Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• THE LIFE ARTIST (Michael Edwards) Life was much simpler then - or maybe still is for all I know... Nice...
  June 26th, 2021 08:26
• Digit slipped.... (Orchidee) Who knows the capacities of you, the operating system or the hound,...
  June 25th, 2021 19:40
• Tree of Souls (Neville) Far too deep for my extremely literal mind, Neville....except is it not...
  June 25th, 2021 19:14
• Losing You (Fay Slimm.) To me this is less about the kind of mystical thing that gets called love...
  June 25th, 2021 06:49
• Freedom? (Saxon Crow) Too much freedom (depending on what is out here) is not freedom at all -...
  June 25th, 2021 02:39
• Caught (Fay Slimm.) Thanks Fay. A richly worded piece. I live in the middle of a heavily...
  June 24th, 2021 20:18
• One Step At A Time. (Goldfinch60) Yes - I can relate to that, Andy. It is the way my life transpired,...
  June 24th, 2021 03:50
• Black December (Saxon Crow) Had a bit of a difficult time there, old chap? Hope it all turns out...
  June 24th, 2021 02:14
• The Interment (Alan .S. Jeeves) Not much into funerals Alan, not even my own - I hope I\'ve made that...
  June 23rd, 2021 20:41
• Untitled - XLIV (SureshG) Inability to perceive it even..... Must stop otherwise I might...
  June 23rd, 2021 20:29
• A Taste of Hunger (Neville) Hurt because you bust your head on the door lintel (them old houses) and...
  June 23rd, 2021 20:13
• beautiful pastime (Dusk arising) Understood, dusk
  June 23rd, 2021 04:35
• Free Exchange (Doggerel Dave) A bet each way, Neville?
  June 22nd, 2021 19:13
• Toward Normal (Jerry Reynolds) Slowly does it - gradual warm up and hope for a long summer, Jerry. All...
  June 22nd, 2021 08:08
• the jungle final (Dusk arising) 😊 Great yarn there, Dusk. You\'ll find me in the stands too.
  June 22nd, 2021 08:03
• My Upstairs Neighbor (Whirlpool) Methinks you you hope to get much closer....will you continue to write...
  June 22nd, 2021 01:01
• Purpose (Saxon Crow) Except when you\'re hungry.
  June 22nd, 2021 00:53
• Now (IAli) Sage advice, Ali - never too late. Thanks
  June 21st, 2021 05:06
• I Arise. (Goldfinch60) I\'m on me feet mate, an going to stay there for as long as possible -...
  June 21st, 2021 04:50
• Lines (Saxon Crow) Thanks Sax - how did you know?
  June 21st, 2021 02:00
• Devil Kisses (Goddess of the Mist) Even if you were really angry, you still had much control over what you...
  June 21st, 2021 01:56
• Back in the Day (Neville) Memories - they come unbidden more often than not. Better if they are good...
  June 21st, 2021 01:48
• charlie (Dusk arising) 😊 No trouble with the accent, Dusk....wouldn\'t mind the rest......
  June 21st, 2021 01:40
• The Ignorant Mind (IAli) You do write attractively of the life of an \'ignorant fool\'. Now I...
  June 20th, 2021 19:49
• You’re Always Hurting Me! (LittlePea) \"darker times, years ago\" - so why dwell on it?
  June 20th, 2021 05:51
• ‘Word of Faith’ Ladies (Gary Edward Geraci) A difficult subject, Gary and one I have absolutely no intention of making...
  June 20th, 2021 01:20
• Cleansing The Mind (Jayasree) I believe you are right, Jay. Has to be worked at though. Your little...
  June 20th, 2021 00:53
• Blues My Companion (Saxon Crow) You got the blues man, you got life.
  June 20th, 2021 00:47
• The Party In The Forest (Jayasree) Fun funny fantasy which someone approaching his second childhood...
  June 20th, 2021 00:35
• O dear passenger! (IAli) Thanks for this poem, Ali. I liked the metaphor of myself (and presumably...
  June 19th, 2021 05:08
• Then, Now, and Then (H.R.Powell) The past remembered only inasmuch as there were lessons learned; the...
  June 18th, 2021 23:57
• The Final Breath (The Struggler) I agree with every line of that - and have mentioned my impending end on...
  June 18th, 2021 18:53
• What Is Life? (Goldfinch60) Enjoy it to the full, Andy. Redundant advice \'cos you already do. Four...
  June 18th, 2021 02:00
• Griddly Smethelton of Boffington Town (Saxon Crow) 😃 😄 😁 The characters, sneeze, story 😊 😊 😊 that was again...
  June 18th, 2021 01:54
• 100 books you must not read before you die #35 (Jon Nakapalau) I do not as a general rule take statements of which I have no prior...
  June 17th, 2021 19:36
• Ammunition for Insanity(GUN CONTROL NOW PLEASE!) (ShnMchlStoops76) Absolutely 100% with you there, R.D. I could rant on about this at great...
  June 17th, 2021 19:09
• Match Mask. (Goldfinch60) Different roles for different occasions, Andy. Its been said of a certain...
  June 17th, 2021 02:07
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (2) (Michael Edwards) Picture makes me all nostalgic again. Middle building a pub (lettering...
  June 17th, 2021 01:11
• Bella (Saxon Crow) Beautiful relationship one man and his dog.You have captured it nicely,...
  June 17th, 2021 01:03
• THEY CALL IT RAP (Andy Hunter) Yep - heard once, never voluntarily again. And If I have your assurance...
  June 16th, 2021 19:47
• Compare to her, Compare to me (Robbie GJ) English would be fine next time, if it\'s not too much trouble.....
  June 16th, 2021 19:29
• Wake Up Call (Advaitha) \"You talkin\' to me?\" Who do you think you are? AND Who do you think I...
  June 16th, 2021 19:23
• Pride (An Acrostic, written in June, “Pride Month”) (AuburnScribbler) It was, I suspect AS, a long hard road and it’s great you have now...
  June 16th, 2021 07:01
• My Published Work on Amazon (Abu Aeesh) Sorry mate good try, but I\'m with Saxon here. Had a sales rep attempting...
  June 16th, 2021 06:46
• Smile for the “camera” (Robbie GJ) Goes both ways: Some (many?) men are taught their attitudes to women in...
  June 16th, 2021 02:13
• Shoot On Sight (Bernard Gabriel Okurut) Seen before. I left what I consider to be a positive comment to this....
  June 16th, 2021 02:00
• Griddly Smetheltons Great Big Sneeze (Saxon Crow) 😃 😄 😁 The characters, sneeze, story 😊 😊 😊 that was great...
  June 16th, 2021 00:54
• Pinky Promise, He Insisted (Abu Aeesh) Subject deep and heavy but with a lightness of touch. Last stanza: so...
  June 15th, 2021 22:26
• eyelashes shut like venus flytraps (Jon Nakapalau) Although the experimental form did not make for clear understanding by...
  June 15th, 2021 20:20
• I hate dawn. (Bernard Gabriel Okurut) Sorry Bernard - apart from anything else, there is a complete disparity...
  June 15th, 2021 19:53
• What could go wrong? (Jerry Reynolds) Get the joke, love the imagery. Not going to get into a class...
  June 15th, 2021 19:33
• The Planet Enterprise -1 (Advaitha) Again, a powerful piece. And I\'d still like to know just a little about...
  June 15th, 2021 19:21
• Unbreakable (Saxon Crow) An amazing tribute to someone who will never get adequate recognition. And...
  June 15th, 2021 05:05
• Untitled - XLIII (SureshG) I need some more of your meditative advice, Suresh - I can see where it...
  June 14th, 2021 20:17
• Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary) (AuburnScribbler) Greatly enjoyed, AS. Atmospheric picture of a British pub. Nice recharge...
  June 14th, 2021 20:08
• DEATH (Advaitha) On one level I admired this, Advaitha. On another level I\'d like to know...
  June 14th, 2021 19:55
• Show Us (Fay Slimm.) Who are you praying to, Fay? Like the sentiments, though not sure how it...
  June 14th, 2021 04:07
• The Enabler (StephanieAnn) Good solid write there, Stephanie, good solid sound advice. I hope you...
  June 14th, 2021 00:39
• I Should o\' Known (All Along) (Alan .S. Jeeves) Situation described with your usual poetic sensibility and skill, Alan....
  June 14th, 2021 00:28
• Infinitesimal human jetsam flotsam self across webbed wide whirled viz cyber sea (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Amazing and educational. How long did it take you to put it...
  June 13th, 2021 23:09
• Burnout (Jane Frye) First and last lines - grave concern. Middle three - rest up.
  June 13th, 2021 20:36
• Overcome (Neville) Wot? Hot over there? Winter here, hasn\'t got over 20 degrees C all week....
  June 13th, 2021 19:16
• Careful with that paint pot (Saxon Crow) A work in progress? Looks complete to me - Some good lines in there.
  June 13th, 2021 02:01
• Upon Bingham Market Square (AuburnScribbler) I probably listen and watch far too much news and political commentary....
  June 12th, 2021 20:34
• Nehushtan (Gary Edward Geraci) Come on Gary – you can do better than this. You surely know that someone...
  June 12th, 2021 20:25
• Seizing Moments (Neville) And tomorrow \"The answer is blowin\' in the wind\" Sorry Neville - I...
  June 12th, 2021 19:51
• Do it a little (Navneetshah) I\'ll appreciate your poem a little....OK? Welcome to MPS.
  June 12th, 2021 08:28
• The Green Moth (Jayasree) Yeh I do that with a variety of invertebrate interlopers (not huntsmans...
  June 12th, 2021 02:17
• Which Is The Greater? (Goldfinch60) Or movies or theatre? But I think Teddy nailed it, and I\'m not about to...
  June 12th, 2021 02:03
• What and Why (SureshG) I really like this - just about gives a perfect picture of the start of it...
  June 12th, 2021 01:53
• DON’T YOU? (Laura🌻) Just tripped over this by accident, Laura. Liked it very...
  June 12th, 2021 00:55
• How The Town Grows (MendedFences27) That, for me, is when those short forms make most sense - as a chain....
  June 11th, 2021 21:06
• Unscathed (Jerry Reynolds) And why not, indeed. Enjoy. Point made succinctly - yer didn\'t go on...
  June 11th, 2021 20:56
• Poems for all Seasons (Kevin Michael Bloor) You are too good for me - I can\'t find anything intelligible to make...
  June 11th, 2021 08:05
• Nowhere Left to Bleed (Neville) A couple of my relationships were a little toxic, Neville - but compared...
  June 11th, 2021 05:58
• Clickety Clack Life (Saxon Crow) I’m not good at metaphors, Sax – but I think I’m there with this...
  June 11th, 2021 05:49
• Never Too Late (Jayasree) \"Everything changes. You can make A fresh start with your final...
  June 10th, 2021 20:50
• Who Dares (Fay Slimm.) Nature in the raw. Personified nicely in your short sweet verse, Fay. But...
  June 10th, 2021 06:41
• Feeling Flushed (Saxon Crow) Saxon: It will not reflect on you You do what you gotta do Just feel...
  June 10th, 2021 06:01
• Am I Just Getting Old? (Goldfinch60) You could call this the three ages of man, I suppose… In the days of my...
  June 10th, 2021 05:16
• Untitled - XLI (SureshG) Come on Suresh - wot about some cultural edification here…. Did you...
  June 10th, 2021 00:58
• I revel in obscure facts (Trenz Pruca) Really liked this poem, Trenz, despite that I found it something of an...
  June 9th, 2021 20:29
• Good Intentions (Wackyheartache4) That is terribly hard to take, despite that there’s a large truth buried...
  June 9th, 2021 20:03
• The Influencer (SureshG) Bloody wants in a consumerist hell. I live in an Economy, not a Society....
  June 9th, 2021 08:44
• Circle Fly’s (Jerry Reynolds) 😊 Great little yarn of universal applicability, Jerry. Or as some folks...
  June 9th, 2021 08:23
• Love (Doggerel Dave) It\'s the music, Andy, the music... 😊
  June 9th, 2021 04:42
• Humanity and Love. (Goldfinch60) May I apologise in advance, Andy?
  June 9th, 2021 01:06
• If I Was Leader (Article)... (ForeverJesus7) Every bone in my body told me I shouldn\'t engage with someone who titled...
  June 8th, 2021 07:07
• If I Was Leader (Article)... (ForeverJesus7) Poetry or propaganda? Is there not another place for this stuff? -...
  June 8th, 2021 06:01
• WHAT I BELIEVE... (Jaimeleigh) I\'ve got very poor concentration.....Couldn\'t give me a brief summary...
  June 8th, 2021 04:32
• Untitled - XL (SureshG) If you got an answer, would it help at all? Two main lines, to me -...
  June 7th, 2021 22:30
• So Very Long Ago. (Goldfinch60) So addicted to English cathedrals, despite no religion. And despite the...
  June 7th, 2021 20:17
• the little she (Rebmasters) Not sure what this is about at all. Context via comments definitely...
  June 7th, 2021 05:22
• Cactus Days (Neville) Seems dead simple to me,….Neville….. Main column: ‘He’ made...
  June 7th, 2021 04:51
• Seize (Fay Slimm.) But I don\'t see any of that in you, Fay. Now I (not admitting to...
  June 7th, 2021 04:34
• Mustard Meditation (Orchidee) Thank you for bringing St Martin\'s-in-the-Fields, Trafalgar Square,...
  June 7th, 2021 02:43
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (Michael Edwards) A whole experience in four lines.....
  June 7th, 2021 02:29
• Natures Monet (Saxon Crow) With a good upending in the title and good ending in four lines, you have,...
  June 7th, 2021 01:30
• Linda (Jerry Reynolds) Who got to take the nap on the sofa, you or Linda? Simple warm picture...
  June 6th, 2021 19:13
• Enchantment (Fay Slimm.) Full on nostalgia that I, a city boy can just about relate to, Fay. Picked...
  June 6th, 2021 08:10