my friend .. elegance is indeed an attitude .. a...
December 23rd, 2021 05:30 - Genes And Traits (Rozina)
Yes indeed, very well said Roz .. these words deserve to be seen by so...
December 23rd, 2021 02:23 - Happy Birthday Again Chet. (Goldfinch60)
far too may people hold far too many negative assumptions about those...
December 23rd, 2021 02:19 - Examples Elicited (Orchidee)
to be or not to be, that is the question .. I think given the options ...
December 22nd, 2021 11:26 - velvet (Dusk arising)
my guess is we were looking up at the very same sky & maybe, even at the...
December 22nd, 2021 11:17 - In Motion (Fay Slimm.)
one might very easily drown here & willingly...
December 22nd, 2021 11:14 - What A Wonderful Day I Had Had. (Goldfinch60)
I\'ve said it before but your positivity is positively positive +...
December 22nd, 2021 03:44 - Touch A Leaf, Hug A Tree (Garth Rakumakoe)
I am very much liking these words of yours too Garth...
December 21st, 2021 17:09 - Midwinter (Draven)
Delightful Draven .. your poem that is .. you are too of course, but...
December 21st, 2021 11:37 - My Friend (Fay Slimm.)
Fur wrapped luverlyness .... you can beat an egg, but ya can\'t beat a...
December 21st, 2021 11:32 - Emmanuel Expressed (Orchidee)
wasn\'t Emmanuel dubble X rated or summat .............................
December 21st, 2021 11:12 - I\'m Horrible To Me...... (Orchidee)
Like I have said before Mr. O .. I love it when you deviate ... oh\' your...
December 21st, 2021 04:46 - Our Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
Go on, bang my drum why dont\'cha .. well inked & indeed otherwise true...
December 21st, 2021 04:27 - A Folk Song (Coyote)
quite simply brilliant sir .. or to put it another way .. simply quite...
December 21st, 2021 04:23 - To the cheers I hold (Spilleronsheet)
this is not only epic & awesome .. it should also be adopted as the...
December 21st, 2021 04:17 - WHAT DID YOU SAY? (Rozina)
Ha ... I know precisely wot you mumble ........... I mean, mean .. I can...
December 21st, 2021 04:04 - One More (Fay Slimm.)
A lifetime captured & held fast now for all of time left .. a...
December 21st, 2021 03:56 - still waters (Dusk arising)
Several things immediately sprung to mind upon my first reading ..
the...
December 21st, 2021 03:35 - Untitled - LIII (SureshG)
story of my life in seventeen words or three lines well placed ... N
December 18th, 2021 03:23 - Cards Sent. (Goldfinch60)
it happens dont it ... glad you saved the memory and shared .....
December 17th, 2021 02:24 - Do Birds Divorce? (Rozina)
I have been told on numerous occasions that I am an albatross .. maybe...
December 17th, 2021 01:34 - I read you (Dusk arising)
exquisite ... priceless ink in my book sir ... or any bloody book for...
December 16th, 2021 14:22 - Praise Professings (Orchidee)
it is what it is sir ... a hymn poem if I\'m not mistaken...
December 16th, 2021 14:14 - His Call (Fay Slimm.)
okay guv\'nor he say\'s with a grin ... it woz me .......... luverly...
December 16th, 2021 13:54 - Amber light (Spilleronsheet)
this is horrorful ........................... :)
December 16th, 2021 13:51 - A COUPLET COLLECTION (13-15) (Michael Edwards)
I entirely concur ... all three spot on sir
December 16th, 2021 12:46 - Shining Life Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Tanka you for posting my golden friend .. excellent optimism displayed...
December 16th, 2021 02:23 - CEREBRATE (Michael Edwards)
absolutely splendid Michael .. before reading, I imagined your take on a...
December 16th, 2021 02:20 - Noisy Bird (Rozina)
quite simply lovely .. nah .. much more even than just that .. made me...
December 16th, 2021 02:14 - Never left just locked away (Poetic Dan)
when you let it flow, like this & without worrying how or where the next...
December 16th, 2021 02:09 - A circle of confusion (Spilleronsheet)
as we journey along this rocky path we must learn to take the rough with...
December 15th, 2021 12:20 - The Road (Paul Bell)
what a wonderful realisation .. thanks for allowing me to hitch a ride...
December 15th, 2021 12:14 - A hearts declaration (Woundedheart)
very much enjoyed sir and for all the write reasons...
December 15th, 2021 10:50 - From Unborn To Born (Orchidee)
surely fit for three kings & at least a couple of wise men .... maybe...
December 15th, 2021 10:31 - what makes a poet (Dusk arising)
it seems to me it has pretty much all been said already .. I just want...
December 15th, 2021 10:14 - Poets Know (Fay Slimm.)
Now ya come to mention it ............. :)
tis like looking in a mind...
December 15th, 2021 09:19 - Yellow (Lorna)
this is serious poetry ... I love it .. N
December 11th, 2021 15:57 - Dolour (Draven)
made me think .. ink well spent methinks...
December 11th, 2021 15:56 - Bereft souls (Spilleronsheet)
I\'m gonna take the easy option and just echo what woundedheart just...
December 11th, 2021 15:49 - Love is powerful (Myself and me)
well that\'s love all sewn up for ya folks .... now where do we all go...
December 11th, 2021 15:37 - A Summer Afternoon (Myself and me)
another good reason to smile methinks ... actually I couldn\'t stop...
December 11th, 2021 15:33 - Miss you (Myself and me)
my guess is that this was written after the event .. when a period of...
December 11th, 2021 15:30 - Trace of Time (Myself and me)
there is something very nice about these few words, almost zen like .....
December 11th, 2021 15:26 - Nail without head (Myself and me)
the dumb end must surely be the one at the other end to the pointy or...
December 11th, 2021 15:23 - Prosperity Plea (Orchidee)
I\'m all spent up ................................ well it is Crimble...
December 9th, 2021 12:07 - The Twelve Days Of Christmas (Paul Bell)
made me larf out loud & I can still feel it in me extremities...
December 9th, 2021 12:05 - all in a dream (Dusk arising)
effing brill ....................................... N
December 9th, 2021 12:04 - If can’t wade off, be the brook (Spilleronsheet)
say it like it should be .. and always ..
but be sure to reflect on...
December 9th, 2021 12:00 - Red (Lorna)
He likes it .. he likes it a lot ...
December 9th, 2021 11:57 - Obscurity (Draven)
Welcome to my world ............ N
December 9th, 2021 11:56 - Croquet With Nature (Goldfinch60)
Yeah .. the way it oughta be ............. N
December 9th, 2021 11:55 - Sipping cider from a wine glass (Kitty the naughty poet)
I am sure there will be many who can relate to this ............
December 9th, 2021 11:54 - Day Of Your Birth. (Goldfinch60)
Happy heavenly birthday Joyce .. x
December 8th, 2021 02:24
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