Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• What is love? (Jode) jode, this is a beautiful ode to love! I do like the last line of keeping...
  October 15th, 2017 04:36
• Pretty For a Black Girl (Myabert) Welcome to MPS, myabert! I do like your writing, straight forward, to the...
  October 14th, 2017 21:04
• A Certain Comfort (Karsten Turrey) Your poem, Karsten, certainly is not a mistake! Like the structure too....
  October 14th, 2017 20:02
• Kardashyish. (Comedy Bit, not for the easily offended) (Edthepoet) Am not offended! :-) Love it. Ed, you are quickly becoming my favorite...
  October 14th, 2017 19:59
• Traumatic Childhood Memory (Prose Poem) (Rrodriguez) An incident like this can traumatize a kid for life. I do hope it helped...
  October 14th, 2017 17:22
• ESCAPE (Laura🌻) Benvenuto Laura! We all have dreams, and I do hope you can fulfill yours....
  October 14th, 2017 17:11
• Freedom Foundings (Orchidee) I only put my wings on when I write. That\'s when I escape into this...
  October 14th, 2017 16:48
• It’s time to pause, feel and observe (Avigail) And read BETWEEN the lines! Sometimes we learn more by concentrating on...
  October 14th, 2017 16:45
• Your wee mate (Renzi) Welcome back Renzi! It is so good to see and read from you again. You...
  October 14th, 2017 16:38
• single male shopper (Frank Prem) Frank, that shopper could have been me! Love your poem.
  October 14th, 2017 04:50
• Crossed Wires. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, this seems to be a departure from your usual writing, but I like it!
  October 14th, 2017 04:48
• OH MY ! POETIC SIDE ~ A 2 2 6 4 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) What can I say, you said it all!
  October 14th, 2017 04:46
• Days like this (Poetic Dan) Forget the week, PD, just live weekend to weekend!
  October 14th, 2017 04:43
• Narrow Escape. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, if all husbands would be like you, the world would be a better...
  October 14th, 2017 04:41
• NUTELLA (Abu Aeesh) I love Nutella, grew up with it, and really like your poem. But...
  October 14th, 2017 04:30
• Trump This (Edthepoet) Ed, absolutely love this! You are genius! Maybe you should become a...
  October 13th, 2017 17:36
• My family is moving, again... (Rrodriguez) Your poem paints a true and moving picture of life in the Bronx during...
  October 13th, 2017 17:35
• Quiet Strength (Youngandnaive) Very well written, Y&N, tender, loving, flowing well, leading into the...
  October 13th, 2017 17:32
• A Poet (Tony36) Your poem describes us well, Tony!
  October 13th, 2017 14:43
• unravelling after (Frank Prem) Frank, your excellent poem speaks to me and I think to many of us writers....
  October 13th, 2017 12:16
• Lightning Won\'t Strike (Poetboy123) And rise up we must! Good writing, poetboy!
  October 13th, 2017 12:14
• The Tale of Franken-Beaver (Happy Halloween) (Mugsdaddy) Mugsdaddy, you are a master at dark story telling! Enjoyed it a lot!
  October 13th, 2017 12:11
• COASTAL EROSION ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) This message should be distributed widely! Welcome back, Brian.
  October 13th, 2017 11:57
• I don\'t believe what I believe (Poetic Dan) Good advice, PD. The mind and belief come first, then everything else...
  October 13th, 2017 11:51
• The rules in our heads (Avigail) You are so right, Avigail. We often tend to judge people or events by some...
  October 13th, 2017 11:47
• Faded Flower (WL Schuett) Beautifully written, WL, but haunting. You captured that loneliness really...
  October 13th, 2017 11:41
• Restoring Reassurance (Orchidee) Well crafted, orchidee, as usual!
  October 13th, 2017 11:34
• Rise Above (Christina8) I am really proud of you Christina! For actually doing it and for writing...
  October 13th, 2017 11:29
• In The Making. (Fay Slimm.) So well written, Fay, I even had the smell of freshly cut wood in my nose...
  October 13th, 2017 11:24
• The Magic of Mozart. (Goldfinch60) Incredible music, incredible poem! It is amazing what music can do to us,...
  October 13th, 2017 02:42
• October Haiku (Karsten Turrey) Good Haiku, Karsten!
  October 13th, 2017 00:27
• THE CURSE OF AWARENESS (Louis Gibbs) Louis, I know exactly where you are coming from here. While our immediate...
  October 13th, 2017 00:08
• i was a teenage lesbian (Queer-with-a-pen) Boaz, I like your simple, straight forward style, the repetition of...
  October 12th, 2017 23:21
• Nobody knows (Lost-but-not-broken17) Lost-but-not-broken, well written poem, but the last two lines are wrong....
  October 12th, 2017 23:18
• Now Open The Door (Kurt Philip Behm) And you just opened the door to a new appreciation for your poems, Kurt!
  October 12th, 2017 18:25
• The Angry Cow (Tony36) LOL tony! Had a lot of fun reading it.
  October 12th, 2017 18:24
• autumn stress (Mocuisle) After reading your comment, I think (but am not completely sure) you are...
  October 12th, 2017 18:21
• Blind Spots (Avigail) Abigail, oh sorry, Avigail, you make a good point in this excellent and...
  October 12th, 2017 18:07
• Thank you for the support (Poetic Dan) Very, very well done PD! I don\'t know if I had the courage to stand up...
  October 12th, 2017 18:02
• Windowless House (WL Schuett) Great metaphor, sounds like it is not only windowless, but after you...
  October 12th, 2017 17:57
• Lord Of All (Orchidee) Beautifully written again, orchidee!
  October 12th, 2017 17:51
• Under (Baylee) Nicole, I am awed by your writing. Beautiful language, great style, good...
  October 12th, 2017 17:48
• Upon Her Cheek. (Kevin browne) I like this love poem written in the unique Kevin style. Too many great...
  October 12th, 2017 17:44
• My Morning Routine. (Adrianna Kjeld) Sounds like the perfect morning to me, Adrianna! I can even tell that you...
  October 12th, 2017 17:30
• It\'s Time (Youngandnaive) A sad, but beautifully written poem, Y&N. Good flow and structure. But...
  October 12th, 2017 17:27
• A Distant Shore (Kate) What a beautiful poem, Nina. We all like to have that \'magnificent...
  October 12th, 2017 17:22
• Dark Delight. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, my comment has only two words: Simply beautiful!
  October 12th, 2017 03:49
• New Day - Haiku. (Goldfinch60) First of all, Goldfinch, this is definitely a favorit. Secondly, at my...
  October 12th, 2017 03:46
• Original Sin (A__pott) Alex, I read it three times. Are you talking about Adam?
  October 12th, 2017 03:44
• Insignificant Things (Youngandnaive) Very, very nice poem about young love, Y&N. I wrote something about the...
  October 11th, 2017 15:47
• Where Have I Gone.. (P.H.Rose) Beautiful poem about a terrible disease, P.H.!
  October 11th, 2017 15:43
• FLUFFY BUNNIES (Mugsdaddy) Good advice, Mugsdaddy! So you think I should not post anything for the...
  October 11th, 2017 13:36
• Down (Its Raskolnikov) So, Ras, you \'just started writing\'? And the result is something with a...
  October 11th, 2017 13:35
• () \'Sourceless source of Being\', you do have a way with words, Outback!
  October 11th, 2017 13:31
• walk in the woods (Tony36) There is so much more between these lines than the eye can see. I do like...
  October 11th, 2017 13:28
• The dilemma of sensitive people (Avigail) Your poem made me think, Avigail. Isn\'t it strange how sometimes we are...
  October 11th, 2017 13:26
• All I Could See (Baylee) .....just like your poetic ability, Nicole! You keep on surprising me...
  October 11th, 2017 13:21
• Praise Plenitudes (Orchidee) Yes, Orchi, \'myriads of angels sing\' each time you sit down to write!
  October 11th, 2017 13:11
• I\'m thinking (Poetic Dan) A very good write, PD. We ARE experiencing ourselves through the people...
  October 11th, 2017 11:18
• Halloween Will Soon Be Here (Christina8) Love your poem, Christina, and love Halloween. It\'s the only time of the...
  October 11th, 2017 11:09
• materinski jezik - the mother tongue (Frank Prem) Frenk, your really great funny poem reminds me of my brother in law. He is...
  October 11th, 2017 03:33
• This Too. (Fay Slimm.) I really don\'t know what to say, Fay! Your poems don\'t only touch the...
  October 11th, 2017 03:26
• Hill of Life. (Goldfinch60) A whole life in a poem, Goldfinch. You did a tremendous job here and I...
  October 11th, 2017 03:13
• Razors (Adrianna Kjeld) Adrianna, this is such a nice poem about a love gone wrong and a new love...
  October 11th, 2017 03:10
• THE MERRY-GO-ROUND (Louis Gibbs) I am with you Louis, BUT, how do you know that all the challenges have...
  October 11th, 2017 00:36
• Outstretched (Youngandnaive) I like the metaphors you are using in this well written poem, Y&N. Too...
  October 10th, 2017 17:15
• 10h (Avigail) Avigail, like the 10p before, the 10h is great advice to live by. Not...
  October 10th, 2017 17:06
• TOP OF THE MOUNTAIN (Lasergraph) Edward, thank you for this very uplifting poem. It is so sad to see people...
  October 10th, 2017 12:43
• A poet in an all nite cafe (WL Schuett) Your incredible poem made me think, WL. And you are right, one does not...
  October 10th, 2017 12:40
• Deliverance Days (Orchidee) The last line says it all: Orchi, your \'anointed favour\' is writing. I...
  October 10th, 2017 12:34
• All seasons (Malubotelho) I think this is one of your best, Malu! If I were that man you are writing...
  October 10th, 2017 11:54
• With You (Christina8) I just hope you did show him this poem, Christina! This is a beautiful...
  October 10th, 2017 11:50
• Playing At Love. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, I love this poem, which seems to be a little bit different from your...
  October 10th, 2017 11:34
• I\'m Fine (T...) Hannah, life can be a roller-coaster, one day you are up, the next you are...
  October 10th, 2017 03:11
• The Day That Broke Me (T...) The end of a loving relationship is never easy. But look at it this way,...
  October 10th, 2017 03:06
• Don\'t Say It (T...) A very well written, from the heart, dear John letter, Hannah! With eyes...
  October 10th, 2017 03:02
• Email To Republican Bob Corker (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Wow, you really gave it to him! Good job!
  October 10th, 2017 02:58
• Eavesdropping On Myself (Kurt Philip Behm) I do love this poem, Kurt. Isn\'t it amazing how a song or any other...
  October 10th, 2017 02:16
• the wind and the lion (Frank Prem) An incredible poem, Frank. Still trying to get it though. Need to read it...
  October 10th, 2017 02:14
• Perception. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, you may have been inspired by Mugsdaddy, but you wrote...
  October 10th, 2017 02:11
• politika of the pipples (Frank Prem) No wonder it won the prize, Frenk! Absolutely gorgeous!
  October 9th, 2017 21:06
• The Murderous (Happy Halloween) (Mugsdaddy) After reading your oh so dark Halloween poem, Mugsdaddy, I for one am...
  October 9th, 2017 21:02
• Blame (The 2 A.M Writer) Very strong and raw writing, 2AM! It does not pull punches, but goes...
  October 9th, 2017 20:53
• Book Life (DeviLove) What a novel way to talk about our innermost feelings, Devi! I love it....
  October 9th, 2017 20:42
• Wind (Brie) Brie, I do like this poem! It is short, but well written. Nobody wants to...
  October 9th, 2017 20:36
• Story from an Ex-Depression Addict (Adrianna Kjeld) Some great advice from somebody who (it seems) knows! Adrianna, I don\'t...
  October 9th, 2017 20:30
• Love Remains To Teach Us Every Night. (Kevin browne) \'A human mind filled with magic innovative genius intriguing ways\', this...
  October 9th, 2017 20:19
• Come Home (Its Raskolnikov) Ras, this is such a nice way to say: \'I want to love you...
  October 9th, 2017 20:16
• 12P (Avigail) It is amazing, I just read Poetic Dan\'s poem where he talks about...
  October 9th, 2017 13:03
• No hesitation (Poetic Dan) Reading your great poem, PD, I vibrated right along with you! And I do...
  October 9th, 2017 13:00
• Persevering Progress (Orchidee) Just read Santi\'s comment and would be very interested to see what that...
  October 9th, 2017 12:56
• Effulgent (Baylee) Why would you? This radiant new sunrise is a new beginning and does not...
  October 9th, 2017 12:54
• Healed My Heart (Christina8) Your poem expresses so beautifully how good it is to have that one person...
  October 9th, 2017 12:50
• Artful. (Fay Slimm.) So many people are afraid of spiders. I just hope that your beautiful poem...
  October 9th, 2017 12:32
• God\'s Sense of Humour. (Goldfinch60) Thank you, thank you, thank you! Goldfinch, you took a great weight off my...
  October 9th, 2017 12:23
• DOUBLE VISION (Louis Gibbs) Your excellent poem made me re-evaluate my own vision, and I realized that...
  October 9th, 2017 12:19
• A Story about Another Poet. (Kevin browne) Kevin, there are so many beautiful lines here, such as \'Time stood still...
  October 9th, 2017 12:14
• Wind (Avigail) Your poem reminds me of the Hawaiian word \'Ha\', which means \'Breath of...
  October 8th, 2017 17:47
• Apple fresh 🍎 (Malubotelho) You know, Malu, it is so beautiful that we can find love in everyday...
  October 8th, 2017 17:41
• Wings (Poetic Dan) My rhythm just went up a notch after reading this, PD! And with my voice,...
  October 8th, 2017 15:15