Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Forever proud (Poetic Dan)
Dan, riding along on a bike like that I would have the same grin on my...
October 31st, 2017 11:50 - Rapture of the Redeemed (Orchidee)
Good write, as always, orchi. Thought your upcoming wedding would...
October 31st, 2017 11:46 - New Kind. (Fay Slimm.)
Like the whole poem, but love that last stanza! What a good write, Fay!
October 31st, 2017 11:42 - IN PRAISE OF HEDGEHOGS ! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice ode to a lesser known little creature! They are sweet, as long as you...
October 31st, 2017 11:41 - Can You Hear It?? (Goldfinch60)
Unfortunately, a lot of times my silences are filled with the overpowering...
October 31st, 2017 11:36 - REFLECTIONS ON OBSERVATIONS (Louis Gibbs)
Great food for thought in this so well written poem, Louis. I have come to...
October 31st, 2017 11:31 - You are What is so Wonderful About this World (Thoff1)
A beautiful declaration of love, tomo!
October 31st, 2017 11:22 - Teardrops Close In. (Kevin browne)
\'Meetings with the illusions which became my very best...
October 31st, 2017 11:20 - Lust (M.E.M.)
Yes, M.E.M., that\'s what a kiss can do, and you wrote it very...
October 31st, 2017 11:14 - Life (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., never thought of a friend this way, but you said it beautifully!
October 30th, 2017 20:16 - And This Is My Story. (Kevin browne)
There is nothing \'fake\' about you Kevin! None of us here is a...
October 30th, 2017 20:13 - Remedy (Skyebellasario)
Well written, Skye! Sometimes it takes a guy some time, but eventually he...
October 30th, 2017 20:06 - Earth vs. Man (Accidental Poet)
Beautiful song and a very apt description of man\'s history, future, and...
October 30th, 2017 19:34 - B playful (Avigail)
Good advice, Avigail! We get so caught up in everyday life and work, we do...
October 30th, 2017 11:10 - I no longer love you (Myself and me)
Really letting go is hard and you expressed that beautifully, M&M! I do...
October 30th, 2017 11:08 - If I\'d Been God (Its Raskolnikov)
Great poem, Ras! It\'s not easy being God, isn\'t it?
October 29th, 2017 04:16 - Positive Thought. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, for me your poem is the last thought of the day, literally! It is...
October 29th, 2017 04:12 - Comfort (Adrianna Kjeld)
I do like your poem, and the last line says it all. Stay in the moment,...
October 29th, 2017 04:09 - Give In (Baylee)
A fine description of a writer\'s life!
Love the last stanza!
October 29th, 2017 01:21 - Gluttony (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., I am married to a Chinese woman where love goes through the...
October 29th, 2017 01:20 - What now? (Dakota)
I like it Dakota! The age old questions: Where are we going and where are...
October 28th, 2017 14:50 - For The One I Love (A.C Doomcraft)
A beautiful declaration of love, A.C.!
October 28th, 2017 13:09 - bass lines (Frank Prem)
I do love this poem and the way it is structured, Frank.
But, what the...
October 28th, 2017 13:07 - Internal Conflict (Alexa Pineda)
Great poem, great writing, great imagery, great choice of words, great...
October 28th, 2017 13:03 - Treasures Deep. (Kevin browne)
Great poem, Kevin. Love the ending!
October 28th, 2017 13:01 - Communion Call (Orchidee)
Another very good write, orchidee! While I am not really religious, I do...
October 28th, 2017 12:58 - Weirdos From Planet Earth (Accidental Poet)
Your great poem explains exactly why we will never see Aliens landing on...
October 28th, 2017 12:56 - This Time. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully written, with so much meaning!
October 28th, 2017 12:48 - SEASONS OF LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice writing, Brian. I do like how you describe love in terms of seasons.
October 28th, 2017 12:45 - Avoidance Failed. (Goldfinch60)
Goldie, this one is precious and funny. Goes to show that life is all...
October 28th, 2017 12:37 - Lake Michigan (Christina8)
Beautifully written, Christina!
Maybe you should send it to the Michigan...
October 28th, 2017 12:32 - AT LAST IN LOVE (Michael Edwards)
Have to say Michael, I liked the last painting better.
As for the poem....
October 28th, 2017 04:42 - I Want To Become A Star (Orialis M. Pena)
Orialis, this is a very well written, beautiful love poem. Very...
October 27th, 2017 22:34 - 9 pm (Itried)
OK, itried, here is what you do:
Replace all the \'I am\' with \'I am...
October 27th, 2017 22:29 - Usuzubed (The 660th throne) (Mugsdaddy)
Mugsdaddy, you and Martina must have drunk from the same bottle!
Very...
October 27th, 2017 22:22 - surf? (CS Parker)
Shaka, cs! Surf\'s up!
No seriously, I do like your poem. We surf the...
October 27th, 2017 22:18 - A DESERVING MOM (Lauraš»)
You are a good daughter, Laura! First parents take care of us, but there...
October 27th, 2017 18:34 - Broken Mirrors (Lee Renard Caspian)
Great poem, Lee. Nice structure, and well written too. Like the line...
October 27th, 2017 18:30 - We are beautiful (Ella)
You speak from my heart, Anonym! In my family we have different races,...
October 27th, 2017 18:10 - Those days (Ella)
I just wish, Anonym, there would be more people doing what you so...
October 27th, 2017 18:06 - you were but I am (Ella)
It\'s about time we have some Canadians here, especially if they write as...
October 27th, 2017 18:03 - Prince Charming (Skyebellasario)
Great poem, with a strong and true message for all the girls and ladies...
October 27th, 2017 17:58 - from the past (Queer-with-a-pen)
Very strong writing, with a strong ending too. Well penned!
October 27th, 2017 17:54 - 10 Steps (Kurt Philip Behm)
I like this, Kurt. Am trying to figure out where I stand. I know I had...
October 27th, 2017 15:00 - Grandfather (Misplacedsoul)
Being a grandfather myself, I do appreciate your beautiful poem to your...
October 27th, 2017 13:06 - You are gone (Myself and me)
M&M, you express that lonely feeling so well in just a few words. The kite...
October 27th, 2017 12:58 - Promise You\'ll Remember (Naeners)
Naeners, while any suicide note is sad, this one is well written. I do...
October 27th, 2017 12:54 - RĆ©pondezĀ S\\\\\\\'il Vous Plait (A.C Doomcraft)
A.C., you hit the nail on the head. Writing is a lonely business,...
October 27th, 2017 12:47 - Pride (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., maybe it\'s my eyes, but as the blind man said: I see, I can\'t...
October 27th, 2017 12:29 - TWISTED CAP (Lasergraph)
Thanks for the memories, lasergraph! Nicely done! While I may not have the...
October 27th, 2017 12:24 - Persevering Progressions (Orchidee)
OK, orchi, you already know how good a writer you are, but I will say it...
October 27th, 2017 12:19 - The Old Oaken Bucket By Samuel Woodworth (Accidental Poet)
Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Don\'t need to see a picture of the...
October 27th, 2017 12:12 - Forget Me (Baylee)
As do most of your poems, this one too made me think, Nicole. Your writing...
October 27th, 2017 12:08 - Unexplained. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully said, Fay! I think we who are in the Fall or even Winter of...
October 27th, 2017 11:55 - Stopped By Music. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you, Goldfinch, for both the music and the poem. Music, writing,...
October 27th, 2017 11:49 - SIX SWEET STAGES OF LOVE ~ SANTITA & BRIAN ~ SYMBIOSIS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I very much enjoyed reading your collaboration on love. Same as Laura,...
October 27th, 2017 11:41 - Los Angeles (PoeticPsycho)
Well written, PP, and so true. And that is why I live in Hawaii with the...
October 27th, 2017 00:50 - THE ANCIENT LAND (Michael Edwards)
That is quite a castle in your painting! Well done, gorgeous...
October 27th, 2017 00:38 - ronnie\'s other guy (Frank Prem)
Just goes to show, Frank, we will never know what is going on inside our...
October 27th, 2017 00:20 - JUSTIFIABLE DENIAL (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, this is just great! It wasn\'t me, but him too! The old children...
October 27th, 2017 00:17 - Wrapper in a Larger (Thoff1)
A tender and moving poem, Tomo! I assume the \'little lips\' belong to a...
October 26th, 2017 23:21 - Deaf and Blind (Sandra)
Ah well, Sandra, I figured I might as well read all three of your...
October 26th, 2017 22:33 - I Know (Sandra)
Sandra, after reading \'Heartache\' I checked your page and found this...
October 26th, 2017 22:27 - Heartache Has a Name (Sandra)
Sandra, I do like your poem. Even though it is sad, it is so well written,...
October 26th, 2017 22:24 - Forever To Know (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautifully written, Kurt! There is something special about your poems....
October 26th, 2017 19:58 - bound (Heather T)
No wonder it took you a while to post again. This incredible poem must...
October 26th, 2017 19:55 - The Crisis (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., this is a great take on Thomas Paine. Well penned, well thought...
October 26th, 2017 19:51 - The Morning (WL Schuett)
You just made my morning, WL! Beautifully written!
October 26th, 2017 19:41 - Successful entrepreneurship (Avigail)
You are absolutely right, Avigail! But entrepreneurs are also risk takers,...
October 26th, 2017 19:39 - World without you (Myself and me)
M&M, just like all the others here on MPS I am with you and I do feel your...
October 26th, 2017 19:37 - Spirit Showerings (Orchidee)
Orchi, your technique is outstanding! As are your words and rhyming.
October 26th, 2017 19:34 - A Happy Poem (Christina8)
Me too I am happy for you, Christina! If writing makes you happy and helps...
October 26th, 2017 19:31 - Existence (Baylee)
Well written, Nicole, but I DO expect that from you by now!
Really like...
October 26th, 2017 11:07 - holding close to beauty (Frank Prem)
Frank, you keep on surprising me with your incredible writing. This poem...
October 26th, 2017 04:59 - An Ending Universe (Alexa Pineda)
Alexa, even though I think that your poem is very well written, I am not...
October 26th, 2017 04:50 - To My Grandfather, For My Dad, From your Granddaughter (Alexa Pineda)
As both a father and a grand-father, I could only wish to have a poem like...
October 26th, 2017 04:45 - SPACESHIP MOON ~ A 4 5 3 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, I do hope that this is just a fun poem and not what you believe...
October 26th, 2017 04:34 - My Secret Love (Accidental Poet)
Well, A.P., you said it yourself. I guess you really are a love sick...
October 26th, 2017 04:29 - 00:00 (Poetic Dan)
Very, very, very clever, P.D.!
Took me about 20 seconds to figure it out....
October 26th, 2017 04:24 - Say Something (Naeners)
Naeners, Michael is right. I do love shorties that say a lot between the...
October 26th, 2017 04:20 - Fucking Douche (Naeners)
Well, Naeners, I am sure there are guys like that. And for these guys your...
October 26th, 2017 04:17 - Behind and Between. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, I know you are a good writer, but you went way beyond being good....
October 26th, 2017 04:09 - Water is Life. (Goldfinch60)
Water and salt, without it we would not be around anymore! Love the poem...
October 26th, 2017 04:06 - ON THE FRINGES OF HER FLOWERS (Av)
I did read the whole thing (twice actually) and my head is...
October 26th, 2017 04:04 - FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES (Michael Edwards)
Michael, as far as I am concerned, the first one is absolutely tops! Love...
October 26th, 2017 04:00 - Once In A Blue Moon (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., this guy sounds just about perfect! I do like your poem, well...
October 26th, 2017 03:55 - SAVOR THE MOMENT (Lasergraph)
Bravo, lasergraph! You speak (write) from my heart. I am in the exact same...
October 25th, 2017 14:14 - Broken vows (Misplacedsoul)
Welcome to MPS, misplacedsoul!
This is so well written, straight from the...
October 25th, 2017 13:47 - That Time of Day (Karsten Turrey)
Have to agree with you, Karsten, your nice happy poem says it all!
October 25th, 2017 13:37 - Bully Sharks and their Prey (Niallprideaux)
Great writing and a great message, Niall! Especially today with social...
October 25th, 2017 13:34 - Heard it all before (Edthepoet)
I like it, Ed! Could be lyrics for a song. Great writing!
October 25th, 2017 11:29 - A Few Questions (Youngandnaive)
I do like the way you wrote this, like the structure. Some guys are a...
October 25th, 2017 11:22 - Now Watch Him Roar (Poetboy123)
And \'roar\' you do with this poem, poetboy! Very well written, well...
October 25th, 2017 11:18 - Waiting (Myself and me)
It is so nice to see you back, M&M! Kind of missed that sailboat picture,...
October 25th, 2017 11:15 - Ignorant Eyes - 8/31/16 (Its Raskolnikov)
Your well written poem made me stop and think, Ras!
October 25th, 2017 11:10 - Autumn Chill (Christina8)
So well written, Christina! And I am really happy for you. Go get em,...
October 25th, 2017 11:08 - Shield Safety (Orchidee)
Another beautiful hymn, penned by a master. And I guess you were there...
October 25th, 2017 11:03 - I\'ll still cover my charms (ShannonXx)
Shannon, I thought \'Coffee House\' was really good, but I think you...
October 25th, 2017 11:00 - Quenchers. (Fay Slimm.)
A great poem, Fay, brings me back to my childhood and our blackberry...
October 25th, 2017 10:49 - Angel Dust Curing. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, the rhyming is exquisite! Love that the first line in each stanza...
October 25th, 2017 10:46
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