Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Disregarded (Baylee)
It is rare to find such an incredible description of broken love. You do...
October 6th, 2017 12:53 - Searching Light (WL Schuett)
I do love your poem, WL, it is so well written. I think all of us humans...
October 6th, 2017 12:50 - WHAT MAKES THE BRITISH HAPPY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
And now we know everything about the British! Having a good time seems to...
October 6th, 2017 12:45 - PTSD (Christina8)
Up until I read this incredibly strong and well written poem of yours...
October 6th, 2017 12:40 - Window To The Universe (Accidental Poet)
A very fine poem, AP! Makes me want to stay up late tonight and look up...
October 6th, 2017 12:11 - These Days. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, reading your poems is such a joy. Reading this one, I could hear the...
October 6th, 2017 12:07 - The Best Opera in the World. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, you not only depicted this extra-ordinary afternoon perfectly,...
October 6th, 2017 12:04 - IS IT TIME? (Louis Gibbs)
Your intriguing poem made me think of the French Revolution, the birth of...
October 6th, 2017 11:42 - DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2) (Michael Edwards)
Michael, I do like version 2 better than version 1 based solely on gut...
October 6th, 2017 11:24 - A Painters Eye (WL Schuett)
Thanks for opening the door to your creativity! A painter does see the...
October 6th, 2017 00:56 - Frolicking fun (Poetic Dan)
Days like that are like the icing on the cake! You did a tremendous job,...
October 6th, 2017 00:53 - Under the stars โจ (Malubotelho)
A really nice poem about innocence and love, even though they might not...
October 6th, 2017 00:49 - Paint\'s Heat. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, I think Sotheby should hire you to write the descriptions next time...
October 6th, 2017 00:45 - The Gravity of Time (Accidental Poet)
Your excellent poem made me wonder what would happen if we include past...
October 6th, 2017 00:39 - Once More Her Hero. (Goldfinch60)
What I see in this beautiful poem of yours, Goldfinch, is not the spider....
October 6th, 2017 00:28 - DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1) (Michael Edwards)
I think you wrote a poem here that could take up pages upon pages of...
October 6th, 2017 00:16 - Equal (Baylee)
I don\'t know if you saw the poem \'Mortality\' I posted yesterday. The...
October 5th, 2017 23:53 - But Take Me Underneath It. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, you are branching out into different but equally well written...
October 5th, 2017 11:54 - THE OLD COUPLE (Lasergraph)
lasergraph, if this is the result of one of those moods of yours, you...
October 4th, 2017 21:14 - Comforting Considerations (Orchidee)
Comfort.....something we all need. Your beautiful hymn will comfort many...
October 4th, 2017 14:21 - Words of passion (Poetic Dan)
Great imagination, PD! Great lines, like \'Atoms become entwined in the...
October 4th, 2017 14:12 - Edge Of Life. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, this time you outdid yourself! Love how every line starts with...
October 4th, 2017 14:09 - AUTUMN HAIKU ~ For CHRISTINA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Where would we be without trees? You captured the fall colors and feelings...
October 4th, 2017 11:01 - Not even the Mule (WL Schuett)
Great, great poem, WL! And the painting fits it so well!
Your whole poem...
October 4th, 2017 10:58 - Our love Is Strong (Christina8)
Christina, well written and true! Marriage is always a work in progress. I...
October 4th, 2017 10:27 - Bound (Baylee)
And if you keep on writing like this, Nicole, I shall forever read and...
October 4th, 2017 10:19 - Fountains Abbey (Sue.evans)
A great poem, Sue, and an important part of history.
October 4th, 2017 10:17 - Empathy Among The Species (Accidental Poet)
Very well written, AP! And what a glorious day it would be! But I don\'t...
October 4th, 2017 03:42 - October\' s Intent. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, this is beautiful!
Fred has spoken.
October 4th, 2017 03:40 - ya-hey ya-ho (to fly) (Frank Prem)
Frank, when I was young I had a private pilot license, was flying single...
October 4th, 2017 02:15 - Imagination. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful description of imagination, Goldfinch! You are right, it will...
October 4th, 2017 02:00 - IT\'S ABOUT TIME (Louis Gibbs)
Count me in, Louis! MPS will survive into any dimension and come out of...
October 4th, 2017 01:55 - THE AUTOCRAT (Michael Edwards)
You express the relieve after a strong personality is gone, very well,...
October 4th, 2017 01:52 - Donโt Stop People in the Night (A__pott)
Don\'t open your heart to strangers, no matter what time it is.
A very...
October 4th, 2017 01:48 - How is your mood today? (Avigail)
Avigail, your imagination is incredible. Another great poem that makes one...
October 3rd, 2017 16:29 - where you see and feel it (Frank Prem)
Frank, I did need to read the comments to understand the poem. So well...
October 3rd, 2017 12:33 - so many ask why (Mugsdaddy)
Mugs, your short poem about this horrible, senseless tragedy in Las Vegas...
October 3rd, 2017 12:29 - Creature Comfortings (Orchidee)
A great reminder to take care of our environment. You nailed it, orchidee!
October 3rd, 2017 12:12 - Thank God, Papi is Home Again (Rrodriguez)
Against nature\'s fury we are helpless and you expressed the pain and loss...
October 3rd, 2017 12:03 - Littlest of things (Poetic Dan)
I like this a lot PD, I do try to appreciate the little things, but too...
October 3rd, 2017 11:47 - Growing Into Older Life. (Kevin browne)
So well written, Kevin, but scaring the you know what out of me!!!!
What...
October 3rd, 2017 11:44 - Senryu (Christina8)
And time stood still when I read your Senryu!
October 3rd, 2017 11:41 - HALLOWEEN (Lasergraph)
Love Halloween, the one day in the year I can take MY mask off! :-)
Great...
October 3rd, 2017 11:40 - Moments (Baylee)
I could just repeat your poem here to tell you how I feel about your...
October 3rd, 2017 11:38 - PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fun collaboration of the two of you. Enjoyed every word!
October 3rd, 2017 11:31 - Summers Ago. (Fay Slimm.)
Very beautifully written, Fay, it brought up memories of a skinny dipping...
October 3rd, 2017 11:28 - The Late Muse. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, your muse is just playing around with you, and now made you...
October 3rd, 2017 11:25 - What Iโd Like to Know (Accidental Poet)
Very well written, AP. I never understood why people would want to kill...
October 3rd, 2017 11:21 - Hallucinations uncovered by woman, in illustration (Kate)
A very intriguing write, Kate, with an unexpected ending. Well written!
October 3rd, 2017 11:16 - Life as I know it (Adrianna Kjeld)
Adrianna, your great little poem just proved that we don\'t have to be...
October 3rd, 2017 00:45 - Quiet (Marillene)
Marillene, welcome to MPS!
This is your first posting, and what a beauty...
October 3rd, 2017 00:38 - ON BEING A POET (Michael Edwards)
Thank you Michael! Finally I see something that will help me write better!...
October 3rd, 2017 00:34 - and still, i wait (Ummbree)
I like this poem, ummbree. It is well written, describing the fall in...
October 2nd, 2017 22:07 - The Wellspring (Not a Poem) (Mugsdaddy)
Mugs you got the blood boiling with your tale. And that last sentence was...
October 2nd, 2017 20:44 - Floating Underwater (Kate)
Welcome to MPS, Kate! Beautiful poem, great choice of words, love your...
October 2nd, 2017 18:00 - Homeless (Sue.evans)
Sue, this is so well written, I could feel the anguish, loneliness and...
October 2nd, 2017 17:45 - Take my hand (Poetic Dan)
PD, this is a poem to live by every day of our lives. Very inspirational,...
October 2nd, 2017 15:18 - Me and the fabrics ๐๐ (Malubotelho)
Wow, Malu, just the idea of looking at a dress as a best friend is...
October 2nd, 2017 14:42 - They say he lost his mind (Avigail)
Avigail, I am glad you wrote about this and are asking some very valid...
October 2nd, 2017 14:35 - Space (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Beautifully said, Edward! It can be infinitely small or infinitely large....
October 2nd, 2017 13:53 - Aubade (Baylee)
Whoever you wrote this for, Nicole, is a very lucky man to have you on his...
October 2nd, 2017 13:50 - Wedding Day (Christina8)
Nice and sweet and so full of beautiful memories! As you pointed out,...
October 2nd, 2017 13:36 - Wells of Summer. (Fay Slimm.)
Wells of summer, your choice of words is sublime, Fay. Great as usual!
October 2nd, 2017 04:40 - The Place Where Love Controls. (Kevin browne)
Love your poem, Kevin, but where love controls is in my marriage!
October 2nd, 2017 04:38 - Kiss My WHAT? Good-bye (Accidental Poet)
Don\'t believe everything you read, AP!
Love your poem, Very slick, and...
October 2nd, 2017 04:37 - HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great Poem, Brian! Love hot air balloons.
October 2nd, 2017 04:35 - Ode to Music. (Goldfinch60)
Goldie, I am sorry, but you made a big mistake here.
The youtube clip is...
October 2nd, 2017 03:58 - FUSIONS 4 (Michael Edwards)
OK, Michael, first of all your poem is not PC (frogs eat snails), my...
October 2nd, 2017 03:51 - THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, you are touching on an incredibly complex and interesting thought...
October 2nd, 2017 03:29 - Butterflies (Adrianna Kjeld)
Adrianna, the butterflies will come again! I promise! Don\'t forget, they...
October 2nd, 2017 03:23 - Travelling On Trusting (Orchidee)
I just don\'t know how you do this, orchidee, to be able to write one of...
October 1st, 2017 15:48 - Rose (Its Raskolnikov)
Ras, looks like you are dancing all the way to heaven here!
Nice writing!
October 1st, 2017 15:37 - The Arch-Angel (not a poem) (Mugsdaddy)
An interesting and exciting tale full of twists and turns! You and Martina...
October 1st, 2017 15:33 - Come Sleep, Oh Sleep (Rrodriguez)
Wow, Roberto! Michael is right, you made it look easy. Great work. I...
October 1st, 2017 15:27 - Loose Laces (Its Raskolnikov)
Ras, you tried! By writing this very well written poem! Just one question...
October 1st, 2017 15:24 - The Pack (WL Schuett)
This is a great poem, WL. A lot of animals instinctively know when...
October 1st, 2017 15:20 - Music of life (Avigail)
Great questions, Avigail!
But too many, and how would I know?
How does...
October 1st, 2017 15:12 - An Apology (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Edward, I completely agree with Michael. He said everything I had in mind...
October 1st, 2017 15:08 - All-Points Bulletin (Accidental Poet)
You should have known, AP, it is ALWAYS bad weather when the Bugsy Malones...
October 1st, 2017 14:52 - Advancing. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, another beautiful poem! Migrating birds are a sight to see. In Hawaii...
October 1st, 2017 14:49 - GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Remember that story where Jesus said I always walk with you, and the man...
October 1st, 2017 02:54 - To Fun or Not To Fun (Goldfinch60)
Right on, Goldfinch! The last two lines say it all!
It is a little hard...
October 1st, 2017 02:52 - I Stare Wisely Into Nothing. (Kevin browne)
If I could choose only one favorite line in this poem, it would be this...
October 1st, 2017 02:50 - THE TEMPTRESS (Michael Edwards)
Michael, you really are the master of poetic forms! And beautiful...
October 1st, 2017 02:39 - Frank Sinatra (Adrianna Kjeld)
Adrianna, I like how you lead into the poem with Frank Sinatra. It sets...
September 30th, 2017 22:00 - Please tell me (Rrodriguez)
Roberto, if the translation is that good, the original must be excellent!...
September 30th, 2017 12:38 - What I couldn\'t Find. (Kevin browne)
Out of all your good lines, it is the first one that grabbed me and made...
September 30th, 2017 12:35 - You Remind Me (Accidental Poet)
AP, your poem is great. It did draw me in right away. Sometimes a total...
September 30th, 2017 12:30 - SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I must say, Brian, you picked the right one! Great poem, she must have...
September 30th, 2017 12:24 - Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.)
You do have a beautiful way with words, Fay! And the price paid for these...
September 30th, 2017 12:14 - Clever or Wise. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, I had to make this a favorite!
In these few lines you touch on...
September 30th, 2017 03:47 - MULTITASKING (Michael Edwards)
OK, Michael, it IS gender related and here is why:
Imagine the brain as...
September 30th, 2017 03:40 - Sea (Sugiura Asuna)
SA, I like the structure of your poem. It is short, but to the point, a...
September 29th, 2017 22:51 - Mad Universe (Egyptianqt79)
Aysha, what a wonderfully written tale! I like how you weave references...
September 29th, 2017 22:43 - Contrition (Reivax Camlost)
Reivax, I like your poem a lot. Very well written. Sounds a bit like the...
September 29th, 2017 22:30 - Just Three Words (Jarid)
Jarid, I sincerely love your poem. It is well written with a great...
September 29th, 2017 22:19 - Unimaginably unknowning of the mind (Poetic Dan)
PD, I love your poem. The mind is the most incredible thing there is. I am...
September 29th, 2017 20:53 - Traditions Of Life. (Kevin browne)
There is so much in this poem that I need to \'digest\' that I cannot say...
September 29th, 2017 20:39 - Aubode (Rrodriguez)
What a beautiful way to start the day. You captured the scene perfectly,...
September 29th, 2017 14:04 - The Creature (Tony36)
Wow, Tony, you nailed it with this one! Fascinating reading. Kudos!
September 29th, 2017 13:59
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