Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Timeless Affection. (Kevin browne)
You are not called \'kingkev\' for nothing! This is \'royal writing\'...
November 24th, 2017 11:20 - Build Bridges - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
...and some of us were hippies at one time! Sage advice - well said,...
November 24th, 2017 11:16 - TEN UNCERTAINTIES FOR 2018 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well written, Brian! Life is not only uncertain, it is a gamble. And we...
November 24th, 2017 11:14 - The End (Queer-with-a-pen)
Very well written, Boaz! Agree with James, it sounds like a story of death...
November 24th, 2017 11:09 - MAN\'S CONSTRUCT (Michael Edwards)
You quite nailed this mathematical poem. Too early in the morning for me...
November 24th, 2017 11:04 - KNOWING (Louis Gibbs)
This is soooo deeeep, Louis! Had to read it a few times just to get over...
November 24th, 2017 11:00 - The Sparkle in Your Eyes (Accidental Poet)
It is amazing how much the eyes can tell, or how much we can read in them....
November 24th, 2017 10:56 - Silence (Thegirlwhowrites)
It is amazing how much impact three well written short lines can have!
I...
November 24th, 2017 10:53 - Multicultural Marvellings (Orchidee)
If everybody would live according to your poem, this world would be a...
November 24th, 2017 10:50 - Christ (Tony36)
Very well written, Tony!
November 24th, 2017 10:48 - Thanksgiving (Christina8)
Beautiful, now I am really hungry! Being timewise behind everybody else,...
November 23rd, 2017 21:57 - You (Tony36)
A mighty fine declaration of love, Tony!
November 22nd, 2017 15:06 - Four in the Morning Feeling (Edthepoet)
You expressed these \'four in the morning\' feelings perfectly! Kudos!
November 22nd, 2017 15:05 - I\'m Thankful (Rrodriguez)
Very beautifully written - Happy Thanksgiving!
November 22nd, 2017 15:04 - Defying Gravity (Baylee)
This is so beautifully written, Nicole, it nearly feels like an out of...
November 22nd, 2017 13:30 - Praise Parade (Orchidee)
\'Ich bin erfreut!\' (I am rejoicing) just by reading your poem, orchidee!...
November 22nd, 2017 13:26 - The Proof (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, I love your poem, love the excellent choice of words, the flow,...
November 22nd, 2017 13:24 - Supreme Sensation. (Kevin browne)
That supreme sensation turned into a supreme poem, Kevin!
November 22nd, 2017 13:22 - Happy Thanksgiving (Accidental Poet)
And a very happy Thanksgiving to you too, AP! May you get the biggest...
November 22nd, 2017 13:20 - CHRISTMAS CRACKERS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Never heard of Christmas crackers, not even when I lived in Canada, but...
November 22nd, 2017 13:19 - Morpheus, Where Did You Go? (Goldfinch60)
Great, great poem, Goldfinch! There are nights where I wonder the same...
November 22nd, 2017 13:13 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2). (Michael Edwards)
Oh heck, Michael, you did it again! This time you curved some the bard\'s...
November 22nd, 2017 13:11 - HEAVENLY EXPRESSIONS (Louis Gibbs)
Art is art, no matter what shape, size, sound, no matter if written, sung,...
November 22nd, 2017 13:08 - Reflection of hate (JLL517)
I really like your poem, Vic! Well written, like the repetitions and...
November 22nd, 2017 13:03 - Fuck The Game (Olivergreenwood19)
Sometimes all it is is a game, and you either play, win or lose, or you...
November 22nd, 2017 13:00 - Ethiopian Evangelism (Orchidee)
Another great write! Don\'t know how you do it, you are so consistently...
November 22nd, 2017 12:58 - Sacred Creek (WL Schuett)
Like the others, I was drawn into your poem right to the last and rather...
November 22nd, 2017 12:56 - I Am Cloud. (Fay Slimm.)
I always viewed clouds as objects, but thanks to you and your very...
November 22nd, 2017 12:52 - Cupboard Love. (Goldfinch60)
Love it, Goldfinch! So many times, what for us is a mess, is loving...
November 22nd, 2017 12:49 - WRAPPING PARCEL ~ An 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I like to use the comics pages to wrap gifts, that way, if the recipient...
November 22nd, 2017 12:47 - Ode to Pugs (M.E.M.)
The picture is cute, the dogs are cute, and you are cute the way you write...
November 22nd, 2017 12:43 - Is Anything Planned? (Surucipe)
And you have been playing games with my head reading your poem! I do like...
November 22nd, 2017 12:40 - Majestic Marriage (Orchidee)
Even though I grew up and am living Queen-less, I can still appreciate...
November 22nd, 2017 12:32 - THE BIRTH OF SALVATION. (Lasergraph)
With all the hoopla and commercialism we tend to forget the REAL meaning...
November 22nd, 2017 12:25 - This World As We Know It. (Kevin browne)
\'Mouth filled with the tongue of intellect revealing all brand new\'
In...
November 22nd, 2017 12:19 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (Michael Edwards)
I see you took all of Shakespeare\'s missing lines and made a painting of...
November 21st, 2017 15:36 - Cool (Accidental Poet)
AP, your cool poem is so groovy!
November 21st, 2017 15:33 - Raging Flames (A__pott)
Wow! You are messing around with me here. Flames inside the mind and...
November 21st, 2017 03:26 - Warm cosy Evil (Georgiarous101)
Sometimes evil hides behind loving eyes! Very well written, like it.
November 21st, 2017 03:19 - Amazing grace by the shore (Poetic Dan)
Beautiful poem Dan! Glad you learned to play \'the tune\'!
November 21st, 2017 03:17 - Restoring Renewals (Orchidee)
Have to admit, I don\'t know too much (or better - very little) about what...
November 21st, 2017 03:15 - Before Its Rightful Time (Accidental Poet)
A very thought provoking poem for any writer, AP! How do we know it is the...
November 21st, 2017 03:12 - Lifes Highway. (Goldfinch60)
Love this poem, Goldfinch! There will be a stop eventually, but in the...
November 20th, 2017 17:20 - Fervour. (Fay Slimm.)
And that \'emotional fire\' in you keeps on burning very brightly!
November 20th, 2017 17:18 - THE SPHERE OF GOD\'S LOVE ~ A 5 5 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well written, Brian!
November 20th, 2017 17:15 - Reputation (Adrianna Kjeld)
An incredible journey, Adrianna! Well written. Stay strong!
November 20th, 2017 17:13 - not gay as in happy (Queer-with-a-pen)
Beautifully written, with so much emotion and truth. I do hope the world...
November 20th, 2017 17:09 - witchy wire (Frank Prem)
Great poem, Frank, about something that was very special. Nowadays I guess...
November 20th, 2017 17:05 - P R I O R I T I E S Author Unknown (Accidental Poet)
Whoever wrote this is a genius! Thanks for sharing it, AP!
November 19th, 2017 19:13 - Blame, Guilt & Forgiveness (Accidental Poet)
You have to forgive in order to forget. AP, this poem says a lot more than...
November 19th, 2017 02:30 - SHE PLAYED THE FLUTE (Michael Edwards)
\'Held in passive hands\'...how many times do we hold our live and...
November 19th, 2017 02:28 - More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit (Poetic Dan)
PD, you have this uncanny ability to write from your heart and to pull us...
November 19th, 2017 02:25 - How the West Was Won (Will Shootman)
Great writing, Will! Your whole poem is \'something for memory\'s sake\'!
November 19th, 2017 02:18 - belle and beau (Frank Prem)
Frank, you are so good at these incredibly styled poems. Like the subject...
November 19th, 2017 02:15 - THREE ONE-LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Michael, I just love these on-liners of yours! Can\'t make up my mind...
November 19th, 2017 02:14 - SNOWMEN ~ ELEGANT ! A 7 7 Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brings me back to my time living in Montreal. Lots of snow, made snowmen...
November 18th, 2017 01:06 - In the Beginning. (Goldfinch60)
The book of life, what a wonderful way of looking at our lives. This poem...
November 18th, 2017 01:03 - MEASURED REASON (Michael Edwards)
You are quite the intellectual here, Michael! I do love it. Want to be...
November 17th, 2017 12:24 - Selfish (JLL517)
Love is all about giving, without expecting anything in return. When that...
November 17th, 2017 12:13 - My Love Was Left For Dead. (Kevin browne)
\'Where frolics play under pavements deep\'....are you hinting (and...
November 17th, 2017 11:58 - ANCIENT TRANSITIONS (Louis Gibbs)
Now that I know you too will be there on the other side, I am REALLY...
November 17th, 2017 11:49 - IDEAS (Laura🌻)
Very nicely done, Laura! I am sure that 99 out of 100 ideas are either...
November 16th, 2017 22:00 - Internal Law (Accidental Poet)
If we would have known then what we know now.....
I really like your...
November 16th, 2017 21:58 - Who\'s the who\'st who? (Poetic Dan)
PD, both your poem and the quote are great. Need to read it again a few...
November 16th, 2017 21:49 - Fly (Skyebellasario)
Skye, you are already flying high here on MPS! Your poem proves it. And...
November 16th, 2017 21:45 - Listening Lord (Orchidee)
So, orchi, tell me, is the grass on the other side (the Catholic side)...
November 16th, 2017 21:43 - Light In The Dark (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., this is the most clever and inventive poem about fire I have ever...
November 16th, 2017 21:40 - Quality Lives (Seek)
Alwi, your excellent poem touches on something that has been bothering me...
November 16th, 2017 21:38 - Sunday-Ways. (Fay Slimm.)
Sunday today just isn\'t anymore what it used to be, but your tongue in...
November 16th, 2017 21:35 - CHRISTMAS TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It\'s about time somebody puts \'Mother Christmas\' into the flood lights....
November 16th, 2017 21:33 - Melody For The Moon.. (Kevin browne)
...And I was dancing with the orchestra while reading your poem!
Good...
November 16th, 2017 21:31 - I don’t even know (Lost-but-not-broken17)
There is one alliance behind you, lost-but-not-broken: MPS!
We all root...
November 16th, 2017 21:25 - In The Moonlight. (Goldfinch60)
Life is a cycle, made of cycles within cycles. Great poem Goldfinch!
November 16th, 2017 21:21 - IN PRAISE OF MILK (Michael Edwards)
Your great little poem reminded me of a time when I was little, watching a...
November 16th, 2017 21:16 - My best friend (Jode)
A very nice tribute to your best friend, jode!
November 16th, 2017 21:14 - Her (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., this is a very fine poem about the power of eyes. The girl in the...
November 16th, 2017 21:13 - You\'re My Heaven (Its Raskolnikov)
Very well written, Ras! A beautiful declaration of love.
November 16th, 2017 21:04 - High Hopes (Orchidee)
orchi, here is what I figured out for hope:
H = Having
O = Optimistic
P...
November 16th, 2017 20:59 - A Gift (Christina8)
Good for you girl! Am happy you are seeing the light! Well written...
November 16th, 2017 20:53 - Just writing it out (Poetic Dan)
PD, your poem fits right in with a poem I wrote to be published tomorrow...
November 16th, 2017 20:50 - The Digital Pen (Accidental Poet)
I do like your poem AP. While I write everything on the computer, I do not...
November 16th, 2017 20:44 - God\'s Reflection. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, this is a strong poem, full of power and hope, of belief and...
November 16th, 2017 20:36 - FIVE SEASONAL HAIKU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
No favorite for me here, like all five of them!
November 16th, 2017 20:33 - Back There (Fay Slimm.)
This is the time of the year when being away from home and family is so...
November 16th, 2017 20:29 - Unexpected Moments. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful poem, Goldfinch! I like the way you relate words to music. The...
November 16th, 2017 20:27 - ERRANT PROGRAMMING (Louis Gibbs)
Great poem and food for thought! To finally change that script is very...
November 16th, 2017 20:21 - Reigning Rhapsody (Orchidee)
This may be the reigning rhapsody, orchi, but YOU are the reigning hymn...
November 15th, 2017 18:26 - I hate you (Olivergreenwood19)
Most people remember only the bad. I like this turn-around to remembering...
November 15th, 2017 18:25 - Tears of Thorns (WL Schuett)
Too many great lines to mention them all! This beautiful poem should be...
November 15th, 2017 18:23 - Dew (Myself and me)
You outdid yourself with this shorty, m&m! Love it!
November 15th, 2017 18:15 - CELL PHONE INTRUDER (Lasergraph)
Great poem, lasergraph. Here is the perfect answer when somebody tries to...
November 15th, 2017 18:11 - Cloud (M.E.M.)
...And if you don\'t believe me, I will zap you with lightening!
November 15th, 2017 18:09 - Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.)
\'I saw wisdom delivering itself to fate\' I see wisdom in your poems. You...
November 15th, 2017 18:07 - Has Anyone Seen My Sanity? (Accidental Poet)
What is sanity? Never had it, don\'t miss it! Didn\'t even know I was...
November 15th, 2017 18:03 - A Way Of Life. (Kevin browne)
Your excellent poem made me look back on my own life. There is much truth...
November 15th, 2017 17:59 - How Could I Drive It? (Goldfinch60)
Great poem, Goldfinch! In my late teens I owned an Alfa Romeo Spider,...
November 15th, 2017 17:53 - A N G E L A ~ Country Girl ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
While I truly enjoyed your poem, this definition of \'al fresco\' from...
November 15th, 2017 17:51 - My Purpose (Christina8)
I like your straight forward poem. There are always times in our lives...
November 14th, 2017 10:33 - THE RING (Michael Edwards)
Great painting, very interesting poem. You are a master at these...
November 14th, 2017 02:27 - The Fear of the Unknown (A__pott)
Alex, well written! We keep on going in our rut simply because we are...
November 14th, 2017 02:23
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