Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- WHEELS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great picture and great poem, Brian. Wheels are so important, especially...
October 25th, 2017 10:34 - Drunk on Love (Accidental Poet)
Couldn\'t have said it better myself, AP! :-)
Seriously, this poem...
October 25th, 2017 10:26 - Hope in the Dark. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful poem, beautifully written, Goldfinch! I think we all know that...
October 25th, 2017 02:04 - House Of Ill Repute. (Wallace)
Wallace, I understand you, even though I have never been to one of these...
October 25th, 2017 02:02 - The Blackbird in the Night (Seeker123)
Beautiful writing, great choice of words. Well penned, Kudos!
October 25th, 2017 01:09 - A Winter’s Night (M.E.M.)
I really love this poem, M.E.M., even though I didn\'t have a winter\'s...
October 25th, 2017 01:00 - .09 Milliseconds (M.E.M.)
Yes, a lot can happen in a very short time, you wrote that very well....
October 25th, 2017 00:59 - Life After Death (M.E.M.)
A very thought provoking poem, M.E.M.! Well written too!
October 25th, 2017 00:56 - the astronomer (Frank Prem)
I love your poem, Frank! I can see that astronomer, but I think the poem...
October 25th, 2017 00:38 - Did you ever want something so bad (Joseph M Marion)
A beautiful declaration of love, and you are so lucky to have what you...
October 25th, 2017 00:34 - THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE (Michael Edwards)
Michael, for these three I would gladly have paid the full triple price!
October 25th, 2017 00:32 - ODE TO RARE BEAUTY (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, your excellent poem expresses both the beauty and the loss of this...
October 25th, 2017 00:29 - AFFLICTION (Av)
Ahh, to be twenty-five again!
Really like the whole poem, but love that...
October 25th, 2017 00:22 - LIKE CORN IN WIND (Michael Edwards)
Love your poem, Michael, and love your answer to Martina\'s comment!
I do...
October 24th, 2017 19:34 - Why Don\'t Mornings Last All Day. (Goldfinch60)
Great poem, Goldfinch! And you are right, the mornings disappear much too...
October 24th, 2017 19:29 - HOT SPICEY PUMPKIN SOUP ! A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
We already bake pumpkin mochi and pumpkin bread, so the soup will be a...
October 24th, 2017 19:24 - It’s Just a Fantasy (Accidental Poet)
No matter what happens later in life, the first love always has a special...
October 24th, 2017 18:34 - Shore-Songs. (Fay Slimm.)
Great writing, Fay! We don\'t have high tides here, but winter can bring...
October 24th, 2017 18:28 - Dancing In The Rain (Christina8)
A beautiful image, Christina! You know, dancing in the rain can stand for...
October 24th, 2017 18:24 - From Those Days. (Kevin browne)
\'Hope of Einstein being an insurance man knocking on your door\'
Again...
October 24th, 2017 18:21 - Thy Will Be Done - Thomas á Kempis Series - 3 (Orchidee)
Beautifully written, orchidee! Love that last line.
October 24th, 2017 18:19 - Shadow fall (WL Schuett)
Beautifully expressed, beautiful imagery, a pleasure to read. Kudos!
October 24th, 2017 18:17 - Distractions (Avigail)
Well said Avigail! We have TMI (too much information). It does the soul...
October 24th, 2017 18:11 - Began (Baylee)
Great writing, Nicole! You drew me in right away. A whole love story in a...
October 24th, 2017 15:57 - From Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60)
Why, indeed, Goldfinch. Too many people just walk in that rut they call...
October 18th, 2017 11:36 - TOO BAD (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, the way I see this poem, the who, what and why is not relevant. The...
October 18th, 2017 11:29 - Hear Me (A__pott)
I hear you, Alex, but so many times we do not hear. I do like your poem,...
October 18th, 2017 04:54 - Something I forgot (David Neil)
Welcome to MPS, David. Well written, heartfelt, longing, sadness, all...
October 17th, 2017 18:51 - Last Act (Mugsdaddy)
Mugsdaddy, you not only wrote an incredible poem, you also asked an...
October 17th, 2017 18:48 - The Muse Unrehearsed (Kurt Philip Behm)
You made me think, Kurt. Do I live to write? I know I am not writing for a...
October 17th, 2017 18:40 - Never a doubt (WL Schuett)
WL you wrote a great tribute to the one you love. Having that someone on...
October 17th, 2017 11:19 - Confident Compendium (Orchidee)
A nice reminder, orchidee, that Fall is the time to be grateful for all we...
October 17th, 2017 11:15 - My Heart Aches When You\'re Gone (Christina8)
Beautiful, tender poem, Christina. I agree with Laura, enjoy the kids as...
October 17th, 2017 11:11 - Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully said and so true, Fay!
October 17th, 2017 03:35 - If In The End (Accidental Poet)
Thought provoking poem here, AP! I like it! It seemed like a good idea at...
October 17th, 2017 03:34 - Love hurts (Olivia1697)
Nicely penned, good rhyming, Olivia. A sad tale, with a hopeful uptick at...
October 17th, 2017 03:04 - Listening deep down (Poetic Dan)
PD, I get it, except for the lobster lesson. Got me stumped there! Is this...
October 17th, 2017 02:56 - Ink, Pastel and Water (Frank Prem)
Very well written, Frank, but then, so are all of your poems!
And thanks,...
October 17th, 2017 01:57 - B I R D S ~ An Homacrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nicely done, Brian! You are a master at these complicated poem structures!
October 17th, 2017 01:53 - Against the Flow (Goldfinch60)
Nice, Goldfinch! My office is at home, so no commuting! Have a smile on my...
October 17th, 2017 01:52 - What did I do? (CherryEllie5)
Hey Cherry, you can\'t fade! Your purpose in life is to write!!!!
We want...
October 16th, 2017 16:51 - Our differences make us similar (CherryEllie5)
Cherry, I really like your poem. Very well written and straight from the...
October 16th, 2017 16:49 - Zlata\'s Daughter (Frank Prem)
Beautiful, tender, yet so strong writing here, Frank!
Living here in...
October 16th, 2017 16:45 - I love those random memories (Rrodriguez)
Roberto, you might as well add me to the list. Want to know the same thing...
October 16th, 2017 16:26 - Stand (Tia Davis/テイア)
Beautiful poem, Tia! You stand tall, girl, and watch how much good will be...
October 16th, 2017 16:22 - Know your force (Poetic Dan)
This one definitely does not only make sense in your head, it makes sense,...
October 16th, 2017 16:21 - That Day (Youngandnaive)
Y&N, I had to make this a favorite. It is well written, but it is the...
October 16th, 2017 16:17 - Your Worth (Christina8)
A beautiful love letter to your husband, Christina! May you both be happy...
October 16th, 2017 11:56 - A Delinquent Fetish For Adversity. (Kevin browne)
Again, too many great lines to single out. I just love the way you write.
October 16th, 2017 11:50 - Breaking Free (WL Schuett)
Great poem, WL, love the last stanza!
October 16th, 2017 11:48 - Rest Resolvings (Orchidee)
Beautiful writing, orchi!
October 16th, 2017 11:34 - A Lifelong Journey (Accidental Poet)
Everything you wrote is true, and so well penned, AP!
Poetry begins with...
October 16th, 2017 11:28 - YOU. (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful, beautiful poem, Fay!
Thank you for posting!
October 16th, 2017 11:25 - THE LOVE OF GOD (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A well crafted poem, Brian! Love the rhyming.
October 16th, 2017 11:23 - Dancing to the Music. (Goldfinch60)
Like you, Goldfinch, I always loved music, grew up with it, my Dad was a...
October 16th, 2017 11:20 - My Very Own Crew (Seek)
Great, great poem, Alwi!
Family is everything, no matter how crazy,...
October 16th, 2017 11:15 - THEY SAY (Louis Gibbs)
Another great and thought provoking poem, Louis.
Living in the now is...
October 16th, 2017 10:58 - Serpentine (Baylee)
Had to look up that word in the first line, Nicole. It fits perfect!
Some...
October 16th, 2017 10:53 - Shattered Anamnesis (Surucipe)
I too had to look up that word. Found two meanings: 1. remembering things...
October 16th, 2017 10:48 - Appointed Anointings (Orchidee)
orchi, I think the last line of the last stanza seems to be true for you!
October 16th, 2017 10:42 - stronghold (Heather T)
After reading this I remembered why we missed you so much! Incredible...
October 16th, 2017 04:59 - Living is truth (Poetic Dan)
While I agree with your message, PD, I think we should also consider...
October 16th, 2017 04:49 - Only a Heartbeat Away (Accidental Poet)
I really like your poem, AP! Feel the same way. It reminded me a little...
October 16th, 2017 04:46 - Orchi\'s Travels. (Goldfinch60)
LOL, Goldfinch! I think they should make your history writing a must read...
October 16th, 2017 00:35 - So Scared (Its Raskolnikov)
You really put in a lot of work on this one, Ras!
The last stanza says it...
October 16th, 2017 00:30 - With You--Pt.2 (Christina8)
Christina, this is a poem I want to read to my wife! Perfectly incredible!...
October 15th, 2017 04:56 - Straight from the heart (Jode)
jode, I do like your poem. Felt like this about my wife when I met her,...
October 15th, 2017 04:38 - What is love? (Jode)
jode, this is a beautiful ode to love!
I do like the last line of keeping...
October 15th, 2017 04:36 - Pretty For a Black Girl (Myabert)
Welcome to MPS, myabert!
I do like your writing, straight forward, to the...
October 14th, 2017 21:04 - A Certain Comfort (Karsten Turrey)
Your poem, Karsten, certainly is not a mistake! Like the structure too....
October 14th, 2017 20:02 - Kardashyish. (Comedy Bit, not for the easily offended) (Edthepoet)
Am not offended! :-) Love it.
Ed, you are quickly becoming my favorite...
October 14th, 2017 19:59 - Traumatic Childhood Memory (Prose Poem) (Rrodriguez)
An incident like this can traumatize a kid for life. I do hope it helped...
October 14th, 2017 17:22 - ESCAPE (Laura🌻)
Benvenuto Laura!
We all have dreams, and I do hope you can fulfill yours....
October 14th, 2017 17:11 - Freedom Foundings (Orchidee)
I only put my wings on when I write. That\'s when I escape into this...
October 14th, 2017 16:48 - It’s time to pause, feel and observe (Avigail)
And read BETWEEN the lines! Sometimes we learn more by concentrating on...
October 14th, 2017 16:45 - Fire To The Phoenix (Accidental Poet)
One for the Rock n\' Roll Hall of Fame!
Love your lyrics and definitely...
October 14th, 2017 16:40 - Your wee mate (Renzi)
Welcome back Renzi! It is so good to see and read from you again. You...
October 14th, 2017 16:38 - single male shopper (Frank Prem)
Frank, that shopper could have been me! Love your poem.
October 14th, 2017 04:50 - Crossed Wires. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, this seems to be a departure from your usual writing, but I like it!
October 14th, 2017 04:48 - OH MY ! POETIC SIDE ~ A 2 2 6 4 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What can I say, you said it all!
October 14th, 2017 04:46 - Days like this (Poetic Dan)
Forget the week, PD, just live weekend to weekend!
October 14th, 2017 04:43 - Narrow Escape. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, if all husbands would be like you, the world would be a better...
October 14th, 2017 04:41 - NUTELLA (Abu Aeesh)
I love Nutella, grew up with it, and really like your poem. But...
October 14th, 2017 04:30 - Trump This (Edthepoet)
Ed, absolutely love this! You are genius! Maybe you should become a...
October 13th, 2017 17:36 - My family is moving, again... (Rrodriguez)
Your poem paints a true and moving picture of life in the Bronx during...
October 13th, 2017 17:35 - Quiet Strength (Youngandnaive)
Very well written, Y&N, tender, loving, flowing well, leading into the...
October 13th, 2017 17:32 - A Poet (Tony36)
Your poem describes us well, Tony!
October 13th, 2017 14:43 - unravelling after (Frank Prem)
Frank, your excellent poem speaks to me and I think to many of us writers....
October 13th, 2017 12:16 - Lightning Won\'t Strike (Poetboy123)
And rise up we must! Good writing, poetboy!
October 13th, 2017 12:14 - The Tale of Franken-Beaver (Happy Halloween) (Mugsdaddy)
Mugsdaddy, you are a master at dark story telling! Enjoyed it a lot!
October 13th, 2017 12:11 - COASTAL EROSION ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This message should be distributed widely!
Welcome back, Brian.
October 13th, 2017 11:57 - I don\'t believe what I believe (Poetic Dan)
Good advice, PD. The mind and belief come first, then everything else...
October 13th, 2017 11:51 - The rules in our heads (Avigail)
You are so right, Avigail. We often tend to judge people or events by some...
October 13th, 2017 11:47 - Faded Flower (WL Schuett)
Beautifully written, WL, but haunting. You captured that loneliness really...
October 13th, 2017 11:41 - Restoring Reassurance (Orchidee)
Well crafted, orchidee, as usual!
October 13th, 2017 11:34 - Rise Above (Christina8)
I am really proud of you Christina! For actually doing it and for writing...
October 13th, 2017 11:29 - In The Making. (Fay Slimm.)
So well written, Fay, I even had the smell of freshly cut wood in my nose...
October 13th, 2017 11:24 - Friday (Accidental Poet)
AP you speak for all of us who labor all week long. I for one like Monday...
October 13th, 2017 11:18 - The Magic of Mozart. (Goldfinch60)
Incredible music, incredible poem! It is amazing what music can do to us,...
October 13th, 2017 02:42 - October Haiku (Karsten Turrey)
Good Haiku, Karsten!
October 13th, 2017 00:27
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