Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- CHILLY WRITING DAY (Lasergraph)
I really like this thoughtful poem, lasergraph. And I do think we are all...
September 29th, 2017 13:57 - chasing a dream (Avigail)
Avigail, you touched on something that I questioned many times and that...
September 29th, 2017 13:54 - Sing-song Serenadings (Orchidee)
Orchidee, read about Santita\'s suggestion. You better be careful, what if...
September 29th, 2017 11:56 - Love theatre 🎭 (Malubotelho)
Malu, you reminded me with this lovely poem that we really are all actors...
September 29th, 2017 11:48 - Wooden Music (WL Schuett)
WL, you captured the mood perfectly! There are very few things in life...
September 29th, 2017 11:44 - Clipped Wings (Christina8)
Christina, this is such a lovely poem, written from the heart. It must be...
September 29th, 2017 11:37 - Decorations of the Heart (Accidental Poet)
Beautifully written and very moving, AP! As we get older we seem to...
September 29th, 2017 11:29 - Colorless (Baylee)
Nicole, you penned a beautiful if dark and sad poem, very artistically...
September 29th, 2017 11:24 - SIX ELEMENTAL TANKAS ~ Collaboration SANTITA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well done, you two! But the subject matter is something I don\'t want to...
September 29th, 2017 03:09 - Missed Opportunities. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, you touched on something very elementary here, something we are...
September 29th, 2017 03:05 - Extravagance. (Fay Slimm.)
Your lovely poem just proves that harvest time is the best time of the...
September 29th, 2017 03:02 - This Love (Adrianna Kjeld)
Adrianna, nice poem, you tell it how it is! Love the last line! No matter...
September 29th, 2017 02:55 - REFLECTED EDONE (Michael Edwards)
I can\'t count and write at the same time, so I leave these kind of...
September 29th, 2017 02:50 - PASSING THROUGH (Louis Gibbs)
You know Louis, that last stanza, which is great by the way, could even...
September 29th, 2017 02:41 - Faithful Favourings (Orchidee)
Orchidee, while I am not a church person (am religious in my own way), I...
September 28th, 2017 14:35 - I Want to Love Him (Katy S.)
There is love and then there is sex. Your straight forward, no holds...
September 28th, 2017 14:31 - On the Brink (Baylee)
Nicole, I love this description of a sunset, it is beautiful. Your second...
September 28th, 2017 14:23 - A bird told me 🐦 (Malubotelho)
A very nice and tender poem, Malu! Not far from my house there is this...
September 28th, 2017 14:13 - Drama (Christina8)
I really love this poem, Christina! There is nothing we can do about our...
September 28th, 2017 14:06 - Past, Present and Future (Accidental Poet)
AP, this is a deep one. Will have to think about it a while, probably...
September 28th, 2017 03:39 - FUSIONS 3 (Michael Edwards)
Must be an English thing!
Here, if I thunk you under the water you...
September 28th, 2017 03:38 - Calliope. (Goldfinch60)
She looks kind of stern. But hey, if it works for you, fine! Love your...
September 28th, 2017 03:03 - TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You got me thinking, Brian. There must be a lot more of these relationship...
September 28th, 2017 01:15 - Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay you have such an incredible way with words! I do look forward every...
September 28th, 2017 01:13 - My Chains (Brie)
Strong writing with a clear message! You did well here, Brie! But forget...
September 27th, 2017 21:40 - Kings (Niallprideaux)
This seems to be a pretty personal poem about your memories, so I don\'t...
September 27th, 2017 21:37 - PHOTOS OF LIFE (Lasergraph)
We photograph the happy times and even without pictures we usually...
September 27th, 2017 21:06 - Tasty Prey (Rictameter) (Mugsdaddy)
Great writing, Mugsdaddy! And since I can only count to three, I did not...
September 27th, 2017 13:02 - Love Doesn\'t Ask (Edthepoet)
Great poem, Ed! Relationships are sometimes so complicated! We want to say...
September 27th, 2017 12:56 - Journeying Joys (Orchidee)
Orchidee, another fine write. I liked the line \'Spring up well - spring...
September 27th, 2017 12:52 - Smile (A quote from Marlys A. Wohlenhaus) (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Sad story, but a quote to live by!
September 27th, 2017 12:18 - Midnite Paddle (WL Schuett)
Beautiful writing WL, great choice of words, great rhyming, this poem put...
September 27th, 2017 12:16 - Empyrean (Baylee)
My wonder is how you can write so beautifully!
From now on I am going to...
September 27th, 2017 12:12 - Make My Heart Sing (Christina8)
Christina, it is amazing how your excellent poem touches on so many...
September 27th, 2017 12:03 - 101 (Poetic Dan)
PD, the movie is absolutely great!!! (How telling too that the girl jumped...
September 27th, 2017 11:51 - Tread Lightly My Dear (Accidental Poet)
AP, you really know how to write. \'You ended my heart\'s obligation to...
September 27th, 2017 11:43 - My Mentor. (Goldfinch60)
You wrote a wonderful tribute to your dad, Goldfinch! My dad was a...
September 27th, 2017 11:38 - FUSIONS 2 (Michael Edwards)
Michael, as a European who grew up with wine on the table all the time...
September 27th, 2017 11:34 - A Something. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, only you can make this birdsong encounter sound like a hymn!
September 27th, 2017 11:30 - Broken stem (Bella cortez)
This is great, Bella! Three short lines, ten short words, and you said it...
September 27th, 2017 11:27 - THE UNFOLDING FIASCO (Louis Gibbs)
Louis, you wrote from MY heart! While I could not write it as beautiful as...
September 27th, 2017 11:21 - Remembrance (MaddieJ)
Leya, this is very, very beautiful. You caught the mood perfectly with...
September 27th, 2017 11:15 - DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, while very well written (and funny!), and containing the original...
September 27th, 2017 11:09 - Start Moving Soon (Thoff1)
Interesting read, Tomo. Sometimes you have to move on, sometimes it is...
September 26th, 2017 21:32 - I cried for your love (Tanvir H)
Well written, tanvir!
Unfortunately there are times in life where it...
September 26th, 2017 21:29 - Thief (Brie)
Brie, that\'s the problem with thieves, they don\'t care about the mess...
September 26th, 2017 17:25 - Take Back Your Love (Edthepoet)
I like your poem, Ed, but unfortunately I am neither a lyrics, nor...
September 26th, 2017 17:17 - Thirsty 💉 (Malubotelho)
Dear Malu, this collaboration poem between you and your son is just great!...
September 26th, 2017 17:14 - Found my voice (Poetic Dan)
PD, this is not only a very strong, written from the heart, poem, it is...
September 26th, 2017 17:06 - HERMAN AND BIG E (Lasergraph)
Great, great tribute to your brother-in-law. May he be surrounded by...
September 26th, 2017 17:00 - Something Stolen (Katy S.)
Katy, yesterday\'s poem celebrated love, today it is all over already?
No...
September 26th, 2017 13:02 - Alive (Katy S.)
Katy, you perfectly captured that feeling of euphoria one gets when...
September 26th, 2017 13:00 - Nina (Mugsdaddy)
My condolences, Mugsdaddy. Your poem is a lovely tribute to your grandma....
September 26th, 2017 12:29 - Dawns Piper (WL Schuett)
Great painting - great poem!
The perfect way to start my day!
I like how...
September 26th, 2017 12:15 - Adrenaline--Part 2 (Christina8)
That guy is soooo lucky to live in a fantasy world! Losing girlfriend and...
September 26th, 2017 12:05 - Overdue (Baylee)
Beautifully written, but sad. Breaking up has never been easy. I usually...
September 26th, 2017 12:00 - Before You Close Your Eyes (Accidental Poet)
AP, we are so fortunate to have the gift of sight, but too often just take...
September 26th, 2017 11:57 - Turbulence. (Fay Slimm.)
After this poem Fay, every time I will be standing at the ocean\'s edge, I...
September 26th, 2017 11:55 - The Tandem of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, this is such a beautiful metaphor for married life. I can see...
September 26th, 2017 11:52 - FROM FUSIONS 1 (Michael Edwards)
Michael, if all your fusion poems are as good as this one, just keep on...
September 26th, 2017 11:49 - MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You know Brian, I love the music, but what I find so awesome is how these...
September 26th, 2017 11:46 - Loves Extinction (Writingismything)
Another very good poem, A!
I think one of the problems today is that...
September 26th, 2017 00:19 - Step by Step (Writingismything)
A, I just love these short line poems. Two words only on each line,...
September 26th, 2017 00:14 - Cared left and forgotten (Writingismything)
Well written A., straight from the heart. I am so sorry for your loss and...
September 26th, 2017 00:11 - Government (Mirrored edone) (Mugsdaddy)
Mugsdaddy, this is AWESOME! Just looking at it makes me dizzy! Kudos!
September 26th, 2017 00:01 - From Venus to Mars (A__pott)
Great poem, Alex. Beautifully written, with an interesting and very apt...
September 25th, 2017 20:04 - Simplicity Seekers (Orchidee)
Orchidee, I talked to the man upstairs and was told that KP was put into...
September 25th, 2017 18:00 - The Young Boy (Niallprideaux)
Pretty gory, Niall, but I guess war is like that. Surprise ending.
September 25th, 2017 17:37 - NEVER (Lasergraph)
Thank you so much, lasergraph, for sharing this with us. As a parent I...
September 25th, 2017 17:33 - The Alley (WL Schuett)
Great, great writing, WL! For these kind of alleys I have two Samoan...
September 25th, 2017 17:29 - Life is rhythm (Malubotelho)
Great poem, Malu. The first thing that came to my mind was the Energizer...
September 25th, 2017 17:24 - hi, this is your higher self calling (Avigail)
Sound advice, Avigail! But there are days when I think my higher self is...
September 25th, 2017 17:19 - What a wonderful time (Renzi)
The prodigal wee bit party girl returns home! WELCOME! So happy to have...
September 25th, 2017 17:12 - Adrenaline--Part 1 (Christina8)
OK, Christina, now you did it! You ruined it with the last line! :-)
You...
September 25th, 2017 17:09 - O She! (Surucipe)
S, well written, well rhymed, and intriguing. Can\'t ask for anything...
September 25th, 2017 17:06 - The Music That Moves My Soul (Accidental Poet)
AP, you speak from my heart! Sometimes listen to the golden oldies all day...
September 25th, 2017 17:03 - TEN POLITICAL OXYMORONS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, I love oxymorons in general and and especially political and...
September 25th, 2017 17:01 - Not Yet.. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you captured the feelings, the emotions perfectly. Great choice of...
September 25th, 2017 16:56 - Dark Comfort. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, I love your poem, and I think I need to try this as well. Your...
September 25th, 2017 16:49 - IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Great poem and even greater (if I may say so) drawing, Michael.
And btw,...
September 25th, 2017 16:45 - THE BETWEEN (Louis Gibbs)
I do like your poem a LOT! But (there is always a \'but\'), can you...
September 25th, 2017 16:34 - From the unknown (Poetic Dan)
I do like the whole poem, PD, but especially the ending. If quantum theory...
September 25th, 2017 12:31 - Fall From Grace (Christina8)
And what an imagination this is! Well written, Christina!
September 25th, 2017 12:28 - Figuring out… (Avigail)
Don\'t know why exactly, Avigail, but the following poem by Charles...
September 25th, 2017 12:22 - He played as a monster (Malubotelho)
A very strong and personal account, Malu! A lot of times adults don\'t...
September 25th, 2017 12:17 - OUT OF THE IVORY PALACES (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian, if the church leaders would be more like Jesus and less concerned...
September 25th, 2017 11:17 - Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60)
Did I ever tell you, Goldfinch, that you are an awesome writer?
There,...
September 25th, 2017 11:15 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, I think you are the only person on this planet who can turn sunrise...
September 25th, 2017 11:11 - DORCAS (Michael Edwards)
Great fun story, Michael. And the best part is that it is not made up!
I...
September 25th, 2017 11:06 - My Life (Its Raskolnikov)
Very well written Ras, you certainly had your ups and downs!
And we will...
September 23rd, 2017 22:19 - Where Primroses Grow. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, this is a very beautiful declaration of love. But I am perplexed by...
September 23rd, 2017 22:15 - Treasures (2) (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Edward, I can imagine these chairs just from your description. They must...
September 23rd, 2017 22:11 - THE OLD LIGHTHOUSE (Lasergraph)
Edward, your description of the lighthouse is just beautiful, but what I...
September 23rd, 2017 22:07 - Growing Pains (Christina8)
Christinie, thank you for this poem. It reminded me again how thankful I...
September 23rd, 2017 22:03 - Lucky to be what I am! (Poetic Dan)
You certainly are, PD, and that is why you write so good!
September 23rd, 2017 21:57 - When Life Gets You Down. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, well written, but kind of depressing. I might have said it before,...
September 23rd, 2017 21:49 - About sex and orgasm (Malubotelho)
There is a big difference between \'having sex\' and \'making love\'. What...
September 23rd, 2017 18:59 - ...TION (Avigail)
I did participate in the group poem. Lots of fun!
September 23rd, 2017 18:41 - the pioneers (Avigail)
I do have a lot of admiration and respect for all these pioneers, no...
September 23rd, 2017 18:38 - Drive-thru Lovers (Accidental Poet)
What\'s a one-night stand? I couldn\'t stand up all night, even if I...
September 23rd, 2017 18:10
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