Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Hearing Aid (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Great poem, Edward! We always concentrate on the ones hard of hearing,...
November 13th, 2017 18:17 - Favorite Word (M.E.M.)
Dostoefsky said it much better than I can: To live without Hope is to...
November 13th, 2017 18:13 - Affliction Assistance (Orchidee)
I do like your writing, orchidee! We all have our afflictions and do need...
November 13th, 2017 18:05 - A Poem That Sleeps (Accidental Poet)
I do like this poem very much, AP! It happens that words just pop into the...
November 13th, 2017 18:03 - When I Breath. (Kevin browne)
\'You share your love, you live your life and start to win\'....what is...
November 13th, 2017 17:58 - first love (Alisha)
Well written, alisha! There is a lot of emotion between the lines. There...
November 13th, 2017 16:21 - Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you are speaking my language here! Love that picture too! Your words...
November 12th, 2017 03:46 - Herosim (Goldfinch60)
Great writing Andy, but as far as I am concerned, I am no hero. And do you...
November 12th, 2017 03:41 - WITHOUT EXCUSE (Michael Edwards)
Incredibly well written, Michael, but I am not sure who did wrong to whom...
November 12th, 2017 03:38 - Knock knock (Poetic Dan)
PD, this is so sad. Well written, but sad. I just hope you are not in jail...
November 12th, 2017 03:34 - Writer\'s Block (Christina8)
Christine, your poem about writers block ain\'t bad for somebody with...
November 12th, 2017 02:51 - my long hiatus (Allysnewworld)
Allys, we all want to take an out once in a while, live in a reality where...
November 11th, 2017 19:19 - Reality (Beckii)
We can get lost in our daydreams, but reality will always catch us. Very...
November 11th, 2017 19:13 - Life\'s Promise Still Unknown (Kurt Philip Behm)
A haunting poem, Kurt, that makes one ponder what life\'s promise really...
November 11th, 2017 19:10 - Shadows (Baylee)
Very imaginative writing, Baylee! Comparing the absence of you with dawn...
November 11th, 2017 19:04 - TAPS~24 notes (Laura🌻)
Laura, I am sorry about your three friends. Your poem is outstanding. You...
November 11th, 2017 19:00 - Remembrance Reconcilings (Orchidee)
Orchidee, this is more than a hymn, this is a beautiful tribute to those...
November 11th, 2017 18:58 - Melting (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., this is the best write-up on this Salvador Dali painting I have...
November 11th, 2017 18:56 - We’re Going Home (Accidental Poet)
A fine tribute to all who served! Well done, AP! I served in the Swiss Air...
November 11th, 2017 17:17 - SEASONS OF THANKSGIVING ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, I think all the turkeys in England are now hiding! Great poem of...
November 11th, 2017 17:12 - Never Forget. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, this is the most eloquent and beautiful tribute to our fallen heroes...
November 11th, 2017 17:10 - Remembrance Day Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, after reading your incredible poem, I did feel like standing up...
November 11th, 2017 17:07 - YET ANOTHER CRUDY (Michael Edwards)
What a great crudy! Hang a bag on the cow and you can run your BBQ with
November 11th, 2017 16:58 - Lost (Skyebellasario)
Skye, I really like this poem. So well written, great last line!
Do...
November 11th, 2017 01:05 - Not Your Type Of Perfect (Broken_kingdom)
Francine, you know why I love your poem? Because it applies to all of...
November 10th, 2017 15:15 - hum-drum (Dusk arising)
A fine description of an average day, da! There is so much feeling and...
November 10th, 2017 12:34 - 10.000 feet. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, using the metaphor of flying to talk about love is ingenious! Great...
November 10th, 2017 12:00 - Friendship Fondness (Orchidee)
orchidee, you must be all torn up. Here you are loving two people so much:...
November 10th, 2017 11:58 - DAMN HUMANS! (Accidental Poet)
AP, I had a big smile on my face by the time I finished reading your poem....
November 10th, 2017 11:50 - FUSION ON FLOWER ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Nice acrostic, Brian, but you forgot me, the weed!
November 10th, 2017 05:21 - My Life is Nearly Led. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, as a \'senior\' all I can say is that your beautiful poem says it...
November 10th, 2017 05:19 - THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards)
Love the drawing, very exquisite, minimalist, but leaving a lot to the...
November 10th, 2017 05:13 - Even if they\'re watching be your self (Poetic Dan)
PD, you have to be who you are. You make the decisions, and you have to...
November 10th, 2017 05:06 - THE BLESSED (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, while I agree in principal with the premise of your poem, I do...
November 10th, 2017 01:24 - Rain (Olivergreenwood19)
oliver, I really like your use of the rain metaphor to touch on all our...
November 10th, 2017 00:45 - THANKSGIVING IS COMING (Lasergraph)
Great reminder, lasergraph, am looking forward to Thanksgiving!
November 9th, 2017 14:54 - Relationship Resting - Thomas á Kempis Series - 4 (Orchidee)
All I can say is: Praise the powers that be for giving us orchidee!
November 9th, 2017 14:38 - TO HUG ~OR~ NOT TO HUG ? A 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, I like the subject you brought up here. There are times and places...
November 9th, 2017 14:34 - Ashes In The Past (Kurt Philip Behm)
I would say yes to the first three stanzas, and the flame will keep on...
November 9th, 2017 14:23 - The Holidays (Christina8)
Very uplifting, beautiful reminder of what the Holidays are all about,...
November 9th, 2017 14:12 - Wordless. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you describe the beauty of stillness so incredibly well. Stillness...
November 9th, 2017 14:07 - Obsolete (Baylee)
Beautiful writing, Nicole! Want to read it again and again, so made it a...
November 9th, 2017 13:47 - It’s a Good Day to Smile (Accidental Poet)
I like it AP, today we both posted smiling uplifting poems! I guess great...
November 9th, 2017 04:27 - Stepping Off. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, you said it so well: think outside of the box, the box that is...
November 9th, 2017 03:21 - A SHELTERED NOOK (Michael Edwards)
This is so British! Beautiful though, and so well written! Like the...
November 9th, 2017 03:19 - Thank America for god (Seek)
Seek, I read a lot of it, but not all (too long for one read, need to take...
November 9th, 2017 03:16 - Old Friends (Adrianna Kjeld)
\'A sneak peek at my life
like its some kind of exhibit.\'
As far as I...
November 9th, 2017 03:10 - I Know It\'s Only Tuesday, but I\'m Tired (Poemsbyliz)
These weekends can do that to you anytime, Liz!
Just kidding!
I do like...
November 9th, 2017 00:29 - singing broken heart at number 60 (Frank Prem)
Great poem, great subject, Frank! I love to sing in the shower. Love all...
November 9th, 2017 00:20 - Moonlit Night (Poetic_Pixel)
Welcome to MPS, PP! Don\'t worry, nobody will judge you or your writing....
November 8th, 2017 22:31 - Mind Water (Brycycle)
Brycycle, maybe you could have called it \"Hopeful Wreckages\".
I do like...
November 8th, 2017 22:22 - I won’t apologize. (Beckii)
You tell em girl!
Rebecca, I like your poem not only because it is well...
November 8th, 2017 22:16 - November the 8th of 2017 (Orialis M. Pena)
Orialis, I concur with Hood. That last line lifts the whole poem. But...
November 8th, 2017 16:47 - Slipping (Simple-Man87)
Simple-Man, after I read the first two stanzas, I did not scroll down...
November 8th, 2017 16:41 - Tobacco Leaf (Edthepoet)
Good for you, Ed! Don\'t let them buy you with whatever it is they dangle...
November 8th, 2017 16:33 - My Six Year Old Self (Skyebellasario)
Skye, this is a beautiful and thought provoking poem. As a grandfather now...
November 8th, 2017 16:20 - Cracked Window (WL Schuett)
The first thing I saw in your painting was a \'haunted face\'.
Your...
November 8th, 2017 13:47 - Geniuses (Baylee)
Einstein himself once said: The difference between genius and stupidity is...
November 8th, 2017 13:42 - Reigning Reassurance (Orchidee)
I have to agree with Fay, orchidee! You do work hard on making it fit, and...
November 8th, 2017 13:12 - THE GIFT OF TIME (Lasergraph)
You nailed it with this one, lasergraph! We can give our little ones the...
November 8th, 2017 13:10 - Haikus (M.E.M.)
I like all three, M.E.M. The third one brought to mind Schroedinger\'s...
November 8th, 2017 13:06 - Hear my plea (Poetic Dan)
First there has to be the desire, then the wisdom to ask for help, and...
November 8th, 2017 12:58 - Summer\'s Climb. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, your \'barren to bounty\' summer poem is outstanding. You keep on...
November 8th, 2017 12:52 - In Memory of Ronnie Blanchard (Accidental Poet)
AP, soldiers form a very special bond, especially in combat, but they are...
November 8th, 2017 04:56 - Back With My River. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, a beautiful poem about a very special place. We all have these...
November 8th, 2017 04:52 - the bazaar (Frank Prem)
Sounds like some heavenly bazaar where we can choose our weather?
You do...
November 8th, 2017 01:59 - ANOTHER CRUDY (Michael Edwards)
This is simply great! Brought to mind \"Hawaiian Time\" which is always 30...
November 8th, 2017 01:15 - The Call (Brooke Snyder)
Brooke, somebody (can\'t remember who) once said: I am not afraid of...
November 8th, 2017 01:11 - Losing Air (Brooke Snyder)
Well written, Brooke! With all that is going on in this world, it does...
November 8th, 2017 01:09 - FALSE DIETIES (Louis Gibbs)
I absolutely love this poem, Louis! While I do believe that everybody has...
November 8th, 2017 01:03 - Toy (K.T Williams)
K.T., great opening line. It attracts attention and draws the reader in....
November 8th, 2017 00:31 - Still Alive (Satishverma)
satishverma, I have read your excellent poem already four times, but I...
November 8th, 2017 00:26 - A Whirlwind Romance (Satishverma)
satishverma, I wish only two things: One, that I could accept myself now,...
November 8th, 2017 00:23 - Excuse the Drama (Sandra)
Sandra, a well constructed, well written poem. Sad, but with a little hope...
November 7th, 2017 22:05 - \"Cravings Get The Best of Me\" (MaddieJ)
Leya, this is so well written, and I remember how it feels. One step...
November 7th, 2017 22:03 - Helianthus (Simple-Man87)
Simple-Man, I do like the metaphor of the sunflower! Your beautiful poem...
November 7th, 2017 19:00 - What Makes A Poet Great? (Pldabbs)
c aaron, you wrote a great poem, and I concur with your conclusions.
November 7th, 2017 18:56 - Footprints (Skyebellasario)
And all I can wish is that you keep on writing such beautiful poetry,...
November 7th, 2017 18:49 - Room 206 (Beckii)
Very well written, Beckii! Many of us have a room 206, be it imaginary or...
November 7th, 2017 14:01 - The Incubus (Kate)
A very apt description of a dream or maybe even a nightmare, Nina! Well...
November 7th, 2017 13:51 - Lost (Myself and me)
m&m, there is a light-house out there, waiting for you to show you the...
November 7th, 2017 13:49 - Beautiful Bounties (Orchidee)
Miracles do happen, orchidee, and you conveyed that beautifully!
November 7th, 2017 12:51 - My worst enemy (Netashi)
Great subject, well written, like the structure and the use of different...
November 7th, 2017 12:49 - First It Was Blue (M.E.M.)
M.E.M, you have a very special gift to convey a lot with only a few lines.
November 7th, 2017 12:46 - The Land Of The Free (Christina8)
I am glad you wrote about this. The more we condemn, the more questions we...
November 7th, 2017 12:40 - Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.)
We have a saying here in Hawaii: Never turn your back towards the ocean!...
November 7th, 2017 12:35 - Reflection of Beauty (Accidental Poet)
AP, this is one of your best, gotta make it a fav!
November 7th, 2017 12:32 - AROMATHERAPY ~ OK (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thanks for the recipes! Gotta use them on my wife, and she will be forever...
November 7th, 2017 12:30 - Thirty Six Years. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, beautiful picture, beautiful lady, beautiful poem. What else...
November 7th, 2017 03:03 - stirring the soup (Frank Prem)
I do like the way you write, the way you structure your poems. In this...
November 7th, 2017 02:03 - HER TAINTED HEART (Michael Edwards)
Michael, the whole poem is great, but the last stanza is extra-ordinary!...
November 7th, 2017 02:01 - Canvas (Olivergreenwood19)
I concur with your conclusion, Oliver! It is never about us.
November 6th, 2017 16:48 - MY WIFE OF MANY YEARS (Lasergraph)
lasergraph, after 41 years with my wife I can truly appreciate your...
November 6th, 2017 16:28 - Silent wisdom (Poetic Dan)
You expressed in a beautiful way where that silent wisdom comes from: Deep...
November 6th, 2017 16:26 - I Wish... (Orialis M. Pena)
Orialis, this is a very nicely penned poem about \'wishful thinking\'....
November 6th, 2017 15:03 - A little more (Tony36)
A beautiful declaration of love, Tony!
November 6th, 2017 14:50 - Living Love (Orchidee)
Love that last stanza, orchidee! The whole poem is well written, as...
November 6th, 2017 14:45 - If I Could See Him Again (M.E.M.)
M.E.M., your poem really touched me, reminded me of my mom and how I was...
November 6th, 2017 14:43 - Back to the beginning.. (Anna Marg)
Anna, whether the heroine in this poem is you or somebody else, it is the...
November 6th, 2017 14:40 - New Depths. (Fay Slimm.)
That first stanza is so incredible and beautifully written, Fay! The whole...
November 6th, 2017 14:32
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