Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Warm cosy Evil (Georgiarous101)
Sometimes evil hides behind loving eyes! Very well written, like it.
November 21st, 2017 03:19 - Amazing grace by the shore (Poetic Dan)
Beautiful poem Dan! Glad you learned to play \'the tune\'!
November 21st, 2017 03:17 - Restoring Renewals (Orchidee)
Have to admit, I don\'t know too much (or better - very little) about what...
November 21st, 2017 03:15 - Lifes Highway. (Goldfinch60)
Love this poem, Goldfinch! There will be a stop eventually, but in the...
November 20th, 2017 17:20 - Fervour. (Fay Slimm.)
And that \'emotional fire\' in you keeps on burning very brightly!
November 20th, 2017 17:18 - THE SPHERE OF GOD\'S LOVE ~ A 5 5 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well written, Brian!
November 20th, 2017 17:15 - Reputation (Adrianna Kjeld)
An incredible journey, Adrianna! Well written. Stay strong!
November 20th, 2017 17:13 - not gay as in happy (Queer-with-a-pen)
Beautifully written, with so much emotion and truth. I do hope the world...
November 20th, 2017 17:09 - witchy wire (Frank Prem)
Great poem, Frank, about something that was very special. Nowadays I guess...
November 20th, 2017 17:05 - SHE PLAYED THE FLUTE (Michael Edwards)
\'Held in passive hands\'...how many times do we hold our live and...
November 19th, 2017 02:28 - More I write the more I bleed, words from heart & soul to free my spirit (Poetic Dan)
PD, you have this uncanny ability to write from your heart and to pull us...
November 19th, 2017 02:25 - How the West Was Won (Will Shootman)
Great writing, Will! Your whole poem is \'something for memory\'s sake\'!
November 19th, 2017 02:18 - belle and beau (Frank Prem)
Frank, you are so good at these incredibly styled poems. Like the subject...
November 19th, 2017 02:15 - THREE ONE-LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Michael, I just love these on-liners of yours! Can\'t make up my mind...
November 19th, 2017 02:14 - SNOWMEN ~ ELEGANT ! A 7 7 Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brings me back to my time living in Montreal. Lots of snow, made snowmen...
November 18th, 2017 01:06 - In the Beginning. (Goldfinch60)
The book of life, what a wonderful way of looking at our lives. This poem...
November 18th, 2017 01:03 - MEASURED REASON (Michael Edwards)
You are quite the intellectual here, Michael! I do love it. Want to be...
November 17th, 2017 12:24 - Selfish (JLL517)
Love is all about giving, without expecting anything in return. When that...
November 17th, 2017 12:13 - My Love Was Left For Dead. (Kevin browne)
\'Where frolics play under pavements deep\'....are you hinting (and...
November 17th, 2017 11:58 - ANCIENT TRANSITIONS (Louis Gibbs)
Now that I know you too will be there on the other side, I am REALLY...
November 17th, 2017 11:49 - IDEAS (Laura🌻)
Very nicely done, Laura! I am sure that 99 out of 100 ideas are either...
November 16th, 2017 22:00 - Who\'s the who\'st who? (Poetic Dan)
PD, both your poem and the quote are great. Need to read it again a few...
November 16th, 2017 21:49 - Fly (Skyebellasario)
Skye, you are already flying high here on MPS! Your poem proves it. And...
November 16th, 2017 21:45 - Listening Lord (Orchidee)
So, orchi, tell me, is the grass on the other side (the Catholic side)...
November 16th, 2017 21:43 - Light In The Dark (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., this is the most clever and inventive poem about fire I have ever...
November 16th, 2017 21:40 - Quality Lives (Seek)
Alwi, your excellent poem touches on something that has been bothering me...
November 16th, 2017 21:38 - Sunday-Ways. (Fay Slimm.)
Sunday today just isn\'t anymore what it used to be, but your tongue in...
November 16th, 2017 21:35 - CHRISTMAS TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It\'s about time somebody puts \'Mother Christmas\' into the flood lights....
November 16th, 2017 21:33 - Melody For The Moon.. (Kevin browne)
...And I was dancing with the orchestra while reading your poem!
Good...
November 16th, 2017 21:31 - I don’t even know (Lost-but-not-broken17)
There is one alliance behind you, lost-but-not-broken: MPS!
We all root...
November 16th, 2017 21:25 - In The Moonlight. (Goldfinch60)
Life is a cycle, made of cycles within cycles. Great poem Goldfinch!
November 16th, 2017 21:21 - IN PRAISE OF MILK (Michael Edwards)
Your great little poem reminded me of a time when I was little, watching a...
November 16th, 2017 21:16 - My best friend (Jode)
A very nice tribute to your best friend, jode!
November 16th, 2017 21:14 - Her (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., this is a very fine poem about the power of eyes. The girl in the...
November 16th, 2017 21:13 - You\'re My Heaven (Its Raskolnikov)
Very well written, Ras! A beautiful declaration of love.
November 16th, 2017 21:04 - High Hopes (Orchidee)
orchi, here is what I figured out for hope:
H = Having
O = Optimistic
P...
November 16th, 2017 20:59 - A Gift (Christina8)
Good for you girl! Am happy you are seeing the light! Well written...
November 16th, 2017 20:53 - Just writing it out (Poetic Dan)
PD, your poem fits right in with a poem I wrote to be published tomorrow...
November 16th, 2017 20:50 - God\'s Reflection. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, this is a strong poem, full of power and hope, of belief and...
November 16th, 2017 20:36 - FIVE SEASONAL HAIKU ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
No favorite for me here, like all five of them!
November 16th, 2017 20:33 - Back There (Fay Slimm.)
This is the time of the year when being away from home and family is so...
November 16th, 2017 20:29 - Unexpected Moments. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful poem, Goldfinch! I like the way you relate words to music. The...
November 16th, 2017 20:27 - ERRANT PROGRAMMING (Louis Gibbs)
Great poem and food for thought! To finally change that script is very...
November 16th, 2017 20:21 - Reigning Rhapsody (Orchidee)
This may be the reigning rhapsody, orchi, but YOU are the reigning hymn...
November 15th, 2017 18:26 - I hate you (Olivergreenwood19)
Most people remember only the bad. I like this turn-around to remembering...
November 15th, 2017 18:25 - Tears of Thorns (WL Schuett)
Too many great lines to mention them all! This beautiful poem should be...
November 15th, 2017 18:23 - Dew (Myself and me)
You outdid yourself with this shorty, m&m! Love it!
November 15th, 2017 18:15 - CELL PHONE INTRUDER (Lasergraph)
Great poem, lasergraph. Here is the perfect answer when somebody tries to...
November 15th, 2017 18:11 - Cloud (M.E.M.)
...And if you don\'t believe me, I will zap you with lightening!
November 15th, 2017 18:09 - Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.)
\'I saw wisdom delivering itself to fate\' I see wisdom in your poems. You...
November 15th, 2017 18:07 - A Way Of Life. (Kevin browne)
Your excellent poem made me look back on my own life. There is much truth...
November 15th, 2017 17:59 - How Could I Drive It? (Goldfinch60)
Great poem, Goldfinch! In my late teens I owned an Alfa Romeo Spider,...
November 15th, 2017 17:53 - A N G E L A ~ Country Girl ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
While I truly enjoyed your poem, this definition of \'al fresco\' from...
November 15th, 2017 17:51 - My Purpose (Christina8)
I like your straight forward poem. There are always times in our lives...
November 14th, 2017 10:33 - THE RING (Michael Edwards)
Great painting, very interesting poem. You are a master at these...
November 14th, 2017 02:27 - The Fear of the Unknown (A__pott)
Alex, well written! We keep on going in our rut simply because we are...
November 14th, 2017 02:23 - Hearing Aid (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Great poem, Edward! We always concentrate on the ones hard of hearing,...
November 13th, 2017 18:17 - Favorite Word (M.E.M.)
Dostoefsky said it much better than I can: To live without Hope is to...
November 13th, 2017 18:13 - Affliction Assistance (Orchidee)
I do like your writing, orchidee! We all have our afflictions and do need...
November 13th, 2017 18:05 - When I Breath. (Kevin browne)
\'You share your love, you live your life and start to win\'....what is...
November 13th, 2017 17:58 - first love (Alisha)
Well written, alisha! There is a lot of emotion between the lines. There...
November 13th, 2017 16:21 - Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you are speaking my language here! Love that picture too! Your words...
November 12th, 2017 03:46 - Herosim (Goldfinch60)
Great writing Andy, but as far as I am concerned, I am no hero. And do you...
November 12th, 2017 03:41 - WITHOUT EXCUSE (Michael Edwards)
Incredibly well written, Michael, but I am not sure who did wrong to whom...
November 12th, 2017 03:38 - Knock knock (Poetic Dan)
PD, this is so sad. Well written, but sad. I just hope you are not in jail...
November 12th, 2017 03:34 - Writer\'s Block (Christina8)
Christine, your poem about writers block ain\'t bad for somebody with...
November 12th, 2017 02:51 - my long hiatus (Allysnewworld)
Allys, we all want to take an out once in a while, live in a reality where...
November 11th, 2017 19:19 - Reality (Beckii)
We can get lost in our daydreams, but reality will always catch us. Very...
November 11th, 2017 19:13 - Life\'s Promise Still Unknown (Kurt Philip Behm)
A haunting poem, Kurt, that makes one ponder what life\'s promise really...
November 11th, 2017 19:10 - Shadows (Baylee)
Very imaginative writing, Baylee! Comparing the absence of you with dawn...
November 11th, 2017 19:04 - TAPS~24 notes (Laura🌻)
Laura, I am sorry about your three friends. Your poem is outstanding. You...
November 11th, 2017 19:00 - Remembrance Reconcilings (Orchidee)
Orchidee, this is more than a hymn, this is a beautiful tribute to those...
November 11th, 2017 18:58 - Melting (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., this is the best write-up on this Salvador Dali painting I have...
November 11th, 2017 18:56 - SEASONS OF THANKSGIVING ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, I think all the turkeys in England are now hiding! Great poem of...
November 11th, 2017 17:12 - Never Forget. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, this is the most eloquent and beautiful tribute to our fallen heroes...
November 11th, 2017 17:10 - Remembrance Day Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, after reading your incredible poem, I did feel like standing up...
November 11th, 2017 17:07 - YET ANOTHER CRUDY (Michael Edwards)
What a great crudy! Hang a bag on the cow and you can run your BBQ with
November 11th, 2017 16:58 - Lost (Skyebellasario)
Skye, I really like this poem. So well written, great last line!
Do...
November 11th, 2017 01:05 - Not Your Type Of Perfect (Broken_kingdom)
Francine, you know why I love your poem? Because it applies to all of...
November 10th, 2017 15:15 - hum-drum (Dusk arising)
A fine description of an average day, da! There is so much feeling and...
November 10th, 2017 12:34 - 10.000 feet. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, using the metaphor of flying to talk about love is ingenious! Great...
November 10th, 2017 12:00 - Friendship Fondness (Orchidee)
orchidee, you must be all torn up. Here you are loving two people so much:...
November 10th, 2017 11:58 - FUSION ON FLOWER ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice acrostic, Brian, but you forgot me, the weed!
November 10th, 2017 05:21 - My Life is Nearly Led. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, as a \'senior\' all I can say is that your beautiful poem says it...
November 10th, 2017 05:19 - THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards)
Love the drawing, very exquisite, minimalist, but leaving a lot to the...
November 10th, 2017 05:13 - Even if they\'re watching be your self (Poetic Dan)
PD, you have to be who you are. You make the decisions, and you have to...
November 10th, 2017 05:06 - THE BLESSED (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, while I agree in principal with the premise of your poem, I do...
November 10th, 2017 01:24 - Rain (Olivergreenwood19)
oliver, I really like your use of the rain metaphor to touch on all our...
November 10th, 2017 00:45 - THANKSGIVING IS COMING (Lasergraph)
Great reminder, lasergraph, am looking forward to Thanksgiving!
November 9th, 2017 14:54 - Relationship Resting - Thomas á Kempis Series - 4 (Orchidee)
All I can say is: Praise the powers that be for giving us orchidee!
November 9th, 2017 14:38 - TO HUG ~OR~ NOT TO HUG ? A 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, I like the subject you brought up here. There are times and places...
November 9th, 2017 14:34 - Ashes In The Past (Kurt Philip Behm)
I would say yes to the first three stanzas, and the flame will keep on...
November 9th, 2017 14:23 - The Holidays (Christina8)
Very uplifting, beautiful reminder of what the Holidays are all about,...
November 9th, 2017 14:12 - Wordless. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you describe the beauty of stillness so incredibly well. Stillness...
November 9th, 2017 14:07 - Obsolete (Baylee)
Beautiful writing, Nicole! Want to read it again and again, so made it a...
November 9th, 2017 13:47 - Stepping Off. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, you said it so well: think outside of the box, the box that is...
November 9th, 2017 03:21 - A SHELTERED NOOK (Michael Edwards)
This is so British! Beautiful though, and so well written! Like the...
November 9th, 2017 03:19 - Thank America for god (Seek)
Seek, I read a lot of it, but not all (too long for one read, need to take...
November 9th, 2017 03:16 - Old Friends (Adrianna Kjeld)
\'A sneak peek at my life
like its some kind of exhibit.\'
As far as I...
November 9th, 2017 03:10 - I Know It\'s Only Tuesday, but I\'m Tired (Poemsbyliz)
These weekends can do that to you anytime, Liz!
Just kidding!
I do like...
November 9th, 2017 00:29
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