Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Deaf and Blind (Sandra) Ah well, Sandra, I figured I might as well read all three of your...
  October 26th, 2017 22:33
• I Know (Sandra) Sandra, after reading \'Heartache\' I checked your page and found this...
  October 26th, 2017 22:27
• Heartache Has a Name (Sandra) Sandra, I do like your poem. Even though it is sad, it is so well written,...
  October 26th, 2017 22:24
• Forever To Know (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Beautifully written, Kurt! There is something special about your poems....
  October 26th, 2017 19:58
• bound (Heather T) No wonder it took you a while to post again. This incredible poem must...
  October 26th, 2017 19:55
• The Crisis (M.E.M.) M.E.M., this is a great take on Thomas Paine. Well penned, well thought...
  October 26th, 2017 19:51
• The Morning (WL Schuett) You just made my morning, WL! Beautifully written!
  October 26th, 2017 19:41
• Successful entrepreneurship (Avigail) You are absolutely right, Avigail! But entrepreneurs are also risk takers,...
  October 26th, 2017 19:39
• World without you (Myself and me) M&M, just like all the others here on MPS I am with you and I do feel your...
  October 26th, 2017 19:37
• Spirit Showerings (Orchidee) Orchi, your technique is outstanding! As are your words and rhyming.
  October 26th, 2017 19:34
• A Happy Poem (Christina8) Me too I am happy for you, Christina! If writing makes you happy and helps...
  October 26th, 2017 19:31
• Existence (Baylee) Well written, Nicole, but I DO expect that from you by now! Really like...
  October 26th, 2017 11:07
• holding close to beauty (Frank Prem) Frank, you keep on surprising me with your incredible writing. This poem...
  October 26th, 2017 04:59
• An Ending Universe (Alexa Pineda) Alexa, even though I think that your poem is very well written, I am not...
  October 26th, 2017 04:50
• To My Grandfather, For My Dad, From your Granddaughter (Alexa Pineda) As both a father and a grand-father, I could only wish to have a poem like...
  October 26th, 2017 04:45
• SPACESHIP MOON ~ A 4 5 3 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, I do hope that this is just a fun poem and not what you believe...
  October 26th, 2017 04:34
• 00:00 (Poetic Dan) Very, very, very clever, P.D.! Took me about 20 seconds to figure it out....
  October 26th, 2017 04:24
• Say Something (Naeners) Naeners, Michael is right. I do love shorties that say a lot between the...
  October 26th, 2017 04:20
• Fucking Douche (Naeners) Well, Naeners, I am sure there are guys like that. And for these guys your...
  October 26th, 2017 04:17
• Behind and Between. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, I know you are a good writer, but you went way beyond being good....
  October 26th, 2017 04:09
• Water is Life. (Goldfinch60) Water and salt, without it we would not be around anymore! Love the poem...
  October 26th, 2017 04:06
• ON THE FRINGES OF HER FLOWERS (Av) I did read the whole thing (twice actually) and my head is...
  October 26th, 2017 04:04
• FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES (Michael Edwards) Michael, as far as I am concerned, the first one is absolutely tops! Love...
  October 26th, 2017 04:00
• Once In A Blue Moon (M.E.M.) M.E.M., this guy sounds just about perfect! I do like your poem, well...
  October 26th, 2017 03:55
• SAVOR THE MOMENT (Lasergraph) Bravo, lasergraph! You speak (write) from my heart. I am in the exact same...
  October 25th, 2017 14:14
• Broken vows (Misplacedsoul) Welcome to MPS, misplacedsoul! This is so well written, straight from the...
  October 25th, 2017 13:47
• That Time of Day (Karsten Turrey) Have to agree with you, Karsten, your nice happy poem says it all!
  October 25th, 2017 13:37
• Bully Sharks and their Prey (Niallprideaux) Great writing and a great message, Niall! Especially today with social...
  October 25th, 2017 13:34
• Heard it all before (Edthepoet) I like it, Ed! Could be lyrics for a song. Great writing!
  October 25th, 2017 11:29
• A Few Questions (Youngandnaive) I do like the way you wrote this, like the structure. Some guys are a...
  October 25th, 2017 11:22
• Now Watch Him Roar (Poetboy123) And \'roar\' you do with this poem, poetboy! Very well written, well...
  October 25th, 2017 11:18
• Waiting (Myself and me) It is so nice to see you back, M&M! Kind of missed that sailboat picture,...
  October 25th, 2017 11:15
• Ignorant Eyes - 8/31/16 (Its Raskolnikov) Your well written poem made me stop and think, Ras!
  October 25th, 2017 11:10
• Autumn Chill (Christina8) So well written, Christina! And I am really happy for you. Go get em,...
  October 25th, 2017 11:08
• Shield Safety (Orchidee) Another beautiful hymn, penned by a master. And I guess you were there...
  October 25th, 2017 11:03
• I\'ll still cover my charms (ShannonXx) Shannon, I thought \'Coffee House\' was really good, but I think you...
  October 25th, 2017 11:00
• Quenchers. (Fay Slimm.) A great poem, Fay, brings me back to my childhood and our blackberry...
  October 25th, 2017 10:49
• Angel Dust Curing. (Kevin browne) Kevin, the rhyming is exquisite! Love that the first line in each stanza...
  October 25th, 2017 10:46
• WHEELS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great picture and great poem, Brian. Wheels are so important, especially...
  October 25th, 2017 10:34
• Hope in the Dark. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful poem, beautifully written, Goldfinch! I think we all know that...
  October 25th, 2017 02:04
• House Of Ill Repute. (Wallace) Wallace, I understand you, even though I have never been to one of these...
  October 25th, 2017 02:02
• The Blackbird in the Night (Seeker123) Beautiful writing, great choice of words. Well penned, Kudos!
  October 25th, 2017 01:09
• A Winter’s Night (M.E.M.) I really love this poem, M.E.M., even though I didn\'t have a winter\'s...
  October 25th, 2017 01:00
• .09 Milliseconds (M.E.M.) Yes, a lot can happen in a very short time, you wrote that very well....
  October 25th, 2017 00:59
• Life After Death (M.E.M.) A very thought provoking poem, M.E.M.! Well written too!
  October 25th, 2017 00:56
• the astronomer (Frank Prem) I love your poem, Frank! I can see that astronomer, but I think the poem...
  October 25th, 2017 00:38
• Did you ever want something so bad (Joseph M Marion) A beautiful declaration of love, and you are so lucky to have what you...
  October 25th, 2017 00:34
• THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE (Michael Edwards) Michael, for these three I would gladly have paid the full triple price!
  October 25th, 2017 00:32
• ODE TO RARE BEAUTY (Louis Gibbs) Louis, your excellent poem expresses both the beauty and the loss of this...
  October 25th, 2017 00:29
• AFFLICTION (Av) Ahh, to be twenty-five again! Really like the whole poem, but love that...
  October 25th, 2017 00:22
• LIKE CORN IN WIND (Michael Edwards) Love your poem, Michael, and love your answer to Martina\'s comment! I do...
  October 24th, 2017 19:34
• Why Don\'t Mornings Last All Day. (Goldfinch60) Great poem, Goldfinch! And you are right, the mornings disappear much too...
  October 24th, 2017 19:29
• HOT SPICEY PUMPKIN SOUP ! A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) We already bake pumpkin mochi and pumpkin bread, so the soup will be a...
  October 24th, 2017 19:24
• Shore-Songs. (Fay Slimm.) Great writing, Fay! We don\'t have high tides here, but winter can bring...
  October 24th, 2017 18:28
• Dancing In The Rain (Christina8) A beautiful image, Christina! You know, dancing in the rain can stand for...
  October 24th, 2017 18:24
• From Those Days. (Kevin browne) \'Hope of Einstein being an insurance man knocking on your door\' Again...
  October 24th, 2017 18:21
• Thy Will Be Done - Thomas á Kempis Series - 3 (Orchidee) Beautifully written, orchidee! Love that last line.
  October 24th, 2017 18:19
• Shadow fall (WL Schuett) Beautifully expressed, beautiful imagery, a pleasure to read. Kudos!
  October 24th, 2017 18:17
• Distractions (Avigail) Well said Avigail! We have TMI (too much information). It does the soul...
  October 24th, 2017 18:11
• Began (Baylee) Great writing, Nicole! You drew me in right away. A whole love story in a...
  October 24th, 2017 15:57
• From Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60) Why, indeed, Goldfinch. Too many people just walk in that rut they call...
  October 18th, 2017 11:36
• TOO BAD (Louis Gibbs) Louis, the way I see this poem, the who, what and why is not relevant. The...
  October 18th, 2017 11:29
• Hear Me (A__pott) I hear you, Alex, but so many times we do not hear. I do like your poem,...
  October 18th, 2017 04:54
• Something I forgot (David Neil) Welcome to MPS, David. Well written, heartfelt, longing, sadness, all...
  October 17th, 2017 18:51
• Last Act (Mugsdaddy) Mugsdaddy, you not only wrote an incredible poem, you also asked an...
  October 17th, 2017 18:48
• The Muse Unrehearsed (Kurt Philip Behm) You made me think, Kurt. Do I live to write? I know I am not writing for a...
  October 17th, 2017 18:40
• Never a doubt (WL Schuett) WL you wrote a great tribute to the one you love. Having that someone on...
  October 17th, 2017 11:19
• Confident Compendium (Orchidee) A nice reminder, orchidee, that Fall is the time to be grateful for all we...
  October 17th, 2017 11:15
• My Heart Aches When You\'re Gone (Christina8) Beautiful, tender poem, Christina. I agree with Laura, enjoy the kids as...
  October 17th, 2017 11:11
• Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully said and so true, Fay!
  October 17th, 2017 03:35
• Love hurts (Olivia1697) Nicely penned, good rhyming, Olivia. A sad tale, with a hopeful uptick at...
  October 17th, 2017 03:04
• Listening deep down (Poetic Dan) PD, I get it, except for the lobster lesson. Got me stumped there! Is this...
  October 17th, 2017 02:56
• Ink, Pastel and Water (Frank Prem) Very well written, Frank, but then, so are all of your poems! And thanks,...
  October 17th, 2017 01:57
• B I R D S ~ An Homacrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Nicely done, Brian! You are a master at these complicated poem structures!
  October 17th, 2017 01:53
• Against the Flow (Goldfinch60) Nice, Goldfinch! My office is at home, so no commuting! Have a smile on my...
  October 17th, 2017 01:52
• What did I do? (CherryEllie5) Hey Cherry, you can\'t fade! Your purpose in life is to write!!!! We want...
  October 16th, 2017 16:51
• Our differences make us similar (CherryEllie5) Cherry, I really like your poem. Very well written and straight from the...
  October 16th, 2017 16:49
• Zlata\'s Daughter (Frank Prem) Beautiful, tender, yet so strong writing here, Frank! Living here in...
  October 16th, 2017 16:45
• I love those random memories (Rrodriguez) Roberto, you might as well add me to the list. Want to know the same thing...
  October 16th, 2017 16:26
• Stand (Tia Davis/テイア) Beautiful poem, Tia! You stand tall, girl, and watch how much good will be...
  October 16th, 2017 16:22
• Know your force (Poetic Dan) This one definitely does not only make sense in your head, it makes sense,...
  October 16th, 2017 16:21
• That Day (Youngandnaive) Y&N, I had to make this a favorite. It is well written, but it is the...
  October 16th, 2017 16:17
• Your Worth (Christina8) A beautiful love letter to your husband, Christina! May you both be happy...
  October 16th, 2017 11:56
• A Delinquent Fetish For Adversity. (Kevin browne) Again, too many great lines to single out. I just love the way you write.
  October 16th, 2017 11:50
• Breaking Free (WL Schuett) Great poem, WL, love the last stanza!
  October 16th, 2017 11:48
• Rest Resolvings (Orchidee) Beautiful writing, orchi!
  October 16th, 2017 11:34
• YOU. (Fay Slimm.) A beautiful, beautiful poem, Fay! Thank you for posting!
  October 16th, 2017 11:25
• THE LOVE OF GOD (BRIAN & ANGELA) A well crafted poem, Brian! Love the rhyming.
  October 16th, 2017 11:23
• Dancing to the Music. (Goldfinch60) Like you, Goldfinch, I always loved music, grew up with it, my Dad was a...
  October 16th, 2017 11:20
• My Very Own Crew (Seek) Great, great poem, Alwi! Family is everything, no matter how crazy,...
  October 16th, 2017 11:15
• THEY SAY (Louis Gibbs) Another great and thought provoking poem, Louis. Living in the now is...
  October 16th, 2017 10:58
• Serpentine (Baylee) Had to look up that word in the first line, Nicole. It fits perfect! Some...
  October 16th, 2017 10:53
• Shattered Anamnesis (Surucipe) I too had to look up that word. Found two meanings: 1. remembering things...
  October 16th, 2017 10:48
• Appointed Anointings (Orchidee) orchi, I think the last line of the last stanza seems to be true for you!
  October 16th, 2017 10:42
• stronghold (Heather T) After reading this I remembered why we missed you so much! Incredible...
  October 16th, 2017 04:59
• Living is truth (Poetic Dan) While I agree with your message, PD, I think we should also consider...
  October 16th, 2017 04:49
• Orchi\'s Travels. (Goldfinch60) LOL, Goldfinch! I think they should make your history writing a must read...
  October 16th, 2017 00:35
• So Scared (Its Raskolnikov) You really put in a lot of work on this one, Ras! The last stanza says it...
  October 16th, 2017 00:30
• With You--Pt.2 (Christina8) Christina, this is a poem I want to read to my wife! Perfectly incredible!...
  October 15th, 2017 04:56
• Straight from the heart (Jode) jode, I do like your poem. Felt like this about my wife when I met her,...
  October 15th, 2017 04:38