Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Open-Door Heaven (Orchidee) Very well written again, orchi! Does the (X3) mean that we have to repeat...
  November 2nd, 2017 13:24
• Paradise Is Here (Christina8) Paradise is where the heart is. Your beautiful declaration of love...
  November 2nd, 2017 13:19
• Come on little children.. (Anna Marg) One heck of a scary children\'s poem here! But so well written. Even I...
  November 2nd, 2017 13:16
• Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.) They certainly don\'t! Love that last line Fay. Beautiful poem, so well...
  November 2nd, 2017 13:14
• SEASONS OF JOY (BRIAN & ANGELA) I do miss the seasons sometimes, and your well written poem reminded me of...
  November 2nd, 2017 13:10
• Body Clock. (Goldfinch60) Here is the solution, Goldfinch: Move to Hawaii. We do NOT change the...
  November 2nd, 2017 12:58
• THE BOOK (Michael Edwards) Right from my heart Michael! Whenever I see a second-hand store I just...
  November 2nd, 2017 12:28
• Comfort in the Winds (MaddieJ) Welcome back, Leya! Glad to hear (read) from you again. You are so right,...
  November 2nd, 2017 12:23
• Aftermath (FredPeyer) Thanks so much, Kat. I do worry where this world is going!
  November 2nd, 2017 12:19
• Even if (A__pott) I would call that \'love\', Alex. Very well written, with a lot...
  November 1st, 2017 15:26
• UNDER HEAVY ROCKS (David Ghio) Welcome to MPS, David. What a nice light first poem here about your...
  November 1st, 2017 13:06
• New World (M.E.M.) M.E.M. your excellent poem shows A LOT of maturity. It would be great if...
  November 1st, 2017 11:51
• Highlighting Hopes (Orchidee) Beautiful writing, orchidee! Love that first stanza! And the rest ain\'t...
  November 1st, 2017 11:47
• THE GYM (Lasergraph) Lasergraph, love your poem. You speak from my heart. I cannot count how...
  November 1st, 2017 11:41
• Truth (Baylee) Another great poem to make one think by the famous Nicole!!! The real...
  November 1st, 2017 11:37
• AND SO IT GOES (Louis Gibbs) And so it goes!!! Another great poem, with an even greater structure!
  November 1st, 2017 04:35
• Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.) This is awfully good for \'just playing around\'!
  November 1st, 2017 04:34
• ACT OF TERRORISM ~ NEW YORK ~ NEW YORK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Agree with Michael!
  November 1st, 2017 04:28
• Straight to Arrears. (Goldfinch60) Very well written Goldfinch, and you say it really happened. Life is just...
  November 1st, 2017 04:24
• Wolf\'s Cry (Anna Marg) Wow! What a story, Anna! You drew me in and did not let me go! Very well...
  November 1st, 2017 04:21
• Broken souls (Anna Marg) Unfortunately, Anna, broken souls are everywhere. Out in the world and...
  November 1st, 2017 04:17
• Goodbye (Anna Marg) Anna, your first line says it all. Love really is happiness and pain! I...
  November 1st, 2017 04:14
• born to dance (Frank Prem) Beautifully written Frank. Had to look up broad-leaf dancer and came up...
  November 1st, 2017 01:12
• THE DECISION (Michael Edwards) Great poem Michael. Did not expect the ending, had to look twice to make...
  November 1st, 2017 00:16
• A Bee and It\'s Flower (Poemsbyliz) Welcome to MPS, Elizabeth. You posted a very nice opening poem. I do like...
  October 31st, 2017 23:23
• My true fear (Daniel.M) You write well about a problem many people have: the fear of rejection....
  October 31st, 2017 22:28
• Within (Misplacedsoul) After reading this poem I just wanted to give you a hug (hope this is not...
  October 31st, 2017 22:23
• First heartache (Misplacedsoul) Sad, but with an ending of hope. And beautifully written!
  October 31st, 2017 22:20
• If You Always Do (Edthepoet) Insanity: doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different...
  October 31st, 2017 22:14
• Foolish (My_dialect) Welcome to MPS, x! And you start out with a \'bang\'! Well written, great...
  October 31st, 2017 22:03
• Poetry (Youngandnaive) I like your poem very much. Poetry is everything you write and it is not...
  October 31st, 2017 18:38
• BLACK FRIDAY (Lasergraph) Great poem, lasergraph! Thank God I can let my wife do most of the...
  October 31st, 2017 18:28
• Soon To Be Graduate (M.E.M.) Welcome to the \"real\" world, M.E.M., where YOU now handle your own life!...
  October 31st, 2017 18:25
• cultured (Frank Prem) Great writing, great structure! It is the sign of a master to turn a...
  October 31st, 2017 12:57
• Miles (Sandra) How can I ever understand somebody else if I don\'t even understand...
  October 31st, 2017 12:54
• Loving You (Christina8) We were young and of different cultures too, after 45 years together (41...
  October 31st, 2017 12:44
• Saints Shekinah* (*glory) (Orchidee) Very nicely written, orchidee! I truly enjoy your writing!
  October 31st, 2017 12:41
• Define (Baylee) So many heavy questions! I think no matter how old we get, the answers to...
  October 31st, 2017 12:32
• LET\'S ALL WORK TOGETHER ! A Mirror Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Nice writing, great subject, incredible craftsman!
  October 31st, 2017 12:29
• Fierce Hunger. (Fay Slimm.) You wrote an outstanding poem, Fay! The reader can actually feel the...
  October 31st, 2017 12:24
• Taken Away (Baylee) It would be a shame, indeed, Nicole! No more great writings, no more...
  October 31st, 2017 12:14
• MY LIPS ARE THE WOMBS OF HER BRUISES (Av) Wearing long pants and a long sleeved turtle neck pullover, sweating...
  October 31st, 2017 11:59
• Forever proud (Poetic Dan) Dan, riding along on a bike like that I would have the same grin on my...
  October 31st, 2017 11:50
• Rapture of the Redeemed (Orchidee) Good write, as always, orchi. Thought your upcoming wedding would...
  October 31st, 2017 11:46
• New Kind. (Fay Slimm.) Like the whole poem, but love that last stanza! What a good write, Fay!
  October 31st, 2017 11:42
• IN PRAISE OF HEDGEHOGS ! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Nice ode to a lesser known little creature! They are sweet, as long as you...
  October 31st, 2017 11:41
• Can You Hear It?? (Goldfinch60) Unfortunately, a lot of times my silences are filled with the overpowering...
  October 31st, 2017 11:36
• REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS (Louis Gibbs) Great food for thought in this so well written poem, Louis. I have come to...
  October 31st, 2017 11:31
• You are What is so Wonderful About this World (Thoff1) A beautiful declaration of love, tomo!
  October 31st, 2017 11:22
• Teardrops Close In. (Kevin browne) \'Meetings with the illusions which became my very best...
  October 31st, 2017 11:20
• Lust (M.E.M.) Yes, M.E.M., that\'s what a kiss can do, and you wrote it very...
  October 31st, 2017 11:14
• Life (M.E.M.) M.E.M., never thought of a friend this way, but you said it beautifully!
  October 30th, 2017 20:16
• And This Is My Story. (Kevin browne) There is nothing \'fake\' about you Kevin! None of us here is a...
  October 30th, 2017 20:13
• Remedy (Skyebellasario) Well written, Skye! Sometimes it takes a guy some time, but eventually he...
  October 30th, 2017 20:06
• B playful (Avigail) Good advice, Avigail! We get so caught up in everyday life and work, we do...
  October 30th, 2017 11:10
• I no longer love you (Myself and me) Really letting go is hard and you expressed that beautifully, M&M! I do...
  October 30th, 2017 11:08
• If I\'d Been God (Its Raskolnikov) Great poem, Ras! It\'s not easy being God, isn\'t it?
  October 29th, 2017 04:16
• Positive Thought. (Goldfinch60) Andy, for me your poem is the last thought of the day, literally! It is...
  October 29th, 2017 04:12
• Comfort (Adrianna Kjeld) I do like your poem, and the last line says it all. Stay in the moment,...
  October 29th, 2017 04:09
• Give In (Baylee) A fine description of a writer\'s life! Love the last stanza!
  October 29th, 2017 01:21
• Gluttony (M.E.M.) M.E.M., I am married to a Chinese woman where love goes through the...
  October 29th, 2017 01:20
• What now? (Dakota) I like it Dakota! The age old questions: Where are we going and where are...
  October 28th, 2017 14:50
• For The One I Love (A.C Doomcraft) A beautiful declaration of love, A.C.!
  October 28th, 2017 13:09
• bass lines (Frank Prem) I do love this poem and the way it is structured, Frank. But, what the...
  October 28th, 2017 13:07
• Internal Conflict (Alexa Pineda) Great poem, great writing, great imagery, great choice of words, great...
  October 28th, 2017 13:03
• Treasures Deep. (Kevin browne) Great poem, Kevin. Love the ending!
  October 28th, 2017 13:01
• Communion Call (Orchidee) Another very good write, orchidee! While I am not really religious, I do...
  October 28th, 2017 12:58
• This Time. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully written, with so much meaning!
  October 28th, 2017 12:48
• SEASONS OF LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Nice writing, Brian. I do like how you describe love in terms of seasons.
  October 28th, 2017 12:45
• Avoidance Failed. (Goldfinch60) Goldie, this one is precious and funny. Goes to show that life is all...
  October 28th, 2017 12:37
• Lake Michigan (Christina8) Beautifully written, Christina! Maybe you should send it to the Michigan...
  October 28th, 2017 12:32
• AT LAST IN LOVE (Michael Edwards) Have to say Michael, I liked the last painting better. As for the poem....
  October 28th, 2017 04:42
• I Want To Become A Star (Orialis M. Pena) Orialis, this is a very well written, beautiful love poem. Very...
  October 27th, 2017 22:34
• 9 pm (Itried) OK, itried, here is what you do: Replace all the \'I am\' with \'I am...
  October 27th, 2017 22:29
• Usuzubed (The 660th throne) (Mugsdaddy) Mugsdaddy, you and Martina must have drunk from the same bottle! Very...
  October 27th, 2017 22:22
• surf? (CS Parker) Shaka, cs! Surf\'s up! No seriously, I do like your poem. We surf the...
  October 27th, 2017 22:18
• A DESERVING MOM (Laura🌻) You are a good daughter, Laura! First parents take care of us, but there...
  October 27th, 2017 18:34
• Broken Mirrors (Lee Renard Caspian) Great poem, Lee. Nice structure, and well written too. Like the line...
  October 27th, 2017 18:30
• We are beautiful (Ella) You speak from my heart, Anonym! In my family we have different races,...
  October 27th, 2017 18:10
• Those days (Ella) I just wish, Anonym, there would be more people doing what you so...
  October 27th, 2017 18:06
• you were but I am (Ella) It\'s about time we have some Canadians here, especially if they write as...
  October 27th, 2017 18:03
• Prince Charming (Skyebellasario) Great poem, with a strong and true message for all the girls and ladies...
  October 27th, 2017 17:58
• from the past (Queer-with-a-pen) Very strong writing, with a strong ending too. Well penned!
  October 27th, 2017 17:54
• 10 Steps (Kurt Philip Behm) I like this, Kurt. Am trying to figure out where I stand. I know I had...
  October 27th, 2017 15:00
• Grandfather (Misplacedsoul) Being a grandfather myself, I do appreciate your beautiful poem to your...
  October 27th, 2017 13:06
• You are gone (Myself and me) M&M, you express that lonely feeling so well in just a few words. The kite...
  October 27th, 2017 12:58
• Promise You\'ll Remember (Naeners) Naeners, while any suicide note is sad, this one is well written. I do...
  October 27th, 2017 12:54
• Répondez S\\\\\\\'il Vous Plait (A.C Doomcraft) A.C., you hit the nail on the head. Writing is a lonely business,...
  October 27th, 2017 12:47
• Pride (M.E.M.) M.E.M., maybe it\'s my eyes, but as the blind man said: I see, I can\'t...
  October 27th, 2017 12:29
• TWISTED CAP (Lasergraph) Thanks for the memories, lasergraph! Nicely done! While I may not have the...
  October 27th, 2017 12:24
• Persevering Progressions (Orchidee) OK, orchi, you already know how good a writer you are, but I will say it...
  October 27th, 2017 12:19
• Forget Me (Baylee) As do most of your poems, this one too made me think, Nicole. Your writing...
  October 27th, 2017 12:08
• Unexplained. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully said, Fay! I think we who are in the Fall or even Winter of...
  October 27th, 2017 11:55
• Stopped By Music. (Goldfinch60) Thank you, Goldfinch, for both the music and the poem. Music, writing,...
  October 27th, 2017 11:49
• SIX SWEET STAGES OF LOVE ~ SANTITA & BRIAN ~ SYMBIOSIS (BRIAN & ANGELA) I very much enjoyed reading your collaboration on love. Same as Laura,...
  October 27th, 2017 11:41
• Los Angeles (PoeticPsycho) Well written, PP, and so true. And that is why I live in Hawaii with the...
  October 27th, 2017 00:50
• THE ANCIENT LAND (Michael Edwards) That is quite a castle in your painting! Well done, gorgeous...
  October 27th, 2017 00:38
• ronnie\'s other guy (Frank Prem) Just goes to show, Frank, we will never know what is going on inside our...
  October 27th, 2017 00:20
• JUSTIFIABLE DENIAL (Louis Gibbs) Louis, this is just great! It wasn\'t me, but him too! The old children...
  October 27th, 2017 00:17
• Wrapper in a Larger (Thoff1) A tender and moving poem, Tomo! I assume the \'little lips\' belong to a...
  October 26th, 2017 23:21