Comments on community poems by FredPeyer

• Firm Focused (Orchidee) Well, orchidee, if the pure in heart are blessed, I guess I don\'t even...
  October 8th, 2017 15:09
• Sleep\'s Acres. (Fay Slimm.) Fay you really are a wordsmith. The way you use words and weave them into...
  October 8th, 2017 04:11
• But Still We Laugh. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, this is such a beautiful, tender, happy/sad, but full of love...
  October 8th, 2017 04:08
• A GENTLE LAND (Michael Edwards) You really do make it look easy, Michael. \'And then fill in the two in...
  October 8th, 2017 04:03
• A Love Of God Keeps Crying. (Kevin browne) A sad, yet tender poem, Kevin. Very well written.
  October 7th, 2017 18:36
• Grandad (Skyebellasario) Skye, being a grand-dad myself, your beautiful and tender poem speaks to...
  October 7th, 2017 16:18
• What I Want (Surucipe) This poem is simply amazing, S.! Read it a few times. The last stanza is...
  October 7th, 2017 14:56
• Perpetual Presence (Orchidee) So well written again, orchidee, I really have no idea how you do it day...
  October 7th, 2017 13:28
• On Line Love (Mugsdaddy) A good and tender write, Mugsdaddy! Your poem made me think that sometimes...
  October 7th, 2017 13:09
• MAKE ME MORE LIKE AN APPLE TREE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I see the circle of life in your fine poem, Brian. Times of plenty, times...
  October 7th, 2017 12:57
• Beginning of the end (Georgiarous101) This is so sad, G., but well expressed! I just hope it comes from your...
  October 7th, 2017 12:49
• Consequences are free (Poetic Dan) After reading the quote I was ready for some deep thoughts challenging my...
  October 7th, 2017 12:37
• Less Trodden. (Fay Slimm.) After reading your fine poem, Fay, I do not need any University classes on...
  October 7th, 2017 12:30
• Is Opera For Me? (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, after reading your incredible poem I want to run out and listen...
  October 7th, 2017 04:35
• What Could Be....... (MaddieJ) Leya, your very well penned poem is right on track. How many times are we...
  October 7th, 2017 02:59
• KIPPERED (Michael Edwards) While I love your poem, Michael, that fish thing for breakfast must be an...
  October 7th, 2017 02:54
• The Honey Moon Phase (Adrianna Kjeld) Adrianna, love your poem overall, like the wording, the rhyming, the...
  October 7th, 2017 02:51
• pretty women in barrels (Abora) I like this Bukowski inspired poem of yours, BS! Am a big Bukowski...
  October 6th, 2017 22:38
• Blind (Youngandnaive) Welcome to MPS, Y&N! Well written, like the short/long/short line...
  October 6th, 2017 22:30
• Now (Its Raskolnikov) Very well penned, with a lot of feeling, and great structure. Really like...
  October 6th, 2017 22:22
• Never Gonna Lie To You (Tanvir H) Great lyrics, tanvir! And Hood, I think it is just awesome and so nice of...
  October 6th, 2017 22:18
• Drowned In Waters Grey. (Kevin browne) Kevin, you got me a little bit on this one. The lines are your usual good,...
  October 6th, 2017 16:22
• Blue eyes (Malubotelho) After reading your impressive poem, Malu, I got myself a pair of...
  October 6th, 2017 16:17
• Wisdom Ways (Orchidee) So well written, orchidee! You do have the wisdom you refer to in your...
  October 6th, 2017 13:09
• Daddy Problems (Kate) Strong and true writing, but so sad. Abandoning a child is just about the...
  October 6th, 2017 13:06
• Disregarded (Baylee) It is rare to find such an incredible description of broken love. You do...
  October 6th, 2017 12:53
• Searching Light (WL Schuett) I do love your poem, WL, it is so well written. I think all of us humans...
  October 6th, 2017 12:50
• WHAT MAKES THE BRITISH HAPPY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) And now we know everything about the British! Having a good time seems to...
  October 6th, 2017 12:45
• PTSD (Christina8) Up until I read this incredibly strong and well written poem of yours...
  October 6th, 2017 12:40
• These Days. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, reading your poems is such a joy. Reading this one, I could hear the...
  October 6th, 2017 12:07
• The Best Opera in the World. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, you not only depicted this extra-ordinary afternoon perfectly,...
  October 6th, 2017 12:04
• IS IT TIME? (Louis Gibbs) Your intriguing poem made me think of the French Revolution, the birth of...
  October 6th, 2017 11:42
• DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2) (Michael Edwards) Michael, I do like version 2 better than version 1 based solely on gut...
  October 6th, 2017 11:24
• A Painters Eye (WL Schuett) Thanks for opening the door to your creativity! A painter does see the...
  October 6th, 2017 00:56
• Frolicking fun (Poetic Dan) Days like that are like the icing on the cake! You did a tremendous job,...
  October 6th, 2017 00:53
• Under the stars ✨ (Malubotelho) A really nice poem about innocence and love, even though they might not...
  October 6th, 2017 00:49
• Paint\'s Heat. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, I think Sotheby should hire you to write the descriptions next time...
  October 6th, 2017 00:45
• Once More Her Hero. (Goldfinch60) What I see in this beautiful poem of yours, Goldfinch, is not the spider....
  October 6th, 2017 00:28
• DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1) (Michael Edwards) I think you wrote a poem here that could take up pages upon pages of...
  October 6th, 2017 00:16
• Equal (Baylee) I don\'t know if you saw the poem \'Mortality\' I posted yesterday. The...
  October 5th, 2017 23:53
• But Take Me Underneath It. (Kevin browne) Kevin, you are branching out into different but equally well written...
  October 5th, 2017 11:54
• THE OLD COUPLE (Lasergraph) lasergraph, if this is the result of one of those moods of yours, you...
  October 4th, 2017 21:14
• Comforting Considerations (Orchidee) Comfort.....something we all need. Your beautiful hymn will comfort many...
  October 4th, 2017 14:21
• Words of passion (Poetic Dan) Great imagination, PD! Great lines, like \'Atoms become entwined in the...
  October 4th, 2017 14:12
• Edge Of Life. (Kevin browne) Kevin, this time you outdid yourself! Love how every line starts with...
  October 4th, 2017 14:09
• AUTUMN HAIKU ~ For CHRISTINA (BRIAN & ANGELA) Where would we be without trees? You captured the fall colors and feelings...
  October 4th, 2017 11:01
• Not even the Mule (WL Schuett) Great, great poem, WL! And the painting fits it so well! Your whole poem...
  October 4th, 2017 10:58
• Our love Is Strong (Christina8) Christina, well written and true! Marriage is always a work in progress. I...
  October 4th, 2017 10:27
• Bound (Baylee) And if you keep on writing like this, Nicole, I shall forever read and...
  October 4th, 2017 10:19
• Fountains Abbey (Sue.evans) A great poem, Sue, and an important part of history.
  October 4th, 2017 10:17
• October\' s Intent. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, this is beautiful! Fred has spoken.
  October 4th, 2017 03:40
• ya-hey ya-ho (to fly) (Frank Prem) Frank, when I was young I had a private pilot license, was flying single...
  October 4th, 2017 02:15
• Imagination. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful description of imagination, Goldfinch! You are right, it will...
  October 4th, 2017 02:00
• IT\'S ABOUT TIME (Louis Gibbs) Count me in, Louis! MPS will survive into any dimension and come out of...
  October 4th, 2017 01:55
• THE AUTOCRAT (Michael Edwards) You express the relieve after a strong personality is gone, very well,...
  October 4th, 2017 01:52
• Don’t Stop People in the Night (A__pott) Don\'t open your heart to strangers, no matter what time it is. A very...
  October 4th, 2017 01:48
• How is your mood today? (Avigail) Avigail, your imagination is incredible. Another great poem that makes one...
  October 3rd, 2017 16:29
• where you see and feel it (Frank Prem) Frank, I did need to read the comments to understand the poem. So well...
  October 3rd, 2017 12:33
• so many ask why (Mugsdaddy) Mugs, your short poem about this horrible, senseless tragedy in Las Vegas...
  October 3rd, 2017 12:29
• Creature Comfortings (Orchidee) A great reminder to take care of our environment. You nailed it, orchidee!
  October 3rd, 2017 12:12
• Thank God, Papi is Home Again (Rrodriguez) Against nature\'s fury we are helpless and you expressed the pain and loss...
  October 3rd, 2017 12:03
• Littlest of things (Poetic Dan) I like this a lot PD, I do try to appreciate the little things, but too...
  October 3rd, 2017 11:47
• Growing Into Older Life. (Kevin browne) So well written, Kevin, but scaring the you know what out of me!!!! What...
  October 3rd, 2017 11:44
• Senryu (Christina8) And time stood still when I read your Senryu!
  October 3rd, 2017 11:41
• HALLOWEEN (Lasergraph) Love Halloween, the one day in the year I can take MY mask off! :-) Great...
  October 3rd, 2017 11:40
• Moments (Baylee) I could just repeat your poem here to tell you how I feel about your...
  October 3rd, 2017 11:38
• PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fun collaboration of the two of you. Enjoyed every word!
  October 3rd, 2017 11:31
• Summers Ago. (Fay Slimm.) Very beautifully written, Fay, it brought up memories of a skinny dipping...
  October 3rd, 2017 11:28
• The Late Muse. (Goldfinch60) Goldfinch, your muse is just playing around with you, and now made you...
  October 3rd, 2017 11:25
• Hallucinations uncovered by woman, in illustration (Kate) A very intriguing write, Kate, with an unexpected ending. Well written!
  October 3rd, 2017 11:16
• Life as I know it (Adrianna Kjeld) Adrianna, your great little poem just proved that we don\'t have to be...
  October 3rd, 2017 00:45
• Quiet (Marillene) Marillene, welcome to MPS! This is your first posting, and what a beauty...
  October 3rd, 2017 00:38
• ON BEING A POET (Michael Edwards) Thank you Michael! Finally I see something that will help me write better!...
  October 3rd, 2017 00:34
• and still, i wait (Ummbree) I like this poem, ummbree. It is well written, describing the fall in...
  October 2nd, 2017 22:07
• The Wellspring (Not a Poem) (Mugsdaddy) Mugs you got the blood boiling with your tale. And that last sentence was...
  October 2nd, 2017 20:44
• Floating Underwater (Kate) Welcome to MPS, Kate! Beautiful poem, great choice of words, love your...
  October 2nd, 2017 18:00
• Homeless (Sue.evans) Sue, this is so well written, I could feel the anguish, loneliness and...
  October 2nd, 2017 17:45
• Take my hand (Poetic Dan) PD, this is a poem to live by every day of our lives. Very inspirational,...
  October 2nd, 2017 15:18
• Me and the fabrics 🎀👗 (Malubotelho) Wow, Malu, just the idea of looking at a dress as a best friend is...
  October 2nd, 2017 14:42
• They say he lost his mind (Avigail) Avigail, I am glad you wrote about this and are asking some very valid...
  October 2nd, 2017 14:35
• Space (Edward Charles McDevitt) Beautifully said, Edward! It can be infinitely small or infinitely large....
  October 2nd, 2017 13:53
• Aubade (Baylee) Whoever you wrote this for, Nicole, is a very lucky man to have you on his...
  October 2nd, 2017 13:50
• Wedding Day (Christina8) Nice and sweet and so full of beautiful memories! As you pointed out,...
  October 2nd, 2017 13:36
• Wells of Summer. (Fay Slimm.) Wells of summer, your choice of words is sublime, Fay. Great as usual!
  October 2nd, 2017 04:40
• The Place Where Love Controls. (Kevin browne) Love your poem, Kevin, but where love controls is in my marriage!
  October 2nd, 2017 04:38
• HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great Poem, Brian! Love hot air balloons.
  October 2nd, 2017 04:35
• Ode to Music. (Goldfinch60) Goldie, I am sorry, but you made a big mistake here. The youtube clip is...
  October 2nd, 2017 03:58
• FUSIONS 4 (Michael Edwards) OK, Michael, first of all your poem is not PC (frogs eat snails), my...
  October 2nd, 2017 03:51
• THE \'A-I\' PARADIGM (Louis Gibbs) Louis, you are touching on an incredibly complex and interesting thought...
  October 2nd, 2017 03:29
• Butterflies (Adrianna Kjeld) Adrianna, the butterflies will come again! I promise! Don\'t forget, they...
  October 2nd, 2017 03:23
• Travelling On Trusting (Orchidee) I just don\'t know how you do this, orchidee, to be able to write one of...
  October 1st, 2017 15:48
• Rose (Its Raskolnikov) Ras, looks like you are dancing all the way to heaven here! Nice writing!
  October 1st, 2017 15:37
• The Arch-Angel (not a poem) (Mugsdaddy) An interesting and exciting tale full of twists and turns! You and Martina...
  October 1st, 2017 15:33
• Come Sleep, Oh Sleep (Rrodriguez) Wow, Roberto! Michael is right, you made it look easy. Great work. I...
  October 1st, 2017 15:27
• Loose Laces (Its Raskolnikov) Ras, you tried! By writing this very well written poem! Just one question...
  October 1st, 2017 15:24
• The Pack (WL Schuett) This is a great poem, WL. A lot of animals instinctively know when...
  October 1st, 2017 15:20
• Music of life (Avigail) Great questions, Avigail! But too many, and how would I know? How does...
  October 1st, 2017 15:12
• An Apology (Edward Charles McDevitt) Edward, I completely agree with Michael. He said everything I had in mind...
  October 1st, 2017 15:08
• Advancing. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, another beautiful poem! Migrating birds are a sight to see. In Hawaii...
  October 1st, 2017 14:49
• GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Remember that story where Jesus said I always walk with you, and the man...
  October 1st, 2017 02:54