Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- THE CURSE OF AWARENESS (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, I know exactly where you are coming from here. While our immediate...
October 13th, 2017 00:08 - i was a teenage lesbian (Queer-with-a-pen)
Boaz, I like your simple, straight forward style, the repetition of...
October 12th, 2017 23:21 - Nobody knows (Lost-but-not-broken17)
Lost-but-not-broken, well written poem, but the last two lines are wrong....
October 12th, 2017 23:18 - Now Open The Door (Kurt Philip Behm)
And you just opened the door to a new appreciation for your poems, Kurt!
October 12th, 2017 18:25 - The Angry Cow (Tony36)
LOL tony! Had a lot of fun reading it.
October 12th, 2017 18:24 - autumn stress (Mocuisle)
After reading your comment, I think (but am not completely sure) you are...
October 12th, 2017 18:21 - Blind Spots (Avigail)
Abigail, oh sorry, Avigail, you make a good point in this excellent and...
October 12th, 2017 18:07 - Thank you for the support (Poetic Dan)
Very, very well done PD!
I don\'t know if I had the courage to stand up...
October 12th, 2017 18:02 - Windowless House (WL Schuett)
Great metaphor, sounds like it is not only windowless, but after you...
October 12th, 2017 17:57 - Lord Of All (Orchidee)
Beautifully written again, orchidee!
October 12th, 2017 17:51 - Under (Baylee)
Nicole, I am awed by your writing. Beautiful language, great style, good...
October 12th, 2017 17:48 - Upon Her Cheek. (Kevin browne)
I like this love poem written in the unique Kevin style. Too many great...
October 12th, 2017 17:44 - My Morning Routine. (Adrianna Kjeld)
Sounds like the perfect morning to me, Adrianna! I can even tell that you...
October 12th, 2017 17:30 - It\'s Time (Youngandnaive)
A sad, but beautifully written poem, Y&N. Good flow and structure.
But...
October 12th, 2017 17:27 - A Distant Shore (Kate)
What a beautiful poem, Nina.
We all like to have that \'magnificent...
October 12th, 2017 17:22 - Dark Delight. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, my comment has only two words:
Simply beautiful!
October 12th, 2017 03:49 - A Mother’s Heart (Accidental Poet)
AP, you expressed it so lovingly and beautifully. I think the most...
October 12th, 2017 03:48 - New Day - Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
First of all, Goldfinch, this is definitely a favorit. Secondly, at my...
October 12th, 2017 03:46 - Original Sin (A__pott)
Alex, I read it three times. Are you talking about Adam?
October 12th, 2017 03:44 - Insignificant Things (Youngandnaive)
Very, very nice poem about young love, Y&N. I wrote something about the...
October 11th, 2017 15:47 - Where Have I Gone.. (P.H.Rose)
Beautiful poem about a terrible disease, P.H.!
October 11th, 2017 15:43 - FLUFFY BUNNIES (Mugsdaddy)
Good advice, Mugsdaddy! So you think I should not post anything for the...
October 11th, 2017 13:36 - Down (Its Raskolnikov)
So, Ras, you \'just started writing\'? And the result is something with a...
October 11th, 2017 13:35 - ()
\'Sourceless source of Being\', you do have a way with words, Outback!
October 11th, 2017 13:31 - walk in the woods (Tony36)
There is so much more between these lines than the eye can see. I do like...
October 11th, 2017 13:28 - The dilemma of sensitive people (Avigail)
Your poem made me think, Avigail. Isn\'t it strange how sometimes we are...
October 11th, 2017 13:26 - All I Could See (Baylee)
.....just like your poetic ability, Nicole!
You keep on surprising me...
October 11th, 2017 13:21 - Praise Plenitudes (Orchidee)
Yes, Orchi, \'myriads of angels sing\' each time you sit down to write!
October 11th, 2017 13:11 - I\'m thinking (Poetic Dan)
A very good write, PD. We ARE experiencing ourselves through the people...
October 11th, 2017 11:18 - Halloween Will Soon Be Here (Christina8)
Love your poem, Christina, and love Halloween. It\'s the only time of the...
October 11th, 2017 11:09 - materinski jezik - the mother tongue (Frank Prem)
Frenk, your really great funny poem reminds me of my brother in law. He is...
October 11th, 2017 03:33 - This Too. (Fay Slimm.)
I really don\'t know what to say, Fay!
Your poems don\'t only touch the...
October 11th, 2017 03:26 - Just One Wish (Accidental Poet)
AP, you wrote an incredible poem for your mom here. I am very lucky to...
October 11th, 2017 03:24 - Hill of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A whole life in a poem, Goldfinch. You did a tremendous job here and I...
October 11th, 2017 03:13 - Razors (Adrianna Kjeld)
Adrianna, this is such a nice poem about a love gone wrong and a new love...
October 11th, 2017 03:10 - THE MERRY-GO-ROUND (Louis Gibbs)
I am with you Louis, BUT, how do you know that all the challenges have...
October 11th, 2017 00:36 - Outstretched (Youngandnaive)
I like the metaphors you are using in this well written poem, Y&N. Too...
October 10th, 2017 17:15 - 10h (Avigail)
Avigail, like the 10p before, the 10h is great advice to live by. Not...
October 10th, 2017 17:06 - TOP OF THE MOUNTAIN (Lasergraph)
Edward, thank you for this very uplifting poem. It is so sad to see people...
October 10th, 2017 12:43 - A poet in an all nite cafe (WL Schuett)
Your incredible poem made me think, WL. And you are right, one does not...
October 10th, 2017 12:40 - Deliverance Days (Orchidee)
The last line says it all: Orchi, your \'anointed favour\' is writing. I...
October 10th, 2017 12:34 - All seasons (Malubotelho)
I think this is one of your best, Malu! If I were that man you are writing...
October 10th, 2017 11:54 - With You (Christina8)
I just hope you did show him this poem, Christina! This is a beautiful...
October 10th, 2017 11:50 - Playing At Love. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, I love this poem, which seems to be a little bit different from your...
October 10th, 2017 11:34 - If We Poets (Accidental Poet)
Thank you for this beautiful and inspiring poem, AP! Even though the world...
October 10th, 2017 11:26 - I\'m Fine (T...)
Hannah, life can be a roller-coaster, one day you are up, the next you are...
October 10th, 2017 03:11 - The Day That Broke Me (T...)
The end of a loving relationship is never easy. But look at it this way,...
October 10th, 2017 03:06 - Don\'t Say It (T...)
A very well written, from the heart, dear John letter, Hannah! With eyes...
October 10th, 2017 03:02 - Email To Republican Bob Corker (Rew4er2nail)
Wow, you really gave it to him! Good job!
October 10th, 2017 02:58 - Eavesdropping On Myself (Kurt Philip Behm)
I do love this poem, Kurt. Isn\'t it amazing how a song or any other...
October 10th, 2017 02:16 - the wind and the lion (Frank Prem)
An incredible poem, Frank. Still trying to get it though. Need to read it...
October 10th, 2017 02:14 - Perception. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, you may have been inspired by Mugsdaddy, but you wrote...
October 10th, 2017 02:11 - politika of the pipples (Frank Prem)
No wonder it won the prize, Frenk!
Absolutely gorgeous!
October 9th, 2017 21:06 - The Murderous (Happy Halloween) (Mugsdaddy)
After reading your oh so dark Halloween poem, Mugsdaddy, I for one am...
October 9th, 2017 21:02 - Blame (The 2 A.M Writer)
Very strong and raw writing, 2AM!
It does not pull punches, but goes...
October 9th, 2017 20:53 - Book Life (DeviLove)
What a novel way to talk about our innermost feelings, Devi! I love it....
October 9th, 2017 20:42 - Wind (Brie)
Brie, I do like this poem! It is short, but well written. Nobody wants to...
October 9th, 2017 20:36 - Story from an Ex-Depression Addict (Adrianna Kjeld)
Some great advice from somebody who (it seems) knows!
Adrianna, I don\'t...
October 9th, 2017 20:30 - Love Remains To Teach Us Every Night. (Kevin browne)
\'A human mind filled with magic innovative genius intriguing ways\', this...
October 9th, 2017 20:19 - Come Home (Its Raskolnikov)
Ras, this is such a nice way to say: \'I want to love you...
October 9th, 2017 20:16 - 12P (Avigail)
It is amazing, I just read Poetic Dan\'s poem where he talks about...
October 9th, 2017 13:03 - No hesitation (Poetic Dan)
Reading your great poem, PD, I vibrated right along with you! And I do...
October 9th, 2017 13:00 - Persevering Progress (Orchidee)
Just read Santi\'s comment and would be very interested to see what that...
October 9th, 2017 12:56 - Effulgent (Baylee)
Why would you? This radiant new sunrise is a new beginning and does not...
October 9th, 2017 12:54 - Healed My Heart (Christina8)
Your poem expresses so beautifully how good it is to have that one person...
October 9th, 2017 12:50 - Poets of MPS (Accidental Poet)
AP, you expressed something in your excellent poem that I am sure most of...
October 9th, 2017 12:43 - Artful. (Fay Slimm.)
So many people are afraid of spiders. I just hope that your beautiful poem...
October 9th, 2017 12:32 - God\'s Sense of Humour. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you, thank you, thank you! Goldfinch, you took a great weight off my...
October 9th, 2017 12:23 - DOUBLE VISION (Louis Gibbs)
Your excellent poem made me re-evaluate my own vision, and I realized that...
October 9th, 2017 12:19 - A Story about Another Poet. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, there are so many beautiful lines here, such as \'Time stood still...
October 9th, 2017 12:14 - Wind (Avigail)
Your poem reminds me of the Hawaiian word \'Ha\', which means \'Breath of...
October 8th, 2017 17:47 - Apple fresh 🍎 (Malubotelho)
You know, Malu, it is so beautiful that we can find love in everyday...
October 8th, 2017 17:41 - Wings (Poetic Dan)
My rhythm just went up a notch after reading this, PD!
And with my voice,...
October 8th, 2017 15:15 - Firm Focused (Orchidee)
Well, orchidee, if the pure in heart are blessed, I guess I don\'t even...
October 8th, 2017 15:09 - My Mom’s Chocolate Brownies (Accidental Poet)
Great poem, AP!
It is amazing how, even after many years, we still crave...
October 8th, 2017 14:26 - Sleep\'s Acres. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay you really are a wordsmith. The way you use words and weave them into...
October 8th, 2017 04:11 - But Still We Laugh. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, this is such a beautiful, tender, happy/sad, but full of love...
October 8th, 2017 04:08 - A GENTLE LAND (Michael Edwards)
You really do make it look easy, Michael. \'And then fill in the two in...
October 8th, 2017 04:03 - A Love Of God Keeps Crying. (Kevin browne)
A sad, yet tender poem, Kevin. Very well written.
October 7th, 2017 18:36 - Grandad (Skyebellasario)
Skye, being a grand-dad myself, your beautiful and tender poem speaks to...
October 7th, 2017 16:18 - What I Want (Surucipe)
This poem is simply amazing, S.!
Read it a few times. The last stanza is...
October 7th, 2017 14:56 - Perpetual Presence (Orchidee)
So well written again, orchidee, I really have no idea how you do it day...
October 7th, 2017 13:28 - On Line Love (Mugsdaddy)
A good and tender write, Mugsdaddy! Your poem made me think that sometimes...
October 7th, 2017 13:09 - MAKE ME MORE LIKE AN APPLE TREE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I see the circle of life in your fine poem, Brian. Times of plenty, times...
October 7th, 2017 12:57 - Living One Day At A Time (Accidental Poet)
I like your excellent poem a lot, AP! There are times when it is kind of...
October 7th, 2017 12:53 - Beginning of the end (Georgiarous101)
This is so sad, G., but well expressed! I just hope it comes from your...
October 7th, 2017 12:49 - Consequences are free (Poetic Dan)
After reading the quote I was ready for some deep thoughts challenging my...
October 7th, 2017 12:37 - Less Trodden. (Fay Slimm.)
After reading your fine poem, Fay, I do not need any University classes on...
October 7th, 2017 12:30 - Is Opera For Me? (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, after reading your incredible poem I want to run out and listen...
October 7th, 2017 04:35 - What Could Be....... (MaddieJ)
Leya, your very well penned poem is right on track. How many times are we...
October 7th, 2017 02:59 - KIPPERED (Michael Edwards)
While I love your poem, Michael, that fish thing for breakfast must be an...
October 7th, 2017 02:54 - The Honey Moon Phase (Adrianna Kjeld)
Adrianna, love your poem overall, like the wording, the rhyming, the...
October 7th, 2017 02:51 - pretty women in barrels (Abora)
I like this Bukowski inspired poem of yours, BS! Am a big Bukowski...
October 6th, 2017 22:38 - Blind (Youngandnaive)
Welcome to MPS, Y&N! Well written, like the short/long/short line...
October 6th, 2017 22:30 - Now (Its Raskolnikov)
Very well penned, with a lot of feeling, and great structure. Really like...
October 6th, 2017 22:22 - Never Gonna Lie To You (Tanvir H)
Great lyrics, tanvir! And Hood, I think it is just awesome and so nice of...
October 6th, 2017 22:18 - Drowned In Waters Grey. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, you got me a little bit on this one. The lines are your usual good,...
October 6th, 2017 16:22 - Blue eyes (Malubotelho)
After reading your impressive poem, Malu, I got myself a pair of...
October 6th, 2017 16:17 - Wisdom Ways (Orchidee)
So well written, orchidee! You do have the wisdom you refer to in your...
October 6th, 2017 13:09 - Daddy Problems (Kate)
Strong and true writing, but so sad. Abandoning a child is just about the...
October 6th, 2017 13:06
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