Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• singing broken heart at number 60 (Frank Prem) Great poem, great subject, Frank! I love to sing in the shower. Love all...
  November 9th, 2017 00:20
• Moonlit Night (Poetic_Pixel) Welcome to MPS, PP! Don\'t worry, nobody will judge you or your writing....
  November 8th, 2017 22:31
• Mind Water (Brycycle) Brycycle, maybe you could have called it \"Hopeful Wreckages\". I do like...
  November 8th, 2017 22:22
• I won’t apologize. (Beckii) You tell em girl! Rebecca, I like your poem not only because it is well...
  November 8th, 2017 22:16
• November the 8th of 2017 (Orialis M. Pena) Orialis, I concur with Hood. That last line lifts the whole poem. But...
  November 8th, 2017 16:47
• Slipping (Simple-Man87) Simple-Man, after I read the first two stanzas, I did not scroll down...
  November 8th, 2017 16:41
• Tobacco Leaf (Edthepoet) Good for you, Ed! Don\'t let them buy you with whatever it is they dangle...
  November 8th, 2017 16:33
• My Six Year Old Self (Skyebellasario) Skye, this is a beautiful and thought provoking poem. As a grandfather now...
  November 8th, 2017 16:20
• Cracked Window (WL Schuett) The first thing I saw in your painting was a \'haunted face\'. Your...
  November 8th, 2017 13:47
• Geniuses (Baylee) Einstein himself once said: The difference between genius and stupidity is...
  November 8th, 2017 13:42
• Reigning Reassurance (Orchidee) I have to agree with Fay, orchidee! You do work hard on making it fit, and...
  November 8th, 2017 13:12
• THE GIFT OF TIME (Lasergraph) You nailed it with this one, lasergraph! We can give our little ones the...
  November 8th, 2017 13:10
• Haikus (M.E.M.) I like all three, M.E.M. The third one brought to mind Schroedinger\'s...
  November 8th, 2017 13:06
• Hear my plea (Poetic Dan) First there has to be the desire, then the wisdom to ask for help, and...
  November 8th, 2017 12:58
• Summer\'s Climb. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, your \'barren to bounty\' summer poem is outstanding. You keep on...
  November 8th, 2017 12:52
• Back With My River. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, a beautiful poem about a very special place. We all have these...
  November 8th, 2017 04:52
• the bazaar (Frank Prem) Sounds like some heavenly bazaar where we can choose our weather? You do...
  November 8th, 2017 01:59
• ANOTHER CRUDY (Michael Edwards) This is simply great! Brought to mind \"Hawaiian Time\" which is always 30...
  November 8th, 2017 01:15
• The Call (Brooke Snyder) Brooke, somebody (can\'t remember who) once said: I am not afraid of...
  November 8th, 2017 01:11
• Losing Air (Brooke Snyder) Well written, Brooke! With all that is going on in this world, it does...
  November 8th, 2017 01:09
• FALSE DIETIES (Louis Gibbs) I absolutely love this poem, Louis! While I do believe that everybody has...
  November 8th, 2017 01:03
• Toy (K.T Williams) K.T., great opening line. It attracts attention and draws the reader in....
  November 8th, 2017 00:31
• Still Alive (Satishverma) satishverma, I have read your excellent poem already four times, but I...
  November 8th, 2017 00:26
• A Whirlwind Romance (Satishverma) satishverma, I wish only two things: One, that I could accept myself now,...
  November 8th, 2017 00:23
• Excuse the Drama (Sandra) Sandra, a well constructed, well written poem. Sad, but with a little hope...
  November 7th, 2017 22:05
• \"Cravings Get The Best of Me\" (MaddieJ) Leya, this is so well written, and I remember how it feels. One step...
  November 7th, 2017 22:03
• Helianthus (Simple-Man87) Simple-Man, I do like the metaphor of the sunflower! Your beautiful poem...
  November 7th, 2017 19:00
• What Makes A Poet Great? (Pldabbs) c aaron, you wrote a great poem, and I concur with your conclusions.
  November 7th, 2017 18:56
• Footprints (Skyebellasario) And all I can wish is that you keep on writing such beautiful poetry,...
  November 7th, 2017 18:49
• Room 206 (Beckii) Very well written, Beckii! Many of us have a room 206, be it imaginary or...
  November 7th, 2017 14:01
• The Incubus (Kate) A very apt description of a dream or maybe even a nightmare, Nina! Well...
  November 7th, 2017 13:51
• Lost (Myself and me) m&m, there is a light-house out there, waiting for you to show you the...
  November 7th, 2017 13:49
• Beautiful Bounties (Orchidee) Miracles do happen, orchidee, and you conveyed that beautifully!
  November 7th, 2017 12:51
• My worst enemy (Netashi) Great subject, well written, like the structure and the use of different...
  November 7th, 2017 12:49
• First It Was Blue (M.E.M.) M.E.M, you have a very special gift to convey a lot with only a few lines.
  November 7th, 2017 12:46
• The Land Of The Free (Christina8) I am glad you wrote about this. The more we condemn, the more questions we...
  November 7th, 2017 12:40
• Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.) We have a saying here in Hawaii: Never turn your back towards the ocean!...
  November 7th, 2017 12:35
• AROMATHERAPY ~ OK (BRIAN & ANGELA) Thanks for the recipes! Gotta use them on my wife, and she will be forever...
  November 7th, 2017 12:30
• Thirty Six Years. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, beautiful picture, beautiful lady, beautiful poem. What else...
  November 7th, 2017 03:03
• stirring the soup (Frank Prem) I do like the way you write, the way you structure your poems. In this...
  November 7th, 2017 02:03
• HER TAINTED HEART (Michael Edwards) Michael, the whole poem is great, but the last stanza is extra-ordinary!...
  November 7th, 2017 02:01
• Canvas (Olivergreenwood19) I concur with your conclusion, Oliver! It is never about us.
  November 6th, 2017 16:48
• MY WIFE OF MANY YEARS (Lasergraph) lasergraph, after 41 years with my wife I can truly appreciate your...
  November 6th, 2017 16:28
• Silent wisdom (Poetic Dan) You expressed in a beautiful way where that silent wisdom comes from: Deep...
  November 6th, 2017 16:26
• I Wish... (Orialis M. Pena) Orialis, this is a very nicely penned poem about \'wishful thinking\'....
  November 6th, 2017 15:03
• A little more (Tony36) A beautiful declaration of love, Tony!
  November 6th, 2017 14:50
• Living Love (Orchidee) Love that last stanza, orchidee! The whole poem is well written, as...
  November 6th, 2017 14:45
• If I Could See Him Again (M.E.M.) M.E.M., your poem really touched me, reminded me of my mom and how I was...
  November 6th, 2017 14:43
• Back to the beginning.. (Anna Marg) Anna, whether the heroine in this poem is you or somebody else, it is the...
  November 6th, 2017 14:40
• New Depths. (Fay Slimm.) That first stanza is so incredible and beautifully written, Fay! The whole...
  November 6th, 2017 14:32
• Calling my name (SorrowfullyHappy) Xavier, I really like your poem. It is well written with a lot of meaning....
  November 6th, 2017 14:23
• Murder of the Soul (Poemsbyliz) \'Killing me softly with his song\'.... Nicely written, Liz, with a lot...
  November 6th, 2017 03:19
• three echoes (Frank Prem) Very beautiful poem, Frank. Makes one think.
  November 6th, 2017 03:13
• GROWING OLDER ~ A Reverse & Revamp Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Interesting structure, and cannot argue with your points. Am getting there...
  November 6th, 2017 03:12
• My Forever After. (Goldfinch60) Man, Goldfinch, I have been staring at that last line forever, and still...
  November 6th, 2017 03:10
• SOMEDAY (Louis Gibbs) Give me some time to think this over, Louis! It is four simple lines, but...
  November 6th, 2017 03:08
• If I Had The Chance...Again. (Adrianna Kjeld) Adrianna, what can I say? Life is not fair. And you expressed that...
  November 6th, 2017 03:06
• Let it Sink (A__pott) Alex, your poems definitely float! Haven\'t read a sinker yet. Good...
  November 6th, 2017 03:04
• Worship Waffle (Orchidee) To each his own, orchidee! You choose what you like and stick with it. As...
  November 6th, 2017 03:00
• FUCK YOU (Olivergreenwood19) See what a title can do? It brings in a lot of readers! And it was worth...
  November 6th, 2017 02:56
• ALL CREATION PRAISES GOD ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) God did NOT create us? Did NOT make us in his image? Brian, you lost me...
  November 5th, 2017 04:38
• meeting Nola (Frank Prem) Frank, this poem is just great. I stopped at the end with a \'what just...
  November 5th, 2017 04:14
• Exciting. (Fay Slimm.) I can see and feel that high tide. Unfortunately we don\'t have that, the...
  November 5th, 2017 04:11
• Satisfied? (Goldfinch60) Paints a nice picture of Dracula, like how you wrote this without any...
  November 5th, 2017 04:08
• Rain (Skyebellasario) Skye, I hope you don\'t mind me saying this, but I think you \'outdid\'...
  November 4th, 2017 20:18
• Edge of the Wind (WL Schuett) Even though your painting is good, WL, the poem outshines it! And I just...
  November 4th, 2017 19:50
• Theatre (M.E.M.) You made me use google translate, M.E.M.! Have no idea how accurate that...
  November 4th, 2017 19:45
• Eden (Olivergreenwood19) Well written, with good flow. Just look what one apple got us!
  November 4th, 2017 19:39
• Lonely (Christina8) Christina, you are a boat on the ocean of life. So what happens? You dip...
  November 4th, 2017 19:37
• Unsteady (Anna Marg) Anna, this is a great poem! The stanza starting with \'conflict...\' is...
  November 4th, 2017 19:32
• Helpful Hopings (Orchidee) orchidee, I have selective hearing, so don\'t worry about me regarding...
  November 4th, 2017 19:28
• My Wild Short Hair (ShannonXx) Visiting the hair-dresser is the best therapy there is. You can pour your...
  November 4th, 2017 14:52
• A New Moment (Kurt Philip Behm) What beautiful metaphors for the begining of a new love, I can really...
  November 4th, 2017 14:43
• Life Within Me. (Goldfinch60) Great poem, Goldfinch! That white sheet (or white screen) is always a...
  November 4th, 2017 03:42
• DRINKA PINTA DAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) For babies, mother milk is the BEST! Nice write, Brian, and thank you for...
  November 4th, 2017 03:41
• she was gone. (Ella) A beautifully written declaration of love to a mom! Well done, anonym!
  November 4th, 2017 00:37
• Nothing to Hide (Rrodriguez) Your poem is so well written, and I think there are times in everybody\'s...
  November 3rd, 2017 16:15
• A day on the farm (Tony36) Well said, Tony!
  November 3rd, 2017 13:01
• To The Moon (Adrianna Kjeld) I know there is that trampoline-like thingy on the moon erected just to...
  November 3rd, 2017 12:59
• Apple (Olivergreenwood19) Welcome to the wonderful world of technology, cyber media, and instant...
  November 3rd, 2017 12:52
• Glory Greatness (Orchidee) Very well written, again! Orchi, you truly are a master of the genre.
  November 3rd, 2017 12:39
• THE TRADE OFF (Louis Gibbs) I love your poem, Louis! Are we beginning to understand because we move...
  November 3rd, 2017 12:35
• Very Last (Baylee) Straight to my favorites! Do I need to say more?
  November 3rd, 2017 12:16
• War (Anna Marg) Sad, but true! War is an ugly thing and so totally senseless. Throughout...
  November 3rd, 2017 11:44
• Clarity of Mind. (Goldfinch60) After my earlier comment and my comment exchange with Martina, I would...
  November 3rd, 2017 05:28
• Clarity of Mind. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, I do not cry easily. I think the last time I cried was when my...
  November 3rd, 2017 04:20
• ANGELA ON A BEACH ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brian, no kidding, your poem reminds me of my wife walking the beaches...
  November 3rd, 2017 04:12
• hair wash on friday nights (Frank Prem) Great poem about the \'good old days\', Frank! As a kid in Switzerland, we...
  November 3rd, 2017 01:41
• Scars (Lee Renard Caspian) Very nicely written, Lee! Love that last stanza! Great structure too.
  November 3rd, 2017 00:32
• THE CLOWN (Michael Edwards) Ingenious, Michael. You do have an incredible mind!
  November 3rd, 2017 00:30
• three flames (Frank Prem) Frank, burned my mouth just trying to read this! :-) Fun and interesting!...
  November 2nd, 2017 22:33
• Love Is a Very Hungry Caterpillar (Poemsbyliz) Bon appetit, Liz! Hope you don\'t go hungry now! I find the caterpillar...
  November 2nd, 2017 22:31
• Therapy (Misplacedsoul) After reading your poem, misplacedsoul, I started to ask myself how much...
  November 2nd, 2017 21:49
• City Lights (Skyebellasario) Most poets use the image of stars, but your city lights are so...
  November 2nd, 2017 19:03
• Its been so long (SorrowfullyHappy) Very beautifully written, Xavier!
  November 2nd, 2017 16:11
• 600 Miles (Tony36) The first few steps are the hardest, but your nice poem shows that you are...
  November 2nd, 2017 16:00
• My Goddess (Mugsdaddy) With nights like that, no wonder you curse the days! :-) Great writing,...
  November 2nd, 2017 14:42
• After this moment (Myself and me) M&M, this is so sad, but beautifully expressed. I like the way you...
  November 2nd, 2017 14:39
• Identity (M.E.M.) You were kicked out of Pencey Prep??? And I thought you were this model...
  November 2nd, 2017 13:34
• SANTA CLAUS BLUES (Lasergraph) Great ideas and imagination, so well written, and to top it all off, your...
  November 2nd, 2017 13:26