Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• To Fun or Not To Fun (Goldfinch60) Right on, Goldfinch! The last two lines say it all! It is a little hard...
  October 1st, 2017 02:52
• I Stare Wisely Into Nothing. (Kevin browne) If I could choose only one favorite line in this poem, it would be this...
  October 1st, 2017 02:50
• THE TEMPTRESS (Michael Edwards) Michael, you really are the master of poetic forms! And beautiful...
  October 1st, 2017 02:39
• Frank Sinatra (Adrianna Kjeld) Adrianna, I like how you lead into the poem with Frank Sinatra. It sets...
  September 30th, 2017 22:00
• Please tell me (Rrodriguez) Roberto, if the translation is that good, the original must be excellent!...
  September 30th, 2017 12:38
• What I couldn\'t Find. (Kevin browne) Out of all your good lines, it is the first one that grabbed me and made...
  September 30th, 2017 12:35
• SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I must say, Brian, you picked the right one! Great poem, she must have...
  September 30th, 2017 12:24
• Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.) You do have a beautiful way with words, Fay! And the price paid for these...
  September 30th, 2017 12:14
• Clever or Wise. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, I had to make this a favorite! In these few lines you touch on...
  September 30th, 2017 03:47
• MULTITASKING (Michael Edwards) OK, Michael, it IS gender related and here is why: Imagine the brain as...
  September 30th, 2017 03:40
• Sea (Sugiura Asuna) SA, I like the structure of your poem. It is short, but to the point, a...
  September 29th, 2017 22:51
• Mad Universe (Egyptianqt79) Aysha, what a wonderfully written tale! I like how you weave references...
  September 29th, 2017 22:43
• Contrition (Reivax Camlost) Reivax, I like your poem a lot. Very well written. Sounds a bit like the...
  September 29th, 2017 22:30
• Just Three Words (Jarid) Jarid, I sincerely love your poem. It is well written with a great...
  September 29th, 2017 22:19
• Unimaginably unknowning of the mind (Poetic Dan) PD, I love your poem. The mind is the most incredible thing there is. I am...
  September 29th, 2017 20:53
• Traditions Of Life. (Kevin browne) There is so much in this poem that I need to \'digest\' that I cannot say...
  September 29th, 2017 20:39
• Aubode (Rrodriguez) What a beautiful way to start the day. You captured the scene perfectly,...
  September 29th, 2017 14:04
• The Creature (Tony36) Wow, Tony, you nailed it with this one! Fascinating reading. Kudos!
  September 29th, 2017 13:59
• CHILLY WRITING DAY (Lasergraph) I really like this thoughtful poem, lasergraph. And I do think we are all...
  September 29th, 2017 13:57
• chasing a dream (Avigail) Avigail, you touched on something that I questioned many times and that...
  September 29th, 2017 13:54
• Sing-song Serenadings (Orchidee) Orchidee, read about Santita\'s suggestion. You better be careful, what if...
  September 29th, 2017 11:56
• Love theatre 🎭 (Malubotelho) Malu, you reminded me with this lovely poem that we really are all actors...
  September 29th, 2017 11:48
• Wooden Music (WL Schuett) WL, you captured the mood perfectly! There are very few things in life...
  September 29th, 2017 11:44
• Clipped Wings (Christina8) Christina, this is such a lovely poem, written from the heart. It must be...
  September 29th, 2017 11:37
• Colorless (Baylee) Nicole, you penned a beautiful if dark and sad poem, very artistically...
  September 29th, 2017 11:24
• SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well done, you two! But the subject matter is something I don\'t want to...
  September 29th, 2017 03:09
• Missed Opportunities. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, you touched on something very elementary here, something we are...
  September 29th, 2017 03:05
• Extravagance. (Fay Slimm.) Your lovely poem just proves that harvest time is the best time of the...
  September 29th, 2017 03:02
• This Love (Adrianna Kjeld) Adrianna, nice poem, you tell it how it is! Love the last line! No matter...
  September 29th, 2017 02:55
• REFLECTED EDONE (Michael Edwards) I can\'t count and write at the same time, so I leave these kind of...
  September 29th, 2017 02:50
• PASSING THROUGH (Louis Gibbs) You know Louis, that last stanza, which is great by the way, could even...
  September 29th, 2017 02:41
• Faithful Favourings (Orchidee) Orchidee, while I am not a church person (am religious in my own way), I...
  September 28th, 2017 14:35
• I Want to Love Him (Katy S.) There is love and then there is sex. Your straight forward, no holds...
  September 28th, 2017 14:31
• On the Brink (Baylee) Nicole, I love this description of a sunset, it is beautiful. Your second...
  September 28th, 2017 14:23
• A bird told me 🐦 (Malubotelho) A very nice and tender poem, Malu! Not far from my house there is this...
  September 28th, 2017 14:13
• Drama (Christina8) I really love this poem, Christina! There is nothing we can do about our...
  September 28th, 2017 14:06
• FUSIONS 3 (Michael Edwards) Must be an English thing! Here, if I thunk you under the water you...
  September 28th, 2017 03:38
• Calliope. (Goldfinch60) She looks kind of stern. But hey, if it works for you, fine! Love your...
  September 28th, 2017 03:03
• TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) You got me thinking, Brian. There must be a lot more of these relationship...
  September 28th, 2017 01:15
• Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.) Fay you have such an incredible way with words! I do look forward every...
  September 28th, 2017 01:13
• My Chains (Brie) Strong writing with a clear message! You did well here, Brie! But forget...
  September 27th, 2017 21:40
• Kings (Niallprideaux) This seems to be a pretty personal poem about your memories, so I don\'t...
  September 27th, 2017 21:37
• PHOTOS OF LIFE (Lasergraph) We photograph the happy times and even without pictures we usually...
  September 27th, 2017 21:06
• Tasty Prey (Rictameter) (Mugsdaddy) Great writing, Mugsdaddy! And since I can only count to three, I did not...
  September 27th, 2017 13:02
• Love Doesn\'t Ask (Edthepoet) Great poem, Ed! Relationships are sometimes so complicated! We want to say...
  September 27th, 2017 12:56
• Journeying Joys (Orchidee) Orchidee, another fine write. I liked the line \'Spring up well - spring...
  September 27th, 2017 12:52
• Smile (A quote from Marlys A. Wohlenhaus) (Edward Charles McDevitt) Sad story, but a quote to live by!
  September 27th, 2017 12:18
• Midnite Paddle (WL Schuett) Beautiful writing WL, great choice of words, great rhyming, this poem put...
  September 27th, 2017 12:16
• Empyrean (Baylee) My wonder is how you can write so beautifully! From now on I am going to...
  September 27th, 2017 12:12
• Make My Heart Sing (Christina8) Christina, it is amazing how your excellent poem touches on so many...
  September 27th, 2017 12:03
• 101 (Poetic Dan) PD, the movie is absolutely great!!! (How telling too that the girl jumped...
  September 27th, 2017 11:51
• My Mentor. (Goldfinch60) You wrote a wonderful tribute to your dad, Goldfinch! My dad was a...
  September 27th, 2017 11:38
• FUSIONS 2 (Michael Edwards) Michael, as a European who grew up with wine on the table all the time...
  September 27th, 2017 11:34
• A Something. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, only you can make this birdsong encounter sound like a hymn!
  September 27th, 2017 11:30
• Broken stem (Bella cortez) This is great, Bella! Three short lines, ten short words, and you said it...
  September 27th, 2017 11:27
• THE UNFOLDING FIASCO (Louis Gibbs) Louis, you wrote from MY heart! While I could not write it as beautiful as...
  September 27th, 2017 11:21
• Remembrance (MaddieJ) Leya, this is very, very beautiful. You caught the mood perfectly with...
  September 27th, 2017 11:15
• DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, while very well written (and funny!), and containing the original...
  September 27th, 2017 11:09
• Start Moving Soon (Thoff1) Interesting read, Tomo. Sometimes you have to move on, sometimes it is...
  September 26th, 2017 21:32
• I cried for your love (Tanvir H) Well written, tanvir! Unfortunately there are times in life where it...
  September 26th, 2017 21:29
• Thief (Brie) Brie, that\'s the problem with thieves, they don\'t care about the mess...
  September 26th, 2017 17:25
• Take Back Your Love (Edthepoet) I like your poem, Ed, but unfortunately I am neither a lyrics, nor...
  September 26th, 2017 17:17
• Thirsty 💉 (Malubotelho) Dear Malu, this collaboration poem between you and your son is just great!...
  September 26th, 2017 17:14
• Found my voice (Poetic Dan) PD, this is not only a very strong, written from the heart, poem, it is...
  September 26th, 2017 17:06
• HERMAN AND BIG E (Lasergraph) Great, great tribute to your brother-in-law. May he be surrounded by...
  September 26th, 2017 17:00
• Something Stolen (Katy S.) Katy, yesterday\'s poem celebrated love, today it is all over already? No...
  September 26th, 2017 13:02
• Alive (Katy S.) Katy, you perfectly captured that feeling of euphoria one gets when...
  September 26th, 2017 13:00
• Nina (Mugsdaddy) My condolences, Mugsdaddy. Your poem is a lovely tribute to your grandma....
  September 26th, 2017 12:29
• Dawns Piper (WL Schuett) Great painting - great poem! The perfect way to start my day! I like how...
  September 26th, 2017 12:15
• Adrenaline--Part 2 (Christina8) That guy is soooo lucky to live in a fantasy world! Losing girlfriend and...
  September 26th, 2017 12:05
• Overdue (Baylee) Beautifully written, but sad. Breaking up has never been easy. I usually...
  September 26th, 2017 12:00
• Turbulence. (Fay Slimm.) After this poem Fay, every time I will be standing at the ocean\'s edge, I...
  September 26th, 2017 11:55
• The Tandem of Love. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, this is such a beautiful metaphor for married life. I can see...
  September 26th, 2017 11:52
• FROM FUSIONS 1 (Michael Edwards) Michael, if all your fusion poems are as good as this one, just keep on...
  September 26th, 2017 11:49
• MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........? (BRIAN & ANGELA) You know Brian, I love the music, but what I find so awesome is how these...
  September 26th, 2017 11:46
• Loves Extinction (Writingismything) Another very good poem, A! I think one of the problems today is that...
  September 26th, 2017 00:19
• Step by Step (Writingismything) A, I just love these short line poems. Two words only on each line,...
  September 26th, 2017 00:14
• Cared left and forgotten (Writingismything) Well written A., straight from the heart. I am so sorry for your loss and...
  September 26th, 2017 00:11
• Government (Mirrored edone) (Mugsdaddy) Mugsdaddy, this is AWESOME! Just looking at it makes me dizzy! Kudos!
  September 26th, 2017 00:01
• From Venus to Mars (A__pott) Great poem, Alex. Beautifully written, with an interesting and very apt...
  September 25th, 2017 20:04
• Simplicity Seekers (Orchidee) Orchidee, I talked to the man upstairs and was told that KP was put into...
  September 25th, 2017 18:00
• The Young Boy (Niallprideaux) Pretty gory, Niall, but I guess war is like that. Surprise ending.
  September 25th, 2017 17:37
• NEVER (Lasergraph) Thank you so much, lasergraph, for sharing this with us. As a parent I...
  September 25th, 2017 17:33
• The Alley (WL Schuett) Great, great writing, WL! For these kind of alleys I have two Samoan...
  September 25th, 2017 17:29
• Life is rhythm (Malubotelho) Great poem, Malu. The first thing that came to my mind was the Energizer...
  September 25th, 2017 17:24
• hi, this is your higher self calling (Avigail) Sound advice, Avigail! But there are days when I think my higher self is...
  September 25th, 2017 17:19
• What a wonderful time (Renzi) The prodigal wee bit party girl returns home! WELCOME! So happy to have...
  September 25th, 2017 17:12
• Adrenaline--Part 1 (Christina8) OK, Christina, now you did it! You ruined it with the last line! :-) You...
  September 25th, 2017 17:09
• O She! (Surucipe) S, well written, well rhymed, and intriguing. Can\'t ask for anything...
  September 25th, 2017 17:06
• TEN POLITICAL OXYMORONS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, I love oxymorons in general and and especially political and...
  September 25th, 2017 17:01
• Not Yet.. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, you captured the feelings, the emotions perfectly. Great choice of...
  September 25th, 2017 16:56
• Dark Comfort. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, I love your poem, and I think I need to try this as well. Your...
  September 25th, 2017 16:49
• IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards) Great poem and even greater (if I may say so) drawing, Michael. And btw,...
  September 25th, 2017 16:45
• THE BETWEEN (Louis Gibbs) I do like your poem a LOT! But (there is always a \'but\'), can you...
  September 25th, 2017 16:34
• From the unknown (Poetic Dan) I do like the whole poem, PD, but especially the ending. If quantum theory...
  September 25th, 2017 12:31
• Fall From Grace (Christina8) And what an imagination this is! Well written, Christina!
  September 25th, 2017 12:28
• Figuring out… (Avigail) Don\'t know why exactly, Avigail, but the following poem by Charles...
  September 25th, 2017 12:22
• He played as a monster (Malubotelho) A very strong and personal account, Malu! A lot of times adults don\'t...
  September 25th, 2017 12:17
• OUT OF THE IVORY PALACES (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, if the church leaders would be more like Jesus and less concerned...
  September 25th, 2017 11:17
• Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60) Did I ever tell you, Goldfinch, that you are an awesome writer? There,...
  September 25th, 2017 11:15