Comments on community poems by NafisaSB
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true - we see all this around us, but seem to have become immune..and...
October 3rd, 2024 22:31 - The Reason Why Colours Make Out (Neville)
a true masterpiece- your words just fell in the right places and created...
October 3rd, 2024 22:30 - Reading (Tony36)
keep it there - the real world sometimes seems more fake than the one in...
October 3rd, 2024 22:28 - Twain will meet.. (NafisaSB)
thank you so much !
October 2nd, 2024 12:16 - When Will Righteousness Return? (2:48am) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
doubts will always creep in, but i agree that after 2020 our way of...
September 27th, 2024 01:21 - ()
the bicycles mentioned here remind me of those parked outside Utrecht and...
September 27th, 2024 01:10 - ()
yes, sometimes one\'s presence is more than enough
great write
September 27th, 2024 01:08 - ()
as a mom i can assure you that wherever she is, she will always be looking...
September 27th, 2024 01:07 - ()
true - beautiful memories will always be associated with some commonplace...
September 27th, 2024 01:05 - ()
beautiful outpouring of emotions, and i hope the other person loves you as...
September 27th, 2024 01:04 - ()
wow - beautiful
enjoyed visualizing the beautiful scene
September 27th, 2024 01:03 - ()
i can feel the pain flowing out through your poetry, but believe me time...
September 27th, 2024 01:02 - Cry Myself To Sleep (𓆩Mase𓆪)
In the stillness of the night
Thoughts, like insects, do creep
They gnaw...
September 25th, 2024 01:10 - Postcard (Lorenz)
sad memories and moving description of a bygone era
well written.
September 17th, 2024 01:28 - ~> It\'s You I Idolize -form Trijan Refrain - (Thad Wilk)
lovely piece of verse - the emotions shine through..
September 17th, 2024 01:26 - Anxiety Creep (Unknownfemalepoet)
i get these thoughts sometimes in the middle of the night, and can...
September 17th, 2024 01:25 - Atlantic (Alan R)
have crossed the Atlantic physically - now hope your wishes that were...
September 17th, 2024 01:24 - How Slow These Cradles Rock (ADarkerMind)
the journey of life is full of ups and downs - hope the future holds more...
September 17th, 2024 01:22 - Already Spoken (Dan Williams)
why is it that one excludes and fails to confide in the one person for...
September 17th, 2024 01:17 - Comforting Certainties (Orchidee)
hope is what keeps us going..
good write - straight from the heart.
September 17th, 2024 01:13 - Rise from the fire (Tony36)
i agree with you completely here
this is so inspirational
September 17th, 2024 01:01 - The Sweetest of Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
i wish, how i wish i too could have such a slumberbash..
well done, dear...
September 17th, 2024 00:59 - Devil Plays the Fiddle (Teddy.15)
the verses written in our youth are much more open and one feels the pain...
September 17th, 2024 00:58 - Just Another Take On Life (Neville)
i agree - some things keep changing, and some are the same..
good and...
September 17th, 2024 00:52 - Smiling Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
during our walks we are blessed to see some innocent smiling faces who...
September 17th, 2024 00:50 - Another day (Sorenbarrett)
i hope the fog clears away completely, and the future is sunny and bright,...
September 17th, 2024 00:48 - A Winter Passing (Cassie58)
omg - the raw pain shining through your words are so expressive and...
September 17th, 2024 00:46 - Country walk (Sorenbarrett)
lovely imagery - can actually visualize it..keep it up dear
September 17th, 2024 00:45 - A Tender Dream (Thomas W Case)
a message that like an arrow was shot from the heart, and pierces all in...
September 17th, 2024 00:43 - ()
Beautiful 😍
September 14th, 2024 12:58 - See Me In The Stars (𓆩Mase𓆪)
once again sorry i was offline almost for a week or more, so was unable to...
September 7th, 2024 23:47 - Premonition (NafisaSB)
you are only as young as you think- so welcome to our humble home...
August 26th, 2024 01:33 - Guilt (Sorenbarrett)
August 26th, 2024 00:00 - Guilt (Sorenbarrett)
lovely write - so eloquently expressed - enjoyed the line \'guilt is the...
August 26th, 2024 00:00 - ()
I am happy that I have the right people in my life too- some I meet often,...
August 22nd, 2024 13:14 - Water (NafisaSB)
yes - sad but true that areas needing rain are being deprived, while...
August 20th, 2024 23:57 - Interesting Times (John Prophet)
this is so true of what\'s happening around us.. let\'s pray that we are...
August 20th, 2024 23:53 - The Tree (Annemarie)
beautiful verse, and inspirational too..well done
August 20th, 2024 23:37 - Lake or Ocean (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
the lake - silent, serene and placid -the ocean has too many changes of...
August 20th, 2024 23:36 - Cry of The Hermit (Dan Williams)
it is always the losses that teach us the best lessons - may everything...
August 20th, 2024 23:34 - Oh Just Get On With It. (Doggerel Dave)
as long as you don\'t topple over, keep doing some pole vaults - will keep...
August 20th, 2024 23:33 - Be Still..... (Saxon Crow)
it\'s the whisper from above that will still your troubled mind - what...
August 20th, 2024 23:31 - In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart (Teddy.15)
what a beautiful and emotional tribute to those who left physically but...
August 20th, 2024 23:22 - As I Sit Here. (Goldfinch60)
it is a daily occurrence - you sit down to pen some lines, and wonder what...
August 20th, 2024 23:21 - Waltzing Down Love Street (Thomas W Case)
so glad that wisdom and experience changed the scenario - enjoyed reading...
August 20th, 2024 23:19 - Steaming (Tom Dylan)
Reminds me too of the visit to the Dutch railway museum with our grandson...
August 20th, 2024 23:16 - As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples (Neville)
this reminds me of my sister in law, whom we lost a few months back - she...
August 20th, 2024 08:17 - In Spirit (Cassie58)
on the wings of your imagination, fly higher and reach for the moon -
if...
August 20th, 2024 08:12 - One in all, all in one (Sorenbarrett)
your imagination soars, and in the verse, shows
well done, keep it coming
August 20th, 2024 08:09 - ()
Agree with you 👍
August 11th, 2024 02:20 - ()
Great 👍
August 11th, 2024 02:19 - ()
Wonderful work- straight from the heart. Keep it up. It’s really...
August 11th, 2024 02:19 - Dear God (𓆩Mase𓆪)
so sorry i have been more offline than online, so missed the chance to...
August 11th, 2024 00:26 - ()
such a beautiful poem, and what lovely imagery. just superb. keep it
August 7th, 2024 05:46 - what if? (Sheta)
it shows that the invitation is over[poem is finished]
what if i had...
July 13th, 2024 11:05 - my heart,my past (Sheta)
there are many such occasions that give rise to such thoughts in all of...
July 9th, 2024 23:34 - Who’s Responsible? (Doggerel Dave)
small one, but with a wealth of meaning...keep it coming
July 9th, 2024 23:31 - Alive (Sorenbarrett)
lovely message there - need to remind self to look around and observe the...
July 1st, 2024 07:45 - Clean, Clean, Clean (Thomas W Case)
actually, i am \'clean bowled by your verse\'
keep writing
July 1st, 2024 07:42 - Rural life (NafisaSB)
Thank you. One item on my bucket list was a small bungalow in the...
June 25th, 2024 09:46 - The immortal (Sorenbarrett)
some thrive with care, and some grow even if you ignore them and don\'t...
June 25th, 2024 08:21 - THE RAIN TODAY (Qurrathul Ain)
not the rain, but yes - did look for some sign to do / not to do...
June 25th, 2024 08:13 - Another Day. (Goldfinch60)
each day that we get is a precious gift if well utilized. yes, life is...
June 25th, 2024 01:03 - Clean, Clean, Clean (Thomas W Case)
truly wise words. we are so caught up showing clean exteriors that we tend...
June 25th, 2024 00:58 - Stones (Cassie58)
a very emotional tribute to an artistic father who has passed on his...
June 25th, 2024 00:56 - The Talking Clock (Doggerel Dave)
extremely relatable - though on a different level,
it reminds me of the...
June 25th, 2024 00:53 - Hurt Feelings (Tony36)
if there is a park - i agree that nothing heals like nature.. or else,...
June 18th, 2024 08:29 - The child (2781)
lovely poem. like the conversion bit - one enjoys life when young, then...
June 18th, 2024 08:27 - Give me my due (NafisaSB)
yes - one can pour out what\'s in one heat, and then either store it or...
June 15th, 2024 01:01 - PRAYER (Qurrathul Ain)
keep hoping - the positivity will surely bear fruit one day - your prayers...
June 4th, 2024 06:56 - Methods obscene (Sorenbarrett)
the way of governance is so warped its scary - well written poem, keep it...
June 4th, 2024 06:53 - When I last saw you (Bird In Red)
beautiful way of sending a warning to those whose intuition works - to...
June 4th, 2024 06:52 - Where The Shade Falls (Cassie58)
beautiful poem - can imagine the lovely scene and feel the ambience of...
June 4th, 2024 06:48 - Covid in 2020 (NafisaSB)
yes, but now the flu has come back with a vengeance, at least in our...
June 4th, 2024 02:33 - Moonlight Sonata. (Goldfinch60)
i agree with you - yes music is balm for the soul - it can calm you down,...
June 3rd, 2024 01:36 - REVERIES (Qurrathul Ain)
when the imagination takes flight, and soars, it gives rise to beautiful...
June 2nd, 2024 01:02 - In a Battle Without a Shield (Thomas W Case)
this is a cry straight from the heart - awesome
keep up the good work
June 2nd, 2024 00:48 - EVERYTHING IS BEAUTIFUL (Qurrathul Ain)
Beauty does lie in the eye of the beholder - lovely poem, thanks for...
May 25th, 2024 00:45 - Smoldering flames (EvenwheniLie)
agree with your message - keep composing - well done
May 17th, 2024 00:28 - Damnation Island (Lunatic\'s Ball) (Thomas W Case)
enjoyed the poem, and sometimes feel part of us is there - but hope never...
May 17th, 2024 00:27 - Ode to the salty tear (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
what an awesome poem. delves deep into the heart, and tugs at the...
May 17th, 2024 00:24 - Musical Peace. (Goldfinch60)
yes music does soothe the soul, and calm the mind. well described, and...
May 11th, 2024 01:13 - Happy Birthday Anne. (Goldfinch60)
lovely poem for a good friend. well done
March 31st, 2024 01:08 - HOW FAR? (Qurrathul Ain)
so true - we try to please others, and ignore our own self in the process....
March 22nd, 2024 01:19 - Stop the warmongers and aggressors (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
@Zainab, i agree with almost all of your views so beautifully expressed....
January 8th, 2024 02:09 - Simple Equation…. (Doggerel Dave)
i agree with your views..
September 17th, 2023 02:24 - Lessons learnt (NafisaSB)
absolutely - a few good friends will make up for all the fake ones, and...
April 2nd, 2023 00:17 - Dear Mama (L. B. Mek)
it\'s so true that mothers give their all, but their love and sacrifice is...
April 1st, 2023 01:23 - Call it How You Like….. (Doggerel Dave)
i agree. this is something that needs urgent attention and commitment from...
April 1st, 2023 01:15 - Family in the Flowers (Ernie lawton)
i liked the tenderness this poem evokes, and admire how you have entwined...
April 1st, 2023 01:12 - View from an airplane window (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
this poem resonates with me because for the past few months have been...
January 1st, 2023 00:06 - Autumnal ceremony (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
awesome
such lovely iiagery
well done
September 9th, 2022 01:46 - Kinds of people (NafisaSB)
thank you so much. glad you liked it
September 6th, 2022 01:54 - poetry (NafisaSB)
made a major typo when posting my poem today. have edited it now to convey...
July 29th, 2022 08:03 - poetry (NafisaSB)
July 29th, 2022 00:54 - Be happy (NafisaSB)
you are mistaken my friend. on the contrary i look forward to reading your...
July 23rd, 2022 00:57 - Wake Up World. (Goldfinch60)
i agree with you that it\'s high time we wake up, and join hands to save...
July 20th, 2022 01:06 - SNOW WHITE CLOUDS (NafisaSB)
gray clouds i wonder
why you always thunder
the white are so serene
and...
June 29th, 2022 01:12 - Water is life and seems alive (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
yes my friend, water is so precious, and yet we are so careless about its...
June 24th, 2022 01:14 - RubyRae: The Light Seen with Closed Eyes (A Dedication to a Departed MPS Poet) (Rocky Lagou)
i have not had the pleasure of meeting Ruby or reading her poems, which, i...
May 14th, 2022 01:32
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