Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- A Productive Day (Accidental Poet)
I just love the way your poem starts! I too am a slow starter, but like a...
November 6th, 2017 14:28 - Calling my name (SorrowfullyHappy)
Xavier, I really like your poem. It is well written with a lot of meaning....
November 6th, 2017 14:23 - Murder of the Soul (Poemsbyliz)
\'Killing me softly with his song\'....
Nicely written, Liz, with a lot...
November 6th, 2017 03:19 - three echoes (Frank Prem)
Very beautiful poem, Frank. Makes one think.
November 6th, 2017 03:13 - GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Interesting structure, and cannot argue with your points. Am getting there...
November 6th, 2017 03:12 - My Forever After. (Goldfinch60)
Man, Goldfinch, I have been staring at that last line forever, and still...
November 6th, 2017 03:10 - SOMEDAY (Louis Gibbs)
Give me some time to think this over, Louis! It is four simple lines, but...
November 6th, 2017 03:08 - If I Had The Chance...Again. (Adrianna Kjeld)
Adrianna, what can I say? Life is not fair. And you expressed that...
November 6th, 2017 03:06 - Let it Sink (A__pott)
Alex, your poems definitely float! Haven\'t read a sinker yet.
Good...
November 6th, 2017 03:04 - Worship Waffle (Orchidee)
To each his own, orchidee!
You choose what you like and stick with it. As...
November 6th, 2017 03:00 - FUCK YOU (Olivergreenwood19)
See what a title can do? It brings in a lot of readers!
And it was worth...
November 6th, 2017 02:56 - The Optimist in Me (Accidental Poet)
It is so nice to read an optimistic poem once in a while. I guess we tend...
November 5th, 2017 10:59 - ALL CREATION PRAISES GOD ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
God did NOT create us? Did NOT make us in his image? Brian, you lost me...
November 5th, 2017 04:38 - meeting Nola (Frank Prem)
Frank, this poem is just great. I stopped at the end with a \'what just...
November 5th, 2017 04:14 - Exciting. (Fay Slimm.)
I can see and feel that high tide. Unfortunately we don\'t have that, the...
November 5th, 2017 04:11 - Satisfied? (Goldfinch60)
Paints a nice picture of Dracula, like how you wrote this without any...
November 5th, 2017 04:08 - Rain (Skyebellasario)
Skye, I hope you don\'t mind me saying this, but I think you \'outdid\'...
November 4th, 2017 20:18 - Edge of the Wind (WL Schuett)
Even though your painting is good, WL, the poem outshines it! And I just...
November 4th, 2017 19:50 - Theatre (M.E.M.)
You made me use google translate, M.E.M.! Have no idea how accurate that...
November 4th, 2017 19:45 - Eden (Olivergreenwood19)
Well written, with good flow.
Just look what one apple got us!
November 4th, 2017 19:39 - Lonely (Christina8)
Christina, you are a boat on the ocean of life. So what happens? You dip...
November 4th, 2017 19:37 - Unsteady (Anna Marg)
Anna, this is a great poem! The stanza starting with \'conflict...\' is...
November 4th, 2017 19:32 - Helpful Hopings (Orchidee)
orchidee, I have selective hearing, so don\'t worry about me regarding...
November 4th, 2017 19:28 - Queen of Right and Wrong (Accidental Poet)
Straight from your heart, AP. So well written. Sibling relationships are...
November 4th, 2017 19:04 - My Wild Short Hair (ShannonXx)
Visiting the hair-dresser is the best therapy there is. You can pour your...
November 4th, 2017 14:52 - A New Moment (Kurt Philip Behm)
What beautiful metaphors for the begining of a new love, I can really...
November 4th, 2017 14:43 - Life Within Me. (Goldfinch60)
Great poem, Goldfinch! That white sheet (or white screen) is always a...
November 4th, 2017 03:42 - DRINKA PINTA DAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
For babies, mother milk is the BEST! Nice write, Brian, and thank you for...
November 4th, 2017 03:41 - she was gone. (Ella)
A beautifully written declaration of love to a mom! Well done, anonym!
November 4th, 2017 00:37 - Nothing to Hide (Rrodriguez)
Your poem is so well written, and I think there are times in everybody\'s...
November 3rd, 2017 16:15 - A day on the farm (Tony36)
Well said, Tony!
November 3rd, 2017 13:01 - To The Moon (Adrianna Kjeld)
I know there is that trampoline-like thingy on the moon erected just to...
November 3rd, 2017 12:59 - Apple (Olivergreenwood19)
Welcome to the wonderful world of technology, cyber media, and instant...
November 3rd, 2017 12:52 - Glory Greatness (Orchidee)
Very well written, again! Orchi, you truly are a master of the genre.
November 3rd, 2017 12:39 - THE TRADE OFF (Louis Gibbs)
I love your poem, Louis!
Are we beginning to understand because we move...
November 3rd, 2017 12:35 - Very Last (Baylee)
Straight to my favorites! Do I need to say more?
November 3rd, 2017 12:16 - Litterbug Litterbug, Shame On You (Accidental Poet)
Great message AP! Something I find very aggravating is that after somebody...
November 3rd, 2017 11:53 - War (Anna Marg)
Sad, but true! War is an ugly thing and so totally senseless. Throughout...
November 3rd, 2017 11:44 - Clarity of Mind. (Goldfinch60)
After my earlier comment and my comment exchange with Martina, I would...
November 3rd, 2017 05:28 - Clarity of Mind. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, I do not cry easily. I think the last time I cried was when my...
November 3rd, 2017 04:20 - ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, no kidding, your poem reminds me of my wife walking the beaches...
November 3rd, 2017 04:12 - hair wash on friday nights (Frank Prem)
Great poem about the \'good old days\', Frank! As a kid in Switzerland, we...
November 3rd, 2017 01:41 - Scars (Lee Renard Caspian)
Very nicely written, Lee! Love that last stanza! Great structure too.
November 3rd, 2017 00:32 - THE CLOWN (Michael Edwards)
Ingenious, Michael. You do have an incredible mind!
November 3rd, 2017 00:30 - three flames (Frank Prem)
Frank, burned my mouth just trying to read this! :-)
Fun and interesting!...
November 2nd, 2017 22:33 - Love Is a Very Hungry Caterpillar (Poemsbyliz)
Bon appetit, Liz! Hope you don\'t go hungry now!
I find the caterpillar...
November 2nd, 2017 22:31 - Therapy (Misplacedsoul)
After reading your poem, misplacedsoul, I started to ask myself how much...
November 2nd, 2017 21:49 - City Lights (Skyebellasario)
Most poets use the image of stars, but your city lights are so...
November 2nd, 2017 19:03 - Its been so long (SorrowfullyHappy)
Very beautifully written, Xavier!
November 2nd, 2017 16:11 - 600 Miles (Tony36)
The first few steps are the hardest, but your nice poem shows that you are...
November 2nd, 2017 16:00 - My Goddess (Mugsdaddy)
With nights like that, no wonder you curse the days! :-)
Great writing,...
November 2nd, 2017 14:42 - After this moment (Myself and me)
M&M, this is so sad, but beautifully expressed. I like the way you...
November 2nd, 2017 14:39 - Identity (M.E.M.)
You were kicked out of Pencey Prep??? And I thought you were this model...
November 2nd, 2017 13:34 - SANTA CLAUS BLUES (Lasergraph)
Great ideas and imagination, so well written, and to top it all off, your...
November 2nd, 2017 13:26 - Open-Door Heaven (Orchidee)
Very well written again, orchi!
Does the (X3) mean that we have to repeat...
November 2nd, 2017 13:24 - Paradise Is Here (Christina8)
Paradise is where the heart is. Your beautiful declaration of love...
November 2nd, 2017 13:19 - Come on little children.. (Anna Marg)
One heck of a scary children\'s poem here! But so well written. Even I...
November 2nd, 2017 13:16 - Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.)
They certainly don\'t! Love that last line Fay. Beautiful poem, so well...
November 2nd, 2017 13:14 - SEASONS OF JOY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I do miss the seasons sometimes, and your well written poem reminded me of...
November 2nd, 2017 13:10 - Adrenaline Rush (Accidental Poet)
Great, great poem, AP! The exhilaration of speed. Nothing beats it, be it...
November 2nd, 2017 13:07 - Body Clock. (Goldfinch60)
Here is the solution, Goldfinch: Move to Hawaii. We do NOT change the...
November 2nd, 2017 12:58 - THE BOOK (Michael Edwards)
Right from my heart Michael! Whenever I see a second-hand store I just...
November 2nd, 2017 12:28 - Comfort in the Winds (MaddieJ)
Welcome back, Leya! Glad to hear (read) from you again. You are so right,...
November 2nd, 2017 12:23 - Aftermath (FredPeyer)
Thanks so much, Kat. I do worry where this world is going!
November 2nd, 2017 12:19 - Even if (A__pott)
I would call that \'love\', Alex.
Very well written, with a lot...
November 1st, 2017 15:26 - UNDER HEAVY ROCKS (David Ghio)
Welcome to MPS, David.
What a nice light first poem here about your...
November 1st, 2017 13:06 - New World (M.E.M.)
M.E.M. your excellent poem shows A LOT of maturity. It would be great if...
November 1st, 2017 11:51 - Highlighting Hopes (Orchidee)
Beautiful writing, orchidee! Love that first stanza! And the rest ain\'t...
November 1st, 2017 11:47 - THE GYM (Lasergraph)
Lasergraph, love your poem. You speak from my heart. I cannot count how...
November 1st, 2017 11:41 - Truth (Baylee)
Another great poem to make one think by the famous Nicole!!!
The real...
November 1st, 2017 11:37 - AND SO IT GOES (Louis Gibbs)
And so it goes!!! Another great poem, with an even greater structure!
November 1st, 2017 04:35 - Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.)
This is awfully good for \'just playing around\'!
November 1st, 2017 04:34 - ACT OF TERRORISM ~ NEW YORK ~ NEW YORK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Agree with Michael!
November 1st, 2017 04:28 - Shhh, Listen (Accidental Poet)
I have been listening, AP, but all I hear is the tinning in my ears!
Love...
November 1st, 2017 04:26 - Straight to Arrears. (Goldfinch60)
Very well written Goldfinch, and you say it really happened. Life is just...
November 1st, 2017 04:24 - Wolf\'s Cry (Anna Marg)
Wow! What a story, Anna! You drew me in and did not let me go!
Very well...
November 1st, 2017 04:21 - Broken souls (Anna Marg)
Unfortunately, Anna, broken souls are everywhere. Out in the world and...
November 1st, 2017 04:17 - Goodbye (Anna Marg)
Anna, your first line says it all. Love really is happiness and pain! I...
November 1st, 2017 04:14 - born to dance (Frank Prem)
Beautifully written Frank. Had to look up broad-leaf dancer and came up...
November 1st, 2017 01:12 - THE DECISION (Michael Edwards)
Great poem Michael. Did not expect the ending, had to look twice to make...
November 1st, 2017 00:16 - A Bee and It\'s Flower (Poemsbyliz)
Welcome to MPS, Elizabeth.
You posted a very nice opening poem. I do like...
October 31st, 2017 23:23 - My true fear (Daniel.M)
You write well about a problem many people have: the fear of rejection....
October 31st, 2017 22:28 - Within (Misplacedsoul)
After reading this poem I just wanted to give you a hug (hope this is not...
October 31st, 2017 22:23 - First heartache (Misplacedsoul)
Sad, but with an ending of hope. And beautifully written!
October 31st, 2017 22:20 - If You Always Do (Edthepoet)
Insanity: doing the same thing over and over again and expecting different...
October 31st, 2017 22:14 - Foolish (My_dialect)
Welcome to MPS, x!
And you start out with a \'bang\'! Well written, great...
October 31st, 2017 22:03 - Poetry (Youngandnaive)
I like your poem very much. Poetry is everything you write and it is not...
October 31st, 2017 18:38 - BLACK FRIDAY (Lasergraph)
Great poem, lasergraph! Thank God I can let my wife do most of the...
October 31st, 2017 18:28 - Soon To Be Graduate (M.E.M.)
Welcome to the \"real\" world, M.E.M., where YOU now handle your own life!...
October 31st, 2017 18:25 - cultured (Frank Prem)
Great writing, great structure! It is the sign of a master to turn a...
October 31st, 2017 12:57 - Miles (Sandra)
How can I ever understand somebody else if I don\'t even understand...
October 31st, 2017 12:54 - Loving You (Christina8)
We were young and of different cultures too, after 45 years together (41...
October 31st, 2017 12:44 - Saints Shekinah* (*glory) (Orchidee)
Very nicely written, orchidee! I truly enjoy your writing!
October 31st, 2017 12:41 - Define (Baylee)
So many heavy questions! I think no matter how old we get, the answers to...
October 31st, 2017 12:32 - LET\'S ALL WORK TOGETHER ! A Mirror Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice writing, great subject, incredible craftsman!
October 31st, 2017 12:29 - Fierce Hunger. (Fay Slimm.)
You wrote an outstanding poem, Fay! The reader can actually feel the...
October 31st, 2017 12:24 - Dancing With the Light (Accidental Poet)
Be it with a camera, or be it with a pen, I think we are all \'dancing...
October 31st, 2017 12:21 - Taken Away (Baylee)
It would be a shame, indeed, Nicole! No more great writings, no more...
October 31st, 2017 12:14 - Flashbacks (Accidental Poet)
Where was I in 62? Playing electric guitar in my friends garage, dreaming...
October 31st, 2017 12:09 - MY LIPS ARE THE WOMBS OF HER BRUISES (Av)
Wearing long pants and a long sleeved turtle neck pullover, sweating...
October 31st, 2017 11:59
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